Fantasy Agnivarsha---- (Mayavi Dunia) The Incomplete Love Story (Completed)

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Original writer Agni Das
All credit goes to him......!
 
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Ye Zindagi Tere Saath Ho,



Ye Arzoo Din Raat Ho



Mai Tere Sang Sang Chalu,



Tu Har Safar Mai Mere Sath Ho



Mai Kanto Par Bhi Chal Padu,



Tere Pyar Ki Jab Barsaat Ho



Kabhi Sham Dhale Jab Hum Mile,



Na Din Dhale Na Raat Ho



Ye Zindagi Bas Tere Sath Ho



Ye Zindagi Bas Tere Sath Ho
 
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friends ye kahani hai agni kii jisne ek ladkii se pyar kiya,,,,,
agni ne ush ladkii se isss had takk pyar kiya kii ushne ussss ladkii ke
liye apna sab kuch chod diya apna ghar,,,,apna parivar,,,,apne
dost,,,,apni sanse,,,,apni atma,,,,apni rooh yahan takk kii apni jaan
bhi usss ladki ke upar ushne kurban kardiya takii wo ladkii sahi salamat
rahe khuss rahe sayed hii koi aisha deewana ho jo apne pyar ke liye ish
hadd tak jaa pae par agni ne aisha kiya ushne apni jaan lutadii apne
pyar ko mehfuzz rakhne ke
liye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 
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update 1-introduce



hindustan ka ek chota sa seher puri , ye seher orissa state ka ek chota aur bikashit seher hai , ye seher ek dharmik seher hai ,yahan pe lord jagganath jii ka tample bhi hai aur khubsurat samandar bhi , aur pure duniya me ek louta surya mandir(sun tample) konark tample puri me hii moujud hai , me jitna bhi ish seher ke bareme baat karun kam hai ishliye abb kahani suru karte hain

Agni das ek mamuli aur sidha sadha sa ladka jo kii ek uper middle class family se belong karta hai uske pariwar me uske papa Ram kumar das jo kii ek helth department me ek officer ke torpe job karte hain,agni kii mom Asha das jo kii ek doctor hain Agni ke do bhai hain kunal aur manish dono job karte hain aur shadi sudha hai bade bhai ka 2 bache hain 1 ladka aur ek ladki,chote bhai ka 1 ladka hai Agni teenon bhai mese sabse chota hai,Agni ek 17 saal ka handsome aur jinda dil ladka hai hamesha apni life ke har ek moment ko bade shaan se jeeta hai wo kehta hai life bohut choti hoti hai to life main ladhai jhagda na karke ache se jeena chahiye wese to wo bohut hi saant kisam ka hai lekin agar use ya fir uske doston mese kishi ko agar koi pareshan kare to wo pal bhar me hi ek monster ban jata hai aur ishliye kisi me itna dum nahin ke wo ushe haath lagaye chahe wo koi bhi ho


uske do jigri dost hain jagu aur deva dono ush par jaan chidakte hain aur agni bhi unn par apna jaan chidakta hai jagu ek upper middle class family se hai aur jagu ek natkhat kisam ka banda hai aur deva ek high class family se belong karta hai aur deva ek tharkii kisam ka banda hai in teenon ki dosti badi ajeeb tarike se suru hui thi jab ye log class 6 me the agni aur jagu bachpan se hi dost the ye dono padosi the hamesa ikathe padhayi karte the sararat kiya karte the aur masti kiya karte the ek din school me rishes ke waqt kuch ladke deva ke behen rupa ko ched rahe the aur ye baat deva ke ek dost ne door se dekh liya aur jakar deva ko bata diya aur deva apne doston ke saath wahan aake dhamak gaya wahan rupa ke paas jagu khada tha jisne un ladkon ko wahan bhagaya tha aur rupa thanxxx keh rahi thi deva ko laga sayad jagu hii wo saksh hai aur usne apne doston ke sath milke hamla bol diya aur buri tarah se jagu ko pitne lage rupa ne bohut roka par wo nahin ruka aur pitne ke baad wahan se chala gaya jab ye baat agni ko pata laga wo pagal ho gaya aur bhagta hua ground par aya aur usne dekha ke jagu ko bohut chot lagi hai jagu ne use rokne ki kosish bhi kii lekin wo nahin ruka aur jakar deva ke samne khada hogaya aur deva se pucha ki kya tune jagu ko mara deva ne bataya haan mene mara aur wo age kuch bol pata ki agni ne deva ke uper japat gaya aur buri tarah marne laga ye dekh deva ke sare dost darke mare whan se bhag gaye agni buri tarah deva ko marr raha tha tabhi jagu wahan aaa pahuncha usne agni ko rokk dia aur saant karne laga idhar deva ko bohut chot lagi thi tabhi wahan rupa aayi aur usne deva se pucha bhai apne jagu ko kyun mara deva ne bataya wo tumhe ched raha tha ishiliye mene use mare rupa ye baat sunke chounk gayi aur usne bataya ki jagu ne mujhe un ladkon se bachaya tha na ki ched raha tha samjhe ab deva ko apne kiye par pachtawa ho raha tha usne jagu se maafi mangi aur jagu ne use maaf kar diya fir deva ne kaha yarr jagu tu bohut lucky hai jo tujhe agni jesa dost mila hai aur mere dost mujhe chod ke bhag gaye aur deva ne pucha can we friends aur fir ye teenon dost ban gaye jigri dost,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 
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Update 2- The scary Dream




