Incest Ek bechara (एक बेचारा)

[Rahul]

Update 7​

ab tak.....
chachi - ye lijiye kishan nashta kar lijiye pahle uske baad aram kar lijiyega, aur chahiye jo bhi ho to boliyega , sharmaiyega nahi.. chachi nahi to ek dost samajh kar hi mang lijiyega jo bhi aapko chahiye ho , waise bhi aap ham se jyda chhote to ho nhi to dost hi samjhiyega mujhe .
me - jarur chachi ji ... ye bhi to mera hi ghar hua to mai bhala kyu sharmane laga apne hi ghar me ,aap pareshan mat hoiye agar kisi chiz ki jarurat padi to mai khud mang lunga ya ja kar le lunga.
chachi- achhi baat h...waise aapke ghar se baaki sab kab aane wale hai.
me- dekiye kal sham tak ki bat dadi bataye the . to kal sham tak wo log yaha aajayenge.
waise chacha ji kahi dikhe nhi chachi.
chacha ka nam sunte hi hi chahi ke haste khilte chehre par mayushi aagyi .
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ab aage......
jaisehi mere bato me chacha ka jikra hua chachi ki chehre par kuchh udasi ke bhao aagye, par unhone apne bhao ko chhupate huye.. baat ko badal diya.
chachi- are wo honge kahi , shadi ka ghar hai na aur shadi ke taiyariyo ka kam bhi bahut hai... to unhi sab kaamo me kahi gaye honge.... aap chhodo unhe aur ab thode der aaram kar lo abhi..mai baad me milti hu aaplog se.
tabhi rajnish , jo abhi tak bilkul shant tha jab se wo yahan aaya tha wo bol utha.
rajnish- wo chachi ji ab ham log kya aaram kare ... hamlog fresh ho hi gye aur nashta bhi ho gya to kyu na ham dono bhi bhi thoda bahut tahal le ...aur agar aapki company mil jaye to aur achhi baat hai,.. kyu kishan /
me- haa yaar idea to acha hai aur chachi isi bahane ham yaha ke logo ke baare me aap se jaan bhi lenge... aap kya kahti ho .

chachi kuchh sochte huye - idea to bura nhi hai , thik hai chalo haveli me bhi ek bagicha hai wahi chalte hai aur sath me kuchh baate bhi ho jayegi. Aap dono yahi ruko mai abhi aati hu.


Fir mai aur rajnish fatafat khud ko vyavasthit karne lage aur chachi bhi hamare kamre se nikal kar apne kamre me chali gayi...
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Rj - Achha yaar kishan ek baar bolu.. Bura mat maniyo.
Me - bakchodi karoge to bura nahi sidhe teri gand marunga, chal bol kya bolna hai tujhe.
Rj- nahi to rahne de warna tera kuchh pata nhi tu saale........ Chhod mujhe batana hi nhi h kuchh tujhe

Me - chal ab jyada ban mat aur bata kya bolna h tujhe.
Rj- yar mujhe tumhari chachi ka behavior kuchh alag sa laga jaise wo hame janchna chahte ho , tune notice nhi kiya kya ki wo baar baar tujhse chipakne ki koshish kar rahe the.
Ab yaar hamlog koi bachhe to hai nahi jo aise isharo ko nhi samjhe ge, aur tu saale tu to in sab maamlo me mera bhi baap hai, tu sach sach bata tune bhi ye sab baate notice ki h ya nhi.
Me - nahi...... Maine unka ye behavior abhi note nhi kiya balki jabse mai yaha aaya hunn tab se unko notice kar rha hu. Unke dimaag me kuchh to khichdi pak rahi h. Jo shayad mere liye haanikarak shabit ho sakti h.

Rj - kaise be, tujhe kya pareshani h issme. Ho sakta hai ki hamara hi sochna galat ho...aur agar sahi bhi hoti to achhi hi baat hai na. Kon sa ham yahan hamesha ke liye rahne aaye h, aur agar chachi khud line pe aa rahi to fir ham bhala kyu pichhe hate.

