Incest Aashiqui 2 ( A Saga of Thriller, Hate, Love, Romance, Friendship, Betrayel and Revenge )continue

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Wo koi masla ni per update regular hn r ab is k 2 ni 3 update de diya kro plz dusri story toh ab khatam ho chuki ae is liye Keh ra hn
Yara scene aisa hai k mein response dekh k chal rha hu. Is story ko complete karne mein mujhe 3/4 saal lag gaye. 6 saal pehle iska part 1 post kiya tha meine, uske baad 3/4 saal me ye complete hua. Kyunke mein busy ho gaya tha life me phr bhi time nikal k likh rha tha. To agar meine itni mehnat ki hai to response bhi waisa hi expect karunga.

Ab mere reguler readers 10 bhi nahi hai agar mein ye story 3 updates per day k hisab se post karunga to 1 ya derh mahine me end hoga. Aur views iske 1 lac bhi nahi honge to mere liye aik tarah se zaya hi ho jayega. Kyunke pichle site pe is story k part 1 pe 31 lac views the. Mein basically aage aane wale stories k liye base bana rha hu. Ab jo Aashiqui 3 mein aaj kal likh rha hu woh in dono se ziada interesting hai aur uspe mehnat ziada lagi hai. To jab mein woh start karu tab tak mein chahta hu meri achi khaasi readership bani ho.

Haan agar mere atleast 30 reguler readers hote hain is story pe to mein 3 updates per day de bhi sakta hu. Even meine socha tha 50 updates k baad 1 update per day dunga. But ab soch rha hu 2 hi sahi hai.

Rahi baat dusri story ki to mere paas aur bhi stories hain aur unko post karne ka soch rha hu. Bas suggestion chahiye us havale se. Woh mein aa k updates k baad maangunga. I hope tum samajh gaye ho mere situation ko.
 
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Ladka 1 :- kyu ye tumhe tang kar raha hai ? Fareeha :- tumhe kisi ne bulaya hai kya ?

Ladka 2 :- ladki chedhte ho haan be

Aur shaheer k sar pe marta hai .. jisse shaheer ko ghussa ata hai ..shaheer ghusse se unko dekhte hue kehta hai

Shaheer :- apni jagah pe jaa ke beth jao .. Ye meri behn hai .. Humare maamlon me baat na karo to acha hai

Ladka :- Behn hai to kya hua public me chedoge .. Tang karoge .. haan saale .. aur humey dhamki de rahe ho ..

Woh ladka shaheer ko mukka marne hi laga tha .. shaheer uska haath pakadhta hai aur khada hoke .. sidha aik mukka uske moon pe aur aik Laath uske seene pe maarta hai .. jisse woh door jaa ke girta hai .. iske baad woh ladke dar jaate hai aur waha se bhaag jate hai .. kyu k woh samajh gaye the k shaheer ko marna unke bas ki baat nahi ..Woh ladka jisko shaheer ne mara tha jaate hue shaheer se kehta hai

Ladka :- dekh lunga be saale tumhe

Shaheer :- aaja kursi kheench sath beth .. aur fursat se dekh jab tak me lunch karta hu..


Ladka :- tujhe me nehi chodhunga saale .. bache ga nahi tu

Shaheer :- Pehle pakadh to le be ..

Uske baad woh ladka waha se chala jata hai .. aur shaheer bhi tek laga k chair pe beth jata hai jab tak unka order nahi aata .. Abki baar Fareeha shaheer se dari nahi thi .. kyu k usey shaheer se kuch is tarah ka hi umeed tha .. Order aane k baad dono khane lagte hai .. Fareeha se chup raha nahi jaa raha tha woh shaheer se kehti hai

Fareeha :- Bas mauqa milna chahiye ladhne k liye .. Ghunda kahi ka ..

Shaheer aik nazar uski taraf dekhta hai .. aur kuch der sochne k baad kehta hai .
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Shaheer :- Mall se kisi ache se doctor k paas jana padhega ..

Fareeha :- woh kyu ?

Shaheer :- Mujhe tum kisi bhi angle se normal nahi lagti .. tum waqi pagal ho ..

