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''muje maloom ha k tu ne nai maara mere maa baap ko...lekin khoon to tu unhi ka ha na''
yeh keh k ma ne gun us ki taraf seedhi kr di...
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BOHAT SAAL PEHLE...
''yar peche hut na muje dekhne de ab''
ma ne hashim urf hashoo ko peche kia aur khud darakht k peche se sir nikal k hamare gaon se guzarne wali chhoti si neher ki taraf dekha jahan sughran kapre dhone k baad apni kameez utar rai thi
us k mote jisam pe dhalke hue mamme b uswaqt mere liye bohat pyari si cheez the
hashoo:chal ab meri bari
ma side pe hogya aur hashoo ne position sambhal li
''kya kr rai ha ab woh?''
ma ne betabi se pucha
hashoo:shalwar utar rai ha
me:peche hut
ma usay peche kr k phir agay hua
sughran ne idhar udhar dekha aur khari ho k jldi se shalwar utari aur pani mein utar gae
ma us ki bohat bari aur pheli hui gaand he dekh ska bs
wo neher bs itni si gehri thi k sughran k mammon tk he pani tha
neher mein utar k wo apne mamme dhone lgi
hashoo:chal muje b dekhne de na yar
us k kehne pe ma side pe hogya
ma uswaqt 7th class mein tha
mera nam Faizan ha aur muje faizi bulate hn aur hum punjab k 1 gaon mein rehte hn jo sheher se bs adhe ghante k fasle pe ha
kehte hn k jb ma 3 saal ka tha aur mere parents ki 1 accident mein death hogae thi
phir muje meri phhuppo ne paala jin ki apni koi aulaad nai thi
hamara khandaan kafi para tha...4 chacha aur 3 phuppo...kuch yahan gaon mein he rehte the kuch sath wale gaon mein...kuch sath wale sheher mein aur kuch lahore mein aur sb k sb he khase ameer the
phuppo ne muje bohat laad aur pyar se pala tha aur ma unhe BUA keh k bulata tha
characters k nam agay sath sath btata rahun ga...aur kuch nam meri pichli story se common b hn ge kyu k mere zehen mein itne sare new nam nai aa rai lekin un k characters isi story k hn ge..
''is bar b garmiyon ki chhuttion mein hum khala k ghar ja rai hn''
hashoo ne muje btaya
me:muje to bua aur baba(phuppa) kahin chhorte he nai yar..1 2 din k liye sath he le jate hn aur sath he wapis''
uswaqt hum school ja rai the
hashoo:oye woh dekh sumaira
hamare school k sath he larkion ka school tha
sumaira mere mohalle ki larki thi aur 9th mein parhti thi
woh roz ki tarah muje dekh k muskurae aur apne school mein dakhil hogae
me:yeh muje pagal lgti ha ..aiwen hans deti ha muje dekh k jese mere sir pe seengh hn
hashoo:han muje b yehi lgta ha
''parhae kesi ja rai ha faizi puttar''
baba ne muj se pucha
me:achi ja rai ha baba
bua:mere Hamid(mere asal father ka nam) ki tarah laiq ha mera faizi..pata ha puttar hamid hum behn bhaion mein wahid tha jo university tk gya aur..
baba:chal ab rone na beth jana
baba ne bua ko toka
me:wo ma ne match khelne jana ha
baba:yahan school ki ground mein he?
me:nai sath wale gaon mein..chacha se b mil aun ga
baba:chal akram ko sath le ja
me:1 to gaon se bahir her jagah ap kisi na kisi ko mere sath bhej dete hn
ma ne munh bnaya
bua:agar akram ko sath nai le k jana to tu b nai jaye ga
me:acha bhejen usay sath..sare apni cycle ya bike pe jate hn aur muje ap gari pe bhejen k us akram k sath...kitna ajeeb sa lgta ha
bua aur baba hansne lge
bua:1 to tere baba teri fikar krte hn aur tu naraz hota ha
bua ne muje sath lgaya
baba:tu he to ha hamare pas aur ha kya?
