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Story ek aise ladke ki jiske maa baap ko dhokhe se maar diya aur bachpan mai he usai pyar ke liye taras ne ko chod diya gaya ..tab uske dadaji ne uski ungli thami.Apne dard ko chupa kar usai layak banane ke liye 5 saal dur kar diya janha mila usai uska pyar aur usne bi usai dhokha de diya..ab uska maksad sirf badla lena tha jab wo louta toh NIRWANA banke tuta dushmano par jo tadpata tha tadpata tha dushman ki rooh ko....aur is safar mai usai jaan se jayda pyar karne wali mili par pyar ke naam se he usai nafrat ho gayi thi...pyar emotion aur action ka safar....Raj -- the family's hero

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nice intro bhai..keep it up..!!
 
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Mandawa—


Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar

Chcha -shaitan singh

Chachi-indra devi

Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h

Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h

Name----- surendra singh

gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega

Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh

Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.

Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h

Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai

Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h

Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h


Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan
jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h


Dadi ---sumitra devi
Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..

Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko

Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge

Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .

Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate 😃😃

Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke 😡😡gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu

Raj – chachi main agaya

Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..

Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h

Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h

Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi

Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.


Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......

Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai
Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega
Dhasu update bro
keep posting
 
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Recap---
pichle update mai apne padha Raj ki family ka intro aur kuch pal Raj ke ki uska pura din kis prakar kat ta h


Ab agai.....


Khane ki table pe
Dada Jagmaal singh-- Nasta karte waqt sabko dhayan se dhekte huve

Note--

Naste ke waqt pariwar ka har shaks mojud hota h jo us waqt haveli mai mojud ho sirf ghar ki bahu he ni baith sakti h


Dada ji---- sumitra sab mojud h mera pota Nirwaana kanha h
Dada ji ke mu se ye sabd sunte he dadi ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo tirchi nigao se supriya aur indra ko dhekne lagi

Dada ji---maine kuch pucha h

Dadi--- wo yanhi h wo yanhi h bulwati hu mai... Indra jake bulao Raj ko abi ke abi aur apni aankh dikhati h Indra aur supriya ko... Jisai dhek ke dono ki haalat patli ho gayi aur wo foran Raj ko dhundne jati h


Badi c—pata ni kanha mar jata h manhoos aur ye budha aur budiya kha jate h muje aur badbadati huvi chathpar pahuch jati h aur Raj ko kone mai baitha dhekti h toh kahti h dhekho toh maharaj ko sabka jeena haram kar rakha h aur khud yanha baitha aram farma raha h aur cheekte huve kahti chal niche


Raj—muje pata tha ki muje neeche kya kahna h kyoki ye mera roj ka tha agar maine galat kah diya toh muje aur tourture sahna padega isliye main chup chap apna huliya tikh karke dada ji ke pass baith jata hu naste ke liye

Dada ji ------ beta kanha the apko pata h na hum apke sath he nast karte h


Raj—maafi Dada ji main upar chath pe tha aur samay ka pata he ni laga

Ab ye bata du ki Raj intelligent h aur akele sab sahne se aur is mahol mai tourture sahan karke samjdar ho gaya h is umar mai kyoki uski ek galti bahut bhari padti h... Usai khud pe.....

Ab agai

Dadi---beta Raj nasta karo

Raj – ji dadi aur nasta karne lag jata h aur man mai sochta bus pure din ka yahi ek pal shanti se gujrata h ya kavita ke sath khelte huve kyoki Dada ji ghar hote h tabi main kavita ke sath khel pata hu par ye baat choti chachi ko pasand ni h par wo Dada ji ke karan muje kuch kah ni pati h


Dada ji ---- beta Raj aj hum apko aj chetak pe gaanv ki sair kareyenge ap chaloge na hamare sath

Raj---- ji dada ji jarur chalunga apke sath hame bi gaanv dhekna h aur nasta khatm karke main taiyar hone chala jata hu main naha dhoke taiyar hoke main kavita ke pass jata hu .vo abi 4 saal ki h usko khilata hu laad karta aur uske gaal pe kiss karta hu aur wo bi meri dhekha dhek ek kiss gaal pe karti h bahut pyari h aur sweet h usai pyar se main kabuu bulata hu

Ye sab 2 ankhe dhek rahi thi ji ha ye choti chachi he thi jo gusai se dhek rahi thi muje nafrat toh ni thi par mujse pyar bi ni h unhe lagta h meri manusiyat unki beta bitiyo ko bi lag jayegi
Ab kyo unhe aisa lagta h ye toh muje bi ni pata h par agai pata lag jayega par ismai bi badi chachi ka hath h itna muje feel hota tha kyoki choti chachi badi chachi ki bahan jo h

Main neeche ake chale dadaji

Dadaji---- ha nirwana chalo aur hum unki ghodi chetak pe swar ho jate h aur nikal jate h sair par main pahli baar dadaji ke sath ja raha tha unke sir par kesariya rang ki pagdi thi aur pith pe 2nali tangi thi jo unke look ko he alag bana rahi thi...

Aisa ni h ki car ni h 3car aur bike sab h par dada ji toh thahre rajput jinka manna tha ki bhai ye sab bacho ki savari h Rajput ya toh godi pe ya sher pe savari karte h. Sher to muje baithane se raha toh ghodi he tikh h... 😄😄😄


Raj- dadaji hum kanha ja rahe h


Dada ji ---beta panchayat h hum vanha ja rahe h. Hum apko isliye sath laye h taki ap bi sikhe ki asli shatriya ka Dharam kya hota h aur wo anyay ke virudh kaise khada hota h.. Raj beta hamesa ek baat dhayan rakhna anyay hote mat dhekna... Bado ko sammaan dena aur nari jati ki sadev raksha karna.... Kabi kisi beksur par julm mat karna.. Aise he kayi bate Raj ko batate h ..

Raj –dadaji anyay kya hota h aur usai kyo krona chahiye. Aur ye shatriya kya hote h...

Dada ji --- beta nirvaana shatriya wo hote h jo kisi ka bura na hone de apni ankho ke samne.. Kisi bhukhe ko bhukha na rahne de hamesa dharam ki raksha kare.. Bure karmo ka naash kare... Apko abi bahut sikhna h ap he toh is vansh ke purkho ki izzat bhadaoge unka maan bhadaoge... Ye kah kar Dada ji soch mai padh jate h
Note Raj hamesa haveli mai jo baithak hoti h wanha mojud rahta h toh usai kuch kuch pata h baithak ke bare mai..

Main – man mai bolta ja raha tha anyay ka virodh karna aur nari ka saman... Dharam ki rakhsa karna ye baate mere dimag mai bhuchal la rahi thi meri chamak rahi thi jaise jaise mai soch raha tha..

Raj par uske Dada ji ki bato ka bahut gahra asar ho raha tha

Aise he dono bate karte karte pahuch gaye vahidpura ki panchayat mai jo unki city se 10 km ki duri par thi ghodi ki awaj ate he sabke sab khade ho gaye sarpanch bi kyo ki sabko pata tha ki koun aya h khoff jo thaThakur jagmaal singh Nirwaan ka


Raj----- Tabi maine dhekha ek aurat bhagti huvi ayi aur Dada ji ke pair mai ghir gayi aur dadaji ne pair piche kiye aur kaha utho....stri jati pairo mai girne ke liye ni hoti h tri jati maa sherawali aur maa bhawani ka roop hoti h ....
Aurat roti huvi bolti h thakur saab meri beti loot gayii ye thakur Durjan singh ke yanha mere bimar hone ki wajah se aam karne gayi thi aur iski izat iske bete Durg singh ne loot li ab main kya karuu..garib ke pass izzat he hoti h wo bi ab na rahi h.


Raj--- maine dhekha dadaji ki ankhe gusai se lal ho rahi thi aur unke hath ki muthiya kas rahi thi tabi dadaji garje durjan singh........unki garjan sher jaisi thi maine dhekha sarpanch aur sab kamnp rahe the unhe pata tha ki Thakur saab nari jati pe anyay bardasht nahi kar sakte h.

