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Badalde Rishtey...
A Story by Busty_kaur
A Story by Busty_kaur
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Incest Badalde Rishtey.. (ਬਦਲਦੇ ਰਿਸ਼ਤੇ..)
- Thread starter busty_kaur4
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Harman apne mann vich pichle kuch mahineya vich jo jo vi vapreya os bare soch reha si. Kive usnu apne maa baap te choti bhain nu chhadna peya atte apni dil di sathan saheli nu alwida kehni payi. Ohnu apne yaara beliya te girlfriend naal bitaye sare pal ik movie wang yaad aa rahe san. Par hun oh apni nawi jindgi layi mann maar ke tyari kari baitha si.
Ohdi es sochan di ladhi nu todheya achanak hoyi jahaz di announcement ne, jo ke dass rahi si ke jahaz toronto pahunch wala hai te yatri apnia beltan ban lain.
Kuch hi der vich jahaz toronto airport te land kar geya te harman bahaut hi sehaj naal handbag leke bahar nikal geya. Oh hairani naal chaare paase dekh reha si, nwi jagah... nwe log sab kuch osnu excite kar reha si. Usne luggage leke ik call kiti te bahar arrivals wal nu aa gya.
Bahar nikalde edher odhur dekhan lgga enne nu ohnu awaz aayi "harman veere". Osne awaz da picha krde hoye dekheya ek sohni mutiyar ohda naam le rahi si. Eh mutiyar si harman di saggi bhain Gurleen, jo ke harman to 6 saal vaddi si. Par harman diya nazra ne osnu pehchanan toh inkar kar dita. Kyuki harman apni bhain nu 4 saal baad mil reha si atte usne gurleen nu photos vich hi dekheya si. Jo ke hun poori tarah badal chukki si.... kapdeya valon vi te shareer valo vi.
Harman ne apni bhain nu ik nazar bhar ke sir to pairan tak takeya, hawa vich lehraunde waal, kajle naal bharia manmohak akhan, surkh gulabi bull, usda kaale rang da sleeveless top jo osde gundwe anga nu hor ughad ke pesh kar reha si, usde spat dhid utte chhoti jehi dhunni, te usdi tang jeen di pant jo usde joban nu smaun di asafal koshish kar rahi si. Bhave harman apni bhain nu maadhi nigah naal nahi dekh reha si par hairan jarur si gurleen di khoobsurti te gundwe badan te.
Harman bhaj ke gurleen kol geya. Dove kuch palan lyi bhul gye ke hor wi log ne ohna de aas pass. Bas ohna dona ne ik dooje nu bahan vich le leya te ghutt ke jaffi paa lyi. Harman apni bhain nu apne kol pake khush si te gurleen aapne bhra da saath milan karke apne app nu khushkismat samjh rahi si.
Harman ne apni bhain di galwakdi da hor nigh manan layi jaffi di grifat hor tez kar diti. Gurleen da shareer ohde shareer naal ik pal lyi judh gya. Harman ne apni bhain de koole koole anga nu apne shareeh naal lagge mehsoos kita te oh sihar geya. Gurleen nu jad eh ehsas hoya oh thoda piche hatt gyi. Ehne naal dona di surat khuli te dekheya aase log ehna nu premi jodha smjh ke dekh rahe san. Gurleen thoda shrma ke piche ho gyi. Kuch gallan karn de baad oh dono gaddi vich beth ke ghar aa gye.
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Harman apne mann vich pichle kuch mahineya vich jo jo vi vapreya os bare soch reha si. Kive usnu apne maa baap te choti bhain nu chhadna peya atte apni dil di sathan saheli nu alwida kehni payi. Ohnu apne yaara beliya te girlfriend naal bitaye sare pal ik movie wang yaad aa rahe san. Par hun oh apni nawi jindgi layi mann maar ke tyari kari baitha si.
Ohdi es sochan di ladhi nu todheya achanak hoyi jahaz di announcement ne, jo ke dass rahi si ke jahaz toronto pahunch wala hai te yatri apnia beltan ban lain.
Kuch hi der vich jahaz toronto airport te land kar geya te harman bahaut hi sehaj naal handbag leke bahar nikal geya. Oh hairani naal chaare paase dekh reha si, nwi jagah... nwe log sab kuch osnu excite kar reha si. Usne luggage leke ik call kiti te bahar arrivals wal nu aa gya.
Bahar nikalde edher odhur dekhan lgga enne nu ohnu awaz aayi "harman veere". Osne awaz da picha krde hoye dekheya ek sohni mutiyar ohda naam le rahi si. Eh mutiyar si harman di saggi bhain Gurleen, jo ke harman to 6 saal vaddi si. Par harman diya nazra ne osnu pehchanan toh inkar kar dita. Kyuki harman apni bhain nu 4 saal baad mil reha si atte usne gurleen nu photos vich hi dekheya si. Jo ke hun poori tarah badal chukki si.... kapdeya valon vi te shareer valo vi.
Harman ne apni bhain nu ik nazar bhar ke sir to pairan tak takeya, hawa vich lehraunde waal, kajle naal bharia manmohak akhan, surkh gulabi bull, usda kaale rang da sleeveless top jo osde gundwe anga nu hor ughad ke pesh kar reha si, usde spat dhid utte chhoti jehi dhunni, te usdi tang jeen di pant jo usde joban nu smaun di asafal koshish kar rahi si. Bhave harman apni bhain nu maadhi nigah naal nahi dekh reha si par hairan jarur si gurleen di khoobsurti te gundwe badan te.
Harman bhaj ke gurleen kol geya. Dove kuch palan lyi bhul gye ke hor wi log ne ohna de aas pass. Bas ohna dona ne ik dooje nu bahan vich le leya te ghutt ke jaffi paa lyi. Harman apni bhain nu apne kol pake khush si te gurleen aapne bhra da saath milan karke apne app nu khushkismat samjh rahi si.
Harman ne apni bhain di galwakdi da hor nigh manan layi jaffi di grifat hor tez kar diti. Gurleen da shareer ohde shareer naal ik pal lyi judh gya. Harman ne apni bhain de koole koole anga nu apne shareeh naal lagge mehsoos kita te oh sihar geya. Gurleen nu jad eh ehsas hoya oh thoda piche hatt gyi. Ehne naal dona di surat khuli te dekheya aase log ehna nu premi jodha smjh ke dekh rahe san. Gurleen thoda shrma ke piche ho gyi. Kuch gallan karn de baad oh dono gaddi vich beth ke ghar aa gye.
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Kahani de Patar : eh kahani de pataran di brief jehi intro. Ohna de asal character da tuhanu story padhke patta chlega.
1. Harman : Harman ik 18 saal da uche kadd kaath wala gabhru hai. Bhave sir toh mona hai par pagg sohni bann lainda hai. Es karke jayadatar pagg bann ke rakhda hai. Padhayi vich theek si par madhi sangat vich pain de dukho osde pita malkeet ne karza chukk ke osnu canada bhejya hai. Oh hune canada study vise te pahunchya hai te ek nawe jeewan di shuruaat karn laga hai. Os di saheli jisnu oh bahut pyar karda c dilo vi te jismo vi... osnu oh punjab hi chhad geya.
Gurleen : Maa Peo di Ladli dhee te ghar vich sab toh vaddi kudi. Bahut hi saau te shusheel subah, kise nu manda fikka na bolan vali, apne kamm nal kamm rakhn wali. Bahar aun karke ohda rang hor vi nikhar geya si te osde ang osde rang nu char chann launde san. Kadd kaath valo sare parivar* vang hi uche kadd di malik te roop te suhappan valon apni maa parminder te gayi si. Ek hor cheez ohdi aapni maa naal mel khandi si oh si ohdi figure. Joke canada Osnu canada aayi nu 4 saal to vadh sama ho gya si te oh apni padhayi poori kar chukki si te ik restaurant vich job kardi si.
Jasleen kaur : Ghar di sab toh choti te sab di chaheti jisnu sare pyar naal jassi kehnde han. Es saal jasleen ne dasvi class de paper dene han par ohnu es ghar da dana pani enna lag geya ke koi keh nahi sakda ke eh kudi dasvi vich hai. Matlab ke oh apni gundwe shareer te ubharde angan karke apni umar nallo vadhi lagdi hai.
Malkeet Singh : umar 45 saal. Sardar Sucha singh da puttar, jo ke harman, gurleen te jasleen da pita hai. Ek bahut hi vadhiya insaan, ek changa pati te ek bahut hi samjhdar peyo. Jisne eni gareebi de chaldeya apne bacheya nu padhaya te kabil banaya. Ohne kade vi himmat nahi hari, naa hi ohne kade apni patni nu koi kami mehsoos hon diti naa roohi pyar valo na jismani valo. Oh ek aam kisan hai jo khetibaadi karda hai te pashu paalda hai ese siro ohna de ghar da guzara chalda hai.*
Parminder kaur : urf parm umar 43 saal. Malkeet singh di dharam patni. Jo ke apne pati toh bahut khush hai. Hun chahe ohdi jawani dhal rahi si par ajje vi ohde roop vich jadu si jo change bhale da dil beiman kar deve.
