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Romance Tumhaare Liye- Ek Prem Kahaani (Complete)

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Sabhi khana khane ke baad apne apne bister par sone chale gaye. Isi tarah din gujarte rahe. Par abhishek ke ravaiye mein Jyada badlav nahi aaya. Haan itna jaroor huwa tha ki ab wo palat kar jawab nahin deta tha. Jab uske papa use dant-te the ya samjhate the, yaa maa samjhati thi, ya Sarita samjhati thi.


Samjhane ke kuchh din baad tak to Abhishek thik rahta tha, lekin uske baad uski harkate fir se shuru ho jati thi. Wo baat baat par maarpit shuru kar deta tha. Jisase uski shikayate ghar par aati rahti thi. Aanand ji Aur Raani ji ne ise apni buri kismet maankar Swikar kar liya tha aur apne kaan me rui daal liiya tha.


Jab bhi koi Abhishek ki shikayat karta to wo dono bol dete the ki aap khud hi apne tarike se use dekh lijiye. Isi chakkar me abhishek kabhi kabhi pit kar bhi ghar aata tha. Kul milakar ye kaha jaye to galat na hoga ki abhishek ke karan hi Aanand ji ko hamesha Sharmindagi Jhelni padti thi, Lekin Sarita ke kuchh Achhe kaam, baat vyavhaar aur badon ke prati samman ke karan Log unki tareef bhi kar dete the.


Sarita bhi Apne maa baap ki takleef samajhti thi isiliye usne Abhishek ko samjhane ka har sambhav prayash kiya. Lekin kahte hain na ki galat raste par jane ke liye bahut si dishaye hoti hain, lekin wapas aane ke liye wo sabhi dishaye band ho jati hain bas ek Sankra rasta nazar aata hai jo har koi paar nahi kar sakta, yahi haal Abhishek ka bhi tha.


Wo koshish to karta tha buri sangat chhodne ki lekin chhod nahi pata tha. Aise hi samay gujarta gaya aur Sarita ki board pariksha bhi ho gayi. Kuchh din baad uski board pariksha ka parinam aa gaya. Sarita 1st Division me paas hui thi wo bhi 95 % Number ke sath. Poore District mein 6ve number par aayi thi.


Sabhi ghar wale aur aas paas ke log jinhone bhi is baare me suna sabhi ne Sarita ki tareef ki. Sabhi ghar wale bahut khush the. Aur sabse jyada khush tha Abhishek. Wo bhale hi kitna hi bigda huwa tha. Lekin apni bahnon se bahut pyaar karta tha.


Isi Khushi me Abhishek ne Sarita aur Manisha ko apne paas bitha liya aur unse kaha.


Abhishek- main bahut khush hoon Sarita. Bahut jyada khush hoon. Jo main kabhi nahi kar paya wo tumne kar dikhaya. Maine to hamesha hi mummy papa ka naam dubaya hai, lekin ek tum hi ho jo unka sir ucha kar deti ho. Main bahut khush hoon aur isi Khushi ke mauke par main tum dono ki drawing banaunga. Bas tum dono Kuchh Samay tak aise hi baithe rahna. Uthana nahi.

Manisha- Lekin bhaiya. Didiya paas hui hai to mithai khilao pahle.

Abhishek- Nahi pahle tum dono ki tasvir banaunga. Uske baad hi mithai lene jaunga.


Aanand ji aur Raani ji ye dekhkar bahut khush the ki Abhishek bigda huwa hone ke baad bhi Apni dono bahano se bahut pyaar karta hai. unke bachho me pyaar bahut hai. Fir Abhishek ne apni drawing ka kamal dikhaya aur 1/2 hours se bhi kam samay me hi Bahut hi achhi hu-ba-hu tasvir apni dono bahanon ki bana di.


Fir kuchh colour aur pencil ki karigari ne tasvir me chaar chand laga diye. Bahut hi khoobsurat tasvir bani thi. Aisa lagta tha jaise Sarita aur Manisha shakshat tasvir me utar gayi ho. Abhishek ne tasvir banane ke baad Sarita ko dikhate huwe kaha.


Abhishek- Dekh Sarita kaisi bani hai tasvir tum dono ki.


Sarita aur Manisha ne tasvir dekhi to wo bhi khush ho gayi. Bahut khoobsurat bani thi un dono ki tasvir. Thodi der Sarita ne tasvir dekhne ke baad kaha.


Sarita- Isme kuchh kami hai bhaiya. Aap yahan baithiye main us kami ko sudhar deti hoon.

Abhishe- Lekin kami kya hai ye to tumne bataya hi nahi.

Sarita- Kami ye hai ki is tasvir me mere pyaare bhaiya ham dono ke sath nahi hain.


Uske baad Sarita ne Abhishek ko baithaya aur Apni karigari ka aisa namuna pesh kiya ki Abhishek ko namuna banakar tasvir mein utar diya. Jab Sarita ne Abhishek ko tasvir dikhayi to Abhishek hanste huwe bola.


Abhishek- hahahaha. Ye main hoon. Tumne to mujhe namuna bana diya Sairta. Tum bhi naa. Hahahaha.

Sarita- (narajgi ke sath) kya bhaiya maine aapki itni achhi tasvir banayi hai aur aap hain ki hasna rahe hain. Jaiye main aapse baat nahin karti.

Abhishek- (apne KAAN PAKADKAR) Are tum to naraz ho gayi. Main to mazak kar raha tha. Tumne bahut achhi koshish ki meri bahanaa. Khair jaisi bhi hai ab tumne banayi hai to Achhi hai. Main ise hamesha apne paas hi rakhunga.


Fir Abhishek ghar ke andar gaya aur ek chikni .05 MM ki polithin le aaya. Aur us tasvir wale kagaj ko us polithin me dalkar Stapler karte huwe apni pursh me rakh liya aur bola.


Abhishek- Ab main ja raha hoon apni bahan ke liye mithai lane.

Aanand ji- Mithai to maine subah hi la li thi. Fir kyon ja rahe ho.

Abhishek- Nahi papa. Meri bahan itne achchhe number se paas hui hai. Main apne paise se apni bahan ke liye mithai lekar aaunga.


Itna kahkar Abhishek mithai lane dukan par chala gaya. Abhishek dukan se mithayi le raha tha. Uski pith road ki taraf thi. Tabhi usne do ladko ko kuchh baat karte suna. Wo dono ladke uske ghar se thodi door hi rahte the apne pariwar ke sath. Unki baat sunkar Abhishek ka dimag satak gaya aur fir wo huwa jo joshi pariwar ne sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha.


P.ladka- Yaar suna hai Apni item bahut Achhe Number se paas hui hai.

D.ladka- Abe tu kiski baat kar raha hai. Kahi wo Sarita ki baat to nahi kar raha hai.

P. ladka- Haan be. Aanand Joshi ke beti Sarita. Suna hai 95% Number laya hai usne.

D.ladka- Haa be. Padhai me wo jitni Hoshiyar hai. Utni mast dikhti bhi hai Sali. Uski jawani bahut hilore maar rahi hai. Dekha nahi kitni mast maal banti ja rahi hai din-ba-din. Use dekhkar to man me halchal hone lagti hai yaar. Control hi nahin hota hai ab. Kash Use Chakhne ka ek mauka mil jaye to zindgi gan jaye.

P.ladka- Tu sahi kah raha hai be. Are Sarita to jo hai so hai hi. Tune kabhi Chhoti wali ko dekha hai. Manisha ko. Wo bhi Sali abhi chhoti hi hai, lekin is umar me bhi bahut katili ho gayi hai. Use dekhkar bhi mere munh me paani aa jata hai. Dono bahane ekdam patakha ban chuki hain. Man to karta hai ki dono ko Utha kar Kahin le jaun aur unke sath……………………………….


Ladke ke Aur shabd uske munh me hi rah gaye, Kyonki Abhishek na uski pith par apni kohni ka bharpoor waar kiya tha. Wo ladka dard se bilbilane laga.

(Darasal abhishek ne shuru mein unki baaton par dhyaan nahin diya, lekin jab unke munh se Sarita ka naam suna to uske kaan khade ho gaye).

Apna dost ka hal dekhkar doosra ladaka Abhishek ko marne aaya. Lekin Abhishek ne Ek joordar laat uske pet par maari. Uske baad Abhishek ne Aas paas dekha to use dukan ke bahar ek bans ka danda dikhai diya jo halwai ne kutto ko darane ke liye rakha tha. Abhishek ne wo danda utha liya aur dono ladko ko buri tarah marne laga aur bolne laga.


Abhishek- Sale Madar……d, Bhos……..le, meri bahano par buri najar rakhta hai, unke bara me gandi baat bolta hai. Aaj tum dono ko jinda nahi chhodunga. Meri bahane meri jaan hain aur tum dono ne meri jaan par buri nazar dali. Main tum dono ki aankhe phod dunga.


Abhishek bahut buri tarah se un dono ladko ko maar raha tha. Aas paas ke kuchh log Abhishek ko pakadne ke liye aaye. Lekin abhishek kisi ke kaboo mein nahi aa raha tha, wo bas lagatar un ladkon ko mare ja raha tha. Aur bad badbadaye ja raha tha. Thodi hi der me wo ladke Adhmari halat me ho gaye. Agar Abhishek unhe thodi der aur marta to dono ladke mar hi jate,


3-4 logo ne kisi tarah abhishek ko un lagko se kheechkar alag kiya aur use kheechte huwe uske ghar ki taraf le jane lage. Lekin abhishek baar baar unse apne aapko chhudane ki koshish karta aur bolta.