dopehar ka waqt tha lekin wahan pura ghana andhera raat tha Agni ek aise jungle main tha jaha suraj ki ek halki roshni bhi dikhayi nehi deti thi jaise amavas ki raat ho wahan pe itna sanata tha ke jaise wahan saitano ka vaas ho agni dhire dhire age badhta hai usi waqt use achanak koyi awaaz sunai deti hai agni ke kadam wahin pe ruk jata hai aur wo piche mudke dekhta hai kii ye kishki awaaz hai ek baar phir wo awaaz ati hai jise sunke agni ke dil ki dhadkane tej ho jati hain wauuuuuuuuu wauuuuuuuuu ye awaaz sunke wo samaj jata ke ye bhediyon ka awaaz hai aur wo samaj jata hai ki bhediye sayad uske liye arahe hain darr ke mare ushke pair wahin jam jate hain woh hill bhi nahin paa raha tha woh bhagne ki koshis kar raha tha lekin wo hill bhi nahin paa raha tha dekhte hi dekhte wo awaaz aur karib arahi thi aur karib aur karib aur karib aur achanak uske samne bhediye aaa jate hain dekh te hi dekh te wahan bhediyon ka pura ka pura jhund jama ho jata hai jaise wo thann ke aye hain ho ki shikar karna hii hai unn bhedhiyon ko to dekh kar kisika bhi khoon safed ho jaye wo sare bhediye bahut bade the ek ek ki hight kam se kam 6 se 7 foot hogi hi wo bhediye aam bhediyon se alag the unka speed unke hight unke ankhe jo laal thi agr ankhon me dekhon to lage jese unke ankhe jal rahi ho achanak se wo sare bhediye hatt jate hain unke beach se ek bahut bada bhediya samne

ata hai uska ek ankh pe khanjar ka nisan hota hai jise dekh agni ki ankhe phati ki phati reh jati hain aur achanak wo bhediya bhokta hai wauuuuuuuuuu wauuuuuuuuu aur agle pal agni ke uper chalang maar deta hai aur tabhi achanak agni ki ankh khul jati hai aur uska sapna toot jata hai wo pura ka pura paseene se bheega hua hota hai uske paas uska bhatija khada hoke ushe kab se awaaz de raha tha agni ke bhatije ka naam isaan hai isaan agni se kehta hai chachu jaldi uthiye dadi bula rahi hai ajj monday hai aur apko dadi ko leker mandir bhi to jana hai aur lot ke mujhe,raju aur didi ko school bhi pahunchana hai jaldi uthiye chachu phir agni kehta hai abe uth to raha hoon ja bhag yahan se aur dadi ko bol 15 min me aya aur agni bed se uth jata hai aur apne sapne ke bare me sochne lagta hai are yaar ish sapne se mera picha kab chootega main kab raat ko chen se so sakunga pata nahin bachpan se hii mujhe ye sapna rojana kyun ata hai aur wo sala kana bhediya bhachapan se hii mere piche pada hai kahin mera ish sapne se koi link to nahin hai yahi sochte sochte uski nazar calender pe padta hai aur kuch yaad ata hai are ajj to collage khulne wala hai aur ajj wo apne juniors ki jam ke raging karega,,,deva to raat ko so bhi nahin paya hoga raging ko lekar sala tharki hai na ajj to sayed hii wo kishi ladki ko chode raging ke naam par aur wo muskura deta hai aur ush kane bhediye ko galiyan bakte hue bathroom me ghoos jata hai,,,,idhar niche agni ki maa drawing room me beth ke agni ko galiyan de rahi thi nalayak kahin kaa kitna der kar raha hai kitne samay lagata hai bathroom ke andar lagta hai me ajj let ho jayegi hospital bhi jana hai aur laat sahab abhi tak nahin aye ushi waqt wahan agni ajata hai aur dekhta hai ke maa pura ka pura gusse me hai to wo jake unke pair chunke good morning bolta hai or maa ka gussa thoda kam ho jata hai aur apne maa ko leke pehle mandir or phir hospital pe drop karta hai aur ghar akar apne bhatiji aur bhatijon ko school drop karta hai aur wahan se apne deva ke ghar pe chala jata hai jahan jagu aur deva uska intajaar kar rahe the aur agni ko dekte hi wo dono baras pade deva jyada gussa tha kyuki use raging jo leni thi agni bola bas kar be nahin to ek mukka de dunga sale aur wo bhi free sari hero giri dhari ki dhari reh jayegi aur karliyo raging ye sun deva kii phat jati hai aur wo kehta abe bura maan gaya kya hum to mazak kar rahe the chal sale narayan ke dukan pe tujhe cigarette pilata hoon agni ne moo banate hue bola lekin main menthol hii piunga sale tune mera mood kharab kar diya hai deva bola chal thik hai tu bhi kya yaad karega kish dildar se pala pada hai aur phir teenon chal dete hai narayan ke dukan pe
 