Sucha singh : umar 75 saal. Eh janab ne ghar de sab vadde bajurg te malkeet singh de pitaji. Umar de 7 dahake paar karke vi jawani de din nahi bhulde, yoga te varjish da jo naim jawani ch banaya si oh ajj vi jaari hai. Ese kar dada ji da shareer poora razi hai. Par hor vi vadhiya hona si je dhann kaur jeondi hundi, dadi de pehli umare mar jan naal sucha singh ras heen jiwan bita reha si.
1. Harman : Harman ik 18 saal da uche kadd kaath wala gabhru hai. Bhave sir toh mona hai par pagg sohni bann lainda hai. Es karke jayadatar pagg bann ke rakhda hai. Padhayi vich theek si par madhi sangat vich pain de dukho osde pita malkeet ne karza chukk ke osnu canada bhejya hai. Oh hune canada study vise te pahunchya hai te ek nawe jeewan di shuruaat karn laga hai. Os di saheli jisnu oh bahut pyar karda c dilo vi te jismo vi... osnu oh punjab hi chhad geya.
Gurleen : Maa Peo di Ladli dhee te ghar vich sab toh vaddi kudi. Bahut hi saau te shusheel subah, kise nu manda fikka na bolan vali, apne kamm nal kamm rakhn wali. Bahar aun karke ohda rang hor vi nikhar geya si te osde ang osde rang nu char chann launde san. Kadd kaath valo sare parivar* vang hi uche kadd di malik te roop te suhappan valon apni maa parminder te gayi si. Ek hor cheez ohdi aapni maa naal mel khandi si oh si ohdi figure. Joke canada Osnu canada aayi nu 4 saal to vadh sama ho gya si te oh apni padhayi poori kar chukki si te ik restaurant vich job kardi si.
Jasleen kaur : Ghar di sab toh choti te sab di chaheti jisnu sare pyar naal jassi kehnde han. Es saal jasleen ne dasvi class de paper dene han par ohnu es ghar da dana pani enna lag geya ke koi keh nahi sakda ke eh kudi dasvi vich hai. Matlab ke oh apni gundwe shareer te ubharde angan karke apni umar nallo vadhi lagdi hai.
Malkeet Singh : umar 45 saal. Sardar Sucha singh da puttar, jo ke harman, gurleen te jasleen da pita hai. Ek bahut hi vadhiya insaan, ek changa pati te ek bahut hi samjhdar peyo. Jisne eni gareebi de chaldeya apne bacheya nu padhaya te kabil banaya. Ohne kade vi himmat nahi hari, naa hi ohne kade apni patni nu koi kami mehsoos hon diti naa roohi pyar valo na jismani valo. Oh ek aam kisan hai jo khetibaadi karda hai te pashu paalda hai ese siro ohna de ghar da guzara chalda hai.*
Parminder kaur : urf parm umar 43 saal. Malkeet singh di dharam patni. Jo ke apne pati toh bahut khush hai. Hun chahe ohdi jawani dhal rahi si par ajje vi ohde roop vich jadu si jo change bhale da dil beiman kar deve.
Sucha singh : umar 75 saal. Eh janab ne ghar de sab vadde bajurg te malkeet singh de pitaji. Umar de 7 dahake paar karke vi jawani de din nahi bhulde, yoga te varjish da jo naim jawani ch banaya si oh ajj vi jaari hai. Ese kar dada ji da shareer poora razi hai. Par hor vi vadhiya hona si je dhann kaur jeondi hundi, dadi de pehli umare mar jan naal sucha singh ras heen jiwan bita reha si.
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Dooje paase : Harman da ghar
Harman ik madhvargi parivar to si, jo ke jameen thodi honn karke mandhaali da jeewan bateet kar rahe san. Esse karke ohna ghar vi khasa vadda nahi si par fer vi rehn layi bahut vadiya si. Ghar khetan vich baneya hon karke khafi khulla vehda si ohna kol.
Malkeet singh, harman da pita, apne putt de canada pahunchan te bahut khush si. Ehi khushi sanjhi karn layi oh drawing room de naalde kamre vich vadh geya. Jithe osdi bhaagwaan parminder kaur svere uthde sar hi bistre ikathe kar rahi si. Malkeet ne malak dene picho di aanke parminder nu galwakdi vich le leya. Parminder vi bhanp gyi ke kon ho skda.
Parm: ki gal bdde khush jaap rehe o?
Malkeet: hova kive na? Ajj mera putt canada pahunch geya. Hun aapne madhe din gaye.
Parm : waheguru da shukar hai ji (hath jodhdi hoyi kehndi hai)
Malkeet : hun todh du mera putt sadi gareebi dollar bhej bhej ke. (Naal hi mucch nu watt denda hai)
Parm : bas rabb sukh rakhe. Kitte ethe vangu madhi sangat vich na pe jave.
( pind rehnda hoya harman pind de kuch nashedi mundeya naal uthan behan lag gya si jo osde pariwar nu pasand nahi si)
Malkeet : haan time naal hi nikal geya nahi te ohne v lagg jana si kise chandre nashe te. (Parm de hor kol aunda hoya kehnda hai) wese ik gal hor vi changi ho gyi, hun sanu hor v chohal mohal karn nu time mil jaya kru.
Enna kehke malkeet parm da khabba mumma jor naal dabb denda hai.
Malkeet : ainve mera sala sara din ghare betha rehnda si. Kade pyar diya do gallan vi nahi si karn denda. (Malkeet naal naal parm de mumme di dodi napp reha si)
Parm : (siski lendi hoyi)sssss...ahhh... kyu mere munde di burayi karde o. Saabar taan tuhade toh nahi hunda. Koi apni umar da lihaaj karo.
Malkeet : ehh le... umar nu ki hoya meri nu. Ajje vi poora fit aan main. Chahe jawan kudi aaje poori tasalli karadu jatt.
Parm : accha ji... lbha koi jawan kudi tuhadi layi. Hun mere toh tan chit bhar geya tuhada. (moonh bnandi hoyi kehndi hai)
Malkeet : nahi nahi mere patoleya eho jehi koi gal nahi. Tu taan ajje vi mere dil di rani aa rani. (Malkeet parm nu apne val ghuma ke usde bulla* te bull rakhda hai.)
Parm thoda piche hundi hoi : ajj ki ho geya tuhanu savere savere. Bade mood ch lagg rahe ho?
Malkeet : yaar ki dssa tenu svere sver khey nu geya ki dekh aaya... hun taan bahla jee karda.
Parm : ki dekh aaye ho enni svakhte.
Malkeet : ajje mere ohi scene moohre aayi janda.
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Harman ik madhvargi parivar to si, jo ke jameen thodi honn karke mandhaali da jeewan bateet kar rahe san. Esse karke ohna ghar vi khasa vadda nahi si par fer vi rehn layi bahut vadiya si. Ghar khetan vich baneya hon karke khafi khulla vehda si ohna kol.
Malkeet singh, harman da pita, apne putt de canada pahunchan te bahut khush si. Ehi khushi sanjhi karn layi oh drawing room de naalde kamre vich vadh geya. Jithe osdi bhaagwaan parminder kaur svere uthde sar hi bistre ikathe kar rahi si. Malkeet ne malak dene picho di aanke parminder nu galwakdi vich le leya. Parminder vi bhanp gyi ke kon ho skda.
Parm: ki gal bdde khush jaap rehe o?
Malkeet: hova kive na? Ajj mera putt canada pahunch geya. Hun aapne madhe din gaye.
Parm : waheguru da shukar hai ji (hath jodhdi hoyi kehndi hai)
Malkeet : hun todh du mera putt sadi gareebi dollar bhej bhej ke. (Naal hi mucch nu watt denda hai)
Parm : bas rabb sukh rakhe. Kitte ethe vangu madhi sangat vich na pe jave.
( pind rehnda hoya harman pind de kuch nashedi mundeya naal uthan behan lag gya si jo osde pariwar nu pasand nahi si)
Malkeet : haan time naal hi nikal geya nahi te ohne v lagg jana si kise chandre nashe te. (Parm de hor kol aunda hoya kehnda hai) wese ik gal hor vi changi ho gyi, hun sanu hor v chohal mohal karn nu time mil jaya kru.
Enna kehke malkeet parm da khabba mumma jor naal dabb denda hai.
Malkeet : ainve mera sala sara din ghare betha rehnda si. Kade pyar diya do gallan vi nahi si karn denda. (Malkeet naal naal parm de mumme di dodi napp reha si)
Parm : (siski lendi hoyi)sssss...ahhh... kyu mere munde di burayi karde o. Saabar taan tuhade toh nahi hunda. Koi apni umar da lihaaj karo.
Malkeet : ehh le... umar nu ki hoya meri nu. Ajje vi poora fit aan main. Chahe jawan kudi aaje poori tasalli karadu jatt.
Parm : accha ji... lbha koi jawan kudi tuhadi layi. Hun mere toh tan chit bhar geya tuhada. (moonh bnandi hoyi kehndi hai)
Malkeet : nahi nahi mere patoleya eho jehi koi gal nahi. Tu taan ajje vi mere dil di rani aa rani. (Malkeet parm nu apne val ghuma ke usde bulla* te bull rakhda hai.)
Parm thoda piche hundi hoi : ajj ki ho geya tuhanu savere savere. Bade mood ch lagg rahe ho?
Malkeet : yaar ki dssa tenu svere sver khey nu geya ki dekh aaya... hun taan bahla jee karda.
Parm : ki dekh aaye ho enni svakhte.
