Fantasy Aditya@#The Dark Hunter#@

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Ek sunsan ilake me ek aurat bahut teji se bhag rhi thi. uske god me ek bacha tha aurat bahut dari huyi thi sayad kisi se dar ke bhag rhi thi. aurat ke sir se khun gir rha tha bechari ka halat bahut kharab tha o kisi tarah apne bache ko bachana chah rhi thi. kuch gunde uske pichha kr rhe the o bhagwan se yahi dua kar rhi thi hey bagwan mere pran lele magar mere bache ko bacha le. bhagte bhagete aurat ek Brij ke upar se ja rhi thi tabhi ek goli aake uske pith me lagi jisse aurat ke hath me se bacha uchhla aur Brij ke niche gir gya. jo sidhe jaker nadi me gira bache ko girte dekh aurat ke muh se ek chikh nikali mera bacha.... Aur o behosh ho gyi.
Wahi dusre taraf ek sadhu dhyan me baithe the. bache ko girte hi unka dhyan tut gya o waha se gayab hoke sidhe bache ke pas prakat huye aur bache ko god me leke gayab ho gye. O chahte to us aurat ko bacha sakte the lekin o uski niyati tha.aur niyati se chedkhani nhi karna chahte the.(niyati yaha ladki ka name nhi h) Sadhu us bache ko le jaker ek mandir me chhod diye.
Wahi ek aurat mandir me puja karne aayi thi o puja kr hi rhi thi ki tabhi ek bache ki rone ki awaj use sunai di.o us bache ki tarf chali gyi jaker dekhti h ki ek 5 ya 10 din ka bacha mandir ke side me rakha huya h aur bachha ro rha h bache ko dekhte hi us aurat ka mamta jag gya aur o aurat turant us bache ko god me utha li. Bache ko uthane ke bad o idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur boli ye bacha kiska h. Bahut der tak aurat bache ki maa bap ko dundhat rhi lekin koi nhi mila tabhi wahi sadhu aaye aur us aurat se bole
Sadhu- beti is bache ko bholenath ke prasad samajh kar apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- lekin baba mai kaise..aur iske maa bap
Sadhu- beti yadi iske maa bap yaha hote to ab tak aa nhi jate. Beti ye bhole nath ka prasad h tumhare liye tum ise apne pas rakh lo
Aurat- Thik h baba aap itna kahte h to mai ise apne bete ki tarah palunga.
Bechari ko bache ko dekhte hi maa ki mamta jag gyi thi kyuki uska sadi ke panch sal ho gye the abhi tak koi bachha nhi tha bechari bache ke liye na jane kitne doctar kitne hakim kitna mandir gyi thi jab bache ko dekhi to usko bhi man me yahi tha ki kas ise mai apne pas rakh leti.
Aurat- baba itna meharbani ki to thoda aur kar dijiye is bache ka name bhi rakh dijiye
Baba- beti aaj se thik 3 din bad purnima h us din tum apne pati aur is bache ke sath isi mandir me aa jana usi din iska name karan hoga.
Intro time
Hero- Aditya Kushwaha
Hero dad- Suresh Kushwaha
Hero mom- puspa Kushwaha
Hero sister- Palvi Kushwaha ( heroin )
Hero friends:-
Abhinav
Arushi
Aur bhi h jinka intro aage story ke sath hoga jaise jaise story aage badegi waise waise intro dunga
 
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Aurat- baba itna meharbani ki to thoda aur kar dijiye is bache ka name bhi rakh dijiye
Baba- beti aaj se thik 3 din bad purnima h us din tum apne pati aur is bache ke sath isi mandir me aa jana usi din iska name karan hoga.
Ab aage
Aurat bache ko lekar ghar aa jati h aurat ke god me bachha dekh kar ek admi bola.

Admi- Puspa ye bacha kiska h
Ji ha dosto ye aurat puspa hi thi aur o admi uske hasband suresh tha (ab ye log ka name se likhunga)
Puspa- ye bacha mujhe mandir me mila tha
Phir puspa ne sari bat suresh ko bataya jise sunkar suresh bahut khus huya. Phir suresh bola.
Sureah- Tumne bahut achha kiya jo is bache ko lekar aa gyi mai is bache ko apne bete ki tarah palunga mai ise duniya ki har khusi dunga ye ab mera beta h.
Ye bat sunkar puspa bhi bahut khus huyi.
(Ab ye log ke karobar aur ghar ke bare me jan lete h)
Suresh bihar ke patna me apne family ke sath rahta h. Uska taxtile business h business to jyada faila nhi h lekin us sahar me no.1 position pe h.
Ghar ki bat kre to 2 flor ka ek ghar h jisme 7 room h 4 first flor pe aur 3 second flor me h.

Ab aate h story par

Aaj 3 din ho gye the aaj purnima tha aaj bache ki namkaran ka din tha puspa aur suresh bahut khus the.
Puspa- aji sunte ho kha ho aap abhi tak taiyar nhi huye.
Suresh- are bagwan itna pareshan kyu ho rhi ho bs taiyar hi ho rha hu.
Puspa- pareshan na hou to kya kru aaj mere bete ka name karan h aur aap abhi tak taiyar nhi huye.

Tab tak suresh taiyar hoke aa jata h
Suresh- lo ji mai taiyar hoke aa gya ab chale

Phir dono gadi se mandir ki taraf nikal jate h.
1 ghante ke bad dono mandir pahuch jate h mandir me andar jane ke bad dono bagwan bholenath ka darsan karte h tab tak sadhu baba bhi aa jate h. Dono sadhu baba ko dekh kar unke pas jate h aur pranam krte h
Puspa- Pranam baba
Sadhu- sawbhagyawati bava
Suresh- pranam baba
Sadhu- aayusman bava. beti mai aaj tumlogo ko yaha is bache ki name karan ke liye bulaya hu aur sath me ek yagya bhi hoga jisme tum dono pati patni ko baitna padega. Aur ha bagwan ne chaha to is yagya ke bad tumhara god bhi bharega.
Puspa- baba mai is karya se sada apkali abhari rahungi.
Sadhu- beti pahli bat ki mujhe baba nhi guruji bologi aur dusri ye to me kartavya h beti
Puspa- jo agya gurudev

(Note yaha ab sadhu ko guruji likhunga)
Guruji- Pahle yaha yagya hoga iske bad name karan
Suresh- jaisi apka iksha durudev

Phir yagya ki taiyari hoti h guru ji ke sath aur bhi sadhu aaye the agya aarambh huya mantro ki dhwani charo dishao me gunjane lagi ye agya 4 ghanto tak chali yagya samapt huya iske bad guruji ne puspa ko prasad ke taur pe khir diya khane ko.
Ab bari aayi name karan ki.
Guruji- beti bache ko idhar lao
Puspa- ji gurudev

Puspa bache ko lekar gurudev ke pass jati h gurudev bache ko apne god me lete h aur ankhe band kar ke dhyan lagate h dhyan lagane ke bad guruji ke chehre pe kabhi khushi kabhi dukh ka bav aa rha tha.
Phir guruji dhyan se uthe aur bole.

