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Ufff uff arhan bhai tabahi tabahi ye wala boht acha haiKhuwahish ho justajo khatam KR di mene
Khud se guftago khatam KR di mene
Aik khuwahish ki mulaqat liye Arhan
Yeh Zindagi bhi zakham KR di mene
Ufff uff arhan bhai tabahi tabahi ye wala boht acha haiKhuwahish ho justajo khatam KR di mene
Khud se guftago khatam KR di mene
Aik khuwahish ki mulaqat liye Arhan
Yeh Zindagi bhi zakham KR di mene
Ho sakta hai ye to aage hi pta chalegaR mujhy lgta hai k durrani ne hi usko marwya hai qk woh freeha ko btayen r wo bhaagi chli aye
Aane wale updates mein clear hoga k kootne wala kon haiDono update jabardast bhai.update ke akhir me shaheer ka koi purana dusman usko buri tarah koot gaya filhaal Jaan bach gayi hospital me dekhte kya hota.
Sahi ho gayaStory continue rakhiye bhai rokna mat update aate rahe jada behtar hai
Baat aap ki bhi sahi hai but masla ye hai k mujhe bhi idea nahi hai kitna time lagega mujhe, isi liye mein soch rha hu weekly 2 updates de ke story ko end kar du phr break le lu writing se taa ke readers ko bhi bura na lage k story beech me chorh diDurru bhai mujhe to pehla option he thek lagta he ke jab tak aap buzi ho tab tak ke lihe story ko band ker do....
Kyon ke aap aagar ek sath do kaam karo ge to na sahi se exam ki teyari ker pao ge aur na hi sahi se story ka plot bana pao ge khham khha sar dard le bhetho ge wo alag ..
Is se acha he ke story ko phelhal rest do aur khud ko exsam men time hamara kya he hum ye samajh len ge ke hum class men aaye howe student bache hen jen ka perhane wala ustad chhoti per he ...
Ho sakta hai but usko jaan se nahi mara tha shaheer neGame ke bare Mai pata nahi , durru ne kabhi nahi kaha woh Konsa game khelta hai par Mera bet hai pubg jarrur khelta Hoga.
Aur saheer Pai hamla to ab ek hi Banda kar sakta hai woh zo Aliya ke dudh chusne gaya tha per durru ne latka diya.uska bhai hi Hoga.
Filhal to weekly 2 updates mere liye convinient hai but lets see aage kya hotaWell as I said earlier if you have enough time then complete it soon otherwise take a break
Dene laga hu thodi dair mewaiting next update
Bas dene laga hu browaiting next update