Malkeet : ajje mere ohi scene moohre aayi janda.
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Malkeet : yaar ki dssa tenu svere sver khey nu geya ki dekh aaya... hun taan bahla jee karda.
Parm : ki dekh aaye ho enni svakhte.
Malkeet : ajje mere ohi scene moohre aayi janda. Yaar oh apne vehde valeya da jeeta burha ni...
Parm : haan... haan... jisdi piche jehe gharwali poori ho gyi si. Bahli madhi hoyi os naal taan. Char diya chare kudiya hi te utto gharwali chal vasi.
Haa* ohnu ki hoya jeete budhe nu.
Malkeet : oh ate ohdi bddi kudi najar de kheta vich gudayi karde si te main paani laon geya si.
Parm : accha mindo honi aa.
Malkeet : thoda thehar ke mindo apne kamad vall aayi. Main keha chal bahar behan ayi hou. 5 ku min baad jeeta vi magre aa geya.
Parm (hairan hundi hoyi) : oh kahto aa geya piche?* Ohnu saddan aya hou.
Malkeet : gal tan sunla poori
(es vakht tak malkeet ne chunni lahke pra rakh diti si te houli houli suit nu utah nu chuk reha si)
Menu kuch shakk jeha hoya taan main vi kamaad ander jaan da faisla kita. Jdo main ander ponchya taan menu apnia akhan te yakeen nahi hoya. Jeete ne mindo nu aapna saafa viccha ke nangi kita hoya si te de dhakke te dhakka mar ke chod reha si.
Enna kehnde di malkeet ne parm da naala khol ditta te salwar sarrrrrrrrrrrrrr karke parm de pairan ch dig gyi. Malkeet ne apdi gharwali di vaalan naal bhri fuddi te hatth fereya jo ekdum gilli ho chukki si.
Parm : haaaye aapni sagi dhee naal eh kamm kar reya si.
Malkeet : eh cheez hi eho jehi aa parm kaure. Yaar jado mindo di jawan fuddi dekhi na odo da mera sher khada aa ehte bethan da naam nahi le reha.
Parm : taan hi jawan kudi diya tassalli karaun diya gallan kar rahe si. Jawan kudi di tasalli bad ch karwayo pehla menu te thand paao.
Enna kehke parm ne malkeet da lun apni fuddi te rakh leya. Fuddi gilli honn karke lun facch di awaaz naal ander chala geya. Te malkeet jor jor naal ghasse launda kade parm de mumme puttda ohna nu chunghda.
Thoda sochan toh baad parm fir boli. Par koi apni kudi nu eda kive chod skda hai?*
Malkeet (haffda hoya) eh lun na kuch nahi dekhda. Ehnu ni ptta rishte ki aa.
Parm (sehmi jehi awwaz ch) : tusi gurleen ya jasleen naal eda kar skde ho??
Malkeet ghasse launda launda ekdum ruk geya.
Malkeet : ki bakwas kar rahi hain tu?
Parm : main tan bas puch rahi si ke tusi vi jeete vang sab rishte* naate bhul javoge te sab samaj de asoolan nu chhikke tang deoge. Kyunki tuhadia gallan toh tuhanu jawan kudia di vahwa chah lagdi aa.
Malkeet : menu nahi lagda jeete ne mindo naal koi jabardasti kiti hai naale mindo apni marzi te sehmati nal kamad vich ayi si.
Parm : Matlab je tuhadi dheeyan sehmat hon taan tusi vi saria haddan lang jaoge.
Malkeet apni gharwali de moonho enni gal sunnde saar josh ch aa janda te ik khich ke ghassa marda ke parm da choola tak hila denda. Parm hairan hundi hai ke osde pati nu ajj hoya ki hai. Oh eh gal smjh gyi si ke apnia jawan dheeyan bare gallan karke malkeet uttejit ho reha hai. Oh ohnu hor uttejit karna chahundi si.
Parm : sohni kehri lagdi doha cho?
Malkeet gal nu angoleya jeha kar denda par ghasseya di speed hor vi vdha denda. Oh kuch palan layi akhan band karda hai te oh mindo te jeete vichla kamaad vala scene chete aa janda. Par os scene vich mindo di jagah gurleen si te jeete di jagah ho aap si. Jive hi os es bare kalpana karda osda lun hor vi sukht ho geya. Te osne bahut hi jor naal ghassa mareya ke parm diya akhan bahar aa gyia.
Hun malkeet nu apradh bodh (guilty) feel ho reha si. Oh apna dheyan hor passe launa chahunda si. Par parminder de dimag nu kaam chadeya hoya si. Ohne thodi jehi agge ho ke malkeet da lun bahar kadhwa dita te apna ik hath piche lija ke apni fuddi te rakh leya ke oh dobara vadh na sake. Malkeet da lun agle ghasse naal hi ohde sakht hatthan te lgga te ohde moonho aah nikal gyi.
Malkeet : aahhhh bhaincho... ki ho geya tenu? Bahar kyu kadhta?
Parm : pehla tusi dsso kehdi changi lagdi aa??
Malkeet : tenu sharm ni aundi eho jehia gallan kardeya? Appnia dheeyan ne oh dono
Enne chir nu parm jo ke ghodi bni hoyi si ghum ke piche aa gyi te malkeet salami dende lun moohre beth gyi.
Parm : tuhada moonh kuch hor keh reha par tuhade eh janab kuch hor hi boli bol reha???
Parm sharart nal jaan bujh ke apnia kudia de naam lendi hai. GURLEEEEEEEEENNNN naal hi malkeet da lun jhatka lenda hai JASLEEEEENNNNNNN ik var fer malkeet da lun jhatka lenda hai.
Parm malkeet val aukha jeha dekhke : koi hai tuhade kol jawab???
Malkeet ohnu fadh ke fir toh lammi paunda hoya kehnda hai : main apnia kudia bare kade galat nahi socheya?
Parm : socheyo vi na. Main bas ohna da naam layungi sambhog vele tan ki tuhanu josh aave te meri changi thukayi karo
Par parm nahi si jandi eh jo beej ohne boya hai malkeet de mann vich ohda asar ki houga.
Eda hi malkeet fir toh ohdi chudayi karn vich mashroof ho janda hai par oh apne dimag vich kise hor di moorat bna reha hunda hai.
Ik dum ohde dhakkeya di speed vadh di hai te parm nu vi ehsas ho jnda hai ke ohda gharwala farigh hon wala hai.
Parm : aahhh.. ohhh.. haaye.. bahar kadh ke chutayeo eh na hove gurleen hona nu ek hor bhain de deo
Malkeet hunkare maarda haaffda hoya antim ghasse marda hai te ain mauke te apna lun bahar kadh lenda hai te sara maal parm de spaat dhid te sutt dinda. Ajj usde lun ne enna maal kadheya si jisnu dekh ke parm vi hairaan si te oh ehda kaaran vi jandi si.
Parm nu ajj bahut maza aya si es vartalaap da par eh maza malkeet te parm toh ilava ik hor bande nu vi aya si. Kyuki es sare ghatnakarm nu do hor kann sunn rahe san........
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Parm : ki dekh aaye ho enni svakhte.
Malkeet : ajje mere ohi scene moohre aayi janda. Yaar oh apne vehde valeya da jeeta burha ni...
Parm : haan... haan... jisdi piche jehe gharwali poori ho gyi si. Bahli madhi hoyi os naal taan. Char diya chare kudiya hi te utto gharwali chal vasi.
Haa* ohnu ki hoya jeete budhe nu.
Malkeet : oh ate ohdi bddi kudi najar de kheta vich gudayi karde si te main paani laon geya si.
Parm : accha mindo honi aa.
Malkeet : thoda thehar ke mindo apne kamad vall aayi. Main keha chal bahar behan ayi hou. 5 ku min baad jeeta vi magre aa geya.
Parm (hairan hundi hoyi) : oh kahto aa geya piche?* Ohnu saddan aya hou.
Malkeet : gal tan sunla poori
(es vakht tak malkeet ne chunni lahke pra rakh diti si te houli houli suit nu utah nu chuk reha si)
Menu kuch shakk jeha hoya taan main vi kamaad ander jaan da faisla kita. Jdo main ander ponchya taan menu apnia akhan te yakeen nahi hoya. Jeete ne mindo nu aapna saafa viccha ke nangi kita hoya si te de dhakke te dhakka mar ke chod reha si.
Enna kehnde di malkeet ne parm da naala khol ditta te salwar sarrrrrrrrrrrrrr karke parm de pairan ch dig gyi. Malkeet ne apdi gharwali di vaalan naal bhri fuddi te hatth fereya jo ekdum gilli ho chukki si.
Parm : haaaye aapni sagi dhee naal eh kamm kar reya si.
Malkeet : eh cheez hi eho jehi aa parm kaure. Yaar jado mindo di jawan fuddi dekhi na odo da mera sher khada aa ehte bethan da naam nahi le reha.
Parm : taan hi jawan kudi diya tassalli karaun diya gallan kar rahe si. Jawan kudi di tasalli bad ch karwayo pehla menu te thand paao.
Enna kehke parm ne malkeet da lun apni fuddi te rakh leya. Fuddi gilli honn karke lun facch di awaaz naal ander chala geya. Te malkeet jor jor naal ghasse launda kade parm de mumme puttda ohna nu chunghda.