Guruji- beti tum bahut bagya sali jo iske jaisa putra tumhe mila ye nekdil insan hoga ise babhisya me bade bade kam karna h waise to ye sant rahega lekin agar ise gusa aa jaye to ye kisi ka nhi sunega. Ye apne man ka malik hoga Isliye kosis karna ki ise gusa na aye. Iske chehre pe surya ka tej hai is liye iska name Aditya hoga
(Aur guruji ek rudraksh ki mala puspa ko dete hue bole)
Guruji- ye mala iske gle me pahna dena ye bholenath ka mala h ise iske gle se kabhi bhi nhi utarna

Suresh aur puspa guruji ke mukh se apne bete ke bare me sun ke bahut khus huye

Puspa- hmm.. Aditya kitna pyara name h bikul mere bete ki tarah mai kitna bhayasali hu jo mujhe aditya jaisa beta mila mai ise apne se kabhi dur nhi karungi.
Suresh- tum sahi kah rahi ho puspa mera beta lakho me ek h guru ji iska janam kundali bna dijiye
Guruji- Thik h beta aao mere sath

Guruji aur suresh ek or chale gye aaj puspa aur suresh ke chehre par khushi saf jhalak rhi thi ye bete ki milne ki khushi thi

Guruji aur suresh ek or ja rhe the guruji ke chehre par is wakt pareshani saf jalak rhi thi jo suresh ne dekh liya

Suresh- gurudev aap itna pareshan kyu h kya bat h gurudev
Guruji- putra mai tumse ek bat batana chahta hu
Suresh- kya bat h gurudev
Guruji- putra ye bat sach h ki tumhare putra ke pas kuchh saktiya h jo lok kalyan ke liye h lekin ye tum logo ke upar nirbhar karta h ki o lok kalyan karega ya vinash
Suresh- aisa kyu gurudev
Guruji- ye tum logo ke parwarish ke upar nirbhar karta h putra
Suresh- guruji o bhale hi mere patni ke garbh se paida nhi huya h lekin o mere putra se badhkar h aap nisanchit rahiye gurudev mai apne putra ko ek nekdil insan banaunga ye mera wada h apse
Guruji- mujhe tumse yahi asa thi putra. Aur ek bat jab o 5 sal ka ho jayega to uske siksha ke liye mujh saupna hoga
Suresh- jaisi apki ichha gurudev mujhe chhama kre to ek bat puchhu gurudev

Suresh ki ye bat jankar guruji ke chehre par ek muskan aa gya jaise o jante ho ki suresh unse kya puchhega

Guruji- avasya putra puchho kya puchhna chah rhe ho
Suresh- (apne hath jodkar guru dev ke samne baith gya) guru dev aap kon h

Guruji- (guru ji muskurate huye) mai hu..
 
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Suresh ki ye bat jankar guruji ke chehre par ek muskan aa gya jaise o jante ho ki suresh unse kya puchhega

Guruji- avasya putra puchho kya puchhna chah rhe ho
Suresh- (apne hath jodkar guru dev ke samne baith gya) guru dev aap kon h

Guruji- (guru ji muskurate huye) mai

Ab aage
Tabhi guruji ne apne rup badle unka ye rup dekh kar suresh unhi me kho gya unka rup atulniye tha chehre pe jaise 100 surya ka prakash ho gle me rudrakh ke malaye ek hath me pharsa dusre hath me Vijay dhanus pith pe tiro se bhara tarkas sarir pe geruya rang ke kapde unka shobha badha rha tha (bhai log sayad aap log jan gye honge ye kon h nhi jante to bta hi de rha hu)


Guruji- mai guru shiv ka shisya parsuram hu

Guruji ko dekh kar aur unke bate sun kar suresh ke aankho se aansu chalne lagta o khusi ke ansu the o khus bhi kyu na ho aaj uska jivan safal ho gya tha aaj use ek divya purus darsan huya tha

Suresh- mai dhanya ho gya prabhu jo aapne is tuksh prani ko darsan diya apko koti koti pranam prabhu mai dhanya ho gya prabhu mai dhanya ho gya
Guruji- ye sab prabhu ki ikchha h putra mai to unka ek das hu baki prabhu ki lila prabhu hi Jane mere khyal se ab tumhe jana chahiye aur ha ek bat yad rakhna aditya ka sach kisi ko pta na chale waise to uske shaktiyo ko bandh diya hu lekin tum bhi dhyan rakhna uska
Suresh- jo agya gurudev

Phir suresh waha se apne wife puska ke pass aata h aur bolta h
Suresh- Puspa guruji ne bole yaha ka kam sab khatam ho gya h ab tum ghar ja sakte ho
Puspa - thik h chalo ab ghar chalte h

Phir dono ghar ki or chal dete h (ab ye log ko yahi chhod dete h chalte h dusre or)

Wahi dusri or ek hospital me ek aadmi idhar udhar ghum raha tha chehre par kuchh paresani thi o bar bar god prey kar rha tha ki hey bhagwan mere bache aur mere wife ki raksha karna itne me use ek bache ki rone ki aavaj sunai di avaj sun kar o aadmi bahut khus huya itne ek narse aa kar bolti h Mubarak ho sir apko ek sundar si beti huyi h o admi itna sunte hi khusi ke mare uchalne lga o apne keb ek 500 noto ki ek gadi nikal ke narse ko diya aur bola lo ise aur pure hospital me mithai kharid ke bat do aaj mai bahut khus hu aaj mai bap ban gaya phir o narse bole
Admi- sister kya mai apne wife se mil sakta hu
Narse- thodi deri bad vip ward me sift kiya jayenga unko iske bad mil lijiyega sir
Admi- ok thanks

Thodi der bad o aurat ko vip ward me sift kiya jata h uskebl bad o admi jake apne wife se milta h aur bachhe ko dekhne lagta h aur man me sochta h kitni pyari h meri beti isko dekhte hi isme khota ja rha hu jaise koi jadu ho uske chehre me phir o apne wife ke taraf dekhta h aur bolta h
Admi- thanks itni pyari beti dene ke liye dekho n kitni pyari h meri beti bilkul tumpe gyi

O aurat apne pati ke bat sun ke muskurane lagti h
 
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Thodi der bad o aurat ko vip ward me sift kiya jata h uskebl bad o admi jake apne wife se milta h aur bachhe ko dekhne lagta h aur man me sochta h kitni pyari h meri beti isko dekhte hi isme khota ja rha hu jaise koi jadu ho uske chehre me phir o apne wife ke taraf dekhta h aur bolta h

Admi- thanks itni pyari beti dene ke liye dekho n kitni pyari h meri beti bilkul tumpe gyi

O aurat apne pati ke bate sun muskurane lagti h

Ab aage
O aurat aur admi bahut khus the aj 4 pidhiyo (genretion) bad unke ghar me laxmi janam li thi

Inke ghar me 4 pidhiyo se keval ladka hi janam leta tha inko ek sadhu ne bataya tha ki inke ghar me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ladki janam legi jo aaj ja kar sach huya tha ish liye ye aaj bahut khus the phir o admi apne aur wife se bolta h

Admi- aaj mai bahut khus janti ho kyu kyuki aaj hamare khandan me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ladki paida huyi h ye laxmi h hamare ghar ki jab ye khabar maa pitaji sunege to kitna kush honge hai n
Aurat- ha aap thik bol rhe ho ye hamare ghar ki laxmi h dekhiye n kitni cute h iske chehre se najar hi nahi hat rha ha lag rha h bas use dekhte hi rahu
Admi- ha bahut sundar h meri beti achha ruko mai ghar pe call karke aata hu

Iske bad o admi apne ghar pe call krta h idhar ek aalishan ghar me ghar kahna galat hoga ek aalishan haveli me ek admi baita ke huka pi rha hota h tabhi uska mobile bajta h o mobile dekh bahut khus ho jata h aur phone recieve karta h

