Horror BHANGARH KI VO RAAT

[JATBABA]

UPDATE #2


AB RAJ KUCH BOLNE HI CHAHTA THA KI SIMRAN NE USKI JEANS UTAR DI AUR USKE 8' K LUND KO MUH M LEKAR CHUSNE LGTI HAI….. VO BILKUL EK PROFESSIONAL RANDI KI TARAH RAJ KA LUND CHOOS RHI THI….. KUCH DER CHOOSNE K BAAD RAJ JHAD GYA….. ABHI VO SIMRAN KI BUR PR KISS KRNE K LIYE SIMRAN KO NANGA KR RHA THA KI TABHI KOI DARWAJE PR AAJATA HAII AUR DARWAJE K BHAR AUR KOI NHI RAJ KA BHAI THA, AB SIMRAN GUSSE M KAPDE PHEN LETI HAI AUR DARWAJA KHOLNE HI WALI HOTI HAI KI TABHI AACHANAK UNKE BATHROOM SE KOI AAWAJ AATTI HAI JISSE VO DONO DARR GYE….

AB AAGE….

BATHROOM SE HUI AAWAJ SE DONO RAJ AUR SIMRAN DARR JATE HAI. RAJ SIMRAN KO DOOR KHOLNE BHEJTA HAI AUR KHUD BATHROOM CHECK KRNE JATA HAI……. ABEEE ISKI MAA KO CHODU… BOLTE HUE RAJ EK BILLI KO MAARNE KE LIYE DAUDTA HAI… YE SAB DEKH KR SIMRAN AUR HARSH DONO JOR JOR SE HASNE LAGTE HAI

BILLI KO DEKH KR SIMRAN KI JAAN ME JAAN AATI HAI… VHI SHRUTI AUR RAHUL KE ROOM ME DEKHE TO RAHUL SOFE PR BETHA HAI AUR APNE PHONE M KISI LADKI SE CHAT KR RHA HAI AUR YE LADKI AUR KOI NHI RAHUL KI LOVER HAI ARUSHI (AGE 21 RAJ KI CLASSMATE HAI AUR COLLEGE KI SABSE HOT AND SEXY LADKI HAI.)

ARUSHI SE CHAT KRTE HUE RAHUL SMILE KR RHA THA JO BAAT SHRUTI NOTICE KR LETI HAI AUR CHUPKE SE RAHUL KE PICHE AATI HAI AUR CHECK KRTI HAI TO USKO PTA CHALTA HAI KI ACTUALLY RAHUL ARUSHI KE SAATH SEX CHAT KAR RHA THA AUR SAATH KI SAATH VIDEO CALL KRKE ARUSHI KO VIDEO CALL KR STRIP KRNE KE LIYE MAJBOOR KR RHA THA…

ACHANAK SE RAHUL KA DHYAN SCREEN SE HATTA HAI TO USKO PTA CHALTA H KI SHRUTI BHI ARUSHI KA NUDE SHOW DEKH RHI HAI TO VO JLDI SE CALL CUT KR DETA HAI JISSE ARUSHI SAMJH JATI HAI KI SHRUTI AAS PASS HI HAI AS SHRUTI AUR ARUSHI BEST FRIENDS HAI PR FIR BHI ARUSHI NE SHRUTI SE YE BAAT CHUPAI THI PR ARUSHI KO AAJ TAK YE NHI MALUM KI SHRUTI KO YE BAAT KA PTA HAI KI ARUSHI AUR RAHUL RELATIONSHIP MAI HAI……

RAHUL DARTE HUE PICHE DEKHTA HAI TO GUSSE MAI SHRUTI KHADI THI AUR VO RAHUL KO JO CHEEJ HAATH M AAI USSE HI PEETNA SHURU KR DETI HAI….BECHARE RAHUL KI HALAT DEKH EK BAAR KE LIYE KISI PATHHAR DIL KA DIL BHI BHAR AATA KYUKI SHRUTI IS TIME ITNA GUSSA THI KI VO RAHUL KO MAARTE HUE RO RHI THI…. USKE RONE KI AAWAJ ROOM SE BHAR JA RHI THI AUR TABHI ROOM MAI RAJ HARSH AUR SIMRAN ENTER HOTE HAI.