Dadaji- durjan singh aur Durg singh tumne ghor paap kiya h tum dono ko dand milega tume is panchayat ke 56 gaanv se bahar nikala jata h aur durg singh tum inki putri se vivah karoge aur agar muje pata laga ki isai kuch bi huva ya dhokha ya dhuk diya toh durjan singh tumhare khandan ka naam mit jayega dharti se ye mera vachan h ma bhawani ki saugandh h muje.... ....

Dada ji ke sabd aur in sabdo ka arth sab jante the kyoki unki kathni aur karni mai koyi fark ni tha unhone pahle maa bhawani ki sougandh khake in 56 gaanv ke dakuo ko gajar muli ki trah kaat diya us samay khun ki nadiya bah gayi thi police 👮 bi unke gaanvo mai darti h kuch galat hone se kyo ki agar wo nikle toh khun ki nadiya bahni h


Main ----Dada ji bahut gusa
ho rahe h .kya aise he dharam ki raksha hotii.. Main man mai yahi sab sochta huva wapas dadaji ke sath haveli nikal gaya tha kyoki aj pahli baar dada ji ko maine aisa dhekha tha samay bit gaya aur hum ghar pahuch gaye . aj ke din ne mere dil mai ek jagah ek laava dafan kar diya tha ab kab bahar niklega pata ni par meri shuruwat vicharo ki ho gayi thi........ Sham ke 5 baj gaye the jab ghar pahuche


Dada ji – sabi ko hall mai bulate aur kahte h jald he Raj ka admission bi Sks school mai kara diya jayega wo bi ab surendra aur babita ke sang jayega school ..pahli class ganv se pass ki ab agai sks mai padhega . ..

Surendra aur Babita ---man mai bus yahi kasar rah gayi thi gaanv mai padh leta harami kabhi ka

Indra aur shaitan singh—bus yahi dhekhna rah gaya tha harmkhor hamare paiso pe phadega dadaji isai anathalya fenk kyo ni dete.... Ya mar kyo ni jata gir ke


Supriya---chalo acha h meri betiyo se dur rahega warna iski manoosiyat na lag jati meri betiyo ko


Dadi –ab tikh h roj ki khich khich kuch toh mitigi dophar tak toh ghar se dur rahega . ..


Raj—muje pata h Dada ji ko chod ke sab khus h ki unse adha din toh dur rahunga main taki unhe sakal na dhikne ko meri... Aur main raat ka khana khake sone chala gaya apne room mai mera room khub bada h dubble bed sari facility moujud h aur main so gaya..
ab dhekna agla din kya lata Raj ke liye......
nice update..!!
aaj ke ghatnao ka aur dada ji ki baaton ka raj pe gehra prabhav pada hai..aur iske wajah se raj ki zindagi bhi change hogi..!! raj ke school jane ki baat jankar sabke mann me alag alag baat aati hai..lekin khush toh sirf dadaji hi hai..lekin babita jo apne bhai raj se itna pyaar karti thi woh bhi kaise nafrat karne lagi..dadi ko bhi koi lagav nahi hai raj se..badi chachi, uska pati aur beta yeh log toh raj se nafrat karte hai..lekin chhoti chachi nafrat toh nahi karti lekin raj ko manhoos samajhti hai aur apne bachho se raj ko dur rakhna chahti hai..!! ab dekhte hai raj ki zindagi me kaise badlav aata hai..!! lagta hai yeh durjan singh aur durg singh jarur villain ki category me shamil hote hai..!!
 
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RECAP...


Pichle update mai apne dhekha ki Raj ke man par dadaji ki bato ka gahra asar huva h aur jald he wo pass ki city ke bade school sks Admission karane jayega..

Ab agai...


Raj – main so raha tha aur alaram baj gaya muje roj 5.30 baje uthna hota h aur bhai aur didi ko uthana hota h jo muje apna mante he ni h main chala gaya dono ko uthane aur meri shurwat toh wahi pahle laat khane se aur phir thapad khane se he hoti h aj bi wahi huva aur muje mile dard , nafrat aur ansu jo meri takdeer ban gaye h pichle ek saal se. Sirf Sunday chod ke roj Yahi hota h mere sath. mere pass sivaye ansu ke aur kuch ni h bahar nikalne ke liye. yahi dhuk h ek 8 saal ke bache ka jo kisi ko wo na dikha sakta h aur na jata sakta h.

ye sab kuch Dada ji ko ni pata h kyoki wo subhe 5 baje he ghar se chale jate h sair par aur maine unhe kabi bataya ni darke ki kabhi aur bura na ho mere sath.


Surendra aur babita niche arahe the

Badi chachi--- agaya mere laal aao baitho aj tum dono ke pasand ke aloo ke parathe bane h bus babu ji ajaye

Surendra—maa is manhus ko kyo bhejti ho uthane ko pura din bekar chala jata h isai acha toh naukar rakhlo aur isai ghar se bhar nikalo pata ni isai kyo rakh rakha h na baap ka pata h na maa ka na iske maabaap ki koyi photo h ghar mai ..

Badi chachi—pata ni beta tere Dada aur dadi jane. kahte h ek din hamra vansh ki neev banega.. ma'am Roshan karega

Bade chcha ---- bade chacha surendra se Dada ji kahte h mere chote bhai Sahdev Aur Vidya ka beta h par maine toh bhai ke alawa kisi ko dhekha bi ni h kab usne shadi ki aur koun ladki thi pata ni h wo toh ghar se 18 saal ki umar mai chala gaya tha tab toh kunwara tha..

Raj -man mai ye chacha kya kah rahe Dada ji toh kahte h ki tere papa mummy tuje hospital leke gaye the tab accident huva tha... Par ye chacha aur chachi kya bol rahe h..

Kyoki ye sab Raj ne dadaji ke my se apne dost se baat karte waqt thoda suna tha apne mumy papa ke bare mai..

Choti chachi – kanha ghoom ho gaya h Re Tu ja baith ja chair pe naste ke liye ni toh pitaji hame sunayenge .

Bus aise he tane ate rahe koyi harami kahta toh koyi haramkhore toh koyi manhoos toh koyi kalank ka tikka etc etc.main bus sunta rahta tha aur upar wale se narajgi dhikhata tha par upar wale ne bi aankh band rakhi thi meri kismat pe

Dadi ji—bahar se are huge good morning Nirwaana beta

Main – good morning dadaji aur apni soch se bahar aya thoda sukoon milta h jab Dada ji ko dhekta hu wo pass hote h mere you San tension bhul hats hi. ek bache ka sahra maa aur baap hote h toh wo toh h ni isiliye dadaji h mere sab kuch h meri maa bi aur baap bi .

Dadaji – beta aj apka admission hoga school mai ap surendra aur babita ke sath abse car mai jayenge aur shaitan bheema ko boldo ek gadi hamesa inki car ke sath rahegi school se wapas ane tak

Bade chacha, choti chachi, aur badi chachi aur munimji jo mojud the aj sabki ankhe badii hogayi thi bheema ke naam se

bheema
Intro-Bheem singh ek anath h jisai dada ji 15 saal ki umar se Apne sath mai laye the dada ji ka khass h wafadari ki misal h dada ji ki taraf uthne wali unguli ya goli pahle isai hoke jati h ye bolta ni h sirf kholta h aur jisko kholta h wo dubara ni bolta h


Sab hairani se Dada ji ko dhek rahe the kyoki aj tak surendra aur babita ke sath security ke heesab se koyi ni gaya tha toh is manhoos nikamai anath ke sath kyu kyu kyu......

Main – Mere bolne se sab soch se bahar aye maine kaha Dada ji main kuch mang sakta hu apse


Dada ji – beta apko kabse mangne ki jarurat padh gayi sab apka he toh h aur dhyan se Raj ko dhekne lage.... Aur serious hoke kaha mango..