Thoda sochan toh baad parm fir boli. Par koi apni kudi nu eda kive chod skda hai?*
Malkeet (haffda hoya) eh lun na kuch nahi dekhda. Ehnu ni ptta rishte ki aa.
Parm (sehmi jehi awwaz ch) : tusi gurleen ya jasleen naal eda kar skde ho??
Malkeet ghasse launda launda ekdum ruk geya.
Malkeet : ki bakwas kar rahi hain tu?
Parm : main tan bas puch rahi si ke tusi vi jeete vang sab rishte* naate bhul javoge te sab samaj de asoolan nu chhikke tang deoge. Kyunki tuhadia gallan toh tuhanu jawan kudia di vahwa chah lagdi aa.
Malkeet : menu nahi lagda jeete ne mindo naal koi jabardasti kiti hai naale mindo apni marzi te sehmati nal kamad vich ayi si.
Parm : Matlab je tuhadi dheeyan sehmat hon taan tusi vi saria haddan lang jaoge.
Malkeet apni gharwali de moonho enni gal sunnde saar josh ch aa janda te ik khich ke ghassa marda ke parm da choola tak hila denda. Parm hairan hundi hai ke osde pati nu ajj hoya ki hai. Oh eh gal smjh gyi si ke apnia jawan dheeyan bare gallan karke malkeet uttejit ho reha hai. Oh ohnu hor uttejit karna chahundi si.
Parm : sohni kehri lagdi doha cho?
Malkeet gal nu angoleya jeha kar denda par ghasseya di speed hor vi vdha denda. Oh kuch palan layi akhan band karda hai te oh mindo te jeete vichla kamaad vala scene chete aa janda. Par os scene vich mindo di jagah gurleen si te jeete di jagah ho aap si. Jive hi os es bare kalpana karda osda lun hor vi sukht ho geya. Te osne bahut hi jor naal ghassa mareya ke parm diya akhan bahar aa gyia.
Hun malkeet nu apradh bodh (guilty) feel ho reha si. Oh apna dheyan hor passe launa chahunda si. Par parminder de dimag nu kaam chadeya hoya si. Ohne thodi jehi agge ho ke malkeet da lun bahar kadhwa dita te apna ik hath piche lija ke apni fuddi te rakh leya ke oh dobara vadh na sake. Malkeet da lun agle ghasse naal hi ohde sakht hatthan te lgga te ohde moonho aah nikal gyi.
Malkeet : aahhhh bhaincho... ki ho geya tenu? Bahar kyu kadhta?
Parm : pehla tusi dsso kehdi changi lagdi aa??
Malkeet : tenu sharm ni aundi eho jehia gallan kardeya? Appnia dheeyan ne oh dono
Enne chir nu parm jo ke ghodi bni hoyi si ghum ke piche aa gyi te malkeet salami dende lun moohre beth gyi.
Parm : tuhada moonh kuch hor keh reha par tuhade eh janab kuch hor hi boli bol reha???
Parm sharart nal jaan bujh ke apnia kudia de naam lendi hai. GURLEEEEEEEEENNNN naal hi malkeet da lun jhatka lenda hai JASLEEEEENNNNNNN ik var fer malkeet da lun jhatka lenda hai.
Parm malkeet val aukha jeha dekhke : koi hai tuhade kol jawab???
Malkeet ohnu fadh ke fir toh lammi paunda hoya kehnda hai : main apnia kudia bare kade galat nahi socheya?
Parm : socheyo vi na. Main bas ohna da naam layungi sambhog vele tan ki tuhanu josh aave te meri changi thukayi karo
Par parm nahi si jandi eh jo beej ohne boya hai malkeet de mann vich ohda asar ki houga.
Eda hi malkeet fir toh ohdi chudayi karn vich mashroof ho janda hai par oh apne dimag vich kise hor di moorat bna reha hunda hai.
Ik dum ohde dhakkeya di speed vadh di hai te parm nu vi ehsas ho jnda hai ke ohda gharwala farigh hon wala hai.
Parm : aahhh.. ohhh.. haaye.. bahar kadh ke chutayeo eh na hove gurleen hona nu ek hor bhain de deo
Malkeet hunkare maarda haaffda hoya antim ghasse marda hai te ain mauke te apna lun bahar kadh lenda hai te sara maal parm de spaat dhid te sutt dinda. Ajj usde lun ne enna maal kadheya si jisnu dekh ke parm vi hairaan si te oh ehda kaaran vi jandi si.
Parm nu ajj bahut maza aya si es vartalaap da par eh maza malkeet te parm toh ilava ik hor bande nu vi aya si. Kyuki es sare ghatnakarm nu do hor kann sunn rahe san........
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Ik dum ohde dhakkeya di speed vadh di hai te parm nu vi ehsas ho jnda hai ke ohda gharwala farigh hon wala hai.
Parm : aahhh.. ohhh.. haaye.. bahar kadh ke chutayeo eh na hove gurleen hona nu ek hor bhain de deo
Malkeet hunkare maarda haaffda hoya antim ghasse marda hai te ain mauke te apna lun bahar kadh lenda hai te sara maal parm de spaat dhid te sutt dinda. Ajj usde lun ne enna maal kadheya si jisnu dekh ke parm vi hairaan si te oh ehda kaaran vi jandi si.
Parm nu ajj bahut maza aya si es vartalaap da par eh maza malkeet te parm toh ilava ik hor bande nu vi aya si. Kyuki es sare ghatnakarm nu do hor kann sunn rahe san........
Eh do kann san malkeet de peo te parm de sahure sucha singh de. Jo apne puttar te nooh diya thark bhariya gallan sun reha si. Darasal sucha singh es vele khetan nu pani laun janda si par ajj batti raat nu auni si es karke oh jaldi mudh aya si. Par malkeet te parm es gal toh anjaan san te apni raasleelaa vich mashgool san. Malkeet te parm da kamra deodi de naal si te sucha singh jad motor to ghar part reha si ohnne jad aah ooh diya awaza suniya oh deodi vich datthe manje ute hi beh geya.
Sucha singh oh sab kuch sun chukka si jo ohdi nooh ne apnia dheeyan jaani ke ohdia potia baare kehaa. Jis gal toh oh jyada hairaan si oh si apne humumar jeet singh te mindo di chudayi di gal. Oh es gal de vi teh tak jana chohnda si. Jeet singh naal osdi changi mittarrta si kyunki oh ohna de pariwar naal seeri reh chukkya si. Te jeete diya kudiya aksar hi ohna de kheta vich kamm karn aundia san. Osda lun chadre vich tent bnayi khda si. Ohne aasa paasa dekheya te chadra thoda upar chukk leya te kachehre di side toh hatth pake apne sand nu do tin vala hilaya te fer kise de aun de darr toh ohne chadra theek kar leya.
Oh nahi si chohnda ke ohde ethe hin bare osde putt te nooh nu pta lage es karke oh ghar toh bahar chala gya gate vadh de ne hi uchi deni khangoora maareya. Malkeet te parm taan jive kise need cho jaage san ohna cheti cheti apne aap nu swareya te bahar nikal aye.
Enne nu sucha singh vi ohna de kamre moohre pahunch chukya si, parm ne suhare nu dekh de hi apna sir dhakk leya jo ke khilreya peya si thodi der pehle de kaam yudh karke. Oh apne sahure de pairi hatth laun layi agge aayi te jio hi kodi hoyi osde bund toh usda suit chukkya geya salwar vicho osdi madmast bund da didar paake sucha singh de budhe sher ne fir toh jaagan da faisla kar leya jo ke pehle thoda murjha geya si. Sucha singh ne apni noonh de sir te haath fer de hoye keha " wahwa late utthan lagg pye ho?"
Parm : nahi bhapa ji jagde si bas andar hi gallan karde si. Tusi aage main hune chah banaundi haan.
Te malkeet nu ishara kardi hoyi kehndi hai "jao tusi jasleen nu jaga deo school layi late ho jana ohne"
Te aap rasoi val nu chali jandi hai osdi jandi di magro bund hildi dekhke sucha singh da lun ik vaar fir hauka bharda hai.
Malkeet dhee de kamre val nu jaa reha hai . Darasal eh jasleen da kamra vakhra nahi si jdo gurleen te harman india hunde si odo sareya jawakan da kamra eho ikko si. Par hun harman de jaan de baad eh kamra ikalli jasleen kole si. Malkeet de mann vich ajje vi jeete budhe te mindo wala scene chal reha hai naal hi naal ohdi gharwali vallon kitia ohdia dheeyan bare gallan chitt vich valvale paida kar rahia san. Oh aapne mann nu samjhaunda hoyea jasleen de kamre val nu tur peya.
Par ohda mann bahli der na samjheya reha jdo ohne jasleen ne kamre da darwaza kholeya. Ander kamre de centre vich tutte jehe pakhe de ain thalle jasleen ne manja laya hoya si jisda bistra sara khilreya hoya si. Te jasleen manje di vichkar moodhi payi si te usdi kooli kooli upar val nu si jo ander jandeya hi malkeet de nazri pai gyi. Garmia de din honn karan jasleen ne purana te ghasseya jeha suit paaya jo usnu kaafi tang te chhota si.