Admi- Hallo ha beta bolo kaisi h bahu delivery sahi se huya ki nahi
Dusra admi- ha pitaji delivery sahi se ho gya h ghar me 4 pidhiyo bad ladki janam li h
Admi- Ye to bahut achha khabar h beta aaj mai bahut khus aaj thakur khandan me ladki janam li h aaj ghar me party ho aur laxmi ki dumdham se swagt hogi waise hospital se discharge kab mil rha h
Dusra Admi- 2 ghante mil jayegi pitaji
Admi- thik h jaldi ghar aa jao ab intjar nhi hota poti ka mukh dekhe bina nhi rha jayega

Phir phone rakhta h aur chilate huye bolta h

Admi- are bhawan sunti ho kidhar idhar aao ek khuskhabri h
Tabhi ek aurat aati h aur bolti h
Aurat - itna chila kyu rhe ho jee kya huya h kaisi khuskhbari h
Admi- aaj is haveli me 4 pidhiyo bad laxmi aa rhi h uski swagat ki taiyari kro

Ye bat sun kar aurat bahut khu hoti h chila chila kar nokaro ko bulati h aur laxmi ki swagat ki taiyari karne lagti h

Ab ye log ko laxmi ki swagat ki taiyari karne dete h ab time h intro ka
Raghvendra thakur - dekhne me ekdam fit h inka pure 40 gaon me raj chalta h kyuki ye waha ke thakur h inke pass paise ki kami nhi h
Kaushalya devi - ye Raghvendra thakur ke wife h
Sanjay thakur - ye ek business man h inka busness India me top 5 me aata h
Rohini devi - ye sanjay thakur ke wife h ye house wife h
Niraj thakur- ye sanjay thakur ke bada beta h
Rohit thakur- ye sanjay thakur ke chhota beta h
Anshika thakur - ye sanjay thakur ki beti h inke ghar me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ladki huya h isliye ye sabki ladli h gusa iske nak pe rahta h aur thoda ghamandi bhi h

Ab chalte h story pe
Dusri or suresh aur puspa mandir se ghar aate h ghar aane ke bad o log apne bete ki name karan ke khusi me ghar me bhandara rakhte h garibi ko khana khilate h aur kapda dete h
Dono aaj bahut khus the aaj unka warish mil gya tha ye log khusi mana hi rahe the ki achanak unka beta rone lga dono pareshan ho gye bachha chup hi nhi ho rha tha bache ko kabhi suresh chup kra rha tha to kabhi puspa chup kra rhi thi lekin bacha chup hone ka name hi nhi le rha tha

Suresh- lagta h ise bhukh lga h ise dudh ki jarurat h
Puspa - lekin ab ham dudh kha se lau bache ko maa ke dudh ke siva dusra kuchh nhi diya jata h ye bagwan bholenath madad kijiye mai apne bete ko is tarah rote h dekh sakta
Suresh- puspa tum chinta na kro jab bhagwan hame beta diya h to uska ahar bhi jarur denge

Bechari apne bete ko rote dekh uska kaleja chir gya bechari phut phut ke rone lgi aur bagwan se dua karne lgi ki achanak uska sthan bhari bhari lagne lga bechari apne sthan ko hath lga ke dekhi to kuchh gila gila mahsus huya jab use mahsus huya ki ye kya h to bechari khusi se uchhalne lgi phir ye bat apne pati ko batai
Puspa- dekhiye n ye kaisi maya h mere sthan se dudh nikal rha h
Sureah- dekha mai kahta tha n ki jab bhagwan hame beta diya h to uska ahar bhi jarur denge hamra beta divya h aur usse bhi jayada tumhari mamta h tumhari maa ke mamta ke karan hi ye sab huya h mai dhayna ho gya tum jaisi wife aur aditya jaise beta pake

Phir puspa apne bete ko dudh pila kar sula deti h aur dono bhi so jate abhi adhi rat ke samay huya tha ki achanak puspa jor se mere bete ko bachao koi to mere bete ko bachao aditya.... chilate huye uth jati h
 
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Sureah- dekha mai kahta tha n ki jab bhagwan hame beta diya h to uska ahar bhi jarur denge hamra beta divya h aur usse bhi jayada tumhari mamta h tumhari maa ke mamta ke karan hi ye sab huya h mai dhayna ho gya tum jaisi wife aur aditya jaise beta pake

Phir puspa apne bete ko dudh pila kar sula deti h aur dono bhi so jate abhi adhi rat ke samay huya tha ki achanak puspa jor se mere bete ko bachao koi to mere bete ko bachao aditya.... chilate huye uth jati h
Ab aage
Puspa uthate hi apne bete ko idhar udhar dhundhne lagti h jab dekhti h ki aditya uske side me so rha h to usko utha ke apne sine se lga kar rone lagti h usko rote dekh suresh uska ane sine se lga leta h aur puchhta h

Suresh- kya hua puspa tum chikhi kyu aur to kyu rhi h koi bura sapna dekhi h kya

Puspa sirf roti rahti h kuchh bolti nhi h

Suresh- kya hua puspa bolo bhi aise rone se kya ho batao hamko kya hua h
Puspa - +subakte huye) o.. o.. mere bete ko mar denge please bachha lo mere bete ko
Suresh- kon mar dega mere bete batao kya dekhi sapne me
Puspa- o o kuchh log the hatho me talvar liye huye o mere bete ko marne aa rhe the please bachha lo o tumhara bhi beta h please bacha lo

Itna bol kar puspa phir se rone lagi phir suresh usko kisi tarah chup karata h aur bolta

Suresh- puspa tum bekar me dar rhe ho kuchh nhi hoga mere bete ko o ek sapna h sirf sapna samjhi ab chup ho jao aur so jao

( suresh ye bol to rha tha ki kuchh nhi hoga lekin andar andar khud dar rha tha aur dare bhi kyu na kitna minto ke bad ek beta mila tha)

Puspa- mai kuchh nhi sunna chahti aap ek kam karo guruji se is bare me bat kro

(Puspa ki ye bat suresh ko bhi achhi lagi o socha guruji se bat kar ke dekhta hu note- us din guru ji ne suresh ko bola tha ki mujhse kuch kam hoga to mujhe dhyan me yada karna mai ja jaunga

Phir suresh guruji ka dhyan karne lagta h

Suresh - (dhayan me ) guruji ji mujhe darsan dijiye is tuksh insan ko aapki jarurat h kripya kar ke darsan dijiye

Phir waha guru parsuram ji prakat hote h aur bolte h

Guruji- aankhe kholo wats mai aa gya hu bolo mujhe ki liye yad kiya
Suresh- (aankhe kholte huye ) paranam guruji mai dhanya ho gya guruji aapka dobara darsan pake
Puspa- Pranam gurudev
Guruji- dirghyau bava... Bolo kyu yad kiya mejhe
Suresh - aap to antrayami h gurudev aap se kya chhipa h
Guruji - phir bhi mai tumse sunna chahta hu
Puspa- guruji mai ek sapna dekha ki koi mere bete ko marna chahta h kripya mere bache ko bachha lijiye guru ji
Suresh- gurudev ye sapna kyu aaya akhir kon marna chahega mere bete ko mera to kisi se dumani bhi nhi h
Gurudev- putra sapna ka rista aane wale nikat bhabhisya se hota h putra yadi putri ye sapna dekhi h to kuchh jarur bat h mai dekhta hu

(Itna bol guruji aankhe band kar ke dhayan lagate h kuch der bad aankhe kholte h aur bolte h)

Guruji- putra puspa ko sapna aana nikat bhabhiye me hone wale ghatna ke purvanuman h aur ye satya h agar koi upay nhi kiya gya to ghatna ghatit ho skta h
Puspa- parantu gurudev mere bete ko koi kyu marna chahega hamlogo ko kisi se dusmani bhi nhi h
Suresh- kripya kre gurudev mere bete ka raksha kare
Guru dev- putra mai ye nhi janta ki kiska is bache kya dusmani h kyu marna chahte h lekin ye stya h ki is bache par 5 sal tak khatra mandarate rahega aur iska ek hi upay h
Suresh- kya gurudev
Guruji- tumlogo ko ab ye sahar chhodna padega
Suresh- jo agya gurudev