Abhishek- Chhod do mujhe. Mar dalunga salo ko. meri bahano par gandi najar rakhte hain sale. Chhodo mujhe. Ek ko bhi nahi chhodunga main.


Wo tino Aadmi kisi tarah Abhishek ko Uske ghar tak le jate hain. Shor sharaba sunkar jab Aanand ji bahar aate hain to unhe samajhte der nahi lagti ki Abhishek na fir se jhagda kiya hai, lekin unhe is baare me kuchh nahi pata tha ki jhagda karne ki main vajah kya thi, isliye unhone un aadmiyo se poocha.


Aanand- Kya huwa bhai. Fir se isne jhagda kiya kya kahi.

Aadmi- Jhagda nahi kiya Aanand ji. Jaan se marne ki koshish ki isne …………… aur ………… ladko ko, wo to sahi samay par ham logo ne ise pakad liya, nahi to aaj wo dono ladke to gaye hi samajh lijie. Lekin isne unhe itna jyada maar diya hai ki kahi koi mar mura na jaye. Shayad unhone kuchh kaha tha abhishek se jiske karan abhishek ne unko mara.


Aadmi ki baat sunkar Abhishek ke papa ne Abhishek ka gireban pakad kar use jhinjhodate huwe poocha.


Aanand Ji- Ab kya yahi karne ko baki rah gaya tha kya. Sab kuchh to tu kar chuka hai, Kisi ki jaan lena baki rah gaya tha, aaj tune wo bhi karne me koi kasar nahi chhodi.

Abhishek- Isme meri koi galti nahi hai, wo dono Sarita aur Manisha ke baare me gandi gandi bate kar rahe the isliye mujhse bardast nahi huwa aur maine unhe mara.


Abhishek ki baat sunkar Aanand ji ko bahut gussa aa gaya, Sachhai pata na hone ke karan unhe ye laga ki abhishek apne aapko bachane ke liye bahaane bana raha hai. Unhone gusse se garajte huwe abhishek se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ek to itna bada kand karke aaya hai aur upar se jhooth bhi bol raha hai. Tujhe sharam nahi aati. Apni karni ka thikra apni bahano par phod raha hai. Kis janam ka badla le raha hai mujhse tu. Tujhe paida karke Hamne aisa kaun sa paap kar diya jo tu hame ye din dikha raha hai. Aaj tak main teri har galtiyon ko jyada gambhirta se nahi leta tha, lekin tu sudharne wala nahi hai. Aaj main tujhe aisa sabak sikhaunga ki tu hamesha yaad rakhega.


Itna kahkar Aanand ji ne Abhishek ke upar apne thappado ki barsat kar di. Use tab tak marte rahe jab tak wo thak nahi gaye. Jab thak gaye to wo wahi jameen par baithkar rone lage. Abhishek ne Apne papa ko dekhte huwe kaha.


Abhishek- maine kuchh nahi kiya papa. Wo dono Sarita aur Manisha ke baare me gandi gandi bate kar rahe the. Isliye maine unhe mara. Kya maine galat kiya.

Aanand ji- haa tumne galat kiya. Agar wo kuchh bol rahe the to maar pit karne ki kya jaroorat thi. Unhe samjha bhi to sakte the. Tumne hame kahi munh dikhane layak nahi chhoda. Har jagah se tumhari shikayate milti rahi hain. Kabhi bhi tumne hamare bare me socha hai. Tumhare jaisa beta hone se Achha hai ki mera koi beta hi nahi hota.

Kab tak apne baap ki chhati par baitha use takleef deta rahega. Agar tujhme jara bhi sharam aur ham logo ke liye ijjat baki hai tere dil me to chala ja yaha se aur fir kabhi apni shakal bhi mat dikhana. Main bhi samajh loonga ki mera koi beta tha hi nahi.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar raani aur Sarita ne unhe samjhate huwe kaha.


Sarita- ye kya kah rahe hain aap papa. Mana ki Bhaiya ne galat kiya hai, lekin Iske liye Aap unhe itni badi Saza mat dijiye. Hamare eklaute bhai hain ye.

Raani ji- Haan Ji. Apne Iklaute bete ko Aise koi Ghar se nikal jane ke liye kahta hai kya.


Abhishek na jab Sarita ke munh se ye suna ki wo bhi use galat samajh rahi hai to use bahut takleef hui ki uski bahan bhi usko galat samajh rahi hai. usne Sarita se kaha.


Abhishek- Tumne mujhko galat kaha sarita. Maine kya galat kiya. Wo tumhare aur Manisha ke baar me gandi gandi bate kar raha tha. Isliye maine mara. To kya maine galat ho gaya.

Sarita- Haan Bhaiya. Apne galat kiya hai. Mana ki wo hamare bare me galat bol rahe the, lekin Maar pit iska hal nahi hai. Ham unke ghar unke mammy papa se shikayat karte. Wo unhe marte. Aap kaun hote hain unhe marne wale. Wo bhi itni buri tarah se mara aapne unhe. Agar un donon ko kuchh ho gaya to aapko pata hai ki kitni badi musibat aa sakti hai ham sab par. Har samasya ka samadhan ladai jhagda hi nahi hota. Kuchh bate pyaar se bhi samjhai jati hain. Kitno ko marenge aap bhaiya. Aaj un dono ne kaha. Aap ne unhe mara. Kal koi aur kahega. To aap unhe maroge. Parso sara mohalla kahega to Kis kis se ladenge aap.

Abhishek- Main Sab ko maar dalunga jo tum dono ke bare me bura bolega. Kisi ko nahi chhodunga.

Aanand- Are nalayak Abhi bhi tu yahi khada hai. Kya mujhe maar kar hi tujhe chain milega. Maine kitne Armaan sajaye the ki mera beta bada hokar mera naam roshan karega. Mere budhape ke sahara banega, lekin tumne Achha naam roshan kiya hai mera. Are begairat. Agar tujhme jara bhi sharam bachi hai to nikal ja mere ghar se. aur dobara kabhi apni shakal mat dikhana.


Ye baat lagbhag har baap apne bachho se bol deta hai jab wo bahut gusse mein hota hai. Ek najariye se dekha jaye to abhishek ne yahan par kuchh galat nahin kiya tha, kyonki is baat baat uski bahanon ki thi, lekin wo iske pahle itni baar ladaai jhagda kar chuka tha ki uska ye jhagda jo usne apni bahano ke liye kiya tha wo bhi galat hi najar aane laga tha uske papa ko jo abhi bahut gusse mein the. Rahi sahi kasar Sarita ne ye bolkar poori kar di ki abhishek ne galat kiya hai. Bachpan se hi chhoti- chhoti baton ko dil se lagaane wale abhishek ne Sarita ki is baat ko bahut jyada dil pe le liya. Abhishek ne Sarita ko dekhte huwe kaha.


Abhishek- Sarita mujhe papa ki baat sunkar itna bura nahi laga jitna tumhari baato ka.


Itna kahkar Abhishek ghar ke andar chala gaya aur apna saman ek bag me rakhne laga. Raani ji Sarita aur Manisha sabhi uske pichhe gaye aur use rokte rahe. Lekin wo nahi mana. Bas yahi kahta raha ki Use Sarita ki baton ne dukhi kiya. Use Sarita se aisi ummeed nahin thi. Wo apna bag lekar kamre se bahar aaya aur jane laga to Raani, Sarita aur Manisha use rokne ki koshish karne lage to Aanand ji ne kaha.


Aanand ji- Jane do isko. Badi garmi chadhi hain iske khoon me na. Jab duniya ki thokre khayega tab akal aayegi. Jab jindagi ki hakikat ka samna hoga tab aante dal ka bhav pata chalega. ChAr din baad jab khoon ka ubaal kam hoga to apni galtiyan najar aayegi ise. Tab pata chalega ki duniya apne hisab se nahin chalti. Hame duniya ke hisab se chalna padta hai.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar Abhishek Sabhi se apne ko chhudakar ghar se bahar nikal gaya.



Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
itti si baat ke liye abhishek ko ghar se nikal diya kamino ne :ohno:
Matlab chutiya aanand ke mutabik ek bhai ke saamne kuch mann chale ladke uski bahan ke baare mein gandi gandi baatein kare aur bhai ko kuch nahi karna chahiye... Even gussa bhi nahi karna chahiye... balki un gundo samjhana chaahiye.... Ye to wohi baat ho gayi ki ek thappad khane ke baad dusre gaal ko bhi saamne kar do :lol:

udhar sarita jo boli so boli...

Lekin sabse badi hairaani ki baat ye hai ki abhishek ko ghar nikala jaa raha hai... ispe sarita aur rani aise aitraaj jata rahi jaise ye bas ek formality ho :roflol:

bichara abhishek, bahan ke liye lad gaya, ulta bahan ne hi ushe khadi khoti suna di...

