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UPDATE - 09

Dosto last Update me aapne dekha ki Rider ka left pair cut ho gaya h Anjana use heal krti h fir big statue ke hath ke ishare se ak veede jamin me se nikalta h aur mai uske bare me sbko smjhata hu . Rahul apni bali dene jata h but waha kuch nahi hota h fir hm sb baki bache hue Hunter us veede me jate h aur hmare chro taraf red aur white aag ke gole bn jate hai , aur ant me sare corner wale statue move ho kr hamri taraf aane lagte h .....

AB AAGE ....

Mai chro taraf dekh raha hota hu tb mai ak baat notice krta hu der sare white aag ke gole jo ki 2nd circle ke chro taraf tha unme se kuch gole bhut dhire dhire apne aap ak ke baad ak bujh kr gayab hote ja rahe the . Abhi tk bs 2ya 3 gole hi bujhe the .

TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur wo corner ke sare statue hamari taraf hi aa rahe hote hai .

" Ab hm sb kya kare ? "
" Fuck ! Shit ! Kaha fas gaye hum . "

Meri tarah baki sb bhi chro taraf hmare taraf aane wale statue ko dekh rahe the .
Aur maine ak chij aur notice ki ....sbko batana wala hi hota hu ki tabhi mera dhyan Anjana ki taraf gaya . Jo dar ke mare apne hath se apna muh chupaye hue thi

Mai turant usase kahta hu " Miss Anjana tm apni aakhe band nahi kr skti !! "
ye bikul waisa hi hai , jaise hm bachpan me game khela karte the ,
Ye sare paas aayenge jb bhi humari aakhe in statue pr se hategi ,
Isi liye sabhi log apni aakhe in statue se bilkul bhi mt hatana . "

Meri baat sun kr sare log statue ki taraf dhyan se dekhne lagte h aur jaisa ki maine notice kiya tha sb statue apni apni jagah pr ruk jate hai .


TAP....
Tabhi mujhe piche se kisi ke kadmo ki aawaj sunayi deti h . Mai mud kr dekhta hu to jo only girl Hunter hamare group me bachi thi uski eye close thi , jiske karan uske samne ka statue aage aaya tha pr tabhi .....

" Ahhhhhhhhhhhh...."

tap....tap....tap....

Wo girl Hunter chillate huee bhagne lagyi hai. Mai use rokne ke liye chillata hu .
" Nahi ! "

Rohan " hey ! ruk jao "

Wo girl Hunter kisi ki baat sune bina bhagti rahti h , aur mai dekhta hu uske jane ke baad ek red colour ka aag ka gola dhire dhire karke bujh jata h . Door bhi halka sa move ho ke band hone ke side chla jata h . Aur wo Hunter lakdi door se bahar bhag kr chli jati h , aur hm sb use muh fade dekhte rah jate h .

Rohan ( akdam shocked ho kr door ke bahar bhag kr jati hui ladki ko dekh kr )

" kya ! "
" Mr. Rahul ye kaise ho skta hai ? "
" Wo abhi bhi jinda hai ? "
" Door bs thora tha band hua tha . "
" Aur wo door ke bahar chali gayi !! "

Mai bhi pura shocked tha aur soch raha tha ' kya ? Ye kya tha ? '
' ak white aag ka gola bujh jata h ak time limit ke baad '
' ye red aag ke gole , jitne person veede pr hai utne hi astitv me aaye hai , aur kisi ek ke veede se bahr jane ke turant baad koi ak red aag ka gola bujh jata h . '
' 1st rule tha Bhagwan ki pooja kro ,

2nd rule tha Bhagwan se prathna kro ,
Km se km ab tk ke steps itne jyada confused aur puzzled nahi thi .
Pr door open hona mtlb koi jaal hai .
Jaise ki juthi ummid dikhana ,
Jb sare red aag ke gole jaag gaye tb door open ho gaya ,
Jbki ye sirf thora sa band hua jb ak red aag ka gola bujha ,
Door pakka band ho jayega jb sare red aag ke gole bujh jayenge !!
Apna vishwas sabit kro ka matlab hai ki ...
Tmko dar , khatra aur man cahi chij bhi dikhayi jayegi ,
Fir bhi tmko apna bhagwan ke liye apna vishwas dikhana hoga . '

Mai abhi ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi jis fat Hunter ne mujhe pakda hua tha wo bolta h " mujhe maaf kr dena ! "
" Mujhe nahi lagata mai yaha aur jyada der ruk paunga . "


BUMMM.....

Abhi mai kuch smjh pata usase phle hi wo mujhe chor deta hai mai niche 2 layer wale stone ke paas gir jata hu , aur wo fat Hunter door ki taraf bhag jata h .

Mai " nahi ! "


tap...tap....tap.....

Mai chillata rahta hu lakin wo bina kuch sune door se bhagte hue bahar nikla jata h .

CHUUU.....

Door fir se thora aur band ho jata h

Rohan ( door ki taraf dekhte hue ) " ye kya ? "

Mai ( baki bache hue logo ki taraf dekh kr ) " hilna mat ! Hamre paas aur aadmi nahi h jo chor ke ja sake !!
Agar ak aur km hua to hamre paas pryapt log nahi honge sare statue ki taraf dekhne ke liye . Aur hm sare mare jayenge . "

Rahul ( statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Mr Rider kya ho raha h please hmko smjhao !! "

Mai " kul mila ke hme bs itna krna hai ki yaha ruk kr in statue ko dekhna h ,
Jb tak ki white aag ke sare gole bujh nhi jate "
" White aag ke gole ak ghadi ka kaam kr rahe hai .
Hm sab yaha se nikal payenge bs ak baar ye sare white aag ke gole bujh jaye "

Rohan " hey ! Mr. Rider .."
" Sayad tum sahi ho . "
" Lakin kya pata door pura band ho jaye white aag ke gole ke bujhte hi . "
" Kya tm jo kah rahe ho , tmko us pr pura vishwas hai ? "

Ye sb sun kr mai fir se soch me pad jata hu

Rohan aage bolta h " mai bilkul such khunga , maine kabhi socha tk bhi nahi tha tumhare jaisa kamjor bhi itna jyada helpful ho skta h . "
" Mai hamesa tumhe sbse niche manta tha "
" Maine kabhi koi ummid bhi nahi ki thi ki tumhare taraf se kisi bhi tarah ki jb tm hamre party me aaye the . "
" Bahut sare log ab tk mare ja chuke hai jb se hm is room me aaye hai .."
" Lakin jo koi bhi jinda bacha h wo kewal tmhare karan jinda bacha hai "
" Ye sab sirf isi liye ho paya qki tmne yaha ke paheliyon ko solve kiya . "
" Mai bhi sirf tmhare wajah se jinda hu . "
" Uske liye thank you "

Mai ( Rohan ki taraf dekh kr ) " Mr. Rohan ..."

Abhi mai aage kuch bolta uske phle Rohan bich me bol padta hai ..
Rohan ( rote hue )" lakin ... Mera bhi ak parivar hai . "
" Mai yaha nahi marna cahta . "
" Mai marna nahi cahta . "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena ..."
" Mujhe nahi lagta ab mai yaha aur thori bhi der ruk skta hu . "


tap....tap.....tap.....

Mai " Mr. Rohan !!! "

Rohan ( bhagte hue ) " mujhe maaf kr dena "

Mai ( door ki taraf dekh kr jor se ) " suno to ..."

Lakin Rohan bhi room se bahar bhag gaya . Ak aur red aag ka gola bujh gaya . Mai aakho me aasu liye hue bs door ki taraf dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ..

' thank you ? '
' mujhe hasne pr majbur mt kro !! '

Aur mai niche baith kr jor jor se rone lagta hu ....
' tum !... '
' tum yaha se bhag gaye '
' iska result ye hoga ki hme yaha marna hoga '


TAP ..... TAP..... TAP....

aur wo status jo Rohan ki taraf the wo aage badne lagte hai ...






Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Jisko hamesha kamjor mana gaya usi ke karna kuch logo ki jaan bacha gaya par lekin rohan apne parivar ki duhai dekar door se bahar chala gaya. Jaisa ridar soch raha tha kahi ye koyi trap to nehi hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
 
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UPDATE - 09

Dosto last Update me aapne dekha ki Rider ka left pair cut ho gaya h Anjana use heal krti h fir big statue ke hath ke ishare se ak veede jamin me se nikalta h aur mai uske bare me sbko smjhata hu . Rahul apni bali dene jata h but waha kuch nahi hota h fir hm sb baki bache hue Hunter us veede me jate h aur hmare chro taraf red aur white aag ke gole bn jate hai , aur ant me sare corner wale statue move ho kr hamri taraf aane lagte h .....

