Incest Aashiqui 2 ( A Saga of Thriller, Hate, Love, Romance, Friendship, Betrayel and Revenge )continue

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Bhai aik story thi ****** pe wahan pe aik writer ne 3 salon main Sirf 130 update diye r buht zaleel Kiya us k bd Sirf aik ap he ho Jise main review deta hn q k ap buht acha likh rhy ho so plz wait na krwaya kro
Aisa na socho kisi ke karan aap sabka faisla na karo bhai mere aap jao jahan marji wahan comment karo koi aapko na pasand ho to mat jana fir ye duniya yahan har tarah ke log
 
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Bhai aik story thi ****** pe wahan pe aik writer ne 3 salon main Sirf 130 update diye r buht zaleel Kiya us k bd Sirf aik ap he ho Jise main review deta hn q k ap buht acha likh rhy ho so plz wait na krwaya kro

Chalo aaj khul k baat kar hi lete hain jaan mere.

Sab se pehle aik cheez batata hu, jo Rahul ko bhi pta hai. Ye story mein pehle jis forum pe likh chuka hu, wahan iske aik update pe 30/35 hazar views aate the aur pehle month hi ye story of the month bana tha. Jab meine yaha ye story start kiya to mere zehen me us jitna acha response to nahi tha but itna zarur expect kar rha tha k jo readers mere ban chuke hain woh atleast reguler honge but aisa nahi hua.

Regulerity ki baat karu to first update se ab tak sirf Rahul aur Sonia hi regulerly review de rhe hain. Aur tum sab koi na koi update pe review miss kar dete ho.

Uper wale post pe tumne bola k tum dubara chale jaaoge, kya lagta hai meine notice nahi kiya tha k tum ghayab rahe ho aur mere update na dene pe wapas aaye ho ? Jis din meine updates 2 se kam kar ke 1 kiya us din se tum ghayab ho, magar jab tum kisi din review nahi dete the tab mein to ghayab nahi hua ? Sochne wali baat hai na.

Pehle aisa hota tha k mein chaahe kitna bhi busy hou raat 12:30 pe update de ke hi sota tha, ab readers k response k baad mera dil hi uth chuka hai tbh. Jab time hota hai to update deta hu, nahi hota to zabardasti time nahi nikalta jaise pehle karta tha.

Aaj kal update na dene ka reason ye ha k mein apne city se wapas islamabad aa chuka hu, aur settle hone mein thoda time mlag rha hai. Aur dusri T mere family me shadi thi to thoda Tha isme. Ab koshish hai k daily update du waise bjo end pe hai story ka first part.
 
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Chalo aaj khul k baat kar hi lete hain jaan mere.

Sab se pehle aik cheez batata hu, jo Rahul ko bhi pta hai. Ye story mein pehle jis forum pe likh chuka hu, wahan iske aik update pe 30/35 hazar views aate the aur pehle month hi ye story of the month bana tha. Jab meine yaha ye story start kiya to mere zehen me us jitna acha response to nahi tha but itna zarur expect kar rha tha k jo readers mere ban chuke hain woh atleast reguler honge but aisa nahi hua.

Regulerity ki baat karu to first update se ab tak sirf Rahul aur Sonia hi regulerly review de rhe hain. Aur tum sab koi na koi update pe review miss kar dete ho.

Uper wale post pe tumne bola k tum dubara chale jaaoge, kya lagta hai meine notice nahi kiya tha k tum ghayab rahe ho aur mere update na dene pe wapas aaye ho ? Jis din meine updates 2 se kam kar ke 1 kiya us din se tum ghayab ho, magar jab tum kisi din review nahi dete the tab mein to ghayab nahi hua ? Sochne wali baat hai na.

Pehle aisa hota tha k mein chaahe kitna bhi busy hou raat 12:30 pe update de ke hi sota tha, ab readers k response k baad mera dil hi uth chuka hai tbh. Jab time hota hai to update deta hu, nahi hota to zabardasti time nahi nikalta jaise pehle karta tha.

