Thriller DARD

[HAKIM]

UPDATE - 2


Khuch din bad dadaji ne pandit ji ko aane ka nyota diya namkaran ke liye. Sab kuch hasi khushi chal rha tha par meri zindagi ka kala din bhi aagya jab se mera aur "DARD" ka nata jud gya..........

Ab aage..

2 din baad pandit ji ko naam karan ke liye bulaya gya. Us din hamare ghar ko dulhan ki tarah rajaya gya tha. Achcha hamara ghar banglore se thoda bahar sabse shant aur posh area me hai. hamare ghar ko ghar kahana galat hoga kyuki ye to pura bangla tha. 3 floor ka tha niche hall, kitchen, aur dining room tha. Uper mummy papa , chachi chachi aur didi ka kamra tha uske bagal me dadaji ka kamra tha. Baaki kamre band the jab koi rishtedaar ata to unke liye khulwa diya jata.




Chalo ab story pe ate hai..

To pandit ji bhi aagye phir puja shuru hui phir wo bole.
Pandit: Mata Pita apne bacche ke sath puja me bethe.
Mom dad puja me baith gye mom ki god me mai soya tha phir jaisa jaisa pandit bolta gya waise waise mom dad karte gye. Jab pandit me hawan me aahuti dene ko kaha, jaise hi papa ne aahuti di achanak aag ki lapte bhadak gyi. Jise dekh pandit ji chouk gye aur bole.
Pandit: ye thik nhi hua ye kisi anishth ka sanket hai.
Dad: aree panditji aap kuch jada hi soch rahe hai.
Dad ne iss chiz ko nazar andaz kiya kyuki wo insab chizo vishwas nhi rakhte the par maa ke chehre pe pareshani ki lakire zaroor thi par unhone kuch zahir nhi kiya itne logo ke samne Aakhir mere gharwalo ke rutube ka sawal tha jise wo log kisi bhi insan se upar rakhte the chahe wo mai hi kyu na hu. To puja phir khatam hui phir pandit ji ne mujhe god me liya aur dekhne lage tab meri aakhe bad thi par jaise hi pandit ne mere hath ko chua mai aakhen khol use dekhne lga unhe aashcharya hua par badme mujhe maa ki god me dekar wo kundali banane lage. Wo jaise jaise kundali bana rhe the waise waise unki aakhen badi hoti ja rhi thi aur maathe per chinta ki lakire badh rhi thi. Kuch der bad wo maa se bole.

Pandit : putri balak ka janm sthan aur samay batao.
Mom: pandit ji mere bete ka janm isi sheher ke sabse bde hospital me raat ke thik 12 baje hua hai.
Pandit: ye thik nhi hua bachche ka jamn subh samay ke viprit samay par hua hai. Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mom ne bas itna suna aur pandit ko paise dekar bahar nikal diya. Unke hisab se agar ye baat kisiko pta chalti to unka naam kharab ho jata.
Dad ne is baat ko itna serious nhi liya. Unke liye itna hi kafi tha ki unhone ek waris de diya baki unko mujhe se zaada matlab nhi tha wo business ko hi apna sab kuch mante the.
Par dadaji mujh par jaan chidakte the tab us samay maa ko bhi mujh se lagav tha par meri janm kundali wali baat unhe kahi na kahi khatakti thi.

Khair 2 saal aaise hi nikal gaye. Is beech choti moti baate kahe ya durghatna hoti rahi jo sab nazar andaz kar dete par chachi hamesha mujhe manhus kah kar sab mere uper dal deti. ab mai 2 sal ka tha aur janvi didi 3 saal ki thi hum sath khelte par mere aajane se unhe pyaar thoda kam milta toh wo mujh par gussa utar diya karti ( ab aap bachcho ko to jante hi hai kaise hote hai) mom phir se pregnant thi. Kuch hi din me hamare ghar meri pyari princess Swara aayi mere bachpan ka khilona bankar. Mai khud to bachcha tha par iska khayal mai khud rakhne ki koshish karta. Ab papa bhi ghar aur hum par dhayan dene lage the. Chachi ka ravayaiya abhi bhi vaisa hi tha. Dada ji bhi khush the bhara pura pariwar dekh kar.

Aise hi kuch mahine bit gaye. Mai to apni princess me hi magan rehta. Didi ko bhi ab maa papa ka pyaar barabar mil rha tha phir bhi hamari zyada nhi banti this.

Aaj sunday tha dad bhi aaj ghar pe the. Sab kahana kha rahe the tabhi dad ka pgone baja.