Main – dadaji main normal student banke jaunga jaise ek aam student school jata h koyi khass sahuliyat nahi chahiye na gaadi na kuch bus ek school bus mai... Ek sadharan student banke.

Dadi sumitra—ye kaisi baat kar rahe ho Raj apko pata h ap Thakur shamsher singh ke pote h log kya kahenge ki 56 gaanv pe raaj karne wale insaan ka pota aise araha h school. izzat gir jayegi hamari..

Bade chacha aur badi chachi . Choti chachi sabi ne sunaya matlb gayan diya izzat status bla bla bla

Dada ji – Dada ji kabse sabki sun rahe thr wo bolo khamosh....😡.... Ho jao sabi . kunwar Raj singh Nirwaan sirf Raj banke kyo jana chahte h ap batayenge muje... Agar apka jawab sahi diya huva toh jarur jaisa ap kahenge waisa hoga warna ni.. Aur gaur se nirwaana ko dhekne lage


Main – kuch soch raha tha aur Dada ji ke puchne pe maine itna he kaha

"RESPECT"


Dada ji--- muskaraye aur unhone ha kah diya

Kisi ko bi ye baat samaj na ayi par Dada ji samaj gaye the ki RESPECT
Khandan se mile wo apki ni h. "RESPECT" wo h jo apne kamayi usi se apki pahchan banti h wahi apko samman dilati h duniya ke bich apka naam banti h aur wo banti h ya milti h apke karmo se...
Aur yanhi se surawat huvi

"RAJ—THE FAMILY'S HERO"


Aj ke liye itna he
nice update..!!
raj ko itni kam umar me yeh sab zelna pad raha hai..isliye usme maturity bhi bahot jaldi aagayi hai..tabhi toh usne dadaji ko ek word 'Respect' keh ke answer diya aur dadaji bhi samajh gaye..!! raj ka hero banane ka safar ab suru hogaya hai..ab dekhte hai raj aage kya karta hai..kya woh apne gharwalo ko maaf karega ya unki galti ki unhe saja dega..aur uski life aage kaise banegi dekhna dilchasp hoga..!!
 
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Kal update ni de paunga isliye aj bada update diya h enjoy


Recap ....


Pichle update mai apne dhekha ki kaise Raj ne apne vicharo ki neev ki pahal karli h

Ab agai....


Dur kanhi Bharat ke ek state M.P mai ek khoobsurat jagah JUNGARH jo pahodo aur nadi se giri huvi h dharti ka swarg h wanha mousam har 12 mahine suhana rahta h wanha....

Ek bahut badi haveli h jiski sundarta bahut he bhawaya huva karti thi jisai pure state mai jana jata h. ab wo stri ki sooni mang ki trah dikhti .ghar mai kafi log h par sab dare huve rahte h .pal pal apni maut ki ghadiya gin rahe h... dusri taraf puri city aur ye state shant h dar ke saye mai aur wanha Raj karte h insaan ke roop mai wo shaitan aur uska. Pariwar jinhone pure state ko gulam bana rakha h aur band kar rakha h us pariwar ko ghar ke andar he..jinke marne ke kuch saal baki h
Kahte h yanha 7 saal pahle sab tikh tha phir kya huva pata ni par aj sab bahut dhuk mai atyachar mai jee rahe h ya kaho ki pal pal mar rahe h

ab chalte h Raj ki taaf

Subhe ko 5.30 pe uthna jaleel hona ye niyam h mera subhe ka waqt nasta karte waqt aram se nikalna phir haveli mai kaam karna pani dena garden mai pani aur saaf safayi karna jo ki mere liye bahut he dhukhdayi tha par who ...cares....

-Aise he dopahar huvi pura din badi aur choti chachi mujse ghar ki safayi aur ghar ke kaam karwati rahi..
Choti chachi – ja farsh par pocha marde wanha ganda ho gaya h
Main saaf karne gaya aur niche baith kar saaf kar raha tha ki piche table se pith takra gayi aur wanha pada pot tut gaya aur bus fir kya .. ap kudh he dheklo kya hota h mere sath

Choti chachi – haramkhore manhoos kanhike pot tod diya tu kha ja sabko apne maa baap ko kha gaya yanha aake mere pati ko kha gaya rook tuje main batati hu tadak tadak 5 thapad pade muje..badi chachi aur chacha khus ho rahe the dadi ne dhekha par boli kuch ni ..

choti chachi ---aj bhukha rahega toh pata lagega aur muje gasit kar mere room mai le gayi aur bahar se band kar diya

Main – andar ja ke gira farsh par gira aur rone laga kyoki muje pata h ki ek galti muje mujpar bahut bhari padti h par hu toh main bi ek insaan ek bacha he hu jis sai galti ho he jati h.. Main gale mai pahne locket ko dhek ke mer mu se sabd ansuo ke sath nikle maa oh maa apne aur papa ne pahnaya tha na ye locket..ap muje kyo ni le gayi sath mai kyo chod gayi is duniya mai dhekho apke bete ke sath kya ho raha h aur isi trah main leta huva farse par maapapa ko yaad kar ro raha tha. Maa main apse kabi baat ni karunga ap gandi ho apne muje apne sath ni leke gayi kya ap muje pyar ni karti thi aur phir... Main late gaya

Thodi dhair baad room ka darwaja khula aur mamta ayi

Mamta—bhai.. Bhaiya... Jago na dhekho main laddu layi hu apke liye apne dopahar ko khaya ni na maine mummy ko ullu bana ke layi hu ap khao na wo choti h par usai bi pata h lagne pe dard hota h uske chote hath jo piche chupe huve the unmai se laddu nikalke muje diye aur gale lag gayi mere

Main—maine uski traf pyar bhari nazro se dhekha aur gaal pe hath sahlaya aur ek laddu leke kha liya aur kaha kisi ko pata lag gaya toh mamtuu tuje mujse dur karenge tuje bi marenge wo jaldi se abi chali jao wo phir chupke se chali gayi.....
Sham ko badi chachi ne darwaja khola unke sath surendra aur babita sabi the jo hans rahe the...


Badi chachi--- yaad rakhna agar mu khola niche Dada ji ke pass toh zahar dekar maar dungi samja

Main ---Dar gaya tha kyoki muje jeena h . Jeena h apne wajud ke liye main chup raha aur unki ha mai ha milata raha jo unhone kaha wo maine waisa he kiya


Sham ka khana khaya aur so gaya apne kamre mai aj main kisi ke pass ni gaya sawal toh bahut h mere pass jinke jawab bada hoke dhundne h muje isiliye in sawalo ko dafna ke main nind ki gahrayiyo mai chala gaya...

Subhe ka waqt tha 5.30 pe uthana aur ek kick ke sath suruwat honi meri wahi jalil hone thapad khana etc..

Aj dada ji jaldi agaye aur room mai chale gaye maine unhe dhekha aur unke pass chala gaya aur godi mai sar rakh kar so gaya


Dada ji ---Beta nirwaana kya huva
Main kuch ni dada ji bus ap jaldi agaye toh apki godi mai sone ka man tha toh agaya

Dada ji –man mai putra muje pata h ki tu kya sochta h aur kya hota h tere sath Bus kuch time aur h abi tuje bahut heematwala banna h..

Dadaji—apka aj admission karwana h na ap taiyaar ho jayiye ..

