Romance Bewafa (Hum ya Woh ?) completed

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Assalam o Alaikum ... Namaste ... Hello... Pyare dosto...

Mere bare mein janna hai to just visit my incest story Aashiqui 2 ( A Saga of Thriller, Hate, Love, Romance, Friendship, Betrayel and Revenge ) Wahan intro de chuka hu. Socha tha Aashiqui 1 k baad aik hi story start karunga phr achanak ye story mujhe mere purane hard disk mein mila to socha post kar di jaye ye.

Story k title se hi pata chal gaya hoga k story mein kya hoga. Story k bare mein ziada kuch nai bolunga story short hai hardly 20 updates honge to story parh k aap log is sawal ka jawab de k bewafa kon ?

So story start karte hai bina deri kiye. I hope support rahegi aap logo ki.
 
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Ek Aashiq duniya se rukhsat ho gaya koi diwana kahta tha koi pagal samjhta tha ab bolen bhi to kya bolen mar gaya bechara

Hmmmm...... Aa gaye aankho ki palkon ko slow motion karne......... Utar gaya dil me najane kab tak saath jayegi....... Well Pehli update se hi saap diye dil ki bandish..... Lagta he hero kismat se chot khaya huaa he.......kya ye ishq puri hogi janab....

Mast update bidu dono ki ladai suru hai bas pyaar hona baki hai waise pyaar safal ho jaruri to nai kyuki pahla pyaar milta hai Naseeb walo ko bas

Hum attitude hard dai bande ka lekin usko kya pata use andar Jo soft heart baitha hai ek din use rula dega waise wo ladki dil ki achchi hai ab ye dono kab ek sath aate dekhte hain

Zindagi jhandawa phir ghamadawa ......zeeniya ki nature usi type ki he....... Haar kar bhi maanti nehi ...... Dekhte he aage kya hota he kis tarah wo badalti he.......

Is story ke mutabik sara kasoor Zakki ka khud ka hai uske dada ji usko property de to rahe the bas ghar chhodna tha kuch shaal me sayad maan jate aur na bhi mante to uska khud ka ek hansta khelta pariwaar hota lekin bujdili me khud ko mita dala usne aaj kya hua uski hasti mit gayi.

Story is good, but ending, and few things like understanding of each other, and some changes in plot of story. It will be great. Is my thinking.

Else it is great

Bewafa to waqt tha jo saari chal chali .... Very Emotional ending hua story ka par zindagi to ruk nahi sakti na to ye bhi chalta rahega.
 
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Nadi k kinare gadi khadi thi ..Aur uske head light ke samne aik pathar k upper 21 Saal ka aik ladka betha tha .. Hath me Sigeret .. Jisme chars daal raha tha .. Badhi hui daadhi .. Laal aankhein .. Aur unme nami .. Wahi uske paas aik pathar k upper aik diary .. Jiske andar Qalam rakha tha .. Taa ke jab bhi dmaagh me poetry aaye to likh de .. Ladka abhi full nashe mein tha .. Aur ye uska 10wa sigeret tha .. who bhi chars se bhara hua ..

Abhi jab sigeret tayar hua .. To usne aik lamba kash le kar sigeret ka dhua andar kheencha .. Aur jab dhua chodha to uske aankhein nam ho gayi .. Ye har rozana aik baar is jagah pe zaroor ata tha .. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ..Kyu ke aik yehi jagah thi jahan uske dil ko sukoon milta tha ..

Magar aaj yaha bhi uske dil ko sukoon nehi mil raha tha .. Aaj uske aansu khud ba khud beh rahe the .. Aur Sigeret pe sigeret bana ke peeta jaa raha tha .. Aur nashi me aur bhi choor hota jaa raha tha ..

Who ladkhadata hua us pathar se khada hua .. Aur neem khuli aankhon se apne diary ki taraf dekha .. aur phir diary uthaya aur gadi ki taraf chal padha .. Ladhkhadate hue gadi k paas pohoncha .. aur door open kar ke driving seat pe betha .. Phir door band kar ke gadi start kiya aur main road ki taraf le gaya ..

