Thriller AJNABEE(Completed)

[Itz Anjum]

Update24




Shlok ne ragini ko peeche kiya

"Hmm yani tujhe pata hai ki mai koun hoon"bol ninku aage badhne laga

Ragini sirf hakki bakki reh kar us shaks ko dekhni lagi
Shlok ko pata tha ki is ladai ko ragini se chupa nahi sakta
Ninku bohut taqatwar hai.harana itna aasan nahi hai

Shlok ne aasman ki aur dekha aur kai bijli ki roshni ninku ki aur lapki

"Humm"ninku muskuraya

Bijli ninku ke sharir ke aar paar chala gaya
Shlok ne rahat ki saans li

"Itna aasan tha??"peecha se awaz aayi aur shlok chaunk pada
Peecha ninku khada tha

Shlok ne jhat se bijli ke speed se ek punch maarna ke liye hawa me haath lehraya lekin use thaam liya ninku ne

"Mujhse ladne ke liye aakash ko ana tha,tujh jaise keede ko to mai yun khatam kar dunga"ninku bola aur

KARRDDD

"Aahhh"shlok ka haath tod diya tha ninku ne

Shlok ne furti ke saath ek kick lagaya lekin ninku ke sar paar chala gaya

"Hmmm maza a raha hai mujhe.bohut maza"ninku bola kisi ke kuch samajh paane se pehle hi

KHACHHHHHHH

peeth me ghuste hue pet se Nikli talwar

"Akkk"shlok ke muh se khoon nikla

"SHLOKKKKKKKK"daudte hue ragini aayi.lekin ek udte hue kick ne ragini ko hawa me uchal kar zameen par gir gayi

"Kaam khatam hua"apni talwar ko apni jagah par rakhte hue ninku bola
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"Kya mast mausam hai,hai na shyam"anju boli

"Hmm"shyam bola aur kaam me laga raha

"Kya hmmmmmm???kuch dino me hi hamara profit badh gaya hai,fir itni tension kyun??"anju boli

Tumhe nahi pata anju ki aane wala toofan kaisa hoga,sabko tahas nahas kar dega,mai to yahan aaya tha us ret ke shaitan se samjhauta karne,use batane ki ainda uska saath nahi doonga
Lekin fir tum mili.tumhara saath mila aur kai log mile jisne mujhe lagbhag naya janm diya
Khair mulakat to uss karni hi hogi

"Dil me mulakat karne ki tamanna ho to sab kuch ho sakta hai shyam"ek awaz ne shyam ko chaunka diya

Saamne usne dekha ki varun a raha tha
Coat,tie aur trouser pehen kar aaya tha

"Chaunk gaya na??socha thoda modern ho jaun"varun muskurate hue bola

"Are shyam tumhara dost hai kya??"anju khush hote hue boli

"Are namaste ji,shyam ka purana dost hoon"haath jodte hue uth khada hua varun

"Abhi chai le aayi"bol anju ander chali gayi

"Hmm achi khasi family plan ban raha hai yahan"anju ki aur dekhte hue varun bola

"Kya chahiye"shyam khada hua aur poocha

"Kuch nahi,bas ek akhiri kaam,mere bhai ko tapkana hai"varun bola

"Mai wahi batane aaya tha ,mai wo kaam nahi karunga .sab kuch chor diya hai maine"shyam bola

"Bhalai ka keeda kat liya hai shayad,mat bhool ki tere aas paas ke logo par is baat ka asar padega,chalta hoon"varun jaane laga

"Are chai lekar aayi hoon aap ja rahe hai??"anju boli

"Fir kabhi"bol muskurate hue varun chala gaya

 

[Itz Anjum]

Update25




Aakash ragini ha haath pakadkar rota raha
7 stiches lage the sar par
Behosh thi.khoon bhi kaafi beh gaya tha

"Maaf.....kar..na aakash.mai rok nahi paaya use"dheere awaz me shlok bola
Kaafi pattiyan bandhi thi poore sharir me

"Koi baat nahi shlok tune koshish to ki.ye sab mere karmo ka fal mil raha hai mujhe"aakash bola

"Poore family ko target kar rahe hain"shlok bola

Aakash chup raha.shlok bhi chup hi raha.achanak dono chaunkte hue ek doosre ko dekhne lage

"MAA??"dono ek saath bol uthe

Aakash ne chhalang lagate hue daud lagai.shayad jeevan ki akhiri daud thi uske liye.maa mandir gayi hui thi.ragini ke liye dua maangne

Aaj kuch bhi ho jaaye,maa ko bachana hi padega
Aakash ne ghadi dekhi.aur deri nahi aur deri nahi
Pasine se bheegte hue mandir ki aur daud raha tha wo