Btw ye baap beti lakshan thik na hai.......
sarita ko shayad pasand hai ki ye gali ke badmash ushe chedhe ... even aanad ko bhi garv hota ho is mamle ki dekh uski beti to badmashon ke dilon pe raaj kare :lol: ab aise mein abhishek bich mein rukawat ban gaya tha isliye ghar se hi nikal diya :D

Isse bhi jee nahi bhara to jis bhai ne tasveer banayi itne pyar se aage chalke usipe goli chalake maarne ki koshish ki sarita ne :gunfire:

Btw kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai...
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Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
kuch raaz se dhire dhire parda hat rahe hai .. aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai.. :D


aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye 🙇 🙇

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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Abhishek ke ghar chhodkar jane ke baad Sabhi ka ro ro kar bura haal ho gaya tha. Raani ji rote huwe Aanand ji se boli.


Raani ji- Aapne use jane ke liye kyon bola. Dekhiye Aap ke kahne ke baad wo ghar chhodkar chala gaya. Mera beta. Aapne aisa kyon kiyaa.

Aanand ji- Jane do use. Jab jamane ki thokar khayega to Zindagi ki hakikat se rubaru hoga. Use bhi to pata chalna chahiye ki Zindagi itni aasan bhi nahin hai jitni wo samajh raha hai. Jab Aante dal ka bhav pata chalega to wo khud hi lautkar ghar aa jayega.

Sarita- Nahi papa. Bhaiyaa ab nahi aayenge. Unhe meri baat buri lag gayi hai. Maine to bas yahi kaha tha ki unhone jo kiya wo galat tha. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri ye baat unko itni buri lag jaegi ki wo ghar chhod kar chale jaenge.

Raani Jii- Tujhe bolna hi nahi chahiye tha kuchh. Agar tu chup rahti to wo shayad nahi jata.

Aanand ji- Isme Sarita ki koi galti nahi hai. Usne kuchh bhi galat nahi kaha. Achha ab tum dono shant ho jao. Wo kahi nahi jayega. Laut ke ghar hi aayega.


Aaj Sarita ne District me 6th position ke sath 95% Number lakar apne papa ka naam roshan kar diya tha, Sabhi bahut khush the. Uske itne number se paas hone ki khabar jangal me aag ki tarah fail gayi thi. Lekin kuchh hi pal me sari khushiya matam me badal gayi. Unki sari khushiya Abhishek apne shath le gaya tha.


Isi tarah raat ho gayi. Kisi ne thik se khana nahi khyaa aur apne apne bister par chale gaye. Kisi ki aankho mein neend nahi aa rahi thi. Jab bhi koi khatka hota. Raani ji ya Sarita turant jakar darwaza is ummeed mein kholti ki shayad Abhishek ghar aa gaya hoga, lekin wo ghar nahi aaya.


jab is baat ki khabar Sarita ke mama ko hui to wo bhi apni patni ke sath Aanand ji ke yahan aaye aur unhe dilasa dene lage. Wo dil asha dene ke alava aur kar bhi kya sakte the.


Isi tarah din gujarte rahe din mahino me badle aur mahine varsh me tabdeel ho gaye, lekin abhishek jo ghar chhodkar ek baar gaya to wo wapas nahi Lauta. Usne sarita ki baat ka bahut bura maan liya tha. Ek baar bhi uski baat ka matlab samajhne ki koshish bhi nahi ki thi abhishek ne.


Sarita ne kuchh bhi galat nahi kaha tha. Ek ladki jab jawan hoti hai to uske upar jism ke bhukhe giddhon ki najar hamesha rahti hai. Lekin sabse lada nahin ja sakta, kuchh ko avoid kar diya jata hai kuchh ko samjhaya jata hai. Tab jakar ladki safe hoti hai.


Baharhaal Abhishek bhale hi ek bigda huwa ladka tha. Lekin usne kabhi bhi kisi ki bahan beti ko buri najar se nahi dekha tha. Uski jo bhi shikayat ghar par aati thi wo kewal ladai jhagda ya maarpit ki hi aati thi.


Aanand ji ko baad mein pata chal gaya tha ki un dono ladko ne Sach mein Sarita aur Manisha ke bare me buri baat ki thi isliye Abhishek ne unhe mara. Aanand ko bahut afsos ho raha tha ki unhone gusse me aakar abhishek ko ghar se jane ke liye bol diya. aur abhishek ghar chhodkar chala bhi gaya. Wo sabke samne bhale hi apne aapko mazboot banana ki koshish karte the, lekin jab akele hote the to unhe apni ye bat sochkar aansu bahate the.


Ghar ke sabhi shadashyo ka bhi yahi haal tha. Abhishek ghar chhodkar kya gaya unki sari khushiya aur hansi apne sath le gaya. Usko gaye poore do sal ho chuke the. Aaj fir se Sarita ka Inter mediate ka result aaya. Jisme usne fir se 93% mark laye. Lekin ab uske liye inka koi mahatva nahi rah gaya tha.


Uski khushiyo me shamil hone wala bhai nahi tha ab. Sarita ke marks ke baare me sunkar aas paas ke log khush the, lekin Sarita ke chehre par koi Khushi nahi thi. Jise dekhkar Manisha Samajh Gai ki Sarita kisliye dukhi hai. Isliye usne Sarita ko samjhate huwe mahaul ko halka banate huwe kaha.


Manisha- ye kya didiya. Kab tak aise gumsum rahogi tum. Jo ho gaya use bhool jao. Bhaiya ko agar hamse pyaar hota to wo kabhi bhi ham sabko chhodkar nahi jate. Aur agar gusse mein chale bhi gaye the to aaj do saal ho gaye hain. Wo wapas jaroor lautkar aate. Wo ab hamse pyaar nahin karte didiya. Achha chhodo ye sab. tum itne acche nambero se paas hui ho. Chalo dukan par chalte hain mithai khane.

Sarita- mera man nahi hai kahin jane ka. Aaj bhaiya ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai. Mere hi karan bhaiyaa ko ghar chhodkar jana pada. Main achi bahan nahi hoon Manisha. Main achhi bahan nahi hoon. Agar us samay main chup rahti ho bhaiya hame chhodkar kabhi nahin jate. Ye sab mere hi karan huwa hai.

Manisha- nahi didiya. Aap bahut achhi ho. Main to aapse bahut pyaar karti hoon. Aap sabse achhi ho. Dekhna ekdin bhaiya ko apni galti ka ehsas hoga aur wo wapas jaroor laut kar ayenge.

Sarita- Kash aisa ho jaye Manisha. Wo din meri zindagi ka sabse bada din hoga. Us din mujhe zindagi ki sabse badi Khushi milegi.


Aanand ji aur Raani ji unki baate sun rahe the. Unhe bhi jitna dukh Abhishek ke jane ka tha. Usase jyada Khushi is baat ki bhi thi ki uski dono betiya apne bhai se ab bhi bahut pyaar karti hain. Wo dono unke paas aaye aur unhe samjhate huwe bole.


Aanand Ji- Dekho beti sarita. Jo bhi ho gaya use na tum badal sakti ho aur na hi main. Jo niyati ne likha tha. Wo to hona hi tha. Uske liye tum apne aapko dosh mat do. Uske liye agar koi doshi hai to wo main doshi hoon, kyonki maine hi use ghar se jane ke liye kaha tha. Ab abhishek to chala gaya hai beti. Ab tumhi dono hamari zindagi ho, tum dono ke sahare hi ham aage ki zindagi jiyenge. Isliya apne man ko udas mat karo. Aur jo ho gaya use bhoolkar Jeevan ke har kshetra me aage badho.

Raani ji- haan beti Tumhare papa thik kah rahe hain. Jo ho gaya use wapas nahi laya ja sakta, lekin jo samne hai use to hansi khusi jiya ja sakta hai na. to tum apne aapko doshi man-na band kar do beti. Jo karam kismet me hota hai usase adhik nahi milta.


Apne mummy papa ki baat sunkar dono unke gale gal gayi. Wo kahte hain na ki samay har Zakham ko bhar deta hai. Lekin yahan par Sarita ko abhishek ke jane par jo jakhm laga tha uski bharpai hona bahut mushkil thi.


Gujarte samay ke sath Sarita ne Abhishek ko dhoondhne ki bahut koshish ki, lekin wo apne ghar se jyada door ja nahi sakti thi, fir bhi jitna sambhav ho saka usne apne hath panv chalaye abhishek ko dhoondhne ke liye.


5 Varsh baad.


Aaj Sarita 23 Sal ki bharpoor jawan ladki ban gayi thi. Aanand ji ne ji tod mehnat karke Sarita ko M.Sc ki padhai karwai thi. Wo bhi math subject se. Sarita ne M.Sc. Bhi bahut Achhe marks me uttiran ki thi. Manisha bhi 20 varsh paar karke 21ve me pravesh kar chuki thi aur B.Sc. final me thi.


Aaj Aanand ji ka ghar Phoolo se sajaya gaya tha. Tarah Tarah ke pakwan banaye ja rahe the. Sabke chehre par Khushi jhalak rahi thi. Aanand Ji aur raani Ji daud daud kar har kaam kar rhe the. Halwai ko samjha rahe the ki kaise kaun sa pakwan banana hai. Kitne baje khana ban jana hai. Aanand ji ki bahane aur Sale sabhi samay par aa gaye the.