Malkeet thoda hor agge vadhda hai te dekhda hai ke jasleen da tang suit usde lakk kolo upar chukkya hoya si jis karke osdi shalwar da nada te usdi bund di lakeer dis rahi si. Osdi jma dudhchiti bund da halka jeha trailer dekh ke hi malkeet da lun hulara lainda hai.
Malkeet apne mann vich aap nu gallan kadh da hai. Par usde shreef mann te luche mann vich daleelbazi shuru ho jandi hai. Shreef mann kehnda hai ke eh galat hai eh meri dhee hai mera apna khoon mera apna beej. Main este buri nazar kive paa sakda haan. Par lucha mann osnu tikkan nahi denda te ohnu jeete di udaharn de ke kehnda hai ke aurat te mard da sambhog (sex) ton sivae koi rishta nahi. Ohne vi taan apni dhee de mazze laye han.
Akhir lucha mann uste haavi ho janda hai te oh aapna sajja hatth kadhke apni dhee di kooli kooli bund te rakh denda hai. Malkeet de shareer ch jive current daud janda hai, ek dum haath piche hataunda hai. Fir thodi der baad kuch himmat karke jasleen de ik chittar nu fadh ke haath vich lainda te naal naal hilaunda hai te naal hi awaz denda hai ke :"jasleen uthja school nahi jana uthja late ho jayegi" jasleen de chittar ainve hilde han jive pani de gubare. Oh vi apne pita di awaz sun* ke uth jandi hai te apne papa da hath apne piche pake sharm mehsoos kardi hai te ek pasa palat ke sidhi ho jandi hai. Hun jo malkeet nu disda hai oh ohde layi rongte khade karn vala si. Ohdi dhee de ghasse suit vicho ohde mumme hoobahoo dis rahe san etho tak ke koi vi osdia gulabi dodia suit vicho di syaan sakda si. Te ohde peo ne vi syan layia te oh ik takk ohna pyare pyare gol matol mummeya nu dekhan lagya.
Jasleen ne akhan malde apne peo val dekhya te keha : papa ji sasri kal
Malkeet da dhyan bhang hoya te jhunjlaunda hoya kehn lagga : saa ssaa saasri kaal putt, uth khad hun nahi te school jano late ho jayengi.
Enna kehke malkeet ne otho jaan ch bhalayi smjhi kyoki oh nahi si chohnda osda tamboo osdi dhee di nazri pawe.
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Malkeet da dhyan bhang hoya te jhunjlaunda hoya kehn lagga : saa ssaa saasri kaal putt, uth khad hun nahi te school jano late ho jayengi.
Enna kehke malkeet ne otho jaan ch bhalayi smjho kyoki oh nahi si chohnda osda tamboo osdi dhee di nazri pawe.
Hun malkeet chahunda si oh kise na kise tarah ek vaar fer thanda hove par kive hunda sare tan ghare si.
Odher jasleen ne apne school di vardi chukki te nahaun chali gyi. Tusi soch rahe hovoge ke aalisan tub laga hovega ya shower wagera. Bil kul nahi jasleen apne ghar di side te nikke jehe bathroom val chali gyi. Bathroom kahda ik trah naal khurra hi si ho. Madhali de daur de chaldeya tin kandhan te ik fatteyan vale lagge boohe nu hi bathroom kehnde san oh. Jis boohe vicho je dheyan nal dekheya jave tan virlan thani sab kuch disda si. Na hi os utte koi chhat si.
Andar da haal odo vi madha si naa koi motor na shower bas ik tutta jeha nalka te side te mooh dekhan nu lagga sheesha.
Jasleen ne ander vadhde hi chitkani layi te apni vardi lakad di bani killi utte tang ditte. Fir usne apne ghar paun vale suit val dekheya te dekhke app hi shrma gyi te sochan laggi main eda hi apne peo de sahmne chali gyi. Haalanke oh ajje apne shareer te sex bare bahut nahi si jandi par thodi bahut samjh usnu vi aun lag gyi si. Fir usne apne suit nu pichle passeyo chukk ke lahun da yatan kita. Suit tang hon karan badi mushkil naal lattheya par jdo lattheya usde dove mumme injh bahir nikle jive tihad jail cho kaidi chutte hon. Ain same time te jasleen di nazar sheeshe utte payi jis vich usde mumme hilde nazar aa rahe san. Usne apne mummeya nu dova hathan vich leke paloseya te bade pyar naal nimma nimma dabban lag payi. Oh apneya es hisse de vikas nu leke khush si. Usne sheesha killi toh lah leya te apne piche val lija ke apni bund nu dekhan laggi jo sver sver osde peo valo nappi gyi si. Fer apna ik hath lija ke osnu dabban lag gyi te sochan laggi ke pita ji nu maza aya hou eh karke. Jaldi hi usnu kheyal aya ke oh kite school toh late na ho jave te kahli kahli usne shalwar da naala kholeya te neeche baith gyi. Shhheeeeeeeeeeeeee... de awaaz ik dum goonzi te sara bathroom ohde peshab di manmohak sugandh naal bhar geya. Jasleen mootke uthi te nalke toh balti* bharke nahaun lag payi.
Chheti hi nahake usne apni school di vardi paa layi. Ik var fer ohna di gareebi ne ohde naal khilvad kita es saal purani vardi si jo osne nauvi class vich layi si hun eh vi bahut tight ho chukki si ik ohdi charhdi jawani te ohda nikhar rehe ang te utto ohda tang suit kehar machaun layi tyar san.
Dooje paase malkeet chaunke vich baitha apne peo te apdi tiwi naal chah pee reha si. Enne nu othe jasleen vi aa gyi.
Jasleen : mummy menu roti deo chheti nahi te main late ho jana
Parm : behja putt. Roti tan bani payi aa tu khala
Enna kehke jasleen apne peo te maa de laage bethe ke roti khan laggdi hai. Malkeet singh apni chor akhan nal ohde roop nu utto laike thalle tak niharda hai. Usdi tang vardi paatan te ayi hoyi se usde gundaz mummeya te maansal bund naal. Oh hauka jeha bharda hai te mann vich sochda hai ke hun ehne kehna papa menu school chhad ke aao te par main tan chahuna ke sardarni nu fadh lwa ik vari hor nahi te mera din bda aukha langu. Eda karda main bapu nu bhej dena.
Jasleen ne roti khande hi keha : chalo papa kadho cycle te menu chad ke aao.
Malkeet ne inkar karde hoya keha : nahi puttar menu jaruri kamm aa tu dada ji nu leja.
Jasleen ne sucha singh nu tarla mareya te kehn lagi : chalo na dada ji
Sucha singh anmanne mann nal jasleen nu cycle de piche bitha ke tur peya. Jasleen da school 3 km door si pind toh. Jasleen apne dade naal gallan kardi kardi jaa rahi si ke achanak jor dar avaz naal cycle di pichli seat tutt gyi te osdi rod tyre diya taaran vich fass gyi. Cycle othe hi khad geya. Sucha te jasleen msa digde digde bache.
Sucha singh gusse vich gaalh kadhda boleya ehne behnchod ne vi hune tuttna si.
Jasleen nu apne time nal school pahunchan di chinta laggi si te oh boli hun apa ki karange.
Suche ne ohnu bharosa devaya ke oh koi hal labhda hai. Ohne tyre diya taaran vicho rod nu bahar kadhke vinga kar dita tanjo dobara oh vich na aave. Par seat iko rod te tiki hon karke bethan de kabil nahi si.
Ohnu nimozuna hoke raah val dekhan lag peya ke koi rahgir aave tan oh jasleen nu ohde naal chhda deve.
Dada ji hun aapa kive javange : jasleen chinta kardi hoyi boli.
Main dekhda putta koi aunda tan ohde naal chad jayi : suche ne jawab dita. 5 min tak koi na aya.
Hun jasleen da mooh ron vala ho gya si te ohnu dekhke sucha boleya putt ik hal haiga tu agge baith ja.
Jasleen eh sunke khush ho gyi oh kise na kise tarah school time nal pahunchna chahundi si.
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Jasleen eh sunke khush ho gyi oh kise na kise tarah school time nal pahunchna chahundi si.
Suche ne cycle utte chadke ik latt pedal te rakhi te dooje thalle te apniya latta thodia kholke jasleen layi bethan nu jagah banayi. Par jasleen di fulli hoyi bund dekh usnu thodia hor lattan kholnia payia. Jasleen di bund poori suche de patta naal kheh ke gyi te jasleen chhaddapa maar ke cycle di dande utte beth gyi. Suche ne thalle nazar mari te dekheya ke jasleen da ik chittar dande de ik passe te dooje dooje passe. Cycle da danda poora ohne bund di di darar te si. Cycle da danda eh di bund di mori te lagda hou eh sochke suche de lun ne haluna leya.
Jado suche ne cycle chalona shuru kita te usdiya lattan ikatthia ho gyia te ohna dova de shareer ik dooje naal bhidna shuru ho gye. Apni poti de shareer di garmi sucha apne patta rahi mehsoos kar reha si.
Jasleen de jawan jism di garmi pake oh garam ho reha si te naal hi osda hathyar vi garam hona shuru ho geya. Pehla tan osne piche hon di sochi taan ki osda hideya lun osdi poti nu naa choohe par saver valia saria ghatnawa chete kar oh thoda ho agge ho geya te pedal marda marda patta nu jasleen di bund naal ghasaon lagga. Hun osda khada lun jasleen di bund nu touch kar reha si cycle tez bhajoan de bahane oh thoda upar utheya seat to te thoda ho agge aa geya. Jisnaal osne ik tarah naal apna sara lun jasleen di bund te chooha dita.