Jab main road pe pohoncha to aram se drive kar raha tha .. Usne socha tha k ghar jayega abhi .. Kher aik haath pe sigeret dusre se stearing ko pakda hua tha .. Abhi raat k lagbhag 10 baj rahe the .. Ye rasta usey itne ache se yaad tha .. K who aankhein band kar ke bhi apne ghar pohonch sakta tha .. Isliye itna nashi me hone ki wajah se bhi who aaram se drive kar raha tha ..

Jab aik street light k samne se guzra gadi .. to light uske chehre pe padhi .. Aankhon se ansu ab baqaida beh rahe the .. aur dil ki dhadkanein badhti jaa rahi thi .. Aankhon me kisi ko na paane ka ghum .. Dimaagh me kisi k sath bitaye hue haseen palon k yaadein .. Dil mein aik dard aik sawal .. K Bewafa kon Hum ya who .. Bujha hua chehra .. Jo kabhi ladkiyon ko pagal kiya karta tha ..

Abhi drive karte hue who jaa raha tha .. Door se hi usey main road pe aik ghar dikhayi padhi .. Jisme shadi ho rahi thi .. Lightein jal rahi thi .. Gane ki awazein door se hi aa rahi thi .. Aur bahar bhi log phir rahe the .. Usey dekh k uske dil ki dhadkanein badh gayi .. Aur sath hi sath gadi ki speed bhi .. Ankhon se aansu behna aur bhi ziada ho gaya tha ..

Jab who us ghar k samne se guzar raha tha .. To apna gerdan ghuma k ghar ki taraf dekha .. Ye uski aadat thi .. Jab bhi who is raaste se guzarta tha .. Apna sar ghuma k us ghar ki taraf zaroor dekhta tha .. Magar is baar kuch ziada hi der us taraf dekha .. Jab usne aage dekha to boht der ho chuki thi .. Uske aankhon me aansu hone ki wajah se theek se dekh nahi paa raha tha ..

Uske kaanon me truck k horn ki awaz padhi .. aur ankhon me head light .. Jab tak who samajh pata .. aage se aati hui truck uske gadi se takra chuki thi .. Aur dono ki speed tez hone ki wajah se bada zordar accident hua tha .. Truck ulat gaya tha .. aur siddha gadi ke upper tha .. Uske neeche gadi dab gayi thi .. Aur sath hi sath who ladka bhi ..Log daudhte hue us taraf aa rahe the ..

Aur gadi k andar se uski diary nikal kar bahar gir gayi thi .. Aur hawa k jhonke uske panne palat rahe the .. Aik page pe aa ke ruk gayi .. Usme us ladke ka likha hua aakhri Poetry thi ..


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Nadi k kinare gadi khadi thi ..Aur uske head light ke samne aik pathar k upper 21 Saal ka aik ladka betha tha .. Hath me Sigeret .. Jisme chars daal raha tha .. Badhi hui daadhi .. Laal aankhein .. Aur unme nami .. Wahi uske paas aik pathar k upper aik diary .. Jiske andar Qalam rakha tha .. Taa ke jab bhi dmaagh me poetry aaye to likh de .. Ladka abhi full nashe mein tha .. Aur ye uska 10wa sigeret tha .. who bhi chars se bhara hua ..

Abhi jab sigeret tayar hua .. To usne aik lamba kash le kar sigeret ka dhua andar kheencha .. Aur jab dhua chodha to uske aankhein nam ho gayi .. Ye har rozana aik baar is jagah pe zaroor ata tha .. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ..Kyu ke aik yehi jagah thi jahan uske dil ko sukoon milta tha ..

Magar aaj yaha bhi uske dil ko sukoon nehi mil raha tha .. Aaj uske aansu khud ba khud beh rahe the .. Aur Sigeret pe sigeret bana ke peeta jaa raha tha .. Aur nashi me aur bhi choor hota jaa raha tha ..

Who ladkhadata hua us pathar se khada hua .. Aur neem khuli aankhon se apne diary ki taraf dekha .. aur phir diary uthaya aur gadi ki taraf chal padha .. Ladhkhadate hue gadi k paas pohoncha .. aur door open kar ke driving seat pe betha .. Phir door band kar ke gadi start kiya aur main road ki taraf le gaya ..

