Incest Aashiqui 2 ( A Saga of Thriller, Hate, Love, Romance, Friendship, Betrayel and Revenge )continue

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Aur usey ghar drop karne nikal jata hai .. Aur gadi siddha shaheer k ghar k gate pe khadi karta hai .. Fareeha apni shoping bags le k bahar athi hai gadi se .. aur andar jane lagti hai .. tabhi uski nazar chat pe khade shaheer pe padhti hai .. Jo kabhi usey dekhta to kabhi gadi ko dekh raha tha .. Owais shaheer ko nahi dekhta who fareeha ko bye bol k gadi mein bethta hai aur nikal leta hai ...
Fareeha andar aati hai .. Usey nahi pata tha k shaheer kaise react karega .. Fareeha jab tak hall mein pohonchti hai shaheer bhi chat se neeche aata hai .. Shaheer siddha fareeha se poochta hai


Shaheer :- Kaha the tum itni der se ? Aur ye sab kya hai tumhare haath mein ? aur who ladka kon tha ?

Fareeha :- Shoping pe gayi thi .. Who mera office friend hai owais ..

Fareeha ye keh k jaane lagti hai .. Magar peeche se shaheer ki awaz uske kaanon mein padhti hai

Shaheer :- Office friend hai to kya sara din uske sath gulchanne udaaoge .. Aaj k baad agar mein ne tumhein kisi ladke k sath dekha to dekh lena kya hasher karta hu uska .. Kal hi nikaalta hu mein usey office se ..

Ye sun k fareeha peeche murhti hai .. Usey andaza nahi tha k shaheer aise react karega .. Aur shaheer ka yu uspe haq jatana usey acha nahi laga .. Isliye usne ghusse mein shaheer se kaha
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Fareeha :- Tum hote kon ho mujhpe haq chalane wale haan .. Mein job hi karu meri marzi , meri zindagi .. Tum hote kon ho mere faisle lene wale .. Agar mein kisi ladke k sath ghoomu ya dosti karu .. to tumhein kya isse .. tumhari biwi nahi hu behn hu who bhi sauteli .. to bhai banke raho who bhi sautele shauhar banne ki koshish mat karo .. Ayindah mujh pe haq chalaya to sochungi nahi k tum bhai ho mere who bhi sautele .. Aur rahi baat owais ko nikalne ki .. to sochna bhi mat .. agar usey nikal diya to khud hi sambhalna uske baad baba ka buiseness ..

Ye keh k fareeha waha se nikal gayi thi .. magar shaheer upper se neeche tak hil chukka tha .. Fareeha ka jawab sun k .. Shaheer ko khud samajh nahi aa raha tha .. k usey fareeha ko kisi aur ladke k sath dekh kar kyu acha nahi laga .. Kyu usne uske life mein interfere kiya .. Thoda jo fareeha aur shaheer ka relation theek hua tha .. Aaj who Fareeha k in kadwe alfaz k sath wapas toot chuki thi .. Fareeha ka shaheer ko bewda kehna ya kuch aur kehna .. kabhi shaheer ko bura nahi laga tha .. magar aaj uske alfaz shaheer k dil ko cheer gaye the .. Shaheer uspe haq jata raha tha apni behn samajh kar ya shayad kuch aur ..

Aise halat mein shaheer k dil ko aur tootne se jo rok sakta tha .. who tha sharaab .. Shaheer fridge se aik bottle nikalta hai .. aur sath hi glass le k chat pe chala jata hai .. Aur fareeha k bare mein sochte hue peene lagta hai .. Fareeha k kahe alfaz baar baar uske kaanon mein goonj rahe the ..

Dusri taraf fareeha waha se sidha apne room mein jaati hai... aur washroom mein jaa ke fresh ho ke bahar aati hai .. aur sochne lagti hai .. k kya jo usne kiya who sahi tha .. Phir uske andar se jawab ata hai k bilkul sahi tha .. shaheer ko is tarah uspe haq nahi jatana chahiye tha .. Kahi na kahi fareeha khud bhi pachta rahi thi ..

Usne jo kuch bhi bola tha ghusse mein bola tha .. Magar who is bar sorry karne k liye tayar nahi thi .. usne bhi zid pakadh liya tha k jab tak shaheer khud sorry na bolega .. who usse baat nahi karegi .. kyunke isme shaheer ki bhi ghalti thi .. Fareeha dinner k tym tak aise hi apne room mein rahi .. Jab dinner k waqt shaheer ne usey nahi bulaya to bahar ayi .. aur kitchen mein gayi to dekhti hai .. uske liye dinner hotpot mein rakha hai shaheer ne .. aur khud kha chukka hai aur bartan saf kar ke sink mein rakh chukka tha ..