Iska Kaaran tha Aaj Sarita ki sagai ho rahi thi. Ladka Sarkari vibhag me 2400/- GP par TA ke pad par Jabalpur mein kaam karta tha. Badi masakkat ke baad ye Rishta jama tha. Ladke ke gharwalo ne moter cycle aur 2 lakh Rs. Nagad dene ki baat ki thi. Tab jakar Rishta final huwa tha.


Iske baare me jab Sarita ko pata chala to usne is rishte ke liye saf inkar kar diya. uska kahna tha ki main apne maa baap ko karz me dalkar unke dukh aur dard par apne khushiyo ka mahal nahi khada kar sakti. Jiske baad Aanand ji aur Sarita ke bich tikhi nock jhok hui (jhagde wali nahi Samjhane wali) bahut mushkil se Sarita is shadi ke liye taiyaar hui.


Aisa nahi tha ki Sarita aage nahi padhna chahti thi. Aur aage ki padhai karna uska sapna tha. Wo padh likh kar apne pairon par khada hona chahti thi. Lekin wo apni aarthik shtiti ko bhi bhali bhanti samajhti thi. Use pata tha ki uske bhaai ke chale jane ke baad uske papa bahut toot chuke hain, kyonki sachhai pata chalne par wo khud ko doshi maan rahe the.


Aanand ji bahut mehnat karke dono betiyon ko padha rahe the. Sarita ko ache sa abhash tha ki uske pichhe Manisha bhi padhai kar rahi hai aur Uske baad Manisha ki shadi bhi karni hai. Jiske liye paiso ki bahut jaroorat hai. Do betiyon ki shadi kuchh samay ke antaral par karna Uske papa ke liye bahut Mushkil thaa.


Waise bhi hamare samaj ki vidambna yahi hai ki ladki chahe jitni bhi sundar kyon na ho, gunvaan aur padhi likhi kyon na ho. bina dahez ke uski shadi hona bahut hi mushkil hai, inhi sab paristhitiyon ko dekhte huwe sarita ne Shadi ke liye haan kar diya tha. Yahi nahi. Usne 2-4 Sarkari naukari ke liye bhi form bhara tha.


Do bar wo uttiran bhi hui thi. Lekin uski kishmat me shayad naukari nahi thi. Isliye uska selection nahi ho paya tha. Sarita ek samajhdar aur sankari ladki thi. Usne apne papa ki condition ko dekhte huwe apne sapno ka gala ghot diya tha.


Kuchh hi der baad sagai ke liye ladke wale aane ko the. Lekin Sarita ko Aaj Abhishek ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi. Waise to use har koi yaad karta tha, lekin Sarita sabse jyada yaad karti thi use. Wo use yaad karte huwe gumsum biathi hui thi, uski aankho me aanshu aa gaye the. Manisha ne jab uski haalat dekhi to wo samajh gayi ki uski didiya Bhaiya ko yaad kar rahi hai. Isliye wo uske paas jakar baith gayi aur Sarita ke balo me hanth firate huwe boli.


Manisha- Kya huwa didiya. Tum ro kyon rahi ho. Aaj to Khushi ka din hai. Tumhari sagai hone wali hai.

Sarita- tujhe to pata hai ki main kyon ro rahi hoon. Mujhe bhaiya ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai. Kaash wo aaj hamare sath hote to bahut khush hote wo. Lekin mere karan wo ghar chhod kar chale gaye.

Manisha- Aap har baar apne aapko kyon dosh deti ho didiya. Wo aapki wajah se nahi gaye. Wo niyati ka fer tha didiya jo bhaiya ko hamse door le gaya. Bhaiya bhi ham logo ko bahut yaad karte honge.

Sarita- Agar bhaiya ham logo ko yaad karte to ab tak laut kar ghar jaroor aate. Kam se kam ek baar to aakar dekh lete ki unki bahano ka unke bina kya haal ho gaya hai. Unki bahane unse kitna pyaar karti hain.

Manisha- Aap aisa kyon sochti hain didiya. Bhaiya ko ek din apni galti ka ehsaas hoga aur wo jaroor laut kar aayenge. Chalo ab ye aanshu poch dalo. Aaj to Khushi ka din hai. Aap ko aankhon me aanshu ache nahi lagte didiya.


Fir dono bahane kuchh der baat karti rahi. Thodi hi der me ladke wale aa gaye. Apni kshamta ke anusar Aanand ji ne poori vyawastha ki thi. Kuchh hi der mein sagai ki rashm shuru ho gayi.



Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
Abhishek ke ghar chhodkar jane ke baad Sabhi ka ro ro kar bura haal ho gaya tha. Raani ji rote huwe Aanand ji se boli.


Raani ji- Aapne use jane ke liye kyon bola. Dekhiye Aap ke kahne ke baad wo ghar chhodkar chala gaya. Mera beta. Aapne aisa kyon kiyaa.

Aanand ji- Jane do use. Jab jamane ki thokar khayega to Zindagi ki hakikat se rubaru hoga. Use bhi to pata chalna chahiye ki Zindagi itni aasan bhi nahin hai jitni wo samajh raha hai. Jab Aante dal ka bhav pata chalega to wo khud hi lautkar ghar aa jayega.

Sarita- Nahi papa. Bhaiyaa ab nahi aayenge. Unhe meri baat buri lag gayi hai. Maine to bas yahi kaha tha ki unhone jo kiya wo galat tha. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri ye baat unko itni buri lag jaegi ki wo ghar chhod kar chale jaenge.

Raani Jii- Tujhe bolna hi nahi chahiye tha kuchh. Agar tu chup rahti to wo shayad nahi jata.

Aanand ji- Isme Sarita ki koi galti nahi hai. Usne kuchh bhi galat nahi kaha. Achha ab tum dono shant ho jao. Wo kahi nahi jayega. Laut ke ghar hi aayega.


Aaj Sarita ne District me 6th position ke sath 95% Number lakar apne papa ka naam roshan kar diya tha, Sabhi bahut khush the. Uske itne number se paas hone ki khabar jangal me aag ki tarah fail gayi thi. Lekin kuchh hi pal me sari khushiya matam me badal gayi. Unki sari khushiya Abhishek apne shath le gaya tha.


Isi tarah raat ho gayi. Kisi ne thik se khana nahi khyaa aur apne apne bister par chale gaye. Kisi ki aankho mein neend nahi aa rahi thi. Jab bhi koi khatka hota. Raani ji ya Sarita turant jakar darwaza is ummeed mein kholti ki shayad Abhishek ghar aa gaya hoga, lekin wo ghar nahi aaya.


jab is baat ki khabar Sarita ke mama ko hui to wo bhi apni patni ke sath Aanand ji ke yahan aaye aur unhe dilasa dene lage. Wo dil asha dene ke alava aur kar bhi kya sakte the.


Isi tarah din gujarte rahe din mahino me badle aur mahine varsh me tabdeel ho gaye, lekin abhishek jo ghar chhodkar ek baar gaya to wo wapas nahi Lauta. Usne sarita ki baat ka bahut bura maan liya tha. Ek baar bhi uski baat ka matlab samajhne ki koshish bhi nahi ki thi abhishek ne.


Sarita ne kuchh bhi galat nahi kaha tha. Ek ladki jab jawan hoti hai to uske upar jism ke bhukhe giddhon ki najar hamesha rahti hai. Lekin sabse lada nahin ja sakta, kuchh ko avoid kar diya jata hai kuchh ko samjhaya jata hai. Tab jakar ladki safe hoti hai.


Baharhaal Abhishek bhale hi ek bigda huwa ladka tha. Lekin usne kabhi bhi kisi ki bahan beti ko buri najar se nahi dekha tha. Uski jo bhi shikayat ghar par aati thi wo kewal ladai jhagda ya maarpit ki hi aati thi.


Aanand ji ko baad mein pata chal gaya tha ki un dono ladko ne Sach mein Sarita aur Manisha ke bare me buri baat ki thi isliye Abhishek ne unhe mara. Aanand ko bahut afsos ho raha tha ki unhone gusse me aakar abhishek ko ghar se jane ke liye bol diya. aur abhishek ghar chhodkar chala bhi gaya. Wo sabke samne bhale hi apne aapko mazboot banana ki koshish karte the, lekin jab akele hote the to unhe apni ye bat sochkar aansu bahate the.

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Kitne jhuthe ansu bahate hai ye log... pehle us bechare abhisek ko bhagadiya ghar se... phir ma beti ne formalities ke "mat jaa " Aise words use kiye...
Aur natak kar rahi hai..
Aur ye sarita.... ye to dil hi dil mein khush ho rahi hogi ki chalo bala tali... ab saari property uski :evillaugh: :D
rahi baat nischal ki hone wali biwi manisha ki ushe to lekhika ne darikinar hi kar di, uska hona ya na hona ek barabar hai..
Anand, rani & sarita be like

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Bichara abhishek be like...
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Aanand, rani & sarita be like...
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Ghar ke sabhi shadashyo ka bhi yahi haal tha. Abhishek ghar chhodkar kya gaya unki sari khushiya aur hansi apne sath le gaya. Usko gaye poore do sal ho chuke the. Aaj fir se Sarita ka Inter mediate ka result aaya. Jisme usne fir se 93% mark laye. Lekin ab uske liye inka koi mahatva nahi rah gaya tha.


