Ye story bilkul pyaar 100 baar jaisi hai. Isme bhi third person view dwara narrator hi bata raha hai na ki hero khud se apni zindagi mein ghat rahi gatnaye bata raha hai.
Mughe aisi story chaiye jisme narrator ki jagah hero apne sabdo main story bataye jaise saand thi or majority sex stories hoti hai. Na ki pyaar 100 baat jaisi. Jahan bar bar arjun arjun karte rehte hain
@Rahul and @Aanya
Can you suggest some completed hindi stories with Point of view (first person) storytelling so i will feel like the story is following around me?
I want to feel like i am the main character of the story. I am not a writer.
I am currently reading pyaar 100 baar but there are no pov stuff which made me loose all excitement from it.
Are there any story you guys can recommend which is completed and have pov stuff. Specially in hindi.
I loved your story alot really but I hated how you didn't end the story with sheetal and Raj living happy together and making young Raj his and her son. I no more like the story. I really wanted both of them be together. Please make a happy ending this time.
I loved your story alot really but I hated how you didn't end the story with sheetal and Raj living happy together and making young Raj his and her son. I no more like the story. I really wanted both of them be together.