Jab main road pe pohoncha to aram se drive kar raha tha .. Usne socha tha k ghar jayega abhi .. Kher aik haath pe sigeret dusre se stearing ko pakda hua tha .. Abhi raat k lagbhag 10 baj rahe the .. Ye rasta usey itne ache se yaad tha .. K who aankhein band kar ke bhi apne ghar pohonch sakta tha .. Isliye itna nashi me hone ki wajah se bhi who aaram se drive kar raha tha ..

Jab aik street light k samne se guzra gadi .. to light uske chehre pe padhi .. Aankhon se ansu ab baqaida beh rahe the .. aur dil ki dhadkanein badhti jaa rahi thi .. Aankhon me kisi ko na paane ka ghum .. Dimaagh me kisi k sath bitaye hue haseen palon k yaadein .. Dil mein aik dard aik sawal .. K Bewafa kon Hum ya who .. Bujha hua chehra .. Jo kabhi ladkiyon ko pagal kiya karta tha ..

Abhi drive karte hue who jaa raha tha .. Door se hi usey main road pe aik ghar dikhayi padhi .. Jisme shadi ho rahi thi .. Lightein jal rahi thi .. Gane ki awazein door se hi aa rahi thi .. Aur bahar bhi log phir rahe the .. Usey dekh k uske dil ki dhadkanein badh gayi .. Aur sath hi sath gadi ki speed bhi .. Ankhon se aansu behna aur bhi ziada ho gaya tha ..

Jab who us ghar k samne se guzar raha tha .. To apna gerdan ghuma k ghar ki taraf dekha .. Ye uski aadat thi .. Jab bhi who is raaste se guzarta tha .. Apna sar ghuma k us ghar ki taraf zaroor dekhta tha .. Magar is baar kuch ziada hi der us taraf dekha .. Jab usne aage dekha to boht der ho chuki thi .. Uske aankhon me aansu hone ki wajah se theek se dekh nahi paa raha tha ..

Uske kaanon me truck k horn ki awaz padhi .. aur ankhon me head light .. Jab tak who samajh pata .. aage se aati hui truck uske gadi se takra chuki thi .. Aur dono ki speed tez hone ki wajah se bada zordar accident hua tha .. Truck ulat gaya tha .. aur siddha gadi ke upper tha .. Uske neeche gadi dab gayi thi .. Aur sath hi sath who ladka bhi ..Log daudhte hue us taraf aa rahe the ..

Aur gadi k andar se uski diary nikal kar bahar gir gayi thi .. Aur hawa k jhonke uske panne palat rahe the .. Aik page pe aa ke ruk gayi .. Usme us ladke ka likha hua aakhri Poetry thi ..



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Kya Khoob Pyar Se Dil Ko Jalaya


Tang aa Kar Hum Ne Khuda Ko Bataya
Jab Chaha Jahan Chaha Paas Paya


Be Khud Hum Hue Haal E Dil Sunaya
Ab Ishq Ne Hai Muhabbat Mitaya


Ek Kiran Dikhi Umeed Pe Jagaya

Bakhsh Ab Zakki Ko Aye Khudaya
Sad love story lag rahi hai dil toota hai bahut bura aur lagta hai zindagi khatam ho gayi
 
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Nadi k kinare gadi khadi thi ..Aur uske head light ke samne aik pathar k upper 21 Saal ka aik ladka betha tha .. Hath me Sigeret .. Jisme chars daal raha tha .. Badhi hui daadhi .. Laal aankhein .. Aur unme nami .. Wahi uske paas aik pathar k upper aik diary .. Jiske andar Qalam rakha tha .. Taa ke jab bhi dmaagh me poetry aaye to likh de .. Ladka abhi full nashe mein tha .. Aur ye uska 10wa sigeret tha .. who bhi chars se bhara hua ..

Abhi jab sigeret tayar hua .. To usne aik lamba kash le kar sigeret ka dhua andar kheencha .. Aur jab dhua chodha to uske aankhein nam ho gayi .. Ye har rozana aik baar is jagah pe zaroor ata tha .. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ..Kyu ke aik yehi jagah thi jahan uske dil ko sukoon milta tha ..

