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CHAMATKAR- PART II


प्राचीन सभ्यताओं, धर्म, समाज और संस्कृतियों का महान देश भारत वैसे भी रहस्य और रोमांच के लिए जाना जाता है। एक ओर जहां भारत में दुनिया की प्रथम भाषा संस्कृत का जन्म हुआ तो दूसरी ओर दुनिया का प्रथम ग्रंथ ऋग्वेद लिखा गया। एक और जहां दुनिया की प्रथम लिपि ब्राह्मी लिपि का जन्म हुआ तो दूसरी ओर दुनिया के प्रथम विश्वविद्यालय नालंदा और तक्षशिला की स्थापना हुई।

प्राचीन भारत में एक ओर जहां अगस्त्य मुनि ने बिजली का आविष्कार किया था तो हजारों वर्ष पूर्व ऋषि भारद्वाज ने विमानशास्त्र लिखकर यह बताया था कि किस तरह विमान बनाए जा सकते हैं। गुरुत्वाकर्षण का सिद्धांत जहां भास्कराचार्य ने ईजाद किया था तो वहीं कणाद ऋषि को परमाणु सिद्धांत का जनक माना गया है। एक ओर जहां सांप-सीढ़ी का खेल भारत में जन्मा दो दूसरी ओर शतरंज का आविष्कार भी भारत में ही हुआ। आचार्य चरक और सुश्रुत को श्रेय जाता है प्लास्टिक सर्जरी चिकित्सा की खोज का। पाणिणी ने दुनिया का पहला व्याकरण लिखा था। ज्यामिति, पाई का मान, रिलेटिविटी का सिद्धांत जैसे कई सिद्धांत और आविष्कार हैं, जो भारत ने गढ़े हैं।

एक लड़का जिसके लिये गणित दुनिया की सबसे बड़ी मुसीबत थी। वह एक ऐसे तिलिस्म में फंस जाता है जो गणितीय समीकरणों पर आधारित था।
अब गणित उसके लिये जिंदगी और मौत का सवाल बन चुकी थी।
क्या वह उस तिलिस्म से बाहर निकल सका?

# A boy for whom mathematics was the world’s worst hardship.
# He is trapped in an illusion based on mathematical formulae.
# Beyond this trap was LIFE and inside it - DEATH.
# On the path of illusion were many strewn mathematical webs.
# So now, mathematics became a matter of life and death for him.
# Could he get out of the illusion, even though he did not own his body?

MAYAJAAL is the story for those who love mathematics, and for those who hate mathematics.
It is a travel of fascinating numeric world. This world is situated in a parallel universe across a pointless wormhole. Here some miraculous things are seen; say a cubic monster, a Unitary Ghost and yes, an arithmetic witch. They are making together a dangerous topology. Here situated a valley of complex numbers surrounded by mountain of triangles whose height goes to infinity and depth tends to zero. Here situated some open houses of quadratic equations in the closed colony of an algebraic system. Some numeric creatures reside in these houses; those are actually the real spirits of lifeless numbers of some other dimensions. Among these spirits some are angels of angles seems to be very beautiful but some ugly demons of denominators specially zero too are walking in the field.

Enjoy this science fiction paranormal full of suspense, adventure, comedy and thrill.
 
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UPDATE * 1


‘Tan....Tan...Tan’.....school ki ghanti teen char baar baji aur Ramu ko aisa mahsoos hua jaise ki uske dil par kisi ne teen baar hathoude se vaar kar diya ho.

Choutha period shuru ho gaya tha aur ye period usko kisi rakshas ke bhojan ki tarah lagta tha....kisi tarah khatam hi nahi hota tha....usko ganit aur ganit ke agrawal sir dono se bahut chidh thi aur choutha period unhi ka hota tha.

Ramu ka poora naam Ram Kumar Verma tha...kintu vah ramu ke naam se hi vikhyat tha......Ek mahine pahle hi usne apna 18th janamdin manaya tha lekin abhi bhi metric me hi latka hua tha, uska karan tha uska 8th aur 10th me fail hona...maths uske dimag me ghusti hi nahi thi.

Ramu ke dost usko ramu kuthali ke naam se bulate the....uske iss naam ke piche bhi ek badi hi rochak kahani hai, jiska jikra aage kiya jayega.

Rame ne apne mann ko ummid bandha kar class attend karne ke vishay me sochne laga....ek baar to uska mann hua ki ghar bhag jaye lekin phir kuch aur hi sochne laga.

Ramu (mann me)—ho sakta hai ki aaj agrawal sir school hi na aaye ho... ? kisi accident me unki taang toot gayi ho….aaj kal ke traffic ka koi bharosa to hai nahi...kisi gadi wale ne unki bike ko piche se thonk diya ho.

Lekin traffic ka wakayi me koi bharosa nahi hai....kyon ki agrawal sir apni dono taango ki poori majbooti ke sath class me dakhil ho rahe the....unke chehre par chadha mota chashma unhe aur bhi khunkhar bana raha tha...kisi anakonda ki tarah...unhe dekhte hi ramu ne mann hi mann agrawal sir aur apni kismat ko dher galiya di.

Class me aane ke sath hi agrawal sir ne balck board par do rekhaye khich di aur ek ladke ko khada kar diya.

Agrawal—anil, tum batao ye kya hai…..?

Anil—sir, ye do samantar rekhaye hain.

Agrawal—shabash..! baith jao….gagan, ab tum samantar rekhao ki koi ek vishesta batao.

Gagan—sir, samantar rekhaye aapas me kabhi nahi milti.

Gagan ne turant jawab diya...uski ganit ka loha to achche achche mante the....kuch to usko agrawal sir ka uttaradhikari tak samajhne lage the.

Agrawal—very good….tum bhi baith jao……ram kumar ab tum khade ho.

Ramu (dhire se)—Lo aa gayi shamat.

Usne kisi tarah apni taango par jor diya aur mann me gaaliya dete huye dhire dhire khada hua...uske khade hote hi poori class ka sir uski oor ghum gaya tha.

