Romance dil tey usdi dhardkan (rommane+thriller)

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kanchan ajay aa apney cabin ch beithi e c k usnu apni baby "niti " da khyal aya aj tan usda school ch function c.. ufff ek dum kahli kahli ch apni kursi ton uthdi cabin ton bahar nu aa gayi
"ogod bechari ki sochdi hovegi usdi mom nai ayi function ch ... dad tan.." apney ghar waley di yaad andey ek tees uthi usdey dil ch .. kina pyar kardi c o sunil nu dona ney love marriage kiti c fer ek dum ena kidan badal gya sunil... viah ton 3 sal bad e unha ch divorce ho gya ... apni car wal jandi hoyi ney sir nu jhatka dey apney dil dimag ch aye sunil dey khiyalan ton plla chudwan di kosis kiti par kithon... akhan nam hon lagea .. ek bar aasman wal vekhea ..jo rab nu manjoor .. j oh america ja k uthey kisi hor nal viah karwa k khush tan khush rahey mere kol meri dhee meri jaan niti tan hai ..ehi sochdi hoyi dey kadam tez tez apni car wal wadhan lagey .. late nai hona chahundi c function tey... chahey sehar dey es wadey hospital di kafi reputed heart di surgen c par jehra dil usda sunil ney todea c us da elaaz tan us bechari kol b nai c ...ajay car kholan e lagi c pichey pichey ward boy bhajda aya
"madam ek emergencey hai .."kanchan nu rokda hoyea ward boy bolea
pair ruk gaye usdey fer ward boy wal vekhdi hoyi boli "Dr. sehgal nu kaho attend kar len .. meri baby dey school function hai .. naley Dr. mehra nu kaho assist kran .."
"oh madam Dr. sehgal tan thori der pehlan e chaley gaye .."ward boy bolea
"fer head surgen dhillon nu keh deo pls ..aj meri beti da school ch function hai .." request jehi kardi hoyi kanchan ward boy wal vekhdi boli
"madam vohat serious a .. aap gaddi chala k aya a patient tey major heart attack lagda .. ekela he hai ..pls j .." ward boy kanchan wal vekhda bolea
na chahundey hoye b kanchan nu ward boy dey pichey pihcey emergency wal jana pya
"yes dr. mehra ki status hai " patient kol puj kachan boli
major heart attack hai .." thora ghabraya hoyea dr. mehra bolea " thanks tusi aa gye.."
"nal kaun aya hai enha dey "bed tey letey hoye 24/25 sal dey naujwan wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan ney puchea "tusi admission di formatilies puri karwayo.."
"koi nai mam.." aukhey aukhey sah lendey patient wal vekhda hoyea mehra bolea "mein tan aap hairan haan aap e aa k emergency ch bed tey pay gya .."
"ohhhhhh.."gaur nal patient wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan boli "how is bp and heart beat .."
"kuch b normal nai .." kol khadean nurses bolia..
"ok kini der ho gayi oxigen mask laye nu " mehra wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan boli "tusi test karo baki .."
"madam eh kuch kehna chahundey ney "nurse patient wal ishara kardi boli
"dont worry tusi fikar na karo "patient dey sar dey kol aa khari hundi kanchan boli "tusi apney kisi relative da number deo asin unha nu call kar lendey haan "
"menu nai pta mein bachunga k nai ..menu mud k hosh ani k nai ."apney munh ton gas mask la aukhey sah lenda patient bolea "
"dont worry b strong .."usnu hausla dindi kanchan boli "bas ek bar tuhadey test ho jan fer asin treatment shuru kar deni a tusi state dey sab ton best heart hospital ch ho...."
"thanks .."lamba aukha sah lenda patient bolea "mere bag ch mera vallet hai us ch mera credit card hai tey usda pin XXXX hai ...tusi usnu use kar apni payment bagereh jo banegi online trasfer kar lena ..
"tusi apney relatvies da number deo " us wal vekhdi kanchan boli
"k kkk koi nai pls j menu kuch ho gya tan udon e tusi vallet ch ek number hai us ch inform kar dena par pls uston pehlan nai " kanchan wal vekhda patient mud apney munh tey mask landa bolea sah lena aukha ho riha c uslayi .. vekhdey e vekhdey usda bp tey heart beat down hon lagi.. jini tezi nal monitor tey usdi heart beat tey bp down ho riha c tey o ek passey sar sutda hoyea behosh hunda ja riha c laghbhag cheekhdi hoyi kanchan boli " jaldi karo tey ventilator da intzaam karo ..quick quick..."fer usdi nabaj fad usdey thandey hath wal vekhdi hoyi mehra wal vekhdi hoyi boli"jaldi ton jaldi sarey test complete karwayo its serious.."
"ji .."kahli kahli ch mehra emergency ch edar udar bhajda hoyea bolea" es di admission tey payment da "
"shutup payment baad ch b ho javegi ..pehlan esdi treatment shuru karwayo quick quick .." cheekhdi hoyi kanchan gussey ch kambdi hoyi nurse wal vekhdi boli "ventilator activate karo jaldi ton jaldi ..."
 
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condtion kafi critical c patient di.. ventilator la kafi der tak usdi heart beat tey bp nu monitor tey observe kardi rahi kanchan baki reports tey test b udon tak purey ho gaye...
"acha doctor mein chaldi haan j koi emergency hoyi tan dr. sehgal nu call kar lena ... close checkup rakheo ..kafi critical a " dr. mehra tey baki staff wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan apna hand baig chukdi boli
"ji madam ..." kafi aukhey c unha layi picley 3/4 ghantey patient nu ventialate kardey hoye usdi condtion nu stable karna .. par kambyab nai hoye tan ventilator la usdi condtion kuch normal hon di wait kran lagey rat b kafi ho gayi c savery baki doctors tey senior nal discuss karkey e agey ki karna sochea ja sakda c
ghar nu jandi hoyi kanchan di gaddi di speed apney aap tez ho gayi uston.... pta c usnu ghar usdi ladli dhee niti usda intzaaar kar rahi honi tey naraj tey gussey b vohat honi. masoom jehi bechari dey school ch aj usda pehla function c tey o attend na kar saki par ki kardi profession he usda ajeha c ...apney dimag ch sochdi hoyi kidan niti nu convince karegi gaddi nu shortcut dey rastey turn kar lya ..rat da vella c aksar o es rastey ton ghar nu jandi hundi c ..agey shayd naka lga hoyea c gaddi rokni payi.. sheeshey kol aa 2 sipahi khadey hoye
"madam gaddi side tey layo " ek sipahi bolea
"kyoun.." sheesha thalley kardi hoyi kanchan boli
"over speed tey car chala rahey c tusi tey belt b nai layi "duja sipahi kanchan di hik wal ghurda bolea
"ohhhhh "hun yad aya kanchan nu kahli kahli ch usney seat belt nai layi apni hik wal ghurdey hoye sipahi nu vekh apney mummeya tey chunni nu theek kardi boli "sorry kahli ch .."