Me- dekh rajnish ...... bhool kar bhi aisi galti nhi karna tujhe meri kasam. Tumhe pata hai na yar ki mera pura pariwar mujhe manhush manta hai, gaali deta hai, mujhse beinteha nafrat karta hai, aur mai nahi chahta ki
Mujhe gaali dene wali ki shankhya me iss ghar ke sadasya bhi shamil ho.
Aaj mujhe bahut dino baad pariwar ka hone ka
Ehshash hua hai mai ise bas acchhe se jina chahta hunn. Kyoki kal mere ghar se bhi sab log aarhe hai, aur tujhe pata hai wo log mere sath fir se waise hi pesh aayenge, bas tum kuchh bevkoofi mat kar dena.

Rj- thik hai bhai, mai koi harkat nhi krunga.
Par tu iss chachi ki kaise samjhayega , inki harkate dekh kar lagta hai ki tere lathi se apna bil ka bhosda kara ke manengi .

Me- tu fir se bakchodi karne laga laude.
Unko jo karna h kare bas hame koi bhi galti nahi karni h, aur sath me ye bhi pata lagana hai ki wo aisa kar kyu rahi hai.
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Ham dono abhi baat hi kar rahe the ki apne room se chachi bhi apne kapde badal ke wapas aagyi. Kasam se yaar kya lag rhi thi wo aashmani saree me bilkul kisi jalpari jaisi, ek pal ke liye to mera niyat hi dol gya unhe aise dekh kar , yahi haal kuchh rajnish ka bhi tha par mai apne aap ko control kar ke room se baahar nikla aur chachi bhi bahar hall me hi mil gayi.
Chachi- to chale..... Rajnish Kaha gye? Wo nhi chal rhe kya
Tabhi rajnish udhar se aate hue bolta h
Rajnish - are nhi nhi chachi... Bas apne baal set kar raha tha. Chalo chalte h
Fir ham tino haveli ke just baahar ek bahut hi sundar bagiche me chale jaate hai, waha bilkul hi shant mahol tha, ghane ghane aam ki ped, neem ke ped aur bahut saare flower lage huye the. Wahi garden me baithne ke liye benches bhi rakha gya tha, hamlog yun hi tahlte tahlte baate karne lage.
Me- daadi ka tujhe call aaya tha kya rajnish... Mera to cellphone hi off ho gya tha to charging pe laga kar aaya hun.
Rajnish- maine to dekha hi nhi yaar, .. Ohh sitt mai to apna phone bhi lana bhool gaya aaplog baate kro mai jara apna phone leke aata hu.
Me -thik h... Jldi aana...
(Fir chachi se) achha chachi wo kaka kon the jo ham dono ko yahan haveli lekar aaye the ...

Chachi- jinhone aapko haveli tak laya na.. Unhe yaha sab kaka - kaka bolte hai, bahut hi bhale aadmi hai, apke dada ke bahut karibi the wo.
Par Unka beta bahut hi awara kism ka inshan hai, sanjay naam hai uska aapke chacha ke sath hi rahta h wo, pitaji to inhe bhi bahot bolte hai ki inn awara logo ke saath rahna band karo, par wo kinhi ki sunte hi kahaa h.
Me - tab aap unhe bolo ki apni sangat ko sudhare.
Chachi- apko kya lagta h maine unhe nhi taka hai in sab harkato ke karan , par mere kuchh bolne pe wo mujh pe gussa karne lagte h.
Inta bolte bolte chachi ke aankh me anshu aane lage par wo mujhe jataye bina hi apni anshu pochh li, mujhe ab samajh hi nhi aarha tha ki mai ab kya kahu, ek miya bibi ke bich me bolna mujhe jayaz nhi laga. To maine bas unhe santawna diya.
Me - chachi , chacha jarur sudhar jayenge, jab unhe ye gyat hoga ki unki ek beti bhi hai to bhale hi apne bache ke liye hi par wo apne aap me parivartan laye ge jarur. Aap jyada pareshan mat hoiye.

