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Happy Birthday @XP 007 bro.

Btw Holi wala addition bahut hi badhiya tha.

Bewkuf log har jagah pe hai. Jinhe kucch pata hota nahi hai aur apni hi sunate rahte hai. Aap khud janti ho , maine kabhi galat ka saath nahi diya balki uska purjor birodh kiya. Bade unche unche hastiyon se bhid gaya. Aur jin logon ne galat kiya hai uska ahshah unhe khud bhi hota hai...bhale...

Hema Malini ji Manoj Kumar ko apne husn ke jaal me fasa rahi hai aur Wo usse dur bhag raha hai. Waise mughe pata hai ki kya post nahi karna chahiye. :D

Pahle movie dekho bhai ! Dharmik movie nahi hai wo. Romantic aur sanyasi ke aad me chupe hue bhediyo ki movie hai. Mast movie hai aur song ka to kahna hi kya !

Manoj Kumar ki movie " Sanyasi " ki tarah :D

Dono bechare aap ke bina " jal bin machali " jaise tadap rahe hai . :icon8:

Ek story likhna hai aap ko aur wo bhi incest... readers aur review ka tension karne ka nahi... padosi gain se bhi kuch logon ko lete aunga. Khas taur par kamdev , Nainu , Gyani ko. :D

Jarur padosi gaon me dekha hoga aap ne :D Btw you are outstanding . Review likhne me aap ka koi substitute nahi. :hug2:

Samagh me hi nahi aa raha..mughe ab har log 2-2 kyon dikh rahe hai. Confused ho gaya hai apan. :icon8:

Bahut jyada confusion hai..ye Vaishnavi har jagah kaise dikh jati hai mujhe. :??:

Lekin bahut antar hota hai na... ladka aur ladki ke byah ke mamle me. Shadi ke baad aksar ladkion ka hi Raj rahta hai. Basarte ladka bahut hi jyada n ho.

Aap ki to shadi ho gayi hai esliye samagh sakta hu par main apni kya kahu ! जब से हुई है शादी , आंसू बहा रहा हूं । आफत गले पड़ी है उसको निभा रहा हूं । :D

Outstanding review tha aap ka. Bahut badhiya likha aapne. Aur same yahi baat Mahi bhi kahegi. :declare:

Kahi aap Manu bhau to nahi hai ?

Dream boy... kanpuriya chokra...No doubt , outstanding writer hai wo. Mughe biswas hai bahut aage jayega wo. Professor sahab ki story abhi tak padha nhi hai maine. Padhta hu enki story.

Main sach kahun to kisi bhi story ke har update par review dena hi nhi chahta. Ek update se story ka maap dand tay nahi kiya ja sakta. Bhale hi wo kitna bhi badhiya likha gaya ho. Elements of story - कथा वस्तु , किरदारों का चरित्र , वातावरण ( भौतिक और आत्मिक ) , संवाद , भाषा शैली और उद्देश्य ।...

Satyug me Raja Harish Chandra ke baad kalyug me maine hi awtar liya hai " Satyabadi " ka. Kabhi bhi jhuth nahi kaha esiliye sabhi jagah meri kirkiri ho jati hai. Patni bhi mere es aadat se tang aa chuki hai. :banghead: Bahut problem ho raha hai.. net bich bich me chala ja raha hai.

Bahut jyada problem tha. But abb wapas jaa raha hu. Par train me bhi network problem hai. Waise bahut hi badhiya parform kiya hamare writers ne. 29 story USC me post ho gayi. Koshish karunga sabhi kahaniyan padhne ki aur kuchh response dene ke.