SHRUTI KI AAKHO M AASHU DEKH RAJ RAHUL KO MAARNE KE LIYE AAGE BADHTA HAI KI HARSH USE ROK DETA HAI AUR PYAR SE SAB PTA KRNE K LIYE BOLTA HAI.. VHA SIMRAN SHRUTI KO US ROOM SE BHAR LE AATI HAI TAB SHRUTI ROTE HUE SIMRAN KO SAB BTA DETI HAI JISE SUNKR EK BAAR TO SIMRAN KA BHI DIMAG KHARAB HO JATA HAI…

SIMRAN : KYA RAHUL NE SACH ME ITNI GIRI HUI HARQAT KRI??

SHRUTI : HN SIMRAN AUR AAJ VO IS HADD TAK GIR GYA KYA PTA FUTURE M KIS LEVEL TAK GIREGA YE INSAAN.

SIMRAN : MUJHE AAJ HI RAJ AUR HARSH SE IS BAARE M BAAT KRNI CHAIYE…{AB SHRUTI NE ESA KYA BTAYA KI SIMRAN BHI RAHUL SE NARAJ HAI VO BAAT TO SHI TIME AANE PR BTA DI JAEGI}

SIMRAN JALD HI RAJ AUR HARSH KO CALL KRKE APNE ROOM M BULATI HAI AUR SAARI BAATE SACH SACH UN DONO KO BTA DETI HAI JISE SUNKR DONO KO ARUSHI AUR SHRUTI KE LIYE BHOT BURA LGTA HAI AUR VO TURANT RAHUL KE ROOM M JAKR ROOM KO ANDER SE BAND KR LETE HAI

RAJ : KYA BE MADARCHOD TU APNE AAP KO BHAGWAN SAMJHTA HAI KYA JO ITNI LADKIYO KI LIFE SE KHELTA HAI

RAHUL : BHAI TU KYA BOL RHA HAI MUJHE KUCH SAMJH NHI AARHA

RAJ : TAAAADDDAAAAKKKKKK

RAHUL : AAAAAHHHHHHHHH, ABE SALE MAAR KYU RHA HAI HAI……AAAAAHHHHHHH

RAJ : TAAAAADDDDDAAAAKKKK, BHEN K LODE TU MERI SHRUTI KI LIFE KE SAATH KHELEGA TERI MAA KO CHODU BHEN K LUND

ITNA BOLTE HI RAJ AUR HARSH DONO RAHUL KO MARNE LGTE HAI AUR DEKHTE HI DEKHTE VO BEHOSH HO JATA H JISKE BAAD VO SAB RAHUL KO 1 DIN KA TIME DETE HAI AUR BOLTE H KI UNKE GROUP SE DUR CHALA JAE….


AAJ SIMRAN AUR SHRUTI SAME ROOM M SO RHE THE AUR RAJ AUR HARSH EK ROOM MAI, SHRUTI KI AADHI RAAT M NEEND KHULTI HAI AUR VO DEKHTI HAI KI KOI ROOM KE BHAR GHUM RHA HAI TO VO JAKR DOOR KE KEYHOLE SE DEKHTI HAI TO USE PTA CHALTA HAI KI BHAR RAHUL HAI JISKE BAAD VO ROOM KO ANDER SE LOCK KR DETI HAI AUR AAKR SO JATI HAI…

SUBH RAJ JAKR RAHUL KA ROOM CHECK KRTA HAI TO VHA RAHUL KA SAARA SAMAN PDA HUA THA PR RAHUL KHI NHI THA TABHI RAJ KI NAZAR TABLE PR PADE EK PAPER PR JAATI HAI…….​

 

[JATBABA]

GUYS UPDATE POST HO GYI HAI TO PLEASE PADHIYE AUR JARUR BTANA KI AAP SABKO KESI LG RHI HAI YE STORY

 

[Shetan]