Phir gurudev antradhyan ho gye iske kuch din bad suresh me apna company aur ghar bech ke dusre sahar nikal jata h ye log delhi shift hone ja rhe the
Ab chalte Raghvendra thakur ke haveli ke taraf are ye kya yaha to joro soro se kisi ki swagat ki taiyari chal rhi h are ha yad aaya isnke yaha to laxmi ki swagata ho rha h ghar ke sare pariwar darwaze pe najar aa rhe the
Kaushalya devi ke hath me aarti ki thali thi sare pariwar ke chehre par khushi jhalak rahi thi pura haveli phulo se sajaya hua tha unke haveli par logo ki bhid lagi thi sab ko pata chal gya tha ki aaj haveli me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ek ladki ka janam huya h usi samay darwaze par ek gadi aaker ruki usme se nikla wahi admi jo us din hospital me tha aur phir nikali o aurat jiske god me ek bachi thi aap log to samajh hi gye honge ki ye sanjay thakur aur Rohini devi thi o log ko dekh kar Kaushalya devi aage aayi aur us bachi ki aarti utarne lgi phir arti ki thal ek nokar ko dete huye boli

Kaushalya- la de meri poti ko mai bhi dekhu

Phir Kaushalya devi us bachi ko god me liye aur phir sab andar haveli me gye aaj kaushlya devi bahut khus thi bar bar bachi ko chum rahi thi
Raghvendra- kab tak pyar karegi apni poti ko la idhar de mujhe bhi apne god me lena h
Kaushlya- mai apne poti ko pyar kar rhi hu to apko kyu jalan ho rhi h aur jab tak meri man nhi bhar jati mai kisi ko nhi dungi apni poti samjhe

Phir bahut bahut minte karne ke bad kaushlya devi apne poti ko Raghvendra ke god me diya phir Raghvendra apne natni ko pyar karne lge phir isi tarh time gujarne lga 5 din bad sivratri tha usi din bachi ki name karan ka din fix huya idhar suresh aura puspa bhi delhi me sift ho gye suresh ko compay aur ghar bech ke achha kasa paisa mila tha jisse ek ghar le liya aur ek business start kiya
Aaj 5 din ho gye aaj sivratri h aur aaj sanjay ki beti ka name karan h aaj bhi haveli ko bahut achi tarah se sajaya huya tha aur aaj bhandara bhi rakhe the ye log iss liye bahut sare riletive wale aaye the aur us gaon wale bhi sab aaye the tabhi waha pe ek sadhu baba aaye ye bahi sadhu baba the jo bole the ki thakur khandan me 4 pidhiyo ke bad ek ladki janam legi unka kathan satya huya tha is liye inhi baba ko bulaya gya tha namekaran ke liye baba aate h namekaran ki taiyari hone lagti h baba ko baitne ke liye ek aashan lagaya jata h
Baba- putra bachi ko lekar idher aao
Sanjay- jo gya baba

Phir sanjay us bachi ko lekar baba ke pass jata aur baba ke god me de deta h phir baba usko god me lene ke bad bhayan lagate h kuch der bad ankhe kholte h aur bolte h
Baba- utam ati utam sarvagun sampun kanya h tumlog koi punya ki kam kiye honge jo is divya kanya ki tumhare ghar me janam huya
Ye ke janam se tumhare ghar me business me bahut bridhi hogi ye sach me laxmi h isme gun hai to avgun bhi h ye bahut ziddi hogi ise bat bat me gussa ayega iske guse ka samna karna kisi ke bas ki bat nhi hogi ye kisi bhi chij me chahe o khel ho ya padhai ya ladhai jagda kisi se nhi haregi aur jo ise harayega wahi iska pati hoga jo isse bhi jyada balwan budhiwan hoga iska name A se suru hoga tabhi Rohini boli

Rohini - ishka name ham Anshika rakhenge

Sab Rohini ke bat sun kar kush ho gye

Baba - ab iss bachi ki name karan ho gya ab hame anumati de

Phir Raghvendra thakur ne baba ko dakshina diye aur vida kiye
Note- ab ye log ko yahi chhodte h ab ye log kahani me 18 years pura hone ke bad entry lenge

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Wo log delhi me setal ho gye the business bhi start kar diye the sab kuchh achha chal rha tha suresh aura puspa dono aditya ko bahut pyar karte the ye sab aise hi chal rha tha ki achanak ek din...
 
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Phir Raghvendra thakur ne baba ko dakshina diye aur vida kiye
Note- ab ye log ko yahi chhodte h ab ye log kahani me 18 years pura hone ke bad entry lenge

Idhar Hero side
Wo log delhi me setal ho gye the business bhi start kar diye the sab kuchh achha chal rha tha suresh aura puspa dono aditya ko bahut pyar karte the ye sab aise hi chal rha tha ki achanak ek din...
Ab aage
Subah ka time tha suresh office jane ki taiyari kar rha tha aur aditya so rha tha ki achanak puspa ko chakar aane lga aur bechari gir ke behosh ho suresh usko behosh ho kar girte dekh liya aur o puspa... chilate huye dorkar uske pass gya aur usko utha ke gadi me lekar hospital ki taraf chala gya hospital me puspa ka chekup hone lga kuch der bad use hos aa gya phir doctor aake bola Mubarak ho aap bap banane wale h ye sunkar suresh bahut khus huya aur puspa ke pass jakar uske aankho me dekhte huye bola

Suresh- aaj mai bahut khus hu ki mere ghar me laxmi aane wali h
Puspa- thodi sarmati huyi aapko kaise pata ki laxmi hi aayegi ladka bhi ho sakta h
Suresh- mera dil kahta h mujhe beti hi milegi aur mujhe beti hi chahiye kyuki beta to pahle hi ghar pe h bas ek beti ki kami thi
Puspa- ha aap sahi kah rhe h meri ek beta to h hi mujhe bhi beti hi chahiye mai bhagwan se yahi duya karungi ki beti hi ho kyuki aditya ko bhi khelne ke liye ek bahan mil jayegi

Aaj suresh aur puspa bahut khus the phir dactor se chhuti lekar ghar aa gye suresh ab ghar me ek nokarani rakh liya tha ghar ka kam karne ke liye ab suresh puspa ko kam karne nhi deta tha isi tarah samay bitne lga aaj puspa ko pregnant huye 9 month ho gya tha ab aditya bhi chalne lga tha aur totli aavaj me bat bhi karne lga tha aise hi hasi khusi se inka pariwar chal rha tha ki achanak ek din puspa ko pain start ho gya us samay suresh office me tha udhar puspa ko bahut hi pain ho rha tha idhar suresh ko baichani hone lga usko kam me man hi nhi lag rha tha to socha thora ghar pe bat kar lu phir suresh ghar pe call kiya to uska nokarani phon uthai or boli sahab maidam ko pain start ho gya h aap ghar jaldi aa jaiye phir suresh waha se jaldi hi ghar aa jata h aur puspa ko lekar hospital ke liye nikal jata h

Dusri taraf

Himalay pe kuchh rishi dhyan me baithe the tabhi ek rishi ka dhyan tut jata h aur chehre pe muskan aa jata h jise ek rishi dekh leta h aur puchta h

(Note-ye rishi aur koi nhi guru parsuram h)