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Update 3


achanak 2 bike ake narayan ke dookan ke samne rookta hai ushme agni , deva aur jagu bethe hue the narayan ka dukan ek veraity store tha narayan in teeno ka dost tha aur uska ek veraity store tha aur usme mobile pe gana aur video download bhi karwata tha aur ye teenon rojana sham ko narayan ke dukan pe ake cigarate pite the aur apna deva to rojana yahan se xxx kii video bharwata tha aur narayan ka dukaan girls school ke paas tha ishliye wahan ladkon ki bheed bhi rahti thi narayan ek dum mast banda tha ya kahen to pakka loundia baaz tha apne deva kii tarah narayan aur deva ki bahut jamti thi wo kehte hai na ek se bhale do loundia baaz ab age badhte hain teenon bike pe se utarte hain narayan unko dekh ke kehta hai kya be aaj itna let ho gaya tum logon ka collage main ragging start ho gayi hogi ye baat sunke agni aur jagu ek sath kehte hain abe sale tujhe kaise pata be to narayan kehta hai mereko deva ne bataya tabhi to me ban dhan ke khada hoon kab se pata tum logon ka intejar kar raha tha phir agni aur jagu deva ke taraf ghurne lagte hain to deva apni batishi dikha deta hai aur kehta abe mene kaal narayan ko bataya to wo bohut khush hogaya aur bola ushko bhi jana hai mene kaha to chal na kounsa apne baap ka collage hai tu bhi chal ladkiyon ko pataenge ragging ke naam par phir deva ne teen menthol mangwai aur narayan ne fatt se unhe menthol badha diye tabhi agni ne narayan ke hath se le liye ek jagu ko dekar baki dono khud rakh liya ye dekh deva ne kaha abe sale mujhe bhi to ek de agni ne kaha sale tu mera ganaa pile tune humko narayan ke bare me nahin bataya aur sale mujhe pata hai tu kal jaroor narayan se free main video load karke gaya hoga aur hume nahin dikhaya tune ishliye tu mera ganaa hii pile phir deva kehta hai maa kasam be abhi tak nahin dekhi ajj raat ko tujhe dikha dunga jagu bola sale mere ko pata hai tu kal raat ko video dekh ke jaroor teen char baar ******** dii hogi deva bolta hai abe sirf do baar mari hai be tabhi sabhi hasne lagte hain aur agni deva ko cigaret de deta hai aur teenon ek sath cigarate sulgate hain kash pe kash laga te hai

tabhi door se scooty pe do ladkiyan arahe the aur dukan ke paas ake ruk jati hain dono mese piche wali age ati hai jise dekh agni uske ankon me kho jata hai lekin jyada der nahin wo ladki ati hai aur sidhe jake agni,deva aur jagu ke muhn se cigaret nikal ke nali me phek deti hai ye dekh deva kehta hai abe mere peshe fenk diye be mahnga cigaret tha sale mene sirf do hi kash mari thi jagu use kehta koi baat nahin beta ja shirt pant khol ke nali me kudja aur cigaret nikal le ye sunn deva chid jata hai aur kehta sale teri ankhen hai ya batata vada dikayi nahin deta mera cigaret behke chala gaya hai aur nala kitna bada hai me dub jaunga sale aur mujhe tairna nahin ata sale aur agni jake ush ladki se kehta hai tum pagal to nahin ho ye kya kiya wo ladki kehti hai mene jo kiya tumhare bhale ke liye hii kiya pata hai cigaret pine se kitni bimari hoti hai cancer,tv,lunks problem aur na jane kya kya ishliye mene jo kiya acha kiya agni kehta hai acha to jake cigaret banani wali company band kyun nahin karti badi ayi philosophy jhad ne wali chal nikal yahan se pura ka pura mood kharab kar diya wo ladki aur chidd jati hai aur agni se kehti hai sun mere sang bakwass na kariyo agar bakwas kii aur age se cigaret pite dekha to polish me complain kar dundi ke public place me smoke karte ho aur andar beth ke pite rahio beedi samjha chal ritu yahan se,,,,,,agni basss use jate hue dekhta raha jagu bola abe ye to apni hii marke chali gayi agni kehta hai koi baat nahin yaara agli baar dekh lenge sali ko aur agni,deva,jagu aur narayan chal dete collage ke taraf

collage me pahuch te hi un charon ko kuch ladke awaaz dete hain aur ye charon unke taraf chal dete hai ye ladke unke hi collage ke dost the wahan unke pass pahunch ke deva puch ta hai kya haal be kahan tak pahunche deepak bolta hai abe mera to ek round ho gaya raju aur gitu round pe gaye hain ye log bhi unke saath beth jate hain aur ragging suru kar dete hain,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 

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