Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

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Sanjay ek main mukhya kiradar me hai jo amit apane dil me pyar daba ke rakha hai aur sanskar ki chadar odh rakha hai nidhi aur radha ke liye use sanjay aur nidhi ka ye kadam us chadar ko hatane ka kaam krenge jisase amit in dono ka pyar kubul karega ....................................

Yaha sanjay aur nidhi davara uthaye gaye ye kadam brokar ka kaam kar rahe hai jisase amit abhi anjan hai lekin jab vapas aayega to usake dil par bahut bada jhataka lagane wala hai ek to sanjay dene wala hai aur ek nidhi ki sadi ka sunakar ...........................

Kahani bahut hi romanchak mod par ja rahi hai........................................... Yaha se.......
Mera dil nidhi ki ke liye bechaein hai kahi kuch gadbad na ho jaye nidhi ne apni jindgi me kisi ko nahi chaha jisko chaha wo use melega ya nahi ye to waqt hi batayega
 
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Mera dil nidhi ki ke liye bechaein hai kahi kuch gadbad na ho jaye nidhi ne apni jindgi me kisi ko nahi chaha jisko chaha wo use melega ya nahi ye to waqt hi batayega
Bro har kahani ki happy ending hoti ye to aapko pata hi hoga to aap nishchint rahe................................

Aur vaise bhi dekhate hai aage kya hota hai kyoki agar nidhi ko amit ne khulamkhulla accept kar liya to sari bahane line me lag jayegi....................................vaise lagi hi hai pata nahi kyo Raja Bhai nidhi ke samay hi use sanskari kyo bana dete hai ...........................................

Aapko nidhi ka kirdar pasand hai aur mujhe radha ka................

Lekin yah kalpani ki duniya hai yaha vahi hoga jo lekhak chahega aur lekhak kabhi bhi 90% tak happy ending hi karate hai nahi to agar kahani ke alag part aana hoga to suspension chodenge.....................
 
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Raja Bhai amit ko sex me parangat kar diye ho aur dil se kuchh bhi nahi amit ke pass itana dimag hai ki samane wala kya soch raha hai kya chal chalega vah pata laga leta hai..........................

Lekin mujhe is story me aaj tak samjh nahi aaya ki radha jo amit se pyar karati hai aur kuchh hint bhi de rahi hai kuchh kya jyada hi de rahi hai lekin ye amit aisa hai ki samjh hi nahi pa raha hai ek hi aadami ke do rup dikha rahe hai ek or to use sex me parangat kar diye ho kyoki sex bhi pyar ke bhina nahi hota hai vah do bahano se pyar karta hai aur do bahano se apani maryada dikha raha hai yaha tak ki seena Rima aur apani chachi mami buaa sabhi ke sath dikha rahe ho aur do ke sath maryada ka patha karta huaa dikha rahe hai...................................................................................................................... Had to tab ho gaya hai jab nidhi ne use apana pati mana liya tab kya gajab ka sanskari aur maryadit ladaka ke rup me dikha rahe hai , vahi Rima ....aur do mausiyo ke ladkiyo ke liye sex aur bf gf wala payar dikhha rahe hai ye consept kuchh to samjh me aa raha hai aur kuchh nahi kyoki kahani kalpani hai ye to sahi hai ki kahani me kuchhbhi ho sakta hai lekin itana kalpanik vahh maja hi aa gaya ........................................................bhai aapane radha ko heroin banaya hai to kya inka love story kahani ke ant me dekhane ko milega abhi to sanjay aaya hai to aisa kar raha hai ki divya ko pata raha hai aur sivaya bhi jo kisi bhi anjan ko apane ghar aane tak nahi diya vah ek hi din me sanjay ko apane kichan tak ghusane diya ha mujhe pata hai aap kahoge ki usane emotional blackmail kiya tha sanjay ne to kya phir bhi itana fast ye to had hi ho gayi hai yaar abb ye kaho ki jo AajTak kisi se nafarat kare aur vah ek hi minute me usase payar bhi karane lage ye to koi baat nahi hui......jab radha ko itana intejar karwa rahe ho vaha sanjay ko bahut fast bhaga rahe ho ye to sarasar anyay ho raha hai radha ke sath aur .................................................

