Thanks for suggestBro har update ke baad tum situation change kar dete ho. Nice thought skill.
Iss update se dil to halka hua hai, lekin abhi iss naye aadmi kon hai aur jisne madad ki wo kon hai ye saare sawal sone nhi denge.
Achha twist add kar rahe ho. Ummid karta hun, everything goes well.
Nice update.
Abhi aage aapki writing skill bhi dekhna hai. (Hope mom x son) :victory2:.
Aur emotion add kar sakte ho thoda elaborate kar ke har situation par. (Jaha jarurat ho waha)
Best of luck.
Waiting next.
Lelouchyagami
Thanks dearVery interesting story
ThanksVery nice fantastic update waiting for next
Nice plot abhi tak.UPDATE~6
Mom- Saari batein gate par hi pochega kya?.. chal ander chalty hain
Fir hum nono hasty huwy ander chale gae
vicky or Aesha ander chale gae lekin koe tha jo ye sab chup chap daikh raha tha dono ke ander jate hi apne aanso punchta huwa chala gaya
Ab Aage…….
Aaj mom ne mere pasand ka khana banaya tha
Or mere pasand ki kuch sweet bhi banai thi
Ye sab kuch daikhty main to shocked tha
Main - mom aap ko kese maloom huwa k main aa raha hu
Mom - hasty huwy … Tu mere pait se janna he,,! Main nahi
Mom ki ye baat mere uper se hi guzar gai
Mai munh phulah kar bas mom ko daikhta hi raha
Mom - Faltoo ki batein chhorh jaldi freash ho kar aa jaa or ziyadh sawal jawaab nahi…! samjha…!
Or mom mere sir par hath phair kar mere balon ko pareshan karti huwi kitchen ne chali gai
Main bhi hasta huwa room me chala gaya, bag rakha or kapde utha kar washroom gaya, naha dho kar aa ke dinning table par baith gaya
NoteHamara ghar 2rooms par mushtamil he
Dono room ik dosre ke sath hain lekin hum ik hee room use karty hain dosre ko store room banaya huwa he
barmda or tv haal ik hi he samny kitchen or us ke barabar me wash room
Bahir thoda sa sehan he jahan main gate tak phool lage huwy hain
Or side me halki phulki park he jahan ik neem ka ped laga huwa he
Mom ka bachpan goun me guzra he kethoor phoolon ke darmiyaan
Is liye mom ko phool podon se kuch ziyada hi lagao he)
Wapas aate hai apni baat par
mai jese hi tayar ho kar bahir aaya
Mom kisi se phone par baat kar rahi thi lekin mujhe daikhty hi mom ne call cut ki or dining par aa gai
Main - mom kon tha??
Mom - tu sawal buhat karta he
Main - (thoda munh banaty huwy..) Ok aap naraaz hoti ho to ab nahi karu ga
Mom - are are naraz mat ho mere munne
Or haa tha nahi,… teri teacher thi,.. Pooch rahi thi.., ke vicky ghar punhcha k nahi
Mom ki baat sunty hi me samajh gaya k teacher ne hi mom ko bataya hoga kyun ke jab me collage se nikla tha teacher mujhe mili thi
Min - (are yaar ab samajh ayaa k mom ko kis ne bataya he mere bare)
Mom - kahan gum ho gaya tu
Main - achaaaa.. matlab …… mera plane chopat karny me madam ka hath he
Mom - smart boy ….! Chal ab jaldi khana start kar mere pait me to choohy dorh rahe hain
Main - haan bookh to mujhe bhi badi zoroon ki lagi he
Mom - (sweat utay huwy) …… Ye le pehly munh metha kar…. Aaj barsu baad ghar aaya he
Mom ne 1st niwala sweet ka mere munh me diya
Mom ke aese pyar se khilany ki wajh se meri kushi ka koe thikana nahi tha,.. be saakta mere munh se nikal gaya
Main - wow!!!!! testy !!!!!! Maa hostile me to taras hi gaya tha aese swadish khana,.. khany ke liye
