Incest Ek bechara (एक बेचारा)

[Soniya poliwaal]

Mast update sir

 

[DINNA]

boss update please. you are going too slow

 

[Rahul]

waiting waiting bhai ji

 

[Chatani]

Update 40 B
Ghrina
(Mega update) ​

Abb takk...
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Rj -bhai... Apne gusse pe thoda kaabu rakhna... Jaate jaate koi lafda mat kar dena.
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Rj ki baato ko tatally ignore karte huye mai tezi se apne kamre se bahar jaan laga....
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Kuchh der baad.... Neha ke room kaa scene.
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Neha, joki abhi apne bag me Sare kapde samet kar... Bed pe baithi huyi thi... Aur apne smartphone ke screen ko scroll kar rhi thi... Ki jhatke ke sath uske kamre ka darwaja khula... Aur mai... Apne ek haath me uska bracelate aur letter lekar uske paas gusse me pahunch gya....
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"Tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhse apna koi rishta jodne ki.... Tumne soch kaise liya ki tum ye.. Faltu ke.... Cards aur... Ye... Bracelet.... Dekar mere sath rishta jod sakti ho...
Appnnniiiii..... Haddd.... Me.... Raho.... Ladki.....
Mai to tumhare card aur... Iss... Bekar ke bracelet ka koi value hi nhi derha... Par uss letter me jo tumne mere sath wo rishta jodne ki koshish kiye ho... Wo... Bhai bala.... Wo mujhe nagawar guzra.... Kabhi sochna bhi matt ki mai tum jaise ladki ko apni bahan maan lunga.... "
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Gusse ke sath... Tezz aawaz me maine ye baat bola tha neha ko... Jisse sun kar ek ekdam stabdh ho gayi thi... Dar ke maare uska pair kaanpne laga tha... Iss waqt na hi uska halat aisa ho gya tha... Ki jaise kaato to khoon na mile.... Bilkul ghabra gayi thi wo.... Jiss vajah se usne apne aankh tak ko band kar di thi.
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"Parrr,..... Haannn.... Mujhe malum hai ki maine galti ki hai... Par wo sab maine jaan bujh kar thode na ki hunn... Mujhe jaisa bataya gya tha... Waisa hi mai karti thi... Mujhe sachayi thode na pata tha.... Aapne avni aur khushi ko bhi to maaf kar diya hai... Par mujhe kyun nhi bhaiiiy.............. "
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"Chuppppppp, ek dam chuuppppp..... Agar ek shabd bhi aur boli to soch lena mujhse bura koi nahi hoga... Mujhe nahi chahiye kisi ke sath koi rishta.... Aur kisne kaha ki maine unn dono ko maaf kar diya.... Mujhe jarurat thi unki.... Maine madad mangi.... Aur usne kiya... Baar khatam...
Lekin... Tum sab ne mere sath jo.. Jo.. Juadtiya kiye ho... Usse mai bhoool jaaun.... Ye kabhi bhi nhi ho sakta.... Achha hoga ki mujhse door hi rahna... Warna.... Aage tum khud hi samajhdaar hi... "
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Itna bol kar mai jaane hi laga tha... Ki neha ki baat sun kar mai fir ruk gaya...
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" Hannn, maalum hai mujhe aap mujhse kiss baat ke liye naraz hai... Par mai karu.... Is waqt meri age bas 16 saal thi... Aur hame aapke baare me shirf galat baate hi batayi gayi thi... Aap hi batao... Agar mere jagah aap hote to aap kya karte... "
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" Achhaa.... Matlab... Wahann.... Apne awara dosto ke sath milkar mera mazak udana... Uske sath baith kar mere baare me bhadde bhadde... Aur gande gande baate karna... Tumhe ghar baalo ne sikhaya... Wahh.... Achha hua dada ne mujhe iss ghar se bahar bhej diya.... Ghinn aati hai mujhe jab bhi mujhe wo time yaad aati hai...jab tum uss din apne shareer se apne dosto ke hath garm kar rhi thi...chheeeee"
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Mere itna bolne ke baad.... Mai wahann se bahar nikal gaya... Aur peechhe rah gayi to bas neha... Jo ki kere dwara bole gaye akhiri baat ko soch kar... Foot foot kar rone lagi thi.... Usse wo sab yaad aane laga jab wo mujhe harash karne ke liye, mujhe mentally kamjor karne le liye itna hadd tak gir gayi thi ki.... Uske hi dost uska fayda uthane ja rhe the...
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(Flash back)
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Baat, aaj se 3 saal pahle ki hai... Uss waqt mai 10th me tha... Bhopal me hi meri life kat rhi thi... Tab mai dubla sa huaa karta tha... Ek 6 ft ka dubla sa ladka jiske halki halki dadhi aarhi thi.... Mai uss waqt bahut fattu huaa karta tha... Mere frnds bhi hamesha ki tarah shirf ek hi tha rajnjsh... Jo uss waqt apne ghar me rahta tha... Kabhi kabhar mere room me aajaya karta tha... Uss waqt mai school me padhta tha... Aur mere school ka naam tha... St. Peters school.... Aur mere school iss area ka main branch tha... Aur issi school ka ek branch mere gao... Trimathpur me bhi tha....
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To baat ye huye ki... St peters ke jo head the... Father jorge... Unhone ek tour orgnise kiya jinme unhone uss area ke jitne bhi st. Peters ke branches the... Unse bhi student ko participate lene ko kaha gya... Ye ek tarah se educational tour tha...
Aur isse badkismati kahe ya kuchh aur... Hamare main branch ka coordination hua... Mere gao bale branch ke sath... Aur ussi school me neha bhi padhti thi jiske baare me mai nhi janta tha...
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Khair tour pe jaane ke 1 din pahle dadi mere room pe ayi thi.. Aur unhone neha ki photo mujhe dikhate huye kaha ki... Kal neha apne school ke taraf se tour pe jaa rhi hai...
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Maine bhi kaha ki... Mera school bhi le ja rha hai.. Aur shayad... Gao ke branch ka student bhi hamare sath honge... Kya neha bhi wahin padhti hai... Maine excited hokar poochha tha...
Mujhe laga tha itne din door rahne ke baad neha aur mere family baale kuchh had tak to meri fikra kiye honge... Kuchh to badla hoga unke manne... Par nhi... Aisa bilkul nhi huaaa....
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Dadi.... Wapas gao jaakar... Neha ko bhi kishan ki tasveer dikhati hai... Aur usse bolti hai. Ki tumhare school ke sehar bale branch me hi tumhara bhai kishan bhi padhta h.... Maine jo bola hai uspe dhyan dena...
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Neha aona sar hila kar usse haan bol nikal jaati hai...
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Tour ka din aagya.... Ek badi si bas hamare school me aayi... Usme se saare students bahar nikle . ... Neha bhi thi... Aur uske sath uske dost bhi the....
Iske dosto me do ladkiya aur 2 ladke the....
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Mai usse dekh kar mushkuraya aur uske paas gaya... Usse jakar bola..
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"Hello neha... Kaisi ho? "
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Mere aise achanak samne aakar neha se direct baat karna... Wahan mauzud dono ladko ko achha nhi laga... Par ek baar wo neha ka jabab bhi sunna chahte the.
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"Ooo..... Hello.... Kon ho tumm....? Mai nhi jaanti tumhe.... Hato mere raste se"
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Neha... Mujhe bilkul hi ignore karte huye bolti hai
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" Are, Mai hunn kishan.... Tumhara bhai... Shayad tumne pehchana nhi... 12 salo se ghar jo nhi gaya hunn"
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"Achhaa, to tum ho.... Aur plss ye bhai... Waai ka rishta mat jodo mujh se... Mai kisi manhush ki sister nhi banna chahti.... So pls mujhse door rho... Mai apne frnds ke sath enjoy karne aayi hunn.. Mujhe enjoy karne do"
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Neha ne ek tarah se mera mazak udate huye kaha.... Par Mai uss waqt sach me bahot dambo tha... Mai bhi apna sar jhukaye... Wapas apne jagah pe aagya jaha mai najane kitne samay se akela hi baitha tha... Mai ne ek baar fir apni nazre utha kar neha ke taraf dekhne ki koshish ki... Jaha wo log... Mujhe dekh kar hi kuchh baate kiye ja rahe the.... Aur beech beech me hashe jaa rhe the... Mai kuchh samajh yo nhi raha tha... Par apne dambo jaise soch ki vajah se unhe haste dekh Mai bhi has deta.. Jiske vajah se unka dheere dheere hasna... Badh kar thehako me badal jata...
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Samay beeta... Rajnish bhi aagya.... Hamdono sath hi jaane wale the... Par tour me jaane ke liye jo bus aaya tha... Usme seet no ke jaise baithna tha... Aur mera fir se bad luck... Aaj fir rajnish ki seat aage aur meri last se 3sri mili thi... Mere peechhe... Neha.. Aur uski saheli ka seat mila tha... Aur mere aage... Uske male dosto ko...
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Aur fir start huaa... Un sab ka ganda khel mujhe harash karne ka... Wo bhi bhaddi bhaddi... Nonvej baato ko bol kar...
1 ladka ---" Kyaa be chomu... Saale... Shirf lamba ho gaya hai chutiye.... Suna tere ghar me tera koi izzat hi nhi hai... Sab gali ke kutte jaisa salook karte hai tere se"
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2ladka --- " Abe haan be... Aur suna hai tu yaha apne school me bhi poora fattu hai.... Teri koi bhi gaand maar leta hai... Ab tak to gufa ban gaya hoga..... Hahahah
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Uski baato se sab hasne lagte hai... Neha bhi...
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1 ladki -- waise.... Dikhne me to smart lagta hai tu... Par kya karu... Tu kaisa bhi rahe hai to manhoosh hi naaa.... Teri hi manhooshiyat ki vajah se dekh aaj ham sab ko bus ke last me seat mili hai... Wo bhi ek bhi window seat nhi mila.... Achha neha ye basterd hai kya...
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Un sab ki baate mujhe kisi seel ki tarah chubh rahi thi.... Mere ankho se anshu niklne lage the... Aur mujhe gussa bhi bahut aarha tha.... Maine apne chehre ko utha kar ghoor kar uss ladki ko dekha jisne mujhe last me basterd kaha tha...
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2 ladka ---" Ale ale ale... Dekho to iss chutiye ko gussa bhi aata hai... Saale... Jyada aankh mat dikha warna yahin jungle me teri maar lunga... Bsdk....
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1 Ladka -- waise... Chutiye Tu shirf ghoor hi sakta hai... Aur kuchh karne ki teri himmat hi nhi hai.... Gandu sala....
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Aur mujhe sab se jyda buraa tab laga jah neha bhi apne dosto ke sath milkar... Mere baare me bekaar bekaar baate kar ke... Mera mazak banane lagi... Aur fir hasne lagi... Unki hassi mere kaano me gunjne lagi...
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Ki tabhi... Bus ke aage se rajnish... Aur uske sath mere hi school ke do badmash ladke hamare taraf aaye.... Shayad rajnish ne unki baat sun liya tha... Aur wo pahle se hi dill doll bala banda tha... Aur uske sath jo bande the wo bhi mere class ke hi the., bhale hi hamari jyada baat nhi hoti thi... Par ri aksar un se baat kiya karta tha...
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"Achaaa...... Ab tum jaise gawar log ham sab ko himmat dikhana sikhayenge be madharchodo..... Sale harami ke aulado ye mat bhoolna... Tum sab iss waqt hamare hi school ke bus me ho.... Aur bematlab ka gand faade ja rhe ho.... "
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Rajnish aone shirt ke baahe ko modte huye.... Un do ladko ke theek samne askar bolta hai... Rajnish kad aur kathi se kisi bhi pehalbaan se kam nhi lag rha tha.. Aur sath aaye log bhi waise hi the.....
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Rajnish ki baat ko sun kar... Aur uske dill doll bale shareer ko dekh kar... Un dono ka thook unke gale me hi sookh gya...
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Fir tab tak wahann pe shanti rahi, hab tak bus apne destination pe pahunch nhi gayi....
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Wahan pagluunchne ke baad... Teeachers ne aaj aaram karne ko kaha...
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Shamm hote hi.... Paas me hi aag lehkaayi gayi.... Sab log ussi aag ke charo taraf baith gaye.... Mai aur rajnish bhi wohin baith gaye the....
Mera mood ab kuchh achha tha... Waise bhi uss samay Mai sach me bilkul chutiya hi tha... Mai pal bhar me apne dukh aur gam bhula deta tha.... Lekin jab yaad aati un gamo ki... Tab yo nind hi nhi aati thhi...
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Wohinnn.... Neha. Ke frnds aur Neha ek sath baithe huye the...
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"Neha.... Tum kya chahti ho... Apne iss manhoosh bhai... Ko mentally torcher karna na chahti ho... '
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"Hanann, aaj uske dosto ne mere dosto ki insult ki hai... Aaj Mai usse itna torture karna chahti hunn jisse wo... Apne aap se nafrat karne lage... "
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" Achhaa.. To mere paas ek idea hai... Par uske liye tumhe kuchh der acting karni hogi... "
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"Kaisi acting... "
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Fir uske dost sab wo behad hi ghatiya aur.... Bhadda idea usse dete hai...
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"Ham dono, uss manhoosh ke samne tumhe chhedne ki acting karenge... Mtlb tumhare shareer ko uske samne chhuyenge... Aur jaisa Maine dekha hai... Bhale hi Tu usse bhai nahi manti hai... Par wo tumhe apni bahan jarur manta... Aur jab uski ankho ke samne uski bahan se koi chhed khhani karega... Tab uspe kyaa beetega... "
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"Kyaaa...... Ye bahut hi bekaar idea hai mai aisa kuchh nhi karne baali... "
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1 kadki.... Jo 2nd ladke ki cousin thi... Usse malum chal gya ki wo ladka kyaa chaal chal raha hai... Aur wo beech me bolti hai..
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1ladki ---Tu bhi na yaar Neha, ye log hamare frnds h aur tumhe inn pe bharosha nhi hai.... Aur bas acting hi to karni haii.... Isse uss manhoos ka dimag thikane aayega.
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Aur Neha... Jo iss waqt apne bhai se nafrat ke chalte.. Itni andhi ho gayi thi.. Usse gyat hi nhi huaa ki usne anjane me kyaa galti kar di hai...
Usne apne dosto ko haan kar diya...
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Jisse dekh kar.... Wo dono ladke Neha se bach kar ek dusre ko ankh mar diye....
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Raat beeti.... Subah bhi ho gayi...... Sab log... Aane baale adventure ke liye ready ho gaye...
Mai rajnish ke sath hi tha....
Ki tabhi sir ne rajnish ko bula liya.. Aur usse apne sath hi chalne ko kaha... Taki rashte me agar kuchh jaruri cheez unhe mile to usse store karne ke liye koi unke sath rah sake....
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Mai fir se akela ho gya... Aur aisehi dheere dheere jaane laga....
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Kuchh der..... Chalte rahne ke bad... Sir hame ek jagah rune ka bol diye... Aur tent laga lene ka bol kar... Apne sath rajnish ko lekar jungle me lakdiya laane chale gaye...
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Hamsab apne apne tent laga liye...
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Sabhi thakavat ke vajah se apne apne tent me aaram karne chale gaye.. Mai bhi jaa hi raha tha...
Ki wo dono ladke fir se mere paas aagye aur....
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1st - dekh bhai.... Game maaf kar de, Mai nahi chahta ki tumhara pahalbaan dost hamari haddiya tode.... Issiliye ham sonk thm se maafi mangna chahte hai. Hamdono ne jo bhi bola wo sab anjane me bol diya.. Baad me hame bhi kharab laga...
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2nd - aur hann bhai... Neha bhi tumse maafi mangna chah rhi hai... Par bechari jhijhak rahi h bol rahi hai... Mai apne bhaiya se kaise nazar mila paungi.... Usse bahot afsos hai tumhare sath ais akarne ki.
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Aur mai thehra... Ekdam bada bala chutiya... Sala unke trap me fas gaya...
Aur mai khushi khushi un dono ke sath.... Jane laga.. Jahan Neha aur uski saheliya hamari hi mulaqat kar rhi thi....
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Waha pahonch kar.... Pahla ladka bolta hai...
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" Lo Neha, aagya tumhara bhai... Tum maafi mangna chahti thi na... "
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" Bhala, koi... Kayar.... Manhoosh ladka... Bhi mera bhai.. Ho sakta hai bhala... Are bhai ka matlab hota hai wo jo bahan ki hifazat kare... Tumhe kya lagta hai ki ye apne bahan ki hifazat kar sakta hai... "
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" Kyaaa.... Tum pagal ho gayi ho Neha... Tumhara bhai... Jarur tumhari hifazat karega..... Kyunn bhaiii.... Karoge na... "
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Usne mere taraf haste huye dekh kar poochaa.
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"Hannn, hannn... Mai karunga .... Mai karunga tumhari hifazat... Neha....yum bas mujhse nafrat karna band kar do"
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Meri baat sun kar dusra ladka bolta hai...
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"Achhaa.... To iss baat ko abhi shabit kar ke batao... Mai tumhari bahan... Neha ke shareer ke sath khelne.... Yaani ko tumhari bahan ko chhedne ja rha hunn aur tum apni bahan ko mujhse bacha lo... "
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Abhi dusra ladka itna hu bola tha ki mai daud kar usse marne bhaga...
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"Zabaan samhaal kar bol haramzaade... "
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Par mere uss ladke tak pahunchne se pahle 1hla ladka mujhe pakad leta hai... Aur mai usse chhutne ki koshish karne lagta hunnn
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Wohinn dusra ladka.... Neha ke paas jaata hai... Ji iss waqt ek jeans aur top pehne huye thi....
Wo ladka Neha ke paas jakar mujhe dekhte huye shaitani muskaan dikhate huye... Neha ka top halka upar kar ke uske pet pe hath ferne lagta hai aur apna dusra hath wo Neha ke gale pe sehlane lagta hai...
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Uaki iss harkat ko dekh kar mera khoon khaulne lagta hai.... Mai jor jor se cherkh kar usse gaaliya dene lagra hu.. Mere ankho se anshu bag me lagte hai.... Wohi.... Meri iss halat ko dekh kar jahan wo ladke hase jaa rahe the wohi... Neha... Bilkul.... Shant khadi... Hontho pe muskaan liye mujhe dekhe ja rhi thi...
. Aur jaise hi meri nazar uske chehre pe padi.... Mai ekdam shockd ho gya... Uska itna calm reaction mujhe saaf saaf bata raha tha ki wo sab jaan bujh kar aisa kar rahe hai...mujhe jahan abhi kuchh samay pahle tak apne bahan ke nafarat ko door karne ka koi bahana chahiye tha... Wohi ab un sabki itni ghatiya harkat ko dekh kar mujhe khud Mujhe un sab se nafrat hone lagi... Khash kar meri so called bahan Neha se... Maine rona band kar diya.........
Mujhe laga ki ye ladke jyada aage nhi badhenge... Par unka irada to kuchh aur hi tha... Achana mujhe aise shant dekh... Uss ladke ko achha nhi laga aur usne apna ek hath Neha ke seene pe rakh diya... Jahan abhi... Kishoravastha ka prabhav dikh rha tha... Wohi... Apna ek haath... Neha ke back pe ja kar fagadne laga....
Aur ek baar fir Neha ne usse tokne ki koi bhi koshish nahi ki.... Aur ab mujhe waha.. Un logo se shirf ghinn aa rhi thi...
Maine kas ke chillaya.....
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"Bassssss.... Tum sab ko jo bhi karna hai.... Karo mujhe naa to tum sab se koi matalab hai aur naa hi issa.... Badchalan ladki se... Fuckk offff... Aur hann sach me tum meri bahan ho nhi sakti.... Tumhare jaisa ghatiya khoon kabhi bhi pratap khandan ki ghar ki beti nhi hi sakti...... Chhodo be madharchod..... Barna abhi gand maar lungaaaa "
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Pata nhi kaha se mujhme itni himmat aur takat aagyi.... Maine apne haatho ko jaise hi jhadka... Jo ladka mujhe pakda huaa tha... Wo sala soor jaa giraa.... Aur mai.... Neha ko uski washtavikta me laakar wahan se apne tent ke taraf aagya... Ab mujhe uski koi bhi parvaah nhi thi... Chahe uske sath... Kuchh bhi ho....
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Wohi... Neha... Jise jaise hi meri baat sunayi di.... Usse bhi ehshash hone laga ki wo kya kar rahi hai... Aur usne bhi apne aao ko dusre ladke se alag kar li... Uske ankho me bhi aanshu aane lage... Aaj pahle baar kisi ne usse badchalan kaha tha... Aur wo manti bhi thi... Ki wo sach me waisi hi harkat aaj kar rhi thi.... Ek badchalan ladki baali....
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Neha ke aise hath jhadak dene se... Uss ladke ko bura lag gaya... Usne ek baar fir se Neha ko pakadna chaha... Par Neha ne ro diya... Aur boli... Ab wo chala gya... Hame bhi chalana chahiye...
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Par uske jabab me 1hla ladka uske paas aaya aur bola...
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Abhi kaha baby... Abhi to mai baaki hunn.... Mujhe bhi to thoda maza lene do apne sharir ki... Jab jatin ko apne sharir ki mazade sakti hi to hame kyo nhi....
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Chatakkkk
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Abhi 1hla ladka itna hi bola tha ki... Neha ne ek tamacha jad diya... Uske gaalo pe....
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" How dare you... Tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhse aise baat karne ki... "
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" Saali, randi.... Abhi to bade maje se apne santare iss jatin se dabba rahi thi aur ab sati sabitri banne ki dhong kar rahi hai... Tera bhai sahi bolta hai... Tu badchalan hai.... Aur ab Tu hamari randi banegi.... "
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Uske shabd.... Neha ke kaano me ek teer se lage... Usse ab aabhash hone lega ki ye sab uska faida uthana chahte the.... Aur ab usse apne aap ko bachane ka koi bhi rashta nazar nhi aarha tha.... Unlogo ka camp bhi wahan se bahut door tha....
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Par jaise hi 1hla... Ladka... Neha ke nazdeek jaakar uske sath kuchh galat karta waise hi... Uske kandhe par kisi ne bahut hi jordaar baar kiya....
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Ye aur koi nahi balki rajnish tha... Jo sukhi lakdiyo ke talash me waha gya tha...
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Aur usse waha do ladke kisi ladki ke sath badtamizi karte huye dikhe... Aur jab wo samne jakar uss ladki ko pehchanta hai... Ki wo kishan ki bahan hai tab uska gussa aur bhi badh jata hai.... Aur wo unn dono ladko ko kutte ki tarah peetne lagta hai... Aur unhe maar maar ke wahi pe adhmara kar deta hai... Neha ke sath jo uski saheliye thi... Wo dar ke maare waha se bhag gayi... Aur apne apne tent me chali gayi... Neha ko rajnish apne sath chalne ko kahta hai... Aur usse wapas camo me le aata hai....
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(Flashback end)
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Kishan ke kadbe bol.... Jo usne camo me bole the... Wk 3 salo baad aaj tak Neha ko yaad the... Ki..... Ek badchalan ladki meri bahan nhi ho sakti....
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Kishan to kamre se bahar nikal kar... Seedhe haveli se bhi bahar nikal gaya.... Rj bhi uske peechhe peechhe chala gay.... Kishan ko yunn gusse me bahar jaate huye.... Darvaaje le paas khade sunil pratal bhi dekh leta hai.... Aur uske muh se bas ek hi shabd nikalta hai....
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" Bas... Kuchh maheene aur.... Ab tumhe apni vashtavikta janne se koi bhi nhi ro sakta.... Koi bhi nahi..... "
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Lekin tabhi.... Usss darbaaje ke paas lage street light me ek short sircuit hoti hai... Aur uske vajah se waha mauzud jinte bhi bijli ke upkaran the... Wo jal gaye... Wo bhi ek bhayanak aawaj ke sath....
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Aur aisa hota dekh..... Sunil ke lalat pe bal padne lage.... Aur wo daudte huye... Apne maa ke kamre me jaane lage... Jahan sharda devi.... Apne kapde bag me rakh rahe the.....
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Aaj ke liye itna hi.... Agar update pasand aaye to like kar dena... Aaj ek suspence pe se parda hata hai... Dheere dheere... Basic suspance solve honge... Aur uske jagah pe ek super natural suspance... Apni jagah lenge....