Aaj kal update na dene ka reason ye ha k mein apne city se wapas islamabad aa chuka hu, aur settle hone mein thoda time mlag rha hai. Aur dusri T mere family me shadi thi to thoda Tha isme. Ab koshish hai k daily update du waise bjo end pe hai story ka first part.
Ekdam sahi baat kahi aapne
 
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Bhai mere ek baat baat kahunga ho sake to xp time ko bhul jao wo bahut bada forum tha aur wahan bahut log the deshi videshi sab the wahan sumo kisi top ke writer ko ban karne ek second bhi nai sonchta tha aur uske saport me jo aaye unko bhi lapet deta tha yahan ek ek member se hum itna respect se baat karte jitna wahan ke council member bhi na karte upar se kai choti site hain alag hai sabke bich me ek pahchan banna hum kisi ko tab tak bardast karte jab tak kar sakte hain uske baad idhar google ki kuch nautanki chal rahi ishiliye views kam aa rahe abhi aur hum jo show ho raha wo original hai usme ham koi ched chaad nai karte hain to baat ye hai jo hai chala rahe jab tak chala payegen ummid hai ek din hum kaamyaab hongen
 
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Bhai mere ek baat baat kahunga ho sake to xp time ko bhul jao wo bahut bada forum tha aur wahan bahut log the deshi videshi sab the wahan sumo kisi top ke writer ko ban karne ek second bhi nai sonchta tha aur uske saport me jo aaye unko bhi lapet deta tha yahan ek ek member se hum itna respect se baat karte jitna wahan ke council member bhi na karte upar se kai choti site hain alag hai sabke bich me ek pahchan banna hum kisi ko tab tak bardast karte jab tak kar sakte hain uske baad idhar google ki kuch nautanki chal rahi ishiliye views kam aa rahe abhi aur hum jo show ho raha wo original hai usme ham koi ched chaad nai karte hain to baat ye hai jo hai chala rahe jab tak chala payegen ummid hai ek din hum kaamyaab hongen

Jani mujhe Forum se Forum k Admin team se koi masla nahi hai aur na hi mein blame kar rha hu. Jo xp k views ka meine mention kiya woh sirf ye batane k liye tha k I was used to with that type of support aur mein yahan pe waisa expect nahi kar rha hu. Ab ye forum k sath bhi ziadti hogi agar mein 30K views per update pe expect karu to aur expect karna bhi meri bewaqufi hogi. Well in short pichle post mein meine gila readers se kiya tha na ki forum se. :dost:
 
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Saira :- Shaheer shadi kab kar rhe hai hum?

Shaheer breakfast kar rha tha ... Ye sunte hi niwala uske gale mein atak gaya ... Aur woh khaansne lagta hai ... Saira jaldi se pani deti hai usey ... Shaheer pani pee k thoda normal hone k baad kehta hai ...

Shaheer :- kaisi shadi yar ? ... Aur hum shadi karenge ye kisne kaha tumhein ?

Ye sunte hi saira ko boht bada dhajka laga ... Usey umeed nahi thi shaheer se aise jawab ki ... Woh hairangi se kehti hai ...

Saira :- tum ne hi kaha tha ... K tum mujhse pyar karte ho ... Jab meine I Love You kaha tha tumhein ...

Shaheer :- Yar that doesnt mean k i love you and i will marry you ... I like you as a friend thats it ...

Saira ko lag rha tha ... K shaheer uske hath se nikal jayega ... Aur shaheer ki baatein sun kar uske aankho mein aansu aate hai ... Aur woh rot3 hue kehti hai ...

Saira :- Mujhe laga tha k tum mujhe samjhoge ... Tumne mujhe maaf kiya hoga ... Magar tumhare baatein dekh kar pata chal gaya k mein ghalat thi ... Aik tum hi reh gaye the mere life mein mera apna ... Aur aaj tumne bhi mujhe apnane manah kar diya ... Mein chali jaungi tumhare zindagi se door ... Tab khush rehna tum...

Ab shaheer confuse ho gaya tha khud k woh kya kare ... Saira ko akele chodhna bhi nahi chahta tha ... But usey apna bhi nahi paa rha tha ... Woh uska pehla pyar tha but ab shaheer k dil mein pehle jaisa pyar nahi rha tha uske liye .. Shaheer yehi sab soch rha tha ... K saira uth k waha se chali jaati hai apne room mein ... Aur door lock karti hai... Shaheer usey disturb nahi karta ... Aur khud sochne lagta hai saira k bare mein ...

Shaheer sochta hai k 2 3 saal mein usey shadi karna hi hai ... Jab woh 28 29 saal ka hoga ... Aur shadi kisi bahar wale aur anjaan se karne se behtar hai ... K saira se kare ... Shaheer ne aisa kyu socha tha ... Ye shaheer ka koi chaal tha ... Ya waki shaheer uske sath shadi karna chahta tha ... Ye sirf usey hi pta tha ... Shaheer door knock karta hai saira ka ... Saira andar se rote hue jawab deti hai ...