Main--- ji Dada ji kahke upar room mai chala gaya aur taiyaar hone laga maine dimple T shirt aur pant pahni thi aur agaya niche jake mandir mai maa bhawani ka ashriwaad liya aur pahuch gaya Dada ji ke pass.. Dadad ji hum taiyaar h chale

Dada ji – Ne dhyan se meri taraf dhekha aur man mai bilkul sahdev pe gaya h aur samjdari mai apni ma pe gaya h kaas wo dono jinda hote toh dhek pate ki aj unka bacha Rajasthan ke sabse bade school mai padhne ja raha h jo bahu vidya ka sapna tha
Aur bolte h beta Raj ap nasta kare phir hum chalenge
Babita aur surendra toh jalbhun gaye the aur chacha chachi aur choti chachi bi jaal bhun gayi thi man he man sab baduaye de rahe the.


Main-- man mai muje pata h ye log kya soch rahe hmaine nasta kiya aur bahar agaye bahar ek rolls royce type ki modified car khadi thi jispe agai likha tha chetak jo Dada ji kabi kabi bade functions mai leke jate the aur driving seat pe baithe the bheem chacha.. Hum baith ke nikal gaye school

School bahut he shandar front mai playground 2 manjila building gajab ka tha school.. Muje toh pasand agaya

In principal office

Principal-- paseene se bhiga huva tha Thaa.. Kur saaab appp



DaDa ji –ap aram se baith jayiye inse mile ye h Kunwar Raj singh Nirwaan son of Sahdev and vidya singh Nirwan

Itna intro sunte he principal rumal nikaal ke paseene puchne laga usko apni maut dikhne lagi wo thar thar kaanp raha tha Jaise usne Kisi aise ke naam sun liye hi jo usai ni sunne the...

Main – inhe kya huva Dada ji ye kanp kyo rahe h


Dadaji –kuch ni huva inhe principal ki daraf dhek ke principal se kaha ye ab apki school mai padhenge

Principal--- hairani se ji ji ji


Dada ji – bheema Kunwar Raj ko bahar school dikhao


Aur Raj ke jane ke baad

Dada ji – Hum apse jo kah rahe h ek baar kahenge ap dhayan se suniyega Hamare pote ke baare mai koyi bi jan kari is school ke bahar gayi toh tumhe pahchanne wala is dharti pe ni milega tumahre sarir ko cheel aur kutto ke liye chod dunga main ye baat dhayan rakhna ye aam bacho ki trah padhega koyi special treatment ni
Aur ha always remember my words...... ... Thakur jagmaal singh words...

Principal jo kanmp raha tha wo aur dar gaya aur itna he bola ji ji ji... Thakur... Saab.. Yaad rakhu.. nga.. Kisi ko niii pata lagega

Ab Dada ji kyo ni chahte ki kisi ko pata lage main koun hu mere maa baap koun h ye Raj ka Raj h

Next morning 🌞🌞
Dada ji...
5.30 am Nirwaana....

Main – main niche ate huve ji ji Dada ji

Dada ji hamre sath ao
Main -ji Dada ji aur main unke sath chal diya bahar sadhu sant bhukhe garib sab baithe the main pahli baar he aya tha aj kyo ki Dada ji ne bacho ko mana kar rakha tha wanha ane se jab main wanha pahucha toh sa bhojan kar rahe the subhe hamara roj ka tha sadhu sanyasi jaldi bhojan karte h idilye subhe jaldi he bhojan shuru ho jata tha jo 9 baje tak chalta tha main Dada ji ke sath se agai chala gaya muje khud he kuch khinchav khinche ja raha tha maine faalo ki choti tokri uthayi aur sadhu santo ke pass jake unke thaile mai rakhne laga jo sabke liye aschariye ki baat thi
Ek sadhu ko group dhayan se muje dhek raha tha unhone muje bulaya aur mere sit par hath rakh kuch pal chup raha aur phir uski ankhe chamakne lagi...wo bade dhyan se mastisk ki rekha padhne lage unhe jaise kuch mil gaya ho aur unke chahre pe muskrahat aagayiii...

Sadhu—putra kya naam h apka
main – Raj naam h baba
Sadhu—jor...se Raj ke h kayi Raj.....putra kabhi darna ni uarwala khud teri taqdeer badlega .......aur jab wo badlega ....tab tu badlega... Aur badlegi teri kismat .. Jo tere h wo taras rahe h tere intezar mai... Unke dhukho.. Tu unka muktidharak banega......
Aur Sare sadhu khade ho gaye aur muje ashriwaad dene lage

Aj ke liye itna he
Sath bane rahiye aur apni partikriyaye dete rahiye
nice update..!!
raj ke sath ghar me jo bartav ho raha hai wahi usse strong banayega..ab raj chhoti umar me hi bahot mature ban gaya hai..aur raj ke sath jo hota hai uska pata dadaji ko hai lekin woh bhi kuchh nahi bol rahe..unko bhi raj ko aage ke liye strong banana hai..!! yeh junagarh me ek family pe dusri family atyachar kar rahi hai aur lagta hai iska connection raj se hai..!! principal ka raj ke maa baap ka naam sunkar aur dadaji ko dekhkar itna darna matlab kuchh toh raaj hai raj ka..!! sadhu ne bhi bola rak ke kayi hai raaj..ab dekhte hai kab bada hota hai Raj..!!
 
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RECAP----

Pichle update mai apne dhekha ki Bheema chacha ki kasam aur jimai dari jo dada ji ne di h

Ab agai.......

Morning time....

Main—Aj mera ab tak ki sabse achi subhe h main 5.30 pe utha hu aur kisi ko jagane ni gaya hu bus fresh huva aur pahuch gaya sadhu babao ka fal dene main jaise he pahucha wanha sabi bhojan kar rahe the ...

Dada ji – ao Nirwaana..

NOTE ---Dosto Dada ji Nirwaana naam he kyo lete h Raj ka ye ap ek baar Nirwaan ya Nirwaana ka meaning google karna samaj aa jayega kyoki ye naam Raj ke future Dialogue mai shamil hoga...


Raj --- maine jake Dada ji ke pair chuve phir bheema Chacha ke pair chune laga toh unhone sidhe gale laga liya aur bole ..


Bheema --Ap hamare mere dil mai ho jaise hum apke papa ke dil mai the

Dada ji --- bheema...

Bheema --- samaj gaya ki galti kar di h toh wo bole acha raaj beta taiyar ho jayiye pahle fal bant dijiye aur phir hum school chalenge...

Main—ji bheema chacha ji aur main chala gaya maine school dress pahni aur song gaate huve niche agaya main

School chale hum oh..ho...ho
Badal sa garje hum bijli sa chamke hum
School chale hum oh ho ho


Badi chachi---- shaitanchacha se lo chal diya school kuch karna h ya ni ya loda heelate rahna apna khair chodo wo bi apki tarah he h nakara....

B chacha—indra tumahara jayda ho raha h. bus ab karta hu plan kuch der sochne lage aur phir hasne lage ha ha ha Marega ab marega...

Badi chachi—muskaan ka matlb jaanti thi ki soch liya h is nikamai ne kuch na kuch...

Aur choti chachi wo sirf shatranj ka mohra thi in dono ka ya ye dono bi mohre the kisi aur ki shatranj ke ...????

Dada ji muje chodne ni gaye kyoki school sks pass ki city mai h jo approx 20 km dur h aur Dada ji ni taki dusri city mai rajasthan ke bahar ka koyi admi muje aur dada ji ko sath dhek na le isliye bheema chacha gaye the school bus tak chodne ...


Raj – school ki mini bus ayi aur main baith gaya .school bus mai . is bus mai 10 bache jate h school is city se.. rajasthan ka top school h toh bache bi top ate h pure state se isliye meri van mai 10 he bache jate h ..

Raj bahut khus tha school jane se kyoki uske dhuk kuch toh kam huve the aur dil se wo dada ji ko aur uparwalle ko thank you thank you bol raha tha half hour baad Bus school pahuch gayii

Raj—main bus se niche utra aur dheere se bola wao itne sare bache.ye hota h school wao Raj aj se tu yanha padhega ye toh sach mai bahut achi lag rahi h achool...aur phir school incharge jo chote bacho ka dhayan rakhte h usne kaha bache idhar chalna h aur main ho liya unke piche

In classroom 50 ki strength h class ki jo house full thi Sab amir ghar ke. Lag rahe the kuch sifarish se aye the aur kuch test pass karke aye h kuch der mai class teacher ayi aur wo boli
Teacher-- mera naam preety sharma h ab ap sab bache apna naam bataye aur phir papa ka.