Jasleen bhole bha boli : dada ji hor tez bhajao
Suche poora garam ho chukka si te boleya : eda nahi bhajda putt tu meri agge bethi aa? Jor nahi penda tu inj kar mere patta te beth jaa
Enna kehke ohnu apna ik goda jasleen di bund thalle dita te ohnu chukk dita te patt te bitha leya. Jeo jeo oh pedal marda jasleen hor utte ayi jandi. Sucha tan jive swarg vich betha si kyunki hun usdi pyari poti di madmast bund ain ohde lun te si.
Jdo hi oh pedal marda jasleen ohde khade lun te sajje khabbe hundi. Maze naal usdia akhan band hundia jaa rahia san.
Jasleen nu vi ohda lun saaf saaf mehsoos ho reha si par ohnu pta nahi si ke eh cheez ki hai.
Jasleen ne suche ne pucheya : dada ji eh mere thalle ki chubb reha hai?
Suche ne gol mol jawab de dita : kuch nahi putt danda hai.
Suche di manzil nerhe si par school jyada nerhe si . So ohne dooji gali vich cycle pa leya jo jyada lambi si te khrab vi. Gali vich toye tibbe ho karke cycle jor jor naal hilda te utte bethe jasleen te sucha vi. Jasleen layi eh toye san par suche layi swarg de jhoote. Toyean karke suche ne apna lun jassi de koolhi bund te hor jor naal ragadna shuru kar dita. School de gate toh thoda chir pehla hi ohda maal ohde kache vich chhut geya te chadre te ik daag jeha chhad geya. Hun sucha apne kite te sharminda vi si te ik tarah nal sampuran vi mehsoos kar reha si. Ohne jasleen nu othe utaar ke nikalan di kiti kyuki ohne kise nu milna si.
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Suche ne cycle utte chadke ik latt pedal te rakhi te dooje thalle te apniya latta thodia kholke jasleen layi bethan nu jagah banayi. Par jasleen di fulli hoyi bund dekh usnu thodia hor lattan kholnia payia. Jasleen di bund poori suche de patta naal kheh ke gyi te jasleen chhaddapa maar ke cycle di dande utte beth gyi. Suche ne thalle nazar mari te dekheya ke jasleen da ik chittar dande de ik passe te dooje dooje passe. Cycle da danda poora ohne bund di di darar te si. Cycle da danda eh di bund di mori te lagda hou eh sochke suche de lun ne haluna leya.
Jado suche ne cycle chalona shuru kita te usdiya lattan ikatthia ho gyia te ohna dova de shareer ik dooje naal bhidna shuru ho gye. Apni poti de shareer di garmi sucha apne patta rahi mehsoos kar reha si.
Jasleen de jawan jism di garmi pake oh garam ho reha si te naal hi osda hathyar vi garam hona shuru ho geya. Pehla tan osne piche hon di sochi taan ki osda hideya lun osdi poti nu naa choohe par saver valia saria ghatnawa chete kar oh thoda ho agge ho geya te pedal marda marda patta nu jasleen di bund naal ghasaon lagga. Hun osda khada lun jasleen di bund nu touch kar reha si cycle tez bhajoan de bahane oh thoda upar utheya seat to te thoda ho agge aa geya. Jisnaal osne ik tarah naal apna sara lun jasleen di bund te chooha dita.
Jasleen bhole bha boli : dada ji hor tez bhajao
Suche poora garam ho chukka si te boleya : eda nahi bhajda putt tu meri agge bethi aa? Jor nahi penda tu inj kar mere patta te beth jaa
Enna kehke ohnu apna ik goda jasleen di bund thalle dita te ohnu chukk dita te patt te bitha leya. Jeo jeo oh pedal marda jasleen hor utte ayi jandi. Sucha tan jive swarg vich betha si kyunki hun usdi pyari poti di madmast bund ain ohde lun te si.
Jdo hi oh pedal marda jasleen ohde khade lun te sajje khabbe hundi. Maze naal usdia akhan band hundia jaa rahia san.
Jasleen nu vi ohda lun saaf saaf mehsoos ho reha si par ohnu pta nahi si ke eh cheez ki hai.
Jasleen ne suche ne pucheya : dada ji eh mere thalle ki chubb reha hai?
Suche ne gol mol jawab de dita : kuch nahi putt danda hai.
Suche di manzil nerhe si par school jyada nerhe si . So ohne dooji gali vich cycle pa leya jo jyada lambi si te khrab vi. Gali vich toye tibbe ho karke cycle jor jor naal hilda te utte bethe jasleen te sucha vi. Jasleen layi eh toye san par suche layi swarg de jhoote. Toyean karke suche ne apna lun jassi de koolhi bund te hor jor naal ragadna shuru kar dita. School de gate toh thoda chir pehla hi ohda maal ohde kache vich chhut geya te chadre te ik daag jeha chhad geya. Hun sucha apne kite te sharminda vi si te ik tarah nal sampuran vi mehsoos kar reha si. Ohne jasleen nu othe utaar ke nikalan di kiti kyuki ohne kise nu milna si.
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Suche di manzil nerhe si par school jyada nerhe si . So ohne dooji gali vich cycle pa leya jo jyada lambi si te khrab vi. Gali vich toye tibbe ho karke cycle jor jor naal hilda te utte bethe jasleen te sucha vi. Jasleen layi eh toye san par suche layi swarg de jhoote. Toyean karke suche ne apna lun jassi de koolhi bund te hor jor naal ragadna shuru kar dita. School de gate toh thoda chir pehla hi ohda maal ohde kache vich chhut geya te chadre te ik daag jeha chhad geya. Hun sucha apne kite te sharminda vi si te ik tarah nal sampuran vi mehsoos kar reha si. Ohne jasleen nu othe utaar ke nikalan di kiti kyuki ohne kise nu milna si.
Suche ne apne chadre nu thoda hawa vich lehraya tan ki ohda kachehra te chadra thoda sukk jave te kise nu pta na lage.
Kahli kahli pedal marda sucha apne ghar jaan di bajaye sidha khetan wal nu ho tureya. Tahli de rukh naal cycle laake oh ose khet val nu chala geya jithe jeeta te mindo gudayi karde si.
Jeet budha hon karke thoda piche reh gya si te ohdi kudi mindo gudayi kardi kardi khel vich kafi agge pahunch gyi si.
Sucha : kive jeet sinha____ kive chalda kamm kaar?
Jeet : ohh sardar ji tusi___ sasri kal ji. Vadiya chali janda par garmi ne jaan kadhi payi aa.
Jeet asal vich hairan si pind vich ohnu koi jeet singh kehke nahi si bulonda jyadatar jeeta burrha ya jeeta hi kehnde san. Ohdi samjh kuch kuch aa geya si ke eh jatt vi kise matlab naal hi menu enna satikar de reha. Sucha ek rohabdar jatt si ucha lamma jawan kad 6 foot toh jyada pind vich poora asar rassokh te oh banda aake siri ni jeet singh bulave kuch tan garhbadh hovegi. Enna niana nahi si Jeeta.
Sucha : teri gharwali bare suneya bdda dukh hoya.
Jeeta hatth upar karde hoye : Jo daddhe nu manzoor si. Ohde agge kisda jor aa ji.
Mindo ohna toh kaafi agge si te ohna diya gallan nahi sunn sakdi si.
Garmi vich kamm kardi mindo da sara suit mudhke naal bhijja hoyea si. Te eh paseena ohde har ang da nakhsha ohde patle suit cho ubhar reha si. Suche vale pase da mumme ohde haath di chaal naal hilda suche nu dikh reha si te piccho lishakdi dhup vich osda pinda chamak reha si. Godheya bhaar bethi hon karke ohne suit apne godheya vich leya hoya si te eve baithi si jive tatti behan baithi hove. Es tarah naal baithan karke ohdi bund hoobahoo bahir dikh rahi si.
Sucha mindo val ishara karde hoye : ahh bddi kudi nahi teri?
Jeet : hanji sardaar ji mindo hi aa ji. Hun ehi mera sahara hai ji budhapa da. Ehi kamm kumm karvaundi mere nal.
Suche ne ek nazar bhar ke mindo de roop nu takkeya oh mudhke naal bhijjeya jisam te ohdi suit vich kasse do bhaare chittad. Suche diya akhan jagg rahia san ohde jisam de nashe naal.
Suche ne apne hatth naal lun nu ghuttde hoye keha " wahwa jawan ho gyi aa hun* te sukh naal"
"Hanji sardar ji " jeete ne sir jhukaunde hoye keha.
Suche ne mucch nu watt dende hoye keha " viah viooh ni karna ehda"
Jeet : karna taan hai sardar ji koi munda ni labhda changa bhala
Sucha : tera kehra labhan nu jee karda hona?
Jeet haklaunda hoya : ki.. . Ki matlab sardar ji
Suche ne gal badalde hoye keha "teri sewa bahut kardi aa na taan karke jee nahi karda hona tera"
Jeet : haanji saab ji sewa vallon taan koi kasar nahi chadi ehne jado di ehdi maa poori hoyi aa ehda hi sahara aa.