Agrawal—batao...samantar rekhaye aapas me kyo nahi milti...... ?

Ramu (mann me)—unn dono se itne saral sawal aur mujhse itna kathin... ! lagta hai jarur pichle janam ka koi badla le raha hai ye agrawal.

Agrawal sir ne sawal jada aur ramu ka dimag ghum gaya...vo sawal ke bare me sochne laga kintu kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha...akhir kaar usko ek dhansu jawab soojh hi gaya.

Ramu—sir, rekhaye stri ling hoti hain...aur striyo ki vishesta yahi hoti hai ki vo sasuri aapas me mil baith kar nahi rah sakti.

Dusre hi pal poori class me ek thahaka pada...sab jor jor se hasne lage...ramu boukhala kar charo taraf dekhne laga...

Ramu (mann me)—sab aise has kyo rahe hain.... ? kya mere muh se kuch galat nikal gaya tha….?

Agrawal (daant kar)—abe, ghogha basant ki aulad….poori duniya sudhar jayegi, lekin tu nahi sudharega…chal idhar kinare aa.

Agle hi pal uska kaan agrawal sir ki mutthi me tha…kinare pahuch kar pahle to uss khaddus ne do teen thappad lagaye aur phir murga ban jane ka order de diya….uske baad poore aadhe ghante tak agrawal sir ne uska bheja chabakar poore ka poora uske dimag ka bhurta bana diya tha.

Ramu (mann me)—sale ka period bhi khatam nahi ho raha hai….iska period itna lamba kyo hota hai..?

Akhir agrawal sir ka period khatam hua aur vo class se chale gaye…tab kahi ramu ki jaan me jaan aayi vo sidha ho ke apni jagah par baith gaya.

Gagan—hahaha….aaj class me bahut maza aaya.

Pinky—mujhe bhi….vaise achcha hi hai…ek gadha to hai class me hamara manoranjan karne ke liye… hihihihi

Anil—ye pinky bhi aaj kal gagan ke favour me ho gayi hai…aur ye gagan to hai hi..apne aap ko bahut bada ganitagya samajhta hai.

Ramu—school aate samay kisi din raste me pakad kar sale ki gaand maar lunga to poori ganit hawa ho jayegi.

Anil—chal be gussa thook..ab ghar chalte hain

Chhutti hote hi vo ghar aa gaya…andar ghuste hi uski naak me kuch achche khane ki khushbu aane lagi to bhag kar kitchen me gaya jaha uski maa nirmala khana bana rahi thi.

Ramu—maa jaldi khana do bahut bhookh lagi hai…aaj badi khushbu aa rahi hai..kya banaya hai..?

Nirmala—aa gaya…methi ke parathe hain…chal pahle ye kapde badal aur hath muh dho…tab tak main khana lagati hu.

Ramu—arey maa, tum hi apne hath se khila do..ab ye hath muh koun dhone jaye roj roj.

Nirmala—nahi..pahle hath muh dho..chal

Ramu mann masos kar kitchen se chala gaya aur kapde change kar ke hath pair dhone ke baad khana khane baith gaya…khana samne aate hi jaldi jaldi khane laga.

“Ye bhukkhad khana rakh niche…jab dekho khata hi rahta hai.” Piche se aati huyi Janki didi ne kaha.

Janki kahne ko to ramu ki badi bahan hai vo bhi poore ek saal badi....lekin dono bhai bahan ke beech chhattis ka aankada hai....halanki vo bhi ramu ki hi school me 12th class me padhti hai aur bahut brilliant hai...jaha ramu math me zero hai to vahi janki hoshiyar hai.

Vaise inka ek aur bada bhai bhi hai Umesh jo engineering kar raha hai...rajesh jo ki inke pita ji hain unki city me paan ki ek chhoti dukan hai jisse kisi tarah se jeevan yaapan chal raha hai.

Ramu—mera dimag mat kha..tujhe bhi khana hai to kha le.

Janki—tere paas dimag hai hi kaha jo khaungi... ?

Nirmala—tum dono phir chalu ho gaye...aur janki use khane de shanti se.

Janki—to main kya uska khana chhuda rahi hu.. ? bhukkhad kahi ka…..maa, aaj phir ye class me murga bana tha aur maar bhi padi isko jam ke.

Nirmala—tujhe kitni baar kaha hai ki kuch usko bhi math padha diya kar lekin tu sunti kaha hai…agle week se timahi exams hai…kam se kam iss saal to kisi tarah se paas ho jaye.

Janki—ooff…mujhe apni bhi to taiyyari karni hai…theek hai..ye bhukkhad chal khana band kar ke mere room me aa ja…aaj main teri class leti hu.

Ramu—mujhe nahi padhna tere se…chal apna kaam kar….maa main thoda ghum kar aata hu.

Janki—haan…ja..ja…aur phir apne awara dosto ke sath bhaang pikar aa jana ghar.

Nirmala—dekh ramu..agar kuch nasha kar ke aaya to phir aaj main nahi bachaungi tujhe tere papa ke hatho ae maar khane se.

Ramu—nahi maa…kaha peeta hu main…ek baar galti se dosto ne pila diya tha holi ki party me.

Janki—to chhod kyo nahi deta aise ghatiya dosto ka sath…?

Ramu—tu apna kaam kar samjhi.

Ramu ghar se nikal kar apne dosto ke paas cricket khelne chala gaya...unme se kuch ladke nasha bhi karte the.

Rohit (dost)—arey yaar....thoda maal hai kya... ?

Satish—haan kaam chal jayega.

Rohit—chal ek do kash laga lete hain phir khelne me maza ayega.

Satish—sahi kahta hai bhai…chal aa ja.

Ramu—tum log kaha ja rahe ho...khelna nahi hai kya.... ?

Satish—aa ja tu bhi ek kash le le.

Ramu—nahi...main koi nasha nahi karta.

Rohit (jhuth)—pagal ye nasha thode hi hai....isse dimag tez hota hai....tujhe pata hai gagan to roj leta hai ye..tabhi to uska dimag math me itna tez chalta hai.