"hmmmmmmm.."ek sipahi bolea "gaddi side tey layo tey saheb nal gal karo"
es ton pehlan k kanchan kuch boldi unha da saheb police inspector b gaddi kol aa khad gya
"ki gal madam ji accident karna " kanchan dey chehrey wal ghurda inspector bolea "eni tez gaddi chala rahey c "
"nai nai o bas "inspector wal vekhdi kanchan boli"sorry"
lagda party ton aa rahey o jarur drink kiti honi " bina kanchan di gal suney inspector bolea "thalley utron.."
"mein doctor haan tey hospital ton .." kanchan usnu samjan di kosis kardi boli
"fer ki hoyea doctor party tey nai jandey ja fer drink nahi kardey "apna roab dikhanda inspector bolea "tahlley utro.."
inspector di kadak awaz tey jidan ustey roab pa riha c utrna e pya usnu car ton haithan
"pa madam dey munh ch " kamini muskan muskuranda hoyea inspector apny kol khadey sipahi wal vekhda bolea
"ki matlab " ajeeb lga usnu inspector da behavior insult b feel hoyi ek inspector usnu drunk samaj k usda test.."
"kuch nai madam ..meter pa k check karna kini ku piti a " kamina hassa hasda hoyea inspector bolea "tusi ki samjea mein ki paan lga tuhadey munh ch .."
"behave ur self gal kran di tameej nai tuhanu "gussa chad gya kanchan nu edan inspector nu double meaning gal kardey vekh
"tameej hai esi layi munh ch pa riha "apney hath ch fadey alchoal meter nu kanchan dey bullan tey ferdda inspector usdi chunni haithan lukey hoye mummeya wal ghurda bolea
ek sunsan sadak uton badtameej inspector tey usdey sipahi saaf lag riha c sab ney nasha kita hoyea jyada munh nai lagna chahundi c chup chap alchohal test karwan layi sah len lagi
"drink tan nai kiti jnab esney "sipahi meter wal vekhda bolea
"lod b ki hai .. sharab di bottal wargi tan aap hai "upar ton lay haithan tak kanchan dey jism dey utarcharav nu napda hoyea inspector apney munchan tey taav dinda bolea "chalo talashi deo "
"talashi kyoun " ek kadam pichey nu hatdi hoyi kanchan boli "mein doctor haan naley tusi meri talashi nayi lay sakdey lady police kithey hai "
"jyada kanoon na sikha menu " kanchan wal agey nu wad da hoyea inspector bolea " chup chap talashi len dey nahi tan khunjey ch lija k nangi karkey talashi layounga .."
"mein tuahdi complaint krangi " thori ghabra b gayi jidan inspector apney hath usdey wal lay k aa riha c "tusi edan behave kardey o sehar dey lokan nal.."
"koi na kar dayi complaint mein tan apni duty kar riha " agey ho kanchan deye modeya tey hath rakh usdean akhan ch vekhda inspector bolea " jyada nakhra na kar talashi lay lein dey tera ki gass jana .. j thora vohat swad mere hathan nu mil jayo"
"shut up "gharbrayi hoyi kanchan pichey nu hatdi edar udar vekhdi boli
"chuppppppppp"apney bullan tey ungal rakhda inspector bolea "jyada nakhra kita tey asin tino teri talashi lawangey... fer tenu pta e hona jad police lendi a tan kidan lendi a .."apney nal khadey siphean wal vekh hasda hoyea inspector apni munchan nu taw dindey ghabrayi hoyi kanchan dey sahan nal upar thalley hundey mummeya nu ghurda apney bullan tey jeev feran lga
achank ek tez bike unha dey kol aa ruki .. ek munda apney sar ton helmet lahnda hoyea bolea "sir ji ki kar rahey o eni rat nu ek kudi nu rok k "
"kaun a tun .."rang ch bhang paindey vekh inspector us mundey nu ghurda hoyea bolea
"jo b haan tusi daso kyoun tang kar rahey o enha nu .."bike ton utar munda us wal anda bolea
"daso oye esnu asin kaun haan "mundey dey munh tey tourch di roshni marda inspector gussey ch apney bandeya wal vekhda bolea
thori rahat tey sah jeha aya kanchan nu nahi tan jidan badtameeji kar riha c inspector andar tak dar gayi c
"jayo madam tusi .." kanchan wal vekhda munda bolea "mein karda enha nal gal .."
mundey nu eney confidence tey himmat nal gal kardey vekh inspector chah k b kanchan nu rok na sakea bas gussey ch kanchan nu apni car wal jandi hoyi vekhda riha soch lya c usney aj es mundey nu nahi bakhshuga .. hor kuch nai tan nashey da case tan jaroor payounga es tey
unha kolan car ch langdi hoyi kanchan ney nafrat bhari najar nal inspector wal vekhea fer kol khadey mundey wal...dil e dil ch usda shukeraya kita hanera c par fer b chan di roshi tey jadon inspector ney usdey munh tey tourch di roshni mari c usnu lga kitey vekhea hoyea hai es mundey nu .....


"niti so gayi "ghar aa kahli kahli ch hall ch beithi tv vekhdi apni maid anju wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan ney puchea
"nai didi kehndi jad tak mummy nahi andey sona nai " anju usdey hath ton hang baig fad ek passey rakhdi hoyi boli " tusi mil lavo usnu mein tuhadey layi pani lay k andi haan .."
chahey apni ladli dhee nu milan kamrey ch ja rahi c par dil dharak riha c kadam bhari hundey ja rahey c pta c usnu andar beithi udas masoom niti usnu udeek rahi a ...