AB AAGE ....

Mai chro taraf dekh raha hota hu tb mai ak baat notice krta hu der sare white aag ke gole jo ki 2nd circle ke chro taraf tha unme se kuch gole bhut dhire dhire apne aap ak ke baad ak bujh kr gayab hote ja rahe the . Abhi tk bs 2ya 3 gole hi bujhe the .

TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur wo corner ke sare statue hamari taraf hi aa rahe hote hai .

" Ab hm sb kya kare ? "
" Fuck ! Shit ! Kaha fas gaye hum . "

Meri tarah baki sb bhi chro taraf hmare taraf aane wale statue ko dekh rahe the .
Aur maine ak chij aur notice ki ....sbko batana wala hi hota hu ki tabhi mera dhyan Anjana ki taraf gaya . Jo dar ke mare apne hath se apna muh chupaye hue thi

Mai turant usase kahta hu " Miss Anjana tm apni aakhe band nahi kr skti !! "
ye bikul waisa hi hai , jaise hm bachpan me game khela karte the ,
Ye sare paas aayenge jb bhi humari aakhe in statue pr se hategi ,
Isi liye sabhi log apni aakhe in statue se bilkul bhi mt hatana . "

Meri baat sun kr sare log statue ki taraf dhyan se dekhne lagte h aur jaisa ki maine notice kiya tha sb statue apni apni jagah pr ruk jate hai .


TAP....
Tabhi mujhe piche se kisi ke kadmo ki aawaj sunayi deti h . Mai mud kr dekhta hu to jo only girl Hunter hamare group me bachi thi uski eye close thi , jiske karan uske samne ka statue aage aaya tha pr tabhi .....

" Ahhhhhhhhhhhh...."

tap....tap....tap....

Wo girl Hunter chillate huee bhagne lagyi hai. Mai use rokne ke liye chillata hu .
" Nahi ! "

Rohan " hey ! ruk jao "

Wo girl Hunter kisi ki baat sune bina bhagti rahti h , aur mai dekhta hu uske jane ke baad ek red colour ka aag ka gola dhire dhire karke bujh jata h . Door bhi halka sa move ho ke band hone ke side chla jata h . Aur wo Hunter lakdi door se bahar bhag kr chli jati h , aur hm sb use muh fade dekhte rah jate h .

Rohan ( akdam shocked ho kr door ke bahar bhag kr jati hui ladki ko dekh kr )

" kya ! "
" Mr. Rahul ye kaise ho skta hai ? "
" Wo abhi bhi jinda hai ? "
" Door bs thora tha band hua tha . "
" Aur wo door ke bahar chali gayi !! "

Mai bhi pura shocked tha aur soch raha tha ' kya ? Ye kya tha ? '
' ak white aag ka gola bujh jata h ak time limit ke baad '
' ye red aag ke gole , jitne person veede pr hai utne hi astitv me aaye hai , aur kisi ek ke veede se bahr jane ke turant baad koi ak red aag ka gola bujh jata h . '
' 1st rule tha Bhagwan ki pooja kro ,

2nd rule tha Bhagwan se prathna kro ,
Km se km ab tk ke steps itne jyada confused aur puzzled nahi thi .
Pr door open hona mtlb koi jaal hai .
Jaise ki juthi ummid dikhana ,
Jb sare red aag ke gole jaag gaye tb door open ho gaya ,
Jbki ye sirf thora sa band hua jb ak red aag ka gola bujha ,
Door pakka band ho jayega jb sare red aag ke gole bujh jayenge !!
Apna vishwas sabit kro ka matlab hai ki ...
Tmko dar , khatra aur man cahi chij bhi dikhayi jayegi ,
Fir bhi tmko apna bhagwan ke liye apna vishwas dikhana hoga . '

Mai abhi ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi jis fat Hunter ne mujhe pakda hua tha wo bolta h " mujhe maaf kr dena ! "
" Mujhe nahi lagata mai yaha aur jyada der ruk paunga . "


BUMMM.....

Abhi mai kuch smjh pata usase phle hi wo mujhe chor deta hai mai niche 2 layer wale stone ke paas gir jata hu , aur wo fat Hunter door ki taraf bhag jata h .

Mai " nahi ! "


tap...tap....tap.....

Mai chillata rahta hu lakin wo bina kuch sune door se bhagte hue bahar nikla jata h .

CHUUU.....

Door fir se thora aur band ho jata h

Rohan ( door ki taraf dekhte hue ) " ye kya ? "

Mai ( baki bache hue logo ki taraf dekh kr ) " hilna mat ! Hamre paas aur aadmi nahi h jo chor ke ja sake !!
Agar ak aur km hua to hamre paas pryapt log nahi honge sare statue ki taraf dekhne ke liye . Aur hm sare mare jayenge . "

Rahul ( statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Mr Rider kya ho raha h please hmko smjhao !! "

Mai " kul mila ke hme bs itna krna hai ki yaha ruk kr in statue ko dekhna h ,
Jb tak ki white aag ke sare gole bujh nhi jate "
" White aag ke gole ak ghadi ka kaam kr rahe hai .
Hm sab yaha se nikal payenge bs ak baar ye sare white aag ke gole bujh jaye "

Rohan " hey ! Mr. Rider .."
" Sayad tum sahi ho . "
" Lakin kya pata door pura band ho jaye white aag ke gole ke bujhte hi . "
" Kya tm jo kah rahe ho , tmko us pr pura vishwas hai ? "

Ye sb sun kr mai fir se soch me pad jata hu

Rohan aage bolta h " mai bilkul such khunga , maine kabhi socha tk bhi nahi tha tumhare jaisa kamjor bhi itna jyada helpful ho skta h . "
" Mai hamesa tumhe sbse niche manta tha "
" Maine kabhi koi ummid bhi nahi ki thi ki tumhare taraf se kisi bhi tarah ki jb tm hamre party me aaye the . "
" Bahut sare log ab tk mare ja chuke hai jb se hm is room me aaye hai .."
" Lakin jo koi bhi jinda bacha h wo kewal tmhare karan jinda bacha hai "
" Ye sab sirf isi liye ho paya qki tmne yaha ke paheliyon ko solve kiya . "
" Mai bhi sirf tmhare wajah se jinda hu . "
" Uske liye thank you "

Mai ( Rohan ki taraf dekh kr ) " Mr. Rohan ..."

Abhi mai aage kuch bolta uske phle Rohan bich me bol padta hai ..
Rohan ( rote hue )" lakin ... Mera bhi ak parivar hai . "
" Mai yaha nahi marna cahta . "
" Mai marna nahi cahta . "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena ..."
" Mujhe nahi lagta ab mai yaha aur thori bhi der ruk skta hu . "


tap....tap.....tap.....

Mai " Mr. Rohan !!! "

Rohan ( bhagte hue ) " mujhe maaf kr dena "

Mai ( door ki taraf dekh kr jor se ) " suno to ..."

Lakin Rohan bhi room se bahar bhag gaya . Ak aur red aag ka gola bujh gaya . Mai aakho me aasu liye hue bs door ki taraf dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ..

' thank you ? '
' mujhe hasne pr majbur mt kro !! '

Aur mai niche baith kr jor jor se rone lagta hu ....
' tum !... '
' tum yaha se bhag gaye '
' iska result ye hoga ki hme yaha marna hoga '


TAP ..... TAP..... TAP....

aur wo status jo Rohan ki taraf the wo aage badne lagte hai ...






Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
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UPDATE - 09

Dosto last Update me aapne dekha ki Rider ka left pair cut ho gaya h Anjana use heal krti h fir big statue ke hath ke ishare se ak veede jamin me se nikalta h aur mai uske bare me sbko smjhata hu . Rahul apni bali dene jata h but waha kuch nahi hota h fir hm sb baki bache hue Hunter us veede me jate h aur hmare chro taraf red aur white aag ke gole bn jate hai , aur ant me sare corner wale statue move ho kr hamri taraf aane lagte h .....

AB AAGE ....