Dad: hello
Samne se : ....................
Dad : kya baat kar rhe ho.
Samne se : ....................
Dad: aisa nhi ho skta.
Samne se : ....................
Dad : nhiii.........
Isi le sath dad ne phone diwar par phek mara aur sar pakad kar baith gye. Jisse dekh kar mom, chacha aur dadaji ghabra gye. Mom ne phucha.

Mom: kya hua aap aise kyu sar pakad rkha hai. ?
Dad : sab barbad ho gya.
Mom: kya hua hai bataiye.
Dad : jewelry ke showroom me aag lag gyi hai.
(dadaji, mom, chacha, chachi ek sath): kya?
Mom ne dad ko paani diya aur boli.
Mom: shaant ho jaiye. Sab thik ho jaiga.
(Itne me chachi bhi bol uthi wo kaha piche rehne wali thi. )
Chachi : Ab khuch this nhi hoga sab iss manhus ki wajah se hua hai.
Dadaji : (gusse me) bahu apni zuban sambhal kar.
Chachi : aaj nhi babuji ab paani sar se upar nikal chuka hai.
Dad: aaj pehli baar mujhe kamya ki baat sach lag rhi hai jab se aya hai nuksaan ho rga hai.
Mom: aaj to mujhe bhi iss baat par yakin jo gya ki ye manhus hai.

Ye bolkar mom ne mere pass se meri princess Swara ko utha liye aur use room me le gyi. mai rone laga par kisine dhyaan nhi diya.
Dadaji mhuje gle laga kar mera sar sehlane lage aur bole.
Dadaji : koi kuch bhi bole par mujhe pta hai ki mera pota mahus nhi hai balki ek acha aur sachcha bachcha hai.
Dadaji mujhe god me liye aise hi selhlate rhe jab tak mai so nhi gya. Aur mujhe bed per lita diya.



Aaage dekhte hai kya hota hai........

nice update with awesome writing skills

 

[Itz Anjum]

nice start ,

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[Itz Anjum]

nice update with awesome writing skills

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[Itz Anjum]

nice update with awesome writing skills

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[Itz Anjum]

UPDATE - 7​

Mai ye sun raha tha meri aakh me aasoon the oar maine unhe rok liya kyuki kasam khai thi. Mai bhi sochne laga kal dekh hi leta hu ki ye log kitna niche gir sakte hai..

Abb ageee............

Mai waha se apne room me aa gya aur soch raha tha ki pichle janam me maine aise kaunse paap kiye jo aise maa baap mile hai .
Phir socha aaj saimaa maa aur Swara se jee bhar kar baat kar leta hu pata nhi kal ke baad rahu na rahu kyuki mujhe yakin hai ki kal wo log mujhe zeher khila hi denge. Phir mai utha aur saima maa ke pass chala gya aur jate hi unhe gale laga liya. Wo iss tarah achanak aate hi mere gale laga ne se chintit ho gyi aur pucha
Saima maa : kya hua beta. Kisine kuch kaha kya.
Mai : nhi maa.
Saima maa : phir aaise kyu gala laga hai
Mai : lag lene do maa kal kisne dekha hai kya pata hum rahe na rahe.
Saimaa maa : pagal kuch bhi bolta hai bhagwan kare tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye.
Mai chup ho gya phir thodi der unse baat karke Swara ke room me chala gya.
Mai waha pocha aur darwaja khat khataya. Unsne darwaja khola aur mujhe dekh ke boli
Swara : aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai jo raja ji iss garib ke yaha padhare.
Mai : aree rani sahiba hum to aapke gulam hai aur aap aisi baate kar rhi hai.
Swara : anadar ayenge yaa darwaje par hi baat karenge.
Phir mai andar aa gya aur niche jamin pe baith gaya.
Swara : aree niche kyu baith gye
Mai : wo mujhe sofe pe ya bed pe baith ne ki adat nhi hai iss liye .
Ye sunke wo udas ho gayi par agle hi pal meri god me aake baith gayi
Mai : arree mere godh me kyu bith gayi
Swara : (ghur ke) meri marji .
Mai : achcha , mujh se promise kar mai tere pass rahu na rahu par tu aise hi khush rahegi.