Magar aaj yaha bhi uske dil ko sukoon nehi mil raha tha .. Aaj uske aansu khud ba khud beh rahe the .. Aur Sigeret pe sigeret bana ke peeta jaa raha tha .. Aur nashi me aur bhi choor hota jaa raha tha ..

Who ladkhadata hua us pathar se khada hua .. Aur neem khuli aankhon se apne diary ki taraf dekha .. aur phir diary uthaya aur gadi ki taraf chal padha .. Ladhkhadate hue gadi k paas pohoncha .. aur door open kar ke driving seat pe betha .. Phir door band kar ke gadi start kiya aur main road ki taraf le gaya ..

Jab main road pe pohoncha to aram se drive kar raha tha .. Usne socha tha k ghar jayega abhi .. Kher aik haath pe sigeret dusre se stearing ko pakda hua tha .. Abhi raat k lagbhag 10 baj rahe the .. Ye rasta usey itne ache se yaad tha .. K who aankhein band kar ke bhi apne ghar pohonch sakta tha .. Isliye itna nashi me hone ki wajah se bhi who aaram se drive kar raha tha ..

Jab aik street light k samne se guzra gadi .. to light uske chehre pe padhi .. Aankhon se ansu ab baqaida beh rahe the .. aur dil ki dhadkanein badhti jaa rahi thi .. Aankhon me kisi ko na paane ka ghum .. Dimaagh me kisi k sath bitaye hue haseen palon k yaadein .. Dil mein aik dard aik sawal .. K Bewafa kon Hum ya who .. Bujha hua chehra .. Jo kabhi ladkiyon ko pagal kiya karta tha ..

Abhi drive karte hue who jaa raha tha .. Door se hi usey main road pe aik ghar dikhayi padhi .. Jisme shadi ho rahi thi .. Lightein jal rahi thi .. Gane ki awazein door se hi aa rahi thi .. Aur bahar bhi log phir rahe the .. Usey dekh k uske dil ki dhadkanein badh gayi .. Aur sath hi sath gadi ki speed bhi .. Ankhon se aansu behna aur bhi ziada ho gaya tha ..

Jab who us ghar k samne se guzar raha tha .. To apna gerdan ghuma k ghar ki taraf dekha .. Ye uski aadat thi .. Jab bhi who is raaste se guzarta tha .. Apna sar ghuma k us ghar ki taraf zaroor dekhta tha .. Magar is baar kuch ziada hi der us taraf dekha .. Jab usne aage dekha to boht der ho chuki thi .. Uske aankhon me aansu hone ki wajah se theek se dekh nahi paa raha tha ..

Uske kaanon me truck k horn ki awaz padhi .. aur ankhon me head light .. Jab tak who samajh pata .. aage se aati hui truck uske gadi se takra chuki thi .. Aur dono ki speed tez hone ki wajah se bada zordar accident hua tha .. Truck ulat gaya tha .. aur siddha gadi ke upper tha .. Uske neeche gadi dab gayi thi .. Aur sath hi sath who ladka bhi ..Log daudhte hue us taraf aa rahe the ..

Aur gadi k andar se uski diary nikal kar bahar gir gayi thi .. Aur hawa k jhonke uske panne palat rahe the .. Aik page pe aa ke ruk gayi .. Usme us ladke ka likha hua aakhri Poetry thi ..



Pehle Pehel Dunya Ne Rulaya
Sitam kam Na The ? Jo Tu Ne Sataya


Ada E Qatil Ne Kyu Paas Bulaya
Kya Khoob Pyar Se Dil Ko Jalaya


Tang aa Kar Hum Ne Khuda Ko Bataya
Jab Chaha Jahan Chaha Paas Paya


Be Khud Hum Hue Haal E Dil Sunaya
Ab Ishq Ne Hai Muhabbat Mitaya


Ek Kiran Dikhi Umeed Pe Jagaya

Bakhsh Ab Zakki Ko Aye Khudaya
Ek Aashiq duniya se rukhsat ho gaya koi diwana kahta tha koi pagal samjhta tha ab bolen bhi to kya bolen mar gaya bechara
 

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