Mai chro taraf dekh raha hota hu tb mai ak baat notice krta hu der sare white aag ke gole jo ki 2nd circle ke chro taraf tha unme se kuch gole bhut dhire dhire apne aap ak ke baad ak bujh kr gayab hote ja rahe the . Abhi tk bs 2ya 3 gole hi bujhe the .

TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur wo corner ke sare statue hamari taraf hi aa rahe hote hai .

" Ab hm sb kya kare ? "
" Fuck ! Shit ! Kaha fas gaye hum . "

Meri tarah baki sb bhi chro taraf hmare taraf aane wale statue ko dekh rahe the .
Aur maine ak chij aur notice ki ....sbko batana wala hi hota hu ki tabhi mera dhyan Anjana ki taraf gaya . Jo dar ke mare apne hath se apna muh chupaye hue thi

Mai turant usase kahta hu " Miss Anjana tm apni aakhe band nahi kr skti !! "
ye bikul waisa hi hai , jaise hm bachpan me game khela karte the ,
Ye sare paas aayenge jb bhi humari aakhe in statue pr se hategi ,
Isi liye sabhi log apni aakhe in statue se bilkul bhi mt hatana . "

Meri baat sun kr sare log statue ki taraf dhyan se dekhne lagte h aur jaisa ki maine notice kiya tha sb statue apni apni jagah pr ruk jate hai .


TAP....
Tabhi mujhe piche se kisi ke kadmo ki aawaj sunayi deti h . Mai mud kr dekhta hu to jo only girl Hunter hamare group me bachi thi uski eye close thi , jiske karan uske samne ka statue aage aaya tha pr tabhi .....

" Ahhhhhhhhhhhh...."

tap....tap....tap....

Wo girl Hunter chillate huee bhagne lagyi hai. Mai use rokne ke liye chillata hu .
" Nahi ! "

Rohan " hey ! ruk jao "

Wo girl Hunter kisi ki baat sune bina bhagti rahti h , aur mai dekhta hu uske jane ke baad ek red colour ka aag ka gola dhire dhire karke bujh jata h . Door bhi halka sa move ho ke band hone ke side chla jata h . Aur wo Hunter lakdi door se bahar bhag kr chli jati h , aur hm sb use muh fade dekhte rah jate h .

Rohan ( akdam shocked ho kr door ke bahar bhag kr jati hui ladki ko dekh kr )

" kya ! "
" Mr. Rahul ye kaise ho skta hai ? "
" Wo abhi bhi jinda hai ? "
" Door bs thora tha band hua tha . "
" Aur wo door ke bahar chali gayi !! "

Mai bhi pura shocked tha aur soch raha tha ' kya ? Ye kya tha ? '
' ak white aag ka gola bujh jata h ak time limit ke baad '
' ye red aag ke gole , jitne person veede pr hai utne hi astitv me aaye hai , aur kisi ek ke veede se bahr jane ke turant baad koi ak red aag ka gola bujh jata h . '
' 1st rule tha Bhagwan ki pooja kro ,

2nd rule tha Bhagwan se prathna kro ,
Km se km ab tk ke steps itne jyada confused aur puzzled nahi thi .
Pr door open hona mtlb koi jaal hai .
Jaise ki juthi ummid dikhana ,
Jb sare red aag ke gole jaag gaye tb door open ho gaya ,
Jbki ye sirf thora sa band hua jb ak red aag ka gola bujha ,
Door pakka band ho jayega jb sare red aag ke gole bujh jayenge !!
Apna vishwas sabit kro ka matlab hai ki ...
Tmko dar , khatra aur man cahi chij bhi dikhayi jayegi ,
Fir bhi tmko apna bhagwan ke liye apna vishwas dikhana hoga . '

Mai abhi ye sb soch hi raha tha ki tabhi jis fat Hunter ne mujhe pakda hua tha wo bolta h " mujhe maaf kr dena ! "
" Mujhe nahi lagata mai yaha aur jyada der ruk paunga . "


BUMMM.....

Abhi mai kuch smjh pata usase phle hi wo mujhe chor deta hai mai niche 2 layer wale stone ke paas gir jata hu , aur wo fat Hunter door ki taraf bhag jata h .

Mai " nahi ! "


tap...tap....tap.....

Mai chillata rahta hu lakin wo bina kuch sune door se bhagte hue bahar nikla jata h .

CHUUU.....

Door fir se thora aur band ho jata h

Rohan ( door ki taraf dekhte hue ) " ye kya ? "

Mai ( baki bache hue logo ki taraf dekh kr ) " hilna mat ! Hamre paas aur aadmi nahi h jo chor ke ja sake !!
Agar ak aur km hua to hamre paas pryapt log nahi honge sare statue ki taraf dekhne ke liye . Aur hm sare mare jayenge . "

Rahul ( statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Mr Rider kya ho raha h please hmko smjhao !! "

Mai " kul mila ke hme bs itna krna hai ki yaha ruk kr in statue ko dekhna h ,
Jb tak ki white aag ke sare gole bujh nhi jate "
" White aag ke gole ak ghadi ka kaam kr rahe hai .
Hm sab yaha se nikal payenge bs ak baar ye sare white aag ke gole bujh jaye "

Rohan " hey ! Mr. Rider .."
" Sayad tum sahi ho . "
" Lakin kya pata door pura band ho jaye white aag ke gole ke bujhte hi . "
" Kya tm jo kah rahe ho , tmko us pr pura vishwas hai ? "

Ye sb sun kr mai fir se soch me pad jata hu

Rohan aage bolta h " mai bilkul such khunga , maine kabhi socha tk bhi nahi tha tumhare jaisa kamjor bhi itna jyada helpful ho skta h . "
" Mai hamesa tumhe sbse niche manta tha "
" Maine kabhi koi ummid bhi nahi ki thi ki tumhare taraf se kisi bhi tarah ki jb tm hamre party me aaye the . "
" Bahut sare log ab tk mare ja chuke hai jb se hm is room me aaye hai .."
" Lakin jo koi bhi jinda bacha h wo kewal tmhare karan jinda bacha hai "
" Ye sab sirf isi liye ho paya qki tmne yaha ke paheliyon ko solve kiya . "
" Mai bhi sirf tmhare wajah se jinda hu . "
" Uske liye thank you "

Mai ( Rohan ki taraf dekh kr ) " Mr. Rohan ..."

Abhi mai aage kuch bolta uske phle Rohan bich me bol padta hai ..
Rohan ( rote hue )" lakin ... Mera bhi ak parivar hai . "
" Mai yaha nahi marna cahta . "
" Mai marna nahi cahta . "
" Mujhe maaf kr dena ..."
" Mujhe nahi lagta ab mai yaha aur thori bhi der ruk skta hu . "


tap....tap.....tap.....

Mai " Mr. Rohan !!! "

Rohan ( bhagte hue ) " mujhe maaf kr dena "

Mai ( door ki taraf dekh kr jor se ) " suno to ..."

Lakin Rohan bhi room se bahar bhag gaya . Ak aur red aag ka gola bujh gaya . Mai aakho me aasu liye hue bs door ki taraf dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ..

' thank you ? '
' mujhe hasne pr majbur mt kro !! '

Aur mai niche baith kr jor jor se rone lagta hu ....
' tum !... '
' tum yaha se bhag gaye '
' iska result ye hoga ki hme yaha marna hoga '


TAP ..... TAP..... TAP....

aur wo status jo Rohan ki taraf the wo aage badne lagte hai ...






Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!

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UPDATE - 10

Ab tk aapne last update me aapne read kiya ki kaise Hunter girl , fat man aur Rohan bhag kr room se bahar chale jate hai aur Rider, Anjana aur rahul hi bache rah gaye the door bhi half close ho cuka tha sare corner wale statue bhut paas aa gaye the .
Vedee pr bs 3 red aag ke gole bache the , white aag ka gola timing ka kaam kr raha tha .


AB AAGE......

Ab bs half door hi open tha .
Door ki taraf dekh kr Rahul bolta h
" Door bs band hi hone wala h ... "
" Ab bhut der ho gayi h lakin Aakhirkar mai smjh gaya hu yaha kya ho raha h . "
" Tum dono ko ab yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "

Ye sun ke mai chauk jata hu , aur Rahul ki taraf dekh kr bolta hu " Mr Rahul ? "

Lakin Rahul bich me hi meri baat kat krke statue ki taraf dekhte hue bolna jari rakhte hai " door tb tk puri tarah se band nahi hoga , jb tk km se km vedee pr ak person khada na rahe . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Tm dono abhi jawan ho aur tumhari life ke abhi bahut saal bache hue h .... Tum dono ko yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "
" Miss Anjana kya tum Rider ki madad kr dogi bahar jane me ? "

Aanjana ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr jldi se bolti hai ) " ha mai kr dungi . "

DHHHHUUUUMMMMM............
AAAHHHHHHHHHH......