Nice update and awesome writing skills

 

[Chatani]

Update 41​

Dopehar hone ke pahle hi sharda devi apne poore parivaar ke sath wapas ap ne gao trimathpur pahunch chuke the, wahin kishan aur rj abhi kuchh din aur bijendra ji ke gao me hi rukne bala tha.

Neha...
Andar se toot chuki thi...
Usse baar baar wahi din yaad aarhe the jab usne apne nafrat ko ek paydan aur aage badhane ke liye kitni badi bhool kar baithi thi. Agar uss din kishan ka dost rajnish nhi aata tab uska kya hota...
Uske parivar ke izzat ka kya hota...
Fir usse kishan ki baato ki yaad aati hai, kaise wo uss din usse baaat karne ke liye, utabla tha, aur ab...
Ab to bas uske baato aur ankho me nafrat hi nazar aati hai...
Neha apne bed pe leti huyi, inhi sab baato ko soch soch kar apne anshu bahaye ja rahi thi...
Wo jaanti thi ki innsab ki zimmedar wo khud hai...
Aur kahi na kahi uske mata pita bhi...

wo apne mata pita ko to kuchh nhi bol sakti thi...
Had se jyada pyar jo karti thi apne mata pita se...
Par wo khud ko saza de sakti hai...
Aisa uske dimag me ghoom raha tha...
Us ne nirnay kar liya tha...
Ki aisi zindagi zeene ka bhi bhala kya fayada jisme uska bhai hi usse badchalan aur ghatiya ladki samajhta hai...
Aur samjhega bhi kyu nahi... Aavesh me usne galti hi bahut ghatiya aur besharmo baali ki thi....
Neha ko ab ye lagne laga tha ki... Usne aisi galti kar di hai..
Jiski maafi usse saat janmo tak bhi nhi mil sakti hai...
Aur jab usse maafi milegi hi nhi tab...
Usse zinda rahne ka kya fayada...

Neha ke dimag me ab shirf aur shirf....
Khud ke liye nafrat....
Aur uss nafrat ko mitane ke liye... Sucide kar lena....
Yahi ghoom raha tha....

Ye sab sochte sochte...
Neha ki ankhe ekdam laal ho rakhi thi....