"mummy tusi aa gaye " kanchan nu vekh bed ton utar bhajdi hoyi niti usdean lattan nal chimbd di hoyi boli
sah aya kanchan nu edan khush ho k bhajdi hoyi niti nu apney wal andi vekh pairan bhar beith usdey chehrey wal vekh usnu ghut k apni hik nal la skoon milya usdey dil nu
"pta mummy kina mja aya fucction ch tey mere act ch tan sarea ney kini der clapping kiti "apni masoom totli awaz ch niti kanchan wal vekhdi boli
"sorry baby mein aa nai saki " khush ho chehkdi niti nu vekh usnu chuk bed wal lijandi kanchan boli... dhee dey chehrey di khushi nu vekh usda apna dil kushi nal bhar uthea
"i know mom ... tusi kisi critical patient da ilaaz kar rahey c " bed tey beith kanchan di godi ch apna sar rakhdi hoyi niti boli
"haan putt vohat e critical case aa gya c nai tan mein jaror ana c " niti dey sar tey hath ferdi kanchan boli
"pta menu mummy"gardan ghuma kanchan wal vekhdi niti boli"function ch ek uncle aye c unha ney dasea k tusi hospital ch busy o unha da ilaaz kran ch .."
"baby mom aa gaye nu hun so jayo pls kafi rat ho gayi a " pani di tray lay andar andi anju niti wal vekhdi boli
pani da ghut bhardi hoyi kanchan nu yakeen nahi ho riha c usdi dhee kini syani tey samajdar ho gayi a nahi tan o ehi sochdi dar rahi c k niti ney ro ro k apna bura hall kar lita hona .....
"haan putt kafi rat ho gayi a" niti dey sar tey hath ferdi kanchan usdey math nu chumdi anju wal vekhdi boli"tun b mere karkey kafi late ho gayi anju "
"koi na didi naldey ghar e tan jana hai ..." muskurandi hoyi anju boli "tusi change kar lavo mein dinner lga dindi haan .."
"nai tun ja hun ..tera husband udeekda hona .. mein kha lawangi kafi late ho gayi a tun " anju wal vekhdi kanchan boli kai salan ton anju uskol e kam kardi c vohat e changi c usnalo wadh o niti da khiyal rakhdi c kanchan b usnu maid ghat tey apni bhain wang e samjdi c ..
"suta pya hona pee key mera husband " kanchan wal vekh hasdi hoyi anju boli "tusi change karo mein dinner lagandi haan .."
"rokdi kyoun nai tun usnu sharab peen ton.." anju wal vekhdi kanchan boli
"rokna ki a didi peenda tan peenda rahey .. changa sago pee k so janda nai tan rat rat bhar son nai dinda putey sidey .."boldi boldi apney dandan tey jeev dba chup kar gayi anju . kol e kanchan di godi tey sar rakh niti unha dean e gallan sun rahi c
samaj nai ayi kannchan nu hassey k kuch boley anju di gal sun fer niti nu bed tey pa uthdi hoyi boli "changa fer mein change kar lwan tun dinner gram kar..."

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"sorry didi late ho gayi " savery andey e anju ney sab ton pehlan kanchan ton maffi mangi fer bed tey suti payi niti wal vekhdi boli " aj niti nu chutti c es layi mein .."
"koi na fer ki hoyea rat gayi b tan late c .."apney gilley wallan nu towel nal punjdi kanchan anju wal vekhdi boli " mein kitchen ch cha bna k rakhi a aap b lay lay tey mere layi b lay aa "
"ji didi .."kamrey ton bahar nu jandi hoyi ruk gayi anju fer kanchan wal vekhdi boli "didi pta kal rat una road waley chowk ch katal ho gya .."
"kis da .." apney gilley wall punjdi punjdi kanchan anju wal vekhdi boli
"police walea da .. kisi ney tin police walea da galla wad katal kar dita " kanchan wal vekhdi boli "pta nai ki ho riha sadey sehar ch police waley b hun .."
"ohhhhhhhhhh.."ek dum dil dharak uthea kanchan da .. thori ghabrayi hoyi anju wal vekdhi kanchan boli " kithey hoyea "
"una road waley chowk ch ...rat naka layea hoyea c badmasha ney mar ditey " anju boli"chado tusi eh didi kyoun saverey savery apna mood khrab karna mein cha lay k andi haan .."
keh k chali tan gayi anju par kanchan dean lattan kamaban lagea mathey tey passina aa gya usi chowk ch tan police walea ney usnu rokea c tey badtameeji kran di kosis kiti c tey ek mundey ney .. kitey us mundey ney e tan nai ..."oh no "apney munh tey hath rakh anju di chah lay k aan di udeek kran lagi ...oh tan bhul e gayi c rat nakey tey police walea ney usnal ... usney tan bas ehi sochea c aj unha di complaint karugi ....par unha da tey katal
"nai nai .. mein koi complaint ja fer us barey kisi nal gal nai karni "apney aap nal boldi hoyi kanchan ney soch lya o es barey kuch nai bolugi kisi nal .........


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hospital puj k b usney es barey apney senior doctors nal koi gal nai kiti.. sidi emergency ch aa us patient di condition da pta kran layi dr.mehra kol puji .."
"ki sttatus hai" nurse ton file fad rat dean reports tey status check kardi hoyi ney dr. mehra wal vekhdey hoye puchea
"kafi critical a .. hope nai lagdi" mayous hoyea dr. mehra kanchan wal vekhda bolea
"uff doctor saheb kini bar keha tuhanu jad tak akhiri sah chalda a hope nai chad di ..j asin e hope chad devangey tan patient..." dr. mehra wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan boli " kidni ch koi effect nahi ajay tak.."
"ji ajay tak tan kidni normal respond kar rahi a par j jyada der ventilator tey rakhea tan kidni ..."kuch sohcdea hoyea dr. merha bolea " pulse rate. heart beat tey bp b down ho riha ..."
"hmmmm.." tusi dhiyan rakho tey dr. sehgal tey dr. joshi nu kaho har velley koi na koi es patient nu attend karey ..es da har 30 minute bad status observe kran "
"ji .."kanchan dey hath ton file fad usnu emergency ton bahar jandey hoye vekhda dr. merha bolea ... c tan uston choti par usdey kam kran da tareeka tey patient di care vekh hamesha usdey dil ch dr. kanchan dey layi ek ijjat c...
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"kuch improvement " sham nu chutti kar ton jan ton pehlan mud us patient nu vekhan emergency ch aa kanchan ney nurse nu puchea
"no doctor .."nurse kanchan wal vekhdi boli "par heartbeat tey bp stable hai .."
"hmmmmm..dr. mehra kithey ney aye nai duty ch ajay ..."edar udar vekhdi hoyi kanchan ney puchea
"aa gaye ney mein bulandi haan unha nu .."dr. mehra wal jandi hoyi nurse boli
badi gaur nal monitor tey display ho rahey patient dey status nu read kardi kanchan di najar jad usdey chehrey tey payi usnu lga kithey vekhea hai esnu .. par kithey much ch oxigen mask lga c es layi shyad pehchan na saki ..