Tabhi uska phone bajne laga

"H hello??"aakash thoda rukte hue phone uthakar bola

"Hmm chote bhai ko bade bhai ka pranam,teri muhboli maa hamare kabze me hai,agar bhalai chahta hai to disha ko lekar hamare paas a ja"varun ki awaz aayi doosri aur se

Aakash ruk gaya.charo taraf se ghira hua tha.usne disha ko usi waqt phone lagaya

"D disha b bohut zaruri kaam hai thoda mandir aaogi.wo ambe maa wali mandir me??"aakash ne guhar lagayi

"Kya baat hai aakash??koi important kaam??"disha ne poochha

"Haan wahi aakar batata hoon"aakash bola
Aur badh gaya mandir ki aur

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"Kya chahte ho tum log??"Mrs malhota boli

"Maaf kijiye maa ji na chahte hue bhi ye sab karna pad raha hai,kya hai ki Aapka bete se kaam hai.purana hisab hai usse"varun bola

"Maalik ka kaam mat bhoolna varun.wo aane wale hai,unhe zinda chahiye aakash"pavitra boli

"Aww pavitra dear,aisa ho sakta hai ki hum apna vaada tod de??mujhe apne pitaji ka sinhasan chahiye aur wo saari shaktiyan chahiye jo mere chote bhai me hai,fir jo karna hai kar lena"varun bola

"Hah pehli Baar bhai prem dekh rahi hoon"pavitra varun ka mazak udate hue boli

"Apne kaam se matlab rakho to zyada behtar hoga pavitra"varun bola

"Ye sab galat hai varun"shyam bola

"Sikhane ke liye dhanyavad,aage dhyan rakhunga.khair aakhiri baar saath kaam karne me kaisa lag raha hai?"varun bola

Shyam chup raha aur gusse ko pee gaya

Shouji aur ninku muskurane lage

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"Disha sorry"aakash bola

"Kya hua aakash??yahan achanak bulaya aur aate hi sorry bolne lage??"disha boli

Aakash ne na chahte hue sab dheere dheere bolne laga

"Bas itni si baat??pehle hi keh dete"disha boli
Tumhare liye jaan bhi de doon aakash.tum kya ho mere liye tumhe pata nahi

"Mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga disha mera vishvas karna"aakash bola aur disha ka haath apne haath me le aage badh gaya mandir ki aur

Saamne kai log khade the

"Maa??"aakash bola aur daudne laga ki varun ne rok diya

"Ch ch ch"sabse pehle mandir me jao chote bhai mandir ke ander

Aakash ko malum tha kya hoga,uski saari shakti usse cheen jayegi

"Wada karo maa ko aur disha ko kuch nahi karoge"aakash bola

"Promise"Varun hola

Aakash ne ek aakhiri baar sabko dekha aur mandir ki aur jaane laga

"Beta...."mrs malhota ne awaz lagai lekin kisi ne suna nahi

Mandir ke ander pair rakhte hi Aakash ke sharir se kaala dhuan nikalne laga
Aakash ne aankhen band kar di.uske peeth me do hare aur kaale rang ka nishan nikalkar varun ki aur jaane laga

"Ha ha ha .......sarv shaktiman"varun ki hasne ki awaz charo aur goonjne lagi

"M...aa ko......chor.....d.....o"kamzoro ke karan aakash wahi mandir ke farsh par let gaya

"Kali shaktiyon ka maalik tera beta nahi hai,wo mera bhai hai.jiski andheri shaktiyon ke kaaran andhere ka rajkumar tha wo.lekin wahi shaktiyan mujh me a gayi hai."bol varun ki hasne ki awaz aur badhne lagi

Haatho se kaale dhuen ne ek chaku ka roop le liya aur

KHACHHHHHHH

pet ne ghus chuki thi wo kali chaku.mrs malhotra wahi baith gayi

"MAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"aakash chillaya

"Chor mujhe,chor mujhe kamine"disha chillane lagi
Lekin uska haath pakde rakha shouji ne

"Chalo baaki ka kaam pavitra par chorte hai,aur jis jis ko aakash par apna haath aazmana hai wo mandir jakar peet sakta hai use"varun bola

Kai gunde daudkar chale gaye shaktiheen aakash ko peetne ke liye

Maar khata hua aakash ne apni aankhen band kar di.khoon se poora chehra sana hua tha haath me,pet me sar me laath ghoose pad rahe the.adhmara sa ho chuka tha

"M...aa.....ko....ba....chana ...hai"itna hi bol paya aakash
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MANSAROVAR
Kaali gufa me ek andhere me baitha hua shaks sab dekh raha tha
Purane din yaad a gaye use

"Itne khoon kharaba ke baad aur kuch nahi bachta tumhari shakti sab ki jad hai.aaj se mai ise shrapit karta hoon"andhera shaks bola