Achanak se wo apne bed se uthti hai, aur kamre me rakhe almeera ke drower se neend ki goliyo ki sisi nikalti hai....
Aur wo uss sisi se Sare goliya apne hatho me nikal leti hai...
Agle pal hi wo unn goliyo ko apne muh me lene hi baali hoti hai ki...
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"Rukkkk jaaoooo........ "
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Ek ladki ki aawaj uske kamre me gunjti hai., ek aisi aawaj jisse sun kar saaf pata chal raha tha ki... Iss aawaz ki malik koi virangna hi hogi...
Itni powerful awaz ki, uske sunne ke baad neha ke to ridd ke haddiyo tak me sihran daud gayi... Itna bhay vyapt ho gya uske andar...
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Neha ko laga shayad kisi ne darwaje ke bahar se usse aawaj lagaya hai... "Konn haiii" Chillate huye kamre se bahar aayi... Usne bahar dekha to koi nahi tha... Apne bagal wale kamre me jakar usne dekha... Waha.. Avni aur khushi apne kapde... Bags se nikal kar... Apne apne cubord me rakh rahi thi...
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Neha, apne aap ko shant karte huye, avni aur khushi se poochhti hai,
" Tum dono mujhe aawaz laga rhi thi kya...? "
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"Nhi to, ham to apne apne kapde wapas almeera me rakh rhe hai...waise tujhe kya hua hai... Ankhe kyu laal hai teri... Sab theek ha na?"
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"Oo shayad mujhe nind aarhi hai, aur issi liye mujhe laga koi mujhe bula rha hai... Ankhe bhi ussi ke karan lal lag rhi ha... Tum log bhi aaram kar lo... Ye sab samet kar "
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" Hmmm, hamne bhi yahi socha hai... "
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"Theek hai, mai jaati hun sone... Bye... '
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"Bye.... "
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Uske baad neha wapas apne room me aajati hai, abhi bhi uske mutthi me wo goliya mauzud thi...
Neha ne apne kamre ko iss bar achhe se lock kar liya aur jakar aiyene ke samne khadi ho gayi...
Usse bhi lagne laga ki jyada sochne ki vajah se usse wo aawaje sunayi di hogi...
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Usne apne hatho ki mutthi ko khola... Aur unn goliyo ko punah... Usske sisi me rakh di...
Usne apne man me apne aap se kaha...
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"Mai haar nahi sakti... Kishan bhai... Bhale hi aap mujhse apar nafarat karte hai, lekin mai iss nafrat ko pyaar me badal kar rahungi... Chahe jo bhi ho... Mai aapko apna pyaar dikha kar rahungi.... Jab mai apna nafrat ko dikhane ke liye uss hadd tak gir sakti hunnn,... To aa soch bhi nhi sakti mai apne pyaar ko sabit karne ke liye... Kya kuchh nhi kar sakti hunnn.... "
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Neha, apne aap ko ek aur dridh sankalp me bandh kar... Table pe rakhe paani ke bottle se pani ko peeti hai...
Aur fir wo apne bistar pe sone chali jati hai....
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Idhar Neha ke jaate hi.... Avni aur khushi... Ka bhi sara kaam lagbhag ho hi gya tha... Par... Khushi aaj jab se apne gao aayi thi tab se uske chehre ka rang feeka feeka lag trha tha... Jisse avni ne gaur kar liya tha....
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Avni - Kya hua hai tujhe, subah se dekh rhi hun,itni gumsum to Tu kabhi hoti nhi hai, bata na chehra kyun murjhaya hua hai tera...? "
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Khushi -Avni yaar, pata nhi... Kal raat ko jab se bhaiya ko sheetal di ke sath kiss karte huye dekhi hunn tab se man me azeeb azeeb se khayal aarhe hai ...? "
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Avni(apne ankhe roll karte huye) - azeeb khayal ka matlab... Tu kehna Kya chahti hai... Kaisa khyala aarhe hai tere man me...?
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Khushi - (feeki muskaan ke sath) pata nhi... Par mujhe jealousy baali feeling aane lagi hai... Sheetal di ko bhai ke baho me dekh kar...
Aisa nhi hai ki mujhe sheetal di pasand nhi hai...
Wo ek achhi ladki hai... Unka behaviour ham logo ke prati bahut achha hai...
Hamesha ham se achhe se baat karti hai...
Par, pata nhi kyun... Mujhe unka bhaiya ke sath rahna...
Ek bechaini sa de jata hai...
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Avni, jo ki khushi ki baato ko sun rahi thi... Wo poori tarah shocked thi... Karan tha ki khushi isse whi sab baate bata rahi thi... Jo ki uske sath bhi ho rha tha...
Usse bhi raat ko sheetal aur kishan ka yun... Ek sath kiss karna... Andar tak jala diya tha...
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Avni -( khushi ke ankho me dekhte huye) khushi.... Sach bolu to mere andar bhi sheetal di ko lekar jealousy hone lagi hai...
Aur ye baat shayad tum bhi samajh gayi hogi ki... Ye kyu ho rha hai...
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Khushi - iska matlab.... Jo mai soch rahi hunn... Wo to nhi...
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Avni - hannnn.... Aur kya ho sakta hai bhala....?
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Khushi - yaaaaarrrrrrrr...... Par ye to galat hai na... Hammm... Hammmm kaise.... Haammmm kaise bhaaii ko pyaar karne lag sakte hai......
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Avni - pyaar thode na kabhi pooch kar hota hai... Wo to bas ho jata hai....
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Khushi - fir bhi avni, agar aisa hai... To kya... Bhai... Kabhi hamare pyar ko dekh payenge... Samajh payenge....
Ye to bas hame hi tadpate rahega na....
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Avni - agar prem sacha ho to wo mil hi jaati hai na... Waise bhi bhai bahut achhe hai.... Agar wo hame na bhi apnaye to bhi... Hame bas unka sath... Unka pyaar chahiye... Ham to ussi me khush rahenge....
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Khushi - aur phir sheetal di ka kya... Wo kabhi iss baat ke liye raazi honge....
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Avni - are oo sekhchand... Pahle bhaiya ko to pata lo... Uske baad bhabhi ko bhi dekh lenge.... Hihihi... Chal ab so ja... Mai to bahot thak gayi hunn....
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Khushi - hihihi... Chalo... Sote hai...
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Mumbai
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Ek bade se building me electric board pe mote mote achhro me likha hua tha
THE GROUP OF R'T
Wo building lagbhag 50 mala tak ka tha...
Uske andar kaam karne baale Sare karmchari apne apne kaamo me lage huye the...
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Building ke 45 ve flore pe... Ek kamre ke bahar waiting lounge me filhal do log baithe huye the... Lala aur ranjeet... Jo ki aaj R'T group ke ceo se milne aaye the.. Indono ne raat ko hi fone kar ke aaj ki appoinnent fix kar liya tha...
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Uss hall numa kamre ka darwaja khulta hai... Aur usme se ek bahut hi sundar si ladki chalti huye bahar aati hai...
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Wo ladki - Excuse Me mr. Ranjeet .... Mam aap dono ko andar bula rahi hai... Please come with me..
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Ek pyari gesture ke sath wo ladki ranjeet aur lala ko andar chalne ko kahti hai. Aur aage aage chalne lagti hai...
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Uske peeche ranjeet aur lala bhi ho lete hai... Jinki najar bar bar us ladki ke nangi jangho pe hi ja rahi thi.
Uss ladki ne ek white shirt aur apne jangho tak ke tight dress pahne huye thi..
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Khair... Wo dono kamre ke andar jaate hai... Aur andar jane ke baad un dono ka dhyan kamre me rakhe gaye expensive chizo ko dekh kar tutati hai...
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Wahi... Unki nazar ek bade se glass ke table ke peechhe chair pe baithi huyi ek hot ladki pe jaati hai... Jo kisi bhi supermodel se kam nhi thi... office ke coat pant me bhi uske figure ko batana koi badi baat nhi thi...
Jahan pahle ranjeet aur lala uss ladki ko yaad rahe the... Wohi.. Ab uska nazar uss ladki pe jaati hai...
Uske.... Table pe ek name plate rakha hua tha...
Jispe name likha huaa tha... TINA KHANNA...
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" Haan to, mr. ranjeet... And mr. Sukhdev... Bataiye kaise aana hua aapka...
Ohh.. Sorry soryy... Please pahle baithiye na... Yun khade khade hi chale jayenge kya....."
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Tina apne files ko sis me rakh kar... Apne peeth ko kursi pe tika kar bolti hai...
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" Shukriya madam, ham dono to bas apne deal ke baare me baat karne aaye hai... Jise shayad koi galatfehme ke wajah se apke manager ne cancle kar diya hai... "
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" Sorry to say... Mr. sukhdev, par wo deal hamare manager ne nahi balki mere husband, aur iss company ke md ROHAN KHANNA ne cancle kiya hai... Aur unhone aisa kyo kiya hai ye to aapko wo hi bata sakte hai... Aur aap log pareshan nhi hoiye... Agar aapne koi galti nhi ki hai... To jarur ROHAN kisi aur vajah se deal cancle kiya hoga... Aap aisa kijiye... Kal subah aajaiye... Aapko ROHAN mil jayenge... Abhi unki meating start huye hai... To wo raat tak chalegi... Okkk
You may go now... "
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Itna bol kar, TINA paas me hi bane room me chali jaati hai, jo uske office se attached hi tha...
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Tina ki seceretary.... Wo ladki... Jiska nam priya hai... Wo ranjeet aur lala ko bahar chalne ko keh deti hai...
Ranjeet aur lala bhi bahar aa jate hai... Wo nakhush to the par unhe ek aasha bhi mil gayi thi ki sab kuchh sahi bhi ho sakta hai...
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" Aakhir baat kya hai ROHAN, aap kya karne ja rahe hai... "
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" Ek bahut hi khash kaam darling... Bahut hi khash kaam... Ahayad ye wohi kaam hai... Jiske liye maine janm liya hai... "
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"Mai samjhi nahi jaan... Aisa kon sa kaam hai.. Jiske liye aap aisi azeeb azeeb baate kar rahe ho"
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" Abhi nahi bata sakta Tina darling, lekin vada karta hunn, meri safalta ka suruaat tumhi se hoga... Aur mai safal bhi tumhare hi karan banunga... Wo kahte jai na ki har ek mard ke safalta ke peechhe ek aurat ka haath hota hai...
To samajh lo ki wo mard mai hunn aur uske sath jo aurat hai wo tum ho meri zaann.... "
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Itna bol kar wo shaks Tina ko kiss karne lagta hai....
Darasal... Ye shaks aur koi nhi balki ROHAN hi hai... Wohi rohan jis ke pariwar ke sath 22 varsh pahle uske apno ne hi barbarta kiya tha... Aur ussi barbarta ka badla lene ke liye ROHAN ne andheri duniya ki kaali shaktiyo ki madad lekar ... Ek nakaratmakta ka rashta chuna....
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(Flashback... Of ROHAN)
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20 varsho ke tap ke baad.... Usse bahut saare ashadharan saktiya prapt huye... Par... Unsabse badi cheez jo usse mili... Wo hai... Uska dimag... Uska dimag...
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Par uske dimag ki bhi kuchh weeknes hai jo shirf ussi ko pata hai...
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Rohan... Ne tap purn hone ke baad... Tantrik ko baba bolna prarambh kar diya... Aur tantrik ne uss bol diya.. Ki jaao... Manushyo ke duniya me khud ko chhupa lo... Unke duniya me... Shirf apne soch aur dimag ke bal pe hi... Apne aap ko mazboot banao... Ek safal manzil tak khud ko pahunchao...
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Jiske jabab me rohan ne bola ki... Theek hai baba, par kya mai jaan sakra hun ki... Aakhir aisa kya hai... Jiske liye mujhe apne aap ko itna mazboot banana pad raha hai....
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Tantrik - ....TILISMYI KHANJAR.... Tumhe samarth ban kar tilismayi khanjar dhundna hai ROHAN... Iske liye tumhe inshano ke beech me inshano ke tarah rah kar hi ek aisi ladki se vivah karni hogi... Jiska janm... Kartik maah ke purnima ke din huaa hai... Ussi ke madhyam se tumhe wo TILISMI KHANJAR milega...
Aur yaad rakhna... Tum inshano ke duniya me apni shakti ka praoyog nhi karoge.... Tumhe apne dimag ka prayog karna hoga.. Aur tumhe iss kanya ko bhi apne pyaar se hi manana hoga...
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Rohan - theek hai baba., waise kya mai jaa sakta hun ki uss khanjar me aisa kya hai... Jiske liye mujhe itne papad belne padenge.
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Tantrik - wo koi aam khanjar nahi hai murkh... Wo khanjar... Samudra manthan ke samay... Samudra se nikli thi... Jise chhal se devtao ne apne paas rakh liya...
Parantu kalantral me raha bali ne uss khanjar ko devtao se chheen liya...
Lekin....
Uske danvo ke paas aate hi wo khanjar kahi gayab ho gaya...
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Pata chala ki jab raja bali...kisi Brahmannn ko 3 pag jameen daan de rahe the... Tabhi... Wo khanjar... Dharti par kahi gir gaya tha... Aur jahan wo khanjar gira.... Wahan uske raksha ke liye.. Devtao ne ek maya rach diya taaki... Koi uss maya ko tod kar uss khanjar ko nahi paa sake...
Wo aaj bhi kisi rudramandir ke taikhane me rakhi huyi hai... Uss khanjar ko wohi ladki utha sakti hai... Jo kartik maah ke purnima ke din janm li hai... Aur wo bhi tab tak... Jab to wo shareer se kunvaari hai... Agar usne sambhoh kar liya... Tab wo uss khanjar ko uthane ke liye samarth nhi rahegi...
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Rohan - samajh gaya baba.... Ab aagya dijiye... Mai aaj hi kisi bade shehar ke taraf nikalta hunn.
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Tantrik - ruko....
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Uske tantrik... Kuchh mantra budbudata hai aur usse Rohan ke taraf badha deta hai...
Rohan Jo... Itne din tak tap karne se... Poora jungleee , kamjor aur 45 varsh ke adhed ka ho gya tha ... Uska shareer... Tantrik ke spell bolne par ek 23 saal ke nauzaban jaisa ban gaya... Uska shareer.. Bhi ekdam kisi film ke hero jaisa ho gaya...
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Apne aap me badlao ko dekh kar Rohan bahut khush hua... Uske baad wo uss jungle se bahar nikal gaya....
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Pahle to wo apne shehar hi gaya... Kangada.. Himachal pradesh... Par ab uska ghar waha nhi tha... Waha pe ek restorent ban gaya tha...
Aabadi bhi bahut badh gayi thi...
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Rohan jyada samay wahan nahi ruka... Wo paas ke hi kisi liberary me jaa kar kitabe padhne laga.. Jisse wo aaj ke samay ke baare me bahot kuchh jaan gaya....
Uske bad.. Usne... Kangada ne hi kuchh majdooro ke sath... Kaam kiya... 1 hafte baad... Wo kangda se train me baith kar mumbai aagya...
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Usne waha aakar... Apne kuchh certificate banvaye... Jo ki poore original hi the.. Uske baad usne apne dimag se aise bahut saare ladkiyo ke baare me pata lagaya.. Jo kartik purnima ke din janm li ho...
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Aur fir usse kuchh din baad hi pata chala ki... Khanna group ke malik... Rupesh khanna ki ekmatra beti Tina khanna... Me wo saare gun hai jo... Usse chahiye... Tina bhi kartik mah ke purnima me hi janm li hai...
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Rohan... Agle subah hi... Khanna grop me apne liye job ki sifarish lekar chala gya...
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Apne dimag aur.. Shadgi ko dikha kar... ROHAN ne Tina ke pita.. Khanna group ke me... Rupesh Khanna ko apna diwana bana diya... Aur... Uss company me ek achhi post pe naukari karne laga...
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Kuchh din me hi rupesh Khanna ko itna pasand karne laga ki usse apne ghar pe dinner ke liye invite karne laga...
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Aur Rohan... Rupesh ke ghar me jakar... Uski beti Tina se bhi mil liya... Jahan Tina bhi rohan ko dekh kar pahli nazar me hi usse pasand karne lagi thi...
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Uske baad tina aur Rohan ke beech nazdeekiya badhne lagi... Rupesh ko bhi iski jaankari thi ki... Uski beti Rohan ko pasand karti hai... Aur usse isse koi aiteraaz bhi nahi tha... Akhir.. Uske nazar me Rohan ki kabiliyat hi itni thi ki... Usse rohan se achha ladka nazar hi nahi aaya apne companu ko samjalne ke liye...
Aur ant me usne Rohan aur tina ki shadi karne ka faisla kar liya...
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Par jab Rohan se isa baare me poochha gaya to... Usne saaf saaf bol diya ki... Pahle wo Khanna group ko world ke top five companies ke list me le jayega.. Uske baad hi Tina se se koi rishta rakhega... Tab tak... Wo shirf company ko bulandiyo pe le jane ke liye poori mehnat karega...
Aur uski ye baat rupesh Khanna aur Tina ko bahut pasand aayi... Aur fir unhone apne company ko Rohan ke hatho me de diya... Aur company ka naam Khanna group se badal kar
THE GROUP OF R'T KHANNA kar diya....
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(Flashback end)
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Aaj ke liye itna hi,.. Agar update pasand aaaye to like karna aur apne revos me ye batana ki... Kishan ki dusri heroin ANUPAMA ko abhi samne laun... Yaa fir baad me

Nice update and awesome writing skills

 

[Chatani]

Update 42 A​

Gramin sadak, sadak ke sath bahti nahar jisme na ke barabar pani dikh rhi thi, kheto me lehrati fasal saaf bayan kar rahi thi ki aadhunik upkarno ki madad se inhe seencha gaya hai. Kheto ke beech se bani pagdandiyo pe se jhund me bache athkheliya karte huye neele kameez aur bhoore pazama pahne huye, kandhe pe kitabo ka bojh liye gramin sarkari vidhyalay ja rhe the... Kiyariyo ke agal bagal me bahot saare taad ke ped lage huye the...
Unhi me se ek taad ke ped ke neeche ek bridh aurat 2 steal ke gilas , 1 mug aur 2 lavna ( taadi yaani ki taad ke ras ko jisme rakha jata hai) le kar baithi huyi thi.. Unhi ke paas kuchh gao ke adhed umra ke kishan, jo ki subah hone ke pahle se hi apne kheto me kaam karne ko aaye the, wo taadi ka luft utha rahe the,
Unn logo ke beech do navyuvak bhi baithe hue the, jo lagatar gilas pe gilas apne kanth se gatak rahe the, chunki taadi taazi thi, to usse nasha to bas naam matr hi hone bala tha,
Ye dono yuvak aur koi nhi balki kishan aur uska mitr Rj tha, darasal subah neha ki harkat se kishan ko uske wo Sare bartav yaad aagye jo ki neha ne camp me kiye the, aur issi ki vajah se aaj fir se koshan ka dil jal utha tha. Ussi jalan ko shant karne wo ghar se bahar gusse me nikal gaya tha, aur uske pichhe pichhe Rj bhi ussi ka sath ho liya tha, kyuki wo kishan ke gusse se achhi tarah wakif tha.
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" Aakhir gaye kahan we dono, haveli pe bhi dekh aayi hun, wahan bhi nahi the"
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"Shayad kisi kaam se kahi gaye honge wo sab nimi, ya fir raghav bhaiya ne unhe apne sath unki zameen dikhane le gaye ho shayad."
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Abhi bhi kishan taad ke ped pe apne peeth tikaye baith kar shunya me dekhta hua apne unhi ateeth ke ghatnao ko yaad kar hi raha tha ki uske kaano me ek jaani pehchani aawaj aayi...
"Sheetal aur nimi ki aawaj "
Unki aawaj sun kar kishan ne apni nazre aas pas ghumayi par usse na to kahi nimi dikhi aur na hi sheetal... Kishan ko laga shayad jyada tadi pine ke karan usse ye saari aawaje sunayi de rahi hai. Wo fir se apne peeth ko yaad se tika kar baith gaya aur taadi bechne baali se ek gilas aur taadi banane ko kaha.
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Rj - kya huaa be, kise dhund raha tha abhi tu?

Kishan - are kuchh nhi yaar, mujhe aisa laga ki nimi aur sheetal idhar baat karte huye aa rhi hai
Rj - kyaa, kuchh bhi bolta hai chutiya.. Wo yahan kya karne aayegi, nimi se baat huye thi meri usne kaha tha ki wo aur sheetal aaj sheetal ke purkho baali jo zameen hai na wahi jane wali hai. Aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai ki idhar ki saari zameen tere chacha ki hai aur iske baad wo ghana jungle...
Iska matlab uska zameen idhar to na hoga.
Kishan - bhadve, maine kaha ki mujhe aisa laga, maine ye nhi kaha ki maine sach me unki aawaj suni...
Abhi kishan R j ko aur sunane hi bala tha ki uski nazar Rj ke chehre pe pade jo apni ankho ko chhoti kiye huye apne bhai ye sikode huye ek taraf dekhe ja raha tha, aur jab kishan uske nazro ka pichha kiya to usne dekha ki lagbhag 3 se 4 bighe khet jitni doori par pagdandiyo se chalte huye nimi aur sheetal... Hirni se Chalti huye aarhi thi...
Peele suit aur salvar me sheetal ugte surya sa pratit ho rhi thi, wohin nimi bhi kisi film ki adakara se kam nhi lag rhi thi.
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Rj - abe lwde, Tu to antaryaami nikla be, saale tujhe kaise pata chala ki ye dono idharich aarele hai. Abe tu ye gilas niche rakh be, aur nikal idhar se warna agar wo dono hame yaha baith kar tadi pite dekh li, to teri sheetal to gay hai wo tujhe to kuchh nahi karegi par meri nimmo, sherni ki tarah mujhe chaba jayegi bhai.. Chal nikalte hai yaha se.
.. Kishan - achha, waise ek baat bata... Kaha jayega bhag kar, ant me to tujhe uske paas hi jana hai... Sale jab peene ka zigra rakhta hai to apni heroin ko bhi sach batane ka zigra rakh. Samjha aur waise bhi ye koi sharab nhi hai, aur naahi hame isse chadhi hai.
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Kishan ki baat sun kar rj shant ho gya, par ek dar usse abhi bhi lag rhi thi.
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Nimi aur sheetal jaise jaise aage badhte gaye waise waise unhe kishan aur Rj dikhne laga...
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Nimi kishan ke paas pahonch kar
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Nimi - yaar, kitne bure inshan ho tum dono, kaha kaha nhi dhundi tum dono ko aur tum dono yaha baith kar bewdo ki tarah taadi pi rahe ho.
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Sheetal- ye kya halat bana rakha hai aapne kishan, aur itna subah subah yaha aakar pine ki aakhir kya zarurat pad gayi aapko.
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Rj - sheetal, nimi, darasal subah subah kishan aur neha ke beech thodi bahash ho gayi jisse kishan thoda upset ho gya tha, aur gusse me wo ghar se bahar nikal gaya, mai bhi iske peeche peeche yaha tak aagya.. Aur tab se yahi baitha hun.
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Nimi - to ye baat hai, khair.... Koi na... Tum dono bhi chalo hamare sath, ham tumhe aisi jagah le jayenge jaha pahunch kar tum dono ka mood yun change ho jayega... Aur no excuses.... Tum dono chup chap hamre sath chal rahe ho to chal rahe hi bas...
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Itna bol nimi aur sheetal aage aage chalne lagti hai, rj aur kishan bhi taadi ke paise mahila kk dekar unke pichhe chalne lagta hai.
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Mumbai
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Jagah - RT group of company
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"Hello mister ranjeet and mister sukhdev, mai hi hun is company ka MD Rohan, boliye kya baat karni thi aapko mujhse . "
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Rohan ne ye baat kahi thi apne samne baithe ranjeet aur sukhdev se. Jo aaj apne tay samay pe Rohan se milne yaha aaya tha.
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" Ji, wi darasal ham... Hamare deak ke baare me baat karne aaye the Rohan ji, shayad kisi misunderstanding ki vajah se aapki company dwaara hamara deak cancle kar diya gaya hai. Yahi batane aur is problem ka solution dhundne ham yaha aaye hai. "

Sukhdev lala ne ye baat bola tha, jise sun kar ek pal ke liye rohan ke chehre pe ek mushna aagyi.