Phir sabne naam bataye bla bla bla.....jab meri bari ayi main khada ho gaya bolna toh matlb manners bole toh sistachaar wo toh koot koot ke bare h dada ji ne ..maine hath jod teacher ko namskar kiya aur kaha good morning everyone my self Raj singh nirwaan and my fathers name..
Itne mai teacher boli its ok its ok Raj dont tell your fathers name i know the name of your father please sit down..

Actualy Dada ji ne mana kiya h kisi ko bi kuch bhi batana ni h na papa ka naam aur na Dada ka naam koyi kuch puche ya dante jabardasti kare sun lena aur baad mai muje batana ok par apni detail mat dena.kyoki principal ko shakt instructions mile huve h teachers ko bata de ki Raj se persnal detail koyi ni lega na wo dega.

Toh aj maine khub padhayi ki h main khub khela hu naye dost banaye ye tha Raj ka first day.

Udhar bade chacha choti chachi badi chachi planing kar rahe h mujse chutkara pane ki

Bade chacha – Dhek indra maine UP ki gang se baat kari h 1cr lega accident dikha ke maar dega aur kisi ko shak ni hoga ki humne kiya h par wo bol raha h abi uska banda jo expert h wo videsh h 2 saal chahiye


Choti chachi – bhaisab fans na jaye kanhi

Badi chachi – kuch ni hoga ap done karo baki main sambhal lungi....aur 2 saal kyo lega wo chalo koyi ni itna jhela h toh 2 saal aur sahii...

Bade chacha—man mai tuje fansaunga meri jaan is accident mai aur phir Iski yani choti chachi ki chut ke maje main lunga ghar mai isai apni raand bana ke ....
Aur inki planning chalti rahi...
Par kismat mai kiski kya likha h kisai pata h kab kuch ho jaye..
raj ka routine fix ho gaya tha..roj uthna taiyaar hona aur school jana ....Bura din bi h jo agaya h



Day--- Sunday


Main---- utha time se aur gaya dono ko uthane aur mili ek kick muje aur main gira jor se bahut tej lagi thi muje main dard se karahta khada huva aur phir gaya babita ko uthane par wo bi taiyaar thi
Sound—ttadak tadak tadak tadak 4 thapad pade muje
Babita haramkhore aj Sunday h teri heemat kaise huvi muje uthane ki
Main- wo didi aj mandir jana h na puja h na toh dadi ne bola tha...


Babita--- bhag kutte yanha se


Main—agaya apne room mai bathroom mai gaya aur mu dhoya gaal lal gaye the aur chest dard kar rahi thi surendra ki laat se ye aj indono ne jayda he kiya tha jaan bhuj ke ....main bus gusai se apni ankh malta raha ansu puchta raha jo gire mere ankh se ...aur phir nahake ready hoke agaya mandir ke liye.

Kalu teri khabar paki h na ki thakur aj mandir ayega apne pariwar ke sath kyoki akela toh wo darne se raha bc galat khar huvi na toh bc teri gaan ke andar banduk ka sanduk khol dunga samaj gaya na..

Kalu ha ayega ustad ayega aj kaam tamam kar denge uska aur dono hasne lage 50 admi jo the sath mai par unhe kya pata h ki kal kisne dhekha h aur sher ka sikar aise ni kiya jata jismai aj unke sath aj cheeta bi hoga matlb bheema ane wala h..


Dada ji --- bheema tu bi chal mandir

Bheema- ni babuji meri bhagwan se itni bi ni jamti h bus manta hu kyoki unhone anath hona pe apka saya muj par daal diya warna toh sab chin he liya tha na uparwale ne mujse mera sab kuch


Dada ji – beta bheema bhul ja jo gaya usai laya ni ja sakta h aur waise bhi Raj bi jayega mandir ab bi ni chalega mandir

Bheema—chalunga babuji main ata hu abi

Aur bheema andar gaya aur gadi nikal ke laya dada ji ki chetak ko......

Aj ke liye itna he
Next update mai Dada ji. Aur bheema ka dabang action aur gaanv wala ka krodh.....
nice update..!!
raj ko school me jane se kuchh toh achhe din dekhne ko mil rahe hai..lekin yeh surendra aur babita nahi sudhrenge..surendra ka toh thik hai lekin yeh babita bhi aisa behave karti hai..lekin raj inko bhi sabak sikhayega..!! yeh chaha toh bada harami nikla..raj ko mar ke uska iljam khud hi ke biwi par dalna chahta hai aur uski behen ko pelna chahta hai..lekin aisa kabhi hoga nahi..!! ab dekhte hai dadaji aur bheema ka action..bhai raj ko ab dheere dheere bada karo..!!
 
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Bang Bang


Recap----


Pichle update mai apne dhekha Raj ka school jana aur bade chacha ki planning .. Aur mandir ke rast mai hamle ki sajish....


Ab agai......


Hum sabi 2 gadiyo mai baith gaye aur chal diye mandir ki aur janha ke khatre se anjaan sab masti mai ja rahe the ye mandir maa bhawani ka h ye mandir Do pahadi ke bich mai h yanha kaisa bi ashant man ho shant ho jata h....

Raste mai.....

Dada ji – Beta Nirwana bhagwan se ap jo chahte h uska nivedan karna matlb jo ap chahe wo mangna maa bhawani apki jarur sunegi....
Raj--- ji dada ji muje bahut kuch mangna h bhagwan se main jarur mangunga

Bheema ---- babuji agai ped kata huva h raste mai kuch gadbad h ...

Dada ji ---- kutte agaye lagta h chalte raho aur Raj beta kuch bi ho jaye bilkul bi bahar mat nikalna samje..


Raj--- ji Dada ji


Kalu---- Ustad wo arahe h taiyar ho jayiye ..aj kaam tamam karna he warna hum ni bachenge agar thakur bach gaya toh .thakur ke sath uska driver aur uska pariwar he hoga


Ustad—Are kalu main toh pichle 2 saal se mouka dund raha hu par aj mila h aur jor se taiyaar ho jao sab muje barbaad kiya tha na.Aj tu ni bachega thakur

Kalu – ustad 2 gadiya arahi h har saal toh ek he ati h kuch gadbad h rahne dete h ustad kanhi lene ke dene na pad jaye
Wo kahte h na Din mai ek baar mu se sarawati bolti h matlb sach nikalta he h aur aj wahi huva tha kalu ke sath


Ustad---nii kalu aj toh main ya wo ek he jinda bachega phir ek saal aur intezar ni hota h pichle saal bi kuch ni kiya tha .gadiya arahi h taiyaar ho jao gher lo sabko.

Gadiya ped ke pass akar rukii aur gadi se niche utre Dada ji ..

Dada ji – samne dhek ke bole chupne se kya muje pata ni h ki lakad baggai sher ka sikar karne aye h ajao bahar aur dhekho ki sher ke pass sirf mout h dene ko uski jaan tumare bus ki ni h.....aur apni mucho pe taav dete huve bole aj pahli baar kisi ko jinda chodunga par usai dhek ke koyi ni kahega ki wo jinda h log kahenge ki "JINDA MURDA PAHLI BAAR DHEKHA H " jo bolta ni h

Uske baad jhadiyo se sare gunde bahar ane lage kisi ke hath mai talwar toh kisi ke pass lath toh kisi ke pass rod sariye the...