Saira :- Shaheer mujhe akela chorh do plz ... Mujhe aur kitna dukh doge ... Aur kitna rulaoge .. Mujhe akela chodh do khuda k waste ...

Shaheer :- Saira dekho meri baat suno ... Mujhe thoda sochne k liye time do ... Abhi tum bhi itni badi nahi huyi aur mein bhi ... Uper se business ko bhi sambhalna hai ... To shadi mein abhi time hai ... So abhi shadi ki baat bhool jao plz ...

Saira ne jab ye suna to kahi na kahi ... Isme uski jeet nazar aa rhi thi ... Saira khushi se uchhalte hue aati hai ... Aur door khol k shaheer ko hug kar ke ... Khushi se kehti hai ...

Saira :- I love you i love you i love you so much shaheer ...

Shaheer bhi usey kas ke hug karta hai ... Shaheer k chehre pe devil wali smile thi ... Aaj barso baad uske chehre pe SK wala look dekhne ko mila tha ... Pata nahi chal rha tha k ye jeet Saira ki hai ... Ya fir SK ki ... Khair thodi dair mein dono alag hote hai ... Aur sofe pe beth jaate hai ... Shaheer tv dekhte hue saira se poochta hai ...

Shaheer :- Yar ye fareeha kaha hai ... Dikh nahi rahi hai ... Itna sab hone k baad bhi room se na nikli ...

Saira :- Pata nahi bahar gayi hogi kahi ... Apne room mein to nahi thi ...

Shaheer :- Shayad office gayi hogi... Call kar ke poochta hu...

Fir shaheer apna phone nikal k fareeha ko call milata hai... Ring jata hai magar fareeha pick nahi karti call... Shaheer thoda pareshan ho jata hai... Aur office k no. pe call kar ke poochta hai... To pata chalta hai k kisi meeting mein busy hai...

Khair fir shaheer bhi break fast karne lagta hai... Aur beech beech mein Saira se baatein bhi kar rha tha... Break fast khatam kar ke shaheer tv on kar ke uske samne beth jata hai... Aur saira bartan kitchen mein le jaati hai... Tabhi fareeha ki call ata hai shaheer ko... Aur shaheer call attend karta hai...

Fareeha :- Sorry yar woh meeting mein busy thi... To call attend nahi kar payi... Batao kaise phone kiya...

Shaheer :- Arey kuch nahi yar... Bas breakfast table pe dikhi nahi... To socha call kar ke pooch lu subah subah date pe to na nikal gayi madam...

Fareeha :- Hayyee shauk to mujhe boht hai... Subah subah date pe jane ka... But ab kya karu sara business mujhe hi to dekhna hota hai... Tumhein to sone se fursat nahi hai...

Shaheer fareeha ki baat sun k smile karte hue kehta hai. ..

Shaheer :- Ziada taunt maarne ki zarurat nahi hai... Kal se mein bhi office aunga reguler...

Fareeha :- chalo dair aye drust aye... Acha hoga tum bhi sath hogw yaha to... Chalo shaheer sham ko milte hai... Mein thodi busy hu abhi...

Shaheer :- Ok shaam ko aa jaunga lene...

Shaheer phone cut karta hai... To saira bhi aake uske sath beth jaati hai... Aur dono tv dekhne lagte hai... Dopeher tak tv dekhte hai... Aur lunch k liye bahar chale jaate hai...

Bahar lunch kar ke aur thoda ghoom fir k wapas aa jate hai... Ghar aa ke phr play station pe game khelne lagte hai dono sham tak... Sham ko fir shaheer fareeha ko lene office jata hai... Abhi raste mein hi hota hai k uska phone bajne lagta hai... Phone utha k dekhta hai to call col shah ki hoti hai... Shaheer call attend karta hai...

Col Shah :- Kaha ghayab ho janab? Aaj kal to koi lift hi nahi kara rahe...

Shaheer :- Col sahab bas ghoomne mein busy tha... Kal hi aya hu... Aaj ane wala tha aap ki taraf...

Col Shah :- chalo fir dinner k liye yehi aa jao... Kuch baatein bhi karna hai tumse. .. Shaheer :- Ok fir raat ko milte hai...