Ha mujhe bhi lag raha hai ki aapako ye padhake kuchh ya jyada hi bura lagega....sayad aap kahe ki kiya koi paisa deta hai ki mai kahani usake madad se likhu to bhai aapase log itana pyar karte hai ki aapako yaha tak khojate aa gaye ...............................

Aur ha kahani vakai me bahut achhi hai koi jawab nahi hai bas thoda sa point hai jo bahut mujhe kami lag rahi hai baki mai koi professional nahi hu aur nahi mai isame kuchh kah sakata hu kahani aapaki hai aap jaisa kahani me dikhayenge ham sabhi aapako chahane wale readers vahi dekhenge.......................
Bhai aisa hai k rajani rita k sath sambandh unki khushibknkiye tha wo bhi gupt . Karuna naina k sath bhi unki khushi k liye par shadi ka koi panga nahi. Deepika kamini aur Gauri k sath bhi unki suni zindagi ko hara karne k liye . Bat jab nidhi aur Radha ki aati hai to yahan prem hai aur Umar bhar ka sath nibhane ki jimmedari. Nidhi rishte me behan hai aur use hamesha behan k roop me hi dekha hai . Is liye use dusre kisi rishte me accept karna mushkil lag raha hai aur wo bhi shadi k . Ye asan kahan hai. Kitne rishte isse khafa honge kya ye kam hai amit ko darane k liye. Aur Radha k sath bhi kuch aisa hi hai. Samajh kar bhi anjan ban raha hai sirf is liye k di ya jo shuru se nafrat karti aayi hai kahin fir se nafrat na karne lag jaye . Divya k man ki to amit abhi samajh nahi raha
 
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Kya point dhunde ho bhai........ Wahh..

Ye amit sabki bajate fir raha hai aur radha aur nidhi me usko bahne dikhti hai.........
Ayegi.......bhai .... Ayegi
Radha ki
Nidhi ki
Divya ki
Sabki bajne ki bari ayegi🤣🤣🤣
Aur bajane wala hoga apna hero amit:haha2:
Aur rhi bat story ki to mai bas yahi kahunga ki......
Ye story ab tak ki meri favorite stories me se ek ban chuki hai.
Bas iss story aur raja bhai ko dhundte huye hi mai yaha aaya tha .
Shukriya bhai , no. To sabka ayega koi aaj koi kal
 
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Raja bhai .. aapse ek gujarish hai aap nidhi ki shaadi amit se jaroor karwa dena kyonki nidhi ne sacche man se amit ko apna pati mana hai kyonki bharat me jiske naam ka sindoor hota hai wahi uska pati hota hai aur pati ki jagah koee nahi le sakta ..... baaki aapki marzi
Wo to sahi hai par ab halat ka fayda koi aur utha le to koi kya kare
 
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Thanks Raja bhai.....
Hume to laga story ka popat ho gaya. Agar aap yaha aane wale the to koi indication de dete. Alka story adhuri rah jayegi ye soch k bahut bura laga tha mujhe. Aap jante hi hai ye ab tak ki meri savi story jo maine padha hai un savi mai ye ek alag hi chhap shor chuki hai mere dil pe. Kewal 2-3 story hi aisa hai jo mujhe bahed hi pasand hai. Unme se ek ye v hai. Ummid hai aap is story ko adhuri nhi rahne denge......

Aapne accha hi kiya is site pe aake. Wahan mujhe personaly aapki story padhne k lye jana padta tha. Yaha aap or anand bhai dono hai to ab mujhe koi or site pe jane ki jaruri nhi hai....
Bas aapse ek hi request hai kisi v trah story ko finish jarur kijyega. Maximum story adhuri hi rah jati hai isly maine story padhna band hi kar diya hai bas apna or anand bhai ka hi story padh raha hu. Isly aapse request hai ki please story ko end jarur kijyega
Bhai mera last comment wahan k moderator ne khud edit kiya tha . Warna main to bata k hi aya tha . Upar se sale meri id hi band kar diye kahin main dobara comment na kar dun. Wo khud ko malik samajhte hain. Jhaant k baal
 
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