Ustad---- Thakur aj tak ka pata ni par aj lakadbhagai jarur karenge sikar " teri mout hogi aur hamari aj dawat hogi" tera kaleja khaunga main aj raat par afsouse tu ni hoga dhekne ke liye

Dada ji------Hariya choudhary tera baap pata h bahut nek insaan H uski he wajah se pichli baar stree ke sath jabardasti karne ki kosis ki wajah se sirf dand deke chod diya tha par aj aj aj ..ek sabak hoga sabke liye shaitan phone laga iske baab ko dr lane ko bol de...

Shaitan singh ke bahar nikal ne se hariya bi soch mai padh gaya ki thakur akela ni h par usai dar na laga usne socha dono ko he mar denge aj kyoki uske pass itne admi jo the sath aj.


Dada ji—phir bole mera khun ya maans pachana tere bus ki baat ni h babbar sher ka sikar karne aya h pahle kisi aur se hokar gujarna hoga

Aur dada ji chillaye Bheeemaaaaaa.....


Car ka fatak khula aur ek nukili jhutiya (shoes type) pahne bheema nikla gadi se jisai dhek ke 20 gundo ki halat kharab ho gayi thi wo ache se jante the ki bheema jo mout deta h wo kaisi hoti h.......baki jo gunde the wo naye the bheema abi ladayi kam karta tha toh wo usai sakal se itna ni jante the .....par bheema ke karnamai jisne dhekhe h usai us raat nind ni ayi h ......


Hariya---- oh toh thakur ka kutta bi h sath aj sabko maar dunga aur chillake bola agar inko maar diya toh 1 cr ni 5 cr tum sabke aur piche jo baithi h dono wo bi tumari ...

Hariya ki baate sun jo gunde dar rahe the paiso ka naam sunke khus ho gaye aur hamla kar diya pahle dus gunde dada ji ki taraf aye dadaji ne ek hath car mai dala aur car mai se apni talwar nikali jiska wajan he 10 se 15 kg ke beech tha aur usai dono hatho se bari bari ghumne lage charo taraf aur bolo bahut din ho gaye kasrat kare bheema intezar kariyo dheku jara kitna dum h inmai..

Bheema—babuji apko bahana chahiye ladne ka ap aram kariye main aur chote malik nipat lenge inse ..


Dada ji ---Chup kar ladne de muje acha tikh h hariya aur 10mere baki tum dono ke ...

Ab agai story
Raaj ke najariye se...

Aur agaye dus gunde dadaji ke pass pahle ne lath ghumake sir par marna chaha Dada ji ne jhuk kar uske pair he kaat diye ye dhekar piche wale ek baar ruk gaye par heemat kar phir agai bhade 2 ek sath aye dono ke hath mai rod thi jo sidhi kar mari sir par dada ji ne agai talwar karke rok li aur piche dhaka de kar talwar ghumayi ab talwar he itni bhari thi sidhi gale pe lagi aur gardan dhad se alag ho gayi..dono ki...udhar shaitan chacha ne bi lath nikal lath se pure lathait ban kar gundo pe tut pade aur sir par maar kar phodne lage sir jaise koyi matki phod rahe h par udhar bheema chacha toh alag he. Kulhadi wo bi do taraf wali leke chale the gundo ki taraf pahla jaise he aya teji se mara sir ke bicho bich ye kya.... ek waar ni 2 ni 5 waar kar faad diya bich mai se piche walo ki toh gaand he fat gayi ki ye bc h kya gunde ek dusre ki taraf dhek bol rahe the rakhshas h ye toh..

Udhar Dada ji 7 logo ko maar diya tha baki ke teeno ke ek hath aur ek leg kaat diye .....Aur chal diye hariya ke pass hariya bi talwar pakde taiyaar tha ur bheedi talware apasmai hariya bi tawlwar baaz tha talwar takrane se din mai bi chingariya dikh rahi thi.. par dadaji bhari pade hariya pe..
Dusri taraf shaitan chacha janha lathiyo se sir phod rahe the wanhi bheema chacha gundo ko cheer faad rahe the 20 gundo ko faad diya tha bich mai se aur bheema chacha gusai mai chillaye babuji par ankh uthayi h tum logo ne aj koyi jinda ni bachega sabko khol dunga aur aisa kholunga ki dr bi jod ni payega ..tumhari atma bi dubara ni judegi haramzado..aur itna kahte he tut pade phir se ..5 ki shaitan chacha ne matki matlab sir faad diye the...

Wanhi chachi ne pass ke gaanv ke sarpanch ke pass munim ji se phone karwa diya tha hazaro ki bheed bhagi arahi thi lath fawda katar leke

Gunde jo bache huve the unhone bheema ka kahar aur dada ji talwar se gardan kat ti huvi dhekhi toh wo bhag khade huve....
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Charo taraf khun he khun tha 15 gunde bach ke bhag gaye wo bi ghayal the ...aisa laga jaise lal rang ki holi kheli ho abhi yanha....

Dada ji----- bheema rook jao jane do unhe bus bahut huva shant ho jao kyo ki unhe pata tha ki uska gusa bahut bura h...aur unhone kaha shaitan logo ko bulao rasta saaf karne ke liye

Shaitan chacha --- jarurat ni h wo dhekhiye babuji charo taraf se log arahe tractor aur gadiya aur bhag kar...

Gaanv walo 15 minut mai pahuche unhone 10 logo ko tractor ki toli mai se nikal ke phek diya aur bole thakursaab ye log hame bhagte huve dikhe hum pakad ke le aye aur baki 3 ko log ghasit kar dusri taraf se la rahe the aur 2 ko dusri taraf se

Dada ji ---Hmmm inhe wapas daldo gadiyo mai

Gaanv wale ek sath chillane lage bali bali bali chahiye thakur saab inhone hamre bhagwan pe hamla kiya inhe hum jinda ni chodenge aur bheema bi bola babuji bali dijiye inki ya hum cheerfaad karenge inka...

Dadaji--- kuch pal sochke thik h par is hariya ko jinda chodenge chalo mandir maa bhawani ke mandir mai chadegi bali inki

Mandir ke sath mai bali ka sthan h janha bakro ki bali di jati h ....

Dada ji hey ma bhawani rakhsa karna hamari aur hame shakti dena taki in jaise papiyo ki bali deke dharti paap mukt karta rahu.
Thakur saab pe hamle ki khabar se ass pass ke ganvo se hazaro log doude aye the mandir tak .mandir mai jor jor se nare lag rahe the jai ma bhawani jai ma bhawani....aur
Sab gundo ki ek ek kar bali di gayi... Bali dhek ke hariya moot chuka tha 2 baar. Aur mare huve gundo ke mans ko chod diya kutte aur cheel kauvo ke liye

Hariya ke 2 no hath pair ki ungliya aur jeeb kat di gayi sabke samne taki sabko ye yaad rahe....ki anjaam kya hota Thakur jagmal pe hamla karne pe....hariya jinda toh h par murda saaman matalb
WO JINDA...... MURDA JO ....BOLTA H PAR... MARE HUVE SE BI BATTAR HAALAT MAI....

Aj ke liye itna he Sath bane rahiye milte h agle
Agai ab Raj ko 4saal bada ho kar 10 saal ka ho jayega
nice update..!!
hariya chutiya insan tha.. uske sath jo saluk kiya gaya wo sahi tha.. ghat laga kar sher ko marna asaan nahi hota.. sabb jaante hue bhi khud bhi amrne aa gaya.. aur dusre kai gundo ko bhi marwa diya.. achcha hai, jitne kutte maren utna hi ilaake me saanti bani rehti hai... dada ji ka raj ke saamna ladna.. raj ke liye bohut sahi hoga.. raj ko aur bhi daring milegi.. aur wo apne dada ji se aur bhi zayada inspire bhi hoga.. aur unke jaisa hi banne ki lagan khud me badhayega..
 
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Pichle update mai apne dhekha Raj ka school jana aur bade chacha ki planning .. Aur mandir ke rast mai hamle ki sajish....


Ab agai......