Fareeha ko acha nahi lagta akele khana .. magar apne ego ki wajah se akele hi khati hai Fareeha khana khane k baad shaheer k room mein jhankti hai .. magar shaheer waha nahi hota .. who samajh jati hai k chat pe pee raha hoga .. Yehi soch k fareeha uske room mein beth jati hai .. aur PS4 on kar ke game khelne lagti hai .. Who bed pe beth k khel rahi thi ..
Khelte khelte hi neend ati hai .. to wahi shaheer k bed pe so jati hai ..


Shaheer der raat tak chhhat pe sharab peeta hai .. aur phir jab neeche aa k apne room mein fareeha ko soya dekhta hai .. to ghusse se aik chadar le k bahar ata hai .. aur hall mein aa ke sofe pe so jata hai .. Subah pehle fareeha uthti hai .. aur jab khud ko shaheer k kamre mein paati hai .. to pehle thoda hairaan hoti hai .. magar phir usey yaad ati hai .. k who raat ko yehi so gayi thi... phir sochti hai k shaheer kaha soya phir raat bhar .. yehi soch k who room se bahar aati hai to shaheer ko hall mein sofe pe soya pati hai ..

Ye dekh k usey boht bura lagta hia … Who sochti hai k kal shaheer ko uske hath ka brakefast pasand aya tha .. aur shaheer ne bhi kaha tha k aaj se wohi banayegi brakefast .. Fareeha fresh hone k baad kitchen mein brakefast banane lagti hai .. Shaheer jab jaagta hai to usey pata chal jata hai .. k fareeha kitchen mein brakefast bana rahi hai ..

Shaheer ka sar dard kar raha tha .. raat ko boht ziada piya tha isliye .. Shaheer fridge se nimbu pani nikalta hai .. jo who pehle se hi bana k waha rakha tha .. Fareeha usko jaagta dekh kar uske liye brakfefast banana lagti hai .. aur banana k baad jab table pe lane lagti hai .. To dekhti hai k shaheer phone pe apne liye brakefast order kar raha hai .. Ye dekh k fareeha ko aur bhi guilt feel hota hai .. Naraz hai to kya hua uske hath ka khana bhi nahi kha raha tha shaheer .. IS baat ka usey boht dukh hoti hai ..

Fareeha brakefast kar ke nikal jati hai office k liye .. Uske nikalte hi shaheer ka brakefast bhi aa jata hai .. Shaheer brakefast karte hue phone nikalta hai .. aur call karta hai kisi ko ....

Shaheer :- Hello ! Sarkash mere office mein aik ladka kaam karta hai .. Owais uske bare mein pata kar ke batao k who hai kon aur kaisa ladka hai ..

Sarkash :- Ok mein kar ke msg karta hu tumhein ..

Shaheer phone kaatta hai .. aur phir se sharab ka daur shuru karta hai ..

Dusri taraf fareeha ka mood aaj boht off tha .. Who sidha apne cabin mein jaati hai .. aur apne kaam mein lag jati hai .. Dopeher ko owais phir aata hai .. aur beth k kehta hai

Owais :- Kya hua madam g kya baat hai mood off lag raha hai ...

Fareeha :- Kuch nahi yar shaheer k sath jhagda ho gaya kal .. Owais :- Kyu ? Shaheer wahi na tumhara step bro ..

Fareeha :- Haan wahi yar .. Kal tumhare sath dekh k bakheda khada kar diya usne .. Bolta hai k ayinda ksi ladke k sath na dekhu tumhein .. aur keh raha tha k tumhein bhi who naukri se nikal dega ..

Owais :- To tum ne kya kaha ?

Fareeha :- Kya kehna tha keh diya k agar owais ko nikal diya .. to aa ke khud sambhalna apne baap ka buiseness ..

Owais :- badi fikar hai madam ko humari .. aur kal keh rahi thi k tumhare hath nahi aane wali .. Fareeha :- who baat nahi hai .. usey mujhpe bharosa karna chahiye tha .. Magar nahi who to bs ghusse mein kuch bhi bake jar raha tha .. to mein ne bhi ghusse mein keh diya .. warna mera kya kam tumhare sath .. Tumhein nikaale ya rakhein ..

Owais :- Wah bhai ab phasne pe aye to ye bole .. Kya dosti nibhayi hai wah .. Fareeha :- Mazak kar rahi hu yar .. tum dost ho mere isi liye kaha tha mein usse ..

