Thriller DARD

[Itz Anjum]

Family Introduction

Lets Start
• Raghuveer Rajput (Dad) : ye India ke jane maane business man hai. Age ab 43 hai . Paise aur power ka kafi ghamand hai. Apni betiyo se bohot pyar krte hai.




• Shikha Rajput (Mom) : ye ek housewife hai. Inki age ab 37 hai. Inhe bhi Paise aur power ka kafi ghamand hai. Apni betiyo se bohot pyar krti hai.



• Janvi Rajput (Badi behen) : inki age abhi 21 hai. Ye nature se kaffi gusaal hai aur ghamand to maa baap se mila hi hai. Sab inhe pyaar se janu kehete hai.



• Swara Rajput (choti behen) : ye hai meri princess. Inki age abhi 18 hai. Bohot hi soft hearted hai aur shayad yehi mujhe sach me apna manti thi.



• Yash Rajput (chacha) : ye mere papa ke chote bhai. Inki age 38 hai. Ye apne bhai se alag hai par unke dar se kabhi unke faisle ke khilaf nhi gye.



• kamya Rajput (chachi) : inhe bhi apni khubsurti pe kafi ghamand hai
.inki age abhi 34 . Inka baki nature aage pta chalega.



• Divya Rajput ( behen) : ye chacha chachi ki beti hai. Inki bhi age abhi 18 hai. Ye kafi shant rehti hai par Mujse nafrat krti hai . ise gareebo se sakt nafrat hai.



• Mahaveer Rajput (dadaji) : ye mere sab kuch the . Ye meri jine ki wajah the jo ab nhi rhi.



Last But Not The Least

• Reyansh Rajput (mai) : meri age abhi 20 saal. Pariwar ke hote hue bhi anath ki zindagi jine wala jiski kismat hi " DARD " ku sihyai se likhi hai.





Baki character aage bataya jaega

 

[Itz Anjum]

UPDATE -1

Ye baat aaj se 19 saal pehele ki hai Bangalore me ek aurat city ke sabse bde hospital me dard se chilla rhi thi uski delivery hone wali thi. Raat ke 12 baje ne me sirf 7 min baki the. Bahar us aurat ke ghar wale khade the. Kuch hi samay me us aurat ne thik 12 baje ek sundar se ladke ko janam diya. Nurse bhagti hui operation theater se bahar aai aur boli.

Nurse: mubarak ho raghuveer ji aap ko Beta hua hai.
( ji haa ye aadmi koi aur nhi mere hi Dad hai aur wo aurat meri maa.)
Dad bohot khush ho gye kyuki mai pehela beta jo tha aur unhone jeb se do 2000 ke bundle nikal ke nurse ko dediye aur bole.

Dad: jaao aur pure hospital me mithai batwado logo ko bhi to pta chalna chahiye ki Rajput khandan ka waris aa gya hai.

Nurse wo paise leke nikal gyi aur dad ne ye kahbar dadaji, chacha, aur chachi ko sunayi.
Wo sab bhi bohot khush ho gye aur sab mujhe dekhne andar aagye. Dad ki godh me 1 sal ki janvi didi bethi thi. Dad ne use chachi ki godh me de kar mujhe godh me liya aur dekhne lage meri kali aakho me. Wo thodi der ke liye kho se gye phir mera matha chuma aur bole.

Dad: dekha babuji maine aapko waris de hi diya.
Dada ji : ha, kitna sundar pota hai mera.



Didi ko kuch samaj to aa nhi rha tha par sab ko khush dekh wo bhi khush thi. Chachi kuch khas khush nhi thi kyuki abhi tak unko ladka nhi hua tha. Chacha khush the par chachi ke karan jahir nhi kar paa rhe the.
Kuch der me maa ko bhi hosh aagya aur unhone mujhe dad ke pas se lekar apne baaju me rakh kar dekhne lagi aur boli.

Mom: kitna sundar hai mera beta kisiki nazar na lage.
Dadaji : ha, bahu sach me mera pota bohot sundar hai.
Chacha : aakhir bhatija kiska hai.

Aise hi sab acha chalta rha aur agle din maa aur mujhe ghar laya gya. Kafi saare rishtedaar mujhe dekhne aur badhai dene aaye jise dekh chachi khush nhi thi.
Jab maa mujhe doodh pila rhi thi achanak thodi der me doodh ki kami ke karan doodh ki jagah khoon nikal ne laga aur maa ne mera muh nipple se hta diya jise dekh chachi ko mouka mil gya aur wo boli.

Chachi : are re ghar me aate hi apshagun kra diya manhus ne.
Dadaji : choti bahu khabardar jo mere pote ko kuch kaha to.
Chachi : maaf kar dijiye babuji galti se muh se nikal gya.
Mom : haa choti ye to mere kamjori ke karan ho tha hai.

Chahi tab to chup ho gyi par unki man me kadwahat bad gyi.

Khuch din bad dadaji ne pandit ji ko aane ka nyota diya namkaran ke liye. Sab kuch hasi khushi chal rha tha par meri zindagi ka kala din bhi aagya jab se mera aur "DARD" ka nata jud gya..........

 

[Hondacreta]

Waah anjum bhai, kya surwat hai
Apki kahani me wajan lag raha hai.
Bas updates time par dete rahna

 

[Aanya]

Family Introduction

• Raghuveer Rajput (Dad) : ye India ke jane maane business man hai. Age ab 43 hai . Paise aur power ka kafi ghamand hai. Apni betiyo se bohot pyar krte hai.




• Shikha Rajput (Mom) : ye ek housewife hai. Inki age ab 37 hai. Inhe bhi Paise aur power ka kafi ghamand hai. Apni betiyo se bohot pyar krti hai.