Uski khushiyo me shamil hone wala bhai nahi tha ab. Sarita ke marks ke baare me sunkar aas paas ke log khush the, lekin Sarita ke chehre par koi Khushi nahi thi. Jise dekhkar Manisha Samajh Gai ki Sarita kisliye dukhi hai. Isliye usne Sarita ko samjhate huwe mahaul ko halka banate huwe kaha.


Manisha- ye kya didiya. Kab tak aise gumsum rahogi tum. Jo ho gaya use bhool jao. Bhaiya ko agar hamse pyaar hota to wo kabhi bhi ham sabko chhodkar nahi jate. Aur agar gusse mein chale bhi gaye the to aaj do saal ho gaye hain. Wo wapas jaroor lautkar aate. Wo ab hamse pyaar nahin karte didiya. Achha chhodo ye sab. tum itne acche nambero se paas hui ho. Chalo dukan par chalte hain mithai khane.

Sarita- mera man nahi hai kahin jane ka. Aaj bhaiya ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai. Mere hi karan bhaiyaa ko ghar chhodkar jana pada. Main achi bahan nahi hoon Manisha. Main achhi bahan nahi hoon. Agar us samay main chup rahti ho bhaiya hame chhodkar kabhi nahin jate. Ye sab mere hi karan huwa hai.

Manisha- nahi didiya. Aap bahut achhi ho. Main to aapse bahut pyaar karti hoon. Aap sabse achhi ho. Dekhna ekdin bhaiya ko apni galti ka ehsas hoga aur wo wapas jaroor laut kar ayenge.

Sarita- Kash aisa ho jaye Manisha. Wo din meri zindagi ka sabse bada din hoga. Us din mujhe zindagi ki sabse badi Khushi milegi.


Aanand ji aur Raani ji unki baate sun rahe the. Unhe bhi jitna dukh Abhishek ke jane ka tha. Usase jyada Khushi is baat ki bhi thi ki uski dono betiya apne bhai se ab bhi bahut pyaar karti hain. Wo dono unke paas aaye aur unhe samjhate huwe bole.


Aanand Ji- Dekho beti sarita. Jo bhi ho gaya use na tum badal sakti ho aur na hi main. Jo niyati ne likha tha. Wo to hona hi tha. Uske liye tum apne aapko dosh mat do. Uske liye agar koi doshi hai to wo main doshi hoon, kyonki maine hi use ghar se jane ke liye kaha tha. Ab abhishek to chala gaya hai beti. Ab tumhi dono hamari zindagi ho, tum dono ke sahare hi ham aage ki zindagi jiyenge. Isliya apne man ko udas mat karo. Aur jo ho gaya use bhoolkar Jeevan ke har kshetra me aage badho.

Raani ji- haan beti Tumhare papa thik kah rahe hain. Jo ho gaya use wapas nahi laya ja sakta, lekin jo samne hai use to hansi khusi jiya ja sakta hai na. to tum apne aapko doshi man-na band kar do beti. Jo karam kismet me hota hai usase adhik nahi milta.


Apne mummy papa ki baat sunkar dono unke gale gal gayi. Wo kahte hain na ki samay har Zakham ko bhar deta hai. Lekin yahan par Sarita ko abhishek ke jane par jo jakhm laga tha uski bharpai hona bahut mushkil thi.


Gujarte samay ke sath Sarita ne Abhishek ko dhoondhne ki bahut koshish ki, lekin wo apne ghar se jyada door ja nahi sakti thi, fir bhi jitna sambhav ho saka usne apne hath panv chalaye abhishek ko dhoondhne ke liye.



5 Varsh baad.


Aaj Sarita 23 Sal ki bharpoor jawan ladki ban gayi thi. Aanand ji ne ji tod mehnat karke Sarita ko M.Sc ki padhai karwai thi. Wo bhi math subject se. Sarita ne M.Sc. Bhi bahut Achhe marks me uttiran ki thi. Manisha bhi 20 varsh paar karke 21ve me pravesh kar chuki thi aur B.Sc. final me thi.


Aaj Aanand ji ka ghar Phoolo se sajaya gaya tha. Tarah Tarah ke pakwan banaye ja rahe the. Sabke chehre par Khushi jhalak rahi thi. Aanand Ji aur raani Ji daud daud kar har kaam kar rhe the. Halwai ko samjha rahe the ki kaise kaun sa pakwan banana hai. Kitne baje khana ban jana hai. Aanand ji ki bahane aur Sale sabhi samay par aa gaye the.


Iska Kaaran tha Aaj Sarita ki sagai ho rahi thi. Ladka Sarkari vibhag me 2400/- GP par TA ke pad par Jabalpur mein kaam karta tha. Badi masakkat ke baad ye Rishta jama tha. Ladke ke gharwalo ne moter cycle aur 2 lakh Rs. Nagad dene ki baat ki thi. Tab jakar Rishta final huwa tha.


Iske baare me jab Sarita ko pata chala to usne is rishte ke liye saf inkar kar diya. uska kahna tha ki main apne maa baap ko karz me dalkar unke dukh aur dard par apne khushiyo ka mahal nahi khada kar sakti. Jiske baad Aanand ji aur Sarita ke bich tikhi nock jhok hui (jhagde wali nahi Samjhane wali) bahut mushkil se Sarita is shadi ke liye taiyaar hui.


Aisa nahi tha ki Sarita aage nahi padhna chahti thi. Aur aage ki padhai karna uska sapna tha. Wo padh likh kar apne pairon par khada hona chahti thi. Lekin wo apni aarthik shtiti ko bhi bhali bhanti samajhti thi. Use pata tha ki uske bhaai ke chale jane ke baad uske papa bahut toot chuke hain, kyonki sachhai pata chalne par wo khud ko doshi maan rahe the.


Aanand ji bahut mehnat karke dono betiyon ko padha rahe the. Sarita ko ache sa abhash tha ki uske pichhe Manisha bhi padhai kar rahi hai aur Uske baad Manisha ki shadi bhi karni hai. Jiske liye paiso ki bahut jaroorat hai. Do betiyon ki shadi kuchh samay ke antaral par karna Uske papa ke liye bahut Mushkil thaa.


Waise bhi hamare samaj ki vidambna yahi hai ki ladki chahe jitni bhi sundar kyon na ho, gunvaan aur padhi likhi kyon na ho. bina dahez ke uski shadi hona bahut hi mushkil hai, inhi sab paristhitiyon ko dekhte huwe sarita ne Shadi ke liye haan kar diya tha. Yahi nahi. Usne 2-4 Sarkari naukari ke liye bhi form bhara tha.


Do bar wo uttiran bhi hui thi. Lekin uski kishmat me shayad naukari nahi thi. Isliye uska selection nahi ho paya tha. Sarita ek samajhdar aur sankari ladki thi. Usne apne papa ki condition ko dekhte huwe apne sapno ka gala ghot diya tha.


Kuchh hi der baad sagai ke liye ladke wale aane ko the. Lekin Sarita ko Aaj Abhishek ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi. Waise to use har koi yaad karta tha, lekin Sarita sabse jyada yaad karti thi use. Wo use yaad karte huwe gumsum biathi hui thi, uski aankho me aanshu aa gaye the. Manisha ne jab uski haalat dekhi to wo samajh gayi ki uski didiya Bhaiya ko yaad kar rahi hai. Isliye wo uske paas jakar baith gayi aur Sarita ke balo me hanth firate huwe boli.


Manisha- Kya huwa didiya. Tum ro kyon rahi ho. Aaj to Khushi ka din hai. Tumhari sagai hone wali hai.

Sarita- tujhe to pata hai ki main kyon ro rahi hoon. Mujhe bhaiya ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai. Kaash wo aaj hamare sath hote to bahut khush hote wo. Lekin mere karan wo ghar chhod kar chale gaye.

Manisha- Aap har baar apne aapko kyon dosh deti ho didiya. Wo aapki wajah se nahi gaye. Wo niyati ka fer tha didiya jo bhaiya ko hamse door le gaya. Bhaiya bhi ham logo ko bahut yaad karte honge.

Sarita- Agar bhaiya ham logo ko yaad karte to ab tak laut kar ghar jaroor aate. Kam se kam ek baar to aakar dekh lete ki unki bahano ka unke bina kya haal ho gaya hai. Unki bahane unse kitna pyaar karti hain.

Manisha- Aap aisa kyon sochti hain didiya. Bhaiya ko ek din apni galti ka ehsaas hoga aur wo jaroor laut kar aayenge. Chalo ab ye aanshu poch dalo. Aaj to Khushi ka din hai. Aap ko aankhon me aanshu ache nahi lagte didiya.


Fir dono bahane kuchh der baat karti rahi. Thodi hi der me ladke wale aa gaye. Apni kshamta ke anusar Aanand ji ne poori vyawastha ki thi. Kuchh hi der mein sagai ki rashm shuru ho gayi.



Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..

dekha....... 2 lakh rupaye aur motor cycle di jaa rahi hai.... aaj to sarita bahot khush ho rahi hogi.... Hain na... :D
As readers ki sympathy paane ke liye jhuthmut ka magarmach aansu baha ke dikha rahi hai...
readers is sarita ki is tarah chikni chopdi baaton mein aa sakte hai.... lekin main nahi :bat:

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Well .....
aapki ye khubsurat manoram lekhni ... Kuch karwi sachhai, to kuch emotions shabdon mein , to kuch khushi aur dukh bhare pal.. , . ...jo hum readers ko kirdaaro aur kahani ke jariye le jaaye wahan...Jahan ho Kirdaaro ke kuch yaadon ka bashera ho ... Jahan kirdaaro bhumika nibhaye har situation ke sath...khaskar sarita, aanand ji, rani ji & manisha..
likhe gaye har shabd hawaon mein bhi ek nasha bikhed de... ki padhte waqt thoda sa ye nasha yun readers pe bhi chaa jaaye ....Haan.. ishi wajah se to har update padhne mein readers ko aaye maza...