Rishi- guruji aaj apke chehre par muskan kyu h abhi to aap dhyan me the
Guruji- mai is liye khus hu putra ki ab wakt aa gya h rakshak ki sakti ke janam ka jo mata parvati ki ansh hogi ab mujhe jana hoga waha phir guru ji waha se gayab ho gye

Idhar hospital me suresh baichani se idhar udhar ghum rha tha udhar puspa ko bahut jyada dard ho rha tha bechari dard se chila rhi thi ki achanak uska dard kam ho gya sath me ek bachi ki rone ki awaj Anne lgi yani bache ka janam ho gya aur bache ko janam lete hi pura room me prakash phial gya aur usi wakt samay ruk gya phir waha pe guru parsuram aa gye aur us bachi ke sar pe hath rakh diye jisse o prakash bachi me jane lga jab sara prakash us bachi me chala gya to guru ji gayab ho gye phir se samay chalne laga bahar suresh ke pass ek narse aayi aur boli Mubarak ho aapko ek pyar si ladki huyi h jise sun suresh khus ho gya aur bhag kar puspa ke pass gya aur bachi ko god me utha liya bachi apne papa dekh muskurane lgi jisse suresh usi me kho gya phir uska dhyan puspa pe gya jo suresh ko dekh kar muskura rhi thi

Puspa- aise kya dekh rhe ho ji
Suresh - dekh rha hu ki meri beti kitni sundar h bilkul tumhari tarah isse najar hi nhi hat rha h
Puspa- (sarmate huye ) dhat ji aap kuchh bhi bolte ho achha aap kya to h n
Sureah- mai maito bahut khus hu puspa aaj mera pariwar pura ho gye thank u puspa mujhe itna pyari ladki dene ke liye aur meri life me aane ke liye aaj mai bahut khus hu
Puspa- ye to mera saubhagya h ho aap ke jaisa pati mujhe mila aditya jaisa beta aur iske jaise pyari beti

Phir hospital se discharge leke suresh aur puspa ghar aa gye aaj unke ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unke ghar me laxmi aayi thi jab ye log ghar me pahuche to aditya dodte huye aa aur apni totali awaj me puchha
Aditya- papa ye ton h
Suresh- beta ye mai tumhare liye dol laya hu
Aditya-ye mela dol aa dya mela dol aa dya mummy mele dol ko mudhe do na
Puspa- abhi nhi beta abhi tum bahut chhote ho jab bade ho jaoge tab tumhe dunga thik h
Aditya- thith h mama pal mudhe dethna h
Phir puspa aditya ko dekhane lagti h aditya bade dhyan se dekh rha tha o bachi bhi aditya ko dekh kar muskura rhi thi
Puspa- suniye aaj guruji ko bol dijiye kal ham apne beti ki name karam karwayenge
Suresh - thik h
Phir suresh guruji ko man hi man yad karta h aur kal name karan ke liye aane ka nimantran deta h isi tarah aaj ka din khatam ho jata h dusre din
Aaj name karan ka din tha aaj guruji aane wale the phir kuchh der bad guruji aa gye suresh ne unhe aasan diya baitne ke liye phir guru ji baitne ke bad bachi ko lane ko bole puspa bachi ko lekar aayi aur guruji ko dedi phir guruji dhyan lagate h aur phir muskutlrate huye bolte h
Guruji- mere ahobhagya jo mai i divya bachi ki kundali aur namkaran kar rha hu tumlog bahut kismat wale h jo tumahare ghar me aise divya bache ka agman huya haur tum dono inke mata pita ho ye ladki me sare gun h ye sarva gun sampun h ye ladki bahut sushil aur shant hogi iske chehre pe hamesa muskan hi hoga ye bahut hi dyalu swabhav ki hogi ise manushya ho ya pashu pakhsi sabse pram hoga ise waise to kabhi gusa nhi aayega aur jadi kabhi gusa aa gya to kisi se bhi santh nhi hogi sivay aditya ke aditya hi ise sant karega tumhari putri me mata parvati ki pratima dikhti h jaise ye unhi ki ansh ko iss liye iska name p se suru hoga

Ye sab aditya badi dhyan se sun rha tha ki achanak uske mukh se palvi nikla papa aur suresh guruji ke bat sun kar bahut hi jyada khus the unhe apne kismat pe bahut hi garva ho rha tha ki achanak aditya ke mukh se palvi sun kar aur bhi jyada khus ho gye
Puspa- are wah aditya beta kitna achha name diya h palvi bahut hi pyara name h
Surwsh- ha puspa tum sahi bol rhi ho aditya ne apne doll ki bahut hi pyara name rakha h palvi

Phir namekaran hone ke bad guruji chale jate h aaj ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unka pariwar pura ho gya tha isi tarah samay bitne lga suresh ka business bhi achha khasa chal rha tha dhire dhire samay bitta gya isi tarah 3 sal bit gya
Aaj se do din bad aditya ka pure 5 sal ho jayega
Ab palvi bhi 3 sal ki ho gyi thi ab suresh ka business bhi bahut badh gya tha ab ye log ka name pura india me nami grami logo me aane lga tha ab inka business india ke top 10 me aane lga tha aise hi aditya rat ko soya huya tha ki achanak jor se chilaya nhi...
 
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Phir namekaran hone ke bad guruji chale jate h aaj ghar me bahut hi khusi ka mahol tha aaj unka pariwar pura ho gya tha isi tarah samay bitne lga suresh ka business bhi achha khasa chal rha tha dhire dhire samay bitta gya isi tarah 3 sal bit gya
Aaj se do din bad aditya ka pure 5 sal ho jayega
Ab palvi bhi 3 sal ki ho gyi thi ab suresh ka business bhi bahut badh gya tha ab ye log ka name pura india me nami grami logo me aane lga tha ab inka business india ke top 10 me aane lga tha aise hi aditya rat ko soya huya tha ki achanak jor se chilaya nhi...
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Aditya bhi school jane laga tha o 2nd standard me padta tha aur palvi ka bhi admition school me ho gya tha aise sab chal rha tha ki ek rat aditya soya huya tha ki achanak pura pasina me bhig gya tha aur bole ja rha tha ki mujhe use bachana mujhe use bachana ki jor se chilaya nhi.. aur uth ke bait gaya or rone laga jor se chilane se suresh aur puspa ka nind tut jata h aur o bhagte huye aditya ke room me aate h aur dekhte h ki aditya pura pasine se bhiga huya h aur data huya h ye dekh puspa uske pass jake use apne gale se lga leti h aur bolti h

Puspa- Kya huya betu tum itne dare huye kyu ho koi bura sapna dekha kya
Aditya- maa o log unhe mar denge maa mujhe unhe bachana hoga maa
Suresh- kon kise mar dega beta batao to aakhir huya kya h
Puspa- aap sant rahiye mai puchh rahi hu na achha betu kya huya kya dekha sapne me jo itna dare huye ho batao mujhe
Aditya- maa maine dekha ki ek aurat ek bache ko lekar bhagi ja rhi h aur kuchh log uska pichha kar rhe h aur o mujhe bachane ke liye bula rhi h tabhi koi use piche se goli mar di please maa mujhe unhe bachana hoga maa
Itna bol aditya phir se rone lga
Suresh- beta sant ho jao kuchh nhi huya h ye bas ek sapna tha sab bhul jao kuchh nhi hoga thik h puspa tum abhi aditya ke pass so jao
Puspa- thik h aap jao mai yahi so jati hu
Phir suresh waha se chala jata h aur puspa aditya ko gale laga ke so jata h aise hi subah ho gya puspa utha gyi aur dekhi ki aditya so rha h to uske sar pe kis kar ke wasroom chali jati h fresh hone idhar suresh bhi uth ke fresh hota h
Nokarani ne breckfast taiyar kar li thi phir sab mil ke breckfast kiye aur apne apne kam me lag gye aditya aur palvi bhi school chale gye
Aise hi aaj ka time bit gya ab dusre din aaj aditya ka pachvi birthday tha yani aaj aditya pure pach sal ka ho gya tha suresh abhi soya huya hi tha ki ek avaj usko chauka diya aur utha ke baith gya ye avaj gurudev ka tha