chachi- Aap bache to hai nahi, aap bhi jante hi honge ki ek aurat ki bhi uski kuchh jarurte hoti hai jo uske jivansathi se hoti hai....
Mujhe bhi yahi sab khalta hai ki mera jivansathi meri jarurte ka ratti bhar bhi khayal nahi rakhta h. Aapko lag raha hoga ki mai kaisi baate kar raha hunn par mai karu to karu kya, aajtak yaha iss haveli me mere rahte huye koi bhi gair mard nhi aya hai , to mai apne baare me shirf kalpana ko hi batati hunn wo meri nanad se pahle meri saheli hai,
Me - mujhe bura nhi laga chachi... Aap ki koi bhi baat galat nhi h, lekin agar chacha aapko khush nhi rakh paate to aap unka ilaaz kara lijiye, Aaj kal ke samay me to saari bimaari ka tod nikal chuka hai.
Chachi - tumhe kya lagta h, wo ilaz kara lenge .. Nahi ..... unhe apne jhuthi mardangi pe jhuthi ghamand h na, wo kabhi bhi apne mardangi pe sawal uthana bardast nhi karte h. Tabhi to mai aur kalpana ne ek dusra tarika socha h... Khud ko khush karne ke liye.
Me- kaisa tarika......






To be continued.........

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[Akash ⚜️]

Update 7​

ab tak.....
chachi - ye lijiye kishan nashta kar lijiye pahle uske baad aram kar lijiyega, aur chahiye jo bhi ho to boliyega , sharmaiyega nahi.. chachi nahi to ek dost samajh kar hi mang lijiyega jo bhi aapko chahiye ho , waise bhi aap ham se jyda chhote to ho nhi to dost hi samjhiyega mujhe .
me - jarur chachi ji ... ye bhi to mera hi ghar hua to mai bhala kyu sharmane laga apne hi ghar me ,aap pareshan mat hoiye agar kisi chiz ki jarurat padi to mai khud mang lunga ya ja kar le lunga.
chachi- achhi baat h...waise aapke ghar se baaki sab kab aane wale hai.
me- dekiye kal sham tak ki bat dadi bataye the . to kal sham tak wo log yaha aajayenge.
waise chacha ji kahi dikhe nhi chachi.
chacha ka nam sunte hi hi chahi ke haste khilte chehre par mayushi aagyi .
.
ab aage......
jaisehi mere bato me chacha ka jikra hua chachi ki chehre par kuchh udasi ke bhao aagye, par unhone apne bhao ko chhupate huye.. baat ko badal diya.
chachi- are wo honge kahi , shadi ka ghar hai na aur shadi ke taiyariyo ka kam bhi bahut hai... to unhi sab kaamo me kahi gaye honge.... aap chhodo unhe aur ab thode der aaram kar lo abhi..mai baad me milti hu aaplog se.
tabhi rajnish , jo abhi tak bilkul shant tha jab se wo yahan aaya tha wo bol utha.
rajnish- wo chachi ji ab ham log kya aaram kare ... hamlog fresh ho hi gye aur nashta bhi ho gya to kyu na ham dono bhi bhi thoda bahut tahal le ...aur agar aapki company mil jaye to aur achhi baat hai,.. kyu kishan /
me- haa yaar idea to acha hai aur chachi isi bahane ham yaha ke logo ke baare me aap se jaan bhi lenge... aap kya kahti ho .

chachi kuchh sochte huye - idea to bura nhi hai , thik hai chalo haveli me bhi ek bagicha hai wahi chalte hai aur sath me kuchh baate bhi ho jayegi. Aap dono yahi ruko mai abhi aati hu.