Hum sabi 2 gadiyo mai baith gaye aur chal diye mandir ki aur janha ke khatre se anjaan sab masti mai ja rahe the ye mandir maa bhawani ka h ye mandir Do pahadi ke bich mai h yanha kaisa bi ashant man ho shant ho jata h....

Raste mai.....

Dada ji – Beta Nirwana bhagwan se ap jo chahte h uska nivedan karna matlb jo ap chahe wo mangna maa bhawani apki jarur sunegi....
Raj--- ji dada ji muje bahut kuch mangna h bhagwan se main jarur mangunga

Bheema ---- babuji agai ped kata huva h raste mai kuch gadbad h ...

Dada ji ---- kutte agaye lagta h chalte raho aur Raj beta kuch bi ho jaye bilkul bi bahar mat nikalna samje..


Raj--- ji Dada ji


Kalu---- Ustad wo arahe h taiyar ho jayiye ..aj kaam tamam karna he warna hum ni bachenge agar thakur bach gaya toh .thakur ke sath uska driver aur uska pariwar he hoga


Ustad—Are kalu main toh pichle 2 saal se mouka dund raha hu par aj mila h aur jor se taiyaar ho jao sab muje barbaad kiya tha na.Aj tu ni bachega thakur

Kalu – ustad 2 gadiya arahi h har saal toh ek he ati h kuch gadbad h rahne dete h ustad kanhi lene ke dene na pad jaye
Wo kahte h na Din mai ek baar mu se sarawati bolti h matlb sach nikalta he h aur aj wahi huva tha kalu ke sath


Ustad---nii kalu aj toh main ya wo ek he jinda bachega phir ek saal aur intezar ni hota h pichle saal bi kuch ni kiya tha .gadiya arahi h taiyaar ho jao gher lo sabko.

Gadiya ped ke pass akar rukii aur gadi se niche utre Dada ji ..

Dada ji – samne dhek ke bole chupne se kya muje pata ni h ki lakad baggai sher ka sikar karne aye h ajao bahar aur dhekho ki sher ke pass sirf mout h dene ko uski jaan tumare bus ki ni h.....aur apni mucho pe taav dete huve bole aj pahli baar kisi ko jinda chodunga par usai dhek ke koyi ni kahega ki wo jinda h log kahenge ki "JINDA MURDA PAHLI BAAR DHEKHA H " jo bolta ni h

Uske baad jhadiyo se sare gunde bahar ane lage kisi ke hath mai talwar toh kisi ke pass lath toh kisi ke pass rod sariye the...

Ustad---- Thakur aj tak ka pata ni par aj lakadbhagai jarur karenge sikar " teri mout hogi aur hamari aj dawat hogi" tera kaleja khaunga main aj raat par afsouse tu ni hoga dhekne ke liye

Dada ji------Hariya choudhary tera baap pata h bahut nek insaan H uski he wajah se pichli baar stree ke sath jabardasti karne ki kosis ki wajah se sirf dand deke chod diya tha par aj aj aj ..ek sabak hoga sabke liye shaitan phone laga iske baab ko dr lane ko bol de...

Shaitan singh ke bahar nikal ne se hariya bi soch mai padh gaya ki thakur akela ni h par usai dar na laga usne socha dono ko he mar denge aj kyoki uske pass itne admi jo the sath aj.


Dada ji—phir bole mera khun ya maans pachana tere bus ki baat ni h babbar sher ka sikar karne aya h pahle kisi aur se hokar gujarna hoga

Aur dada ji chillaye Bheeemaaaaaa.....


Car ka fatak khula aur ek nukili jhutiya (shoes type) pahne bheema nikla gadi se jisai dhek ke 20 gundo ki halat kharab ho gayi thi wo ache se jante the ki bheema jo mout deta h wo kaisi hoti h.......baki jo gunde the wo naye the bheema abi ladayi kam karta tha toh wo usai sakal se itna ni jante the .....par bheema ke karnamai jisne dhekhe h usai us raat nind ni ayi h ......


Hariya---- oh toh thakur ka kutta bi h sath aj sabko maar dunga aur chillake bola agar inko maar diya toh 1 cr ni 5 cr tum sabke aur piche jo baithi h dono wo bi tumari ...

Hariya ki baate sun jo gunde dar rahe the paiso ka naam sunke khus ho gaye aur hamla kar diya pahle dus gunde dada ji ki taraf aye dadaji ne ek hath car mai dala aur car mai se apni talwar nikali jiska wajan he 10 se 15 kg ke beech tha aur usai dono hatho se bari bari ghumne lage charo taraf aur bolo bahut din ho gaye kasrat kare bheema intezar kariyo dheku jara kitna dum h inmai..

Bheema—babuji apko bahana chahiye ladne ka ap aram kariye main aur chote malik nipat lenge inse ..


Dada ji ---Chup kar ladne de muje acha tikh h hariya aur 10mere baki tum dono ke ...

Ab agai story
Raaj ke najariye se...

Aur agaye dus gunde dadaji ke pass pahle ne lath ghumake sir par marna chaha Dada ji ne jhuk kar uske pair he kaat diye ye dhekar piche wale ek baar ruk gaye par heemat kar phir agai bhade 2 ek sath aye dono ke hath mai rod thi jo sidhi kar mari sir par dada ji ne agai talwar karke rok li aur piche dhaka de kar talwar ghumayi ab talwar he itni bhari thi sidhi gale pe lagi aur gardan dhad se alag ho gayi..dono ki...udhar shaitan chacha ne bi lath nikal lath se pure lathait ban kar gundo pe tut pade aur sir par maar kar phodne lage sir jaise koyi matki phod rahe h par udhar bheema chacha toh alag he. Kulhadi wo bi do taraf wali leke chale the gundo ki taraf pahla jaise he aya teji se mara sir ke bicho bich ye kya.... ek waar ni 2 ni 5 waar kar faad diya bich mai se piche walo ki toh gaand he fat gayi ki ye bc h kya gunde ek dusre ki taraf dhek bol rahe the rakhshas h ye toh..

Udhar Dada ji 7 logo ko maar diya tha baki ke teeno ke ek hath aur ek leg kaat diye .....Aur chal diye hariya ke pass hariya bi talwar pakde taiyaar tha ur bheedi talware apasmai hariya bi tawlwar baaz tha talwar takrane se din mai bi chingariya dikh rahi thi.. par dadaji bhari pade hariya pe..
Dusri taraf shaitan chacha janha lathiyo se sir phod rahe the wanhi bheema chacha gundo ko cheer faad rahe the 20 gundo ko faad diya tha bich mai se aur bheema chacha gusai mai chillaye babuji par ankh uthayi h tum logo ne aj koyi jinda ni bachega sabko khol dunga aur aisa kholunga ki dr bi jod ni payega ..tumhari atma bi dubara ni judegi haramzado..aur itna kahte he tut pade phir se ..5 ki shaitan chacha ne matki matlab sir faad diye the...

Wanhi chachi ne pass ke gaanv ke sarpanch ke pass munim ji se phone karwa diya tha hazaro ki bheed bhagi arahi thi lath fawda katar leke

Gunde jo bache huve the unhone bheema ka kahar aur dada ji talwar se gardan kat ti huvi dhekhi toh wo bhag khade huve....
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Charo taraf khun he khun tha 15 gunde bach ke bhag gaye wo bi ghayal the ...aisa laga jaise lal rang ki holi kheli ho abhi yanha....

Dada ji----- bheema rook jao jane do unhe bus bahut huva shant ho jao kyo ki unhe pata tha ki uska gusa bahut bura h...aur unhone kaha shaitan logo ko bulao rasta saaf karne ke liye

Shaitan chacha --- jarurat ni h wo dhekhiye babuji charo taraf se log arahe tractor aur gadiya aur bhag kar...

