Incest Ek bechara (एक बेचारा)

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next update kal dedo jo mega update ka hissa chut gaya
baki ane wale budhwar ko usse agla de dena

Update Wednesday ko apne samay pe aayegi

 

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Update Wednesday ko apne samay pe aayegi

update kaha hai

 

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maine sunday ke bad aaj hi login kiya hai

 

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Update Wednesday ko apne samay pe aayegi

Waiting for the next update

 

[Santosh Kamar]

very very good and nice updated waiting for next update

 

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update kaha hai

maine sunday ke bad aaj hi login kiya hai

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very very good and nice updated waiting for next update

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कल दोपहर तक update पोस्ट कर दुंगा ।
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Ab tak...
Dadi - ari o maharaniyo usse aaram se khane de, fir hame kuchh kaam se Jana bhi hai, kuchh kaam dhanda to hai nahi aur lag kaye panchayti jhadne.
Chalo jao apne room me aur karo kuchh padhayi badhayi.
Dadi ke jhadne ke baad wo dono daudte huye upar chhat par chali gayi.
Kuchh samay baad Raju aur sharda devi bhi apne gantavya ki or nikal chale, jo ki ek bahut purana khandhar tha jiske andar ek purani mandir thi jise log trimath mahakali mandir ke naam se jante the...
Ab iss mandir aur khndhar ka sambandh kishan aur uske pariwar se kis parkar ka hai ye to aage pata chalega...
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Ab aage.
Ajib daastaan hai ye, kahaan shuru kahaan khtam Ye mnzile hain kaunasi, n wo samajh sake n ham
Ye roshani ke saath kyon, dhuan uthha chiraag se Ye khwaab dekhati hun main ki jag padi hun khwaab se
Mubaaraken tumhen ki tum kisi ke nur ho ge Kisi ke itane paas ho ki sabase dur ho gae
Kisi ka pyaar leke tum naya jahaan basaaoge Ye shaam jab bhi aegi, tum hamako yaad aoge
teen or se chhote chhote pahadiyon se ghira ek bahut hi sundar bagicha, jiske ek or ek vishal jheel iss chandni raat me uski shobha me char chand laga raha tha, wahi jheel ke kinare do premi bina kisi ke parwah ke ek dusre ke baaho me apne pyar bhare lamhe ko khul kar jee rahe the, pehnave se wo dono kisi bhi angle se aaj ke zamane ke lag nhi rhe the , jahan wo ladka matra ek fati dhoti aur gale me kuchh mala dharan kiye huye tha wahi uski priytama kisi rajkumari ke wastra dharan kiye hue thi. wo yuvak apni priytama ke god me sar rakh kar uske muh se nikli koyal ki aawaz jaisa madhur geet ko sunn kar uske bol me mozud pyar ko mehhush kar raha tha. Dono iss baat se anjaan the ki waha koi teesra bhi hai jo in dono ko bahut der se apni chamakti aankho se dekh rha hai, wo jiss tarah se inhe dekh rha tha isse ye saaf pata lag raha tha ki wo kisi khash moke ke intezaar me hai, bagiche me mozud ek vishal bargad ke ped pe baitha ye shaks jo koi bhi tha par ye insaan to kisi bhi tarah se nahi lag raha tha, uske ek haath me kaali syahh se dhanush thi jiss pe baan chadha hua tha, sath hi uske tarkash me bhi kuchh baan rakhe huye the, dhanush ka nishana jheel kinaare baithi rajkumari anupama thi jo apne premi suraj ki sar ko apne God me rakh kar uske sar me ungliyan fer rahi thi aur apne madhur aawaz me geet gunguna rahi thi,