UPDATE #1​

GARMIYO KE DIN THE, RAJ HAR SAAL KI TARAH IS BAAR BHI APNE KUCH DOSTO KE SAATH RAJASTHAN KI TOUR PR JANE KO READY HONE LGTA HAI. RAJ APNI LOVER SIMRAN KO CALL KRTA HAI;
RAJ : HELLO BABY,
SIMRAN : HEY BABY, KESE HO;
RAJ : MAI TO ACCHA HU, TUM YE BTAO KI SAFAR KI TAIYARI AUR PACKING HO GYI HAI YA FIR NHI??
SIMRAN : taiyari to jesi har baar hoti hai vese hi h pr is baar kha jane ka plan h maharaj ka ???
Actually scene ye hai ki raj kabhi bhi jane ki jagah ke baare m ek din se phle btata hi nhi tha.
Ab haar baar ki tarah sab log niklne ke ek din phle aa jate hai raj ke ghar. Is baar jagah decide krne k liye Rahul apni dost shruti ko ek dart deta h aur bolta h
raj :- to shruti you got one chance is chance m jha bhi dart hit hua us state ke sabse bhutiya location pr hum sab ghumne jaenge.
ye sab sunte hi shruti ki sitti pitti gul ho jati hai. Reason tha ki actually ye first time hone vala tha ki ye log kisi bhootiya jagah jane ki baat soch rhe the.
fir shruti bhagwan ka naam lekar dart ko fekti hai to use pta chalta hai ki uska dart rajasthan m jakr lagta hai..
ab ise coincidence khaiye ya kya, pr jab sabne bhootiya jagah jane k baare m suna to Simran ko chod sab chahte the ki rajasthan aae
ab jab rajasthan aaya to decide hua ki subh 8 bje ye sab log delhi se by road jaenge. Ab raj ne apne bade bhai harsh se bhi baat kr li thi aur use bhi mana liya tha car lekar chalne k liye.
subh hote hi sab log Jaipur ke liye nikal jate hai aur kareeb 5 se 6 ghante ki driving ke baad vo log apne hotel m phoch jate hai.
hotel m raj ne already 3 rooms book krvae the, ek uske and Simran ke liye, ek Rahul and shruti ke liye aur ek harsh k liye.
ab sab log apna saman lekar room m chale jate h aur decide hota hai ki subh vo log, Jaisalmer, Rajasthan mai mojud Kuldhara Village mai jaenge. Iske baad sab ne shaam ko chai mangvai aur fir apne partner k saath time spend krne m lag gye, aur jinki lover saath nhi thi vo bahar ghumne nikal gye.
AB RAJ ROOM M JATA HAI AUR ROOM M SIMRAN KO SOTA HUA DEKHTA HAI, SOTE TIME SIMRAN EK CHOTI AUR PYARI BACCHI KE JESE LAG RHI THI… AB RAJ AARAM SE SIMRAN KE PASS AATA HAI AUR AARAM SE USKE SIDE M BETH KR PHLE PYAR SE USKE MATHE PR EK KISS KRTA HAI AUR PYAR SE USKA SAR SEHLATA HAI…
RAJ AARAM SE APNE HOOTH SIMRAN KE NARAM HOTHO PR RAKHTA HAI AUR USE KISS KRNA START KRTA HAI MAGAR TABHI, SIMRAN KI NEEND KHUL JATI HAI AUR VO GUSSE SE RAJ KO DEKHTI H PR JAB USE YAAD AATA H KI VO LOG HOTEL MAI HAI TO SIMRAN RAJ SE LIPAT JATI HAI AUR USE KISS KRNE M DUNIYA DAARI BHUL JATI HAI…
DEKHTE HI DEKHTE SIMRAN APNE SAB KAPPDE NIKAL DETI HAI.. USKE BRA M BAND 34 KE MAMME DEKH KR RAJ LAGHBAHG PAGAL HO JATA HAI, VO EK JHATKE M SIMRAN KI BRA FAAD DETA HAI AUR USKE NIPPLES KO MUH M LEEKAR CHUSNE LGTA HAI.
SIMRAN “ AAHAHAHAHA RAAAJJJJ, KYA JAADU HAI TUMME, MAI TO PAGAL HO RHI HU, AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH, RAAJ JOOORRR JOOORRR SSEEE CHHHHUUUUUSSSSOOOOOOOOOO MERRE MAMMMEEEEE……….KHA JAO RAJ INHE.”
RAJ AB AUR JOSH M AAJATA HAI AUR EK HAATH SE SIMRAN KI NANGI CHUCHI DABATE HUE VO DUSRI KO MUH M LEKAR CHOOSTA. ESE HI KAREEB 20 MINUTES KRNE K BAAD SIMRAN RAJ KO BED PR LETA DETI HAI AUR RAJ KI T-SHIRT UTAR DETI HAI
AB SIMRAN RAJ KO KISS KRNA START KRTI HAI AUR DHEERE DHEERE VO RAJ KI CHEST PR PHOCH JATI HAI AUR RAJ K NIPPLE PR HALKI BITE KRKE UNHE SUCK KRNE LGTI HAI, ESA HOTE HI RAJ PAGAL HO JATA HAI AUR VO JOR JOR SE SISHKIYA LENE LGTA HAI….. AAAHHHHHHHHHH SIMRAN MERI JAAN, ITNA MAJA MUJHE KABHI NHI MILA JANEMAN……AAAAHHHHHHHHH TUMNE TO DIIL AUR LUND DONO KO KHUS KR DIYA AB TO BAS TUM KAB MERE LUND KO APNI IS BUR M JANE DOGI PTA NHI….. AAAAAHH
AB RAJ KUCH BOLNE HI CHAHTA THA KI SIMRAN NE USKI JEANS UTAR DI AUR USKE 8’ K LUND KO MUH M LEKAR CHUSNE LGTI HAI….. VO BILKUL EK PROFESSIONAL RANDI KI TARAH RAJ KA LUND CHOOS RHI THI….. KUCH DER CHOOSNE K BAAD RAJ JHAD GYA….. ABHI VO SIMRAN KI BUR PR KISS KRNE K LIYE SIMRAN KO NANGA KR RHA THA KI TABHI KOI DARWAJE PR AAJATA HAII AUR DARWAJE K BHAR AUR KOI NHI RAJ KA BHAI THA, AB SIMRAN GUSSE M KAPDE PHEN LETI HAI AUR DARWAJA KHOLNE HI WALI HOTI HAI KI TABHI AACHANAK UNKE BATHROOM SE KOI AAWAJ AATTI HAI JISSE VO DONO DARR GYE….