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan ....

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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Fir dono bahane kuchh der baat karti rahi. Thodi hi der me ladke wale aa gaye. Apni kshamta ke anusar Aanand ji ne poori vyawastha ki thi. Kuchh hi der mein sagai ki rashm shuru ho gayi, lekin sagai hote hote ladke walon ka munh fool gaya. Ladke ke papa to aise bartav karne lage Jaise unke ghar me kisi ki mrityu ho gayi ho.


Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji ko alag se Baat karne ke liye bulaya. Aanand ji ke sath unke sale bhi the. Ladke ke papa ne Aanand ji se kaha.


L.Papa- Ye kya hai Aanand ji aapne to kaha tha ki aapki khatirdari me koi kami nahi rahegi aur sagai ki rasham bahut ache se hogi, lekin yahan to na khatirdari thik se hui aur na hi sagai ki rasham hi ache se hui. Jab sagai me ye haal hai to shadi me to aap mujhe loot hi loge.

Aanand ji- Are nahi bhai Sahab. Ye aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain. Main apni kshamta se jyada kar raha hoon. Taki meri beti khush rahe. Shadi me koi kami nahi hogi bhai sahab. Hamne poori koshish ki sagai me koi kami na rahne paye. Fir bhi agar koi kami rah gayi ho to aap hamko bata dijiye. Ham poori koshish karenge ki use door kar sake.

L.Papa- dekho Aanand ek to ladke ko apne sone ki janjeer nahi di. Aur aapne sagai mein paise bhi kam diye hain. Aise kaise chalega. Akhir hamne apne bete ki padhai likhai me kitna paisa kharcha kiya hai. Aur tum apni beti ke liye use phokat me apna damad banana chahte ho. Aur sath me hamare sath aaye huwe mehmano ka aapne swagat dhang se nahi kiya.

Aanand ji- ya aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain bhai sahab. Hamne apni taraf se khatirdari me koi kami nahi rakhi. bhai sahib Sagai ke liye paise aur janjeer ki koi baat hui hi nahi thi. Sagai ki anguthi ke alawa maine apni taraf se ek sone ki anguthi di hai. Waise bhi Baat to shadi ke liye hui hai moter Cycle aur 2 lakh rupye ki. Jo main shadi ke samay doonga aapko.

L.papa- Aise kaise main tumhari baat ka bharosha kar loon. Jo insan Sagai me itni kanjoosi kar sakta hai wo Shadi me kya kharcha karega. Mujhe to loot liya tumne sagai mein aur shadi mein to kangal hi bana doge tum mujhe.

S.Mama- Dekhiye bhai sahab Aap ab kuchh jyada hi bol rahe hain. Hamne apni taraf se koi kasar nahi rakhi khatirdari me. Fir bhi agar kahi kami rah gayi ho to hamko maaf kar dijiye. Aur rahi baat Shadi ke samay kiye gaye wade ki to wo ham poori tarah se nibhayenge. Jo hamne dene ke liye kaha hai wo hamm aapko denge.


Sarita ke Mama ki baat sunkar ladke ke papa gusse mein aa gaye aur unhone tez aawaz mein kaha.


L.papa- Kya jyada bol raha hoon main. Mujhe aap dono par tanik bhi bharosha nahi hain. Ab jab tak aap ladke ke liye janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aur nahi denge. Tab tak Shadi ke baare me bhool jaiye.

S.mama- ye kya bat hui bhai Shahab. Ham aapse itne prem se baat kar rahe hain to aaap dhamki dene par utar aaye hain. Main bhi dekhta hoon ki kaise nahi karte aap shadi. Hamari bitiya koi sajawat ka saman hai kya ki jab man chaha haa kiya aur jab mann chaha na kar diya. jab ham bol rahe hain ki aapko shadi ke samay jo bhi dene ke liye kaha gaya hai wo ham donge to ab aap ki demand badhati ja rahi hai. Ye bilkul bhi sahi nahi hai.

L.papa- Aise kaise nahi denge aap. Aakhir maine apne bete ko palne aur padhai likhai par jo kharch kiya hai wo kaun dega. Aap free me mere kamaau bete ko apna damad banana chahte hain. Ya to meri baat maniye ya to ye Rishta khatam samajhiye.

Aanand ji- nahi nahi bhai sahab aisa mat kahiye. Abhi itni jaldi ye sab kaise arrange karunga main. aap hame kuchh din ka samay dijiye main janjeer aur 50000 Rupaye aapko de dunga. Lekin aap ye Rishta mat todiye. Bahut badnami ho jayegi meri samaz me.

L. Papa- mujhe ab aur koi baat nahin karni. Mujhe abhi ke abhi 50000 rupaye aur sone ki janjeer ladke ke liye chahiye. Nahi to main chala ladke ko lekar apne ghar.

Ladke ke papa ki baat sunkar aanand ji ki aankhon mein aanshu aa gaye. Unhone apni pagdi utar kar ladke ke papa ke pairon mein rakhne lage to Sarita ke mama ne unko rokte huwe kaha.

S.Mama- ye kya kah rahe hain aap jeeja ji. Ye lalchi log hain inke kadmon mein apni izzat rakhne ka koi matlab nahin hai. Itna to main bhi samajh gaya hoon ki inki najar mein paisa hi sabkuchh hai. Ab aap inki koi bhi baat nahin manenge. inki mango ko poora karke aap Sarita ke liye mushkile paida kar rahe hain.


Abhi ye sab bate ho rahi thi ki kisi ne Sarita ko khabar kar di ki Ladke ke papa aur Aanand ji me kuchh kaha suni ho gayi hai to sarita bhi sagai wale kapdon mein hi waha pahuch gayi. Jab usne poori baat suni aur apne papa ko apni pagdi ladke ke baap me pairon mein rakhte huwe dekha to uska matha bhanna gaya. Usne Ladke ke papa ko do took jawab dete huwe kaha.


Sarita- Aap kya shadi ke liye mana karenge. Main ye shadi khud tod rahi hoon. Nahi karni mujhe aap ke bete se shadi. Nikal jaiye aap abhi aur isi samay yahan se aur apne bete ke liye koi aur ladki dhoondh lijiye.


Sarita ki baat sunkar aanand ji ne usase gusse se kaha.


Aanand ji- Ye kya kar rahi ho Tum Sarita. Tum andar jao. Main baat kar raha hoon na.

Sarita- main kyon andar jaaun papa. Aur aap kyon inki baat sun rahe hain. Kyaa apne hame isiliye paal posh kar bada kiya tha ki ek din hamari wajah se in bhikhmango ke samne hanth failana pade. Main ye kabhi bardast nahi karungi ki meri wajah se mare papa ko kisi ke samne hanth fialana pade aur kisi ke shamne sharminda hona pade.

Aap hamara gurur hain papa. Abhiman hain aap hamare. Main apne gurur aur abhiman ko kisi ke samne toot-ta huwa nahin dekh sakti. Aap khud sochiye papa ki abhi meri shadi bhi nahi hui hai to inka ye haal hai. Meri shadi ho jane ke baad to ye sher ho jayenge. Aapse kuchh bhi demand kar denge. Aur aap meri Khushi ke liye inki har demand poori karte firenge. Inke pairo me gir kar royenge, gidgidayenge. Jo main kabhi nahi hone doongi.

Aurat koi sajawatt ki wastu nahi hai papa jo uski boli lagayi jaye. Are thokar marti hoon main inki Daulat aur inke bete ki naukari par. Aap meri shadi kisi gareeb majdoor se kar dena papa. Main roj kamakar kha lungi. Lekin in jaise bhikhmango ke ghar meri shadi mat kariye papa. Meri baat man lijiye papa. Apni Sarita ki baat man lijiye.

S.mama- Sarita sahi kah rahi hai jeeja ji. Ye log lalchi hain shadi ke baad agar inki koi demand ham na poori kar paye to. Aapne socha hai ki ye apni sarita ke sath kitna bura bartav kar sakte hain. Maan jaiye jeeja ji. Main Sarita bitiya ke sath hoon. Aur main bhi nahi chahta ki ab ye shadi ho.


Aanand ko bhi Sarita ki baat sahi lagi. Unhone bhi dabe man se apni sahmati de di. Ladke ke papa ko filhal aisi ummeed nahi thi ki ladki khud aakar shadi ke liye mana kar dengi. Unhone ne socha tha ki Darwaze par Sagaai toot jane ke dar se Aanand ji uski mang puri kar denge, lekin Sarita ke do took inkar ne unki ummido par pani Fer diya. Shadi toot jane ke baad ladke wale apna apna munh lekar waha se chale gaye.