" Achha, par aao ne kaise jana ki us deal ke cancle hone ka mukhya karan misunderstanding hi hai, hi sakta hai ki hamare team ko apka meteriyal hi na pasand ho. "
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Rohan ki baat sun kar, sukhdev aur ranjeet ki hawa fir se tight hone lagi.
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" Rohan sir, hamare taraf se koi bhi kami nahi thi deal ke tahat aapke maal ko taiyar karne me, aur to aur hamne market se karz lekar ek se badh kar ek equipment mangawaya hai taaki sabhi saman nayi takneek se air bhi nikhre. Fir bhi aapne deal cancle kar diya to ham kahi ke nahi rahenge Rohan sir, pls koi upay bataiye jisse mai wapas iss deal ko le saku.
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Rohan - aapka gao, rudrapur hai na ?
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Sukhdev - ji hann
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Rohan - hanshraaj vardhan nam ke koi hai aapke gao me.
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Sukhdev -( kuchh der sochne ke baad) abhi to iss naam ka koi nahi hai par hanshraaj vardhan naam ka ek aadmi bahot pahle yahan raha karte the. Ab to unki maut huye bhi 4 dashak beet gaye. Hann par unka pota abhi bhi hai, jairaaj vardhan naam hai uska. Fauz me hai
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Rohan - interesting, matlab hanshraaj ji, jairaaj vardhan ke dada hai,... Waise maine suna hai inke naam pe apke gao me bahot saari zameen hai.
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Ranjeet - ji Rohan ji, par aap ye sab kyu pochh rahe hai.
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Rohan - are bas aise hi, wo kya hai na ki mujhe pooja karne ka bahot shok hai, aur jab maine ek jyotishi ko apna hath dikhaya to usne kaha ki hame ek baar hanshraj ji ke sanrkshan me bane rudramandir me apni sadhna karni chahiye jisse hamare Sare ksht door ho jayenge.
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Sukhdev - par Rohan ji, jahan tak mujhe yaad hai, vardhan ji ke sanrakshan me jo mandir thi uska naam rudra mandir nahi balki.... Devmandir tha, jo aaj bhi hamare gai ke beech me mauzud hai. Rudra mandir nam ka koi nhi mandir hamare gao me nahi hai.
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Rohan - (halka mushkurate huye) aisa kya, koi baat nhi.... Waise hanshraaj ki saari properry to uske pote jairaaj ke paas hi hogi na.
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Ranjeet - ji haann, jahan tak ki usne apni property me aur bhi izaafa hi kiya hai.
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Rohan - to suno, agar tumhe apni deal chahiye to mujhe jaitaaj vardhan ki zameen chahiye, bas wohi zameen jispe uske purvajo ne apne sanrakshko ke sath milkar vishalkaay mandir ka nirmaan kiya......
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Rj - "Wow... Kitna khoobsurat nazara hai yaar.... Kya tum dono ne hame maar kar swarg to nhi le aaye ?"
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Nimi - " Apna muh band karo rj.... Aur ye jagah jayraj uncle ( sheetal ke pita) ka hi hai. Unki purkho ki zameen... Sundar hai na... "
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Rj - "Sundar.... Kya tum ye chhote mote shabdo ko bol kar iss swarg jaisi jagah ko ek chhota swaroop de rahe ho... Ye adbhut hai nimi... Adbhut.....
Kyun kishan...... "
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Kishan - "Hmmm... Ek minute...( apne bhauyen sikodte huye) yahan koi waterfall bhi hai kya...? "
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Sheetal - Shayad ho... Par hame nhi pata... Papa iske jyada andar jaane se mana kiye huye hai. Waise aapko aisa kyun laga?
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Kishan - kyun matlab, kya tumlogo ko waterfall ki awaze sunayi nhi de rhi hai... ?
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Rj - aaj in zanav ke kaano me shayad kisi ne speaker daal diya hai... Door door ki aawaje inhe snayi de rhi hai.
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Kishan - abe Tu chup rah, sheetal kya ham aur andar nahi ja sakte
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Sheetal - ekdam nhi, andar bahot khatra hai.. Ham yahi baith kar baate karte hai na, dekhiye to kitna haseen nazara hai yahan.
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Abhi sheetal aage kuchh bolne hi jaa rhi thi ki mere kaano me fir se kuchh aawaje sunayi dene lagi.... Aur ye awaje thi kisi mandir ko ghanti bajne ki, aur sath hi sath mantrocharan ki bhi aawaze aarhi thi....
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Update 42 B​

" Ye poora jungle kya tumhare pita ji ka hai...? "
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Jungle me bah rahe ek sundar si prakritik saaf paani ki nahar ke kinare, kuchh kuchh doori bana kar nimi aur rj ke sath sath sheetal aur kishan baithe the, jo ki iss vatavarn aur prakrti ke saundarya me apni apni preet jodiyo ke sath pyar bhari chhed chhad me lage huye the,
Filhal kishan apna sar sheetal ke God me rakh kar usse apne pyar ke bhavishya ki kalpanao ko samjha kar raha tha,
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Parantu kishan ke dimag me filhaal bahot saari baate chal rahi thi. Jaise ki usse aaj itni ajeeb ajeeb si awaje kaise sunayi de rahi thi...
Wahan kheto me sheetal aur nimi ki aawaj ko sunna..
Aur fir uski satyta bhi sabit hona...
Bahot ajeeb ghatna thi ye...
Aur abhi...
Baar baar shirf usse hi ek jharne se paani girne ki aawaj usse aarhi thi...
Wo bhi lagatar...
Wahi uske baad kisi mandir me ghanti bajne ki aawj...
Aur yahi wo karan tha ki.... Apne pyar bhari baat chit ke beech me hi kishan ne sheetal se ye sawal poochh liya, jise sunkar sheetal pahle usse ghoor kar dekhi aur fir mushkurate huye jabab di.
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"Ye hamari purkho ki zameen hai, pita ji batate hai ki pahle ye gao bhi ussi jungle ka hissa hua karta tha, unka kahna hai ki unke dada yani ki mere pardada ji aur aapki dadi ( sharda devi) ke pita ji ne milkar iss gao ko basaya tha. "
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Kishan - wah... Tab to tumhe iss jungle ke baare me bahot saari baate pata hogi?
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Sheetal - ji nahi, is jungle ke andar jaane pe pabandi lagayi hayi hai, hamlog bas yahin tak aa sakte hai.
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Kishan - par aisa kyu...? Ye jagah tumhari hai to fir iske andar jaane par tumhe pabandi kyun hai.
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Sheetal - are buddhu, aap na sach me buddhu hi ho, ye pabandi shirf mere liye nhi hai, balki sabhi logo ke liye hai, aur aazib si to baat hai ki iss pabandi ka karan jungle me rahne baale jungli janvar hi honge na. Aisa hi ek jungle apake gao me bhi hai na... Waha bhi to pabandiya lagi huyi hai.
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Sheetal abhi jungle ke baare me bata hi rahi thi ki kishan ke kaano me fir se kuchh avaje aane lagi... Wo bhi ghantiyo ke jor jor se bajne ke sath... Wo aawaje thi mantrocharan ka...
RUDRASHTAKAM ( Rudra ki aarti)
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" Chal bhai, bahot late ho gaye hai ham dono... Dopehar hone ko aayi hai, ye dono deviya to khana kha kar aayi hai, ham dono to bhukhe hi chale aaye the... Chal jaldi "
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Ye aawaj thi rj ki , waise bol to sahi hi raha tha, subah bina khana khaye hi nikalne ki vajah se bhookh kishan ko bhi lag chuki thi...
Issi liye wo sab wapas ghar ke liye nikalne lage...
Lekin wapas nikalte samay kishan ko ek khinchaw mehshoos hua... Jungle ke andar se... Jaise ki koi usse anadr aane ko keh raha ho. . Lekin man ko jhatak ke ve charo wahan se vapas apne apne ghar laut gaye.
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(Me as kishan)
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Haveli me sannata pasra hua tha, Raghav majdooro ke sath khet ki taraf jayja lene ke liye ja chuka tha, aur ghar ke mukhiya bijendra ji bhi kisi kaam se ghar ke bahar gaye huye the...
Shadi me lagaye gaye Sare tent pandal khul ke subah hi ja chuke the, aur saaf safayi bhi kiya ja chuka tha.
Khair, ham dono haveli me aaye , darwaje pe dastak dene ke baad darwaja kholne aayi Radhika chachi... Jinke God me kandhe pe sar rakh kar pinki so rahi thi, ya fir sone ki koshish kar rahi thi.
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Radhika chachi se meri uss din se kuchh bhi baat nhi huyi thi, aur naa hi wo apni nazar utha kar mujhe dekhne ki koshish ki thi. Abhi bhi wo darwaja kholte ke sath jaise hi mujhe aur rajnish ko dekhi, waise hi thithak si gayi aur apni nazre neeche karte huye darwaje se side ho gayi.
Parantu, darwaje pe dastak ki awaz se pinki ki ankh khul chuki thi, issiliye usne jaise hi mujhe dekha, waise hi...
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" Bhaiyaa, aap aa gye.. Mujhe to laga sabhi didi aur bua ke jaise aap bhi mujhe chhod kar chale gaye...
(Bechari subakne lagi... Akasar aisa hi to hota hai... Wo bhi khash kar bacho me... Itne dino se sab ke sath rahne se usse iski aadat si ho gayi thi aur ab achanak sabke chale jaane se use akelapan satane laga tha, pahle to uski bua ( kalpana) uske sath raha karti thi par ab, ab to kalpana bhi apne ghar ja chuki thi.)
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Mai - are aap ro kyu rahi ho meri barbie, chalo aao mere sath chalo... Mai hun na, mai abhi kahi nahi ja rha hun... Aajao..
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Mai pinki ko apnne God me me uthate huye ye sab bola. Radhika chachi bhi wahan se kitchen chali gayi thi. Aur mai aur rj, pinki ke sath wahin hall me baith gaye . Aur uske sath baate karne lage.
Kuchh der me chachi khana bhi le aayi, aur hamsab khana khane baith gaye...
Chachi ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha ki wo mujhse kuchh kahna chahti hai par unhe himmat nahi mil rahi hai Kuchh bolne ki.
Khair aise hi khana khatam hua, dopehar tha isliye chachi pinki ko wapas kamre me le gayi jahan usse nind bhi aane lagi thi.
Raghav chacha bhi aagye the, mai rj aur raghav chacha, hall me baith kar baate karne lage.
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Rj - kishan, hamare exaam bhi aane baale hai yaar, kab chalna hai hame vapas.
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Kishan - kal bhar rukte h na yaar, dekh na kitna suna ho gya hai ye haveli, pinki ko bhi man nahi lag rha hai, ( chacha se) chacha ji, aap kuchh dino ke liye rachna bua, ya fir kalpna bua ko kyu na bula lete ho, isse pinki ko bhi achha lagega, bechari bahot akeli ho gayi hai.
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Chacha - are, kalpana to kal aane hi bali hai beta, ek rashm hota hai, jise usko shadi ke baad pura karna hota hai, dekh na mai hi jaane wala tha usse lane, par koi baat nhi... Rachna aate samay use aur damad ji ko le aayegi.
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Mai - han, ye sahi rahega,
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Chacha - ye sab chhodo, aur ye batao ki aaj subah tum dono kheto me kya kar rahe the?
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Chacha ke iss sabal se ham dono ghabra gaye, jisse wo muskurane lage.
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Mai - kuchh nahi Chacha, wo man nahi lag raha tha iss liye socha ki...
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Chacha- ki taad ka taadi pi lete hai.... Khair wo subah subah baali taazi taadi thi to koi problem nahi hai par kabhi bhi rakha hua baasi tadi mat peena thik hai. Usse nasha chadh jata hai.
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Rj - par aap ko kaise pata chala ki ham waha taadi pe rhe the.
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Chacha - bete, tum iss waqt thakur raghav singh ke gao me khade ho, itna to jaankari rakhni padegi na apne bacho ke bare me kyu kishan.
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Mai mushkuraya, aur uske baad.
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Mai - accha Chacha wo gao ke peechhe jo jungle hai uske andar koi jharna aur mandir hai kya....?
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Maine jaise hi jungle ki charcha ki Raghav Chacha ka gala sukhne laga, aur fir jaise hi maine uske andar bane mandir aur jharne ki baat ki... Unhe laga ek jor ka jhatka....
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"Tttuu tumhe kaise pata chala... Tum uske andar gaye the kya... "
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Ladkhada kar kahi thi ye baat raghav Chacha ne.. Unke chehre pe paseene ke bundo ne apna ghera bana liya tha.
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Mai - andar to nahi gaya tha, par han sheetal aur nimi ke sath, uss nahar ke paas jarur gaya tha... Aur wahin mujhe ek jharne ki aawaj, aur sath hi sath.. Kisi mandir me ghanti bajne ki aawaje aayi thi...
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Meri baat ko sun, jaha ek tarf kuchh pal ke liye sukoon mila unhe, par fir unhe ek anjana dar bhi lagne laga....
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Chacha - kishan bete, rj sahi bol raha hai, tumhari exaam aane vala hai... Tumhe ab wapas shehar laut jana chahiye...
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Jagah - trimathpur ( sharda ji ka ghar)
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( ye tab ki baat hai jab sharda devi, apne bhai ke yaha se vapas abhi abhi hi apne ghar aayi thi)
Sharda devi apne ghar me aate ke sath, ek pal bhi aur waha nhi ruki, aur apne ekmatra sevak raghu ji ke sath apni gaadi me baith kar trimath pur ke junglo ki taraf nikal gayi... Unka thikana kahan tha ye to aap sab jaan hi gaye honge... Wo trimath mandir ja rhi thi,
Maharishi Surajdev se bhent karne, par ye bhent sadharan nahi thi, iss waqt sharda ji ke lalat pe bahut jyada tanav dekha ja sakta tha.
Ab unhe kis baat ki itni chinta thi ye to aage hi pata chalegi.
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Iss vaqt mandir ke peechhe bani kutiya me sharda devi aur maharishi surajdev baithe charcha kar rhe the.
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" Jaisa ki aapne kaha tha baba, aaj subah subah waisa hi kuchh mere bete ne kishan ki aankho me dekha... Lekin "
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"Lekin kya meri bachchi... "
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"Lekin uske sath wo bhi dikha jo nhi dikhna chahiye tha baba... Shayad shrap aa chuka ha baba... Jiske baare me aapne uss din gupt rup se mere pati aur uske baad mujhe bataya tha"
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" Mujhe andesha tha iss baat ka, lekin tum ghabrao mat putri... Agar shrap ne janm liya hai, to ab iske kaat ko jald se jald taiyaar karna hoga hame... 3 maheene bache hai kishan ke 21 varsh ke hone me, aur uss shrap ki sidhh hone ki avdhi bhi 21 varsh tak hi hai, uske baad wo shrap khud ba khud khatam ho jayegi, ya phir apna swaroop badal legi...
Parantu inn teen maheeno me uska prabhav kishan ki zindagi pe poori tarah se padega.
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( aaplogo ko yad hoga dosto jab shambhu pratap ji ko koshan in junglo me mila tha, uss waqt surajdev unhe apni kutiya me le jakar kishan ke baare me kuchh baate batayi thi... Kuchh gupta baate ab wo baate jaanne ka samay aagya hai)
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(Flashback)
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Shambhu - baba, aapne bataya ki ye bacha god ka ansh hai. Ti iss baache me aakhir aisi kon si kamzori hai jo aap ne iski suraksha ko lekar itni hidayte di hai.
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Surajdev - putra, iss balak ka janm bahut saare adhure kaaryo ko purn karne ke liye hua hai, maine ye to tumhe bata diya ki ye bachha ek God ka ansh hai. Parantu ye bhi ek satya hai ki iske shareer me jo aatma hai wo matra ek purn aatma ka ek chauthayi ansh hai...
Samajh aayi meri baat ( mushkurate huye)
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Shambhu ji - nahi maharishi
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Surajdev - iss bache ki shareer me jo aatma hai wo purn nahi hai, uski aatma ka 1 bhag uss bache me hai ...baake ke 3 bhag me 2 bhag prthvi pe hi mauzud hai... Aur antim bhag Naglok me bhatak rahi hai.
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Surajdev ji ki baat sunne ke baad shambhu pratap ji ka dimag hi hil gaya... Unke dimag me bas yahi chal raha tha ki aakhir aise kaise ho sakta hai... Ek aatma ka 4 bhag....
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Shambhu - ye kaise sambhav hai maharishi... Mera matlab hai ki kisi aatma ka char hissa hona kya sambhav hai...
Surajdev - iss duniya me asambhav kuchh bhi nhi hai putra... Tum janna chahoge uss aatma ka prthvi pe jo 2 bhag shadiyo se bhatak rahe hai wo filhal kaha hai.
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Shambhu - ji
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Surajdev -Un bhago me me se ek bhag, aaryavart ke dakshin disha me kisi mandir ke andar dafan ek divya farsha ko surachha pardaan kar raha hai.
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Shambhu - aur dusra...?
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Surajdev -(mushkurate huye) dusraa..... Achha ek baat batao kya tum iss ho chuke ghatna ka udahran dekhna chahoge putra, kya tum ye janna chahoge ki iss bachche ke shareer me mauzud aatma ke ansh ka dusra bhag kon hai... Kya usse milna chahoge
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Shambhu - ji maharishi.
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Surajdev - wo tumhare samne khada hai putra........
MAI HI HUN USS BACHCHE KE SHAREER ME MAUZUD ATMA KA DUSRA BHAG...
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Aaj ke liye itna hi, update achhi lage to like kar diyo

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Update 43
Pehla janm
Mega update ​