match khel k ma taya ki haveli chala gya
taya bare se kamre mein logon mein ghire bethe the hamesha ki tarah aur sath he un k bete b the
ma un se mil k andar ki taraf aagya
raheela baji aur sajeela baji tayi k sath bethi tv dekh rai thn
taya ki dono betian college mein parhti thn aur sakht parde mein ati jati thn..iswaqt b ghar mein hone k bawajood dono ne chadar lapaiti hui thi
tayi:aj to bari baat ha k tum akele agye ho
me:nai akram ha sath
raheela:chhota bcha ha na isliye akele nai bhejte ise kahin
wo dono hansne lgi
me:bs kya kru baji bua aur baba maante he nai hn
tayi:han kuch ziada he darpok hn shayed
muje tayi ki yeh baat bikul b achi nai lgi
me:meri bua aur mere baba aise nai hn...poore gaon mein rob ha baba ka
sajeela: arrey yeh to bura mana gya...btao kya khao ge
me:kuch nai..ma chalta hn bs kafi der hogae ha bua pareshan ho rai hn gi
ma utha to taya andar agye
taya:abi betho khana kha k jana
me
er hogae ha
taya:nai khana kha k jao
taya ne is bar hukum dia tayi khana lene chali gae aur taya wapis berthak mein
sajeela:aur hero...kese ho
us ne muje ooper se kr neche tk dekha
raheela aur sajeela dono he kkhubsurat thn magar raheela bari hone ki waja se zara kum shokh thi sajeela ki nisbat
me:baji ma kb hero hn
raheela:bare hogye ho tum
me: nai g 7th mein hn abi to
sajeela:han to tumhare baba ne dakhil b to 6 saal ki umer mein kraya na tumhe
muje is behus ka maqsad samaj nai aa raha tha so ma chup hogya ma bar bar time dekh raha tha aur thori der baad un k phone ki ghnti bji Raheela baat ker ke wapis ayi
Raheela:bua ka phn tha tumhara puch rai thn ma ne bta dia k abbu na kaha ha k khana kha k jaye
sajeela:wese tum hamare itna kum kum kyu ate ho?
me:yahan pe sb to bare bare hn
Raheela ne sajeela ki taraf dekha
Raheela:ab itni b bari nai hn tum se hum
me:ap college mein ho
sajeela:tou kya hua?cousins mein dosti to hoti ha na
me:ap larki ho aur ma larka..hamari dosti kese?wese b ap dono meri baji ho
raheela:ufff..bua ne bilkul budhu bna k rkha hua ha ise
sajeela hansne lagi main thora bohat khana kha k utha to afzal bhai(taya ka beta) andar aagye aur un ki behnon ne jldi se seedhi ho k beth gaen
Afzal:suna faizi..kesa ha?
me:theek afzal bhai
Afzal:oye koi tang to nai krta tuje?
me: nai g muje kis ne tng krna ha?
Afzal:agar koi kre to muje btana ma dekh lu ga usay...hamare chacha ki nishani hai tu...aur wo bhi akhri nishani
TO BE CONTINUE
''muje maloom ha k tu ne nai maara mere maa baap ko...lekin khoon to tu unhi ka ha na''
yeh keh k ma ne gun us ki taraf seedhi kr di...
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BOHAT SAAL PEHLE...
''yar peche hut na muje dekhne de ab''
ma ne hashim urf hashoo ko peche kia aur khud darakht k peche se sir nikal k hamare gaon se guzarne wali chhoti si neher ki taraf dekha jahan sughran kapre dhone k baad apni kameez utar rai thi
us k mote jisam pe dhalke hue mamme b uswaqt mere liye bohat pyari si cheez the
hashoo:chal ab meri bari
ma side pe hogya aur hashoo ne position sambhal li
''kya kr rai ha ab woh?''
ma ne betabi se pucha
hashoo:shalwar utar rai ha
me:peche hut
ma usay peche kr k phir agay hua
sughran ne idhar udhar dekha aur khari ho k jldi se shalwar utari aur pani mein utar gae
ma us ki bohat bari aur pheli hui gaand he dekh ska bs
wo neher bs itni si gehri thi k sughran k mammon tk he pani tha
neher mein utar k wo apne mamme dhone lgi
hashoo:chal muje b dekhne de na yar
us k kehne pe ma side pe hogya
ma uswaqt 7th class mein tha
mera nam Faizan ha aur muje faizi bulate hn aur hum punjab k 1 gaon mein rehte hn jo sheher se bs adhe ghante k fasle pe ha
kehte hn k jb ma 3 saal ka tha aur mere parents ki 1 accident mein death hogae thi
phir muje meri phhuppo ne paala jin ki apni koi aulaad nai thi
hamara khandaan kafi para tha...4 chacha aur 3 phuppo...kuch yahan gaon mein he rehte the kuch sath wale gaon mein...kuch sath wale sheher mein aur kuch lahore mein aur sb k sb he khase ameer the
phuppo ne muje bohat laad aur pyar se pala tha aur ma unhe BUA keh k bulata tha
characters k nam agay sath sath btata rahun ga...aur kuch nam meri pichli story se common b hn ge kyu k mere zehen mein itne sare new nam nai aa rai lekin un k characters isi story k hn ge..