Ramu (hairan)—kyaaaa...tum log sach kah rahe ho.... ?

Satish—aur nahi to kya…? Kya hum tujhse jhuth bolenge…? Yaha tak ki vo agrawal sir bhi ye daily peete hain.

Rohit—kya tu nahi chahta ki tujhse bhi math aane lage….?

Ramu—haan..haan...chahta hu..lekin math mere bheje me aati hi nahi hai.

Satish—to aa ja thoda sa le le aur phir ghar ja kar padhna aur dekhna iska kamal.

Ramu—kya sach me... ?

Rohit—bilkul

Ramu bhi unke sath baith kar gaanja peene laga...lekin ek do kash me hi usko khansi aane lagi...kuch hi der me uski ankho ke samne andhera chhane laga.

Ramu (nashe me)—main ab ghar jaunga aur khub padhunga aaj.

Ramu jhumte huye kisi tarah ghar pahuch ke apne room me chala gaya chup chaap.....kuch hi der me uske papa bhi ghar aa gaye.

Papa ke dwara usko lagbhag daily hi daant milti thi padhne ke piche.... daant se bachne ke liye usne jaldi se laptop khol kar bed par baith gaya aur padhne laga.

Ramu (mann me)—aa gaya jallad....achcha hai..aaj padhte dekhega to daant nahi padegi.

Rajesh fresh hone ke baad jaise hi uske room ke samne se gujra to dekh kar vahi ruk gaya aur phir andar aa gaya.

Rajesh (jor se)—ye kya kar raha hai...? aaj phir pi kar aaya hai kya….?

Ramu –nnn…nahi papa….main to padhayi kar raha hu.

Rajesh—padhayi kar raha hai….? To ye suit case khol kar kyo baitha hai….?

Ramu (chounk kar mann me)—maine to laptop khola tha….ye suitcase kaise ban gaya….?
 
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Rajesh fresh hone ke baad jaise hi uske room ke samne se gujra to dekh kar vahi ruk gaya aur phir andar aa gaya.

Rajesh (jor se)—ye kya kar raha hai...? aaj phir pi kar aaya hai kya….?

Ramu –nnn…nahi papa….main to padhayi kar raha hu.

Rajesh—padhayi kar raha hai….? To ye suit case khol kar kyo baitha hai….?

Ramu (chounk kar mann me)—maine to laptop khola tha….ye suitcase kaise ban gaya….?

Ab Aage……

Rajesh—piya nahi hai to tere room se itni smell kyo aa rahi hai….?

Ramu—pata nahi..papa

Rajesh (paas aa kar gusse me)—achcha pata nahi…chattaaakkkkk……nalayak gaanja peene ke baad ab jhuth bolna bhi sikh liya…..ruk aaj main teri khal udhedta hu.

Nirmala—kya hai, aap to aate hi bechare ke piche pad gaye….?

Rajesh—dekho janki, tum na beech me mat bola karo…..ye gadha kisi kaam ka nahi hai…gadha to phir bhi theek hai kam se kam vajan to uthane ke kaam aata hai, par ye nalayak to usse bhi gaya gujra hai.

Nirmala—main usko samjha dungi…aap chalo khana kha lo.

Rajesh—tumne hi sar me chadha kar bigada hai isko…ek din pachhtaogi….har hafte iski school se principal aur math ke teacher ke calls aate hain ki iska naam kaat denge…math me bilkul zero hai, faltu me mera paisa barbad karwa raha hai.

Janki—aaj bhi ye murga bana tha papa.

Rajesh—sun liya tumne….do do baar fail hone ke baad bhi koi sharam nahi hai….har mahine test me math me isko zero milte hain….naak katwa kar rakh di hai isne meri.

Nirmala—haan sun liya….sab ke sab jab dekho uske hi piche pade rahte ho.

Ye koi aaj ka kriya kalap nahi tha…..yah to lagbhag har roj hi hota tha ramu ke sath….har baar test me zero milne par uski ghar me jam kar pitayi hoti thi.

Pahle school me agrawal sir ne uska dimag khaya aur ab ghar me uske papa ne bhurta banaya…ramu apne gaal sahlata hua chup chaap math ki kitab nikal kar padhne baith gaya lekin jab juch samajh me aaye tab to padhe…phir bhi sab ko dikhane ke liye kitab me bani aadi tirchhi rekhao ke chitra hi dekhne laga.

Lekin ramu ke andar ek vishesh gun bhi tha….vo chitrakari bahut achchi karta tha….ek baar usne jo dekh liya uska aisa chitra banata tha .

Chitra dekh kar aisa mahsoos hota tha jaise ki vo sajeev ho aur abhi haqiqat ka roop le kar jeevant ho uthega….

Agle din subah maa ke uthane par uski need khuli to vo fresh hone bathroom chala gaya….unke ghar me ek hi bathroom tha…kisi ke liye seperate to tha nahi.

Bathroom me brush karte huye achanak uske dimag me kya kida bul bulaya ki vo vaha se nikal kar sidhe apne room me ja kar teen char colour ke marker le kar phir se bathroom me ghus gaya aur darwaja andar se band kar liya.

Bathroom me bijli ke socket ke upar hi usne chitrakari shuru kar di…iss douran uske papa usko baar baar jaldi bahar nikalne ke liye awaz dete rahe…..lagbhag aadhe ghante me hi usne uss socket par karina kapoor ka bilkul sajeev lagne jaisa ek jeeta jagta khubsurat chitra bana dala….

Rajesh (chillate huye)—nalayak andar hi so gaya kya….? Jaldi bahar nikal, mujhe dukan bhi jana hai.

Ab ki baar rajesh ke kuch jyada hi jor se chillane se ramu ki tandra toot gayi….usne ek baar chitra ko dhyan se dekha ki kahi koi kami to nahi hai.

Chitra me koi kami nahi thi….balki uss chitra ki khubsurti aur satik colour ke aage ye tak malum nahi chal raha tha ki ye chitra socket ke upar aarekhit hai.

