Fantasy Aditya@#The Dark Hunter#@

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Fir mai us dristi karni pusp ko nikal kar uske aankh ke pass le ja kar usko masal kar ke us mese ras nikala aur us ras ko uske dono aankho me dal diya tabhi uska aankh chamakane laga aur uske aankho se roushani nikalne lagi wo raushani itna tibra ho gya ki meri aankhe band ho gyi tabhi mujhe ek awaj sunayi di

Awaj - uttam ati uttam putra

Ab aage

maine jab wo awaj suna to mai us awaj me kho gya us awaj me kya divyata thi mai jab us awaj ko suna to laga ki jaise mai is sansar ke moh maya se nikal kar kisi divya sthan pe aa gya hu fir maine apna aankh khola aur samne dekha jaise hi maine samne dekha mera hath khud bakhud jud gya aur mai apne ghutno pe aa gya mere samne jo khade the mai unki paralokik divyata me kho sa gya aur mere aankho se asru bahne lage kyuki samne jo khade the wo koi aur nhi balki kamal nayan kaumudki dhari Sudarsan charkra dari tino loko ka palan karta mere Aradhya ka bhi Aradhya lakshmi pati bhagwan shree vishnu khade the maine jab unki dekha to mere mukh se apne aap unki stuti nikale lagi

Shaantaa-kaaram Bhujaga-Shayanam Padma-Naabham Suresham,
Vishvaa-dhaaram Gagana-Sadrishyam Megha-Varnam Shubhangam|
Lakshmi Kaantam Kamala Nayanam Yogibhir-Dhyaana Gamyam,
Vande Visghnu Bhava Bhaya Haranam Sarva Lokaika Naatham ||
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Mere stuti khatam karte hi prabhu ne mujhse bole
BV- Ati utam putra ati utam jo tumne aaj karya kiya h wo is kalyug me tumhare alawa aur koi nhi kar sakta tum ye jante huye bhi ki ye dristi karni pusp tumhare liye kitna jaruri h fir bhi tum ek anjan ke liye ise dene ko taiyar ho gye ye tumhare alawa koi aur nhi kar sakta tum sahi mayne me is sansar ke Rakshak ho mai tumhare is karya se bahut prasan hu
Mai- ye sab kya tha prabhu wo ladka kha gya
BV- yaha abhi jitni bhi ghatana ghati wo sab meri maya thi putra mai tumhara pariksha le rha tha aur tum meri is pariksha me uturn huye is liye mai tumhe vardan dena chahta hu mango putra jo bhi tumhari iksha ho wo mang sakte ho
Mai- he mere Aradhya ke bhi Aradhya mai apka darshan pake bahut khus apke darsan ke liye na jane kitne rishi muni kitne warso tak tapasya karte h phir bhi apka darsan unhe nhi milta aur mujhe itni saralta se hi apka darsan ho gya ye kya kisi vardan se kam h is liye prabhu mujhe aur kisi bhi bardan ki koi awasyakta nhi h
BV- mai tumhare manavta aur sarlta ko dekh bahut prasan huya putra mai ye bhi janta tha ki tum mujhse koi vardan nhi mangoge is liye mai tumhe khud ye vardan deta hu ki tum aur tumhari patniya sabhi chiryovan ko prapt kroge aur ye meri komudki gada jiska war achuk h jo bade bade parwato ko ek hi war me kan kan me bikhrne ki shakti rakhta h aaj se iska ek ansh jisme iski jaisi hi saktiya hogi wo tumhe deta hu

Itna bol kr prabhu ne apna dahina hath aage kiya aur usme se ek pile rang ki raushni nikal kar mere chhati par pada aur sant ho gya fir unki kaumudki gada mese ek usi ke jaisa gada nikla aur mere andar chala gya
Iske bad prabhu ne mujhse bola

BV- putra ab tum ghar jao waha tumhari bahan tumhara rasta dekh rhi h aur uski ankhe bhi tumhe thik karna h
Mai- lekin prabhu mere pass to wo pusp hai hi nhi mai to wo pusp se maine us ladke ka upchar kr diya tha
BV- maine bola tha na putra ki wo sab meri maya h ab mai chalta hu putra chiranjivi bhava