Fir mai aur rajnish fatafat khud ko vyavasthit karne lage aur chachi bhi hamare kamre se nikal kar apne kamre me chali gayi...
.
Rj - Achha yaar kishan ek baar bolu.. Bura mat maniyo.
Me - bakchodi karoge to bura nahi sidhe teri gand marunga, chal bol kya bolna hai tujhe.
Rj- nahi to rahne de warna tera kuchh pata nhi tu saale........ Chhod mujhe batana hi nhi h kuchh tujhe

Me - chal ab jyada ban mat aur bata kya bolna h tujhe.
Rj- yar mujhe tumhari chachi ka behavior kuchh alag sa laga jaise wo hame janchna chahte ho , tune notice nhi kiya kya ki wo baar baar tujhse chipakne ki koshish kar rahe the.
Ab yaar hamlog koi bachhe to hai nahi jo aise isharo ko nhi samjhe ge, aur tu saale tu to in sab maamlo me mera bhi baap hai, tu sach sach bata tune bhi ye sab baate notice ki h ya nhi.
Me - nahi...... Maine unka ye behavior abhi note nhi kiya balki jabse mai yaha aaya hunn tab se unko notice kar rha hu. Unke dimaag me kuchh to khichdi pak rahi h. Jo shayad mere liye haanikarak shabit ho sakti h.

Rj - kaise be, tujhe kya pareshani h issme. Ho sakta hai ki hamara hi sochna galat ho...aur agar sahi bhi hoti to achhi hi baat hai na. Kon sa ham yahan hamesha ke liye rahne aaye h, aur agar chachi khud line pe aa rahi to fir ham bhala kyu pichhe hate.

Me- dekh rajnish ...... bhool kar bhi aisi galti nhi karna tujhe meri kasam. Tumhe pata hai na yar ki mera pura pariwar mujhe manhush manta hai, gaali deta hai, mujhse beinteha nafrat karta hai, aur mai nahi chahta ki
Mujhe gaali dene wali ki shankhya me iss ghar ke sadasya bhi shamil ho.
Aaj mujhe bahut dino baad pariwar ka hone ka
Ehshash hua hai mai ise bas acchhe se jina chahta hunn. Kyoki kal mere ghar se bhi sab log aarhe hai, aur tujhe pata hai wo log mere sath fir se waise hi pesh aayenge, bas tum kuchh bevkoofi mat kar dena.

Rj- thik hai bhai, mai koi harkat nhi krunga.
Par tu iss chachi ki kaise samjhayega , inki harkate dekh kar lagta hai ki tere lathi se apna bil ka bhosda kara ke manengi .

Me- tu fir se bakchodi karne laga laude.
Unko jo karna h kare bas hame koi bhi galti nahi karni h, aur sath me ye bhi pata lagana hai ki wo aisa kar kyu rahi hai.
.
Ham dono abhi baat hi kar rahe the ki apne room se chachi bhi apne kapde badal ke wapas aagyi. Kasam se yaar kya lag rhi thi wo aashmani saree me bilkul kisi jalpari jaisi, ek pal ke liye to mera niyat hi dol gya unhe aise dekh kar , yahi haal kuchh rajnish ka bhi tha par mai apne aap ko control kar ke room se baahar nikla aur chachi bhi bahar hall me hi mil gayi.
Chachi- to chale..... Rajnish Kaha gye? Wo nhi chal rhe kya
Tabhi rajnish udhar se aate hue bolta h
Rajnish - are nhi nhi chachi... Bas apne baal set kar raha tha. Chalo chalte h
Fir ham tino haveli ke just baahar ek bahut hi sundar bagiche me chale jaate hai, waha bilkul hi shant mahol tha, ghane ghane aam ki ped, neem ke ped aur bahut saare flower lage huye the. Wahi garden me baithne ke liye benches bhi rakha gya tha, hamlog yun hi tahlte tahlte baate karne lage.
Me- daadi ka tujhe call aaya tha kya rajnish... Mera to cellphone hi off ho gya tha to charging pe laga kar aaya hun.
Rajnish- maine to dekha hi nhi yaar, .. Ohh sitt mai to apna phone bhi lana bhool gaya aaplog baate kro mai jara apna phone leke aata hu.
Me -thik h... Jldi aana...
(Fir chachi se) achha chachi wo kaka kon the jo ham dono ko yahan haveli lekar aaye the ...