Aur shaheer phone cut karta hai... Office k parking mein pohonch chuka tha shaheer bhi... Fareeha ko missed call dwta hai... To woh bhi neeche aa jati hai. ..aur gadi mein bethti hai... Shaheer gadi aage badhate hue kehta hai...

Shaheer :- Aur kaisa raha aaj ka din?

Fareeha :- Yar thaka dene wala din tha aaj poocho mat... Meeting aur fir pending kaam... Thak gayi puri tarah...

Shaheer :- Chalo dinner k baad hi sona ab... Col shah ne dinner pe bulaya hai...

Fareeha :- Yar tum dono chale jaao... Mein boht thaki huyi hu... Mein aram karungi ghar mein... Shaheer :- Koi bahana nahi... Chup chap ana...

Fir dono idhar udhar ki baatein karte hue ghar pohonch jaate hai... Ghar pohonch kar shaheer saira ko bhi ready hone k liye kehta hai... Woh bhi ready hone chali jaati hai... Thodi dair mein dono ready ho ke aate hai…
 
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Fir dono idhar udhar ki baatein karte hue ghar pohonch jaate hai... Ghar pohonch kar shaheer saira ko bhi ready hone k liye kehta hai... Woh bhi ready hone chali jaati hai... Thodi dair mein dono ready ho ke aate hai...

Fir teeno gadi mein beth k nikal jaate hai col shah k ghar ki taraf... Thodi dair mein col shah k ghar pohonch jaate hai... Col shah aur uske wife se miltw hai sab... Shaheer saira ko unse introduce karata hai... Apna old friend bata ke...

Saira ka naam sun kar usey pehchan gaye the dono ... K ye wahi saira hai jisne shaheer ko dokha diya tha ... Aur hairan bhi the k shaheer ne itni asaani se kaise maaf kiya usey ... Jisse woh sabse ziada nafrat karta tha .... Shaheer aur Col shah aik sath beth jaate hai.... Col shah ki wife saira aur fareeha aik sath bethtw hai... Aur baatein karne lagte hai... Col Shah shaheer se kehta hai...

Col Shah :- Sunne mein aya hai aaj agency ne tumhein investigate kiya hai. ..

Shaheer :- Haan subah subah dmaagh paka diya saalo ne.... Acting IO se investigate kara rhe the #@#@!..

Col shah :- Shaheer sach kahu to ghalti tumhari thi.... Phir bhi tumne waha sab se badtameexi kiya...

Shaheer :- Bas subah ka time tha... Isliye thoda ghussa aa gaya... Aur badtameezi kiya.... But chief investigation officer ne last mein mujhe dhamki de diya... Dil to kiya saale ko wahi thok du... Per usi waqt injection de k sula diya mujhe...

Col shah :- Thoda ehtiyat se shaheer.... Tum ache se jante ho intellegence agency se panga lena achi baat nahi hai... Woh to acha hai k col tufail aur baki k tumhare dost captains tumhare side hai... Isliye bache hue ho... Warna tum to millitary officer bhi nahi ho... Tumhein maarne se unhein koi nuksan nahi hoga... Aur jis tarah marenge kisi ko pata nahi chalega ye katl hai... Accident hi samjhenge sab.. Isliye keh rha hu thoda sambhal k...

Shaheer :- chodho col sahab ye baatein... Kuch aur sunao aap. ..

Col shah :- Aur to aisa scene hai k meri posting ho gayi hai... Parso report karna hai... Sirf kal ka din hai mere paas yaha...

Shaheer :- Ohh ye to boht buri khabar hai... I think opp. zone pe hi posting ho gi...

Col shah :- opp. zone pe to nahi but puri unit ki posting ho chuki hai border area pe... So tumhein to pata hai borders ki situation aaj kal k...

Shaheer :- Yupp ye to hai... Chalo acha hai kal humari taraf se fare well aap k liye... Dinner k liye ghar ayega aap dono...

Khair aise hi baatein karte karte dinner ka time hota hai... To sab mil k dinner karte hai... Aur thodi dair aur gappey lagane k baad waha se nikal jaate hai ghar k liye... Ghar aate hi sab apne apne rooms mein jaa ke so jaate hai... Agli subah shaheer routine k hisab se 5 baje jaagta hai... Aur fresh hone washroom chala jata hai... 15 20 min mein bath le k fresh ho ke bahar nikalta hai... Aur kitchen mein jaa ke breakfast banane lagta hai...