"yes doctor"ajay o usnu pehchanan di kosis kar e rahi c k dr. mehra us kol aa khada hoyea
"haan doctor ah credit card a ..es di admission tey baki payments account department ch .." dr. mehra wal card kardi hoyi kanchan boli
"par eh tan tuhada card a "thora hairan hoyea dr. mehra card wal vekhda bolea
"haan mera a .." badey normal tarkeekey nal behave kardi kanchan boli "tusi payment jma karwayo .. naley es da baig mere gaddi ch rakhwa deo .. mein vekhdi haan usch esdey kisi relative da koi pta ja address .."
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jaldi aa gayi c aj ghar ek tan kal late hon karkey jo usnu police walea ney tang kran di kosis kiti uton sehar ch hoye katal karkey usda dil nai c hospital ch rukan da kam b koi jyada nai c

niti nu anju park ch lay gayi .. fresh ho apney room ch sofey tey beithi dey dimag ch bar bar us patient da chehrey ghum riha c pehchan an di kosis kar rahi c kithey vekhea usney usnu.. par kuch yaad nai aa riha c ... achanak usnu us patient dey baig di yaad ayi .. chuk mez tey rakh es umeed nal kholan lagi shayd us ch usnu us barey koi information mil javey tey usdey rishteydaran nu inform kar sakey.. par kuch nai c bas kapdey c ..tey ek vellet...
vellet kholea kuch cash c kuch cards.. tey ek pic vohat e sohni kudi di .. bhurean bhurean akhan gora chitta masoom chehra bull muskurandey hoye .. enj lag riha c pic vekh jiven hun e bol payegi o pic ...kuch der pic wal vekhdi rahi fer yad aya us patient ney usnu keha c j usnu kuch ho gya tan vellet ch ek number hai us number ch inform kar devey ..esi umeed ch usney pura vellet vekh lya par number na milia ..akhir usnu pic dey pichey likhiya number milia..sah tey sakoon aya usnu shukar a kuch tan pta lga usnu .. apna phone chuk number milan lagi .. hun tan usnu b kahli c eh pta kran di kaun hai eh patient tey eh usnu bas es number ton e pta lag sakda c ... jiven e number dial kita usdey kanna ch awaz ayi "tuhanu keha c na .. es number nu udon e dial kareo j menu kuch ho javey ..." ek dum usdey kanna ch awaz gunj uthi.. ghabrayi hoyi ney phone wal vekhea agley e pal usdey munh ton cheekh nikal gayi phone hath ton chut k dig pya .. munh tey hawayean udan lagean..sah tez tez challan lagey ..jhatkey nal uth khadi ho gayi lattan kamban lagea
"tusi tusi tusi.......ethey ki ki kidan......"larkhandi hoyi awaz ch kanchan samney sofey tey beithey bandey wal vekh haklandi hoyi boli ..jan nikal k galley ch atak gayi c..pura shareer paisney nal bhij gya ...
"tuhanu keha c na phone udon kareo jado menu kuch ho javey "muskuranda hoyea sofey tey beitha banda bolea
par tusi tan ventilator tey fer ethey.."haklandi kamb di awaz ch kanchan boli lattan enia kamb rehean c k dharam karkey sofey tey dig payi ...
"mein tan hun kitey b ..."muskuranda hoyea banda bolea tey agley e pal sofey ton gayb ho gya
apney goddea tey hath mardi cheekh payi kanchan sah tan ukhad k usdi jan e kadan lagey ..eh ki... ghabryi paseeno pasini hoyi apney mathey tey aye passiney nu punjdi edar udar vekhan lagi
"hellow .." achanak usnu apney kanna ch mud usdi awaz sunayi diti jad gardan ghuma k vekhea ek dum kamb k khadi ho gayi usdey nal e sofey tey aa beitha c oh...
"kaun o tusi .."jan pran suk gaye kanchan dey ...usnu apney kol aa beithey vekh
"pehchanea nai .. kal b milia c tuhanu police nakey tey ..."muskuranda hoyea o banda bolea
"ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... "hauka bharea sah lay apni hik tey hath rakh dari hoyi kanchan us wal vekhan lagi ...haan haan ohi c oh jehra rat nakey tey .............

to b continue ....
 
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apney goddea tey hath mardi cheekh payi kanchan sah tan ukhad k usdi jan e kadan lagey ..eh ki... ghabryi paseeno pasini hoyi apney mathey tey aye passiney nu punjdi edar udar vekhan lagi . achanak e jidan hawa vich gyab hoyea oh ... hichki dey nal nal jan b nikal chali c kanchan di
"hellow .." achanak usnu apney kanna ch mud usdi awaz sunayi diti jad gardan ghuma k vekhea ek dum kamb k khadi ho gayi usdey nal e sofey tey aa beitha c oh...
"kaun o tusi .."jan pran suk gaye kanchan dey ...usnu apney kol aa beithey vekh
"pehchanea nai .. kal b milia c tuhanu police nakey tey ..."muskuranda hoyea o banda bolea
"ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... "hauka bharea sah lay apni hik tey hath rakh dari hoyi kanchan us wal vekhan lagi ...haan haan ohi c oh jehra rat nakey tey .............
"pehchan lya "muskurnada hoyea o munda dar nal thar thar kambdi kanchan dey samney aa khada hunda bolea
"haan..par "ghabrayi hoyi kanchan kamrey ch edar udar vekhdi boli"par tusi tan hospital ch ventilator tey ho fer ethey kidan .."
"ohhhhh.."muskuranda hoyea o munda kanchan dean akhan ch vekhda bolea"mere ton daro na ..."