Vo jaldi se bahar nikal kar room me bhag gaya…ki kahi pitayi na ho jaye…..rajesh badbadate huye fresh hone bathroom me chala gaya….

Rajesh (badbadate huye)—pata nahi itni der tak kya karta raha hai….?

Rajesh jaise hi bathroom me enter hua to samne deewar ko dekhte hi chounk gaya….usko sara mazra samajh aa gaya.

Lekin chitra dekhte hi vo bhi uski khubsurti me kho gaye…karina kapoor ke surkh lal lal hotho ko dekh kar rajesh ma mann lalcha gaya aur vo khud ko uske inn hotho ka ras pine se nahi rok paya…usne apne hotho ko karina ke hotho se mila diye.

Kintu agle hi pal bathroom se uske jor se chillane ki awaz aane lagi…jabki haqiqat me hua ye tha ki rajesh ne iss baat par dhyan diye bina ki ye chitra bijli ke socket ke upar bana hai, jaise hi usne apne hoth karina ke hotho ke upar rakhe…..usko tez bijli ka jhatka laga aur uska kiss karne ka bukhar hawa ho gaya.

Rajesh (jor se)—aaaaahhhhh….marrr gayaaaa.

Nirmala—kya hua…aise kyo chilla rahe ho….?

Rajesh (muh me hath rakh gusse se)—kaha hai vo nalayak…..? aaj uska chitrakari ka bhoot utarta hu.

Bas phir kya tha..ho gayi bechare ramu ki bina sabun pani ke dhulayi shuru….ramu ko to pitayi ki asli vajah bhi samajh nahi aayi.

Nirmala—ab chhodo bhi…maar hi daloge kya mere bete ko…?

Rajesh (jor se)—math me zero aur chitrakar banega….? Agar aaj se teri koi bhi shikayat math me aayi to samajh lena.

Rajesh uski pitayi karne ke baad bina nahaye hi dukan chala gaya…ramu kuch der tak bistar me leta raha chupchap aur phir taiyyar ho ke school chala gaya.

Parantu aaj ka uska din hi kharab tha….school aane ke baad bhi usko koi rahat nahi mili….ulta agrawal sir ke puche sawalo ka aaj bhi galat jawab dene par usko saza hi mili.

Sadak par paaydal marte huye ram kumar urf ramu aaj kuch jyada hi vichlit tha…usko ehsaas ho gaya tha ki math jeevan bhar uske palle nahi padegi…aur math ke bina jeevan hi bekar tha…yahi sabak uske maa baap aur teachers diya karte the.

So usne apna jeevan samapt karne ka nishchay kiya…uske raste me ek chota sa jungle padta tha…uske andar ek gahra talab hai..ye bhi usko pata tha.

Usne apni cycle sadak se niche utar di….ab vah uss gahre talab ki oor ja raha tha…chunki usne tairna sikha nahi tha, isliye vah aasani se doob kar mar jayega…yahi vichar aaya uske mann me.

Jaldi hi uski cycle talab ke kinare pahuch gayi….usne speed tez kar di…uski speed dekh kar aisa laga jaise ki vo cycle ke sath hi pani me ghus jana chahta tha.

Achanak usko laga ki piche se kisi ne uski cycle rok li hai….usne ghum kar dekhna chaha, lekin ussi samay uski gardan bhi kisi ne pakad li…..koi uski gardan daba raha tha….dhire dhire uss par behoshi chha gayi.
 
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Sadak par paaydal marte huye ram kumar urf ramu aaj kuch jyada hi vichlit tha…usko ehsaas ho gaya tha ki math jeevan bhar uske palle nahi padegi…aur math ke bina jeevan hi bekar tha…yahi sabak uske maa baap aur teachers diya karte the.

So usne apna jeevan samapt karne ka nishchay kiya…uske raste me ek chota sa jungle padta tha…uske andar ek gahra talab hai..ye bhi usko pata tha.

Usne apni cycle sadak se niche utar di….ab vah uss gahre talab ki oor ja raha tha…chunki usne tairna sikha nahi tha, isliye vah aasani se doob kar mar jayega…yahi vichar aaya uske mann me.

Jaldi hi uski cycle talab ke kinare pahuch gayi….usne speed tez kar di…uski speed dekh kar aisa laga jaise ki vo cycle ke sath hi pani me ghus jana chahta tha.

Achanak usko laga ki piche se kisi ne uski cycle rok li hai….usne ghum kar dekhna chaha, lekin ussi samay uski gardan bhi kisi ne pakad li…..koi uski gardan daba raha tha….dhire dhire uss par behoshi chha gayi.

Ab Aage…….

Ek chhote se kamre me tez neeli roshni phaili huyi thi….iss roshni me chaar bachche aas paas khade huye kisi gambhir chintan me doobe huye the.

Lekin haqiqat to yah thi ki dar asal ye bachche nahi balki boune prani hain…kyon ki inke chehre par dadhi aur moonchhe moujud thi.

Unke sharir ka poora ranga gahra peela colour ka tha jo ki iss baat ka suchak tha ki ye boune prani iss dharti ke arthat prithvi vasi to bilkul bhi nahi hain.

Issi kamre ke ek kone me ramu moujud tha jo ki abhi bhi behosh avastha me tha….lekin kamre ki sabse aakarshit karne wali vastu thi, ek taboot numa shishe ka baksha.

Jiske andar unhi charo ke jaisa ek bouna prani nishchal avastha me pada hua tha….uske sharir me koi bhi halchal nahi ho rahi thi.

“To ab kya irada hai, Mr. Romeo” unn charo me se ek ne vatavaran me chhayi nistabdhta ko todte huye kaha.

Romeo—hame apne samrat ko kisi bhi keemat par bachana hai…warna prithvi naam ke iss anjan grah par ham jyada samay tak jinda nahi rah payenge.