Itna bol ke prabhu waha se gayab ho gye aur unke jate hi wo maya bhi nast ho gya mujhe aisa laga jaise mai abhi abhi koi sapna dekh rha tha mai usi samay me tha jab mujhe wo ladka dikha tha aur mere hath me wo dristi karni pusp bhi thi mai apne hath me dristi karni pusp dekh kar bahut khus huya fir mai samay ko dhyan me rakhte huye bhagna start kiya ab mera speed normal se bahut jyada tha ye gurutvakarsan chember wala speed tha mai is speed se 2 ya 3 ghante me apne ghar pahuch jaunga
mujhe daudte huye 3
ghante ke lagbhag ho gya tha mai ye 3 ghante nonstop bhagte hi rha ab mai ghar ke gate par tha fir maine doorbell bajaya to maa ne aake gate khola mujhe dekhte hi mujhse lipat gyi


maa- Tum aa gye beta mujhe tumhari bahut chinta ho rhi thi
mai- Kya maa aap bhi mai to ek din ke liye ghar se bahar gya tha aur aap ek din me hi ghabra gyi aap samjha kro maa mai ab koi bacha nhi hu aap meri itna chinta mat kiya kro
maa- mai kyu na chinta kru mai maa hu tumhara aur ek beta apne maa ke liye kabhi bada nhi hota wo hamesa uske liye bachha hi hota h samjha achha wo sab chhod ye bata din bhar bhukhe hi raha ya kuchh khaya bhi
mai- Maa mai apse bad me bat krta hu mai pahle Priya ke pass jata hu kyuki mujhe uski aankho ki raushani wapas lani h

mai itna bol kr bhagte huye priya ke room me gya aur dekha ki
 
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Update 44
maa- mai kyu na chinta kru mai maa hu tumhara aur ek beta apne maa ke liye kabhi bada nhi hota wo hamesa uske liye bachha hi hota h samjha achha wo sab chhod ye bata din bhar bhukhe hi raha ya kuchh khaya bhi
mai- Maa mai apse bad me bat krta hu mai pahle Priya ke pass jata hu kyuki mujhe uski aankho ki raushani wapas lani h
mai itna bol kr bhagte huye priya ke room me gya aur dekha ki
Ab aage
Mai jab priya ke room me gya to dekha ki wo apne bed par baithi huyi h aur uske aankho se aansu bah rhe h mai jab dekha ki priya ro rhi h to mai bhagte huye uske pass gya aur usko apne sine se laga liya

mai- kya huya priya tum is tarah ro kyu rhi ho kya huya h tumhe kisi ne kuchh bola h kya tumse please priya chup ho jao tumhe meri kasam h

Mera kasam wali bat sun kar priya chhup ho gyi lekin abhi bhi thodi thodi subak rhi thi

mai- good girl ab batao tum kyu ro rhi thi
priya- wo wo aaj papa mummy ki bahut yad aa rhi h
mai- Wo to meri bahana is liye ro rhi thi lekin ye to galat bat h tum ancle aunty ko rote huye yad kar thi to kya unko ye accha lagta hoga ki unki pyari beti unko yad karte huye ro rhi h are pagal ho tumhe rote huye dekh kar kya unhe khusi milti hogi tumhe rote huye dekh kr wo bhi dukhi honge aur kya tum ye chahti ho ki tumhare mummy papa tumhare chalte dukhi ho
priya- Nhi nhi bhaiya mai ye kabhi nhi chahungi ki mere papa mummy mere chalte dukhi ho ab mai kabhi nhi roungi
mai- good girl .. are ha mai to bhul hi gya priya ki tumhare liye ek surprise h
priya- (khush hote huye ) Kya Surprise h bhaiya batao na please batao na
mai- nhi nhi aise kaise bata du agar bata diya to wo surprise kaise rah jayega ha bataunga nhi lekin tumhe de sakta hu lekin ek shart h
Priya- Kya shart h bhaiya batao mai sab manugi
mai- mai tumhare aankho me kuchh dawa dalunga aur iske bad usme pati bandhunga jise tumhe subah tak bandh ke rakhni hogi bolo manjur h
priya- Thik h bhaiya lekin wo dawa kis chij ki h
mai- wo bhi ek surprise hi h sab subah me pata chalega
priya- thik h bhaiya mai taiyar hu

phir mai dristi karni pusp ko nichod kar usme se ras ko nikala aur usko priya ke dono aankh me dala dristi karni ka ras dalte hi priya ke dono ankh me se nile rang ki raushni nikalne lagi fir kuchh der bad raushani niklna band ho gya fir ek pati uski aankho par bandh diya