Chachi- jinhone aapko haveli tak laya na.. Unhe yaha sab kaka - kaka bolte hai, bahut hi bhale aadmi hai, apke dada ke bahut karibi the wo.
Par Unka beta bahut hi awara kism ka inshan hai, sanjay naam hai uska aapke chacha ke sath hi rahta h wo, pitaji to inhe bhi bahot bolte hai ki inn awara logo ke saath rahna band karo, par wo kinhi ki sunte hi kahaa h.
Me - tab aap unhe bolo ki apni sangat ko sudhare.
Chachi- apko kya lagta h maine unhe nhi taka hai in sab harkato ke karan , par mere kuchh bolne pe wo mujh pe gussa karne lagte h.
Inta bolte bolte chachi ke aankh me anshu aane lage par wo mujhe jataye bina hi apni anshu pochh li, mujhe ab samajh hi nhi aarha tha ki mai ab kya kahu, ek miya bibi ke bich me bolna mujhe jayaz nhi laga. To maine bas unhe santawna diya.
Me - chachi , chacha jarur sudhar jayenge, jab unhe ye gyat hoga ki unki ek beti bhi hai to bhale hi apne bache ke liye hi par wo apne aap me parivartan laye ge jarur. Aap jyada pareshan mat hoiye.

chachi- Aap bache to hai nahi, aap bhi jante hi honge ki ek aurat ki bhi uski kuchh jarurte hoti hai jo uske jivansathi se hoti hai....
Mujhe bhi yahi sab khalta hai ki mera jivansathi meri jarurte ka ratti bhar bhi khayal nahi rakhta h. Aapko lag raha hoga ki mai kaisi baate kar raha hunn par mai karu to karu kya, aajtak yaha iss haveli me mere rahte huye koi bhi gair mard nhi aya hai , to mai apne baare me shirf kalpana ko hi batati hunn wo meri nanad se pahle meri saheli hai,
Me - mujhe bura nhi laga chachi... Aap ki koi bhi baat galat nhi h, lekin agar chacha aapko khush nhi rakh paate to aap unka ilaaz kara lijiye, Aaj kal ke samay me to saari bimaari ka tod nikal chuka hai.
Chachi - tumhe kya lagta h, wo ilaz kara lenge .. Nahi ..... unhe apne jhuthi mardangi pe jhuthi ghamand h na, wo kabhi bhi apne mardangi pe sawal uthana bardast nhi karte h. Tabhi to mai aur kalpana ne ek dusra tarika socha h... Khud ko khush karne ke liye.
Me- kaisa tarika......






To be continued.........

Nice update brother
Jaisa ki ab tak padha ki kishan ka bachpan bahut takleef bhara raha h....kyuki choti umar me apne pariwar se dur hona apne aap me bahut badi baat h....
kishan ke dada or dadi ne bahut hi sahi nirnay liya tha kishan ko dusre shehar bhejkar....kyuki agar use wahi rakhte to shayad haalat kuch or badtar ho jaate kishan ke liye...
Shambhu Pratap ji ne apne jivan kal me aur bhi bahut se nek kaam kiye jiska saboot kaka ka kishan ke liye Khushi or sneh se pata chalta h....
ab kishan bijender ji ki haveli me ruka hua h to ab dekhna ye hoga ki unke pariwar wale itne saalo baad bhi apne man ki nafrat ko darshate h ya kishan ke saath ek ajnabi jaisa hi suluk karenge.....
Is shaadi me aane se shayad ab kishan ki life bhi change hone wali h....
jis tarah se uski Chachi radhika usse itna khul kar baat kar rahi h kya uske piche bhi koi chal ho sakti h kyuki sirf kuch hi der me hum kisi insan ko apne pariwar ke behad hi khas baate nahi batate h...ya fir radhika bas kishan ka bharosa jitna chahti h.....

aagle update ki pratiksha hai....