Ek ladka chupchap khada tha

"Ye Shrap apne aap tabhi tootega,jab tum kisi ke liye apni jaan de doge,apne se zyada doosro ki parvah karoge aur tumhe sab dil se apnayenge"bol us lambe chaude shaks ne ek laathi sa zameen me ghans diya

"Ye Shrap dand hai.jab wo saari baat amal hogi.ye laathi apne aap toot zameen se wapas a jayegi"bol shaks wapas gufa me chala gaya

Wahi yaad karke andhere me baitha hua shaks ne laathi ki aur dekha

KARRR KARRRRRRDDDDDDDD

Laathi toot chuka tha ,shaks muskuraya

 

[Itz Anjum]

Update26



Aakash ke upar maar padti ho rahiekin na usme taqat thi,aur nanhi jaan ki un maar ko rok sake

"Ha ha aaj ise khatam karke hi dum lenge"ek gunda bola

"Ha ha Hume rokne Wala koun hai"doosra gunda bola

Door khadi ek ladki ye sab dekh rahi thi

"Sorry Bhai lekin Mujhe varun ka saath dena hi hoga,kyunki wahi hai jo papa ki jagah lega,aur Mai bhi is taqat se apni taqat badhaungi"khud man hi man bolkar wo ladki dheere dheere aage nikal gayi

Chupchap sirf ye ladki nahi dekh rahi thi ye sab
Ek vriddh bhi ye sab dekh raha tha ye sab

"Samay a gaya"bol vriddh ne apne sharir me odhe hue chadar ko hawa me uchal diya

Chadar udte hue mandir me devi maa ko poori tarah se dhakte hue ruk gaya

"Kabhi kabhi bhagwan ko bhi aankhen band karni padti hai,buddham sharan gachhami"aankhen band karke vriddh aage badh gaye

"Ha ha ha,lekin shekhu ye baadal kyun itna mandra rahe hai aasman par???"wahi gunda doosre se bola

"Haan yaar aasman poora kaala ho raha hai"doosra gunda bola

Aasman kaala nahi ho raha tha.aakash ke ghaav bhi bhar rahe the aur uska saara sharir bhi kaala ho raha tha

"Kamini......kutto........sak ke sab marenge "ek awaz going uthi

Sab ke sab sakte men a gaye.aakash ke ghaav bhar rahe the
Aur hare rang ka dhyan sab ghaav bhar raha tha

"B bhago re......"sab gunde bhagne lage

Aakash ke sharir se bohut zyada kaala dhuan nikalne laga aur sab gundon ko nigalne laga

AAKKK

AIIIIIIII

B BACHAOOOOOOOOO

kuch hi pal me sab ke sab gundon ko dhuan nigal gayi


Aakash ka sharir sharir nahi tha
Aakash poora kaala ho gaya tha.aur peeth par hare rang ki kuch aakritiyan thi

Mrs malhotra ke paas gaya aur unki sharir ko utha kar apne god ne lekar chillaya

MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

"Put your hands up,you are under arrest"ek awaz ne aakash ko peecha mudne par majboor kar diya

Police ne gher liya tha use

"Chupchap chalo hamare saath "police inspector ki awaz sunkar aakash khada hua aur apna haath zameen par rakh diya

Dheere dheere kuch aakritiyan zameen se nikal aayi

"Fire"inspector ke Bolte hi saath sabka bandook aag ugalne lagi

Lekin aakash tak pohunchne se pehle hi kaale dhuen me badalne lagi

157 aakritiyan jhuk kar apne maalik ka aadesh sunkar khade ho gaye

"Andhere ka shahanshah hone ke naate sabko hukm deta hoon,mere bhai tak le chalo,raste me sabkuch khatam karo"aakash bola

Do aakritiyan ne police walo par hamla bol diya aur kuch pal me sab police wale bhag khade hue

Aakash jaane hi laga tha ki

"Bohut din bad mila tu mujhe ,ab dekh kya karta hoon tere saath"haath kata hua ek aadmi bola

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"U u use pitaji ki shaktiyan mil gai....k kaise"varun ne apna haath sar par rakh diya

Disha ko kuch bhi samajh nahi a raha tha.lekin itna pata tha ki varun thoda ghabraya hua hai

"An pata chalega tujhe.aakash ki maa ko maara hai tune,iski saza to poori milegi"disha boli

CHATAAAAAAAAK

ek thappad ne disha ko zameen par gira diya

"Usse pehle uska purana dushman use khatam kar dega,wo bhi tere saamne"varun bola

Disha kuch nahi bol pati sirf TV par dekhti rahi

 

[Itz Anjum]