Priya- bhaiya ye kya dala apne meri aankho me mujhe aisa lag rha h jaise mere aankho me barf ka pani dal diya gya ho bahut thandhi ho gyi meri aankhe
mai- priya yad h na jo mai bola hu tum subah se pahle is pati ko nhi utarogi mujhe promise kro
priya- ok bhaiya promise mai nhi utarungi

fir thodi der idhar udhar ki bate karne ke bad mai apne room me chala gya
idhar dusre taraf bidhutjiwa bhi prithvi par aa gya tha wo is samay wahi gufa ke samne khada tha jaha maine un rakshaso ko mara tha wo waha pe khada ho kar apna aankh band kar ke waha pe jo jo huya tha wo dekhne laga lekin usko prakash ke siva kuchh nhi dikha to wo krodhit ho kar chilane laga jisse asman me bijliya kadkane lagi

Bidhutjiva- (Krodh Me chilate huye) mujhe saugandh h saitan ki Tum jo koi bhi ho mai tumhe dhundh lunga aur dhundhane ke bad aisi maut dunga ki ye sara sansar teri mrityu par kapne lagega mai aa rha hu tumhare pass mai aa rha hu ha hahahhhahhaaha

Fir yaha se bidhut jiwa gayab ho jata h
idhar palvi jab ghar aayi to use maa se pata chala ki mai wapas aa gya hu to wo mere room me aa gyi aur mujhse boli

palvi- Aap aa gye bhai kaisi rahi safar kya apko dristi karni pusp mil gya
mai- are bas bas kitna sawal puchhogi
Palvi- bataiye na please mujhe sab janna h waha pe kya kya hua kaise apne dristi karni pusp prapt kiye
mai- achha baba thik h mai batata hu

iske bad mai apne safar ke bare me usko batane laga meri bat sunte sune uske chehre pe aneko bhao aaye jaise wo kabhi ascharya hoti to kabhi dukhi to kabhi khus meri puri bat sun kar wo mere sarir pe Gaur se dekhte huye boli

palvi- bhai apko kuchh huya to nhi kya jarurat thi un rakshaso se ladne ki apko kuchh ho jata to ( itna bol kar wo rone lagi)
mai- Chup ho jao pagal dekho mujhe kuchh nhi huya h mai sahi salamat tumhare pass khada hu aur rahi bat un rakshaso se ladne ki to ek bat yad rakho hame ye jo kuchh saktiya mili h aur aage bhi milegi wo khud ke liye nhi mili h wo dusro ke bhalai aur jag kalyan ke liye milli h aur waise bhi insaniyat ke nate mujhe un ladkiyo ko bachana mera farj tha samjhi
palvi- fir bhi apko kuchh ho jata to mai apke bina kaise rahti
palvi- mere pass jabtak tumhara pyar( bhai bahan wala) h mere mata pita aur guru ka asirwad h to aise lakho asur aa jaye fir bhi mujhe kuchh nhi hoga ab chup ho jao nhi to mai tumse bat nhi karunga

mere itna bolene ke bad wo apni aansu pochhte huye boli

palvi- nhi mai kha ro rhi hu dekho mai nhi ro rhi hu aur abhi apne kya bola mujhe bat nhi kroge agar aisa socha bhi na to mai apki tange tod dungi samjhe
mai- ji malike jaha mai samjh gya

Isi tarah nike jhoke karte huye sam ho gyi fir maa ne hamdono ko khane ke liye bulane aayi fir hamlog khana khaye aur apne apne room me sone chale gye

fir next day apne subah uth kar mai palvi ke room me gya aur waha se undar ground ghar pe chala gya traning karne waha jane ke bad gurutvakarsan chember me palvi ko traning karwaya ab wo pahle se behtar ho gyi thi ab wo talwar baji martial arts har tarah ke ladai me expart ho chuki thi traning karne ke bad hamlog wapas apne apne room me aa gye fir college ke liye taiyar hoke college nikal gya
 

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