Gurudev- putra tumhe pata h na aaj aditya ke 5 sal pura ho gya ab wade ke anusar tumhe aditya ko siksha ke liye hame saupna hoga
Suresh- (bujhe man se) thik h gurudev lekin puspa iske liye kabhi nhi manegi
Gurudev- to kya tum ye kahna chahte ho ki puspa vidhi ke vidhan me hastchhep karegi
Suresh- nhi nhi gurudev mera tatparya ye nhi tha mai ye kahna chahta tha ki puspa aditya se bahut pyar karti h o uske bina akeli nhi rah payegi
Gurudev - tumhara kathan satya h putra parantu ye bhi satna h ki aditya ke bhabhisya ke liye aaj use jana hi hoga isliye tum apne patni ko samjhao
Suresh- jo gya gurudev
Gurudev- mai aaj Sam ke samay aaunga tum log adiya ko taiyar kar ke rakhna

Phir gurudev chale jate h phir suresh puspa ko bulaya h aur gurudev se jo bat huya o batata h jise sun ke puspa ko jhatka lga aur aur rone lagi

Puspa- nhi nhi mai apne betu ko kahi nhi jane dungi
Suresh- bat ko samjho puspa aditya ko waha jana hi bhoga isi me sabka bhalai h
Puspa- nhi nhi mai apne betu ke bina nhi rah skti hu mai uske bina jinda Las ban jaungi please mere bete ko kahi nhi bhejo (bechar bilakh bilakh ke rone lagi) mai apne betu ko kahi nhi jane dungi suna apne
Suresh- puspa tum ab aap sawarthi karne lagi tum sirf apne hi bare me soch rahi ho tum ek bar aditya ke bare me soch ke dekho kya tum ye nhi chahti ki mera beta padhe likhe vidwan bane har chij me kushal ho
Puspa- mai bhi sab chahti hu lekin apne betu ko apne se dur karke nhi ye yaha bhi to padh raha h n aur palvi bhi kaise rah payegi uske bina jo kabhi usse alag hi nhi hoti ( yaha batana chahta hu ki palvi aur aditya dono sath hi rahte h dono ek dusre ki jan h )
Suresh- puspa tumhe samjhna hoga tum apne mamta me pad kar uska life nhi barbad kar sakti h aur tum aise kaise bhul gyi aditya mera bhi beta h uske jane se jitna tumhe dukh hoga utna hame bhi hoga aur rahi bat palvi ki to use ham dono mil ke sambhal lenge

Suresh ko bhahut samjhane ke bad jake puspa aditya ko bhejne ke liye taiyar huyi
Subah me sab uth ke fresh huye aur dono aditya ke room me gaye to dekhte h ki palvi aditya ke gale lag ke so rahi h ye dekh dono khus ho gye phir dono aditya ko jagate h sath me palvi bhi jag gyi thi phir sab mil ke aditya ko bithday wish karte h aur naste ke liye dyning table par aate h phir sab mil kar nasta karte h iske bad suresh bolta h

Suresh- aaj mere betu ka 5 birth dey h iss liye ghar pe choti si parti rakhi h ( sab bahut kush hote h ki aaj ghar me parti h phir suresh aditya me ek bomb phirta h)
Suresh- aditya beta aaj se tumhe padhai ke liye dusre sahar jana hoga
Aditya- lekin papa mai yaha bhi to padh rha hu na to dusre sahar jane ki kya jaruri h
Suresh- jaruri beta yaha tum sir padhai kar rhe ho waha tumhe o sab chij ki bhi training hoga jo aage ja kar tumhe jaruri pad sakta h
Aditya- jaisa aap kahe papa
Palvi- mama bhayu kha ja rhe h
Puspa- betu tumhara bhayu padhne ke liye dusre sahar ja rha h
Palvi- nhi mama mai apne bhayu ko kahi bhi nhi jane dungi
Suresh- palvi betu tum apne bhayu ko bahut chahti h na kya tum ye chahti h ki tumhara bhayu padhe nhi aur aage chal kar bada admi na bane aur tumhe kuchh ho to tumhara bhayu tumhe raksha na kare
Palvi- mai sab chahti hu papa lekin mai bhayu ke bina nhi rah sakti mai bhi bhayu ke sath jaungi
Suresh- bat ko samjho palvi aise jid nhi karte
Palvi- nhi mai bhi jaungi matlab jaungi

Itna bol ke uth kar apne room me chali jati h

Suresh- palvi aaj kal bahut jiddi hoti ja rhi h bahut bigad gyi h
Puspa- o abhi bachi h aur apne bhai se bahut pyar bhi karti h iss liye jid kar rhi h
Aditya- papa mai usko samjhata hu

Iske bad aditya upar palvi ke pass jata h to aditya bolta h
Aditya- swity aise gusa nhi karte ab gusa thuk do meri bat suno
Palvi- bhayu aap na bahut gande ho aap mujhe chhod kar jana chahte h
Aditya- kon bol rha h ki mai tumhe chhod kar jana chahta hu mai to hamesha tumhare pass rahunga yaha tumhare dil me
Palvi- nhi bhayu mai bhi chalungi tumhare sath
Aditya- swetu meri bat suno waha mujhe akele hi jana hoga aur tum kya chahti ho ki yaha mummy aur papa akele rahenge
Palvi- palvi lekin bhayu mai apke bina akeli nhi rah paungi
Aditya- tum akeli kaha ho papa aur mummy bhi to h na
Palvi- lekin
Aditya- lekin wekin kuchh nhi meri bat manoge swetu

Iss tarah bahut samjhane ke bad akhir palvi bhi man jati h isi tarah time bita aur ab party ka time aa gya aaj din me hi party rakhi gyi thi kyuki Sam me aditya ko jana bhi tha na isliye

Party bhi dhire dhire katam ho gya phir guru ji aa gye aditya ko le jane phir aditya ko lekar jane lage aaj sab ke aankho me aansu the sab se jyada to palvi ro rahi thi ye dekh kar bechhara aditya bhi rone laga phir guru ji ke bahut samjhane ke bad dono sant huye aur phir aditya apne papa mummy ke pair chhuta or palvi ke gle mila aur gurudev ke sath nikal gya ek nyi manjil ki or
 
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Iss tarah bahut samjhane ke bad akhir palvi bhi man jati h isi tarah time bita aur ab party ka time aa gya aaj din me hi party rakhi gyi thi kyuki Sam me aditya ko jana bhi tha na isliye
Party bhi dhire dhire katam ho gya phir guru ji aa gye aditya ko le jane phir aditya ko lekar jane lage aaj sab ke aankho me aansu the sab se jyada to palvi ro rahi thi ye dekh kar bechhara aditya bhi rone laga phir guru ji ke bahut samjhane ke bad dono sant huye aur phir aditya apne papa mummy ke pair chhuta or palvi ke gle mila aur gurudev ke sath nikal gya ek nyi manjil ki or