''is bar b garmiyon ki chhuttion mein hum khala k ghar ja rai hn''
hashoo ne muje btaya
me:muje to bua aur baba(phuppa) kahin chhorte he nai yar..1 2 din k liye sath he le jate hn aur sath he wapis''
uswaqt hum school ja rai the
hashoo:oye woh dekh sumaira
hamare school k sath he larkion ka school tha
sumaira mere mohalle ki larki thi aur 9th mein parhti thi
woh roz ki tarah muje dekh k muskurae aur apne school mein dakhil hogae
me:yeh muje pagal lgti ha ..aiwen hans deti ha muje dekh k jese mere sir pe seengh hn
hashoo:han muje b yehi lgta ha
''parhae kesi ja rai ha faizi puttar''
baba ne muj se pucha
me:achi ja rai ha baba
bua:mere Hamid(mere asal father ka nam) ki tarah laiq ha mera faizi..pata ha puttar hamid hum behn bhaion mein wahid tha jo university tk gya aur..
baba:chal ab rone na beth jana
baba ne bua ko toka
me:wo ma ne match khelne jana ha
baba:yahan school ki ground mein he?
me:nai sath wale gaon mein..chacha se b mil aun ga
baba:chal akram ko sath le ja
me:1 to gaon se bahir her jagah ap kisi na kisi ko mere sath bhej dete hn
ma ne munh bnaya
bua:agar akram ko sath nai le k jana to tu b nai jaye ga
me:acha bhejen usay sath..sare apni cycle ya bike pe jate hn aur muje ap gari pe bhejen k us akram k sath...kitna ajeeb sa lgta ha
bua aur baba hansne lge
bua:1 to tere baba teri fikar krte hn aur tu naraz hota ha
bua ne muje sath lgaya
baba:tu he to ha hamare pas aur ha kya?
match khel k ma taya ki haveli chala gya
taya bare se kamre mein logon mein ghire bethe the hamesha ki tarah aur sath he un k bete b the
ma un se mil k andar ki taraf aagya
raheela baji aur sajeela baji tayi k sath bethi tv dekh rai thn
taya ki dono betian college mein parhti thn aur sakht parde mein ati jati thn..iswaqt b ghar mein hone k bawajood dono ne chadar lapaiti hui thi
tayi:aj to bari baat ha k tum akele agye ho
me:nai akram ha sath
raheela:chhota bcha ha na isliye akele nai bhejte ise kahin
wo dono hansne lgi
me:bs kya kru baji bua aur baba maante he nai hn
tayi:han kuch ziada he darpok hn shayed
muje tayi ki yeh baat bikul b achi nai lgi
me:meri bua aur mere baba aise nai hn...poore gaon mein rob ha baba ka
sajeela: arrey yeh to bura mana gya...btao kya khao ge
me:kuch nai..ma chalta hn bs kafi der hogae ha bua pareshan ho rai hn gi
ma utha to taya andar agye
taya:abi betho khana kha k jana
me

taya:nai khana kha k jao
taya ne is bar hukum dia tayi khana lene chali gae aur taya wapis berthak mein
sajeela:aur hero...kese ho
us ne muje ooper se kr neche tk dekha
raheela aur sajeela dono he kkhubsurat thn magar raheela bari hone ki waja se zara kum shokh thi sajeela ki nisbat
me:baji ma kb hero hn
raheela:bare hogye ho tum
me: nai g 7th mein hn abi to
sajeela:han to tumhare baba ne dakhil b to 6 saal ki umer mein kraya na tumhe
muje is behus ka maqsad samaj nai aa raha tha so ma chup hogya ma bar bar time dekh raha tha aur thori der baad un k phone ki ghnti bji Raheela baat ker ke wapis ayi
Raheela:bua ka phn tha tumhara puch rai thn ma ne bta dia k abbu na kaha ha k khana kha k jaye
sajeela:wese tum hamare itna kum kum kyu ate ho?
me:yahan pe sb to bare bare hn
Raheela ne sajeela ki taraf dekha
Raheela:ab itni b bari nai hn tum se hum
me:ap college mein ho
sajeela:tou kya hua?cousins mein dosti to hoti ha na
me:ap larki ho aur ma larka..hamari dosti kese?wese b ap dono meri baji ho
raheela:ufff..bua ne bilkul budhu bna k rkha hua ha ise
sajeela hansne lagi main thora bohat khana kha k utha to afzal bhai(taya ka beta) andar aagye aur un ki behnon ne jldi se seedhi ho k beth gaen
Afzal:suna faizi..kesa ha?
me:theek afzal bhai
Afzal:oye koi tang to nai krta tuje?
me: nai g muje kis ne tng krna ha?
Afzal:agar koi kre to muje btana ma dekh lu ga usay...hamare chacha ki nishani hai tu...aur wo bhi akhri nishani
TO BE CONTINUE