UPDATE8
"tak...takk...tak" MANI ne gate nu knock kitta...
Par kise ne v buha na kholeya...
"tak...takk...tak" MANI ne ekk waari hor , te thodi jor di gate nu khatkhataya...
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BUHA te es waari v ni khulleya... Par andaron ek awaaz "MUMMY gate unlock hi aa Te , MAIN baath le rahi han... Hune 5...
Chalo dosto hun thoda jeha , MANI de...
MAMME di family de baare v jaan lende han...
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MANI de , MAMME di family che 6 member ne...
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2 MAMA-MAMMI , Mamme da apna hi karobaar b...
Matlab paise dhelle di koi kami ni e ehna kol...
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Te baaki 3 kudiyan te 1 munda e...
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WADDIYAN 2 kudiyan de naa...
MANI apne PIYO ton pehla hi ghar pahunch gaya si...
Te ohda PIYO pichhe pichhe , holi holi aa raheya si...
Ohvi Apne dushmana de kaalze fookda hoya...
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Lekin jiven hi oh apniya kudiyan de naal ghar pahuncheya...
Oh te dono kudiya de kadam jitthe si...
Bas otthe di otthe hi jamm gaye...
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Ohna...
TE fer , MANI ne CHANCHAL deyan hattha vichon apni jecket layi...
Te agge vadd ke... Apna muh side vich karde hoye...
TAAKI USNU REET da nanga jis m na vikkhe...
REET nu oh jecket fada ditti...
REET ne chhetti naal jecket paa layi...
Te bhajj ke aa ke , MANI de gale lagg gayi...
Te , MANI deyan...
UPDATE2
MANI bullet nu kise Goli waang dauda reha c...
Chanchal vechaari thand de naal aakkdi hoyi...
osde pichhe baithi hoyi c...
Lekin inni himmat nahi ho rahi c osdi k... MANI nu japphi hi paa lave...
Lekin eh safar jada lamba ni c...
Sirf addhe k minute vich hi...
MANI , ne bullet nu Pind...
UPDATE1
AJJ Somwaar da din si...
Thandan da , Lann nu khada karan waala mausam si...
Te hun dopaher da 12 ku waje da wela si...
Lekin DHUNDH hale v enni jada c k... Kuchh door payi cheej v nai dikh rahi c...
CHANCHAL te REET dowe ajj v collage gayi yan hoyi yan san... Lekin hun tan apniyan ek...
DOSTO eh MAIN etthe 1st PUNJABI story likhan ja reha han.. Eslayi koi galti ho jaawe ta , SORRY..
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DOSTO eh kahani PUNJAB de ek chhote jahe pind de , ikk MUNDE to shuru hundi e..
Jisda naa hunda e MANI GILL.. MANI ikk 6 feet de , lambe chaude sharir da malik si..
Eslayi lokki usnu MANI...