Ab tak aapne padha ki kishan ke pas uski apni saktiyo ki kuchh ansh milne lage hai jiska usse ratti bhar bhi ehshash nhi hai, unhi shaktiyo ke karan usse rudra pur ki rashyamayi mandir ke baare me pata chala,
Wahin sunil ne kishan me kuchh aisa dekh liya jo nahi dekhna chahiye tha, ussi ke karan sharda devi punah rishi surajdev se milne gaye jahan se hame flashback me pata chala ki kishan ki aatma ka kul char bhag hai, aur un chhar bhago me se ek bhag swayam surajdev hai.
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Ab aage...
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(Flashback continued)
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" Kyaaaaaaaa. . .. Ye kaise sambhav ho sakta hai rishivar.... Aakhir... Aap... Aap kaise.... Mujhe to kuchh samajh me hi nahi aarha hai... "
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Bhale hi surajdev ek matama the ,wo inn akalpniye ghatnao ko na shirf samajhte the balki un ghatnao ka ek mehtwapurn patra bhi the parabtu Shambhu pratap ji, wo to ek aam manushya hi the na.. Inn baato ko pachne me waqt to lagna hi tha. Issi karan surajdev ki baat ko sun kar shambhu pratap ji bilkul stabdh rah gaye.
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"Adheer na ho putra, maine tumhe pahle bhi bataya hai, ishwar dwara banaye gaye iss duniya me asambhav kuchh bhi nahi hai...
Maine abhi jo bhi kaha wo sab sat pratishat sach hai...
Abhi tum mujhe jiss nashwar shareer me dekh rahe ho na ye shareer meri nahi hai, ye shareer ek shikari ki hai... Aur bahar jaysimha ko jis sinh ke shareer me tum dekh rahe ho na wo wohi sinh hai jiska shikar ye shikari karna chahta tha. Par waqt ne un dono ki aatma ke pahiye ko rok diya aur tabhi shikar ke dauran ye dono ek dusre ko maar diye... Ussi waqt mai aur mere mitra apne aatm roop me wahan bhatak rahe the. Ki inn dono ki tadapti huyi shareer hame nazar aayi...
Aur jaise hi ham dono... Iss shareer ke pas pahunche...
Ek adrishya shakti ne hame inn dono shareer ke andar kaid kar diya. Mujhe uss shikari ke shareer me aur mere mitra ko uss sinh ke shareer me. "
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Jahan Surajdev ji , shambhu pratap ji ki confusion ko door karne ke liye apne baare me aur batane lage, wahin shambhu pratap ji ki confusion aur bhi badh gayi... Unhe ye sab baate kisi fantasy novel jaisi lag rahi thi.
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" Theek hai, theek hai rishivar... Par inn baato me mujhe aisi koi khatra baali baat to nazar nhi aayi... To fir uss bache ki suraksha ka kya uddeshya hai. Aakhir aisi kya khatra aayegi uss masoom pe."
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Shambhu pratap ji ne apni vyatha jahir ki
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" Maasoom na kaho putra iss balak ko, ye maasoom kahi se bhi nahi hone bala. Aur rahi baat khatre ki to wo khatra kya hai ye mai tumhe batata hunn...
Parantu uske purb kuchh jaanne yogya baate samjho.
Maine abhi tumhe bataya ki.. Uss balak ki aatma ka char bhag kiya gaya hai, aur aisa kyun kiya gaya hai ye to mujhe bhi nhi gyat hai, aakhir mai bhi to unhi bhago ka hissa jo hun..
Unn chhar bhago me teen bhago ka janm apne apne samay me ho chuka hai... Lekin unki aatma ke adhure hone ke karan unki mrityu ke pashchat bhi unhe mukti nahi mili...
Aur ek karan aur bhi hai unhe mukti nahi milne ki... Unn aatmbhago ko mila kar jo mool aatma banegi... Uske madhyam se ishwar koi bada karya karana chahte hai...
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Iss bache ki kahani kya hai, iska janm kaha hua tha. ( chunki bache yani kishan ka janm ho chuka tha, aur usse jungle me ek aadmi apni ghayal awastha me le aaya tha, yahan ussi ki baat ho rahi hai)
In sab baato ki charcha ham kabhi aur karenge.
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Filhal mai tumhe uske aatma ke unn hisso ke baare me batata hun jinke baare me mujhe gyaat hai.
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Uss aatma ke pahle hisse ka janm shadi ke 600 isha purv hua tha..........
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Baat tab ki hai jab aaryo ne apna sampurn varchasva, iss bharatvarsh pe pa liya tha, aur ussi kaal se iss pavitra bhumi ko ek naya naam diya gya tha aaryavart,
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Raja Varnvarman, jo ki aaryavart ke pashchimottar bhag ke ek mahan shashak the, wo ek swayambar me gaye huye the, unka uddeshya wahan vivah karna nahi tha, balki wo uss swayambar me mukhya atithi ke taur me aamantrit kiye gaye the.
Parantu jab unhone uss kanya ko ko dekha, jiski aaj swayambar thi, to uspe wo mohit ho gaye.
Aur uss kanya ki nazar bhi jaise hi raja varnvarman pe padi baise hi wo bhi apna dil raja ko de baithi.
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Jab raajkumari ko apne man ka var chunne ko kaha gaya tab raajkumari, sabhi rajyo ke pratapi se pratapi raajkumar ke samne se aage nikalte huye mukhya atithi ke sinhashan tak gayi aur apna varmala raja varnvarman ke gale me daal di.
Wahan mauzud sabhi log achambhit ho gaye, unhe dar bhi lagne laga, ve sabhi raja varnvarman ke krodh se bhali baati baakhif the...
Lekin raaj varnvarman ne unhe aashwashan diya ki ve log dare nahi, unhone raajkumari ke pita se bhi kaha ki ab se unki putri meri patni huyi...
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Wahan mauzud sabhi log khushi manane lage,
Lekin raajkumari ki dadi aur maa ke chehre pe ek dar dikhne laga, kyonki unhe pata tha ki unke putri ke bhagya me maa banne ka bhagya nahi hai, aur agar ye baat raja varnvaraman ko ata chali to unka krodh... Iiss pure rajya ko jala dalegi.
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raja ki swayambar me raajkumari pasand karne ki baat unke rajya VARNDESH tak gayi, aur wahan bhi log khushiya manane lage, charo taraf tyohar ka vatavaran tha...
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Vaqt beetane lagi, aur ussi beetate waqt ke saath raja ki shadi bhi ho gayi...
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Samay ke sath raaja varnvarman aur raani sarojlata ke beech pyar aur hi badhta gaya.
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Lekin jab 2 se 3 varsh ki avdhi beet gayi, aur fir bhi unhe santan nahi huyi tab raja aur rani dono udas rahne lage...
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Unke raajya ke raajguru se ye baat chhip na saki... Raajguru ek shiddh rishi bhi the, unhone raja se ek yagya karbane ko kaha. Raja bhi maan gaye...
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Yagya bahot dino tak chali aur ant me lagbhag 9 dino ke baad yagya ki samapti huyi... Yagya ke samapt hote ke sath, wahan bahot joro se tufaan aane laga , tufan me wahan ke ped tak ko gira diya,lekin aashcharya ki baat ye thi ki havan kund abhi tak jwalit hi tha... Uss kund ke yu jalte huye dekh kar wahan mauzud saare log hairan ho jaate hai....
Abhi kuchh hi der huyi thi ki wahan mauzud sabhi log apne apne jagah murchhit hokar gir gaye....
Aur fir aakash se aakashvaani huyi...
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" Rajan, Rani... Tum dono ke madhyam se ek bahut hi mehtwapurna kriya ka prarambh hone ja raha hai, tumhe vardan deta hun ki tumse ek sundar aur bahadur balak ki utpatti hogi."
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. Aakashvaani sahi bhi huyi, kuchh maheeno baad hi raani garvvati ho gayi, aur uske kuchh maheene baad janm hota hai uss aatme ke pahle hisse yaani ki suraj varmanam ki.
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suraj varmanam, bachpan se hi natkhat tha, aur minnato baad uska janm huaa iss vajah se usse uske mata pita aaj tak gussa nahi kiye the,
Jiske karan suraj varmanam apne yuva abashtha me aate aate behad hi ghatiya, aiyaash, nirdayi aur papi ban chuka tha. Jiske liye uski praja bas uske khelne aur maza karne ki cheez thi.
Aksar uska jise man chatha tha usse utha lata tha, aur uske sath raate rangeen kar ke uss ladki ko hi doshi bana diya karta tha.
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Ek din raajkumar suraj apne ghode pe savar hoke jungle ke taraf shikar karne ja raha tha. Aur waha pe uski mulakat hoti hai SOMYA se.
Ye bhi shikar karne hi aayi thi. Lekin somya kisi rajya ki raajkumari to nahi thi, par wo ek kabeele ke sardaar ki beti jarur thi.
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Suraj usse dekh kar, isse paane ki tarkeeb sochne laga.
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Suraj kisi tarah se somya ko apne jaal me fasa bhi liya.... Aur somya bhi usse dilojaan se chahne lagi...
Somya ek shant swabhav ki kanya thi...
Usme ek khash kabiliyat thi ki wo kisi ka bhi bhavishya apne sapno me dekh leti thi.
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Usne apna bhavishya bhi dekha liya tha jisme wo aur yuvraj suraj raajbhavan me ek hi kaksha me so rahe hai,,,,,,
lekin ye aadha hi sach tha... Kyonki usse purri khawab dekhne ka mauka hi nahi milta tha,...
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Suraj, aur somya waqt ke sath aur bhi kareeb aane lage...
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Suraj bhi kahi na kahi somya se sacha prem karne laga tha. Usne apne sare bure kaam chhod diye the.
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Ek din somya ko chakkar aane laga... Aur dono ko pata chala ki somya maa banne baali hai...
Kuchh dino se suraj me bhi parivartan aane lagi thi. Uske vyavhaar me aaye anayash parivartan se uske mata pita bahut khush the.
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Suraj ne somya ke baare me apne maa ko bataya... Uske maa ke dwara somya ke kabeele me rishte ka parastav bheja gya.
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Unhone maan bhi liya.. Aur fir somya aur suraj ki shadi bhi ho gayi.
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Waqt fir se beetne laga., aur ussi beetate waqt me suraj fir se janta ka shoshan karne laga.
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Suraj ke iss vartav aur itna krur chehra dekh kar Dheere dheere, suraj aur somya ke beech darare aane lagi.
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Kuchh vaqt aur beetata hai, somya ne ek bachi ko janm diya jiska naam suraj ke pita varnvarman ne varnika rakha...
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Raja varvarman ki chaheti thi varnika, apne putra se bhi jyada wo apni poti ko pyar karte the. Unka bas chalta to ye saaro duniya hi apni poti ke naam kar dete.
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To wahin,
Somya ko beetate waqt ke sath uske sapne me bahut saare saanp aur naag naagine dikhne lage the,
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Roj ka yahi haal tha... Usse lagbhag pratidin wahi sapne pareshan karne lagi.
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Somya ne apne sapne ki baat ko raajguru ko batane ka socha tha. Ek wahi the jo isski jaankari de sakte the.
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Kuchh dino me raj guru aur somya ek anushthan me baithe, jahan raajguru ko pata chala ki somya naag vansh se talluk rakhti hai.
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Waqt ke beetane ke sath, suraj aur somya ke beech ki nazdikiya khatm hone ko aagayi.
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Suraj, ab gaali galauch karne laga, aur uska ek hi karan tha, somya usse bahar aiyashi karne se rokti thi, jiske karan suraj aksar somya ko gaali diya karta tha,
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Ek din somya, apne bachhi ko God me lekar usse bageeche me tehla rahi thi, ki suraj ek taraf se aata hai.
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Aur aate ke sath somya ke gaalo pe ek jordaar tamacha jad deta hai aur bolta hai ki,
" Tumne apne aap ko kya samajh kar meri maa ke kaan bharne ki koshish ki hai"
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Lekin yahan suraj se ek galti ho jaati hai, wo itni jor se somya ko tamacha marta hai ki somya ke hatho se uski beti door bani ke fauntain se ja takraati hai.
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Fauntain ke beech me ek mahila ki murti thi, jiske ek sath me ghada tha jisse paani neeche gir raha tha aur dusre hath me ek chhura.
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Durbhagya se somya ke hath se uski beti varnita chhitak kar uss chhure pe gir gayi, ussi pal usski maut ho gayi.
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Ek maa ke samne uski chhoti si beti ki itni dardnaak maut hona. Issi ko bolte hai anhoni ki suruaat, shayad ye wohi din tha jis din varandesh ke sunahre aur sampann samrajya me ek koop aur jwalit prakop ko lane ki neemb rakhi gayi thi, wo bhi swayam uss fajya ke yuvraaj ke karan.
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Somya, dahade maar kar rone lagi. Chunki uss bageeche me aur koi bhi mausud nahi tha. Issliye yuvraaj suraj ne varnita ki maut ka jhuta ilzaam somya pe laga diya. Bechari somya to apni hosh hi gawa baithi thi, ek uski beti hi to thi uske zeene ki sahara.
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Varnita ki maut ki khabar jab raja tak pahunchi, tab raja ka krodh bhi ugaan pe aagya. Yahan raaja se bhi ek bahut badi galti ho gayi.
Raja varnvaraman ne bina raajguru ke salah liye. Apne krodhagni me suraj ki baate ko sach man kar somya ko hi doshi maan liya, aur usse mrityu dand dene ko kahne lage. Leki ain waqt pe maharani sarojlata ne raja se kaha ki ek mahila ko mrityu dand dena kisi bhi rajya ke liye pralay ka karan ban sakta hai.
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Maharani ki baat sun kar raja varnvarman ne somya ko karavash de diya.