'Anu ham kab tak yun chhup kar idhar se udhar bhatakte rahenge, pita ji jiss mahakali mandir ka zikra kiye the, usse dhundte dhundte poore 2 mahine se upar ho chale hai. Hame naahi wahan tak jane ka koi rashta mila hai naahi koi waisa yatri mila hai jo trimath mahakali mandir ke bare me janta ho. ... " Suraj jo bahut der tak anupama ke God me sar rakh kar leta hua tha usne anupama ke geet ke khatam hote hi ye baat suru kar diya.
Suraj hame bhale hi abhi tak wo pawitra mandir nahi mila par apke pitaji ne saaf kaha hai ki uss mandir ki rakhwali karna hi aapka mil dharm hai, tab aapko waha jana hi hoga bhale hi kitna hi din kyu na lage.
Ani bhi apne ungliyo ko suraj ke lachhedar baalo me ghumate huye bolti hai...
"Waise kya tumhe uss shakti ke baare me pata hai anu jiske bare me maharaj aur rajguru mere pita ke sath mil kar baat kar rhe the, pita ji ka kahna hai ki ye shakti ussi trimath mandir me hi kahi dafan hai, jo ki devtao dwara chhupaya gya tha (shakti ke baare me aage pata chalega) aur ussi ka raksha hamara rajya veerpur shadiyo se karte aa rha hai. "
Suraj apni jagah par se uth kar jheel ke taraf jaate huye kahata hai
Hann maine bhi suna hai, par mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aarhi h ki uss shakti ki raksha ki jimmebari hamesha rajdarbar se kisi ko di jaati thi, par maharaj aapko kyun wahan bhej rahe hai, aap to raj darbar se ho bhi nhi..
Abhi anupma bol hi rhi thi ki suraj ko kuchh halchal sunayi deti h jo ki jheel ke paani se apan chehra dho rha tha usne pichhe mud kar dekha to usse waha ped par ek shaya dikhayi diya. Wo abhi anupama ko sachet karne hi ja rha tha ki ek teer aake sidha anupama ke peeth me ja lgti hai aur seene ke aar par ho jati hai, jisse anupama ki chikh poore sunsan bagiche me fail jaati hai,,
Jaise hi suraj ne ye drishya dekha wo chillate huye anupama ko pakadne badha jo ki teer lagne ke karan jamin pe ludhak gayi thi,
Suraj ki aankho se anshu bahe ja rhe the aur uska ankh gusse me pure laal ho chuke the usne pichhe mud kar us ped par fir se dekha to waha par ab koi nahi tha,
Tabhi usse anupama ki kapkapati aawaj sunayi padi jo usse hi bula rahi thi.
Suraj....... ..... Mujhe maaf kar dijiyega suraj mai iss raah me aapka sath nahi de paayi.... Aahh..
Mujhe pura yakin h aap..... Zaruuurrrr maa kaali ki mandir tak pahunch jaoge....
Suraj- nahi anupama mai tumhe kuchh nahi hone dunga, tuu tummm mujhe chhod kar kahi nahi ja sakti ho anupama, mai tumhe kahii nahi jaane dungaaaaa.....
Aur tabhi anupma ki sharir bejaan ho gaya aur wahi jab suraj ko ishka aabhash huaa usske ankho se anshu kibadh hi aane lagi ... Aur fir ek jordar chikh watabarn me gunj uthi anupamaaa......
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Anupamaa...... Bolte huye kishan bhi apne nind se uth gaya.... Uska pura sharir paseene se bhiga hua tha, uske honth kaanp rahe the aankh se laga rha tha ki wo abhi abhi bahut roya hai, ...
" Ya kaisa sapna tha, kon the wo log.... Anupmaa... Suraj.... Aur wo aaya kya thi... Ufffd.... Mera sar phata ja rha hai...
Kishan kisi tarah uth kar bath room gaya aur achhe se apne chehre ko thande paani se done laga.