Ye sun k fareeha thoda dar jati hai .. woh sochti hai k shaheer waqi usey doctor k paas le jayega .. aur woh jaldi se bolti hai

Fareeha :- nahi nahi mein koi pagal nahi hu .. mujhe nahi jana kisi doctor k paas .. doctor k paas to tumhe jana chahiye .. Pagal to tum ho ..

Shaheer ye sun k bs smile hi karta hai .. aur apna Burger khane lagta hai .. lunch k baad Shaheer payment karta hai .. Aur phir shaheer aik accesseries k shop ki taraf jata hai .. ye dekh k Fareeha samajh jati hai k shaheer uske liye phone lene jaa raha hai .. woh jaldi se shaheer ko rok k kehti hai

Fareeha :- mujhe nahi chahiye phone .. ab chalte hai waise bhi kafi kharacha ho gaya aaj ..

Shaheer sochta hai k subah se usey taane hi maar rahi hai .. thoda isey bhi jhatka bhi jhatka dena chahiye .. shaheer usse kehta hai

Shaheer :- phone k sath laptop bhi lena hai .. taa ke murder 3 jaise moveis tum apne room me beth k dekh sako ..

Ye sunte hi fareeha ka chehra sharam se laal ho gaya tha .. woh kehna chah rahi thi k woh nahi dekh rahi thi .. per woh keh nahi paa rahi thi .. kher phir woh shaheer k peeche peeche chup chap shop me jaati hai ..waha shaheer uske liye 1 apple iphone aur apple ka laptop leta hai ..

Phir dono waha se nikal k bahir ate hai .. aur lift ki taraf jane hi lage the ... k peeche se shaheer ko koi awaz deta hai .. ye awaz sun k dono peeche murhte hai .. aur peeche murhte hai to waha Cornol shah aur uski wife the .. Shaheer to unko janta tha .. magar Fareeha nahi .. to woh soch rahi thi k ye log kon hai .. Dono shaheer k paas ate hai aur shaheer k sath Fareeha ko dekh k pehle cornol kehta hai

Cornol shah :- wah bhai gf .. aur humse milaya bhi nahi .. aur sidha mall shoping k liye ..

Abhi shaheer jawab deta usse pehle hi Mrs Shah kehti hai

Mrs Shah :- waise shaheer tumne mere sath dokha kiya hai .. mujhse shadi ka waada kar ke gf hi bana liya .. aur gf bante hi kutta ban gaye ho .. kabhi apne liye itna shoping nahi kiya tha jitna iske liye kiya hai ..

Fareeha ye sun k hairan thi .. aur sab se badi wajah hairani ki Mrs shah ki baat thi .. woh soch rahi thi k ye log kon hai .. tabhi shaheer kehta hai

Shaheer :- haahha nahi cornol shah aap ghalat soch rahe hai ... ye meri gf nahi sister hai Fareeha .. and Mrs shah aap ne ye kaise socha k mein dokha karunga .. mein to ab bhi intizar me hu k kab Cornol shah ko mujhpe taras ayega ..

Ye sunke dono ko apne ghalti ka ehsaas hota hai .. aur Fareeha ko sorry kehte hai .. phir shaheer Cornol shah se poochta hai

Shaheer :- Cornol shah waise aap yaha kya kar rahe ho mere gf k sath ...

Col. shah :- bhayi tumhari gf zid kar rahi thi .. to movie dekhne aye the hum .. abhi movie dekh k aa rahe hai ..

Shaheer :- hmm gf meri .. aur movie dekhne col. shah k sath.. wah kya baat ..

Mrs Shah :- Shaheer aisa karo .. aaj dinner pe humare ghar aa jao .. Fareeha ko le k .. waise Fareeha badi khamosh bachi hai .. abhi tak aik lafz bhi nai boli hai ..

Shaheer :- haan kuch ziada hi khamosh hai ..kuch bolti hi nahi hai

Ye shaheer ne tanziya tor pe kaha tha .. Jo fareeha samajh gayi thi .. aur daant pees rahi thi .. Mrs shah dubara kehti hai

Mrs shah :- waise tumne bataya nahi k dinner pe aaoge ya nahi ..