Tabhi achanak se Anjana niche jamin pr gir jati h .

Wo pain me thi aur confused bhi aur apne pairo ko dekh kr bs badbadaye ja rahi thi ...
" Kya .... "
" Ye kya ..... "
" Mere pair ... "
( Rider ki taraf dekh kr )
" Ye hil q nahi rahe hai ? "

Tabhi Rahul bolta hai
" Ye mana( power ) ke thakan ke karan hua hoga . "
" Qki Mr Rider ko heal krne ke liye tmne apni bhut jyada power ko use kr liya tha . "

Ye sb sun kr mai bilkul nirash ho jata hu aur jamin ki taraf dekhte hue bolta hu ..
" Mr. Rahul aap Miss Anjana ko yaha se bahar le jaiye . "

Rahul bolta h " maine kaha na mai yaha rukunga ! "

Mai " to Miss Anjana ki help kon krega yaha se bahar niklne me ? "
" Hamare paas jyada samay nahi hai . Jaldi se yaha se nikal jao . "

Rahul Anjana ki taraf dekhta hai aur Anjana chilla kr usase bolti h " nahi ! Rider tumhari jagah mai yaha rukungi ... "

Mai ( samne statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " maine tumse promise kiya tha na mai tumhare liye dinner kharidunga . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Sbse Phle isase khana khridna !! "

Itna bol kr mai Ek E rank magical core Anjana ki taraf bada deta hu . Ye wahi magical core hai jo maine yaha badi muskil se E Rank monster ko maar kr paya tha .
Anjana rote hue mere taraf hi dekh rahi hoti hai , aur wo magical core apne hatho me le kr kas kr pakad leti hai .

Mai aage bolta hu " jb mai wapas aaunga to mai apne baki ke bache hue paise tmse wapas le lunga . "

Anjana ( gusse se ) " ye majak ka samay nahi hai . "

DUUUUDDDDD.......

Tabhi ak hath aata hai aur Anjana ko utha ke apne solder pr rakh leta h . Ji haa ye Rahul hi tha jo ki Anjana ko is time apne solder pr uthaye hue tha

Rahul " mujhe maaf kr dena ! Lakin abhi in sb bato ke liye bikul bhi samay nahi bacha h . "

Mai ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr ) " please ! Inka ache se khyal rakhna . "

Rahul " ha ! Bilkul "

tap....tap.....tap.....tap....

Aur Rahul Anjana ko ke krdoor se bahar nikal jata h . Mai bikul niras ho kr niche ki taraf dekh raha hota hu aur Rahul ke pairo ki aawaj sun raha hota hu to dhire dhire bahut slow hone lagti h .

tap....tap.....

Aur aakhir me pairo ki aawaj aani band ho jati h .

CHUUUUUUU..........
BOOM.......

Aur ab jor ki awaj ke sath door bhi pura band ho jata h .
Mai sochta hu ..
' thank God ! '
' km se km mai akela hu jo mrne wala hu '

TAP..... TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur sare statue ab slowly slowly mere taraf bad rahe hote hai . Lakin mai kud ke khyalon me khoya hua hota hu ..
' mere paas to koi insurance bhi nahi h , agar mujhe phle pata hota ki ye sb hone wala hai to .....'

TAP..... TAP.... TAP..... TAP......

Tabhi mai apne left side me dekhta hu to mujhe ak sward dikhayi deti hai . Ye Rohan ki sward thi jo wo bhagte samay yaha chor gaya tha . Mai use uthane ke liye apna left hand piche krta hu .

" Ahhhh.. "

Aur us sward ko pakad leta hu , aur use apne dono hatho se pakd kr samne ki taraf kr leta hu .

Aur mai sochta hu...
' ab jb ye sward mere paas aa hi gayi h to mai apne marne se pahle km se km ak monster ( statue) ko to maar ke marunga .'

Sare statue mere paas aa gaye the aur chro taraf se mujhe ghere hue the , aur mai double layer stone ke sahare baitha hua tha . Sb statue mujhe meri hi taraf niche ki or dekh rahe the aur Mai jor jor se sanse le raha tha .

' huk '

' huk '
' huk '

' huk '

Mai puri tarah se taiyar tha , pasine se bhiga hua aur unki taraf hi dekh raha tha . Aakhir me chilla kr bolta hu " aago ! Aage badho . "

SWOOSSS............

BOOMMMM......

Ek statu apne bhale ko uthata h aur full force se meri taraf maar deta h , wo bhala mere body ke paar ho jati h aur niche jamin me dhas jati h . Mai bhut jor se chillata hu

" Ahhhhhhhhaaaaaa ....... "

Jaha bhala laga tha waha se bhut teji se blood niklne lagta h . Mere muh, naak , aakh sbse blood nikalne lagta h .

CRACK....... CRACK........

SWOOSSS.........
THUDDD.............

Wo statue fir bhi nahi rukta hai aur apne bhale ko mere body ke sath hi jamin se nikalta h aur mujhe apne bhale ke sath hawa me upar utha deta h , aur aakhir me us double layer stone ke upar fek deta h jiske upar inscription likhe hue the .
Mai akdam Bejan se us pr pada hua tha aur mere body se bahut sara blood nikal kr us double stone se hote hue niche jamin pr gir raha tha . Sb jagah bs blood hi blood ho gaya tha .

Mere muh se blood rah rah ke nikl raha tha . Mai upar ki taraf dekh raha tha , Aur apne aakhiri sanse leta hua bhut pain me bhut dhire bol raha tha ...
" Ahhhhh..."
" Uuu...... "
" Ahhaa ...uuuu... "
" Mai nahi ...."
" ....nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Mai nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Ahhhhh....."


Mere aakho ke saamne sari ghtnaye ghumne lagti hai jo sare Hunters yaha se jane se phle apni family aur mere bare me bol rahe the .
Yahi sb yaad krte hue mai kud se bol raha tha ...
" Nahi ! ye bilkul thik nahi h . "
" Thank you bolne ka tm logo ka kya matlab tha ? "
" Tm sb yaha se mere sath vishvaasaghaat krkr bhag gaye . "
" Mere paas bhi family hai...."
" Mai bhi tm sb ki tarah nahi marna cahta hu "
" Kya bola tha maine , acha hua mai akele yaha Mar raha hu !! "
" tum Kud se bhi juth bolna band kro Rider . "
" Mai jutha hu ! "
" Mai nahi marna cahta ..... "
" Kaas mere paas .."
" Sirf ak aur chance hota "


Mai upar dekhte hue ye sb bolta rahta hu . Tabhi aur aur statue apni sward ko upar uthata hai aur uski sward light ki speed se mere taraf aa rahi hoti h , sward mujhse bs touch hone wali hoti h ki aisa lagta h ki achanak se sb stop ho jata h .

TAD.....TAD....TAD.....

Sare inscription me se blue color ki light niklne lagti h aur mere aakho ke samne hawa me ek screen aa jati h jis pr kuch likha hua tha lakin mujhe thik se dikhayi nahi de raha tha .

" Ye kya hai ? "
Itna bol kr mai dhyan se us screen ko dekhne lagta hu . Ab mujhe kya likha hua tha wo clear dikhne lagta h .



[ ! Alarm ]
[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]

Ye sb padh kr mai confused ho jata hu ...
' SECRET QUEST ? '
' sari requirements puri karna ? '

Abhi mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki , ek sound sunayi deta h ..

[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]

' are ye kya ab to ek awwaj bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi h ! '

Fir se awwaj aati h ...


[ AAPNE AK PLAYER BANANE KI KABILIYAT KAMAYI KI HAI . KYA AAP PLAYER BANANA CAHTE HAI ? ]

' kamayi hai ? '
' player banana cahte hai ? '
' ye sb kya ho raha hai ? '

Mai pura confused ho gaya tha ki aakhir ye sb hai kya . Phle wo screen ka aana fir se aawaj sunayi dena aur ab ye sb .

Tabhi fir se aawaj aati h ..