Wow wow wow. Start bhi bahot achha liya he.
Is tarah ke topic chun na badi himmat ki bat he. Is chudel ka aap ko salam he.
Aap ki 1st hi story or aapne horror subject pe esa topic chuna. Vakei aap tarif ke Kabul ho. Skill bhi badhiya he. Aage badhte rahiye. Is chudel ki shubhkamnae aap ke sath he. Koi help koi ray. Jab bhi aap ko jarurat pade. Aap be zizak puchh sakte ho.
Kyo ki me bhi ese hi horror or crime story par kam kar rahi hu. Asha he aap ne jis tarike se start liya he. Story ko bhi usi joshile andaz me aage badhaoge.

Best of luck. .

 

[Shetan]

UPDATE #2


AB RAJ KUCH BOLNE HI CHAHTA THA KI SIMRAN NE USKI JEANS UTAR DI AUR USKE 8' K LUND KO MUH M LEKAR CHUSNE LGTI HAI….. VO BILKUL EK PROFESSIONAL RANDI KI TARAH RAJ KA LUND CHOOS RHI THI….. KUCH DER CHOOSNE K BAAD RAJ JHAD GYA….. ABHI VO SIMRAN KI BUR PR KISS KRNE K LIYE SIMRAN KO NANGA KR RHA THA KI TABHI KOI DARWAJE PR AAJATA HAII AUR DARWAJE K BHAR AUR KOI NHI RAJ KA BHAI THA, AB SIMRAN GUSSE M KAPDE PHEN LETI HAI AUR DARWAJA KHOLNE HI WALI HOTI HAI KI TABHI AACHANAK UNKE BATHROOM SE KOI AAWAJ AATTI HAI JISSE VO DONO DARR GYE….

AB AAGE….

BATHROOM SE HUI AAWAJ SE DONO RAJ AUR SIMRAN DARR JATE HAI. RAJ SIMRAN KO DOOR KHOLNE BHEJTA HAI AUR KHUD BATHROOM CHECK KRNE JATA HAI……. ABEEE ISKI MAA KO CHODU… BOLTE HUE RAJ EK BILLI KO MAARNE KE LIYE DAUDTA HAI… YE SAB DEKH KR SIMRAN AUR HARSH DONO JOR JOR SE HASNE LAGTE HAI

BILLI KO DEKH KR SIMRAN KI JAAN ME JAAN AATI HAI… VHI SHRUTI AUR RAHUL KE ROOM ME DEKHE TO RAHUL SOFE PR BETHA HAI AUR APNE PHONE M KISI LADKI SE CHAT KR RHA HAI AUR YE LADKI AUR KOI NHI RAHUL KI LOVER HAI ARUSHI (AGE 21 RAJ KI CLASSMATE HAI AUR COLLEGE KI SABSE HOT AND SEXY LADKI HAI.)