Jab wo wapas apne bed pe aaya to wahi table pe rakhi watch ko dekaha to abhi 12 . 30 baj rahe the ussne wahi paas rakhe paani ke bottle se paani piya aur fir se sone ki koshish karne laga par usse baar baar wo sapne bala hi drishya dikhayi deta tha, .. Kisi tarah usse raat ko 1.30 baje tak nind aagyi ....
"Abe saale, kitna soyega yaar uth ja ab, teri tabiyat to thik thak hi lag rhi hai mujhe to ho kya gaya hai aaj tujhe "
Jahan ghadi me ghante ki suyi 8 aur 9 ke bich me aa chuki thi matlb samay 8 se bhi jyada ho ho gya tha, aksar iss samay tak jo inshan apne nitykarm ke sath sath bahut saari vyayam aur yog kar ke taro taza ho zaya karta tha wo abhi tak apne bistar par ghode bech kar so raha tha,
Ye aur koi nahi kishan hi tha jo ki kal raat huye ghatnao ke wajah se bahut jyada vichlit ho gaya tha aur raat me ek vichitra aur akalpniye sapna ke wajah se nind toot jaane ke karan sahi samay pe iska nind bhi pura nhi ho paya tha . Aur usko sote dekh rajnish ko laga ki kahi ishka tabiyat bigad to nahi gaya to ye confirm karne ke liye usne kishan ke sar pe hath rakha uske hath ka nabz chek kiya aur aisa karne par usse sab normal laga tabhi gusse me usne ek laat kishan ke pichhwade pe gala diya jisse kishan hadbada kar utha aur rajnish ko unnindi ankho se dekhne laga. Jaise kah raha ho ki ye kya tha. Rajnish ne fir usse jhadte huye kaha . Aur uski baat ko sun kar kishan ne ghadi ke taraf dekha to wo bhi chonk gaya kyunki aaj shayad pahli baar usne apna routien break kiya tha.
Kishan(me) - yaar mujhe pata hi nahi chala, sach me aaj bahut late ho gya hai tu baith mai fresh ho kar aata hunn.
Kishan waha se uth kar bathroom ki or chala gay aur jate huye ussne rajnish ke bum pe ek jordaar tamacha dhar diya aur daud kar andar bathroom me ghush gya, rajnish bechara apne chuttad sehlate huye usse galiya dene lag gaya.
Rj - Abe bsdk, bhadwe mujhe kyu mara be gandu, mai thode na tere jaisa late utha. Chutiya itna jordar tamacha mara hai ki jalan hone lagi hai mere chuttad me... Uff ahh, harami kahi ka tu nikal saale teri gand na mar li to mera nam bhi rajnish nahi aahhh... Saale ka hath hai ya hathoda, gand ki haddi tak me dard ho gaya h bhencho....
Kishan - (hashte huye) hann.. To iss vaakye se aap kya sikhe mere lodu mitra, agar kisi sote huye ko uthana ho to usse pyar se uthana na ki laat mar ke, aur agar wo mai rahu to aur shatark rahna samjhe.
Aur tu ne bhi to mujhe kitna jordar laat mara tha saale mai bed se niche girte girte bacha, gandu kahi ka...
Rj- chal chal ab jaldi fresh ho ja, ham yaha tere dada ka madad karne aaye huye h na ki aaram karne, waha dada ji kab ke uth bhi gaye aur ye bol ke kahi gaye h ki unhe shadi ke liye nimantran dena hai apne kisi khash dost ko jinaka gao yaha se 2 gao aage hai wo dopehar tak aayenge aur hamare jimme me kuchh kam bhi sonpe h. ..
Khair kuchh der me fresh ho kar Kishan bhi bathroom se bahar aagya aur apne kapde wagera pahan kar rajnish ke sath hi niche aagya. Bahar se bhale hi kishan pura shant dikh raha tha par uske antarman me aaj najane kyu bahut hi azib azib se khayal aarhe the, aur sath hi sath chachi ki harkato ke wajah se bhi wo pareshan tha.
Dono wahi haveli ke lown area me hi lage sofe par baith gaye jaha kalpana bua pahle se hi pinki ke sath baith kar koi game enjoy kar rahe the........
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Aaj ke liye itna hi