"nai nai mein dar nai rahi bas menu eh samaj nai aa rahi tuhadi conditon eni critical tey tusi hospital ch ventilator tey fer tusi ethey kidan.." haulsa kardi kanchan boli jan nikaldi ja rahi c usdi pura jism paseeney nal bhijea dar nal kamb riha c
"hospital ch tan meri dead body payi a .. jis ch mera ek ada sah atakea hoyea hai jis nu tusi bachaan di kosis kar rahey o ..asal ch meri jan tan udon e nikal gayi c kal jad mein tour ton wapas aa ghar pujea tey vekhea meri vohti kisi hor dean wahan ch ..." ek dum serious hunda o munda kanchan wal vekhda bolea
"mein mein samji nai .." hor ghabra gayi kanchan
"samaj tan mein b nai sakea apni vohti nu.. ena pyar kardi a menu mere bachpan da pyar mera sab kuj hai oh.. par kisi hor dean wahan ch kyoun " aram nal mud sofey tey beithda o munda bolea "bas sat dil tey lagi .. "
"ethey kyoun tusi .." usdi gal sun samaj kuch nai ayi kanchan nu fer b hausla kar khadi khadi apni kambdi awaz ch usney puchea
"hun mein azad haan kadi b kitey b ja sakda haan .."muskuranda hoyea o munda bolea "kal tuhadi dhee dey school ch b gya usnu mein e dasea c k tusi mere ilaaz ch busy o hospital ch es layi nai aa sakey function ch.."
apni dhee barey sun andar tak kamb gayi ..usdey kanna ch kal rat niti dey kahey shabd gunjan lagey jad usney keha c k "ek uncle ney aa k dasea c k tusi usdey ilaaz ch busy o " oh no" apney sar nu jhatka dey us wal gaur nal vekhdi hoyi kanchan dey chehrey da rang fika pay gya
"vohat pyar bachi hai .. park ch gayi hai na khedan layi " kachan wal vekhda hoyea o bolea
"haan haan nai nai .." samaj nai ayi kanchan nu ki dasey usnu niti bareyy ..
"tuhanu keha ghabrayo na .." o munda fer muskuranda hoyea bolea" mein udon tak tuhanu nuksaan nahi pujayouga jado tak tusi mera nuksaan nahi karogey.."
"unha police walea nu tusi ..." dar nal kambdi hoyi kanchan di jan nikal gayi eh puchdey hoye
"haan mein marea tey hor pta nai kiney katal karney ney.. kuch apneya dey tey kuch begaineya dey "ek dum serious ho o munda bolea
dar k 3/4 kadam pichey ho gayi kanchan jad usney us mundey dean akhan ch vekhea ek dum khoon utar ayea c usdean akhan ch laal hoyean akhan ch enj lag riha c jiven akhan vichon hanju nahi khoon dey tipkey nikal dig rahey hon chehra ek dum kathor tey bhiynak hon lga usda ...
"mein mein.. es ch tuhadi ki .. " apney sukey kamdey bullan nal kanchan ney puchea
"bas ena e "ek dum kadakdi uchi awaz kamrey ch gunj uthi "jad tak mein apna kam nahi muka lenda tusi menu dead declare nai karna "
"matlab.." ghabrayi hoyi kanchan di himmat nahi ho rahi c hun us wal vekhan di
"ajay kuch nai samja sakda bas ena yaad rakheo j mein tuhadey layi tin katal kar sakda haan tey apney layi pta nai kiney katal kar sakda .. es layi chup chap ohi karna aj ton bad jo mein kahanga " ek dhamki bharea lehja c usdi awaz ch
"ji ji mein samaj gayi .."samaj tan kuch nai ayi kanchan nu par fer b boli
"acha mein chalda hun ..anju niti nu park ton wapas lay k aa rahi hai " jhatkey nal uth khada hunda o munda bolea "es barey kisi nal gal nai karni .."
"ji ji..."kamdi awaz ch kanchan boli agley e pal o munda usdey kamrey ton gayab ho gya .. ghabrayi hoyi o akhan fad fad kamrey ch edar udar labhan lagi
"ki hoyea didi tusi kamb kyoun rahey o " kol aa khadi ho anju dar nal kambdi passeney nal bhiji hoyi kanchan wal vekhdi boli
"kuch kuch kuch nai .."apney munh tey aye passney nu punjdi hoyi kanchan apni dhee niti nu ghut k jaffi pandi boli
"lagda koi bura supna vekhea .." apneey aap e andaza landi anju boli...
"haannnnnnnn"ghabrayi hoyi kanchan saho sahi hoyi anju wal vekhdi boli..........
"tusi beitho mein pani lay k ayi "paseeney nal bhiji tey ukhadey ukhadey sahan nal kambdi kanchan nu sofey tey beithandi anju rasoi wal bhaj k jandi boli...............

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"ahhhhhhh ueeeeeeee maa chad dey menu "cheekhdi siskdi anju layi har pal aukha hunda ja riha c par usda gharwala shankar tan nashey ch choor apney swad ch dubea pagalan wang usdi bund ch lun andar bahar karda mudhi kiti hoyi anju dey sar tey hath rakh dabanda hoyea kisi hor e duniya ch pujea hoyea c anju di har siski har cheekh usdey swad nu dunga kardi ja rahi c
"chak upar nu apni.. nakhrey kari jandi a "apna lun usdi bund ch gol gol ghumada shankar usdey modey tey dandi wad da bolea
"hye mar gayi nai chuk hundi vey..ufff kad lay " cheekh mar rondi hoyi anju dey hanjua nal sarhana pura bhij chukea c chidi wang dabea hoyea c shankar usnu hilan b nai dey riha c bas tika tika k gassey marda usda bura hall karda ja riha c
"edan kidan kad lawan bhainchod..teri gadwi wargi bund nu jad tak mar nai lenda .swad nai anda sala " lambey lambey sah lenda shankar usdey chittad tey jor di thappad marda bolea "bund e teri tight a fudi tan pta nai kis kis ton chudwa k khuli karwa layi a .."
"kisi ton nai chudwayi ahhhhhh na tang kar agey pa lay .."siskdi rondi hoyi anju layi apni bund ch bajdey gasseya nu sehna aukha hunda ja riha c har gassa usda hauka kadwa dinda eh takreebn roz da e kam c shankar da usnu nangi kar bed tey sut usdi bund ch lun pa usdean cheekhan kadwana pta nai ki swad milda c usnu
"chup kar bhainchod ...gharon bahar ja k kam kardi a pta nai kiney yar bnaye honey ney "pura lun bahar kad gassa marda shankar usdi gardan nu dbanda hoyea bolea
"hye mein mar gayi aieeeeeeeeeeeeeee maa bacha lay es raksahk ton " cheekdi hoyi anju layi apna sar b sarhaney tey patkna auka ho gya c eni jor di shankar ney usdi gardan picheo ghuti hoyi c
"lun lay k b koi marea bhain dea lodiea tun tan pta nai kiney laye honey ney " bina anju dey dard tey cheekh di parwah kitey shankar tika tika usdi bund ch gassey marda swad lenda bolea
"kyoun tang karda pya apni vohti nu salea " achanak kamrey ch ek kadak uchi awaz gunj uthi
"awaz eni uchi c k shankar tan kamb e uthea anju dey kann b sunn ho gaye us kadakdi awaz nal
"kaun a tun "uchalda hoyea shankar anju nalo vakh hunda cheekh pya jad usney apney bed tey apney kol chaukri maar beithey hoye bandey nu vekhea
"salea kyoun tang karda pya bechari nu .." mud bed tey bethey hoye bandey nu ghurdey hoye puchea
"kaun o kaun o " cheekhda hoyea kambda shankar mudhi payi anju tey us bandey wal vekhda bolea
cheekh tan anju di b nikal gayi es velley apney bed tey kisi anjan bandey nu vekh par kuch pal layi dard muk gya azad ho gayi c shankar di pakad ton ...fta fat chaddar chuk apney nangey jism nu dhakdi hoyi akhan fad fad us wal vekhan lagi
"kanjra apni vohti nu tenu pyar karna b nai anda "hanjua nal bhijeayan anju dean akhan wal vekhdey hoye us bandey ney ghurdey hoye shankar nu puchea
"meri vohti a tenu ki " hausla kar shankar kambda hoyea bolea "tenu badi fikar ho rahi a esdi ki gal es da yar a .."
tadaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkk karkey thappad shankar dey mun tey bja thappad di awaz dey nal nal jhakta b ena tez c k uchal k shankar bed ton ek passey kamrey dey khunjey tey ja digia
"na maro na maro enha nu .."kambdi rondi awaz ch anju di cheekh nikal gayi jad usney shankar nu cheekh k bed ton parey digdey hoye vekhea
"es di tan aj jan kadni a mein "gussey ch anju wal vekhda o banda bolea
na maro "hath jordi hoyi anju minaat kardi boli tey shankar usnu tan koi hosh e nai c akhan agey hanera tey sar edan ghum riha c jiven kisi ney usnu asmaan ton chuk jameen tey sut dita hovey apney gall tey hath rakh kambda hoyea bed tey beithey bandey wal vekhda bolea "kaun o tusi .."
"saleya j aj ton baad sharab piti ja fer es nu tang kita jan kad layouga teri " shankar nu ghurdey hoye bandey ney keha
"nai ji bilkull b nai peenda nai tang karda "hath jor ron e lag pya shankar ...
"hun gal sun meri ...gaur nal shankar wal vekhdey hoye o banda bolea " kal tun "AS enterprises tey daftar jana tey uthey ja us company ch driver di naukri karni a "
"menu naukari kyoun oh..." kambda hoyea hairan hunda shankar ajay b hath jod us bandey wal e vekh riha c
"dayouga naukri tenu AS enterprises da malik amit chawla driver di ..." badey aram nal shankar wal vekhda hoyea o banda bolea "bas kal ton bad tun usdi har harkat tey najar rakhni a kis nu milda a tey kaun kaun usnu milda a .."
"ji ji "hath jod khada hon di kosis karda shankar bolea par agley e pal o beh gya jad usnu ehsaas hoyea o nanga a
"kaun o tusi veer ji " kambdi dardi awaz ch bed tey ek passey ekethi hoyi anju us bandey wal vekhdi boli
"haan tun .. aj ton bad tun hamesha dr. kanchan dey ghar e rehna din rat usdi har harkat har movement tey najar rakhni a ...kis nu mildi a tey ki kardi a "anju wal vekhda o banda bolea
"ji ji .."akhan fad fad us bandey wal vekhdi anju haan ch sar hilandi boli
par tusi ho kaun .." shankar guar nal us bandey nu pehchanan di kosis karda bolea
"kadi bhoot vekhea " shankar wal vekhda o banda bolea
"nai nai.."ghabra k hairan hunda shankar kambdi awaz ch bolea
"lay fer vekh lay .."uchi awaz ch hasda hoyea banda bolea tey aggley e pal usdi gardan lambi ho shankar dey kol puj gayi usdean akhan ch vekhda hoyea bolea "jo tenu kam keha dhiyan nal karin.."
"aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"kamrey ch eko velley anju dey nal nal shankar di b cheekh gunj uthi
"acha mein chalda "mud apni lambi hoyi gardan nu eketha karda o banda anju tey shankar wal vekhda bolea "j hun mud k es nu tang kita tan saleya puttha tang dayoun tenu .."
"nai nai ji bilkul b nai " hath jor khujey lga shankar us bandey wal vekhda apney sukey bullan tey jeev ferda bolea eko e jhatkey ch usdi sharab utar diti c usney ...
jidan hwa dey bulley wang o band uthey aya c udan e hwa dey bulley wang uthon gyab ho gya...par anju dey nal nal kamdey hoye shankar da bura haal c jidan thori der pehlan us bandey da sar usdey kol aa usdean akhan ch akhan pa dhamkiea dey riha c............. jan kad k lay gya c usdi .. kambda hoyea darda hoyea khunjey nal lga usdi himmat nai c uth k bed wal aan di ... nal nal usdey kanna ch anju dey thori der pehlan kahey hoye shabd b yaad aa rahey c jad usney us bandey nu minntan kardey hoye keha c "na maro na maro enha nu .. ek bar apnian akhan chuk bed tey beithi anju wal vekhea ... us wang e dar nal kambdi hoyi ro rahi c o b........ akhan usdean anju nu edan rondi vekh namm hon lagea jad k es ton pehlan usnu hamesha swad anda c jad anju usdey tahlley payi cheekhan mardi rondi hoyi usdean minntaan kardi hundi c ............purey kamrey ch sannatta c ... vich vich usnu anju dean siskian sunayi dey rehean c ..........
 
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"ek kam keha c tuhanu tusi o b nai kar sakey "gussey ch cheekhda hoyea o banda kanchan nu ghurda hoyea bolea
"mein ki kar sakdi c ... dr. sehgal b attend kar rahey c . meri duty day ch c ..jad hun rat nu death ho gayi tan unha ney dead declare kar dita "dari hoyi kambdi kanchan us wal vekhdi boli"menu b thori der pehlan e phone aya a k tusi mar chukkey o "
"mein tuhanu keha c na menu dead declare nai karna " gussey ch lal akhan nal ghurda o banda kanchan wal vekhda bolea"ventilator tey lagey rehen dindey"
"es ton pehlan mein kuch kardi ..sarian formalities dr. sehgal ney purian kar ditian death certificate dean .. tuhanu tan pta e hona sada hospital ek reputed hospital hai tey asin kisi nu dhokey ch nai rakhdey "dari hoyi kanchan apney wallon safai dindi boli "meinu aap tuhadi death da vohat dukh a mein tuhanu bacha na saki.."