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Somya abhi bhi khamosh hi thi, wahin suraj ke man me apni beti ki maut ka zara sa bhi afshosh nahi tha.
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Ye saari ghatnaye raat ke pahar me ghati thi. Aur saza bhi raat ke pahar me hi huyi.
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Raajguru uss samay apne kutiya me the, unhe kuchh na kuchh anisth hone ki aashanka to thi. Unhone socha ki kal pratah hi wo iss baare me rajan se baat karenge.
Itna soch kar wo apne dhyan me baith gaye.
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Abhi kuchh samay wo dhyan me baithe hi the ki unke dhyan me hi unhe naarad ji ke apne samkatch hone ka aabhash huaa. Maharishi narad. Jo apne veena ko bajate huye raajguru ko apni tandra todne ko bolte hai, jiske turant baad hi raajguru apne aankh kholte hai, aur jaise hi unki nazar samne narad ji pe jaati hai waise hi unki khushi ki seema paar hone lagti hai. Wo turant narad ji ko dandvat pranam karte hai.
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Narad ji unhe aashirvaad dete hai aur, unhone kaha ki...
He raajguru , ab aapko wo karya purn karna hoga jiske liye aapka janm huaa hai.
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Uske baad narad ji ne raajguru ko wo sab baate bata di jo aaj unke rajya me ghatit huyi.
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Uske baad... Narad ji bole
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Yehi niyati hai raajguru... Iss rajya aur iss rajya ke sampannta ke din purn ho chuke hai.
Chunki aapko pata hoga ki raajkumari somya ek naagvansh ki kanya hai, kabeele baalo ko wo kanya nadi ke kinare mili thi. Lekin aap mukhya baat se anjan hai raajguru. Wo kanya shirf naagvansh se taalluk hi nahi rakhti balki wo uss vansh ki khoyi huyi raajkumai hai.
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Naaglok ke raaj jaane kab se apni putri ko khoj kar rahe the, par unhe tab tak raajkumari ki khabar nhi mili jab tak aapne raajkumari ke sath anushthan na kiya tha. Par jaise hi aapne anushthan purn kiya waise hi raajkumari ki jaankari naaglok ke raja ko mil gaya.
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aaj jo bhi unki beti ke sath hua hai iss bat ki bhi khabar unhe mil chuki hai. Aur uske karan jo parinam hame dekhne ko milenge usse na to aap badal sakte hai aur na hi mai.
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Narad ji ki baat ko sun kar raajguru vyathit ho gaye. Unhone apne vyathit man se narad ji se poochha ki.
Ab aage kya kiya jaye rishivar... Mere liye kya nirdesh hai. ?
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Narad ji mushkura kar bolte hai.
Aap ko bas apne rajya ki praja ko sakushal yaha se uss rajya se door lejana hai.
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Raajguru - jo aagya rishivar.
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Narad ji wapas chale gaye, aur raajguru apne kutiya se bahar askar apne rajya ko niharne lage.
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Khair subah huyi...
Varandesh ki har subah bahut hi madhur aur shukhmayi huaa karti thi, par aaaj ki subah me ek ajeeb si manhushiyat mehshoos ho rahi thi.
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Raajmahal me suraj ke alaba sab dukhi the.
Suraj subah hote ke sath apne ghode pe sabar ho kar mahal se bahar nikal gaya.
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Wahin raja aur raani... Apne kachh me mauzud khidki se suraj ko mahal ke bahar jaate huye dekhte hai. Par kuchh nhi bolte hai. Putra moh me ek samridh aur ajey raja aaj andha ho chuka tha, usse uske putra ki koi galtiya dikhati hi nhi de rahi thi. Raani ka bhi kuchh vaisa hi haal tha. Par raaj se kuchh kam.
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Subah raajyasabha me raajguru ka aagman hua, aur raajguru ko raat ke ghatna ke baare me bataya gaya, sath hi sath raaja ne unse maafi bhi mangi ki bina unke salah liye usne ye faisla kiya.
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Raajguru maun rahe aur apne sinhashan pe ja baithe. Aaj unka chehra bhavheen tha.
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Jaise wo aane baale tufaan ko bahut achhe tarah se mehsoos karte ho.
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Suraj jungle me sheekar kar rah tha, usse ek safed cheeeta dikha, usne safed cheeta ki sheekar karne ko socha aur uske peechhe ho liya. Cheeta bhi usse apne peechhe bhagate huye jungle ke andar le jaane laga.
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Parantu suraj ek nipun dhanoadar tha. Usne safed cheeta ke jungle ke aur andar jaane ke pahle hi usse maut ki nind me sula diya.
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Uske baad cheeta ki shareer ko apne ghode pe laad kar usse raaj mahal le aaya.
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Jab raajguru me suraj ke gode pe ek mrit safed cheete ko dekha tab unki bhauye sikud gayi. Unhe malum tha ki unke rajya ke junglo me ek bhi safed cheeta nhi hai.
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Raajguru ne apne dhyan ki aankho se cheeta ko dekha tab unhe uss cheeta ke andar ek ichhadhari naag ki chhavi dikhati di. Jo abhi raajguru ko ho gaur se dekh rahi thi, jaise usse malum ho ki raajguru uski vashtavikta jaangaye hai.
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Parantu raajguru beech me nahi aaye.
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Wo apne raajya ke andar praja ki ore chale gaye.
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Suraj uss cheete ko ek sainik ke hatho me de deta hai aur usse bolta hai ki iss safed chheta ki chamdi ko uske kamre me lagaya jaye.
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Suraj ke wapas jaane ke baad sainik uss cheete ko andar buchadkhane me le jata hai jahan aur kinare rakh kar kasayi ko bol deta hai ki iske chamdi ko nikal kar yuvraj ke kachh me pahuncha se.
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Chunki kaayi abhi raja ko koi karta kar rah tha issiliye usne uss cheeta ko baad me chhatne ke liye rakh diya.
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Udhar raajguru apne praja ke paas pahonch kar ek sabhi panchayat se ek sadashya ko unke kutiya me aane ko kahte hai aur wapas apne kutiya chale jate hai.
Kuchh der me sabhi panchayat ke sadasya bhi wahan aajate hai .
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Raajguru sabhi ko saari ghatna bata dete hai, aur ye bhi batate hai ki vidroh karne se bhi koi fayda nhi hogi iss liye filhala jitna jaldi ho sake. Iss rajya ko chhodkar madhya bharat ke junglo me sab bas jaye.
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Raajguru ki baat pe turant amal hota hai aur dekhte dekhte hi saari rajya khali hone lagti hai.
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Iss baat ki khabar raja ko hoti hai, air usse pata chalta hai ki inn sab ki peechhe raajguru hai tab usse bahot gussa aata hai. Aur apne gusse me wo ek aur paap kar baithta hai.
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Raaj guru ko bandi banane ka hukm jaari kar deta hai.
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Raja ke sainik rajguru ki kutir me pahonchte hai aur waha se raajguru ko bandi bana kar rajyasabha me le aate hai.
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Jahan raja raajguru se iss raajdroh ka karan puchhta hai.
Raajguru bolte hai ki..
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" Aye murkh, tune apni krodh aur putra moh me me apne budhhi ko bhrasht kar diya hai. Tumne ek aisi kanya ko bandi banaya hai jo apni putri ki mrityu ke shok me jal rahi hai. Tumne ye jaanne ki koshish bhi nahi ki ki tumhari poti ki maut ka asal karan kon tha. Mai batata hun tumhare poti ki maut ka asal karan aur koi nahi tumhara putra hi tha. Aur ye hi nahi tumhare rajya pe abhi jo sankat ke badal mandara rahe hai na uska karan bhi tumhara hi putra tha. Tumne praja ki seva karke jo punya prapt kiye the in sabhi punyo ko tumhare kukarmi putra ki kukarm ne bharsht kar diya. Lekin uski asliyat naa to tumne pahle dekhi aur na hi aab dekh rahe ho. Ussika ka fal hai ki aaj tumhare rajya me ye din aaye hai.... Are tumhare putra ne to
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Khaaaaaachhhhhh.....
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Abhi raajguru aage kuchh bolte ki unka sar dhad se alag hokar theek unke hi sinhashan ke neeche ja gira.
Raja bhi stabdh ho gaya. Aur fir jaise hi raajbhavan me mauzud saare sadasya rajguru ke sar kaatne baale ko dekhte hai to wo sabhi fir se chaunk jaate hai.
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Wo raajkumar suraj tha.... Uski talvaar se khoon tapak raha tha aur wo apne nathune fula fula kar rajguru ke chhatpatate shareer ko dekh raha tha.
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Rajaaa, bhi hairan tha ki uske bete ne ye kya kar diya. Lekin abhi bhi wo apne bete ko kuchh nahi bola.
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Ussi samay karavash me, somya behal roop se ek taraf janjeero me bandhi huyi padi thi.
Uske baal bikhre huye the, lagatar rote rahne ke karan uske aankh sooj chuke the. Kapde phat chuke the.
Ek taraf diwal se peeth tek kar karavash me mauzud roshandaan ke taraf ek tak dekh rahi thi.
Tabhi ussi roshandan se ek bhayanak naag andar aane laga. Somya ki ankhe bhale hi roshandaan ke taraf thi par uska dhyan kahi aur tha wo tab se to karagar me thi lekin uska man abhi bhi ussi bageeche me tha jaha uski beti varnika ki maut huyi thi.
Yahi vajah thi ki usse jara bhi aabhash nahi hua ki ek naag uske karagar me aachuka hai aur itna hi nahi wo uske just samne kundali maar kar baitha hua hai.
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Tajjub baali baat to ye thi ki somya ki halat ko dekh kar uss naag ke bhi ankho se paani nikalne lage...
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Somya ko apne chetna me lautane ke uddeshya se naag ne usse pukara.
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" Somya.... Putri somya.... Apne hosh me aao putri, samhalo khud ko"
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Achaanak khud ko pukarne ki aawaj sunkar somya ka dhyan tuta aur usne jaise hi apne samne ek vishal naag ko dekha uske rongte khade ho gaye, par usk adar turant gayab bhi hogya. usne turant apne hatho ko jod liya. Aur rote huye bolne lagi....
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" He naag dev, kripya mujhe isa paap ke duniya se mukt kar dijiye, mai ab aur iss paapi samaj me nahi rah sakti, jahan meri fool si bachchi ko uske apne baa ne maar diya. Mai isa kapti aur khokhale samaj me aur nahi jeena chahti naag dev. Kripya aap mujhe iss nark se mukti de dijiye."
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Somya itna bol kar rone lagti hai, ki tabhi karagar ke bahar mauzud sabhi suraksha karmi murchhit ho jaate hai aur karagar me tez raushni ke sath naaglok ke maharaj aur somya ke pita TEJAK wahan prakat huye.
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Somya ne jab ye dekha ki uske samne ek tezbaan purush khade hai to uska sar khud ba khud unke charno me jhuk gaya.
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" Putri, upar dekho putri mai tumhe tumhari Vashtavikta batlane aaya hun yahan, apna sar upar karo putri aur mujhe dekho"
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Somya jab nagraj ki baat sunti hai to apna sar upar utha kar naagraj ko dekhti hai, naagraj somya ko ek mani dete hai, aur bolte hai ki iss mani ko apne lalat pe rakh kar dhyan me baith jao.
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Somya waisa hi karti hai aur kuchh hi palo me uski vashtavikta usse malum chal jaati hai, jaise hi somya apni ankhe kholti hai waise hi wo naagraj ke gale lag ke foot foot kar rone lagti hai aur uske sath yahan jo jo ghritkriya kiya gaya uske bare me ro ro kar batane lagti hai.
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Naagraj somya ki baato ko sunkar usse shant karate hai aur usse bolte hai ki....
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"Putri, mai sab kuchh jaanta hun... Mujhe sab maalum hai... Tumhare sath iss rajya me jo jo ghritkriya kiya gaya hai uska parman ye poora raajya dekhega. "
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Wahin, jab somya ke kabeele me iss baat ki khabar pahunchi ki uski beti ko maharaj ne kaid kar diya hai, to uss kabeele ke sardaar ko bahut gussa aaya, aur wo apne kuchh bahadur sathiyo ke sath chale gaye rajya ki ore, apni beti ko karagar se bhagane ke liye.
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Wahin, jab raajguru apne kutiya me vapas nahi laute to, unke kuchh mahatvapurn shishya ke sath raajmata bhi raajmahal ke taraf nikal gaye...
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Lekin, suraj... Jiska papi man pahle se hi somya ki bahan... Yaani ki kabeele ki sardar ki chhoti beti ko bhogne ke liye tarasta rahta tha. Usse aaj mauka mil gaya.. Usse pata chal gaya tha ki kabeele ka sardar aur uske pramukh log kabeele me nahi hai..
To wo kabeele me ja kar somya ki bahan ko utha kar haveli le kar aane laga....
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Aaj varandesh me kuchh ghatnaye bahut hi samanantar ghat rahi thi...
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Shayad aaj iss rajya ka antim din tha.....
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(Flashback continued)
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. Aaj ke liye itna hi, update bahut lamba ho gya tha issliye maine flash back ko for se likha. Wo bhi short me.
Agar update achhi lage to like kar dena