Dono fareeha k cabin mein gappe maar rahe the .. Fareeha ka mood kuch had tak theek ho gaya tha .. Dusri taraf shaheer nashe mein dhuth ho chukka tha .. tabhi usey dubara call ata hai Sarkash ka ..
Bhai yah fareeha ka bachpana kab tak jhelna padega. Yadi use aap mature nahi bana sakte to fir khani padhane se koi fayda nahi hona. Ab fareeha ka character kuch jyada hi bore kar raha he. Uski baate bhi logical nahi lagti. Yadi aaj kisi anath ko koi apne sath rakhe uski jimmedari uthaye uspe kharcha kare usko apna business tak de de fir bhi wo shakhs is nekdili ko hamesha kadwe bol bol kar ruswa hi karta rahe yah kuch samjh se pare he. Owaisi 10 din sirf office me mila uske liye soft corner but shahir jo iski izzat bachaye use pale uski prati kuch nahi. Bhai ya to fareeha ko mature dikhao, ya isko picture se hata kar iski life me koyi asi ladki lao jo isko tut kar chahe.
 
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Bhai yah fareeha ka bachpana kab tak jhelna padega. Yadi use aap mature nahi bana sakte to fir khani padhane se koi fayda nahi hona. Ab fareeha ka character kuch jyada hi bore kar raha he. Uski baate bhi logical nahi lagti. Yadi aaj kisi anath ko koi apne sath rakhe uski jimmedari uthaye uspe kharcha kare usko apna business tak de de fir bhi wo shakhs is nekdili ko hamesha kadwe bol bol kar ruswa hi karta rahe yah kuch samjh se pare he. Owaisi 10 din sirf office me mila uske liye soft corner but shahir jo iski izzat bachaye use pale uski prati kuch nahi. Bhai ya to fareeha ko mature dikhao, ya isko picture se hata kar iski life me koyi asi ladki lao jo isko tut kar chahe.

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Yar dekho aap sare gile shikwe apni jagah but kuch cheezein jo hoti hai wohh step by step chalti hai. Human psychology ko hi utha k dekh lo aap. Aik banda immature hai to aisa to ho nahi sakta na k wohh achanak se hi mature ho jaye. Experience k sath woh mature hota hai. Same case yahan bhi hai. Aap Shaheer aur Owais ko compare nahi kar sakte. Shaheer k sath adjust hone mein usko time isliye lag rha hai, kyunke shaheer k sath uske shuru k experiences sahi nahi rahe hain. Pehle shaheer k dad ka fareeha ko hissa na dena, phr shaheer ka usko bachana woh bhi nashe mein, aur most of the time usne shaheer ko nashe mein hi dekha hai. To cheezein hazam karne mein time lagta hai.
Dusri baat aik aur human psychology ka batata hu aap ko. Jo insan akela hota hai jiske dost nehi hote, woh dusro k attention paane k liye ya jiski attention usey chahiye uske samne oot patang harkat karta hai ya usse ladai jhagde karta hai. Same scene fareeha karti hai mostly jo shaheer ko chirhana and all woh sirf uske attention k liye karti hai. Baki aap keh rhe ho k Shaheer k liye soft corner nahi hai. soft corner ban rha hai tabhi to usko shaheer ki narazgi pasand nahi hoti. Ladai k baad bhi jaa ke usko manati hai. But owais wala scene thoda different hai.
Owais aik random banda hai, uske buraiyo ka fareeha ko kuch nahi pata to fareeha ne uske sath just friendship kiya hai nothing more. Aur is baat pe shaheer ka ghussa karna aik tarah se ghalt hi hai. Apne ird gird dekho society mein, mostly yehi hota hai k koi banda apni female cousin ko kisi ladke k sath ghoomne se manah nahi kar sakta agar karta hai to reaction Fareeha se bhi bhayanak hota hai. Fareeha to phr bhi step sister hai na.
Meine is story k start mein hi bola tha k ye story dusre incest stories ki tarah nahi hone wala hai realistic hoga ye. Mostly stories mein incest ko fantasy ki tarah hi dikhaya jaata hai. Slowly build up nahi hote, but yahan har relation slowly build hoga.
Baki aap ne kaha Fareeha ko story se kata dena chahiye aur nayi ladki lani chahiye. Bhattu bhai yu samajh lo aap ki khwaahish puri huyi. Jo aap chaahte hain waisa hi hone wala hai aage jaa ke :D but us waqt naraz nahi hona phr aap :D

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Well aap se narazgi hai mujhe. Narazgi ye hai k aap sirf us waqt comment karte hai review dete hain jab aap ko koi cheez ghalat dikhti hai. Ye boht achi cheez hai waise mujhe boht pasand hai constructive criticism. Mein chaahta hu aap aage bhi karte rahe. But sath mein jo cheez aap ko achi lagti hai usko appreciate bhi kiya karein writers ko motivation milti hai yar isse. Aur agar ho sake to reguler review diya karein jaise mein reguler updates dta hu :D


I hope meri koi baat aap ko buri nahi lagi hogi aur aap is explanation pe apna reply zarur denge :dost:
 