Sarita ke inkar karne ke kuchh hi der me jangal me aag ki tarah charo taraf ye khabar fial gayi ki Sarita ne Shadi se inkar kar diya. fir to wahi huwa jo Aksar ladki ki shadi tootne par hota hai. Jitney munh utni baatein. Koi kah raha tha ki Sarita ne bahut Achha kiya jo Aise lalchi logo ke yaha bahu banker jane se inkar kar diya to koi kah raha tha ki ladki walo ko itna ghamand Shobha nahi deta.


Aanand ji ke padosh me ek naye pariwar ne kuchh samay pahle naya ghar banwaya tha aur wo ghar ke sabhi sadashyo ke sath waha sift hue the. Ghar ke mukhiya pulish mahakame me Inspector the. To unka man samman bhi tha. Unki patni housewife thi. Lekin muhfat thi. Kisi ke samne kuchh bhi bol deti thi. Ye bhi nahi samajh aata tha unko ki unki baat kisi ko buri lag sakti hai.


Hamesha apne pati ke inspector hone ka ghamand dikhati rahti thi. Inka beta Central bank me PO ki post par pichhle sal hi laga tha. Aur bitiya ham umar thii Sarita ki. Isliye dono me thodi bahut batchit ho jati thi, lekin wo bhi apni maa ki tarah hi thi. Padosh me rahne ke karan unko ye bhi pata chal gaya tha ki Abhishek ghar chhodkar chala gaya hai. Aur kisliye gaya hai ye bhi pata tha.


Sagai me shamil hone wo log bhi aaye the Inspector ko chhodkar. To jab unko Bhi ye baat pata chali ki Sarita ne shadi se mana kar diya hai to unhe mauka mil gaya apni baat kahne ka, lekin unhone yah nahi dekkha ki Sarita aur Manisha unke pichhe aa rahi hain. Unhone paas baithi aurat se kaha.


I.wife- Janti ho bahan mujhe to shak hai ki Is Sarita ka kahi na kahi chakkar chal raha hai. Jiske karan usne shadi se mana kar diya. nahi to batao bhala. Naukari wale ladke ko aajkal kaun mana karta hai shadi se.

Aurat- Nahi bahan aisa kuchh nahi hai tum galat samajh rahi ho bahut hi nek bachhiya hain.

I.wife- Tumhe nahi pata kuchh bhi. Ye dono upar se masoom dikhti hain, lekin andar se bahut ghagh hain. mujhe to lagta hai jisase Sarita ka chakkar chal raha hain ye wahi ladke honge. Jinko abhishek ne mara hoga. Bina ladki ki haan ke koi ladka uske baare me aise thodi bol sakta hai. Pata nahi kya sanskar diye hain Aanand ji ne apni betiyon ko. Abhishek ko pata chal gaya hoga in chakkaro ke baare me. Wo to pahle se hi gunda tha. Isliye us ladke ko pit diya.

apne bhaai se badla lene ke liye isne Abhishek ko ghar se nikalwa diya hoga. Koi sanskar nahi hain iske andar. Koi izzat nahi hai unki samaz mein. Are jiske bete aur betiyon ke ye lakshan honge uski kya izzat rahegi samaz me. Mere pati ko dekho. Kitna maan samman hai. Mere bete ko dekho bank me PO hain ye sab Achhe sanskar ka natiza hai. Mujhe dukh hota hai ki aanand ne kaise sanskar diya hain apne bachho ko. Beta gunda ban gaya aur dono betiya chritraheen nikal gayi.


Ye baat sunkar Sarita rote huwe apne kamre me bhag gayi, lekin Manisha aag babula ho gayi aur Chillate huwe bolli.


Manisha- ye kya bol rahi ho aap. Meri didiya ke charitra par itna ghatiya ilzam lagate huwe aapko sharam nahi aati. Meri didiya ganga ki tarah Pavitra hai aur aapko Meri Didiya ke charitra ka certificate dene ki jaroorat nahi hain. Aapki samaj me izzat hai. To ham log bhi aapke yahan bheekh mangne nahi jate. Aap apni izzat apne paas rakhiye.

Aap sanskar ki baat kar rahi hain. To aap apne sanskar dekhiye. Aapke yahi sanskar hain ki aap bina sachhai jane meri didiya par itna ghatiya ilzam laga rahi hain. Aap meri didiya ko kuchh bolne se pahle apni bitiya ki sachhai jakar pata kariye ki wo padhai ka bol kar bahar jati hai to padhai karne jati hain ya ladko ke sath gul chharre udane jati hai.


Mahisha ki tez aawaz sunkar bahut si aurate aur aadmi waha par jama ho gaye the. Us aurat ki beti bhi waha aa gayi thi. Jab usne apne bare me suna to wo bhi apni maa ki tarah shuru ho gayi.


Ladki- Kyo re Manisha. Kya boli tu. Tu mere bare me jasusi karti hain. Tujhe main chhodungi nahi. Meri maa sahi kah rahi hain tum dono bahne charitraheen ho. Koi izzat nahi hai samaj me tum logon ki. Bhaai gunda hai aur bahan badchalan. Are tum logo ko to chullu bhar paani me doobkar mar jana chahiye. Chalo maa yahan se aise lichado ke yahan se koi Rishta nahi rakhna hai hamko.

Anya padosi vyakti- ye tum maa beti kya bole ja rahi ho aanap sanaap. Ham log in bachhiyon ko bachpan se jante hain. In dono bachhiyo jaisa sanskari aur vyavhari. Bado ka aadar karne wali bachhiya yaha aas paas dhoodhne se bhi nahi milengi. Aur inke bete ke bare me kya janti ho tum dono. Wo shararati tha, ladai jhagda karta tha, lekin kabhi bhi kisi ladki se galat vyavhar nahi kiya usne kabhi kisi ki bahan betiyon ko gandi najar se nahi dekha.

Usne un ladko ko isliye mara tha kyonki un dono ne in bachhiyo ke bare me gandi baat ki thi. Tumhare aadmi police me hain to iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tumhare jo munh me aaye wo tum bakti jao. Tum dono ko ye nahi dikh raha hai ki us bachhi par musibato ka pahad toota hai. Uski shadi cancel ho gayi hai. Use dilasha dene ke bajay use badnam kar rahi ho tum dono. Sharam aani chahiye tum dono ko.

I.wife- ham kyon sharam kare. Hamne ya hamari beti ne kahi munh kala nahi kiya hai. Sharam to in dono ladkiyon ko aani chahiye. Jo munh kala karti firti hain. Bhalai ka to jamana hi nahi raha.


Abhi wo Aadmi kuchh aur bolta Usase pahle Aanand ji bich me bole pade.


Aanand ji- Bas kijiye aap log. Kyon meri Sarita ke pichhe pade hain aap sab. Bhagwan ke liye use Baksh dijiye Aur apne apne ghar jaiye. Jo bhi dukh aur musibat hamare upar padi hai use ham jhel lenge. Hame aap logo ki sahanubhuti ki jaroorat nahi hai. Meharbani karke aap log jaiye yahan se.


Aanand ji ki baat sunkar wo dono maa beti bhunbhunati hui apne ghar chali gayi. Uske baad dhire dhire sab paas padosh ke log unke ghar se bahar nikal gaye.



Iske Aage ki Kahaani Agle Bhag mein..
Sarita ne ekdum sahi kiyaa. Aise lalchi logo ke ghar rishtaa karna hi nhi chahiyeee.

Sarita ne unlogo ka muh pe mana karna ekdum jabardast laga mujhe.

Aur yeh kuch padoshi kisi ke sage nhi hotee. Khushi mein jalte hai toh dukh mein khush hote hai.

Aur aise hi hai Sarita ke padoshi. Ladki ki shaadi tooti hai kaha uske aur uske parivaar ko support karenge lekin uske jagah ladki ke character pe hi ungli utha rahe hai.

Jab unki ladki ke saath aisa hogaa tab unko samaj aayega.

Aur yeh inspector ki biwi aur beti. Yeh toh bahot bade kamine hai. Pati aur beta sarkari naukri karte hai matlab inki bahot izzat hai aur baaki sab ki koi izzat nhi.

Jab unki beti ki aisi hi halat hogi naa tab samaj aayega unko.
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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Sarita ne ekdum sahi kiyaa. Aise lalchi logo ke ghar rishtaa karna hi nhi chahiyeee.

Sarita ne unlogo ka muh pe mana karna ekdum jabardast laga mujhe.

Aur yeh kuch padoshi kisi ke sage nhi hotee. Khushi mein jalte hai toh dukh mein khush hote hai.

Aur aise hi hai Sarita ke padoshi. Ladki ki shaadi tooti hai kaha uske aur uske parivaar ko support karenge lekin uske jagah ladki ke character pe hi ungli utha rahe hai.

Jab unki ladki ke saath aisa hogaa tab unko samaj aayega.

Aur yeh inspector ki biwi aur beti. Yeh toh bahot bade kamine hai. Pati aur beta sarkari naukri karte hai matlab inki bahot izzat hai aur baaki sab ki koi izzat nhi.