“Saari galti hamare yaan ke auto pilot ki thi…..yaha ke vayu mandal me utarte huye usne yaan ko poori tarah se dis balance kar diya….natize me hamare samrat ka sharir lagbhag poora hi nasht ho gaya.” Teesra vyakti bola.

“Theek kahte ho silvasa…..ab hamare samrat ke sharir me kewal unka mastisk hi sahi salamat bacha hai aur agar hamne der ki to vah bhi nasht ho jayega…..kyo romeo…..?” Pahle wala bouna admi bola.

Romeo—haa..Dove……ab aage madam vaan ko apna hunar dikhana hai…..unhe jald se jald samrat ka dimag uss ladke ke sharir me transplant kar dena hai, jisko hum jungle me talab ke kinare se pakad kar laye hain.

“Theek hai.” Teesra vyakti jo dar asal madam dove thi bol uthi.

Aur phir vo sab apne apne kaam me jut gaye….ramu ko taboot ke bagal me lita diya gaya tha… phir vo mastisk transplant ke operation me jut gaye.

Inki technology dharti ki apeksha kayi guna adhik viksit thi….jaha dharti vasiyo ke doctors ko ek normal operation me bhi poora din nikal jata hai..vahi ye har kaam chutkiyo me nipta dete the.

Ek taraf ramu ka sir khola ja raha tha to dusri taraf samrat ka…..ye operation poore ek ghante tak chalta raha…aur phir thodi der baad samrat ka dimag ramu ke jism me fit ho chuka tha….jabki ramu ka dimag alag ek tray me nazar aa raha tha.

“Ab poora ho gaya hai operation….hum iss ladke ke dimag ko nasht kar dete hain.” Madam Vaan ne ramu ke sharir ko achchi tarah se test karne ke baad kaha.

Romeo—mere dimag me ek idea aaya hai.

Silvasa—kaisa idea…?

Romeo—khidki ke bahar uss ped par baithe bandar ko dekho….iss dimag ko uss bandar me fit kar ke jungle me chhod dete hain….agar hosh me aane ke baad samrat ke dimag ne iss ladke ke sharir ko kubul nahi kiya to ek manusya ka dimag bekar me hi nasht ho jayega.

Dove—theek kahte ho tum romeo.

Madam Dove ne romeo ki baato me apni sahmati jatayi…aur phir apni choti si pistol nikal kar uss ped par baithe bandar ki taraf taan di usko behosh karne ke liye.

Dusri taraf jab aaj ramu kafi der tak ghar nahi louta to uski maa nirmala pareshan ho gayi…usne janki se bhi pucha lekin usne apni anbhigyata jahir kar di.

Nirmala (pareshan hote huye)—kaha gaya hoga….? Ab tak ghar nahi aaya….kahi aata jata bhi to nahi hai vo.

Janki—mummy..kahi ghum raha hoga apne awara dosto ke sath..aa jayega…bhukkhad kahi ka….jab bhukh lagegi to khud hi khane ke liye bhaga bhaga ayega.

Nirmala—tu chup kar..tujhe to koi fikar hi nahi hai ki vo tera bhai hai.

Janki—petu hai vo…..jab dekho khata hi rahta hai…aur ladta hai poora din…aap usko to kuch bolti nahi bas mujhe sunati rahti ho.

Jab kuch aur intazar ke baad bhi ramu ghar nahi aaya to vo dukan pahuch gayi….rajesh bhi soch me pad gaya…uske dimag me kayi tarah ke sawal panapne lag gaye.

Rajesh (mann me)—kaha gaya hoga ye…? Aaj subah hi maine uski jam kar pitayi ki thi, kahi uski vajah se to gussa ho kar kahi nahi chala gaya….? Lekin iske pahle to usne aisa kabhi nahi kiya.

Rajesh aur nirmala pata karne school pahuch gaye….school pahuch kar dono sidhe principal Mrs. Bhatiya ke cabin me chale gaye.

Rajesh—madam hum andar aa sakte hain…?

Principal—aaiye….kahiye main kya kar sakti hu apke liye….?

Rajesh—dekhiye hamara beta ramu aap ke school me padhta hai…ham uske parents hain….ramu abhi tak ghar nahi aaya hai…isliye hame aap ke paas aana pada.

Principal—dekhiye school ki chhutti to do baje tak ho jati hai…..uske baad kisi ke yaha rukne ka sawal hi paida nahi hota…..aur aap ke ladke ram kumar ko main achchi tarah se janti hu..vo to kabhi library bhi nahi jata hai.

Rajesh—phir bhi aap agar staff se ek baar puch le to…..! chhutti huye char ghante ho rahe hain…ramu abhi tak ghar nahi pahucha hai.

Nirmala—uski to kahi idhar udhar jane ki aadat bhi nahi hai…school se sidha ghar gi aata hai.

Ussi samay vaha kisi kaam se agrawal sir ne pravesh kiya….vo rajesh aur nirmala ko achchi tarah se jante the…unhe baitha dekh kar vah unki oor ghum gaye.

Agrawal—achcha hua aap log aa gaye….aap ka ladka ram kumar maths me bilkul gol hai..agar aap ne uski taraf dhyan nahi diya to iss saal bhi uska paas hona mushkil hai.

Principal (beech me rokte huye)—ek minute….! Mr. aur Mrs. Verma yaha isliye aaye hain kyon ki inka ladka ab tak ghar nahi pahucha hai.

Agrawal—jarur vah kisi park vagairah ki taraf nikal gaya hoga…..aaj maine usko saza di thi…ho sakta hai ki dil bahlane ke liye kahi picture dekhne nikal gaya ho…?

Principal—dekhiye aap dono aisa kare ki thodi der aur apne ladke ka intazar kar le…ho sakta hai ki ab tak vah ghar pahuch gaya ho….agar aisa nahi hota hai to hame aur police ko inform kare.

Dono—theek hai.

Rajesh aur nirmala dono thandi saans le kar uth khade huye…..unke chehre par pareshani aur chinta ki lakire aur bhi gahri ho gayi thi.
 