Maim - (sweet to testy thi mager mujhe mazak sujhi) maa lekin sweet kuch ziyada hi mithi he
Mom - par mene to cheni(suger) kam hee dali thi
Main - phir laghta he aap ke haathon ne mithaas bhar di he is me
Mom ke bolny se pehly hi mene 1ik tukrda sweet utha kar mom ko kila diya
Mom meri baat samajh gai
Mom - (sweet khaty huwy) lekin mere bete ke hath me jo swad he wo mere hath me kaha
Ye sunte hi mene mom ke hathon (hands)ko choom liya
Main - aap ke hatho ka swad mujh se behtar kon jaany… In hatho ne joo niwale tod tod ka mujhe khile hain….. Pori zindagi in hathon ki kidmat karoon…. phir bhi in ka ye karaz nahi utar sakta
Ye sunty hi mom ki aankhein bhar aaie meri aankhein bhi namm ho gai jise mom ne daikh liya
Mom - (meri aakho ki nami par choomty huwy) maa sadky …. Lagta he mra beta ab bada ho chuka he … Itni badi badi batein jo karny laga…. Ab khana khae ga yaa mujhe bhi rulae ga
Mom aaj buhat khush thi main us ki ye khushi un se chen na nahi chahta
fir ham aise hi ik dosre ko khilaty, hasty, mazak karty huwy khana khany lage
ham ne khana mukmal kiya
Khana kha k hum tv hall me baith kar batein karty rahe
Main mom ki god me sir rakh kar lait gaya or tv daikhta raha mom mere baloon me apni unghliyaan pherti rahi
Dopehr ka waqt tha garmi ka samma or aaj khana bhi kuch ziyadh hi kha liya tha
na jaany kab main neend ki wadyoon me chala gaya
Shaam 5baje ke qareeb meri ankh khuli main sofi par soya huwa tha lekin mom nahi thi
showar ki awaz sun kar mujhe andaza ho gaya k mom room ke attaint bath me he to me uth kar bahir waly bath me chala gaya
Main freesh ho kar mom se ijazat le kar bahir nikal gaya mom ne raat ke khany keliye khuch samaan mangwaya tha jis ke liye mujhe bazar jaana hoga to mene socha aaj park ka chakar laga ke aajaon kyun ke park bhi us tarf hi tha
Yahan mera koe dost yaar nahi tha to bas akela hi bazaar ki tarf nikal pada
Main pedal nikla tha ghoomta huwa 20 /25 minit me park pohch gaya
Shaam ka waqt tha park me achi khasi chehl pehl thi
Main kafi deer tak tehlta raha garmi ka mosam tha me chal chal ke or paseena paseena ho chuka tha mene thele wale se pure water wala pani liya or thoda door jaa kar ik bench par baith gaya
Sham ka waqt tha ab andhera hony wala tha mujhe ab jana chahiye tha
Main Pani pe kar uth hi raha tha ke mujhe ik ajeeb c aawaz sunaai di
Lady - Aaaaahhhh bete kitny ache ho tum
Boy - maaaaa uuuummmm aahhh puchhhhhh
Me janta tha ke ye aawaz kis cheez ki he or park me is waqt aksar yahi kaam hota he
Lekin naa chahty huwy bhi us aawaz ki tarf jaany laga kyun ke do lfz mere kanoo me baar baar gonj rahe tha
mAA
BETA
Wese to aese aam se alfaaz hain jo aksar har ghar , gali , muhalle me boly sune jaty hain lekin is situation me aaj pehli baar sun raha tha
Main is aawaz ki tarf badrha jo podoon ke ik bade jhummat ke peche se aa rahi thi
Lelo...Nice plot abhi tak.
Sk....Thanks dear
Lelo...Phone call ka koi chakkar kya ho sakta hai, ispar question hai.
Sk....May be its normal call
Lelo.... Ab hero bhi, love ke piche bhagega.
Sk..... Tabhi to maza ae ga
Lelo.....Spelling par thoda dhyan de do bas, spelling samajhne me link crack ho jata hai.
Sk... Sahi kaha dear khayal rakhu ga dar asal waqt ki kami ki wajh se time nahi mill patta
Thanks for suggest