• Janvi Rajput (Badi behen) : inki age abhi 21 hai. Ye nature se kaffi gusaal hai aur ghamand to maa baap se mila hi hai. Sab inhe pyaar se janu kehete hai.



• Swara Rajput (choti behen) : ye hai meri princess. Inki age abhi 18 hai. Bohot hi soft hearted hai aur shayad yehi mujhe sach me apna manti thi.



• Yash Rajput (chacha) : ye mere papa ke chote bhai. Inki age 38 hai. Ye apne bhai se alag hai par unke dar se kabhi unke faisle ke khilaf nhi gye.



• kamya Rajput (chachi) : inhe bhi apni khubsurti pe kafi ghamand hai
.inki age abhi 34 . Inka baki nature aage pta chalega.



• Divya Rajput ( behen) : ye chacha chachi ki beti hai. Inki bhi age abhi 18 hai. Ye kafi shant rehti hai par Mujse nafrat krti hai . ise gareebo se sakt nafrat hai.



• Mahaveer Rajput (dadaji) : ye mere sab kuch the . Ye meri jine ki wajah the jo ab nhi rhi.



Last But Not The Least

• Reyansh Rajput (mai) : meri age abhi 20 saal. Pariwar ke hote hue bhi anath ki zindagi jine wala jiski kismat hi " DARD " ku sihyai se likhi hai.





Baki character aage bataya jaega

ju

 

[ramnjit09]

nice update

 

[ramnjit09]

congratulations for new story

 

[Itz Anjum]

Waah anjum bhai, kya surwat hai
Apki kahani me wajan lag raha hai.
Bas updates time par dete rahna

Hmmm

 

[Aanya]

UPDATE -1

Ye baat aaj se 19 saal pehele ki hai Bangalore me ek aurat city ke sabse bde hospital me dard se chilla rhi thi uski delivery hone wali thi. Raat ke 12 baje ne me sirf 7 min baki the. Bahar us aurat ke ghar wale khade the. Kuch hi samay me us aurat ne thik 12 baje ek sundar se ladke ko janam diya. Nurse bhagti hui operation theater se bahar aai aur boli.

Nurse: mubarak ho raghuveer ji aap ko Beta hua hai.
( ji haa ye aadmi koi aur nhi mere hi Dad hai aur wo aurat meri maa.)
Dad bohot khush ho gye kyuki mai pehela beta jo tha aur unhone jeb se do 2000 ke bundle nikal ke nurse ko dediye aur bole.

Dad: jaao aur pure hospital me mithai batwado logo ko bhi to pta chalna chahiye ki Rajput khandan ka waris aa gya hai.

Nurse wo paise leke nikal gyi aur dad ne ye kahbar dadaji, chacha, aur chachi ko sunayi.
Wo sab bhi bohot khush ho gye aur sab mujhe dekhne andar aagye. Dad ki godh me 1 sal ki janvi didi bethi thi. Dad ne use chachi ki godh me de kar mujhe godh me liya aur dekhne lage meri kali aakho me. Wo thodi der ke liye kho se gye phir mera matha chuma aur bole.

Dad: dekha babuji maine aapko waris de hi diya.
Dada ji : ha, kitna sundar pota hai mera.



Didi ko kuch samaj to aa nhi rha tha par sab ko khush dekh wo bhi khush thi. Chachi kuch khas khush nhi thi kyuki abhi tak unko ladka nhi hua tha. Chacha khush the par chachi ke karan jahir nhi kar paa rhe the.
Kuch der me maa ko bhi hosh aagya aur unhone mujhe dad ke pas se lekar apne baaju me rakh kar dekhne lagi aur boli.

Mom: kitna sundar hai mera beta kisiki nazar na lage.
Dadaji : ha, bahu sach me mera pota bohot sundar hai.
Chacha : aakhir bhatija kiska hai.

Aise hi sab acha chalta rha aur agle din maa aur mujhe ghar laya gya. Kafi saare rishtedaar mujhe dekhne aur badhai dene aaye jise dekh chachi khush nhi thi.
Jab maa mujhe doodh pila rhi thi achanak thodi der me doodh ki kami ke karan doodh ki jagah khoon nikal ne laga aur maa ne mera muh nipple se hta diya jise dekh chachi ko mouka mil gya aur wo boli.

Chachi : are re ghar me aate hi apshagun kra diya manhus ne.
Dadaji : choti bahu khabardar jo mere pote ko kuch kaha to.
Chachi : maaf kar dijiye babuji galti se muh se nikal gya.
Mom : haa choti ye to mere kamjori ke karan ho tha hai.

Chahi tab to chup ho gyi par unki man me kadwahat bad gyi.

Khuch din bad dadaji ne pandit ji ko aane ka nyota diya namkaran ke liye. Sab kuch hasi khushi chal rha tha par meri zindagi ka kala din bhi aagya jab se mera aur "DARD" ka nata jud gya..........

Woww
Kaafi improvment ki hai aapne, update ka presentaion and look kaafi smooth tha.
And update ke mid mai flow bhi bana huva tha kahi koe loop hole na dikha aaj.
For this
And ab story par
Kaafi alag concept laga and last mai jo thrill rakha vo bhi accha laga
Waiting for next update mod sir

 

[Itz Anjum]

ju

Axha

 

[Itz Anjum]

Woww
Kaafi improvment ki hai aapne, update ka presentaion and look kaafi smooth tha.
And update ke mid mai flow bhi bana huva tha kahi koe loop hole na dikha aaj.
For this
And ab story par
Kaafi alag concept laga and last mai jo thrill rakha vo bhi accha laga
Waiting for next update mod sir

Hmmm