[ AAPKE PAAS JYADA TIME NAHI BACHA HAI . ]

[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI . TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]

' ah....'
' agr maine accept kr liya to .....'
' kya mai marne se bach jaunga ? '

Fir se blue color ka screen aata h ....


[ ! ALARM ]
[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI .
TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]

{ ACCEPT } { REFUSED }

Mai turant hi bolta hu ..
" Haa ! ye chance ... "
" Mai accept krta hu . "

Agle hi pal new screen aati h ..

[ !ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER . ]


BOOM.........BOOM...........BOOM.....

Aur isi ke sath bhut tej dhamaka hota h aur us double layer stone ke inscription se aur meri body se goldan colour ki bahut tej light niklne lagti h . Wo Goldan light itni tej thi ki pura room hi tej light se bhr gaya .





Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .

Bahut khub likh rahe ho.

Ek ladka jo behal parivarik sthiti ke chlte aisa kam karna suru kar deta hai jisme jaan ka khatra bana hua rahta hai phir bhi vo is kaam ko karna nehi chodta hai.

Ekaek ek aisi jagah fhas jata hai jahan kuch ruls hota hai jiska palan kiya to jaan bach sakti hai barna apka kaam tam ho jayega.

Us jagh ridar deemag se kaam leta hai aur ek ek rule ko samjhne ki koshish karta hai. Par ek waqt aisa aata hai jab ek ek karke uske saath aaye sathi mare jate hai aur jo bach jate hai unme se kuch use chodkar bhag jate hai kuch ko vo khid hi samjha buja kar bahar bhej deta hai par ye abhi tak pata nehi chla ki jo jo us gufa se bahar gaye hai kya unki jaan bach gayi.

Is update ke ant me jo bhi hua mano koyi ridar ke saath game khel raha ho jab jaan jane wali hoti hai tab uske samne ek msg show hota hai use accept kiya to jinda bach sakta hai varna jan jana taya hai. Time itna kam tha ki ridar ko jyada kuch sochne ka mauka nehi mila aur usne shart ko accept kar liya aur PLAYER baane ke shart ko maan liya. Dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai
 
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UPDATE - 10

Ab tk aapne last update me aapne read kiya ki kaise Hunter girl , fat man aur Rohan bhag kr room se bahar chale jate hai aur Rider, Anjana aur rahul hi bache rah gaye the door bhi half close ho cuka tha sare corner wale statue bhut paas aa gaye the .
Vedee pr bs 3 red aag ke gole bache the , white aag ka gola timing ka kaam kr raha tha .


AB AAGE......

Ab bs half door hi open tha .
Door ki taraf dekh kr Rahul bolta h
" Door bs band hi hone wala h ... "
" Ab bhut der ho gayi h lakin Aakhirkar mai smjh gaya hu yaha kya ho raha h . "
" Tum dono ko ab yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "

Ye sun ke mai chauk jata hu , aur Rahul ki taraf dekh kr bolta hu " Mr Rahul ? "

Lakin Rahul bich me hi meri baat kat krke statue ki taraf dekhte hue bolna jari rakhte hai " door tb tk puri tarah se band nahi hoga , jb tk km se km vedee pr ak person khada na rahe . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Tm dono abhi jawan ho aur tumhari life ke abhi bahut saal bache hue h .... Tum dono ko yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "
" Miss Anjana kya tum Rider ki madad kr dogi bahar jane me ? "

Aanjana ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr jldi se bolti hai ) " ha mai kr dungi . "

DHHHHUUUUMMMMM............
AAAHHHHHHHHHH......

Tabhi achanak se Anjana niche jamin pr gir jati h .

Wo pain me thi aur confused bhi aur apne pairo ko dekh kr bs badbadaye ja rahi thi ...
" Kya .... "
" Ye kya ..... "
" Mere pair ... "
( Rider ki taraf dekh kr )
" Ye hil q nahi rahe hai ? "

Tabhi Rahul bolta hai
" Ye mana( power ) ke thakan ke karan hua hoga . "
" Qki Mr Rider ko heal krne ke liye tmne apni bhut jyada power ko use kr liya tha . "

Ye sb sun kr mai bilkul nirash ho jata hu aur jamin ki taraf dekhte hue bolta hu ..
" Mr. Rahul aap Miss Anjana ko yaha se bahar le jaiye . "

Rahul bolta h " maine kaha na mai yaha rukunga ! "

Mai " to Miss Anjana ki help kon krega yaha se bahar niklne me ? "
" Hamare paas jyada samay nahi hai . Jaldi se yaha se nikal jao . "

Rahul Anjana ki taraf dekhta hai aur Anjana chilla kr usase bolti h " nahi ! Rider tumhari jagah mai yaha rukungi ... "

Mai ( samne statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " maine tumse promise kiya tha na mai tumhare liye dinner kharidunga . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Sbse Phle isase khana khridna !! "

Itna bol kr mai Ek E rank magical core Anjana ki taraf bada deta hu . Ye wahi magical core hai jo maine yaha badi muskil se E Rank monster ko maar kr paya tha .
Anjana rote hue mere taraf hi dekh rahi hoti hai , aur wo magical core apne hatho me le kr kas kr pakad leti hai .

Mai aage bolta hu " jb mai wapas aaunga to mai apne baki ke bache hue paise tmse wapas le lunga . "

Anjana ( gusse se ) " ye majak ka samay nahi hai . "

DUUUUDDDDD.......

Tabhi ak hath aata hai aur Anjana ko utha ke apne solder pr rakh leta h . Ji haa ye Rahul hi tha jo ki Anjana ko is time apne solder pr uthaye hue tha

Rahul " mujhe maaf kr dena ! Lakin abhi in sb bato ke liye bikul bhi samay nahi bacha h . "

Mai ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr ) " please ! Inka ache se khyal rakhna . "

Rahul " ha ! Bilkul "

tap....tap.....tap.....tap....

Aur Rahul Anjana ko ke krdoor se bahar nikal jata h . Mai bikul niras ho kr niche ki taraf dekh raha hota hu aur Rahul ke pairo ki aawaj sun raha hota hu to dhire dhire bahut slow hone lagti h .

tap....tap.....

Aur aakhir me pairo ki aawaj aani band ho jati h .

CHUUUUUUU..........
BOOM.......

Aur ab jor ki awaj ke sath door bhi pura band ho jata h .
Mai sochta hu ..
' thank God ! '
' km se km mai akela hu jo mrne wala hu '

TAP..... TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur sare statue ab slowly slowly mere taraf bad rahe hote hai . Lakin mai kud ke khyalon me khoya hua hota hu ..
' mere paas to koi insurance bhi nahi h , agar mujhe phle pata hota ki ye sb hone wala hai to .....'

TAP..... TAP.... TAP..... TAP......

Tabhi mai apne left side me dekhta hu to mujhe ak sward dikhayi deti hai . Ye Rohan ki sward thi jo wo bhagte samay yaha chor gaya tha . Mai use uthane ke liye apna left hand piche krta hu .

" Ahhhh.. "

Aur us sward ko pakad leta hu , aur use apne dono hatho se pakd kr samne ki taraf kr leta hu .

Aur mai sochta hu...
' ab jb ye sward mere paas aa hi gayi h to mai apne marne se pahle km se km ak monster ( statue) ko to maar ke marunga .'

Sare statue mere paas aa gaye the aur chro taraf se mujhe ghere hue the , aur mai double layer stone ke sahare baitha hua tha . Sb statue mujhe meri hi taraf niche ki or dekh rahe the aur Mai jor jor se sanse le raha tha .

' huk '

' huk '
' huk '

' huk '

Mai puri tarah se taiyar tha , pasine se bhiga hua aur unki taraf hi dekh raha tha . Aakhir me chilla kr bolta hu " aago ! Aage badho . "

SWOOSSS............

BOOMMMM......

Ek statu apne bhale ko uthata h aur full force se meri taraf maar deta h , wo bhala mere body ke paar ho jati h aur niche jamin me dhas jati h . Mai bhut jor se chillata hu

" Ahhhhhhhhaaaaaa ....... "

Jaha bhala laga tha waha se bhut teji se blood niklne lagta h . Mere muh, naak , aakh sbse blood nikalne lagta h .

CRACK....... CRACK........

SWOOSSS.........
THUDDD.............