 

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update : 1
mera nam kishan hai, mai hu to ek achhe khase rutwe wale pariwar se hu ,but uss pariwar ke logo ka kahna hai ki mai unke liye mar chuka hu . bas meri dadi hi mujhse bat krti hai.
mujhe ma baap to pyar nhi diye par dadi mujhe hamesha apne sath rkhti thi aur wo mere bachpan se hi meri health ko lekar bahut sakht the . unhi ke karan aaj 20 sal me hi mera sharir kisi pehalwan jaisa ho gya hai. meri height 6'5 feet hai ,
mai pichhle 4 salo se bhopal me rh kr padhaye ke sath sath sports ( kabaddi) ki taiyari kar rha hu aur abhi graduation me admission hi liya hai .

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. iss samay meri age 20 yr hai aur mai apne ek frnd (rajnish) ke sath bhopal me ek room rent pe lekar wahin sath padhayi karte hai .
mai roz ki trh aaj bhi subah apne samay pe 5 bajne se pahle uth gya . abhi shardi ki suruat hi hyi thi. mai pahle fresh ho kar apne kamre aaya aur rajnish ko uthaya jo abhi bhi gahri nind me tha. usne uthte hi apni unindi bhari awaz me kaha
" abe aaj sunday hai sone de na achhe se '
mai : abe chutiye jaldi uth bhul gya aaj meri dadi aane wali hai yaha aur wo room ki aisi halat dekhege to tere sath sath meri bhi gand me bans dal denge chal uth jaldi .
rajnish: yar tu itna darta kyu hai apni dadi se wo to itni achhi hai . tumhare pariwar me wahi to ek hai jo tum se achhe se bat karte hai aur to aur wo hafte me ek bar tum se milne bhi yahan aa hi jate hai .
me: yar mai nahi chahta ki meri koi bhi galti se neri dadi naraz ho jaye . mere ma , papa , bahan , dada ke sath sath mera pura pariwar mere se nafrat karta hai , koi mujhe apne nazro ke samne dekhna nhi chahta hai . yhi karan tha mai gao se bhopal bhag aaya tha tb dadi hi thi jo mujhe kuchh paise dekar bhopal bheji thi ,
mai ye nahi janta ki meri kis galti ke karan mere pariwar wale mujh se nafrat karte hai , but mai aage koi aisi galti nhi karna chahta jisse mai dadi ko bhi naraz kr du isi liye mai dadi ko kabhi naraz hone ka mauka nhi dena chahta .
rajnish: thik hai thik hai ab jyada senti mat ho aur hat samne se mujhe fresh hone jana hai.
me : to ja na lwde aur ha dadi ek ghante me aajayegi aur wo jyada der nhi rukne wali hai. tu room thik kr lena mai chhat pe kasrat krne ja rha hu , room thik kr ke whi aa jaio.
rajnish: thik h bhenco.....tu ja kasrat karne mai bhi 15 mint me aata hu
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fir mai chhat pe chala gya aur kasrat karne lga.
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aaj ke liye bas itna hi agla update bada hoga dosto.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[-R-A-V-A-N-]

Bahut hi badhiya update tha aise hi likhte raho aur kya baat h 7 update ho gye phir bhi abhi tak sirf 10 page hi huye h story slow chal rahi h ya koi comment nahi kar raha idhar ....m


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धन्यवाद मित्र !
कोशिश रहेगी की हफ्ते मे कहानी की दो अंश दे सकूँ, पर हाँ.... ये निश्चित है की हफ्ते मे एक अंश हमेशा आती रहेगी !
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ऐसे ही साथ देते रहिए...कहानी बहोत लंबी चलेगी तो धैर्य बनाये रखिये !
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धन्यवाद फिर से

 

[-R-A-V-A-N-]

wonderful update chahi ne bhi apne dil ki baat bol diya Kyu uski life me udasi hai unko ek sathi chahiye dekhte kya rang aata hai

अब ये दिल की बात है या शाजिश ये तो आगे पता चलेगी ...
कहानी के साथ बने रहने के लिए धन्यवाद मित्र

 