ARUSHI SE CHAT KRTE HUE RAHUL SMILE KR RHA THA JO BAAT SHRUTI NOTICE KR LETI HAI AUR CHUPKE SE RAHUL KE PICHE AATI HAI AUR CHECK KRTI HAI TO USKO PTA CHALTA HAI KI ACTUALLY RAHUL ARUSHI KE SAATH SEX CHAT KAR RHA THA AUR SAATH KI SAATH VIDEO CALL KRKE ARUSHI KO VIDEO CALL KR STRIP KRNE KE LIYE MAJBOOR KR RHA THA…

ACHANAK SE RAHUL KA DHYAN SCREEN SE HATTA HAI TO USKO PTA CHALTA H KI SHRUTI BHI ARUSHI KA NUDE SHOW DEKH RHI HAI TO VO JLDI SE CALL CUT KR DETA HAI JISSE ARUSHI SAMJH JATI HAI KI SHRUTI AAS PASS HI HAI AS SHRUTI AUR ARUSHI BEST FRIENDS HAI PR FIR BHI ARUSHI NE SHRUTI SE YE BAAT CHUPAI THI PR ARUSHI KO AAJ TAK YE NHI MALUM KI SHRUTI KO YE BAAT KA PTA HAI KI ARUSHI AUR RAHUL RELATIONSHIP MAI HAI……

RAHUL DARTE HUE PICHE DEKHTA HAI TO GUSSE MAI SHRUTI KHADI THI AUR VO RAHUL KO JO CHEEJ HAATH M AAI USSE HI PEETNA SHURU KR DETI HAI….BECHARE RAHUL KI HALAT DEKH EK BAAR KE LIYE KISI PATHHAR DIL KA DIL BHI BHAR AATA KYUKI SHRUTI IS TIME ITNA GUSSA THI KI VO RAHUL KO MAARTE HUE RO RHI THI…. USKE RONE KI AAWAJ ROOM SE BHAR JA RHI THI AUR TABHI ROOM MAI RAJ HARSH AUR SIMRAN ENTER HOTE HAI.

SHRUTI KI AAKHO M AASHU DEKH RAJ RAHUL KO MAARNE KE LIYE AAGE BADHTA HAI KI HARSH USE ROK DETA HAI AUR PYAR SE SAB PTA KRNE K LIYE BOLTA HAI.. VHA SIMRAN SHRUTI KO US ROOM SE BHAR LE AATI HAI TAB SHRUTI ROTE HUE SIMRAN KO SAB BTA DETI HAI JISE SUNKR EK BAAR TO SIMRAN KA BHI DIMAG KHARAB HO JATA HAI…

SIMRAN : KYA RAHUL NE SACH ME ITNI GIRI HUI HARQAT KRI??

SHRUTI : HN SIMRAN AUR AAJ VO IS HADD TAK GIR GYA KYA PTA FUTURE M KIS LEVEL TAK GIREGA YE INSAAN.

SIMRAN : MUJHE AAJ HI RAJ AUR HARSH SE IS BAARE M BAAT KRNI CHAIYE…{AB SHRUTI NE ESA KYA BTAYA KI SIMRAN BHI RAHUL SE NARAJ HAI VO BAAT TO SHI TIME AANE PR BTA DI JAEGI}

SIMRAN JALD HI RAJ AUR HARSH KO CALL KRKE APNE ROOM M BULATI HAI AUR SAARI BAATE SACH SACH UN DONO KO BTA DETI HAI JISE SUNKR DONO KO ARUSHI AUR SHRUTI KE LIYE BHOT BURA LGTA HAI AUR VO TURANT RAHUL KE ROOM M JAKR ROOM KO ANDER SE BAND KR LETE HAI

RAJ : KYA BE MADARCHOD TU APNE AAP KO BHAGWAN SAMJHTA HAI KYA JO ITNI LADKIYO KI LIFE SE KHELTA HAI

RAHUL : BHAI TU KYA BOL RHA HAI MUJHE KUCH SAMJH NHI AARHA

RAJ : TAAAADDDAAAAKKKKKK

RAHUL : AAAAAHHHHHHHHH, ABE SALE MAAR KYU RHA HAI HAI……AAAAAHHHHHHH

RAJ : TAAAAADDDDDAAAAKKKK, BHEN K LODE TU MERI SHRUTI KI LIFE KE SAATH KHELEGA TERI MAA KO CHODU BHEN K LUND

ITNA BOLTE HI RAJ AUR HARSH DONO RAHUL KO MARNE LGTE HAI AUR DEKHTE HI DEKHTE VO BEHOSH HO JATA H JISKE BAAD VO SAB RAHUL KO 1 DIN KA TIME DETE HAI AUR BOLTE H KI UNKE GROUP SE DUR CHALA JAE….