Wo statue fir bhi nahi rukta hai aur apne bhale ko mere body ke sath hi jamin se nikalta h aur mujhe apne bhale ke sath hawa me upar utha deta h , aur aakhir me us double layer stone ke upar fek deta h jiske upar inscription likhe hue the .
Mai akdam Bejan se us pr pada hua tha aur mere body se bahut sara blood nikal kr us double stone se hote hue niche jamin pr gir raha tha . Sb jagah bs blood hi blood ho gaya tha .

Mere muh se blood rah rah ke nikl raha tha . Mai upar ki taraf dekh raha tha , Aur apne aakhiri sanse leta hua bhut pain me bhut dhire bol raha tha ...
" Ahhhhh..."
" Uuu...... "
" Ahhaa ...uuuu... "
" Mai nahi ...."
" ....nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Mai nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Ahhhhh....."


Mere aakho ke saamne sari ghtnaye ghumne lagti hai jo sare Hunters yaha se jane se phle apni family aur mere bare me bol rahe the .
Yahi sb yaad krte hue mai kud se bol raha tha ...
" Nahi ! ye bilkul thik nahi h . "
" Thank you bolne ka tm logo ka kya matlab tha ? "
" Tm sb yaha se mere sath vishvaasaghaat krkr bhag gaye . "
" Mere paas bhi family hai...."
" Mai bhi tm sb ki tarah nahi marna cahta hu "
" Kya bola tha maine , acha hua mai akele yaha Mar raha hu !! "
" tum Kud se bhi juth bolna band kro Rider . "
" Mai jutha hu ! "
" Mai nahi marna cahta ..... "
" Kaas mere paas .."
" Sirf ak aur chance hota "


Mai upar dekhte hue ye sb bolta rahta hu . Tabhi aur aur statue apni sward ko upar uthata hai aur uski sward light ki speed se mere taraf aa rahi hoti h , sward mujhse bs touch hone wali hoti h ki aisa lagta h ki achanak se sb stop ho jata h .

TAD.....TAD....TAD.....

Sare inscription me se blue color ki light niklne lagti h aur mere aakho ke samne hawa me ek screen aa jati h jis pr kuch likha hua tha lakin mujhe thik se dikhayi nahi de raha tha .

" Ye kya hai ? "
Itna bol kr mai dhyan se us screen ko dekhne lagta hu . Ab mujhe kya likha hua tha wo clear dikhne lagta h .



[ ! Alarm ]
[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]

Ye sb padh kr mai confused ho jata hu ...
' SECRET QUEST ? '
' sari requirements puri karna ? '

Abhi mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki , ek sound sunayi deta h ..

[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]

' are ye kya ab to ek awwaj bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi h ! '

Fir se awwaj aati h ...


[ AAPNE AK PLAYER BANANE KI KABILIYAT KAMAYI KI HAI . KYA AAP PLAYER BANANA CAHTE HAI ? ]

' kamayi hai ? '
' player banana cahte hai ? '
' ye sb kya ho raha hai ? '

Mai pura confused ho gaya tha ki aakhir ye sb hai kya . Phle wo screen ka aana fir se aawaj sunayi dena aur ab ye sb .

Tabhi fir se aawaj aati h ..


[ AAPKE PAAS JYADA TIME NAHI BACHA HAI . ]

[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI . TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]

' ah....'
' agr maine accept kr liya to .....'
' kya mai marne se bach jaunga ? '

Fir se blue color ka screen aata h ....


[ ! ALARM ]
[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI .
TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]

{ ACCEPT } { REFUSED }

Mai turant hi bolta hu ..
" Haa ! ye chance ... "
" Mai accept krta hu . "

Agle hi pal new screen aati h ..

[ !ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER . ]


BOOM.........BOOM...........BOOM.....

Aur isi ke sath bhut tej dhamaka hota h aur us double layer stone ke inscription se aur meri body se goldan colour ki bahut tej light niklne lagti h . Wo Goldan light itni tej thi ki pura room hi tej light se bhr gaya .





Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .
Bahut hi acha update tha andar gufa jo bhi ho raha tha sabhi ghatnaye rochak tha aur ek ek ghatna bade hi shandar tarike se varnit kiya gaya hai. Bas itna hi kahunga aap bas likhte rahiye aaj nehi to kaal readers jarur aayenge kyuki jisne bhi ek baar iss kahani ke do teen update dhyaan se pad liya vo jarur der savare ise padne aayega.

Aapki writing skills aala darje ki hi :yourock::yourock::yourock:
 
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UPDATE - 10

Ab tk aapne last update me aapne read kiya ki kaise Hunter girl , fat man aur Rohan bhag kr room se bahar chale jate hai aur Rider, Anjana aur rahul hi bache rah gaye the door bhi half close ho cuka tha sare corner wale statue bhut paas aa gaye the .
Vedee pr bs 3 red aag ke gole bache the , white aag ka gola timing ka kaam kr raha tha .


AB AAGE......

Ab bs half door hi open tha .
Door ki taraf dekh kr Rahul bolta h
" Door bs band hi hone wala h ... "
" Ab bhut der ho gayi h lakin Aakhirkar mai smjh gaya hu yaha kya ho raha h . "
" Tum dono ko ab yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "

Ye sun ke mai chauk jata hu , aur Rahul ki taraf dekh kr bolta hu " Mr Rahul ? "

Lakin Rahul bich me hi meri baat kat krke statue ki taraf dekhte hue bolna jari rakhte hai " door tb tk puri tarah se band nahi hoga , jb tk km se km vedee pr ak person khada na rahe . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Tm dono abhi jawan ho aur tumhari life ke abhi bahut saal bache hue h .... Tum dono ko yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "
" Miss Anjana kya tum Rider ki madad kr dogi bahar jane me ? "

Aanjana ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr jldi se bolti hai ) " ha mai kr dungi . "

DHHHHUUUUMMMMM............
AAAHHHHHHHHHH......

Tabhi achanak se Anjana niche jamin pr gir jati h .

Wo pain me thi aur confused bhi aur apne pairo ko dekh kr bs badbadaye ja rahi thi ...
" Kya .... "
" Ye kya ..... "
" Mere pair ... "
( Rider ki taraf dekh kr )
" Ye hil q nahi rahe hai ? "

Tabhi Rahul bolta hai
" Ye mana( power ) ke thakan ke karan hua hoga . "
" Qki Mr Rider ko heal krne ke liye tmne apni bhut jyada power ko use kr liya tha . "

Ye sb sun kr mai bilkul nirash ho jata hu aur jamin ki taraf dekhte hue bolta hu ..
" Mr. Rahul aap Miss Anjana ko yaha se bahar le jaiye . "

Rahul bolta h " maine kaha na mai yaha rukunga ! "

Mai " to Miss Anjana ki help kon krega yaha se bahar niklne me ? "
" Hamare paas jyada samay nahi hai . Jaldi se yaha se nikal jao . "

Rahul Anjana ki taraf dekhta hai aur Anjana chilla kr usase bolti h " nahi ! Rider tumhari jagah mai yaha rukungi ... "

Mai ( samne statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " maine tumse promise kiya tha na mai tumhare liye dinner kharidunga . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Sbse Phle isase khana khridna !! "

Itna bol kr mai Ek E rank magical core Anjana ki taraf bada deta hu . Ye wahi magical core hai jo maine yaha badi muskil se E Rank monster ko maar kr paya tha .
Anjana rote hue mere taraf hi dekh rahi hoti hai , aur wo magical core apne hatho me le kr kas kr pakad leti hai .

Mai aage bolta hu " jb mai wapas aaunga to mai apne baki ke bache hue paise tmse wapas le lunga . "

Anjana ( gusse se ) " ye majak ka samay nahi hai . "

DUUUUDDDDD.......

Tabhi ak hath aata hai aur Anjana ko utha ke apne solder pr rakh leta h . Ji haa ye Rahul hi tha jo ki Anjana ko is time apne solder pr uthaye hue tha

Rahul " mujhe maaf kr dena ! Lakin abhi in sb bato ke liye bikul bhi samay nahi bacha h . "

Mai ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr ) " please ! Inka ache se khyal rakhna . "

Rahul " ha ! Bilkul "

tap....tap.....tap.....tap....

Aur Rahul Anjana ko ke krdoor se bahar nikal jata h . Mai bikul niras ho kr niche ki taraf dekh raha hota hu aur Rahul ke pairo ki aawaj sun raha hota hu to dhire dhire bahut slow hone lagti h .

tap....tap.....

Aur aakhir me pairo ki aawaj aani band ho jati h .

CHUUUUUUU..........
BOOM.......