Fredge se bread nikal k unko garam karta hai... Aur fir apne aur fareeha k liye omlet banane lagta hai... Tabhi fareeha bhi aa jati hai fresh ho k kitchen mein.. Woh kapde pehen k ready hochuki thi... Shaheer ko dekh k usse kehti hai...

Fareeha :- Tum abhi tak ready nahi hue? ... Jaldi jaao aur 3 piece suit pehen lo..... Aaj 1 meeting bhi hai... Ye mein karti hu...

Shaheer waha se apne room mein ata hai... Aur apne suits dekhne lagta hai... K konsa pehne... Tabhi usey uska black suit dikhta hai... Jo uspe fitting me ata tha.... Shaheer usey nikalta hai aur jaldi se pehenta hai... Black pent aur white shirt tha... Uspe black colour ka blazzer.... Shaheer aik black tie nikalta hai aur usey bandhne lagta hai gale mein... Usse nahi ban rha tha tie..... Usne pehle kabhi tie
bandha nahi tha isliye...

Fareeha door pe khadi muskurate hue shaheer ko dekh rhi thi.... Uske chehre pe smile tha but aankhein nam the... Shaheer mirror k samne khada tha... Fareeha chalte hue uske paas aati hai... Aur uske samne khadi ho k tie bandhte hue kehti hai...

Fareeha :- Bilkul baba pe gaye ho tum bhi... Itne bade business man the..... But tie bandhna nahi ata tha unko bhi... Hamesha unhein sikhati thi aur kehti thi.... K aap seekh lo mere jaane k baad kon bandhega aap k liye... Magar mere jaane se pehle hi woh chale gaye.... Tum bhi seekh lo bandhna...

Tie bandh chuki thi... Aur ye kehte hue fareeha k aankho se aansu uske gaalo pe behte hai... Shaheer apne dono haath uske gaal pe rakh k uske aankho se ansu saaf karta hai.... Aur uske maathe pe kiss karte hue kehta hai...

Shaheer :- Mujhe seekhne ki kya zarurat hai... Tum jo ho baandhne k liye...

Ye sunte hi fareeha phoot phoot k rone lagi... Aur shaheer k seene pe sar rakh k.... Rote hue shaheer se kehti hai...

Fareeha :- Baba bhi hamesha yehi kehte the...

Shaheer bhi usey hug kiye hue uske sar pe haath pher rha tha.... Thodi dair mein fareeha chup hoti hai... Aur shaheer se alag ho ke kehti hai...

Fareeha :- chalo ab breakfast karte hai... Aik to late ho rhe dusra mere rone se tumhara shirt kharab na ho jaye...

Shaheer bhi smile karte hue uske sath room se bahar ata hai... Aur dono breakfast table pe beth k breakfast karne lagte hai... Thodi dair mein break fast karne k baad dono bahar aate ha... Aur shaheer k gadi mein beth k office k liye nikal jaate hai...

Aaj mausam boht romantic tha... Badal aaye hue the asmaan mein... Aisa lag rha tha aaj jam k barish hogi... Sham tak dono boht busy rehte hai kaam mein ... Lunch aik sath karte hai uske baad phr se busy ho jate hai...

Dopeher ko hi halki halki barish shuru ho chuki thi... Bahar boht hi romantic mausam tha ... Halki halki barish aur thandi thandi hawa... Sham ko jab Fareeha aur Shaheer office se nikle to halki halki barish ho rahi thi... Dono gadi mein bethte hai aur nikal jaate hai...

Fareeha sochne lagti hai... K kaash is mausam mein woh aur shaheer bheege... Aur aik dusre k haatho mein haath daale ghoome... Uper waale ne uski sun liya tha shayad... Gadi achanak ruk jata hai... Shaheer usko gadi mein bethne ka keh k khud bahar nikalta hai... Aur check karne lagta hai... Usey kuch samajh nahi aata k kya hua hai... Woh wapas gadi mein aa ke fareeha se kehta hai...

Shaheer :- Yar samajh nahi aa rha hai... K kya masla ho gaya... Mein office se gadi mangwata hu... Tab tak yehi wait karna padhega ...

Ye sunte hi fareeha k dil mein khushi ki leher daudhti hai... Aur woh jaldi se kehti hai...

Fareeha :- Uski kya zarurat hai... Mausam boht acha hai... Thoda paidal chalte hai... Aage jaa ke taxi le lenge…
 

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