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Dove ne ped par baithe uss bandar ko nishana bana kar apni chhoti si pistol se jaise hi fire kiya to vo bandar fire ki awaz sunte hi jump maar ke dusre ped par kood gaya aur vaha se gayab ho gaya.

Dove—ohhh shit..! ye bandar to bhag gaya….ab kya kare…..?

Romeo—karna kya hai…iss ladke ke dimag ko samrat ke sharir me fit kar dete hain..

Vaan—samrat ka sharir to lagbhag nasht ho chuka hai, to unke sharir me iss ladke ke dimag ko lagane ka koi matlab nahi hai.

Silvasa—to phir kya kare….?

Vaan—mere khyal se kyo na kisi kabra ko khod kar koi laash bahar nikal le jiska sharir sahi salamat ho to uske andar iske dimag ko fit kar dete hain…shayad kuch baat ban jaye.

Romeo—lekin marr chuke admi me jaan thodi hi aa jayegi…uska dimag to vaise bhi nashta hi hona hai.

Dove—madam vaan ne jo kaha hai vahi karte hain.

Silvasa—theek hai to aaj raat me hi ye kaam karna sahi rahega....

Sab raat hone ka intazar karne lage….udhar ramu ke sharir me samrat ka dimag fit hone ke baad bhi abhi tak koi prati kriya dekhne ko nahi mili thi.

Raat hote hi romeo aur silvasa ek sunsan shmashan me ja kar kabra khodne lage…aasman me chandni chhayi huyi thi jiska prakash dharti par charo taraf bikhra hua tha….unke paas atyadhunik hathiyar the jisse unhe jyada samay nahi lag rha tha.

Chaar paanch kabra khodne ke baad bhi unhe koi bhi laash sahi salamat avashtha me nahi mili to ek jagah baith kar soch vichar karne lage…..tabhi unki nazar ek kabra par gayi jo ki sabse alag thi aur uske upar lage board par bade bade aksharo me likha hua tha.

“AADIRISHI”

Unhone mann hi mann kuch faisala lekar uss kabra ki taraf badh gaye aur kabra khodne ka kaam shuru kar diya.

jaise hi unhone kabra khodna shuru kiya to achanak mousam ka rukh badalne lag gaya….aasman me tez bijli kadakne lagi…aur andhera chhane laga.

Romeo—yaar ye mousam achanak kaise badal gaya….?

Silvasa—mujhe bhi tajjub ho raha hai….andhera bhi ho gaya hai…tum torch ki roshni dikhao mai khodta hu.

Romeo torch ki roshni dikhane laga aur silvasa kabra khodne ke kaam me jut gaya…..barish hona shuru ho chuki thi…..unhone kabra me dafan tabut ko bahar khich kar aur usme rakhi laash ko bahar nikal liya tabut ko phir se jamin me gada kar kabra me mitti bhar di.

Uss laash ka sharir bilkul sahi salamat dekh kar dono turant use kandhe me tangkar vaha se ravana ho gaye…laash ke milte hi madam vaan ramu ke dimag ko uss laash ke sharir me fit karne ke kaam me lag gayi….aur antatah usne uss laash ki khopdi me ramu ke dimag ko fit kar diya.

Vaan—lo ye kaam bhi ho gaya.

Silvasa—lekin itni mehnat ka fayda kya…? Dimag fit kar dene se murda sharir me jaan thodi hi aa jayegi.

Vaan—so to hai.

Iss prakriya me poori raat lag gayi….samrat ko abhi tak hosh nahi aaya tha….sab gahri chinta me doobe huye the.

Romeo—abhi tak samrat ko hosh kyo nahi aaya hai.... ?

Vaan—main khud yahi chinta me hu.

Dove—ab iss laash ka kya kare….?

Vaan—isko ussi kabra me ja kar dafan kar do……subah hone hi wali hai….uske pahle hi ye kaam khatam kar lo.

Silvasa—jab yahi karna tha to itna sab karwane ki kya jarurat thi…?

Romeo—bina matlab pareshan kar diya yaar.

Silvasa—chal ab phir se isko vahi le chalte hain.

Romeo aur silvasa uss laash ko phir se utha kar shamshan me le aaye....idhar samrat ke sharir me halchal honi shuru ho gayi….uske aaspaas moujud uske sahyogiyo ke chehre ye dekh kar khil uthe.

Jabki vahi dusri taraf romeo aur silvasa ne jaise hi uss laash ko kandhe se utar kar jamin me rakha to unhe bahut bada jhatka laga.

Dono ki ankhe hairat se khuli rah gayi...kyon ki uss laash ke sharir me harkat honi shuru ho gayi thi jo ki kisi avishwashniya ghatna se kam nahi thi.

Aur agle hi pal uss laash ne ankhe khol di....romeo aur silvasa to dahshat kha kar piche gir gaye aur phir jaldi se uth kar vaha se bhag khade huye.
 
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Romeo aur silvasa uss laash ko phir se utha kar shamshan me le aaye....idhar samrat ke sharir me halchal honi shuru ho gayi….uske aaspaas moujud uske sahyogiyo ke chehre ye dekh kar khil uthe.

Jabki vahi dusri taraf romeo aur silvasa ne jaise hi uss laash ko kandhe se utar kar jamin me rakha to unhe bahut bada jhatka laga.

Dono ki ankhe hairat se khuli rah gayi...kyon ki uss laash ke sharir me harkat honi shuru ho gayi thi jo ki kisi avishwashniya ghatna se kam nahi thi.

Aur agle hi pal uss laash ne ankhe khol di....romeo aur silvasa to dahshat kha kar piche gir gaye aur phir jaldi se uth kar vaha se bhag khade huye.

Ab Aage.......

Jabki dusri taraf samrat ki ankho me halchal hone lagi aur phir dhire dhire usne apni ankhe khol di...uske sahyogiyo ke chehre khil uthe....uske sir ka operation ka ghaav bhi ab tak bhar chuka tha....jaise ki kuch hua hi na ho uske sath....ye dekh kar sab hairan bhi the.

Dove—ab aap kaisa mahsoos kar rahe hain samrat..... ?