Nice update and awesome writing skills

 

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Update 44​

Ab tak aapne padha ki, suraj ki ghritkaryo ko jan kar bhi anjan bante huye ek maha partapi raja apni sari gaurav mitti me mila diya, uske pas uska rajya to raha lekin rajya ki sabse pramukh sampatti... Uski praja hi usse chhodkar chali gayi.
Kahte hai na jab kaal sar pe ho to buddhi bhrasht ho jaati hai, yahi haal tha kuch raaja varnvarman ka. Somya ko uske pita naag raaj dwara uski asliyat pata chal chuki thi,
Wahi somya ke kabeele bale pita, apne kuchh bahadur sathiyo ke sath raajmahal ke taraf nikal chuke the, taaki wo apni beti ko aajad kara sake.
Rajmata bhi apne shishyo ke sath nikal chuki thi,
Aur suraj ek aur, apne zeevan ka antim paap karne nikal chuka tha.
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Ab aage...
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"Chalo putri, ab yahan rukne se kya fayda... Hamari sena adrishya roop se iss rajya ke seema pe khadi hai, in sab ko inki kiye ki saza tumhare sabhi naagbhai de denge.. "
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Naag raj apni beti ko uski asliyat bata kar, usee wapas apne lok... Naaglok chalne ko kahte hai. Jise sunkar somya turant apne pita se alg ho jati hai aur garajte huye bolti hai
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"Nahi..... Nahi pita ji..
Meri putri.... Pita ji... Meri putri ki maut mahaz ek hadsa nhi tha...
Wo ek hatya tha...
Pahle mai apni varnika ki maut ka badla lungi pita shree. Mai apne hatho se apni putri ki maut ka badla lungi. "
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Somya ka gusaa, itna prachandkaari tha, ki agar abhi uske paas uski naagkanya ki shaktiya rahti to wo uss shakti ke madhyam se aadhi prithvi ko jala dalti,
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" Putri somya meri baat samjha karo, abhi tumhare paas shaktiya nhi hai , tum kaise mukabla kar paogi unn papiyo ka, ye mat bhoolo ki raja varnvarman ki sena iss dharti ki sabse vishal sena hai, jiske andar ek se ek maharathi hai, unke liye tumhare sabhi bhai saksham hai putri, wo tumhara badla lenge.. "
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Naagraaj ek baar aur samjhane ki uddeshya se somya ke vapas chalne ko kahte hai jis par somya bhadak jaati hai.
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" Nahiiiii...... Mai uss dusht ko apne hatho saza dungi, maut se bhi buri saza. Jise wo apne marne ke baad bhi bhogta rahega...
Aur aap, aap agar chahe to apni sena lekar ja sakte hai, ye mat bhuliye mera dharti pe bhi ek parivaar hai, aur jahan tak mujhe andesha hai wo bhi mujhe yahan se nikalne ke liye aa chuke honge... Mai khud bhi saksham hoon... "
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Somya ne apni garzana aur sankalp se apne pita, naaglok ke maharaz ko bhi dara di. Uske iss roop ko dekh kar aakhir uske pita bhi uski baat maan lete hai, aur bolte hai ki theek hai abb tum bhi hamare sath hi rahna aur apne doshiyo ko saza bhi apne hatho se dena. Filhal yaha se to nikle, aur seema pe chal ke rajya pe aakrman karne ki taiyari karo
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Itna bol naagraj, apni putri ko apne sath lekar antardhyan ho jaate hai, aur pahunchte hai raajya ke seema pe... Jahan naaglok ki ashankhya sainik adrishya roop se yudh ke liye taiyaar the.
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Dopahar ki khadi aur shareer jhulsa dene baali dhoop, bhale hi janglo me pedo se kuchh chhaya mil rahi thi lekin iss tapti dhoop se jo garmi paida ho rahi thi usko sheetal kar pana uss pedo ke liye bhi mushkil tha,
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Kaale labado me kuchh log, chehro me bhi kaali kapdo se mukhauta lagaye... Jhund bana kar kishi shatir aur satark shikari jaise hatho me talvaar aur bhala liye chhup chhup ke ek ore chale ja rhe the...
Unki shankhya kuchh 100 se 150 ke aas pas thi..
Ye koi aur nhi kabeele ke log the jo ki iss baat se anjan ki uski beti kab ki apne asli pita ke sath karagar se nikal chuki hai, ve karagar ke taraf chale ja rahe the...
Chunki karagar ka pichhla hissa jungle ke taraf tha to inn logo ne ye yojna banayi thi ki karagar me pichhe se hi parvesh kiya jaye.
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Lagbhag 1 se 1.5 ghante chalte rahne ke baad, unhe karagar ki unchi deevare dikhayi dene lagi, ab ve log aur bhi sachet ho gaye, kyonki unn divaaro pe bahut saare sainik teer kaman lekar pehra de rahe the. Kuchh sainik neeche bhi the.
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Kabeele ki sardar, apne sabhi sathiyo ke saath ek yojna banate hai, jisme unke kuchh aadmi lagatar dusri ore jaakar kisi na kisi jaanvar ki alag alag aavaj nikalenge... Aur uske fal swaroop unn sipahiyo ka dhyan bhi bhatkega, ...
Ussi ka fayda utha kar sardar apne sath do khash aadmiyo ko lekar karagar ki deevar ke paas pahunch jayega, wahan mauzood sipahiyo ko behosh kar wo deevar chadh kar karagar ke andar jayege ...
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Hota bhi kuchh aisa hi hai, bilkul yojna ke mutavik, deevar pe mauzood sipahi jaise hi jungle ke dusre taraf se alag alag jaanvaro ke chillane ki aawaz sunte hai, waise hi unka sara dhyan udhar hi chala jaata hai, aur waise hi yojna ke anurup sardar apne do sathiyo ke sath karagar ke andar aa jate hai.
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Andar aate ke sath ve teeno chhup chhup kar sabhi kamre me dekhne lagte hai, lekin wahan kahi bhi somya nhi milti, . Wo teeno lagbhag aadhe ghanta tak satarkta se ghoom ghoom kar dhunte rahte hai Kuchh nhi milta unhe, ant me thak kar kisi safe jagah teeno chhup ke baith jaate hai...
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Tabhi unhe kuchh aawaje sunayi deti hai...
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Sardaar, unn awajo ko gor karte hai to unhe pata chalta hai ki ye aawaz iss kaidkhane ke mukhya adhikari ka hai jo shayd apne sainiko pe chilla raha hai.
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Tabhi jahan ye teeno chhupe huye the, wahan do sainik askar khade ho jaate hai aur baat karne lagte hai.
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1st - aakhir hua kya h saab ji ko, itna krodhit maine unhe kabhi nhi dekha.
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2nd -are, tumhe nhi pata kya, khufiya karagah se shayad koyi mukhya kaidi farar ho gaya hai, issiliye saabji itna gusse me hai.
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1 st - mukhya kaidi, aakhir wo uss khufiya kaidkhane se bhaga kaise, wahan mauzud sipahiyo ne nhi dekha kya.
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2nd - wo log kahte hai unhe neend aa gyi thi.
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1st - ajeeb baat hai, aise kaise ho sakta hai..
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2nd -hannn, waise bhi kuchh dino se sab kuchh azeeb hi to ho raha hai varndesh me.
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1st - han hann, ... Chalo ab idhar se kahi saabji dekh liye to hame bhi saza na de den.
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Apni gappe lada kar ve dono chale gaye, aur unhe andaza bhi nahi hua ki unhone anzaane me hi sahi... Lekin sardaar ki madad kar di...
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Sardaar apne sathiyo ko bolte hai ki, ab hame uss khufiya kaidkhane ko dhundna chahiye, ho na ho, hamari bachhi wahin band hogi,
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Sardar ka ek saathi bolta hai ki.. Sardaar, khi hamari somya bitiya hi to nahi yahan se bhaag nikli, ye baat to ham sab jaante hai, somya beti, yudhh kaushal me ham sab se jyada nipunn hai, to... Aap samajh rahe ho na.
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Sardar bolte hai ki... Agar tumhari baat sahi nikli, tab to Mai maatarani ko bhent chadhaunga, lekin fir bhi hame uss kaidkhane tak jaana hi hoga...
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sardaar aur unke sathi uss khufiya kaidkhane ko dhundne lagte hai, aur kuchh mushkilaat ke baad wo kaidkhana bhi inhe mil jata hai,
Ve teeno wahan jaate hai, aur satarkta se chhupte huye, usme apni beti ko dhundne lagte hai...
Leki somya wahan bhi nhi milti hai, haann ek kamre me somya ki saaree ki fati hui aanchal unhe jarur milti hai, jisse apne hatho me rakh sardaar ki ankh bhar aati hai.
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Unke sathi bolte hai, ki Sardar iska matlab hai hamari bitiya bahar nikal chuki hai, ab hame bhi nikalni chaiye.
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Sardaar bhi apni razamandi de deta hai, aur satarkta se uss khufiya karavash se bahar nikalne lagta hai, wo jaise hi uss kaidkhane se bahar nikalne ke liye apna pair aage badhate hai waise hi ek vishal pinzda aakar un teeno pe girta hai, aur we teeno uss pinzde me kaid ho jaate hai.
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Idhar, suraj somya ki bahan, kabeele ki Sardar ki chhoti beti ko uthakar apne ghode pe zabardasti baitha kar haveli ke andar laane lagta hai, usse ikk ladki ke sath zabardadti karte uski maa dekh leti hai, wo daudti huye aati hai aur uss ladki ko pakad leti hai.
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Wo abhi suraj ko kuchh bolne ja hi rahi hoti hai ki suraj, ek kheench ke tamacha apni maa ko marta hai.... Aur bolta hai... Maa ho.. Maa ban ke raho... Mere maamle me tang adane ki koshish mat kiya karo...
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Ye sunkar uski maa ke ankho me aanshoo aajate hai, lekin uska audha kahi se bhi apne bete se kam nahi tha, wo ek maharani thi... Usne turant wahan mauzud sainiko ko suraj ko pakadne ka hukm deti hai, aur usse balpurvak uske pita ke kamre me lejane ko kahti hai.
Suraj, khud ek partapi yodha tha, wo akele 100 - 100 ke barabar tha...
Lekin, pata nhi kyu... Usne khud hi apne aap ko sainiko ke havale kar diya, ya fir ye uski koi nayi chaal thi....
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Wohi, uss ladki yaani ki somya ki bahan ko nishchint rahne ka bol kar , apne daashiyo ke sath usse jaane ko bol deti hai.
Aur khud wapas maharaj ke kamre me jaane lagti hai...
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" Tum sabhi ki ye dussahas ki tumne hamare yuvraaj ko bandi bana liye... Apne Shastra ka nishana hatao yuvraj par se... Nahi to timsab ko aisa saza dunga ki tumhari aage ki saat peedhiya bhi uska pshchatap karegi... "
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Raja ne jaise hi apne bete ko ek bandi jaise sainiko se ghire huye dekha uska khoon khaul utha... Aur apne sainiko pe chillate huye usne ye baat bola, jisse sunte hi saare sainik dar se kaampne lage.
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" Maine isse bandi banaya hai maharaz...! "
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Raani, kamre me aate hiye bolti hai, wahin suraj ek taraf shant khada tha.
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" Ye kya bol rahi ho sarojlata, aakhir kya galti ki hai hamare bete ne jo tum usse bandi banane ka aadesh de diye ho"
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"Hamara beta, ye hamara wo beta nahi raha maharaz jiske liye hamne bhagvan se lakho mannate kiye the, ye ek vahshi darinda ban chuka hai maharaz, aaj maine iss range haatho ikk kanya ke sath zabardasti karte dekha, aur jab mai usse rokne gyi tab..... "
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"Tab kya saroj.... Kya kiya iss dusht ne.... "
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"Tab, isne mujh pe, apni maa pe hath uthaya... Maharaj.... Apni maaa pe...
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Itna bol ke maharani rone lagti hai, aur raja varnvarman ki aaknhe khul jati hai... Uske aankho pe jo dhrishtrashtra vala andhapan chhaya huaa tha wo hatt jaata hai...
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" Neech ladke, tumhari itni zurrat ki tum meri raani pe haath uthaye... Sainiko... Le jao iss neech ko aur daal do kaaaaa............
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Khachaaakkkkkk...........
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Maharaaaajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj.........
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Huaa ye ki jaise ji raja varnvarman ko apne bete ke baare me pata chala usse bhi lagne laga ki uske ke vajah se hi uske rajya ki itni dainiye dasha huyi hogi... Uske bete ne hi uske sabse bade salahkar... Uske raajguru ki bhi hatya kardi thi.. Jinka unke marne ke pahle ki antim salah... Yahi tha ki uska beta hi inn sab ghatnao ka zimmebaar hai...
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Ye sab jaan kar aur samajh kar unhone sainiko ko suraj ko bandi banane ke liye bolne ja rahe the,
Lekin tabhi suraj, do sipahi se uska talvaar chhinta hai, aur raja ke paas pahunch kar raja ke sar ko uske dhad se alag kar deta hai...
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Aur aisa hota dekh... Raani ki cheenkh likal jaati hai.. Aur wo apne pati yaani raaja varnvarman ke tadapte huye shareer ke paas baith kar rone lagti hai..
Saare sainik bhi stabdh ho jaate hai, unke maharaj ki hatya hote dekh wo shant khade kaise rahte , wo sabhi bina apne jaan ki parvaah kiye, suraj pe hamla kar diye, lekin suraj... Un sabhi ki baar ko kaat kar, unn sabhi se yudh karne lagta hai aur ant me sabhi kk maar deta hai.
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Suraj - chu chu chu chu..... Varndesh ke raajaa aur tum..meri maa... Ha ha ha ha...... Akahir kya mila mere kaam ke beech me aakar, lo dekho... Tumharr pati ke shareer ke do tukre uske hi kamre me pade hai... Ab mai hun yahan ka maharaj... Varndesh ka naya maharaj... Suraj varmanam... Hah
Ha ha ha...
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Itna bol suraj taali bajata hai, tabhi waha kuchh sainik aate hai, jo ki suraj ke hi apne log the, suraj apne sainiko me se kuchh ko bolta hai ki raani sarojlata ko kaidkhane me daal diya jaye... Aur kuchh ko bolta hai ki... Uske pita ke sav ko rajyasabha me rakha jaye, aur tatkaal sabha me sabko upasthir hone ko bola jaye...
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. Waisa hi hota hai, sabha me sabko pata chalta hai suraj, apne pita varnvarman ko maar kar ab naya raaja ban chuka hai, jo jo raja varnvarman ke vishvaahi the, unhone vidroh kar diya...
Suraj ne unhe bhi bandi bana liya... Issi beech kaidkhane se kuch sipahi aakar suraj ko batate hai ki somya waha se bhag nikli ... Suraj ne aawesh me uss sipahi ka bhi sar dhad se alag kar diya....
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Issi beech somya ki bahan, kisi tarah bach bacha kar raajmahal se bahar bhag nikli, aur bhagte huye wo wahin ja pahunchi jaha somya apne asli pita naagraaj ke sath hamla karne ke liye bas nikalne hi ja rahi thi.
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Somya ki nazar, jab apni bahan pe jaati hai, aur jaise hi wo uski halat dekhti hai... Usko bechaini hone lagti hai ki kahi uske chhoti se bahan ke sath kuchh anishth na huaa ho...
Yahi vajah thi ki wo turant apni pita ko batati hai ki ye uski bahan hai... Aur naagraaj bhi turant somya aur khud ko visible kar dete hai...
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Somya apni bahan ko aavaj lagati hai..
" Chhoti "
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Somya ki aawaj sun wo ladki somya ke taraf dekhti hai, aur rote huye, uske paas jakar gale lag jaati hai...
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" Didi.... Mujhe bacha lo didi... Jija ji.... Jija ji...mere sath.... "
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Itna bol kar chhoti rone lagti hai, somya ke gusse ka para ek paydaan aur upar ho chuka tha... Usne chhoti ko chup karaya aur usse naagraaj se milaya...
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Somya ka bhai, naagraj ka badabeta." Haryak" ... Somya ke paas akar bolta hai, bahan ab hame aakarman karna chahiye, kahi wo dusht aur bhi masoomo ki zaan na le le.
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Chhoti - nahi didi, aap to teen hi log ho, wo bahut nirdayi hai, unhone apne maa aur pita ji ko bhi maar diya...
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Somya - kya... Usne apni hi mata aur pita ko maar diya... Ab to uska ant nishchit hai chhoti...
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Chhoti - par didi, unki sena bahut badi hai, mama ki naag raj ke paas bahut shaktiya hai lekin, fir bhi unki itni badi sena, sab kuchh tabah kar sakta hai
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Naagraj - sabse pahle tum mujhe naagraj mat kaha karo putri, mai bhi tumhare pita hi hun, aur kisne kaha ki ham apni sena ke satb nahi aaye hai
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Itna bol kar naagraaj, apne haath ko aage kar dete hai, jisse unki ashankhya sena visible ho jaati hai... Jisme kuchh aise aise saanp bhi the, jiski lambaayi saat taad jitni thi, ek pal ke liye chhoti dar ke apni bahan ki baaho me chali gayi...
Uski bahan usse samhalti hai... Aur wo sab nikal jaate hai hamla karne....
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Nice update and awesome writing skills

 

[Chatani]