Shaheer :- Ab aap bulao aur mein na aau .. Aisa kabhi hua hai .. Aa jayenge raat ko.. Chalo aap log enjoy karo .. hum chalte hai ..

Phir unko bye bol k dono bahir ate hai .. Shaheer k hathon me shoping bag bhare hue the .. aur kuch Fareeha k hathon me the .. Fareeha moon phula k shaheer k peeche peeche chal rahi thi .. bahir aa ke dono shoping bag gadi k diggi me rakhte hai .. aur andar beth jate hai .. shaheer gadi start karta hai aur ghar ki taraf leta hai ..
 
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Phir unko bye bol k dono bahir ate hai .. Shaheer k hathon me shoping bag bhare hue the .. aur kuch Fareeha k hathon me the .. Fareeha moon phula k shaheer k peeche peeche chal rahi thi .. bahir aa ke dono shoping bag gadi k diggi me rakhte hai .. aur andar beth jate hai .. shaheer gadi start karta hai aur ghar ki taraf leta hai ..

Shaheer soch hi raha tha .. K fareeha abhi tak chup kaise hai ..Shaheer aik baar uske chehre ki or dekhta hai .. aur samajh jata hai k boht ghusse me hai .. Phir chup chap driving karne lagta hai .. Thodi hi aage gaya tha k Fareeha keh hi deti hai

Fareeha :- Ye kon log the ? aur tum us aurat ko gf kyu keh rahe the ?

Shaheer ki ye sunte hi hassi chhoot jati hai .. Jisey dekh k fareeha aur bhi chidh jaati hai .. aur ghusse se kehti hai

Fareeha :- mein ne kya koi joke sunaya hai .. Jo aise hass rahe ho ..

Shaheer :- mein yehi soch raha tha k tum ab tak kaise chup ho .. Woh mere dost hai ya yu keh lo mere family hai .. Aur woh aurat meri gf hai ..

Fareeha :- Itni badi umar ki aurat gf hai tumhari .. Haan koi achhi ladki pategi nahi tmse ..

Shaheer :- tumhein isse kya .. Meri zindagi me jisko apni gf banau ..

Phir aise hi behes karte karte ghar pohonch jate hai ..sam gadi park karta hai .. thodi dair me Fareeha k room k furnitures waghera aa gaye .. to raat tak fareeha k room ko hi set karte rahe dono .. Room ko set karne k baad shaheer usey ready hone k liye kehta hai .. aur khud apne room me jata hai aur fresh ho ke ready ho ke bahir aata hai .. fareeha bhi ready ho chuki thi .. Phir dono gadi me beth nikal jate hai Cornol shah k ghar ki taraf .. Thodi dair me ghar pohonch jate hai .. aur shaheer gadi park karta hai .. aur dono andar jate hai .. cornol shah hall me hi bethe tv dekh rahe the .. Shaheer ko dekh k khade hote hai aur kehte hai

Cornol shah :- Kuch ziada hi late nahi ho gaye tum ?

Shaheer :- Fareeha k liye room set karne me busy tha .. abhi free ho ke aagaye .. waise meri gf kaha hai ?

Cornol shah :- tum logon k liye khana bana rahi hai ..

Shaheer :- Acha chalo Fareeha phir tum unke paas jao .. Cornol shah chalo phir hum chhat ki taraf jaate hai ..

Cornol shah samajh jata hai .. aur fridge se aik bottle nikalta hai sharaab ki aur aik glass k sath shaheer k peeche peeche chal deta hai .. Chhat pe jaa ke dono bethte hai .. aur shaheer peg bana k peene lagta hai .. Cornol shah poochta hai

Cornol Shah :- Waise ye fareeha tumhari step sister hai na .. ye tumahre sath kuch jami nahi ye baat ...

Sam phir shuru se unko aakhir tak batata hai .. K kya kya hua aur sab kuch sunne k baad Cornol shah kehta hai

Cornol shah :- Acha kiya isey apne paas laa ke .. shayd ab tumhe jeene ki wajah mil jaye ..