Samrat—main to theek hu lekin mujhe hua kya tha…..?

Dove—samrat…hamare antariksh yaan me huyi durghatna me apka sharir poori tarah se nasht ho gaya tha….isliye hamne apka dimag ek manav ke sharir me fit kar diya hai.

Samrat (chounk kar)—kyaaaa…..?

Vaan (darte huye)—kya hamse koi galti ho gayi samrat….?

Samrat (kuch der soch kar)—tum logo ne bilkul theek kiya….iss sharir ki madad se shayad main apne maqsad me jaldi kamyab ho sakta hu….vah maqsad jiske liye hum iss dharti par aaye hain.

Dove—ab aage ke liye kya aadesh hai samrat….?

Samrat—philhal to jis ladke ka sharir tum logo ne mujhe diya hai, uske ghar walo se main milunga aur koshish karunga unme ghul mil kar rahne ki……agar main apni pahchan chhupane me kamyab raha to hum yaha bahut kuch kar sakte hain.

Vaan—lekin apka ghaav itni jaldi kaise bhar gaya…aisa lag raha hai jaise ki kabhi kuch hua hi na ho… jabki abhi kuch samay pahle hi apka operation kiya tha hamne….?

Samrat—ye to main bhi nahi janta….lekin bachpan se hi jab bhi mujhe kabhi chot lag jati thi to mera gaav aur chot ke nishan aise hi gayab ho jate the.

Tabhi vaha romeo aur silvasa bhagte huye aaye….unke chehre par darr aur khauf ki lakire saaf jhalak rahi thi….unko aise ghabraye dekh kar sabhi hairat me aa gaye.

Dove—tum dono ko kya hua…..? aise ghabraye huye kyo lag rahe ho…..?

Romeo (hafte huye)—madam dove…vo…voo…vo laash……(lekin phir samrat ko dekh kar thithak gaya)

Samrat—laash….koun si laash….kaisi laash…..kiski laash….? Ye kya mazra hai dove….?

Vaan—samrat hamne jis ladke ke sharir me apka dimag fit kiya hai….uss ladke ka dimag hamne ek laash me transplant kar diya tha…..shayad ye uski hi baat kar rahe hain.

Samrat (chounk kar)—kyaaa…..? uska dimag ek dead body me fit kar diya…..? kya koi jivit sharir nahi mila tha tum logo ko….?

Dove—vo itna samay hi nahi tha samrat.

Samrat—to jaldi kar ke bhi tum logo ne koun sa teer maar liya…..uska dimag to bekar hi ho gaya na.

Dove—hum kshama chahte hain samrat

Samrat—khair jo ho gaya so ho gaya……haan to tum dono kya kah rahe the…..?

Silvasa—samrat….jis dead body me uss ladke ka dimag fit kiya tha vo laash……

Vaan—kya hua uss laash ko….? Tum log kahi uski body ko phenk kar to nahi aa gaye…? Maine dafnane ke liye kaha tha tum dono se.

Romeo—madam uss laash ne ankhe khol di hain….

Sab (shocked)—kyaaaa…..?

Samrat--ye kya bewkoofo jaisi baate kar rahe ho dono….? Kahi pagal to nahi ho gaye….?

Silvasa—ye sach hai samrat…..jaise hi hamne uss laash ko dafan karne ki koshish ki, vaise hi aas maan se bijli aa kar uske upar giri aur uske baad achanak uski ankhe khul gayi…

Romeo—hamare darr ki vajah uska ankhe kholna nahi balki…..uski ankho ka rang ek dam laal hona hai uski ankho se aag nikal rahi thi.

Silvasa—hum kisi tarah se apni jaan bacha kar bhag ke aaye hain….warna aaj vo hame maar dalta.

Sab buri tarah se chounk gaye romeo aur silvasa ki baate sun kar…..ye ghatna har kisi ke liye avishwashniya thi….kisi ko unki baato par yakin naho ho pa raha tha.

Dove (shocked)—ye kaise sambhav ho sakta hai…..? koi dead body phir se jinda kaise ho sakti hai….?

Romeo—yahi sach hai madam dove….ye ghatna hamare samne huyi hai….hum swayam iss apratyashit ghatna ke pratyaksh darshi hain.

Samrat (kuch soch kar)—ye behad hairan karne wali baat hai….jald se jald ja kar dekho ki vo ab kaha hai jaldi talash karo uski…..agar ye sach hai to vo admi hamare bahut kaam ka ho sakta hai….jao turant talash karo uski

Silvasa (darte huye)—ji samrat

Romeo—kintu agar usne hum par hamla kar diya to….samrat….?

Samrat—khatra to avashya ho sakta hai…..tum dono savdhan rahna…. agar khatra adhik lage to turant goli maar dena usko…..ab jao jaldi ..iske pahle ki vo vaha se kahi aur chala jaye aur hamari nazaro se ojhal ho jaye ….mujhe har haal me vo admi chahiye….jao ab

Romeo aur silvasa vaha se nikal gaye uss laash ki talash me phir se vahi kabristan ki taraf…lekin dono ke dil joro se dhadak rahe the darr aur khauf ki vajah se….

Unke ek ek kadam badi mushkil se uth rahe the…jaise jaise apne nirdharit lakshya ki taraf badh rahe the ussi anupat me anjani dahshat bhi unke dilo dimag par buri tarah se haavi hoti ja rahi thi.
 
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Romeo aur silvasa uss laash ko phir se utha kar shamshan me le aaye....idhar samrat ke sharir me halchal honi shuru ho gayi….uske aaspaas moujud uske sahyogiyo ke chehre ye dekh kar khil uthe.

Jabki vahi dusri taraf romeo aur silvasa ne jaise hi uss laash ko kandhe se utar kar jamin me rakha to unhe bahut bada jhatka laga.

Dono ki ankhe hairat se khuli rah gayi...kyon ki uss laash ke sharir me harkat honi shuru ho gayi thi jo ki kisi avishwashniya ghatna se kam nahi thi.

