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Note : I Am Not Original Writer, It's CnP Story From Internet.
Credit Goes To Original Writer : Swaraj
Credit Goes To Original Writer : Swaraj
WONDERFULUpdate #3
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Komal ne durga mata ka photo seene par rakhte hue foot foot kar rone lagi
Kya galti hai uski??? yahi ki bin maa baap ki aulad hai??
Fir maa durga to maa hai na???
Kya maa sirf naam ke liye hai??
Dil se maanti thi maa ko lekin maa??? aur kitna sehna padega???
Kya saari zindagi??? agar aisa hai to aisa hi sahi
THAK THAK
"Koun??" Kalavati ne darwaza khola
4 log khade the .
"Sir ne bulaya hai girdhari ko.. abhi ke abhi chalo" ek aadmi bola
Girdhari jo gaadi me baith kar Chale gaye
Ek choti office me girdhari ko lagaya gaya
"Aao aao girdhari, bolo kaise ho??" Secretary bola
Saamne yash khada tha ulti aur ghumkar
"Yash sahab is factory ko bech rahe hai girdhari, unki maali haalat thik nahi hai, diwaliya hone wale hai.. lekin jaane se pehle wo tumhara karza maaf kar sakte hai.. lekin shart hai ek" Secretary fir bola
"Shart....."girdhari bola
"Apni bhatiji komal ki shaadi karni hogi yash sahab se" Secretary bola
Girdhari wahi zameen par baith gaya, ye shaadi nahi sauda hai sauda, waise bhi yash acha aadmi nahi hai
Kamina, harami, kitni gaali di jaaye kam hai
Lekin wo Komal se shaadi karna hi kyun chahta hai???
"Kya kehte ho???" Secretary bola
"M..mujhe samay chahiye" Bol girdhari jaane laga
"Girdhari??" Yash ki awaz aayi is baar
Girdhari ruk gaya
"Mujhe ladki ki aur se haan chahiye, wo bhi kal tak.. mai wapas USA ja raha hoon" Yash bola
Girdhari jitni jaldi ho sake wahan se nikal gaya
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"Kya ??" Khushi ke maare ashok saraf uthkar khade ho gaye
"Haan sir, lekin ladki mamuli ghar ki hai" Doosri aur se awaz aayi
"Sach ahmed tumne aaj mujhe ek bohut badi khushkhabri di hai" Ashok bola
"Haan sir jab se wo manhoos sahab ki zindagi se gayi tab se sahab aise ho gaye... warna...." Ahmed ne khud ko rok liya rone se
"Sab bhool jao ahmed.. shaadi me koi rukavat nahi aani chahiye" Ashok bola
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Girdhari jab ghar aaye kalawati apne bachon ke saath baaton me busy thi
Chupchap chair me baitha gaye girdhari
"Chachaji paani" Komal boli
Girdhari ne ek nazar Komal par daali.. aajtak jo bhi bola gaya is bachi ko.. kabhi mana nahi kiya isne
Lekin ye kaise bol payenge giridhar
Ek Jaanwar se Komal ki shaadi karwane ka matlab hai is bachi ki zindagi barbad karna
Diwaliya hone ka matlab raaste me aa jayega yash.. saath me Komal bhi
"Kya baat hai chachaji??" Komal ne poochha
"Kuch nahi beta..... yash sahab ne hamare saare karz ko chukane ka Wada kiya hai" Giridhar bole
"Ye to bohut khushi ki baat hai.. mai to dar rahi thi ki mere us bartav ke wajah se aap ko sunayenge lekin..." Komal boli
"Poori baat suno komal unhone kaha hai ki meri naukri bani rahegi, karz chukta hoga lekin ek shart hai" Giridhar bole
Komal chup rahi
"Tumhe yash se shaadi karni hai" Giridhar dheere se bole
Komal ne aankhen band kar di
AMAZING DEARUpdate #4
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"maine soch liya hai chachaji, mai ye shaadi karungi" Komal boli
Giridhar ne dekha Komal ki aankhon ke neechi halki si kaali ho gayi hai
"Beta yahan aakar baith mere bagal me" Giridhar bola
Komal aakar baith gayi giridhar ke bagal me.. giridhar ne Komal ke sar par haath fera.. pata nahi kab tak is bachi ke saath anyay hota rahega
Nahi.. apne fayde ke liye wo is ladki ke saath kuch nahi hone denge
"Beta tujhe pareshan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai.. mai kuch na kuch kar hi loonga is karze se chutkara paane ke liye, waise bhi wo aadmi diwaliya hone wala hai uske saath shaadi ke baad tera kya hoga??" Giridhar bola
"Aapne mujhe apnaya pyaar diya chachaji, padhaya likhaya jitna aapke samarth me tha, lekin please mujhe ye karne dijiye, mai padhi likhi hoon kuch na kuch karke apna ghar bacha hi loongi" Komal uth khadi hui
"Mujhe us aadmi se ek baar milna hai" Komal boli
Giridhar ne Komal ki aur dekha, uski patni aur uski betiyan hamesha se us par bojh bani rahi lekin Komal hi hai jisne aaj ek beti hone ka farz nibhaya
"Bhagwan teri jaisi beti mujhe har janm me de beta" apne dono hathon se aashirvad dete waqt giridhar ki aankhen nam thi
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Yash Apne factory ke office me baitha hua tha
"Haan wahi plan hai.. dekhte hai kya hota hai" Phone par yash baat kar raha tha
"Sir a girl just came to visit you" Ek ladki ne yash ke kamre ka darwaza knock karte hue poochha
Yash ne door se hi haathon ke ishare se mana kar diya
"Sir her name is komal.. insisting on meeting you" Ladki boli
Yash ruk gaya
"Baad me call karta hoon rohan" Bol phone kaat diya yash ne
Saamne Komal khadi thi
Ek sasti si salwar suit me.. bloody cheap Yash muskuraya.. lekin chehra ek dum naam ki tarah Komal hai
Kitna gora rang, laal hont aur khoobsoorat sa chehra.