Update27 Final




Shaks ne aakash ke upar hamla kar diya

Ek baar se aakash ke chehra pighal gaya.aur pighalte pighalte poora pighal gaya

Shaks khush hua.aaj khatam hua aakash uske apne haath se

KHACHHHHHHHHHHH

"YAHHHHHHHHHHRRFGGGGGGGG"shaks chillaya
Uska doosra haath katkar door ja gira tha

Aakash ke haath ne kaala sa talwar ka roop le liya tha

Isse pehle ki wo shaks kuch samajta aakash ke sharir se kai saare kaale bhale ya shaks ki aur badhe aur

KHACHHHHHHH
KHACHHHHHHH

POORE sharir ko khokhla kar diya

"Ha ha ha tu kya samjhta hai mujhe maarna itna aasan hai??"shaks bola

"Jaanta hoon"aakash bola

Aur isse pehle ki shaks kuch samajh paata

"Ye kya ho raha hai meri poori taqat kam rahi hai,sharir jal raha hai.nahi nahiii nahiiiiiiii"shaks ka sharir jalne laga tha

Shaks ke sharir me ghuse bhale aakash ke sharir me wapas samane lage

Andhera aur badh raha tha.poore area me raat ka vatavaran chane laga
Aakash ka sharir isi andhere me kho gaya

Aur hawa ki gati ke saath varun ke aade tak pohunch gaya

"Wash ustaad sahi time pe aaye ho"shouji bola

Aakash ke sharir se Kaali rekha shouji ki aur badhi

CUTTTTT

ek tez talwar ne use jaat diya

"Ninku ki talwar kuch bhi jaat sakti hai,kuch bhi"ninku bola

Aakash ne chutki bajai
Aur uske 157 ladaku khade ho gaye

"Dono Ko khatam karo"bol aakash badh gaya aage

Shouji aur ninku uljhe rahe un ladaku Yoddhaon ke saath aakash ki Kaali parchai varun ke paas jaane lagi

"Pavitra,shyam roko ise"Varun chillaya

Pavitra aur shayan ke kuch samajh paane se hi poora andhera ho gaya
Kisi ko kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha

"Ye meri duniya hai,aur meri duniya me tum sab ko mout milegi"ek awaz aayi

Kuch der baad andhera kam hua to pavitra aur shyam zameen me gire hue tha

Varun ladne ko taiyyar ho gaya lekin...uske sharir dheere dheere fatne lagi aur ret nikalne laga usse

"Teri saari akad khatam varun ab tu marega"aakash bola

Varun tadapne laga.disha daud kar aakash ki aur aayi

Lekin aakash ne ek baar kiya aur disha bhi zameen me gir gayi

"Ab poori duniya andhere me hogi,suraj kabhi nahi nikalega"aakash aankhen band ki.andhera badhne laga aur charo aur failne laga

"Bas"achanak aakash ke sar par ek haath laga.jisme thandak thi.apnapan tha

"Bas shaant"wahi vriddh jo itne dino se dikh rahe the

"Shaant ho jao"vriddh fir bole aur Kamaal ki baat hai ki aakash ki aankhen band ho gayi.sharir ka rang badalne laga.andhera charo aur kamne laga

Dheere dheere Aakash ka sharir bhi shaant hokar zameen me gir gaya
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"Kya ye sahi hai aakash??"amit malhotra bole

"Haan papa,yahi sabke liye sahi hoga"aakash bola

"Lekin beta mai tere bina..."mrs malhotra bed me lete hue boli

Pata hai maa lekin meri wajah se aap logo par wapas koi khatra na aaye isliye ye kadam utha raha hoon Maa.aakash ne soch samajhkar decision liya tha

"Aakash mai bhi saath jaana chahti hoon"disha boli

Aakash muskuraya aur disha ko isharo haan kar diya

Shlok wahi reh gaya.ragini ke saath lagav sa ho gaya tha

Shyam aur anju ne shaadi kar li thi.ab dono us dhabe ko ek acha sa restaurant bana chuke the
Kai baar ragini aur shlok jaate the waha

Golu shahar chor padhne delhi chala gaya

Pavitra ka koi ata pata nahi tha,aur aakash ki behen bhi gayab ho gayi thi

Varun ko bandi banake vriddh ne waise hi samander me daal diya tha ki kisi ko na maloom chale

Aakash ko ab nayi zimmedari nibhani thi kyunki uske papa ne apni kursi chor di thi.disha ke saath mansarovar rehne laga aakash.lekin kahan??kisi ko koi khabar nahi thi

Har mahine ek khat aata Tha malhotra parivar ko.jisme sab kuch likha rehta tha.haal chala bhi poocha jaata tha

Lekin aakash kabhi nahi aaya is shahar me.shayad uska beta hi aakar apne dada aur dadi ke saath reh payega

THE END

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[Itz Anjum]

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[Avnish]

nice story brother

 

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nice story brother

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