Aur ab jor ki awaj ke sath door bhi pura band ho jata h .
Mai sochta hu ..
' thank God ! '
' km se km mai akela hu jo mrne wala hu '

TAP..... TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur sare statue ab slowly slowly mere taraf bad rahe hote hai . Lakin mai kud ke khyalon me khoya hua hota hu ..
' mere paas to koi insurance bhi nahi h , agar mujhe phle pata hota ki ye sb hone wala hai to .....'

TAP..... TAP.... TAP..... TAP......

Tabhi mai apne left side me dekhta hu to mujhe ak sward dikhayi deti hai . Ye Rohan ki sward thi jo wo bhagte samay yaha chor gaya tha . Mai use uthane ke liye apna left hand piche krta hu .

" Ahhhh.. "

Aur us sward ko pakad leta hu , aur use apne dono hatho se pakd kr samne ki taraf kr leta hu .

Aur mai sochta hu...
' ab jb ye sward mere paas aa hi gayi h to mai apne marne se pahle km se km ak monster ( statue) ko to maar ke marunga .'

Sare statue mere paas aa gaye the aur chro taraf se mujhe ghere hue the , aur mai double layer stone ke sahare baitha hua tha . Sb statue mujhe meri hi taraf niche ki or dekh rahe the aur Mai jor jor se sanse le raha tha .

' huk '

' huk '
' huk '

' huk '

Mai puri tarah se taiyar tha , pasine se bhiga hua aur unki taraf hi dekh raha tha . Aakhir me chilla kr bolta hu " aago ! Aage badho . "

SWOOSSS............

BOOMMMM......

Ek statu apne bhale ko uthata h aur full force se meri taraf maar deta h , wo bhala mere body ke paar ho jati h aur niche jamin me dhas jati h . Mai bhut jor se chillata hu

" Ahhhhhhhhaaaaaa ....... "

Jaha bhala laga tha waha se bhut teji se blood niklne lagta h . Mere muh, naak , aakh sbse blood nikalne lagta h .

CRACK....... CRACK........

SWOOSSS.........
THUDDD.............

Wo statue fir bhi nahi rukta hai aur apne bhale ko mere body ke sath hi jamin se nikalta h aur mujhe apne bhale ke sath hawa me upar utha deta h , aur aakhir me us double layer stone ke upar fek deta h jiske upar inscription likhe hue the .
Mai akdam Bejan se us pr pada hua tha aur mere body se bahut sara blood nikal kr us double stone se hote hue niche jamin pr gir raha tha . Sb jagah bs blood hi blood ho gaya tha .

Mere muh se blood rah rah ke nikl raha tha . Mai upar ki taraf dekh raha tha , Aur apne aakhiri sanse leta hua bhut pain me bhut dhire bol raha tha ...
" Ahhhhh..."
" Uuu...... "
" Ahhaa ...uuuu... "
" Mai nahi ...."
" ....nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Mai nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Ahhhhh....."


Mere aakho ke saamne sari ghtnaye ghumne lagti hai jo sare Hunters yaha se jane se phle apni family aur mere bare me bol rahe the .
Yahi sb yaad krte hue mai kud se bol raha tha ...
" Nahi ! ye bilkul thik nahi h . "
" Thank you bolne ka tm logo ka kya matlab tha ? "
" Tm sb yaha se mere sath vishvaasaghaat krkr bhag gaye . "
" Mere paas bhi family hai...."
" Mai bhi tm sb ki tarah nahi marna cahta hu "
" Kya bola tha maine , acha hua mai akele yaha Mar raha hu !! "
" tum Kud se bhi juth bolna band kro Rider . "
" Mai jutha hu ! "
" Mai nahi marna cahta ..... "
" Kaas mere paas .."
" Sirf ak aur chance hota "


Mai upar dekhte hue ye sb bolta rahta hu . Tabhi aur aur statue apni sward ko upar uthata hai aur uski sward light ki speed se mere taraf aa rahi hoti h , sward mujhse bs touch hone wali hoti h ki aisa lagta h ki achanak se sb stop ho jata h .

TAD.....TAD....TAD.....

Sare inscription me se blue color ki light niklne lagti h aur mere aakho ke samne hawa me ek screen aa jati h jis pr kuch likha hua tha lakin mujhe thik se dikhayi nahi de raha tha .

" Ye kya hai ? "
Itna bol kr mai dhyan se us screen ko dekhne lagta hu . Ab mujhe kya likha hua tha wo clear dikhne lagta h .



[ ! Alarm ]
[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]

Ye sb padh kr mai confused ho jata hu ...
' SECRET QUEST ? '
' sari requirements puri karna ? '

Abhi mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki , ek sound sunayi deta h ..

[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]

' are ye kya ab to ek awwaj bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi h ! '

Fir se awwaj aati h ...


[ AAPNE AK PLAYER BANANE KI KABILIYAT KAMAYI KI HAI . KYA AAP PLAYER BANANA CAHTE HAI ? ]

' kamayi hai ? '
' player banana cahte hai ? '
' ye sb kya ho raha hai ? '

Mai pura confused ho gaya tha ki aakhir ye sb hai kya . Phle wo screen ka aana fir se aawaj sunayi dena aur ab ye sb .

Tabhi fir se aawaj aati h ..


[ AAPKE PAAS JYADA TIME NAHI BACHA HAI . ]

[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI . TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]

' ah....'
' agr maine accept kr liya to .....'
' kya mai marne se bach jaunga ? '

Fir se blue color ka screen aata h ....


[ ! ALARM ]
[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI .
TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]

{ ACCEPT } { REFUSED }

Mai turant hi bolta hu ..
" Haa ! ye chance ... "
" Mai accept krta hu . "

Agle hi pal new screen aati h ..

[ !ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER . ]


BOOM.........BOOM...........BOOM.....

Aur isi ke sath bhut tej dhamaka hota h aur us double layer stone ke inscription se aur meri body se goldan colour ki bahut tej light niklne lagti h . Wo Goldan light itni tej thi ki pura room hi tej light se bhr gaya .





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Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .
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UPDATE - 10

Ab tk aapne last update me aapne read kiya ki kaise Hunter girl , fat man aur Rohan bhag kr room se bahar chale jate hai aur Rider, Anjana aur rahul hi bache rah gaye the door bhi half close ho cuka tha sare corner wale statue bhut paas aa gaye the .
Vedee pr bs 3 red aag ke gole bache the , white aag ka gola timing ka kaam kr raha tha .


AB AAGE......

Ab bs half door hi open tha .
Door ki taraf dekh kr Rahul bolta h
" Door bs band hi hone wala h ... "
" Ab bhut der ho gayi h lakin Aakhirkar mai smjh gaya hu yaha kya ho raha h . "
" Tum dono ko ab yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "

Ye sun ke mai chauk jata hu , aur Rahul ki taraf dekh kr bolta hu " Mr Rahul ? "

Lakin Rahul bich me hi meri baat kat krke statue ki taraf dekhte hue bolna jari rakhte hai " door tb tk puri tarah se band nahi hoga , jb tk km se km vedee pr ak person khada na rahe . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Tm dono abhi jawan ho aur tumhari life ke abhi bahut saal bache hue h .... Tum dono ko yaha se nikal jana chahiye . "
" Miss Anjana kya tum Rider ki madad kr dogi bahar jane me ? "

Aanjana ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr jldi se bolti hai ) " ha mai kr dungi . "

DHHHHUUUUMMMMM............
AAAHHHHHHHHHH......

Tabhi achanak se Anjana niche jamin pr gir jati h .

Wo pain me thi aur confused bhi aur apne pairo ko dekh kr bs badbadaye ja rahi thi ...
" Kya .... "
" Ye kya ..... "
" Mere pair ... "
( Rider ki taraf dekh kr )
" Ye hil q nahi rahe hai ? "

Tabhi Rahul bolta hai
" Ye mana( power ) ke thakan ke karan hua hoga . "
" Qki Mr Rider ko heal krne ke liye tmne apni bhut jyada power ko use kr liya tha . "

Ye sb sun kr mai bilkul nirash ho jata hu aur jamin ki taraf dekhte hue bolta hu ..
" Mr. Rahul aap Miss Anjana ko yaha se bahar le jaiye . "

Rahul bolta h " maine kaha na mai yaha rukunga ! "

Mai " to Miss Anjana ki help kon krega yaha se bahar niklne me ? "
" Hamare paas jyada samay nahi hai . Jaldi se yaha se nikal jao . "

Rahul Anjana ki taraf dekhta hai aur Anjana chilla kr usase bolti h " nahi ! Rider tumhari jagah mai yaha rukungi ... "

Mai ( samne statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " maine tumse promise kiya tha na mai tumhare liye dinner kharidunga . Hai ki nahi ? "
" Sbse Phle isase khana khridna !! "

Itna bol kr mai Ek E rank magical core Anjana ki taraf bada deta hu . Ye wahi magical core hai jo maine yaha badi muskil se E Rank monster ko maar kr paya tha .
Anjana rote hue mere taraf hi dekh rahi hoti hai , aur wo magical core apne hatho me le kr kas kr pakad leti hai .