"Giridhar chacha ne jo kaha wo sach hai kya??" Komal ne yash ki aankhon me aankhen daal kar poocha
Saamne khadi ladki chaunk gayi.. aaj tak kabhi kisi shaks ne himmat nahi hui yashvardhan ke aankhon me aankhen daal kar baatein karne ki
Lagta hai ladki ka time poora ho gaya
"Haan sab sahi suna" Yash bola
"In that case kuch cheezein clear karna chahti hoon" Komal boli
"Bolo" yash bola
"Pehli shart, shaadi ke baad bhi job karna chahti hoon" Komal boli
"Soch samajh kar bolo ladki....saraf khandan me kisi ne aajtak..." Yash ki baatein khatam hone se pehle hi Komal ne rok diya
"Naam ladki nahi Komal hai, doosri shart aap ye factory band nahi karenge, chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye" Komal boli
"Tumhe to pata hai ki mai diwaliya ho raha hoon" Yash bola
"Pata hai.. itna bhi pata hai ek factory aap afford kar hi sakte ho, aur meri Teesri shart ye shaadi simple hogi, aur shaadi ka kharcha mai khud uthaungi" Bol yash ke kuch samajhne se pehle Komal ne apne bag se paiso ki gaddi nikal kar yash ki haatho me thama diya
"Ye 50,000 hai, isi paison se shaadi hogi" Bol Komal chali gayi
Yash kuch der ke liye robot ki tarah khada raha paise haatho me liye
Saare staff ki yash ke saamne fat jaati thi.. lekin Komal ka yash par bhari pade dekh sab idhar udhar dekh muskurane lage
Yash gusse se kaampne laga
"HOW DARE YOU KOMAL SHARMA.. I'LL MAKE YOUR LIFE HELL JUST WATCH" Gusse se kaampte yash ne apne aap se kaha
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Komal factory se nikalkar apni scooty liye ja rahi thi ki ek car saamne se aakar ruk gayi
"Komal??" car se ek ladki nikal kar aayi aur Komal ke saamne khadi ho gayi
"Pra....kriti??? itne saalon baad???" KOMAL muskurate hue boli
"Are bhai abhi abhi is shahar me aayi hoon, USA me padh rahi thi, tu bata" Prakriti ne poochha
"Bas yahi ek school me padha rahi hoon" Komal ne haskar kaha
"Hmm sun na ek kaam kar aaj mere papa ka birthday party hai, tujhe bhi aana hai samjhi??" Prakriti boli
"Arey nahi, tera birthday hota to baat alag thi, tere papa ki birthday party me mai kya karungi?? waise bhi tere papa shahar ke nami logo me ek hai" Komal boli
"Aana to padega hi, acha abhi chalti hoon.. bye" Bol prakriti gaadi me baith gayi
Komal haskar scooty ko lekar aage badh gayi
Gaadi me baithi prakriti ke chehre par ek kutil muskan tair gayi
"Bachpan se tujhse badla lene ka aaj mauka mila hai Komal ki bachhi, ab dekh party me teri izzat ki kaise dhajjiyan udati hoon" Prakriti man hi man bol muskurane lagi
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Komal party me jab pahunchi tab raunak dekhne layak thi
"Are koun hai waha?? Jao yahan se" Chaukidar ki awaz ne Komal ko rok diya
"Aap galat samajh rahe hai, mujhe prakriti ne bulaya tha" Komal boli
"Prakriti madam bol ladki, waise bhi madam ka tujh jaisi ladki ka bulana samajh me nahi aata" Chaukidar bola
Komal chup rahi kuch der tak.. uske paas prakriti ka number bhi nahi tha.. bas address tha.. yun bina mile jaana thik nahi laga Komal ko.. chaukidar ne ghadi dekhi aur ek ghante baad Komal ko bola
"Ae ladki ander ja, madam ne bulaya hai"
"Pata nahi kaise kaiso ko madam bulati hai party me" Doosra chaukidar bola aur dono chaukidar hasne lage
Komal sar jhukakar ander aayi
"Are ye koun aya hai, dekh ke hi bhikhari si lag rahi hai"
"Ise ander kisne bulaya hai??"