Shaheer :- Huh Jeene ki wajah aur woh ?.. Nafrat karta hu mein usse ..Majboori hai ye meri jo usko apne sath rakha hai .. Warna kabhi uski taraf dekhta bhi nahi ..

Abhi Cornol shah kuch kehta .. fareeha waha aati hai aur dinner k liye bulati hai .. Phir Cornol shah aur shaheer uthte hai aur neeche jaate hai .. Shaheer jhoomte jhoomte jaa ke chair pe bethta hai .. Phir khana start karte hai .. Shaheer khaa nahi raha tha bs jab bhi niwala apne moon k pas le jata .. Hilne ki wajah se gir jata adha se ziada .. Abhi Mrs shah ye dekh k shaheer se spoon leti hai .. aur usey khilaane lagti hai .. abhi woh khila hi rahi thi k uska phone bjta hai .. Sam apne jeb me hath daal ke phone nikalta hai .. aur aadh khuli aankhon se dekhta hai .. call " Big Boss" ka hota hai .. sam call recieve karta hai

Big Boss :- SK aaj kisi ne mere bete ko **** mall me pakadh k maara hai .. Mein pata kar ke tumhe uske info bhejta hu.. zara tum usko batana k usne kya ghalti kiya hai ..

Shaheer :- Shukar karein zinda ghar aa gya hai .. Agar agli baar aisi harkat karega to zinda gaadh dunga ..

Big Boss :- Matlab ?

Shaheer :- Saala mere behn ko chedh raha tha .. Shukar karein zinda chodh diya .. agli bar aisa kuch kiya to sochunga nahi k aap ka beta hai .. sidha maar dunga jaan se ..

Phir phone cut kar ke table pe rakhta hai .. Sab uski taraf dekh rahe the .. Cornol shah poochta hai

Cornol Shah :- Kon tha shaheer ?

Shaheer :- Big Boss

Cornol shah :- tumhein unke aise baat nahi karna chahiye tha .. agar woh tumhare khilaaf ho gaye to koi tumhe bacha nahi sakta ..

Shaheer :- Bacha nahi hu mein .. Aur woh ab konsa mere sath hai ..

Cornol Shah :- Phir bhi thoda hosh se kam lo kabhi .. Darta hu kahi tumhe bhi kho na du .. Aryan shah ki tarah .. tumhara ye josh dekh k uski yaad ati hai mujhe aksar ..

Shaheer :- Mein aryan shah nahi hu .. jo in chootiyon k haathon marunga .. Agar in logon ne aisa kuch socha bhi to ..inko aisi maut dunga k ruh kaanp jayegi ..

Cornol shah samajh gaya tha k baat bigadhti jaa rahi hai .. Uper se shaheer nashe me hai .. to fareeha k samne kuch bak na dein .. isliye woh topic change karta hai .. Dinner k baad thodi dair waha rehte hai dono .. Aur phir nikal jate hai ghar ki aur .. Fareeha drive kar rahi thi .. aur shaheer peeche seat me so raha tha .. ghar pohonch k Fareeha usey pakdh k andar le jati hai .. aur uske bed pe sula k bahir aati hai .. aur apne room me jaa ke soti hai ..
 
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Suggestion Needed !
Jaise k aap logo ko pata hai meri dusri story Bewafa (Hum ya Woh ?) complete ho gayi hai mein abhi aik aur story start karne ka soch rha hu. To usi hawale se suggestion chahiye k konsi story pehle start karu.
  1. Romance - Mere paas 2/3 completed short stories hain jo romantic genre mein hai ya yu kahein k non erotic hain.
  2. Adult + Thriller - Based on Indian setting. Jisme Sex bharpoor milega aur sath mein thriller bhi. But scene aisa hai ye sirf half likha hai meine. Aur Aashiqui 3 k baad isko continue karunga. Agr kehte ho ye start karu to jitna likha hai meine wohh post karne k baad mein phr break lunga aur jb complete karunga tab dubara continue karunga. So mujhe bhi nahi pata isko complete karne mein kitna time lage.
Ab sab apne apne reviews do k konsi story pehle start karu yahan ?
 

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