Gaanv walo 15 minut mai pahuche unhone 10 logo ko tractor ki toli mai se nikal ke phek diya aur bole thakursaab ye log hame bhagte huve dikhe hum pakad ke le aye aur baki 3 ko log ghasit kar dusri taraf se la rahe the aur 2 ko dusri taraf se

Dada ji ---Hmmm inhe wapas daldo gadiyo mai

Gaanv wale ek sath chillane lage bali bali bali chahiye thakur saab inhone hamre bhagwan pe hamla kiya inhe hum jinda ni chodenge aur bheema bi bola babuji bali dijiye inki ya hum cheerfaad karenge inka...

Dadaji--- kuch pal sochke thik h par is hariya ko jinda chodenge chalo mandir maa bhawani ke mandir mai chadegi bali inki

Mandir ke sath mai bali ka sthan h janha bakro ki bali di jati h ....

Dada ji hey ma bhawani rakhsa karna hamari aur hame shakti dena taki in jaise papiyo ki bali deke dharti paap mukt karta rahu.
Thakur saab pe hamle ki khabar se ass pass ke ganvo se hazaro log doude aye the mandir tak .mandir mai jor jor se nare lag rahe the jai ma bhawani jai ma bhawani....aur
Sab gundo ki ek ek kar bali di gayi... Bali dhek ke hariya moot chuka tha 2 baar. Aur mare huve gundo ke mans ko chod diya kutte aur cheel kauvo ke liye

Hariya ke 2 no hath pair ki ungliya aur jeeb kat di gayi sabke samne taki sabko ye yaad rahe....ki anjaam kya hota Thakur jagmal pe hamla karne pe....hariya jinda toh h par murda saaman matalb
WO JINDA...... MURDA JO ....BOLTA H PAR... MARE HUVE SE BI BATTAR HAALAT MAI....

Aj ke liye itna he Sath bane rahiye milte h agle
Agai ab Raj ko 4saal bada ho kar 10 saal ka ho jayega
Very nice & interesting update 👌👌👌💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥
 
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Pichle update mai apne dhekha ki Raj ke man par dadaji ki bato ka gahra asar huva h aur jald he wo pass ki city ke bade school sks Admission karane jayega..

Ab agai...


Raj – main so raha tha aur alaram baj gaya muje roj 5.30 baje uthna hota h aur bhai aur didi ko uthana hota h jo muje apna mante he ni h main chala gaya dono ko uthane aur meri shurwat toh wahi pahle laat khane se aur phir thapad khane se he hoti h aj bi wahi huva aur muje mile dard , nafrat aur ansu jo meri takdeer ban gaye h pichle ek saal se. Sirf Sunday chod ke roj Yahi hota h mere sath. mere pass sivaye ansu ke aur kuch ni h bahar nikalne ke liye. yahi dhuk h ek 8 saal ke bache ka jo kisi ko wo na dikha sakta h aur na jata sakta h.

ye sab kuch Dada ji ko ni pata h kyoki wo subhe 5 baje he ghar se chale jate h sair par aur maine unhe kabi bataya ni darke ki kabhi aur bura na ho mere sath.


Surendra aur babita niche arahe the

Badi chachi--- agaya mere laal aao baitho aj tum dono ke pasand ke aloo ke parathe bane h bus babu ji ajaye

Surendra—maa is manhus ko kyo bhejti ho uthane ko pura din bekar chala jata h isai acha toh naukar rakhlo aur isai ghar se bhar nikalo pata ni isai kyo rakh rakha h na baap ka pata h na maa ka na iske maabaap ki koyi photo h ghar mai ..

Badi chachi—pata ni beta tere Dada aur dadi jane. kahte h ek din hamra vansh ki neev banega.. ma'am Roshan karega

Bade chcha ---- bade chacha surendra se Dada ji kahte h mere chote bhai Sahdev Aur Vidya ka beta h par maine toh bhai ke alawa kisi ko dhekha bi ni h kab usne shadi ki aur koun ladki thi pata ni h wo toh ghar se 18 saal ki umar mai chala gaya tha tab toh kunwara tha..

Raj -man mai ye chacha kya kah rahe Dada ji toh kahte h ki tere papa mummy tuje hospital leke gaye the tab accident huva tha... Par ye chacha aur chachi kya bol rahe h..

Kyoki ye sab Raj ne dadaji ke my se apne dost se baat karte waqt thoda suna tha apne mumy papa ke bare mai..

Choti chachi – kanha ghoom ho gaya h Re Tu ja baith ja chair pe naste ke liye ni toh pitaji hame sunayenge .

Bus aise he tane ate rahe koyi harami kahta toh koyi haramkhore toh koyi manhoos toh koyi kalank ka tikka etc etc.main bus sunta rahta tha aur upar wale se narajgi dhikhata tha par upar wale ne bi aankh band rakhi thi meri kismat pe

Dadi ji—bahar se are huge good morning Nirwaana beta

Main – good morning dadaji aur apni soch se bahar aya thoda sukoon milta h jab Dada ji ko dhekta hu wo pass hote h mere you San tension bhul hats hi. ek bache ka sahra maa aur baap hote h toh wo toh h ni isiliye dadaji h mere sab kuch h meri maa bi aur baap bi .

Dadaji – beta aj apka admission hoga school mai ap surendra aur babita ke sath abse car mai jayenge aur shaitan bheema ko boldo ek gadi hamesa inki car ke sath rahegi school se wapas ane tak

Bade chacha, choti chachi, aur badi chachi aur munimji jo mojud the aj sabki ankhe badii hogayi thi bheema ke naam se

bheema
Intro-Bheem singh ek anath h jisai dada ji 15 saal ki umar se Apne sath mai laye the dada ji ka khass h wafadari ki misal h dada ji ki taraf uthne wali unguli ya goli pahle isai hoke jati h ye bolta ni h sirf kholta h aur jisko kholta h wo dubara ni bolta h


Sab hairani se Dada ji ko dhek rahe the kyoki aj tak surendra aur babita ke sath security ke heesab se koyi ni gaya tha toh is manhoos nikamai anath ke sath kyu kyu kyu......

Main – Mere bolne se sab soch se bahar aye maine kaha Dada ji main kuch mang sakta hu apse


Dada ji – beta apko kabse mangne ki jarurat padh gayi sab apka he toh h aur dhyan se Raj ko dhekne lage.... Aur serious hoke kaha mango..

Main – dadaji main normal student banke jaunga jaise ek aam student school jata h koyi khass sahuliyat nahi chahiye na gaadi na kuch bus ek school bus mai... Ek sadharan student banke.

Dadi sumitra—ye kaisi baat kar rahe ho Raj apko pata h ap Thakur shamsher singh ke pote h log kya kahenge ki 56 gaanv pe raaj karne wale insaan ka pota aise araha h school. izzat gir jayegi hamari..

Bade chacha aur badi chachi . Choti chachi sabi ne sunaya matlb gayan diya izzat status bla bla bla

Dada ji – Dada ji kabse sabki sun rahe thr wo bolo khamosh....😡.... Ho jao sabi . kunwar Raj singh Nirwaan sirf Raj banke kyo jana chahte h ap batayenge muje... Agar apka jawab sahi diya huva toh jarur jaisa ap kahenge waisa hoga warna ni.. Aur gaur se nirwaana ko dhekne lage


Main – kuch soch raha tha aur Dada ji ke puchne pe maine itna he kaha

"RESPECT"


Dada ji--- muskaraye aur unhone ha kah diya

Kisi ko bi ye baat samaj na ayi par Dada ji samaj gaye the ki RESPECT
Khandan se mile wo apki ni h. "RESPECT" wo h jo apne kamayi usi se apki pahchan banti h wahi apko samman dilati h duniya ke bich apka naam banti h aur wo banti h ya milti h apke karmo se...
Aur yanhi se surawat huvi

"RAJ—THE FAMILY'S HERO"


Aj ke liye itna he
Bahut hi umda update hai :claps: :clap3:
 
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