Ab aage
Guruji logo ko dikhane ke liye ek gadi se aye unhe chhodne ke liye suresh ja rha tha wo log sahar se nikal ke ek sunsan jagah pe gadi roka fir tino gadi se utre fir aditya apne papa se gle mila aur o log aage ki taraf nikal gye jab guruji dekhe ki ham kaphi dur Nikal aaye h ab hame koi nhi dekh sakta to baba aditya ke hath pakde aur gayab ho gye thode der bad o log ek jagah prakat huye aditya ye dekh kar aascharya chakit ho gya use samajh hi nhi aa rha tha ki o to sahar ke bahar tha yaha kaise pahuch gya ye soch o charo taraf dekhne lga wo waha ke drisya dekh usi me kho gya kitna pyara drisya tha ye ek asram tha asaram ke bagal me ek nadi nikali thi charo taraf ful ke bagiche lge the use aisa lag rha tha jaise o swarg me aa gya ho use o jagah me kuch divyata sa anubhav ho rha tha use rha na gya to akhir usne guruji se puch hi liya
(Ab mai aditya ke jagah mai likhunga)

Mai- he gurudev aap kon h mai yaha kaise aa gya abhi to hamlog sahar ke bahar the phir yaha kaise aur ye jagah kon sa h
Gurudev- are putra sant sant ek hi bar me kitna sawal puchhoge ek ek kar ke puchho
Mai- jo agya gurudev aap kon h
Gurudev- mai parsuram hu aur ye jagah mera asram h aur ye jagah mahendra giri parvat h
Mai- lekin gurudev hamlog yaha aaye kaise abhi to hamlog delhi me the
Gurudev- putra hamlog yaha man ke veg se aaye man ka veg se ham ek pal me ek jagah se dusre jagah ja sakte h aur koi sawal h purtra
Mai- (swal to man me bahut tha lekin bad me puchne ka socha) nhi gurdev
Gurudev- (muskurate huye ) thik h to jao aaram kro subah se tumhara siksha suru hoga

Phir mai guruji ke bataye anusar ek aasram me jake so gya phir subah char baje guruji ne jagaya mai jagne ke bad nadi ke taraf chala gya fresh hone jabai fresh ho ke aaya to dekha ki waha 5 aur log the jinme 3 ladka aur 2 ladki thi guruji ne hame bulaya aur hamara parichay karvaya
Gurudev - putra yaha tumhara 10 salo tak siksha chalega aaj se mere sath sath ye 5 log bhi tumhara guru h ye log bhi tumhe siksha denge
Mai- jaisi apki iksha gurudev
Gurudev- muje to tum jante hi ho mai tumhe saririk chhamata badana shikhaunga jaise dhyan lagana aur tir chalana mai tumhe apne shishya karna se bhi bada dhanurdhar banaunga
Mahesh- ye tumhe sansarik gyan denge jaise ved puran grantha sansar me jitna bhi gyan h ye tumhe sikhayenge
Prakritik- ye tumhe prakritik ke bare me batayenge jaise jadi buti ayurved ka gyan duniya ke sare bimariyo ka ilaj shikhayenge
Saundarya- ye tumhe sansar ke neture ke bare me aur tumhare dharti ke anusar jo bhi gyan h jaise english hindi sanskrit ye sare gyan tumhe denge
Manav- ye tumhe sansar ke har ladai sikhayenge jaise kunfu joodo karata martial arts jitna bhi ladai h sab sikhayenge
Nilesh- ye tumhe astra sastra chalana sikhayenge jaise talvar aur ninja astra

Tumhe roj 4 baje uthna hoga 2 2 ghante sabke pass jake shikhna hoga tuhra pratham do ghanta mera hoga tum aaj se siksha suru kro aur bich bich me pariksha bhi hoga to tum sajya ho putra
Mai- ji gurudev jaisa aap kahe
Gurudev- Jo samne pahad dikh rha h usko usko bis chakar lagao aur ha yad rakhna lagatar 20 chakar lagana h agar tum ruke to fir se ginti karna hoga samjhe
Mai- ji gurudev samajh gya

Asaram se pahad ki duri ek kilomitre ke lagbhag tha
Gurudev - to suru kro

Phir mai waha se dodna start kiya mai 1 chakar 2 chakar 3 charkar pura kar liya chauthe chakar me hafne lga kisi taraf se 6 chakar lagaya aur ruk gya to gurudev mere pass aaye aur bole
Gurudev- tum 6 chakar me hi thak gye putra aise kam nhi chalega tumhe apne aap ko sakht banana hoga tum phir se start kro

Mai phir se dodna satart kiya is bar mai 10 chakar laga ke gir gya phir gurudev mere pass aaye aur dobara fir se suru karnke ko bole mai fir se start kiya isi taraf mai 5 bar me 20 chakar pura kiya aur gir gya 20 chakar lagane me Sam ho gya tha ab mere sarir me itna bhi takat nhi bacha tha ki mai uth saku phir do admi aaye mujhe utha ke asram me le gye fir guru ji ne kadha diya pine ke liye jab piya to lga ki ulti ho jayegi phir bhi kisi tarh pi ke so gya
Next day subah utha to mai apne aap ko fresh mahsus kar rha tha sayad ye kadha ka asar tha phir mai fresh hone nadi me gya aur fresh hoke asram me aaya to gurudev mil gye aur bole
Gurudev - putra tum mere pichhe pichhe piche aao
Mai gurudev ke pichhe chal diya thodi der chalne ke bah ek aisi jagah pe gya ho nadi ke dusri or tha ye jagah ek dam sant tha phir gurudev ne mujhe dhyan lagane ke bare me bataye kaise dhyan lagaya jata h
Phir ek taraf baith kar dhyan lagane lga mera dhyan bar bar tut ja rha tha jab mai dhyan me baithta to mujhe ghar ka yad aane lagta bahut kosish ki dhyan lagane ki lekin dhayan nhi lag rha tha tab mere man me gurudev ki awaj sunai di
Gurudev- putra tum aise kabhi bhi dhyan nhi lag paoge tumhe apne man se bicharo ko nikalna padega tumhe apne man ko sant karna padega
Phir mai bahut prayas kiya lekin mera dhyan nhi lga to mai utha gya aur gurudev se bola
Mai- mujhse nhi ho rha h gurudev
Gurudev- putra aaj pahla din tha is liye pareshani ho rha h tum chinta nhi kro Dhire dhire aa jayega ab tum us pahad ka bis chakar chagaoge
Mai- jo agya gurudev
Mai pahad ka chakar lagane lga is bar bhi bahut dikat huya lekin is bar 3 bar me hi pura kar liya aur jayada thakawat bhi nhi huya
Gurudev- ati utam putra isi tarah pryas karte raho ab tum dusre guruji ke pass jao
Phir mai waha se pacho guruo ke pass aa aur unhe pram kiya
Manav- aditya ab tum mere sath chalo
Mai- ji gurudev
Phir o log chal diye jangal ki or jangal me jake Manav ne mujhe ek kulhadi dete huye bola
Manov- lo ye kulhadi aur tum kuchh lakdi kat ki lao aur tumhe lakdi ek bar me hi kat dena h jab tak lakdi ek bar me nhi kat ta tab tak tumhe katna h samajh gye
Mai- ji gurudev

Phir mai lakdi katne lga mai bahut bar pryas karne ke bad lakdi ek bar me kata mai bahut thak gya tha isi tarah sare guru ke pass ja ja ke 2 ghanta siksha liya ab Sam ho gyi thi aaj mai bahut thak gya fir asram me kuchh fal ka ke pani piya or gurudev se mujhe khadha diya pine aur mai use kisi tarah pike so gya ....
 