"Yuk chi"
Tarah tarah ke kataksh bhare swar goonj rage the party me komal se aur nahi raha gaya wo jaise hi wapas mudne ko hui ki...
"Are komal ?? aja aja, ladies and gentlemen.. ye hai meri saheli Komal" Prakriti boli
Komal ne prakriti ki aur dekha aur muskurai.. prakriti bhi muskura uthi.
"Jab hum dono school me the to ye mujhse bohut aage thi.. mai sirf ek average student bankar reh gayi thi" Prakriti ne bolna shuru kiya
"Lekin fir maine haar nahi maani kadi mehant se apna mukam hasil kar liya, aur aaj Ek multibrand company me architect hoon" Prakriti boli
"Aur ye madam ek government school me bache padhati hai" Prakriti ke Bolte hi saare log hasne lag gaye
Komal ke aansu bahte gaye, itni bezzati karwane aayi thi yahan???
"Are ye gift to dekho" Prakriti ne Komal ke hathon se gift cheen liya
"Ek hanky hai saste wali ispar isne kuch embroidery ka kaam kiya hai" Prakriti ne sabko hanky dikhayi aur zameen par fenk diya
"Arey beta tu ready nahi hui.. dekh ek bohut khaas mehman bas 2 minute ke liye yahan aa raha hai please gadbad mat karna" Prakriti ke papa bole
"Wo aa raha hai?? papa i'm super excited" Prakriti chahakte hue boli
Komal wahan se apna hanky lekar jaane hi lagi ki
DHAKK
Ek dhakka laga aur sannata chha gaya poori party me
Komal ne apna sar pakda saamne yash khada tha
"Is ghatiya party me aane ki kya zaroorat thi??" Yash ne Komal ki aur dekhkar kaha
Party me sannata abhi bhi barkarar tha
"Tum meri hone wali biwi banne ja rahi ho komal, aur ye hanky??mere liye??" Yash ne hanky apne pocket me rakh liya
"Mere paas faltu ka time nahi hai keshav ji, ye deal tabhi hoga jab aap meri shart manenge" Yash bola
"J j ji zaroor,b beta Yash ji aur unki hone wali biwi ke saath baatein karo mai abhi aaya" Bol prakriti ke papa ne daud lagai
Prakriti ko kaato to khoon nahi, ye sab kya hai?? do kaudi ki ladki yash ki patni banegi??
Damn it
Yash ne Komal ko apne se chipka liya to Komal ne gusse se yash ki aur dekha
"Kya kar rahe hai aap" Dheere se lekin gusse se Komal boli
"Photographers photo le rahe hai isliye karna pad raha hai samjhi" Yash bhi dheere se bola
"Lagta hai deal cancel karna padega, no time.. bye guys saara news Kal press conference me rohan aapko denge unse sawal jawab kar lena, chale darling" Bol yash ne Komal ka haath pakda aur chal pada
Raaste me do chaukidar apna chehra chhupate dikhai diye Komal ko
"Sir ye wahi hai jisne madam ko tang kiya tha" Ek aadmi bola
"Keshav ko bolo dono ki chutti kare tabhi deal ke baare me sochenge, gaadi nikalo" Yash ne ghadi dekhi
"Time nahi hai.. abhi bhi hai chalo shopping karte hai" Yash bola
"Aap diwaliya hone par bhi shopping kar rahe hai?? apni life style nahi chor rahe hai?? kaise insan hain aap?? maine socha tha ki mai bhi aapka haath bataungi naukri karke lekin aap...." Komal ka gussa badhte ja raha tha
"Madam ko pata nahi hai kya??" Rohan bola
"Shayad nahi" Doosra aadmi haste hue bola.. komal ne use gusse se dekha to wo serious ho gaya
"Madam aapko Kya lagta hai yashvardhan saraf kabhi kangal ho sakta hai??" Rohan ne fir haste hue bola
"Wo to bas ek test thi jisme sab ladkiyan fail hoti thi.. aap paas hui, idea ye tha ki yash sir ke paise ko dekhkar koi inse shaadi na kare" Rohan bola
Komal kuch bolne ja rahi thi ki yash aa gaya aur sab chup ho gaye
Komal gaadi me ghuste hi aabhas ho gaya ki koun si gaadi me baithi hui hai
Sab kuch tha gaadi me, bar, tv, sofa, chair sabkuch
Lekin use isse koi Matlab nahi tha.
Wo sirf yash ko dekhti ja rahi thi
Aaj is aadmi ne hi uska maan samman bachaya tha
Lekin hai bohut kameena.
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