Suche aapne rang vich aa geya si " sewa taan dekhlyi si saver saver.... kamaad vich"
Jeet taan jive bondal geya si. Hun ohnu sara maajra samjh aa chukkya si te sardar di niyat vi. Par fer vi oh gal taalda hoya boleya " kehra kamaad sardar ji... kehri sewa... kida diya gallan kar rahe ho tusi?"
Sucha singh hassda hoya thalle baith geya te boleya "sade vala kamaad jithe savere saver mindo apni fuddi naal teri sewa kar rahi si"
Jeet samjh chukka si ke sardar ne sab kuch dekh leya par oh eh gal taalna chauhnda si.
Jeet : eh keho jehia gallan kar reha sardara. Main apni kudi naal kida ainve kar sakda.
Sucha : Jeet siha... dekh taan tenu leya aa sab kuch karde menu ptta aa hawas bande nu kithe le jandi aa. Eh nahi dekhdi sahmne ohdi kudi aa ya poti. Ohnu tan bas fuddi dikhdi aa. Sucha ikke saah eh gal keh geya.
Jeet : jdo main kuch kita hi nahi. Tusi ainve mere te ilZam madhi jande o.
Sucha : eh taan hun pachayat vich hi pata laggu
Pachayat da naam sunnke jeet vi roh vich aa geya te boleya " jaao sardar ji panchaayat vich. Main nahi darda thode kole kehra koi saboot aa"
Suche hasseya " oh bholeya... jatt di jubaan hi saboot hundi aa"
Jeet ne samjhota karn vich hi bhalayi samjhi "dsso saab ji tusi ki chohnde ho"
Sucha khachri haasi hassda hoya " hehehe.. main vi mindo vargi rakaan di fuddi da raspaan karna chohnda"
Jeet : nahi nahi nahi eh nahi ho sakda. Main eda nahi honn de sakda.
Sucha : marzi dekhla aapni je jag badnami khattni aa. Ehda viah vi nahi hona kite.
Jeet : chalo theek aa par meri vi ek shart aa. Main tuhanu apni dhee da sawad devasyu te tusi kise hor da swaad dewa deo.
Sucha : theek aa... tenu vehde valeya di preeto di fuddi dwa du main.
Jeet : naa sardar ji naa.. vehde valiya ch oh gal kithe. Tusi menu kise jatti da savad dewa deo. Mera bda jee karda kise moti tazi sardarni mumme choosa ohde khich khich ghasse maara.
Sucha asal ch gusse vich aa gya si ohdi eh gal sunnke ke kive ik niwi jaat vala jattan bare eve gal kar reha hai. Par oh fuddi de nashe moohre majboor si. Ohnu pata si ke mindo di leke oh mukkar javega te jeete nu jatti di fuddi ki ik fuddi da baal vi naseeb hona.
Sucha : bas enni ku gal. Theek aa main dwa du. Mera kamm tan kra pehla.
Jeet : sardara ajj nahi kal nu. Ajj kudi thoda thakk gyi aa.
Sucha : hahahha. ajj bapu naal kamm ju wahwa karwaya. Baaki kudia vi eda sewa kardiya.
Jeet : nahi... nahi... do te padhdiya aa aje baki ik ghare hundi aa.
Sucha : chhadna tu ohna nu vi nahi. Hahahaa.
Jeet : nahi sardar ji vadiya tori fulka chali janda ena bahut aa.
Sucha : eh patt kida layi si es kamm vaste manaya kida?
Jeet : thodi lammi kahani aa.
Sucha : sunade tu koi ni. Asi kehra dakka todhna. Naal nal godi kari jah naal naal kahani sunade.
Jeet : eh gal hai ajj ton koi saal ku pehla di. Jdo ehdi maa chal vassi.
Story flashback ch:
Mindo di maa nu mare ajj koi mahina ho chaleya si. Oh aapne piche 4 allarh jawan kudia chhad gyi si. Jisda bojh hun ikalle jeet singh te si. Ese layi jeet singh bahut shrab peen lagga te dukhi rehan lagga kyuki usda budhepe da sahara ohdi gharwali swargwas kar gyi si.
Es sab kamman toh saria kudia pareshan si par mindo jo sab toh vaddi si te sab toh syani si. Oh sab toh jayada pareshan si oston apne bapu di eh halat dekhi nahi si jandi. Oh jmaa apni maa parsinni te gyi si ohi sanwla jeha rang... tikhe nain naksh... gol mol ang te apni maa di trademark bund.
Ik din jad jeeta kamm karn khet nu geya tan mindo ohdi roti leke ohde magar pahunchna si. Ghare vehli honn karke oh thoda saajre aa gyi. Mindo ne char chufere nazar daudayi par ohda bapu kidhre nazar na aaya. Thoda pare toodi te kupp valon awaaz aa rahi si kise di siskian lain di. Jad oh othe pahunchi te ohne dekheya....
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Es sab kamman toh saria kudia pareshan si par mindo jo sab toh vaddi si te sab toh syani si. Oh sab toh jayada pareshan si oston apne bapu di eh halat dekhi nahi si jandi. Oh jmaa apni maa parsinni te gyi si ohi sanwla jeha rang... tikhe nain naksh... gol mol ang te apni maa di trademark bund.
Ik din jad jeeta kamm karn khet nu geya tan mindo ohdi roti leke ohde magar pahunchna si. Ghare vehli honn karke oh thoda saajre aa gyi. Mindo ne char chufere nazar daudayi par ohda bapu kidhre nazar na aaya. Thoda pare toodi te kupp valon awaaz aa rahi si kise di siskian lain di. Jad oh othe pahunchi te ohne dekheya....
Jeet toodi de kupp de parle pase baitha si joke pind toh dooje paase si. Jis pase osni koi dekh nahi si sakda. Mindo jma pole pole pair puttan laggi ke koi sunn na lawe. Par agge jake jo ohne dekheya ohdeya parian thallo jameen khishak gayi. Ohda peo jeet singh chadre di gand kholi chadra thalle viccha ke betha si. Ohda laal fullan wala kaccha ohde godeya tak hoya si. Mindo nu ohde godhe tak hi dikh rahe san jad oh dekhan layi hor agge hoyi ohnu apnia akhan te kanna te jakeen na reha. Ohde baapu ne aapna kala shah lun apne haath vich fadheya hoya te ohnu hauli hauli agge piche kar reha si te naal naal apni marhoom gharwali nu yaad kar reha si.
"Nii hun kaun aa tere baajon mera... hun kaun deuga menu pyar parsinn kaure" jeet ronn haaki awaaz vich boleya.
Naale naale oh apni gharwalia nu yaad kar reha si naale oh apna haath hila reha si.
Mindo hai taan bhave umar di niyani si par oh sab samjh rahi si ke ohde peo nu kehre pyar di ghaat radak rahi hai. Naal di naal mindo nu ohde bapu de ohdi maa prati pyar te maan vi hoya te apne bapu te ohnu taras vi ayaa. Ke kive ohda peo apni janani de veyog vich tadaph reha hai. Eh gal soch ke ohdi akhan cho pani nikal aya.
Pani taan ek hor jagah toh vi nikal aya si oh jagah mindo di kunwari kali fuddi. Eh gal nahi si ke oh pehli vari lun vekh rahi si ya ohde mann vich apne peo bare koi durvichar si par oh ek lun hi dekh rahi si te fuddi da simmna taan lagbhag lajim si. Oh ek takk jeet seoh de kaale shah lun val dekh rahi si jis vich laal topa kis neole vang jhaatia maar reha si.
Jeet naal naal hauke le reha si apni swaragwasi biwi nu taahne vi maar reha si " ni mere ikalle te sara bhaar paagi, char char kudia degi ni ik mera munda hunda meri thaave khad da mere modhe naal modha jodhda mere naal haath vandhaunda"
"Tu taan kudia detia hun ehna de viah da jabb "
Mindo nu eh gal sunnke bda gussa aya par jaldi hi shant vi ho gyi kyuki oh jandi si ke ohda bapu sara kuch sacch hi taan keh reha hai.
Ohne mann vich sochya ke hun oh mundeya vang apne peo da saath devegi te ohnu ohdi gharwali te munde di ghaat kade nahi radakan devegi.
Ik ucchi deni hauka goojeya... mindo ne chor akh naal takkeya ke ohda bapu apne haath nu poori teji naal hila reha si te lamme lamme saah le reha si. Kuch hi palan de vich jeet singh da maal pichkari bann hawa vich si. Te kuch ohde kapdeya te pai geya.
Mindo ne hun wapis jaan vich bhalayi smjhi te jake motor te beh gyi.
Kuch der baad jeet toodi de kupp picho nikal motor val aa geya te dova peo dhee ne ikattheyan baith ke roti khadi.
Ohna dova de darmyan thodi bahut galbat hoi, jis vich jeet ne ohnu dseya ke oh shami shehar javega jaruri kamm hai usnu. Mindo jaan gyi si ajj usda jarur shraab peen layi shehar javega.
Roti khan toh baad mindo bhande chukk ke pind val nu turdi bani. Hazaran mann vich sawaal te shanke utth rahe si oh ki kare te ki naa kare. Ohnu hun oh apne peo te bojh lagg rahi si oh sochan laggi ke kive oh aapne peo te paye bojh nu hatave.