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Manov- lo ye kulhadi aur tum kuchh lakdi kat ki lao aur tumhe lakdi ek bar me hi kat dena h jab tak lakdi ek bar me nhi kat ta tab tak tumhe katna h samajh gye
Mai- ji gurudev
Phir mai lakdi katne lga mai bahut bar pryas karne ke bad lakdi ek bar me kata mai bahut thak gya tha isi tarah sare guru ke pass ja ja ke 2 ghanta siksha liya ab Sam ho gyi thi aaj mai bahut thak gya fir asram me kuchh fal ka ke pani piya or gurudev se mujhe khadha diya pine aur mai use kisi tarah pike so gya ....
Ab aage
Next day
So kar uthne ke bad fresh huya aur chala gya gurudev ke bas waha jakar unhe pranam kiya aur phir dono kal wale jagah par chala gya waha jakar dhyan lagane ka pryas karne lga bahut der prayas karne ke bad thoda sa dhyan laga aur bhir tut gya ye dekh gurudev bol
Gurudev- bahut achha putra bahut achha kiya bas aise hi mehnat karte jao ab aaj ke liye itna kaphi h
Mai - jo agya gurudev
Phir waha jane ke bad ab pahad ka chakar lagana tha aaj ek hi bar me bis chakar laga liya ye dekh gurudev bahut kush huye
Iske bad Manav ke pass gya phir unke sath jangal me gya aaj bhi o lakdi katva the aaj mai ek hi war me lakdi kat de rha tha isi tarah se sare guruwo se siksha lete huye aaj ka bhi din nikal gya Sam huyi aur phir wahi rutin khana khana khadha pina aur so jana next day fir se wahi pahucha gurudev ke sath mai dhyan lagaya aaj kaphi der tak dhyan lagaya phir wahi pahad ke pass chala gya fir gurudev bole

Gurudev- putra aaj tumhe 30 minat me 20 chakar lagana h
Mai ye sun kar hang ho gya ki gurudev ye kya kah rahe h ye kaise sambhav h mai ab tak bahut muskil se tin char ghante me 20 chakar lagaya tha phir mai gurudev se bola
Mai- gurudev ye sambhav nhi h mai bahut muskil se 3 ghante me 20 chakar pura karta tha ab 30 minat me kaise sambhav hoga gurudev
Gurudev- putra koi bhi karya ashambhav nhi hota bas use karne ke dridh nischay chahiye aur tum to itne me hi dar gye tumhe to 10 second me 20 chakar lagana h
Mai- kya...
Mai gurudev ke bat sun ekdam hang ho gya
Gurudev- ( muskrurate huye ) aditya tumhe bahut hi bade bade karya karne h tumhe isse bhi kathin kathin karya karne h tum abhi se hi har jaoge to kaise chalega chalo utho aur karya pe lag jao koi bhi karya kathin nhi hota

Phir mair Marta kya n karta lag gya dodne me aaj pura din isi me nikal gya lekin last last tak 30 minat me 20 chakar lga hi liya aaj bhi mai bahut thak gya tha isi tarah sare guruwo se siskha lete huye 1 sal bit gya

1 year bad
Aaj pura 1 sal ho gya tha aaj mujhe dhyan lagana bahut achhi tarah se aa gya aur mai us pahad ka 1 minat me 20 chakar laga leta tha mujhe tir chalana talwar chalana zoodo karata kunfu Matialas arts aa to gya tha lekin perfect nhi huya tha phir dharti ke padhai se laekar ayurved ka gyan tak aa gya tha sare guruwo mujhse bahut khus the
Aaj subah subah uth kar nadi ke taraf gya huya tha fresh hone jab fresh hone ke bad asram ki aur aa rha tha ki pta nhi kya huya ki mai jangal ki taraf jane lga kuch aage gya tha ki mujhe kisi ka chilane ki awaj aaya mai us awaj ki tarf chal diya kuchh dur jane ke bad dekha to ek bagh(tiger) ek hiran ke pichha kar rha tha mai ye dekh kar uske taraf bhaga kuchh dur tak jane ke bad dekha ki bagh us hiran ko pakad liya h mujhe ye dekh kar is hiran par dya aane lga to mai us hiran ke pass aa gya aur chhalang lga ke us bagh ko ek kik mara to bagh thoda piche ho gya ab hiran aur bagh ke bich aa gya tabhi mujhe bahut ascharya hua kyo aaiye jante jaise hi mai bagh ko kik mara to bagh piche ho gya aur hiran ko chhod diya tha lekin ascharya hone ka karan ye tha ki tabhi mujhe ek awaj sunai diya
Awaj- hey manusya kripya mujhe raksha kro is dust se warna ye mujhe mar dega
Ye awaj us hiran ka tha aur mai isi liye ascharya huya tha ek hiran kaise manusya ki awaj me bol sakta h tabhi
Bagh- ye manusya bagh ja yaha se tum mere sikar ke bich mat aao nhi to tumhe mar ke kha jaunga
Mai abhi bhi soch me duba tha ki ye kaise ho sakta h ek pashu manusya ke bhasa me bat kare mai ye soch hi rha tha ki tabhi hiran ki awaj aai
Hiran- meri raksh kro manusya meri raksh kro
Uska awaj sun ke mujhe hos aaya dekha ki bagh us hiran ki or badh rha tha ye dekh mai fir uske bich me aa gya
Mai- tum mere rahte usko kuchh nhi kar sakta h
Bagh- tum me itna dam h jo tum mujhe rok sakte ho mai tumhe aakhri bar bol rha hu mere raste se hat jao abhi tum balak ho mera kuch bigad nhi sakte
Mai- mai pichhe nhi hat sakta kyuki mera dharm h nirbal logo ka madad karana is liye mai aapse bol rha hu aap ise chhod do
Bagh- lagta h tumko bhi marne ki jaldi h
Itna bol bagh mujhpe chhalang lagaya to mai pahle se hi satark tha usko chhalang lagate hi mai side me hat gya aur jamp kar ek kik bagh ko mara jo o thoda piche jakar gira jisse bagh guse me tilmila gya
Bagh- ( guse me) akhir tum is nirbal prani ke liye apne jan kyu dena chahte ho
Mai- kyoki mujhe sikhaya gya h ki mai sada nirbal prani ki raksha karu aur ye mera dharm h
Bagh- to kya tumhra dharm sirf nirbal prani ka jan bachana h chahe o dharm ek bhukhe ko bhukha rakh kar kyu na ho
Mai- nhi aise nhi h mera dharm bhukhe ko khana khilana bhi h
Bagh- to mere raste se hat jao mai bhukha hu aur o mera bhojan
Mai- nhi ye nhi ho skta mai aisa nhi hone dunga mere hote ji tum usko kuchh nhi kar sakte
Bagh- thik h tum use bachana chahte ho aur mai apne bhukh mitane ke liye use marna (bagh kuch der soch kar) ek rasta h tumahare pass use bachane ke liy
Mai- kon sa rasta h
Bagh- uske badle mujhe bhojan chahiye tum lakar do aur tum to jante hi ho mera bhojan mans (meet) hota hua to tum mujhe ise khane do ya mans lakar do
Mai uska bat sun kar soch me pad gya o kah to sahi raha h lekin mai ise bachane ke liye kisi aur ka mans bhi nhi la sakta mujhe soch me dekh kar bagh bola
Bagh- kya hua manusya kya soch rhe ho jaldi kro mujhe bhukh lagi h
Mai- mai soch rha hu tum bol to sahi rhe ho prantu mai mans kaha se lau mujhe mans kanne ke liye kisi ka hatya to karna hi padega na
Bagh- kisi ka hatya kyu krna tum apna hi mans dedi

Hiran- nhi manusya tum aisa nhi karna tumhare jaise nek dil ko is dharti ki avasyakata h is liye mai hi iska bhojan ban sakta hu
 

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