Jab unki beti ki aisi hi halat hogi naa tab samaj aayega unko.
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Lekin abhishek ghar pe rehta to kisi me itni himmat na hoti ki yun kuch bhi muh pe bol de :D
 
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ab kutte ki dum tebhi ki tedhi , ch aahe saal bhar uspe ek bada patthar rakhkar bada ke sidha karke kyun na rakh lo wo na sidhi hone wali....
abhishek bachpan mein hi itna bigad chuka tha ,ab kya khak sudherega... upar se rani jis kadar lad pyar karke sar chadhake uske galtiyo pe parda daalne ki koshish ki har baar:sigh:

bure sangat mein jab koi insaan jaata hai , to ya to wo kisi ke samajhane se waqt rehte un bure sangat se dur hoke khud ko galat raah pe jaane se bacha leta hai ya phir kisi ki na sun ke bure sangat mein rehke galat raah par chala jata hai... aur ant mein jiska natiza kaafi taklif deh hota hai.. us insaan ke sath sath usse jude log ya parivaar walo ko bhi iska khamiyaza bhugatna padta hai....
abhishek ko zara su bhi is baat ki ilm nahi abhi jis galat raah pe chal raha hai,aage jaake kis musibat ka samna karna par sakta hai....waise abhi kiske samjhane pe bhi wo nahi samajhne wala Kyunki uski aankhon pe abhi burayi ki patti bandhi hai jise wo mauj masti samajh raha hai ...

apne pita ko yaar kehke sambodhit karke ye baat saaf kar di hai ki wo aaj ke waqt mein kya ban chuka hai... Shayad yahi se abhishek khudki barbaadi ke auur rukh karne wala hai...

ab wo din door nahi jab abhishek ke chalte uske parivaar walo ko bhi us natiza ka saamna Karna padega jiski ummid kabhi maa baap ya parivaar wale nahi karte.... aur na karna chaahate hai...

Waise update hi sach dilchasp tha .... aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi.... ek sikh bhi se gaya hai....
Btw abhi shayad bahot se twists aane wale story pe..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills... :yourock: :yourock:
धन्यवाद आपका बहुत बहुत नैना जी इस खूबसूरत समीक्षा के लिए।।
इसमें माँ को दोष नहीं दे सकते। वो ममता की मूरत होती है। उसके लिए बेटा चाहे जिस भी हो हमेशा प्यारा ही होता है।
अभिषेक नहीं सुधर पा रहा है क्योंकि उसकी संगत गलत लड़कों के साथ हो गई है। संगत का बहुत असर पड़ता है। अगर दोस्त अच्छा हो तो उसकी संगत में बिगड़ा व्यक्ति भी सुधर सकता है लेकिन यहां पर अभिषेक की संगत ही गलत लड़कों से हो गई है तो इसमें आनंद जी और उनका परिवार क्या कर सकते हैं।।

साथ बनी रहिए।।
 
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itti si baat ke liye abhishek ko ghar se nikal diya kamino ne :ohno:
Matlab chutiya aanand ke mutabik ek bhai ke saamne kuch mann chale ladke uski bahan ke baare mein gandi gandi baatein kare aur bhai ko kuch nahi karna chahiye... Even gussa bhi nahi karna chahiye... balki un gundo samjhana chaahiye.... Ye to wohi baat ho gayi ki ek thappad khane ke baad dusre gaal ko bhi saamne kar do :lol:

udhar sarita jo boli so boli...

Lekin sabse badi hairaani ki baat ye hai ki abhishek ko ghar nikala jaa raha hai... ispe sarita aur rani aise aitraaj jata rahi jaise ye bas ek formality ho :roflol:

bichara abhishek, bahan ke liye lad gaya, ulta bahan ne hi ushe khadi khoti suna di...

Btw ye baap beti lakshan thik na hai.......
sarita ko shayad pasand hai ki ye gali ke badmash ushe chedhe ... even aanad ko bhi garv hota ho is mamle ki dekh uski beti to badmashon ke dilon pe raaj kare :lol: ab aise mein abhishek bich mein rukawat ban gaya tha isliye ghar se hi nikal diya :D

Isse bhi jee nahi bhara to jis bhai ne tasveer banayi itne pyar se aage chalke usipe goli chalake maarne ki koshish ki sarita ne :gunfire:

Btw kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai...
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Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
kuch raaz se dhire dhire parda hat rahe hai .. aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai.. :D


aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye 🙇 🙇

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका महोदया।।
अब इसमें कोई कुछ नहीं कर सकता न। अभिषेक ने बहुत अच्छा किया उन लड़कों को पीटकर। क्योंकि कोई भी गैरतमंद भाई ये कभी बर्दास्त नहीं कर सकता कि कोई उसकी बहन के बारे ने उल्टा सीधा बोले। हमारी नजर में भी अभिषेक ने बहुत बढ़िया काम किया।
आनंद जी की नजर में वो पहले से ही बिगड़ा हुआ लड़का था इसलिए उन्हें लगा होगा कि उसने जानबूझकर उन लड़कों को मारा है।
सरिता की बात को भी नही नकारा जा सकता। उसकी बातों में भी अपने भाई के प्रति प्यार नजर आता है वो कभी नही चाहेगी की उसकी वजह से उसके भाई को कोई नुकसान पहुचे।
कहने का मतलब ये है कि कोई भी अपनी जगह गलत नहीं था। बस वक्त और हालात गलत थे जिसके कारण ये सब हो गया जो नहीं होना चाहिए था।

साथ बनी रहिए।।
 
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Sarita ne ekdum sahi kiyaa. Aise lalchi logo ke ghar rishtaa karna hi nhi chahiyeee.

Sarita ne unlogo ka muh pe mana karna ekdum jabardast laga mujhe.

Aur yeh kuch padoshi kisi ke sage nhi hotee. Khushi mein jalte hai toh dukh mein khush hote hai.

Aur aise hi hai Sarita ke padoshi. Ladki ki shaadi tooti hai kaha uske aur uske parivaar ko support karenge lekin uske jagah ladki ke character pe hi ungli utha rahe hai.

Jab unki ladki ke saath aisa hogaa tab unko samaj aayega.

Aur yeh inspector ki biwi aur beti. Yeh toh bahot bade kamine hai. Pati aur beta sarkari naukri karte hai matlab inki bahot izzat hai aur baaki sab ki koi izzat nhi.

Jab unki beti ki aisi hi halat hogi naa tab samaj aayega unko.
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका नैना जी।।
समाज मे अभी बहुत से पैसे के लालची बैठे हुए हैं जो पैसे के लिए किसी भी हद तक जा सकते हैं। उन्हें ये समझ मे नही आता कि सामने वाले पर क्या बीतेगी।
सरिता ने ऐसे लोगों के मुंह पर तमाचा मार दिया। सरिता ने बिल्कुल सही किया। सगाई में जब ये हाल है तो शादी के बाद बहुत कुछ बुरा हो सकता था सरिता के साथ।
पड़ोसी अपने भी होते है और पराये भी। सरिता के पड़ोसी भी ऐसे ही हैं। कुछ को तो दुख हुआ तो इंस्पेक्टर की बेटी और पत्नी को बहुत खुशी हुई जिसके चलते इतना बखेड़ा हो गया।

साथ बनी रहिए।।
 
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Lekin abhishek ghar pe rehta to kisi me itni himmat na hoti ki yun kuch bhi muh pe bol de :D
अच्छा हुआ नहीं था अभिषेक नहीं तो पता नहीं और क्या क्या दिन देखना पड़ता जोशी परिवार को।।🤣
 
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Kitne jhuthe ansu bahate hai ye log... pehle us bechare abhisek ko bhagadiya ghar se... phir ma beti ne formalities ke "mat jaa " Aise words use kiye...
Aur natak kar rahi hai..
Aur ye sarita.... ye to dil hi dil mein khush ho rahi hogi ki chalo bala tali... ab saari property uski :evillaugh: :D
rahi baat nischal ki hone wali biwi manisha ki ushe to lekhika ne darikinar hi kar di, uska hona ya na hona ek barabar hai..
Anand, rani & sarita be like

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Bichara abhishek be like...
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Aanand, rani & sarita be like...
hera-pheri-tu-ja-re
:D



dekha....... 2 lakh rupaye aur motor cycle di jaa rahi hai.... aaj to sarita bahot khush ho rahi hogi.... Hain na... :D
As readers ki sympathy paane ke liye jhuthmut ka magarmach aansu baha ke dikha rahi hai...
readers is sarita ki is tarah chikni chopdi baaton mein aa sakte hai.... lekin main nahi :bat:

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Well .....
aapki ye khubsurat manoram lekhni ... Kuch karwi sachhai, to kuch emotions shabdon mein , to kuch khushi aur dukh bhare pal.. , . ...jo hum readers ko kirdaaro aur kahani ke jariye le jaaye wahan...Jahan ho Kirdaaro ke kuch yaadon ka bashera ho ... Jahan kirdaaro bhumika nibhaye har situation ke sath...khaskar sarita, aanand ji, rani ji & manisha..
likhe gaye har shabd hawaon mein bhi ek nasha bikhed de... ki padhte waqt thoda sa ye nasha yun readers pe bhi chaa jaaye ....Haan.. ishi wajah se to har update padhne mein readers ko aaye maza...

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan ....

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
धन्यवाद आपका मैडम।
अब स्थिति ही ऐसी बन गई थी कि आनन्द जी ने गुस्से से वो सब बोल दिया। और तो और अगर आनन्द जी ने गुस्से में वो सब बोल दिया तो इसका मतलब ये थोड़े ही है कि अभिषेक घर छोड़कर चला जाए। इसमें अभिषेक की भी गलती है।

साथ बनी रहिए।।
 

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