Ohne eh gal apni bhua naal karn di sochi, jo ke ohna de pind es dukh di ghadi vich rehn aayi si. Jyo hi mindo ghare vadhi ohne dekheya bhua taan pehla hi jaan nu tyari kari bethi si.
Mindo : bhua ji tusi kidher di tyari kari hai?
Bhua : bas dheeye, apne ghar da dekha jaa ke kuch mere vi nikke nikke jawak ne.
Mindo : Kuch din hor rukh jande bhua ji
Bhua : Nahi putt tera fuffad vi kahla peya hona
Mindo : Menu taan bhua hi kahli lagdi aa
Bhua : Chal besharm jehi na hove tan
Mindo : Bhua ji tuhade naal ek jaruri gal karni si baapu bare
Bhua : Haan putt bol
Mindo: Bhua ji tusi bapu da dooja viah ni karwa sakde
Bhua : Main taan batheriyaan sir diya theekarian bhanniyan par oh nahi mannda
Mindo : Kyu bhua ji?
Bhua : Kehnda meria jawan dheeyan hun mere barabar diya. Ehna de viah di sochanga hun apne di nahi.
Ohte hor gal kehnda je viah karva leya te meria dheeyan rul jaangiya.
Mindo awaak reh gyi bas ohdia akhan vicho neer fer vehan lagg peya. Ohnu apna peo duniya da sab toh pyara banda lagg reha si jisde layi hun oh jaan vi de sakdi si.
Tarkaalan da vela ho geya si, lok ghara nu mudh rahe san te jeet singh ajje kite rah vich aunda nahi si dikhda. Mindo ne apniya bhaina nu roti pani chakka ke suwa dita. Holi holi karke sare ghar de jee sau gye te.
Mindo bahut vadda faisla lai chukki si oh os kamre vich gyi jithe ohna de petia te trunk paye hoye san ohne apni maa da viah vala jodha kadheya te ohnu neejh naal dekhan lagg payi. Kuch hi palan de vich ohne apne kapde laah ke oh jodha paa leya te os manjhe te saun gayi jithe ohda peo jeet singh roz saunda si.
Lamme payi mindo de mann vich ajje vi dwand si ke oh jo kar rahi hai oh sahi hai ya nahi par aapne peo di dobara viah naa karvaun vali kurbani agge ohnu apni kurbani chhoti jehi laggi. Ohnu moohre bas apne peo te khushi te apne parivar di khushhali dikh rahi si.
Enne nu cycle de booheo langhan da khadka hoya. Mindo jehi malook jaan de taan jive saah soote gaye hon. Eh jeeta hi si jo es vele adhi raat nu shehro shraab naal rajj ke aya si.
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Ik din jad jeeta kamm karn khet nu geya tan mindo ohdi roti leke ohde magar pahunchna si. Ghare vehli honn karke oh thoda saajre aa gyi. Mindo ne char chufere nazar daudayi par ohda bapu kidhre nazar na aaya. Thoda pare toodi te kupp valon awaaz aa rahi si kise di siskian lain di. Jad oh othe pahunchi te ohne dekheya....
Jeet toodi de kupp de parle pase baitha si joke pind toh dooje paase si. Jis pase osni koi dekh nahi si sakda. Mindo jma pole pole pair puttan laggi ke koi sunn na lawe. Par agge jake jo ohne dekheya ohdeya parian thallo jameen khishak gayi. Ohda peo jeet singh chadre di gand kholi chadra thalle viccha ke betha si. Ohda laal fullan wala kaccha ohde godeya tak hoya si. Mindo nu ohde godhe tak hi dikh rahe san jad oh dekhan layi hor agge hoyi ohnu apnia akhan te kanna te jakeen na reha. Ohde baapu ne aapna kala shah lun apne haath vich fadheya hoya te ohnu hauli hauli agge piche kar reha si te naal naal apni marhoom gharwali nu yaad kar reha si.
"Nii hun kaun aa tere baajon mera... hun kaun deuga menu pyar parsinn kaure" jeet ronn haaki awaaz vich boleya.
Naale naale oh apni gharwalia nu yaad kar reha si naale oh apna haath hila reha si.
Mindo hai taan bhave umar di niyani si par oh sab samjh rahi si ke ohde peo nu kehre pyar di ghaat radak rahi hai. Naal di naal mindo nu ohde bapu de ohdi maa prati pyar te maan vi hoya te apne bapu te ohnu taras vi ayaa. Ke kive ohda peo apni janani de veyog vich tadaph reha hai. Eh gal soch ke ohdi akhan cho pani nikal aya.
Pani taan ek hor jagah toh vi nikal aya si oh jagah mindo di kunwari kali fuddi. Eh gal nahi si ke oh pehli vari lun vekh rahi si ya ohde mann vich apne peo bare koi durvichar si par oh ek lun hi dekh rahi si te fuddi da simmna taan lagbhag lajim si. Oh ek takk jeet seoh de kaale shah lun val dekh rahi si jis vich laal topa kis neole vang jhaatia maar reha si.
Jeet naal naal hauke le reha si apni swaragwasi biwi nu taahne vi maar reha si " ni mere ikalle te sara bhaar paagi, char char kudia degi ni ik mera munda hunda meri thaave khad da mere modhe naal modha jodhda mere naal haath vandhaunda"
"Tu taan kudia detia hun ehna de viah da jabb "
Mindo nu eh gal sunnke bda gussa aya par jaldi hi shant vi ho gyi kyuki oh jandi si ke ohda bapu sara kuch sacch hi taan keh reha hai.
Ohne mann vich sochya ke hun oh mundeya vang apne peo da saath devegi te ohnu ohdi gharwali te munde di ghaat kade nahi radakan devegi.
Ik ucchi deni hauka goojeya... mindo ne chor akh naal takkeya ke ohda bapu apne haath nu poori teji naal hila reha si te lamme lamme saah le reha si. Kuch hi palan de vich jeet singh da maal pichkari bann hawa vich si. Te kuch ohde kapdeya te pai geya.
Mindo ne hun wapis jaan vich bhalayi smjhi te jake motor te beh gyi.
Kuch der baad jeet toodi de kupp picho nikal motor val aa geya te dova peo dhee ne ikattheyan baith ke roti khadi.
Ohna dova de darmyan thodi bahut galbat hoi, jis vich jeet ne ohnu dseya ke oh shami shehar javega jaruri kamm hai usnu. Mindo jaan gyi si ajj usda jarur shraab peen layi shehar javega.
Roti khan toh baad mindo bhande chukk ke pind val nu turdi bani. Hazaran mann vich sawaal te shanke utth rahe si oh ki kare te ki naa kare. Ohnu hun oh apne peo te bojh lagg rahi si oh sochan laggi ke kive oh aapne peo te paye bojh nu hatave.
Ohne eh gal apni bhua naal karn di sochi, jo ke ohna de pind es dukh di ghadi vich rehn aayi si. Jyo hi mindo ghare vadhi ohne dekheya bhua taan pehla hi jaan nu tyari kari bethi si.
Mindo : bhua ji tusi kidher di tyari kari hai?
Bhua : bas dheeye, apne ghar da dekha jaa ke kuch mere vi nikke nikke jawak ne.
Mindo : Kuch din hor rukh jande bhua ji
Bhua : Nahi putt tera fuffad vi kahla peya hona
Mindo : Menu taan bhua hi kahli lagdi aa
Bhua : Chal besharm jehi na hove tan
Mindo : Bhua ji tuhade naal ek jaruri gal karni si baapu bare
Bhua : Haan putt bol
Mindo: Bhua ji tusi bapu da dooja viah ni karwa sakde
Bhua : Main taan batheriyaan sir diya theekarian bhanniyan par oh nahi mannda
Mindo : Kyu bhua ji?
Bhua : Kehnda meria jawan dheeyan hun mere barabar diya. Ehna de viah di sochanga hun apne di nahi.
Ohte hor gal kehnda je viah karva leya te meria dheeyan rul jaangiya.
Mindo awaak reh gyi bas ohdia akhan vicho neer fer vehan lagg peya. Ohnu apna peo duniya da sab toh pyara banda lagg reha si jisde layi hun oh jaan vi de sakdi si.
Tarkaalan da vela ho geya si, lok ghara nu mudh rahe san te jeet singh ajje kite rah vich aunda nahi si dikhda. Mindo ne apniya bhaina nu roti pani chakka ke suwa dita. Holi holi karke sare ghar de jee sau gye te.
Mindo bahut vadda faisla lai chukki si oh os kamre vich gyi jithe ohna de petia te trunk paye hoye san ohne apni maa da viah vala jodha kadheya te ohnu neejh naal dekhan lagg payi. Kuch hi palan de vich ohne apne kapde laah ke oh jodha paa leya te os manjhe te saun gayi jithe ohda peo jeet singh roz saunda si.
Lamme payi mindo de mann vich ajje vi dwand si ke oh jo kar rahi hai oh sahi hai ya nahi par aapne peo di dobara viah naa karvaun vali kurbani agge ohnu apni kurbani chhoti jehi laggi. Ohnu moohre bas apne peo te khushi te apne parivar di khushhali dikh rahi si.
Enne nu cycle de booheo langhan da khadka hoya. Mindo jehi malook jaan de taan jive saah soote gaye hon. Eh jeeta hi si jo es vele adhi raat nu shehro shraab naal rajj ke aya si.
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