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Agli bar bata k jaungaJane se pahle bataya kar

Agli bar bata k jaungaJane se pahle bataya kar
Mein shudh straight banda hu bhaiAb bhai Mai to gay nahi hu, aur Rahi BAAT durru ki to yeh pata Karna parega. Kaha kaha keya karta rehta hai aaj Kal.![]()
Mazak mazak mein tu kafi cheezein sahi predict kar jata waiseMaine is 2 din Mai woh kabar khudai ki hai aur haddinka dancha aur purani fati huyi panty ka janch Karke pata lagaya hai yeh khala ki kabr hai. Aur saira, khala ki face plastic surgery Karke chupi huyi hai(Sayed kisi khalu ke Liye )
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Review de pehleBhool gaya to dhool ban Jayega
Bas isi baat ki khushi hai mujhePura Friday ka Maja kirkira kar diya damn
Agar samne hora to abhi take 2-3 Alu ugh gaya hota tere face pe.
Yeh acchi baat hai ki Mai tera padosi nahi hu warna Raat ke 3 baje Chala jata hartal Karne
4 din pure hue tereWriter ne 2 din ka chutti leli Bina bataye to reader 4 din ka chutti Le Raha hai woh bhi Bata kar .
Aliya kaun hai pata na chala shaheer ne usko kahan dekha tha udhar update ke last me fareeha ki awaaz meko lagta shaheer bhi pagal hui gawa pyaar me.nice update dost
Jald hi surprise open hogi writers ke liye... Bas ek request hai naina ko ek story me add kario.. Jo South Indian type fight karti har 5 sec me... Aur haan story character naina ko khoon kharaba bhi pasand hai.. Story character naina jo Supergirl hai... Aisi story likhna aap contest pe , kasam se contest wala dibba aapka![]()
Jatin yaad nahi hai mujhe, but yes rajesh mera dost tha.Acha main xp writers jatin & rajesh ko invite karu yahan lb pe . .btw dono hi aapke xp friend the na
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Hahahah is kahani k characters ko boht khubsurti k sath represent kiya hai is poetry k through bilkul yehi kuch chal rha haiDurrani sir ke liye ...... Arj hai...
Waqt esi hi rawani Me dhalta raha
Durrani bekhabar yunhi kahani likhta raha
Kabhi hansta tha kirdaar apne naseebo pe
Kirdaar Kabhi ander hi ander me
jalta raha
Kahi shikwe mile kahi thokrain mili
Chhote lagti Rahi kirdaar sambhlta raha
Aur kahani ki us pane ki khatir sab kuch karta gaya
Ek wohi kadus writer tha Jo har baar tevar badal kr kirdaar ki jindgi ke sath khel khelta raha. ...![]()