Aur agle hi pal uss laash ne ankhe khol di....romeo aur silvasa to dahshat kha kar piche gir gaye aur phir jaldi se uth kar vaha se bhag khade huye.

Ab Aage.......

Jabki dusri taraf samrat ki ankho me halchal hone lagi aur phir dhire dhire usne apni ankhe khol di...uske sahyogiyo ke chehre khil uthe....uske sir ka operation ka ghaav bhi ab tak bhar chuka tha....jaise ki kuch hua hi na ho uske sath....ye dekh kar sab hairan bhi the.

Dove—ab aap kaisa mahsoos kar rahe hain samrat..... ?

Samrat—main to theek hu lekin mujhe hua kya tha…..?

Dove—samrat…hamare antariksh yaan me huyi durghatna me apka sharir poori tarah se nasht ho gaya tha….isliye hamne apka dimag ek manav ke sharir me fit kar diya hai.

Samrat (chounk kar)—kyaaaa…..?

Vaan (darte huye)—kya hamse koi galti ho gayi samrat….?

Samrat (kuch der soch kar)—tum logo ne bilkul theek kiya….iss sharir ki madad se shayad main apne maqsad me jaldi kamyab ho sakta hu….vah maqsad jiske liye hum iss dharti par aaye hain.

Dove—ab aage ke liye kya aadesh hai samrat….?

Samrat—philhal to jis ladke ka sharir tum logo ne mujhe diya hai, uske ghar walo se main milunga aur koshish karunga unme ghul mil kar rahne ki……agar main apni pahchan chhupane me kamyab raha to hum yaha bahut kuch kar sakte hain.

Vaan—lekin apka ghaav itni jaldi kaise bhar gaya…aisa lag raha hai jaise ki kabhi kuch hua hi na ho… jabki abhi kuch samay pahle hi apka operation kiya tha hamne….?

Samrat—ye to main bhi nahi janta….lekin bachpan se hi jab bhi mujhe kabhi chot lag jati thi to mera gaav aur chot ke nishan aise hi gayab ho jate the.

Tabhi vaha romeo aur silvasa bhagte huye aaye….unke chehre par darr aur khauf ki lakire saaf jhalak rahi thi….unko aise ghabraye dekh kar sabhi hairat me aa gaye.

Dove—tum dono ko kya hua…..? aise ghabraye huye kyo lag rahe ho…..?

Romeo (hafte huye)—madam dove…vo…voo…vo laash……(lekin phir samrat ko dekh kar thithak gaya)

Samrat—laash….koun si laash….kaisi laash…..kiski laash….? Ye kya mazra hai dove….?

Vaan—samrat hamne jis ladke ke sharir me apka dimag fit kiya hai….uss ladke ka dimag hamne ek laash me transplant kar diya tha…..shayad ye uski hi baat kar rahe hain.

Samrat (chounk kar)—kyaaa…..? uska dimag ek dead body me fit kar diya…..? kya koi jivit sharir nahi mila tha tum logo ko….?

Dove—vo itna samay hi nahi tha samrat.

Samrat—to jaldi kar ke bhi tum logo ne koun sa teer maar liya…..uska dimag to bekar hi ho gaya na.

Dove—hum kshama chahte hain samrat

Samrat—khair jo ho gaya so ho gaya……haan to tum dono kya kah rahe the…..?

Silvasa—samrat….jis dead body me uss ladke ka dimag fit kiya tha vo laash……

Vaan—kya hua uss laash ko….? Tum log kahi uski body ko phenk kar to nahi aa gaye…? Maine dafnane ke liye kaha tha tum dono se.

Romeo—madam uss laash ne ankhe khol di hain….

Sab (shocked)—kyaaaa…..?

Samrat--ye kya bewkoofo jaisi baate kar rahe ho dono….? Kahi pagal to nahi ho gaye….?

Silvasa—ye sach hai samrat…..jaise hi hamne uss laash ko dafan karne ki koshish ki, vaise hi aas maan se bijli aa kar uske upar giri aur uske baad achanak uski ankhe khul gayi…

Romeo—hamare darr ki vajah uska ankhe kholna nahi balki…..uski ankho ka rang ek dam laal hona hai uski ankho se aag nikal rahi thi.

Silvasa—hum kisi tarah se apni jaan bacha kar bhag ke aaye hain….warna aaj vo hame maar dalta.

Sab buri tarah se chounk gaye romeo aur silvasa ki baate sun kar…..ye ghatna har kisi ke liye avishwashniya thi….kisi ko unki baato par yakin naho ho pa raha tha.

Dove (shocked)—ye kaise sambhav ho sakta hai…..? koi dead body phir se jinda kaise ho sakti hai….?

Romeo—yahi sach hai madam dove….ye ghatna hamare samne huyi hai….hum swayam iss apratyashit ghatna ke pratyaksh darshi hain.

Samrat (kuch soch kar)—ye behad hairan karne wali baat hai….jald se jald ja kar dekho ki vo ab kaha hai jaldi talash karo uski…..agar ye sach hai to vo admi hamare bahut kaam ka ho sakta hai….jao turant talash karo uski

Silvasa (darte huye)—ji samrat

Romeo—kintu agar usne hum par hamla kar diya to….samrat….?

Samrat—khatra to avashya ho sakta hai…..tum dono savdhan rahna…. agar khatra adhik lage to turant goli maar dena usko…..ab jao jaldi ..iske pahle ki vo vaha se kahi aur chala jaye aur hamari nazaro se ojhal ho jaye ….mujhe har haal me vo admi chahiye….jao ab

Romeo aur silvasa vaha se nikal gaye uss laash ki talash me phir se vahi kabristan ki taraf…lekin dono ke dil joro se dhadak rahe the darr aur khauf ki vajah se….

Unke ek ek kadam badi mushkil se uth rahe the…jaise jaise apne nirdharit lakshya ki taraf badh rahe the ussi anupat me anjani dahshat bhi unke dilo dimag par buri tarah se haavi hoti ja rahi thi.
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