Update 45
SHRAP
Mega update​

Ab tak aapne padha ki, kabeele ke logo ko suraj ke sainiko ne apne kabze me kar liya tha, wahin somya apne pita ke sath mil kar ab rajya pe hamla karne ko taiyar thi somya ko uski bahan chhoti bhi mil jaati hai, idhar suraj apne pita ko maar kar khud raaja ban jaata hai aur apni maa ko bandi bana leta hai... Uske baad usse pata chalta hai ki somya kaid khane se bhag gayi hai.
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Ab aage...
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Ek andhere kamre me, farsh pe bichhi kaaleen pe baithe suraj apni ankho ko band kar ke dheere dheere koi mantra padh raha tha, uske samne ek asht konakar havan kund jwalit thi, jiske bagal me ek bada sa katora rakha hua tha aur uss katore me tha suraj ke pita ka laal rakt...
Havan kund se nikal rahe dhue me ek azeeb si nakaratamkta thi...
Jis bajah se suraj ke charo ore lal rang ke dhuen jaisa kavach ban raha tha.
Tabhi uss andhere kamre ke andar havan se nikal rahe kaale dhuyen me ek vishal chehra banne laga... Ek dhundla chehra... Jo pure kamre me apne vazood ko darsha raha tha..
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Suraj uss chehre ko dekh kar apna sar jhuka leta hai aur bolta hai...
" Jaisa aapne bataya, maine waisa hi kiya maha maheem, ye rahi mere pita ki rakt... "
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Suraj ki baat sun kar bhi uss dhundle chehre ke facial expressions me koi badlav nahi aata hai, aur wo bas itna hi kahta hai ki..
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" Agar tum apni prabhuta banani chahte ho to tumhe iss rakt ko peena hoga... Wo bhi kul 88 ghoont me... Tumhare shareer me jaise hi iss rakt ke 88 van ghoot jayega, tum waise hi sarv saktimaan ban jaoge... "
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Itna bol kar wo chehra, ek sharp look dete huye gayab ho jata hai...
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Suraj lag jata hai khud ko sarv shaktiman banane ke karya me...
Aur wo pahla ghoon pileta hai...
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Idhar, raajmata aur unke shishya log jaise hi raajya me pahunchte hai waise hi stabdh rah jaate hai, kyonki unke rajya me ek pankshi bhi nazar nahi aarhi thi... Sara razya khali hua pada tha... Unke shishya me se ek bolta hai...
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"Ye kya hua hai nagar ko guru maa, yahan to koi dikhati hi nhi de rha hai... "
Guru maa bolti hai ki wo raazguru ko kal se hi mehshosh nahi kar pa rhe hai... "
Jise sun saare shishya bhi pareshan ho jaate hai, aur sab kahte hai ki hame raajmahal ke taraf chalni chahiye...
Tabhi wahan, kuchh sainik aajate hai,...
Raajmata aur unke shishya ko dekhkar ve sainik wahan aate hai, aur bole hai...
He raajmata, kripya aap yahan se chale jaye, ab iss rajya me paap ka samrajya sthapit ho chuka hai, yuvraaj suraj ne raajguru aur maharas ko maarkar khud satta hashil kar li hai...
Sainik ki baat sun raaz gurumaata ko jhatka lagta hai, lekin wo khud ko mazboot kar apne bheege aankhon ko saaf karte huye bolti hai ki wo kabhi bhi iss razya ko barbaad karne baale ko maaf nhi karegi....
Wo kabhi bhi ek aise shaksh ko maaf nhi karegegi jisne apne maata pita ke pyaar ka aisa fal diya.
Aur apne kamandal se apne haath me pani lekar... Bolti hai...
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" MAI APNE PATI KO SHAKSHI MAAN KAR USS DUSHT YUVRAAJ KO SHRAP DETI HUN KI, USS DUSHT KO KABHI BHI EK BAHAN KA PYAR, EK PITA KA SAYA AUR EK MATA KI MAMTA NASEEB NHI HOGI,
JAB BHI WO KISI KE PREM ME AAYEGA, TAB TAB USKI WO CHAHT HI USKI JAAN LE LEGI..
CHAHE WO KITNE BHI JANM KYUN NA LELE."
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gurumata ne jaise hi shrap diya, waise hi wahan ki zameen hilne lagi... Iska wajah tha naagsena jo apne aap ko visible kar ke poori raftaar ke sath raajmahal pe aakrman karne aarha tha, raaj mata aur unke shishyo ne jab itni badi, vishaal naago ki sena dekhi to dar ke maare unke zabde hilne lage.. Lekin jaise hi unki nazar ek vishal sarp pe baithi somya pe gayi... Waise hi Raajmata samajh gayi ki somya ko zaroor uske naagpita mil gaye honge, darasal raajmata ko somya ke bare me unke pati bata chuke the, ki wo naagvansh ki kanya hai...
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Raajmata apne shishyo ke sath wahan se nikal gaye.
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Raajmahal ke sainiko ne jab apne ore aate itni vishal naago ki sena dekhi, sab dar ke kanpane lage...
Unhone fauran apne raaza ko ye baat batane ke liye unke kamre ki ore daude... Mantri turant apni sabse mazboot aur bahadur sainya saktiyo ko ekatrit hone ka aadesh deta hai, turant hi varndesh ki taraf se bhi dharti ki sabse vishal sena apne apne ashtra aur shashtro ke sath raazmahal ke bahar tashta roke khadi ho gayi...
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Idhar suraj ne bhi apne pita ki rakt ki 87 ghoont pi lya tha, usse apne sainik ke dwra pata chal chuka tha ki uske rajya pe aakraman hone bala hai. Aur aakrmankaari naag hai.
Suraj apne pita ke khoonka antim ghoont pita hai, aur usse peete hi, usko apne shareer me ek aseem urza ki ehshash hone lagti hai, uski ankhe putliyo saheet laal hone lagti hai, uske shareer ki mansh peahiya akadne lagti hai, suruaat me to suraj ko athah peeda hota hai, par kuchh chhano baad, wo sthir ho jaata hai, aur uske chehre pe ek shaitano waali mushkaan aajati hai.
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Raajya ke bahar, naaglok ki laakho sena aakar khadi ho chuki thi, sainiko aur mantrio ne jaise hi somya ko ek naag pe sabar dekha usse samajh aagya ki ho na ho ye sena somya ki madad ke liye hi aayi hai.
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Somya, ek buland aawaj me suraj ko lalkaarti hai, aur bolti hai ki
"agar tum me zara sa bhi marangi hai to mukabla kar... "
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Iske baad dono taraf se yudh ko suru karne ka bigul bajta hai.. Fir
Sainiko aur naago ke beech bheeshan yudh prarambh ho jata hai , chunki naaglok ki sena me bahut vishal vishal naag bhi the, iss liye unki sena varndesh ki sena par bhari pad rahi thi,
Lekin varndesh ki sena me bhi kaafi partapi soorveer bhare the, jo iss ladayi me apna 100 pratishat de rahe the.
Somya bhi apne gusse ko prachandkaari roop dekar, ek talvaar liye varndesh ki sainiko ko berahmi se kaat rahi thi.
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"Ruko..... "
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Tabhi wahan aawaz gunjti hai suraj ki....
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Jab somya aur baaki yodha ki nazar uss taraf jaati hai to wo dekhte hai ki suraj apne kuchh sainiko ke sath iss ore hi badi shanti se chale aarha tha, uske chehre se lag raha tha ki wo befikar hai.
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Uske sath jo sainik the wo kuchh log ko zanzeero me bandh kar ghaseetate huye lekar aarhe the. Jinka muh kaale kapdo se poora dhaka hua tha.
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" Are are, ye mai kya dekh raha hun, somya.... Tum itni bahadur nikli ki tum hamare khufiya karagar se bhi bhag nikli, wah....
Waise ... Mai ye kaise bhool sakta hun ki tum varndesh ke maharaz suraj varnvarman yaaninki meri ki purv ardhangni ho...
Itna sahas aur shakti to tumme hogi hi...
Khair, ye kin zaanvaro ki fauz lekar mujhse mukabla karne aaye ho, aur ye mile kaha se tumhe.... "
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Somya - Murkh, apne aapko mujhse mat joda kar... Aur ye sena jise Tu zaanvaro ki sena kah raha hai na.. Ye tumhari maut ki baarat hai...
Naaglok ki sena hai ye...
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Suraj - uuuhhh... Nhi nhi.... Mujhe mat kuch karna... Mai dar gaya... Mujhe maaf kardo....
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Ha... Ha... Ha... Ha... Ha... Ha... Ha... . Tumhe kya laga in keedo ko dekh kar mai aise hi maafi manguga kya...
Mai hunnn, varndesh ka maharaj... Raaja suraj varnvarman.... Mai sarvshaktimaan hun somya...
Mujhe koi bhi parasht nhi kar sakta hai... "
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Somya - huhh, bhool hai tumhari suraj, bahot badi bhool, ... Khair.. Agar Tu sach me ek sarvshaktimaan mard hai to mardo ki tarah lad na... Yun baate kyu haak raha hai...
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Suraj - somya, somya, somya... Tum kitni bholi ho meri zaan, tumhe kya laga mai ye yudh ka kavach pahan kar yahan bartalap karne aaya hun, are mai to yudh karunga hi meri zaan, lekin mai tumhara purv pati bhi yo hun, issliye tumhe ek aakhiri uphaar bhi to dena hai...
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To dekho....
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Itna bolte hai suraj apne haath ko un bandiyo taraf ishara karta hai, aur sainik kaidiyo ke sar se kaalaa kapda hata deta hai.
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Somya aur naagraaz ke sath surakchhit uski chhoti bahan jaise hi unn kaidiyo ko dekhti hai unke muh se anayash hi nikalta hai...
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"Babaaaaaaaaa........ "
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Kabeele ke log the ye, jinhe shayad itna peeta gaya tha, ki inki khal tak halki halki udhadi huyi nazar aarhi thi. Unke sath unke kabeele ke wo sabhi log the jo jo somya ko chhudane ke liye karagar ke pas junglo me chhupe huye the..
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Suraj - to kaisa laga mera tohfa...
Pasand aaya na, timhare pita ko tumse milane se achha tohfa kya ho sakta hai... Meri zaan...
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Somya ( jiski gusse ki seema paar ho chuki thi) - dusht, aaj mai tumhari wo maut likhungi... Jiski takleef tmhe tumhari ashankhya janmo tak milti rahegi...
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Itna bol kar, somya apne apne talvaar ke handle ko mazbooti se pakadkar... Suraj ki ore usee maarne badhti hai... Par jaise hi wo aage badhti hai... Wahan mausud sainik kabeele ke logo me se ek jan ki garan kaat dete hai...
Jisse dekh somya jahan thi wahi ruk jaati hai...
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Suraj - kya yaar somya... Aisa thode na hota hai...
Are mai manta hun ki mai sarv shaktimaan hun lekin aise hi tumhari poori sena ko nash karna bhala kaha ki nyay hai...
Issliye chalo dwand khelte hai...
Tumhare sena me se jo sabse magarathi hai usse mai yudh karunga... Jo jeeta wo jeeta... Jo hara.. Wo uss agni kund me jakar apna pran tyag dega... Agar yudh me zinda bache to...
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Tabhi somya ko uske pita ki awaz sunayi deti hai... Jo usse shart maanne ko kah rahe the...
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Somya bhi haan kar deti hai... Aur apne taraf se naaglok ki ek bhai ko bhejti hai jo ki bahut pratapi tha..
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Naag aur suraj apne apne talvaar ko lekar ek dusre ke samne saamne aa jate hai...
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Dono me yudh ki suruaat hoti hai..., chuki suraj filhal apni kaali shaktiyo ka prayog nahi kar raha tha, issliye naag uss pe bhari pad raha tha.. Ant aate aate suraj ki haalat badtar ho gayi aur uski talvaar par se pakad bhi kam hone lagi...
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Tabhi achanak se uske aankho ka rang laal ho gaya, aur uska shareer kisi vajra ke saman ho gaya., naag ka agla vaar usne apne sareer pe hone diya...
Aur uske agle hi pal...
Tannnnnnn ki aavaj se naag ki talvaar suraj ki baajuo pe takrate hi toot jaati hai...
Jise dekh wahan mauzud saare log chauk jaate hai...
Par jaise hi un sabki nazar suraj ki aankho pe jaati hai, sabke man me dar vyapt hone lagti hai, yahan tak ki kuchh kuchh naag bhi arne lagte hai...
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Naagraaj, turant apne bade bete aur shomya se man hi man sampark karte hai aur batate hai... Ki unhone suraj ke andar ek bahut hi bahayanak urza ko mehshoos kiya hai... Jo ki unke yaad me iss brahmand me shirf ek hi shaksh ke paas dikha tha... MAHAMAHIM... jo ki shaitan ka upasak tha... Aur betaal lok ka raaja...
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Somya aur uska bada bhai, apne pita ki baat sun kar chaunk jaate hai..
Uske baad wo tay karte hai ki pahle kabeele ke logo ko bachana chahie...
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Somya ka bada bhai... Adrishya hokar... Kabeele ke logo ki taraf jaata hai... Aur suraj ke sath yudh karne naag ka ek aur yodha...
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Parantu suraj ka sence bahut jyada badh gaya tha... Wo somya ke bade naag bhai ko adrishya roop me bhi dekh liya... Aur usne apne haath se ek teez bizli ki jhatke baali kiran uske taraf chhoda, lekin naag yuvraaj ki shaktiya bhi kahi se kam nahi thi, usne turant uss bijli ko nishkriy kar diya, aur apne ek haath se samne mauzud sabhi shikariyi ko muchhit kar un kabeele baalo ko lekar waha se gayab ho gaya...
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Suraj ye dekh kar gusse me aag babula ho gaya aur somya se bola....
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Ab bahut huaa jaan., ab zara mai bhi to apni shaktiyo ko aazma lunn...
Itna bol suraj apna ek haath upar karta hai... Aur kuchh mantra padhta hai.. Uske aisa karte hi uske hatho me ek lambi si kaali talvaar aajati hai... Aur jaise hi wo apni aankhe kholta hai...
Uska aankh fir se laal ho jata hai...
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Suraj ek shaitani hasi haste huye yudh suru karne ka aawahan deta hai....
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Kuchh hi palo me suraj tezi se bizli ki gatibse daudte huye naagsena ke beech pahunch jata hai... Aur fir apna kahat unpar dhane lagta hai...
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Har gujarte pal ke sath... Naagsena me hazaro naag maut ki nind sore jaarhe the, koi bhi suraj ke aage tik nahi pa rha tha, apni sena ka ye haal dekh naagraaj... Suraj ke saame prakat hote hai... Aur usse yudh ke liye lalkarte hai...
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Naagraaj aur suraj ke beech ek bheeshan yudh hota hai...
Tab tak idhar somya apne shaktishali bhaiyo ke sath milkar , bhi varndesh ki lagbhag aadhi sena ko samaapt kar deti hai...
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Naagraj ki shaktiya bhale hi suraj se jyada thi, lekin chunki naagraj ek safed shakti ka pratik the, to unke andar ki shakti bhi bas linited hi thi, lekinsiraj jaise jaise yudh kar raha tha waise waise uski shaktiya badhte hi jaa rhi thi...
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Somya jab apne pita ko haarte huye dekhti hai, to wo apne talwaar kolekar... Suraj ke samne chali jaati hai... Parantu suraj ab pura shaitan ban chuka tha... Usne somya ko nazar andaaz karte huye... Usse ek haath se shirf matra jhatka jiske falswaroop somya lagbhag 50 ft door jakar giri...
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Suraj ne naagraaj ko marna apna uddeshya bana liya tha...
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Somya ko samajh nhi aarha tha ki wo ab kya kare....
Iss vaqt agar koi usse rashta dikha sakta the wo shirf raajguru hi the, jo ab zivit nhi the.
Tabhi somya ko guru mata ki yaad aati hai...
Aur wo abhi jahan jakar giri thi wahin baith kar gurumata ko yaad karne lagti hai.
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Guru mata bhi shayad issi pal ka intezar kar rahi thi.
Somya guru mata se antarman me jud kar suraj ko rokne aur usse khatm karne ka upay mangti hai...
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Raazmata batate hai ki ,
" Putri, jahan tak mai dekh pa rhi hun, suraj ke upar betal lok ke raza mahamaheem ka hath hai, aur betal lok ke logo ke dwara bola gaya kathan uske liye brahm lakeer hoti hai,
Suraj ne bola hai ki agni kund me jo jayega... Samjho wo haar gaya... Aur usse uss aag me jal kar marna hi hoga... Tumhe kisi tarah suraj ko agni kund ke paas lana hoga... Uske baad tumhe suraj ko al e sath lekar agni kund me kud jana hoga... Tumhe balidaan dena hoga putri....
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Somya gutuma ki baat samajh jaati hai, wo ek nazar fir se apne bhaiyo aur apni bahan ko dekhti hai, fir wo suraj aur apne pita ko yudh karte dekhti hai... Aur ek agni kund ke nazdeek jakar khada ho kar. Ek buland aawaj me bolti hai...
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" Aye napunshak, ek jakhmi pe vaar kar ke khud ko maharathi samajhta hai tu.... Are thi hai tum jaise yodhao pe... Agar yudh hi ladna hai to mujhse lado... Nahi to ghar jakar chudiya pehan lo..."
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Suraj ka gussa, somya ki baat sun kar aur bhi badh gaya... Wo gusse me bolta hai...
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" Apni hadd paar kar di hai tune ladki... Ab yu mera krodh jhel sakti hai to jhel... Lekin pahle issee to khatm kar dunnn... "
Khachhaaaakkk.....
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Pitaaaaaajeeeeeeeee......
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Suraj apni baat pura karne ke sath, naagraaj ka sar apni kaali shakti se bani talvaar se kaat deta hai, jisse naagraaj ki wahi maut ho jaati hai.
Aur somya ke sath sath sabhi naagputro ki bhi cheenkh nikal jaati hai...
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Suraj jaise hi somya ke muh se naagraj ke liye pitaji sunta hai wo chaunk jaata hai...
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"Pitaajee...., ye kab huaa.... Iska arth hai tum naaglok ki raajkumari ho.... Waahhhh..... Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Tabhi sochu tumhari madad karne naaglok ki sena kyun aayi hai... Ab pata chala kyun aayi hai... Hi hi hi.... Ab to timhare bhaiyo ko bhi marna padega... "
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Suraj , somya ke taraf na badhkar uske bhaiyo ke taraf jaane lagta hai,
Parantu yahan kuchh aur bhi azeeb cheej hota hai, naagraaj ko pahle hi aabhash ho gaya tha ki ab unka ant samay aachuka hai, issliye unhone ant samay me hi somya ki naakanya aur raajkumari ki shaktiyo ke sath sath... Alni shaktiya bhi usse de diye the... Aur aisa hote hi... Somya ki poora shareee neela ho gya... Usse bhi samajh aagya ki ye uski shaktiyo ka hi prabhav hai, jo uske pita jaate jaate usse degaye... Aur chuki abhi wo apne krodh ki seema se bahut aage aagayi thi, issliye usne bina jyada kuchh soche.. Suraj pe hamla kar diya...
Suraj sachet tha, jaise hi somya ka talvaar uski gardan ke peeche lagne bala tha, waise hi suraj palat jar uss prahar ko block kar deta hai, lekin somya ka vaar itna khatrnak tha ki suraj udta hua door ja girtha hai, uski talvaar me bhi dent aajati hai...
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Suraj bhi bina jyada react kiye somya pe vaar karta hai, par ab uske samne somya ka sabse khatarnaak roop tha...
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Bahut der tak yudh karne ke baad bhi naa to suraj ,somya ko ghutno pe laa paaya tha aur naa hi somya, suraj ko...
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Somya ko guru ma ki baat yaad aati hai, aur wo suraj ko yudh karte huye agni kund ke paas le aati hai,
Suraj ko bhank bhi nahi laga tha ki uske sath aage kya hone baaalaaa hai...
Jaise hi suraj aur somya agni kund ke paas pahunchti hai.... Somya apna roop badal kara ek naagin ka roop le leti hai aur suraj ke shareer ko bandh kar uss agni me kood jaati hai, somya ki shakti aur krodh itna adhik tha, ki suraj chah kar bhi khud ko somya ke naagpaash se chhuda nhi paya aur agni kund me jalne laga...
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Jal to somya bhi rahi thi.... Par jo takleef suraj ko ho raha tha wo somya ko nahi....
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Suraj, marte marte bolta hai...
Aakhir .. Haar hi gayi na tum somya... Aaj mere sath tum bhi mar arhi ho...
Par mai purn nahi hunn.... Jaanti ho mere guru mahamahim ne mujhe bataya hai ki mere paas mere aatma ka bas ek chauthayi hissa hi hai... Ye mera purn janm nhi hai...
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Par ye tumhara purn janm tha, purn aatma ke sath... Iska tatpray hai ki mai abhi mara nhi hun... Ha ha ha ha... Mera shareee aur usme mauzud ek chauthayi aatma ka hissa hi to door huaa hai...
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Somya, ke samne jisprakar suraj ne ye baat kahi, isse sun kar somya ko aur bhi krodh aata hai... Wo fir se jalte huye hi apna roop baalti hai. Aur iss baar wo ek aadhi kanya aur aadha naag ka roop le leti hai....
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Gusse me nathune phoolate huye wo bolti hai...
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" AYE DUSHT, MAI NAAGLOK KI RAAJKUMARI, APNE PITA AUR APNE BHAIYO KI PRAN LEKAR YE PRATIGYA LETI HUNN... KI JAB JAB TUMHARA JANM HOGA... TAB TAB MAI MAI TUMHARA WO SHRAP BANKAR JANM LUNGI... JO TUMHARI USS ZINDAGI KO HI KHATM KAR DEGI...
CHAHE TUM ANANT ZANM HI KYUN NA LE LO.... "
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"Naheeeee, tum aisa nhi kar sakteeeeeeee...... "
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somya ke muh se aisi pratigya sun kar suraj ek cheekh ke sath bhashm ho jata hai... Aur uske kuchh der baad somya bhi wahin bhashm ho jaati hai...
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Uske baad sab shant jo jata hai...
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Varndesh ke baaki sainik aatmsamarpan kar dete hai...
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Kabeele ke logo ke sath naagraj ka bada beta waha aata hai, aur apne chhote bhaiyo ke dwara wahan jo bhi hua wo sab sunta hai... Usske aakho se aanshu nikalne lagti hai...
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Tabhi wahan guru maa aati hai aur naagraaj ke bade bete ke sar pe apna hath rakhte huye bolti hai.
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"Putra, udaash mat ho, inka janm hi iss kary ko karne ke liye hua hai, jante ho aaj jo kuchh bhi hua hai.. Wo matra pratham prisht hai uss katha ka... Jiska ant swaym parbrahm karenge.... Tum adhir mat ho... Tumhare pita aur tumhari bahan ne apna kaam kar liya ab tumhari baari "
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" Aagya dijiye gurumaa"
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"Putra, jante ho yuvraaj suraj ka jo purn aatma hai wo devkalyaan aur janmkayan ke liye janm lene bala hai, chunki us aatma ka pahla ansh kaam, krodh, irshya, nafrat, lalach, aur baaki sabhi bolri chizo ka vahak tha , issliye wo iss janam me aisa tha...
Iski aatma tab tak bhatakti rahegi jab tak uska koi dharak nahi mil jata, aur agar wo aatma kisi galat ke hath lag gaya tab bhavishya me aur bhi pareshaniya janm lengi...
Tumhe iss aatma ko apne yahan kaid kar ke rakhna hoga, jab tak usska dharak usse lene nahi aajata...."
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"Jo agya guru maa"
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Itna bol kar naag yuvraaj, suraj ki aatma ko kaid kar apni sena ke sath wapas jaane lagte hai. Tabhi guru maa bolti hai...
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" Aur apni bahan ke baare me zyada mat sochna putra, jis din iss aatma ka dharak aayega, uss din tumhari bahan bhi laut aayegi... "
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Guruma ki baat sun naagyuvraaj khush ho jaate hai, aur fir wo sab vapas naaglok chale jaate hai,... Kabeele baale bhi guru maa se aashirvaad lekar vapas apne kabeele chale jaate hai....
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(FLASH BACK ENDS - pahle janm ki poori jaankari)
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Surajdev aur sharda devi ji issi shrap ki baat kar rahe the, aur aaj sharda devi bhi issi baat pe charcha karne aaye the, darasl suraj pratap ji ne bataya tha, ki agar kabhi bhi kishan ki aankho ki rang me laal rang ka mishran dikhayi de, aur jis waqt wo dikhe uss waqt uske aaspash bijli aniyanttit hote pratit ho to samajh lena ki, uska shrap janm le chuka hai jk usse aaj se 2600 varsh pahle laga tha...
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Nice update and awesome writing skills