"hmmmmm.." kuch der chup riha o banda fer bolea "tuhanu pta hun mere sansakar ho jana tey menu es duniya ton jana paina mere sab kam adhurey ..."
kuch na boli kanchan andar dil nu sah aya k sanskar ton bad o usnu tang tan nai karega ja fer usdey samney tan nai avega...
"ek kam karo tusi hun mansi nu phone karo " kuch der beitha o banda sochda riha fer bolea
"mansi kaun ?? "thori hairan ho kanchan us wal vekhdi boli
ohi jis di pic mere vellet ch hai tey number pichey likhia hai " kanchan nu apney vellet di yad dilanda o banda bolea "meri wife a "
"ohhhhhhhh"ek dum uth k ek passey paye us bandey dey baig nu chuk usdey vellet vichon pic kad vekhdi hoyi kanchan boli"tuhadi wife da naam mansi hai "
"haan usda naam mansi hai tey mera deepak ..deepak sharma " pehli bar kanchan nu pta lga k os bandey da naam deepak sharma a .. kuch pal us wal vekhdi rahi yakeen nai ho riha c usnu k jehra banda thori der pehlan hospital ch mar chuka hai o usnal usdey samney beitha gallan kar riha
"mein DM softech da CEO cum managing director haan ..mera matlab c " mur kanchan dey kanna ch us bandey di awaz sunyai diti
"naam tan kafi suneya hoyea c usney DM Softech da .. apna phone kad pic dey pichey likhia number milan lagi
"phone nai chuk rahi " 3/4 bar try kran ton bad thori nirash hoyi kanchan deepak wal vekhdi boli
"gayi honi amit chawley kol .."nafrat jehi najar nal phone wal vekhda deepak bolea "koi na call back jarur karugi jad free hoyi...tusi usdey phone di wait karo .."
"ji .."mud ek bar number milandi hoyi kanchan ney keha es bar b nai chukea phone kisi ney ...
"tuhanu pta tuhadi es galti karkey mere sarey kam adhurey reh janey .. meri death ton bad hun na tan menu koi vekh sakega na e meri koi awaz sun sakega " kanchan wal vekhdey hoye nirash hoye deepak ney keha ..jad tak tusi menu vetilator tey rakhea c mere jism ch chahey nakli sah par chal rahey c par hun menu dead declare kar tusi mere oh sah b rok ditey "
"par par mein tuhanu vekh rahi haan tey sun b rahi haan " hairan hoyi kanchan deepak wal vekhdi boli
"haan bas hun tusi e menu vekh sakdey o tey sun ssakdey o...hor koi nai o b uni der jini der merian last rites nai ho jandian meri atma layi rakhey hoye path da bhog nai pai janda uston bad nai " kanchan wal vekhdey hoye deepu mayous hunda bolea "fer mein es duniya ton challey jana "
"ohhhhhhhh.."ghabrayi pareshan hoyi kanchan nu kuch samaj nai ayi ki keh riha deepak ..galti tan uston b shayd hoyi c ..j o us velley hospital hundi tan shayad dr. sehgal nu ventilator lahan na dindi tey usnu dead declare na kran dindi...
achanak phone di ring baji kahcna dey nal nal deepak b phone wal vekhan lga
"mansi da phone a "phone tey number vekh kanchan deepak nu dasdi boli
"karo gal .." uth k kanchan kol aa beithda deepak bolea dar e gayi kanchan deepak nu apney kol beitha vekh fer b himmat karkey phone on kita
"hellow es number ton miss calls ayi c " udron mansi di awaz ayi
"ji mein "XXXX" hospital ton dr. kanchan bol rahi haan "himmat kar kanchan ney jawab dita
"yes .."udron phone tey phir mansi di awaz ayi
"ji tuhadey husband mr. deepak sharma kal dey sadey hospital ch admit c unha nu heart strock aya c tey aj thori der pehlan e unha di death ho gayi "badi himmat kar kanchan ton eh phone tey keh hoyea
"waaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttttttttttt.." udron mansi di phone tey uchi cheekh usnu sunayi diti
"ji.....sadey kol unha di koi information nai c ..es layi tuhanu inform nai kar sakey " mansi di cheekh sun badi muskil nal kanchan ton ena keh hoyea
koi jawab nai aya phone tey hairan hoyi kanchan kadi phone wal tey kadi kol beithey deepak wal vekhdi
"ji asin huney e hospital puj rahey haan "phone tey kisi gents di awaz ayi
"keha c na amit chawley kol honi a..usi di awaz c " phone tey amit di awaz sun deepak gussey tey nafrat nal phone wal vekhda bolea...
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jiven e ambulance aa k usdey ghar agey ruki .. sab da ro ro k bura hall c puri kothi pura ghar lokan nal bharea pya c ..kisi nu yakeen nai ho riha c eni choti umar ch deepu heart attack nal..... har koi dukhi ena changa munda aj es duniya ch nai c ... rab dey es khed nu vekh har koi usdey pariwar dey dukh nu sanjha kran k kosis karda apney wallon hausla dey riha c ..
usdi maa ufff dil andar tak kamb uthea deepak da apni maa nu cheekhan mar mar chatti pit pit rondi hoyi vekh .. tey peo usda gumsum bina kuch boley rab dey es bhanney nu samaj nai pa riha c ... dona di halat vekh deepak da dil kita unha kol ja k unha nu chup karwa wey par kidan.. hun tan o es duniya ch e nahi riha c sab usdi di maut da e tan dukh mna rahey c sarey..chah k o kuch nai kar sakda c bas usdi atma apni maa nu rondey tadafdey vekh sakdi c kar kuch b nai sakdi c..o tan fer b apney maa peo nu edan rondey tadfadey vekh sakda c par usdey maa peo tan usnu vekh e nai sakdey c..usdi maan tan bas ambulance ton bahar nikalan wali usdi laash nu akhan fad fad vekhdey hoye kadi behosh ho jandi jad b hosh andi fer rondi hoyi kadi aasman wal vekhdi kadi us ambulance wal jis ch usdey jwan mundey di laash c ..na vekh sakea apni maa di eh halat bhaj k us kol gya ....