Mai aage bolta hu " jb mai wapas aaunga to mai apne baki ke bache hue paise tmse wapas le lunga . "

Anjana ( gusse se ) " ye majak ka samay nahi hai . "

DUUUUDDDDD.......

Tabhi ak hath aata hai aur Anjana ko utha ke apne solder pr rakh leta h . Ji haa ye Rahul hi tha jo ki Anjana ko is time apne solder pr uthaye hue tha

Rahul " mujhe maaf kr dena ! Lakin abhi in sb bato ke liye bikul bhi samay nahi bacha h . "

Mai ( Rahul ki taraf dekh kr ) " please ! Inka ache se khyal rakhna . "

Rahul " ha ! Bilkul "

tap....tap.....tap.....tap....

Aur Rahul Anjana ko ke krdoor se bahar nikal jata h . Mai bikul niras ho kr niche ki taraf dekh raha hota hu aur Rahul ke pairo ki aawaj sun raha hota hu to dhire dhire bahut slow hone lagti h .

tap....tap.....

Aur aakhir me pairo ki aawaj aani band ho jati h .

CHUUUUUUU..........
BOOM.......

Aur ab jor ki awaj ke sath door bhi pura band ho jata h .
Mai sochta hu ..
' thank God ! '
' km se km mai akela hu jo mrne wala hu '

TAP..... TAP..... TAP..... TAP.....

Aur sare statue ab slowly slowly mere taraf bad rahe hote hai . Lakin mai kud ke khyalon me khoya hua hota hu ..
' mere paas to koi insurance bhi nahi h , agar mujhe phle pata hota ki ye sb hone wala hai to .....'

TAP..... TAP.... TAP..... TAP......

Tabhi mai apne left side me dekhta hu to mujhe ak sward dikhayi deti hai . Ye Rohan ki sward thi jo wo bhagte samay yaha chor gaya tha . Mai use uthane ke liye apna left hand piche krta hu .

" Ahhhh.. "

Aur us sward ko pakad leta hu , aur use apne dono hatho se pakd kr samne ki taraf kr leta hu .

Aur mai sochta hu...
' ab jb ye sward mere paas aa hi gayi h to mai apne marne se pahle km se km ak monster ( statue) ko to maar ke marunga .'

Sare statue mere paas aa gaye the aur chro taraf se mujhe ghere hue the , aur mai double layer stone ke sahare baitha hua tha . Sb statue mujhe meri hi taraf niche ki or dekh rahe the aur Mai jor jor se sanse le raha tha .

' huk '

' huk '
' huk '

' huk '

Mai puri tarah se taiyar tha , pasine se bhiga hua aur unki taraf hi dekh raha tha . Aakhir me chilla kr bolta hu " aago ! Aage badho . "

SWOOSSS............

BOOMMMM......

Ek statu apne bhale ko uthata h aur full force se meri taraf maar deta h , wo bhala mere body ke paar ho jati h aur niche jamin me dhas jati h . Mai bhut jor se chillata hu

" Ahhhhhhhhaaaaaa ....... "

Jaha bhala laga tha waha se bhut teji se blood niklne lagta h . Mere muh, naak , aakh sbse blood nikalne lagta h .

CRACK....... CRACK........

SWOOSSS.........
THUDDD.............

Wo statue fir bhi nahi rukta hai aur apne bhale ko mere body ke sath hi jamin se nikalta h aur mujhe apne bhale ke sath hawa me upar utha deta h , aur aakhir me us double layer stone ke upar fek deta h jiske upar inscription likhe hue the .
Mai akdam Bejan se us pr pada hua tha aur mere body se bahut sara blood nikal kr us double stone se hote hue niche jamin pr gir raha tha . Sb jagah bs blood hi blood ho gaya tha .

Mere muh se blood rah rah ke nikl raha tha . Mai upar ki taraf dekh raha tha , Aur apne aakhiri sanse leta hua bhut pain me bhut dhire bol raha tha ...
" Ahhhhh..."
" Uuu...... "
" Ahhaa ...uuuu... "
" Mai nahi ...."
" ....nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Mai nahi marna cahta hu . "
" Ahhhhh....."


Mere aakho ke saamne sari ghtnaye ghumne lagti hai jo sare Hunters yaha se jane se phle apni family aur mere bare me bol rahe the .
Yahi sb yaad krte hue mai kud se bol raha tha ...
" Nahi ! ye bilkul thik nahi h . "
" Thank you bolne ka tm logo ka kya matlab tha ? "
" Tm sb yaha se mere sath vishvaasaghaat krkr bhag gaye . "
" Mere paas bhi family hai...."
" Mai bhi tm sb ki tarah nahi marna cahta hu "
" Kya bola tha maine , acha hua mai akele yaha Mar raha hu !! "
" tum Kud se bhi juth bolna band kro Rider . "
" Mai jutha hu ! "
" Mai nahi marna cahta ..... "
" Kaas mere paas .."
" Sirf ak aur chance hota "


Mai upar dekhte hue ye sb bolta rahta hu . Tabhi aur aur statue apni sward ko upar uthata hai aur uski sward light ki speed se mere taraf aa rahi hoti h , sward mujhse bs touch hone wali hoti h ki aisa lagta h ki achanak se sb stop ho jata h .

TAD.....TAD....TAD.....

Sare inscription me se blue color ki light niklne lagti h aur mere aakho ke samne hawa me ek screen aa jati h jis pr kuch likha hua tha lakin mujhe thik se dikhayi nahi de raha tha .

" Ye kya hai ? "
Itna bol kr mai dhyan se us screen ko dekhne lagta hu . Ab mujhe kya likha hua tha wo clear dikhne lagta h .



[ ! Alarm ]
[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]

Ye sb padh kr mai confused ho jata hu ...
' SECRET QUEST ? '
' sari requirements puri karna ? '

Abhi mai ye sb soch hi raha tha ki , ek sound sunayi deta h ..

[ Aapne SECRET QUEST ki sari jruri requirements puri kr li hai , Aap " COURAGE OF THE WEAK " hai ]

' are ye kya ab to ek awwaj bhi mujhe sunayi de rahi h ! '

Fir se awwaj aati h ...


[ AAPNE AK PLAYER BANANE KI KABILIYAT KAMAYI KI HAI . KYA AAP PLAYER BANANA CAHTE HAI ? ]

' kamayi hai ? '
' player banana cahte hai ? '
' ye sb kya ho raha hai ? '

Mai pura confused ho gaya tha ki aakhir ye sb hai kya . Phle wo screen ka aana fir se aawaj sunayi dena aur ab ye sb .

Tabhi fir se aawaj aati h ..


[ AAPKE PAAS JYADA TIME NAHI BACHA HAI . ]

[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI . TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]

' ah....'
' agr maine accept kr liya to .....'
' kya mai marne se bach jaunga ? '

Fir se blue color ka screen aata h ....


[ ! ALARM ]
[ AGR AAPNE MANA KIYA TO AAPKI DIL KI DADKAN LAGBHAG 0.02 SECOND ME BAND HI JAYEGI .
TO KYA AAP ACCEPT KRTE HAI ? ]

{ ACCEPT } { REFUSED }

Mai turant hi bolta hu ..
" Haa ! ye chance ... "
" Mai accept krta hu . "

Agle hi pal new screen aati h ..

[ !ALARM ]
[ WELCOME , PLAYER . ]


BOOM.........BOOM...........BOOM.....

Aur isi ke sath bhut tej dhamaka hota h aur us double layer stone ke inscription se aur meri body se goldan colour ki bahut tej light niklne lagti h . Wo Goldan light itni tej thi ki pura room hi tej light se bhr gaya .





Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .
Nice update and mind-blowing writing skills
 

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