Ye sunke use gussa aur aakhn me pani aa gya . Wo mera collar pakad kar mera muh apne paas le aayi aur meri aakhon me dekhte hue boli.
Swara : ye apne bola bhi kaise ki mai apke bina khush rahu. Jis din aap na rahe samaj lena ki maine bhi apna nata iss jindagi se tod liya.
Mai usse dur hua aur mahol halka karne ke liye bola.
Mai : kuch bhi bolti hai. Mujhe to dar lagta hai ke lahi to physco to nhi ho gyi.
Swara : aapne mujhe physco kaha

Aise hi kuch der halki fhulki baate hui phir mai apne kamre me aake let gaya aur kal ke baare me sochne laga. Kush tha agar kal mar gaya to kamse kam 2 log to yaad karenge hi.
Aise hi nind aagyi. Sabere utha to dekha ghar me sab taiyari kar rahe the aur aaj saima maa bhi nhi aayi thi. Mai naha do ke taiyaar ho gaya or bahar aa gya . Mujhe Swara dikhai nhi di wo dost ke yaha gyi thi.

Mai abhi bahar aya hi tha ki aaj pehli baar maa (shikha Rajput) ne mujhe awaj di.

Mom : Reyansh..
Mai : ji kahiye kya kaam hai
Mom : hum sab bahar ja rahe hai hamare jane se pehle ye khir kha lo..
(mai man me : chalo kuch bura hi sochkar aapne naam to liya mera)
Mai jaan gaya tha ki is khir me jahar milaya gaya hai phir bhi maine keh diya
Mai : thik hai

Mom waha se jaa hi rahi thi ki mai bola.
Mai : kya pehla niwala aap khila dengi.
Mom ke muh se koi shabd nhi nikal rahe the wo waha se apne room me chali gyi chachi bhi unke piche ho li.

In room

Chachi : kya hua bhabhi usne khir khayi ya nhi?
Mom : wo chahta hai ki mai use apne hath se khir hilau.
Chachi : to khila dijiye na konsi badi baat hai.
Mom: nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga mai apne haath se use zeher nhi de sakti
Chachi : agar aapne aisaa nhi kiya to plan fail ho jayega aur bhaisahab aap pe hi gussa honge.
Mom kuch nhi boli aur mere paas aakar chair pe baith gayi aur boli.
Mom : chola mai khila deti hu.
Mai : ji.
Mom ne khir se bhara chamach apne kapte hue hath se uthaya aur mujhe khilane lagi.
Mere aakhon me nami aa gyi kyuki aaj pehli baa mom mujhe apne hath se khila rahi thi zeher hi sahi par khila rahi thi. Mai ne asoon ko chalakne nhi diya aur khir khatam kar di phir sab jaldi se kahi bahar chale gaye.

Mai chupchap dadaji ke khursi ke paas jakar baith gaya aur ab apni maut ka intajar karne laga. Mujhe khushi thi kamse kam abb iss narak se azadi milegi aur mai apne dadaji se mil sakunga.
Thodi der baad mujhe pet me dard hone laga aur aakhon ke saamne andhera chane laga mai wahi zamin pe gir gaya mere muh se jhaag aane laga.
Tabhi Swara jo abhi dost ke yaha se lauti thi abhi upar apne room me hi jaa rhi thi uski najar mujhpe padi. Wo daudte hue mere paas aayi aur boli.
Swara : bhaiya kya ho gya aapko uthiye.... Uthiye na
Mai uth nhi rha tha ye dekh kar wo dar gyi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Achanak use kuch dhayan aya aur usne meri saans check ki saans abhi bhi chal rahi thi.
Usne jaldi se ambulance ko phone kiya. Thodi der me ambulance aagyi aur usme mujhe le jaya gaya sawara bhi sath hi aayi . raste bhar wo roye ja rahi thi aur bhagwaan se dua maang rhi thi ki mai bach jau.
Swara : aap mujhe chod ke nhi jaa sakte....
Aur rone lagi. Phir mujhe operation theater me le jaya gaya. 2 ghante ke baad doctor aaye aur bole
Doctor : shukr hai aap inhe sahi time pe le aaye nhi to ye bach nhi pate kyuki inhe bohot poisonous zeher diya gya tha.
Swara ye sunkar shock ho gyi phir boli
Swara mai kabtak unse mil sakti hu.
Doctor : Aap unse 2 ghate me mil sakti hai .
Swara : thank you Doctor so much.
Doctor : koi baat nhi ye to hamara kaam hai par inhe poison diya kaise gaya aur kisne diya.
Swara : pata nhi doctor
Swara ne bhi iss baat per abhi dhyaan nhi diaya tha phir wo kuch sochne lagi...

Dekhte hai aage kya hota haiii......

 

[Itz Anjum]

mast update

Thanks Veer Jiiiii

 

[ramnjit09]

very nice update

 

[R kami]

Nice update bro keep it up bro waiting for the next updates bro

 

[Itz Anjum]

very nice update

Thanks veer ji

 

[Itz Anjum]

Nice update bro keep it up bro waiting for the next updates bro

Zroooor veer ji