"ma ma ro na ... pls vekh mein tere kol e tan haan " maa dey modey tey hath rakh usnu sambhalan di kosis karda bolea par koi asar nai c maa tey hunda b kidan na tan usdi maa usnu vekh sakdi c na e sun sakdi c ..apni maa di halat vekh kuch pal layi tan o bhul e gya c k o tan mar chuka a ..apni es majboori da ehsaas hundey e bebas hoyea edar udar vekhan lga ...andar uthi tees tey apni maa dean akhan dey hanju usdi atma nu tadfan lagey.. jad usdi najar apney peo tey payi ..hauka e nikal gya usda ..gumsum khada ambulance wal vekhda hoyea har koi uskol khada usnu hausla den di kosis kar riha c par kehra hausla hun us peo nu sambh sakda c jisdey samney usdey jwan putt di lassh c .. akhan pathar ho gayean... hanju suk gaye dil tan kar riha c uchi jehi cheekh mar k ro pavey usda peo par apni vohti nu ronda tadfda vekh apney aap tey kabu kar duniya di es kaudi sachai nu bardhasht kran di kosis karda kadi ambulance wal vekhda kadi aasman wal shayd rab ton puch riha c rabba eh tun kehrey janam da badla lya mere ton ...
apni maa kol khada bebas hoyea deepak apni es majboori tey tadaf uthea aj tak kadi b usney apni pyari maa dean akhan ch hanju nai aan ditey c tey aj usdi maa ro ro pagal hoyi usnu awaz maar rahi c ..chah k b usnu chup na karwa sakea usdey hanju nai punj pa riha c .. aj usnu ehsaas ho riha c maran ton bad lok lassh nu vekh rondey tey dukhi tan hundey ney par us lassh vichon nikli ruh es sab vekh tan sakdi a par na tan kisi nu haulsa dey sakdi a na e unha dey hanju punj unha nu chup karwa sakdi a ... tadfda hoyea assman wal vekhda bol uthea "hey rabba ek pal layi menu meri jindgi wapas dey dey mein apni maa nu samja sakan sambh sakan usdey hanju punj sakan...par kithey ehi tan kudrat da dastoor a ...maran ton bad b ruh da edan apney sakey sambhdean nu rondey hoye vekh k tadfna...
bhaj k apney peo kol gya .. usdey modey tey hath rakh bolea "bapuji haulsa rakho haulsa rakho...hun tusi e es dukhan dey pahad nu sambhna a ....."par na tan usdi awaz usdey peo dey knna ch payi na e modey tey rakhey usdey hath da bapu nu koi ehsaas hoyea ..."
"ogoddddddd"apni bebasi ch pagal hoyea deepak ambulance wal vekhan lga shayd dr. kanchan nal ayi hovey ek ohi tan c jehri usdi awaz sun sakdi c tey usnu vekeh sakdi c . amunbulance vichon apni laash nu kad dey hoye vekh deepak dean akhan kanchan nu labhan lagea kachan tan nai par usnu mansi najar ayi
ahhhhhhhh nikal gayi usdey munh vichon jad usney chittey suit tey chitti chunni ch rondi hoyi haukey lendi mansi nu ambulance ton utardi vekhea..usdey chehrey tey aya dard vekh usdi ruh mud ek bar maran wali ho gayi usda pyar usdi jaan usda sab kuch kidan haukey hichkian lay lay ro rahi c... usdean akhan vichon digdey hanju vekh sab kuch bhul gya .. koi gussa nai riha usdey dil ch mansi layi dil kita agey wadh usnu wahan ch ghut jaffi pa usnu hausla devey... par kol e khadey amit nu vekh usdey andar aag e lag gayi esi yaar ney tan yaar maar kiti usnal .. usdi gairhazri ch usdi vohti nu...
rondi hoyi apney hanju punjdi jad mansi usdey kollon di lagi agey ho usdey samney aa usnu samjan di kosis karda bolea " mansi pls pls ro na mein nai vekh sakda terian akhan ch hanju.." par usdi awaz ... na tan mansi dey kanna ch payi na e o ruki .. ek passey khadi apni naukrani kol aa mansi apney hanju punjdi boli" shanti ... dead body andar hall ch lay k aa rahey ney tun uthey bichaya hoyea o kaleen hta dey vohat costly hai .. nai tan dead body dey nal e sutna paina usnu ..."
"ogoddddddddddd eh dukh eh rona sab lok dikhawa hai ..." tadaf uthea apni mansi dey munh ton eh sun ... aj usnalo costly oh farsh tey bichaya hoyea kaleen ho gya ...nafrat nal bharea hoyea mansi tey usdey pichey pichey turdey amit wal vekhan lga
"hye mera puttt .."apni maa di uchi cheekh sun andar tak kamb gya deepak bhaj k mud maa kol pujea jehri apney putt di lash wall vekh cheekhan mardi rondi hoyi ek passey nu dig behosh ho gayi ...bhaj k lokan ney usdi maa nu sambhya apney hathan wal vekhdi hoye ro e payi deepak di ruh ufff apni maa nu b nai sambh sakda oh......

shamshaan ghat ch har koi usdean akhiri rasma ch shamil c ..par deepak tan bas ek passey kahdi apni rondi hoyi maa nu vekh riha c tey dujey passey chittah tey rakhi apni lash kol beithey apney peo nu apnian akhiri rasma kardey vekh riha c pathar wang hoyean apney bapuji dean akhan chup chap mantar pardey hoye apney puttar nu akhiri bidayi dey rehean c
"hye o rabba ruk ja deepu dey bapu na la aag mere putt nu ..hye o rabba roko koi deepu dey bapu nu .. hye oye sek laguga mere putt nu .."cheekh mar k rondi hoyi behosh ho gayi usdi maa jad usney apney gharwaley nu apney putt di chittah nu aag landey hoye vekhea ek bar gardan ghuma usdey peo ney usdi maa wal vekhea...laash nu agg la dhu dhu kardi chitta nu vekh cheekh uthea eh usdi pehli cheekh c apney putt di laash nu vekh.. godea bhar jameen tey beithda hoyea aaaasman wal vekhda bolea "ahhhh ki likhia rabba tun meri kismat ch apney putt di laash nu moda dena tey usdi chittah nu aag lani .. hye o rabba edan da naseeb kisi peo di kismat na likhin..." kehda ehnda uhci uchi ronda ek passey nu behosh ho dig pya
samaj nai aa rahi c ki karey deepak ek passey shamshaan ghat tey usdi maa behosh payi c tey dujey passey usda peo .. chah k o dono vichon kisi nu b na tan apnian wahan ch ghut sakda c na e hausla dey unha nu chup karwa sakda c ... najar usdi amit kol khadi apni vohti mansi tey payi...ruh usdi b cheekh uthi apni mansi dey munh ton eh sun "eh buda budi kuch jyada e natak nai kar rahey .................
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