 

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next update kal dedo jo mega update ka hissa chut gaya
baki ane wale budhwar ko usse agla de dena

Waiting for the next update

very very good and nice updated waiting for next update

 

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nice start

Congrats for starting new story
Hope ki story badhiya hogi.

waiting

Nice introduction first update awesome

Nice update

Very nice story

Next update waiting

nice update

Updated bro

Hello Bhai update kab aayega

Waiting bro

I like this theme. Aage dekhte hain

waiting for update

very nice update

waiting for next

ppichla update diye huve adha hafta ho gaya hai

mast update dost

nice update..!! hero ke sath bahot bura huva hai..!!

nice update..!! ab dekhte hai gaon mai kya kya hota hai..!!
waiting for next update..!!

Okk

ok

waiting

update ki pariksha mai mitr

Waiting

nice update..!!
akhir kisan pahoch gaya haveli par..!!

Nice update

good one

update milega kya

recover ho gaye kya

Update kb aayega bro

Mast update hai bhai please story ko khatamkarana

Awesome update plz is story ko continue rkho

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Badhiya kahani aur update do padhna hai hamko

Next update

Bahut hi badhiya update tha aise hi likhte raho aur kya baat h 7 update ho gye phir bhi abhi tak sirf 10 page hi huye h story slow chal rahi h ya koi comment nahi kar raha idhar ....m


Bhailog jo story padhte h wo idhar review bhi de ke jaye .....

Tabhi to hausala banega likhne ka ...

Aur writer se bhi request h ki story ke updates regular dete rahe...m

Nice update brother
Jaisa ki ab tak padha ki kishan ka bachpan bahut takleef bhara raha h....kyuki choti umar me apne pariwar se dur hona apne aap me bahut badi baat h....
kishan ke dada or dadi ne bahut hi sahi nirnay liya tha kishan ko dusre shehar bhejkar....kyuki agar use wahi rakhte to shayad haalat kuch or badtar ho jaate kishan ke liye...
Shambhu Pratap ji ne apne jivan kal me aur bhi bahut se nek kaam kiye jiska saboot kaka ka kishan ke liye Khushi or sneh se pata chalta h....
ab kishan bijender ji ki haveli me ruka hua h to ab dekhna ye hoga ki unke pariwar wale itne saalo baad bhi apne man ki nafrat ko darshate h ya kishan ke saath ek ajnabi jaisa hi suluk karenge.....
Is shaadi me aane se shayad ab kishan ki life bhi change hone wali h....
jis tarah se uski Chachi radhika usse itna khul kar baat kar rahi h kya uske piche bhi koi chal ho sakti h kyuki sirf kuch hi der me hum kisi insan ko apne pariwar ke behad hi khas baate nahi batate h...ya fir radhika bas kishan ka bharosa jitna chahti h.....

aagle update ki pratiksha hai....

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Good update

Good update

Update ki pratiksha rahegi bhai..

बहुत अच्छा लिख रहे हो भाई..
सही शब्दो का सही जगह सही तारीक से इस्तेमाल किया गया है

अब चाची ने तो बहुत ही बड़ा धमाका कर दिया....
आखिर कोई औरत इतनी अपने शरीर के हाथो इतना मजबूर कैसे हो सकती है....की कुछ ही पर में अपनी आबरू किसी अंजान के सामने यू खोल कर पेश कर दे.....
और क्या सच में कल्पना को ये सब पता है....अगर हा तो क्या एक बहन अपने ही भाई की इज्जत को किसी और के सामने इतनी आसानी से परोस देगी......सवाल बहुत है... पर शायद इनके जवाब जल्द ही मिल जाए...

दादी को किशन की सचमे बहुत फिक्र लगी रहती है...लेकिन दादी ने ये क्यू कहा की किशन के बड़े पापा और पापा नही आ रहे है...अब इतनी ज्यादा कड़वाहट की वजह जानने की उत्सुकता बनी रहेगी....

आखिर में चाची ने अपना काम कर ही लिया...इन्हे भलीभांति पता है की मर्द की सबसे बड़ी कमजोरी उसका आत्मसम्मान है...अगर उसी को ठेस पहुंच जाए तो आदमी जमाने को आग लगा देता है...
अब चाची के द्वारा लगाई गई आग कितनी फैलती है और कोन कोन इसमे शामिल है और आग में कोन कोन झुलसने वाला है ये सवाल बने रहेंगे.....

अगले भाग की प्रतीक्षा रहेगी भाई....
उम्मीद है अगले भाग भी इसी तरह बेहतरीन होंगे।

Waiting brother

Nice update bhai

Update was great as always
Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...



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Mast update dost

next update kal dedo jo mega update ka hissa chut gaya
baki ane wale budhwar ko usse agla de dena

Waiting for the next update

very very good and nice updated waiting for next update

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