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Big boss ne achcha game plan Kiya tha is baar to bach gaya lekin iski kimat use chukani hogi aaj nahi to kal sahi ab aate hain fareeha ke point par to ushne ka bhi past me shaheer ka sab kuch chin liya tha ek baar fir ushi rashte par insaan ke karam uska picha nahi chhodte usko har haal me apna kiya bhugatna padta hai to us hisaab se uski zindagi ki barbadi upar wale tai ki hai wo har kaam kargi jisse uski life barbaad ho jaye.superb update dost
 
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Pehle to :thanks: bro aap k honest review ka :dost:

Yar dekho aap sare gile shikwe apni jagah but kuch cheezein jo hoti hai wohh step by step chalti hai. Human psychology ko hi utha k dekh lo aap. Aik banda immature hai to aisa to ho nahi sakta na k wohh achanak se hi mature ho jaye. Experience k sath woh mature hota hai. Same case yahan bhi hai. Aap Shaheer aur Owais ko compare nahi kar sakte. Shaheer k sath adjust hone mein usko time isliye lag rha hai, kyunke shaheer k sath uske shuru k experiences sahi nahi rahe hain. Pehle shaheer k dad ka fareeha ko hissa na dena, phr shaheer ka usko bachana woh bhi nashe mein, aur most of the time usne shaheer ko nashe mein hi dekha hai. To cheezein hazam karne mein time lagta hai.
Dusri baat aik aur human psychology ka batata hu aap ko. Jo insan akela hota hai jiske dost nehi hote, woh dusro k attention paane k liye ya jiski attention usey chahiye uske samne oot patang harkat karta hai ya usse ladai jhagde karta hai. Same scene fareeha karti hai mostly jo shaheer ko chirhana and all woh sirf uske attention k liye karti hai. Baki aap keh rhe ho k Shaheer k liye soft corner nahi hai. soft corner ban rha hai tabhi to usko shaheer ki narazgi pasand nahi hoti. Ladai k baad bhi jaa ke usko manati hai. But owais wala scene thoda different hai.
Owais aik random banda hai, uske buraiyo ka fareeha ko kuch nahi pata to fareeha ne uske sath just friendship kiya hai nothing more. Aur is baat pe shaheer ka ghussa karna aik tarah se ghalt hi hai. Apne ird gird dekho society mein, mostly yehi hota hai k koi banda apni female cousin ko kisi ladke k sath ghoomne se manah nahi kar sakta agar karta hai to reaction Fareeha se bhi bhayanak hota hai. Fareeha to phr bhi step sister hai na.
Meine is story k start mein hi bola tha k ye story dusre incest stories ki tarah nahi hone wala hai realistic hoga ye. Mostly stories mein incest ko fantasy ki tarah hi dikhaya jaata hai. Slowly build up nahi hote, but yahan har relation slowly build hoga.
Baki aap ne kaha Fareeha ko story se kata dena chahiye aur nayi ladki lani chahiye. Bhattu bhai yu samajh lo aap ki khwaahish puri huyi. Jo aap chaahte hain waisa hi hone wala hai aage jaa ke :D but us waqt naraz nahi hona phr aap :D

Aadhe update jitna to explanation diya hai meine :lotpot:

Well aap se narazgi hai mujhe. Narazgi ye hai k aap sirf us waqt comment karte hai review dete hain jab aap ko koi cheez ghalat dikhti hai. Ye boht achi cheez hai waise mujhe boht pasand hai constructive criticism. Mein chaahta hu aap aage bhi karte rahe. But sath mein jo cheez aap ko achi lagti hai usko appreciate bhi kiya karein writers ko motivation milti hai yar isse. Aur agar ho sake to reguler review diya karein jaise mein reguler updates dta hu :D


I hope meri koi baat aap ko buri nahi lagi hogi aur aap is explanation pe apna reply zarur denge :dost:
Achcha explain kiya hai lekin ek baat to sach hai age ke sath samjhdari badhti hai to usko pata hona chahiye ki usne anjane me hi sahi ek galti ki hai ek bete se uska baap uska bachpan sab cheen liya usne jiski bharpai usko wo sab khushiyan lautakar karni hai jinna karj Chadha hai uspar uske baad aapki sari baaten sach hain jo kuch bhi aapne kaha wo kisi ko bhi dost bana sakti hai chahe usko uske bare me kuch pata ho na ho :hehe:
 
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Big boss ne achcha game plan Kiya tha is baar to bach gaya lekin iski kimat use chukani hogi aaj nahi to kal sahi ab aate hain fareeha ke point par to ushne ka bhi past me shaheer ka sab kuch chin liya tha ek baar fir ushi rashte par insaan ke karam uska picha nahi chhodte usko har haal me apna kiya bhugatna padta hai to us hisaab se uski zindagi ki barbadi upar wale tai ki hai wo har kaam kargi jisse uski life barbaad ho jaye.superb update dost
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