Horror Saya do chudel baheno ki prem kahani-part 2

[Shetan]

waiting new update

Dusre fourm pe ek redar ke sath thodi khatpat ho gai. Mood off tha to kuchh likh nahi pai. Jald hi dhansu update milega. Bas ek din or intjar kare.

 

[Soniya poliwaal]

Dusre fourm pe ek redar ke sath thodi khatpat ho gai. Mood off tha to kuchh likh nahi pai. Jald hi dhansu update milega. Bas ek din or intjar kare.

Siso readers ki baat dil par na lete na bahes karte bas thankyou bola karo baat khatam kiya karo

 

[Shetan]

Siso readers ki baat dil par na lete na bahes karte bas thankyou bola karo baat khatam kiya karo

Sista dekh us inshan ne kya likha he.


Dear writer,
The story seems to be forcefully showing the vampires the enemy of humanity,while in earlier part we have seen the love,delicacy and everything whereas it is shown as if vampire character who were once related with bheema are only hungry for sex and human BLO*D... meanwhile we have seen and read vampires depending on other beings BLO*D...and we have also known that one can get BLO*D from a being or human without harming it much...but you are thinking Kamini and company as a burden... that's why they are portrayed as enemy of humans... living in modern society and Killing humans for BLO*D is not digestive...and another thing the vampire characters don't have hearts...so are they robots...if they don't have hearts then love with Bheema, and Veer is fake...also reeta turning into a vampire hunter...
Sorry writer but this story's second part seems to be fake...it would have been if you hadn't been started...and I request you to not to take this story forward in the way it is going...

 

[Rahul]

chodo bakawas ki baten kuch to log kahenge logon ka kaam hai kahna aap update do yaar

 

[Shetan]

chodo bakawas ki baten kuch to log kahenge logon ka kaam hai kahna aap update do yaar

Bas kal subah tak ka wakt do.

 

[Soniya poliwaal]

Sista dekh us inshan ne kya likha he.


Dear writer,
The story seems to be forcefully showing the vampires the enemy of humanity,while in earlier part we have seen the love,delicacy and everything whereas it is shown as if vampire character who were once related with bheema are only hungry for sex and human BLO*D... meanwhile we have seen and read vampires depending on other beings BLO*D...and we have also known that one can get BLO*D from a being or human without harming it much...but you are thinking Kamini and company as a burden... that's why they are portrayed as enemy of humans... living in modern society and Killing humans for BLO*D is not digestive...and another thing the vampire characters don't have hearts...so are they robots...if they don't have hearts then love with Bheema, and Veer is fake...also reeta turning into a vampire hunter...
Sorry writer but this story's second part seems to be fake...it would have been if you hadn't been started...and I request you to not to take this story forward in the way it is going...

ignore that you post new update

 

[Shetan]

ignore that you post new update

Me parwah nahi kar rahi. Kal tak update de dungi.

 

[Bholu]

writer update likho

 

[Shetan]

writer update likho

Kal ki kosis he

 

[Rahul]

Kal ki kosis he

Update ka intezar