AAJ SIMRAN AUR SHRUTI SAME ROOM M SO RHE THE AUR RAJ AUR HARSH EK ROOM MAI, SHRUTI KI AADHI RAAT M NEEND KHULTI HAI AUR VO DEKHTI HAI KI KOI ROOM KE BHAR GHUM RHA HAI TO VO JAKR DOOR KE KEYHOLE SE DEKHTI HAI TO USE PTA CHALTA HAI KI BHAR RAHUL HAI JISKE BAAD VO ROOM KO ANDER SE LOCK KR DETI HAI AUR AAKR SO JATI HAI…

SUBH RAJ JAKR RAHUL KA ROOM CHECK KRTA HAI TO VHA RAHUL KA SAARA SAMAN PDA HUA THA PR RAHUL KHI NHI THA TABHI RAJ KI NAZAR TABLE PR PADE EK PAPER PR JAATI HAI…….​

Wow nice superb. Ese hi badhte jao

 

[JATBABA]

Wow wow wow. Start bhi bahot achha liya he.
Is tarah ke topic chun na badi himmat ki bat he. Is chudel ka aap ko salam he.
Aap ki 1st hi story or aapne horror subject pe esa topic chuna. Vakei aap tarif ke Kabul ho. Skill bhi badhiya he. Aage badhte rahiye. Is chudel ki shubhkamnae aap ke sath he. Koi help koi ray. Jab bhi aap ko jarurat pade. Aap be zizak puchh sakte ho.
Kyo ki me bhi ese hi horror or crime story par kam kar rahi hu. Asha he aap ne jis tarike se start liya he. Story ko bhi usi joshile andaz me aage badhaoge.

Best of luck. .

Thanks a lot chudel ji... pr mujhe to itni pyari chudel milne aai yhi kaafi hai apni to life ban gyi

Aur help chaiye hogi to aapko jarur preshan krunga

But m ek baat soch rha tha ki is story m sex portion kam krke thrill ka ek alg tadka lagaya jae to kesa rhega??

Just ek advice chaiye thi aapki

Vese thanks a lot once again

 

[JATBABA]

Topic Selection and story writing ke patteren ke liye aap tarif ke haqdaar hain. Abhi starting hain so jayada kuch nahin kahunga but umeed karta hun ki jesi starting hain, aap uss pace ko continue rakhege...

Hn bhai pr updates week m 2 din aaegi

Saturday and sunday.. because vhi 2 din h jb thoda mind fresh rhta hai..

But m ek baat soch rha tha ki is story m sex portion kam krke thrill ka ek alg tadka lagaya jae to kesa rhega??

Just ek advice chaiye thi aapki

 

[Shetan]

Thanks a lot chudel ji... pr mujhe to itni pyari chudel milne aai yhi kaafi hai apni to life ban gyi

Aur help chaiye hogi to aapko jarur preshan krunga

But m ek baat soch rha tha ki is story m sex portion kam krke thrill ka ek alg tadka lagaya jae to kesa rhega??

Just ek advice chaiye thi aapki

Vese thanks a lot once again

Bilkul sex to har story me hota hi he. Aap esa kya he jo aap redars ko kuchh naya de sako.
Me bhi to chudel bhut pishajo pe likh rahi hu. Aap ko har update me esa kuchh sochna hoga jo kisi ne pahele na padha ho.
Padhne vala agar intras lega to uske maind me apne aap pichar banti he. Or vo pichar aap chala rahe hote ho. Log agal si kahani khojte he.
Kyo ki ye shapno ki duniya he. Aap achha likh rahe ho. Likhte jao. Maza aa raha he.

 

[Rahul]

wonderful update dost

 

[Rohnny]

Nice story brother

 

[zokey]

superb story waiting new update