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Nice update brother
Jaisa ki ab tak padha ki kishan ka bachpan bahut takleef bhara raha h....kyuki choti umar me apne pariwar se dur hona apne aap me bahut badi baat h....
kishan ke dada or dadi ne bahut hi sahi nirnay liya tha kishan ko dusre shehar bhejkar....kyuki agar use wahi rakhte to shayad haalat kuch or badtar ho jaate kishan ke liye...
Shambhu Pratap ji ne apne jivan kal me aur bhi bahut se nek kaam kiye jiska saboot kaka ka kishan ke liye Khushi or sneh se pata chalta h....
ab kishan bijender ji ki haveli me ruka hua h to ab dekhna ye hoga ki unke pariwar wale itne saalo baad bhi apne man ki nafrat ko darshate h ya kishan ke saath ek ajnabi jaisa hi suluk karenge.....
Is shaadi me aane se shayad ab kishan ki life bhi change hone wali h....
jis tarah se uski Chachi radhika usse itna khul kar baat kar rahi h kya uske piche bhi koi chal ho sakti h kyuki sirf kuch hi der me hum kisi insan ko apne pariwar ke behad hi khas baate nahi batate h...ya fir radhika bas kishan ka bharosa jitna chahti h.....

aagle update ki pratiksha hai....

बहोत बढ़िया मित्र की आपने कहानी के आधार को अच्छे से समझा ,
अंत तक बने रहियेगा
अभी तो शुरुआत है, सफर लम्बा चलेगा !
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As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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धन्यवाद भाई
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कहानी का update हर हफ्ते wednessay को आयेगा !

 

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update 5
baba ko maine jaise hi bataya ki mai sambhu pratap ji ka pota hu waise hi unke chehre pe utshah aur aascharya ke mile jule bhaw aa gaye..........

unhone utashah purvak chalte huye hi mera hath tham liya ..... aur utshahit hote huye ladkhadayi aawaj me bole.....


baba- tttum..... aap shambhu pratap bhaisahab ke pote ......... kkk'.kishann bitwa ho...

me - ha baba mai kishan hi hu ...

baba- are are are.... (mera kandha pakadte huye) kitna bada hoyi gawa ho kishan bitwa ... bilkul apne dada pe hi gaye ho aap.....naahi naahi balki unse bhi duii anguli uparhi hoi gawa ho ....
aur batawa bitwa akele aaye ho ka ...

me - ha baba ghar se sab kal aayenge .... mai to bahar shahar me rahta hu to wahi se sidhe gao aa gya hu.....

baba- tumhare dada ji na bitwa bhute nek aadmi the .... mai bhi unhi ke sath tha sena me hawaldar ke audhe pe ... tumhare dada ji mujhe apna chota bhai hi mante the ....
pure bataliyan ko wo pariwar jaisa samajhte the ... hnnn par anushashan ke bahut shakht the wo .....
wo mere retire hone ke6 saal pahle hi retire ho gye the lekin unka banaya huaa anushashan aaj bhi uss bataliyan ka mahatwpurn shakti hai....


baba ko maine jaise hi bataya ki mai sambhu pratap ji ka pota hu waise hi unke chehre pe utshah aur aascharya ke mile jule bhaw aa gaye..........

unhone utashah purvak chalte huye hi mera hath tham liya ..... aur utshahit hote huye ladkhadayi aawaj me bole.....


baba- tttum..... aap shambhu pratap bhaisahab ke pote ......... kkk'.kishann bitwa ho...

me - ha baba mai kishan hi hu ...

baba- are are are.... (mera kandha pakadte huye) kitna bada hoyi gawa ho kishan bitwa ... bilkul apne dada pe hi gaye ho aap.....naahi naahi balki unse bhi duii anguli uparhi hoi gawa ho ....
aur batawa bitwa akele aaye ho ka ...

me - ha baba ghar se sab kal aayenge .... mai to bahar shahar me rahta hu to wahi se sidhe gao aa gya hu.....

baba- tumhare dada ji na bitwa bhute nek aadmi the .... mai bhi unhi ke sath tha sena me hawaldar ke audhe pe ... tumhare dada ji mujhe apna chota bhai hi mante the ....
pure bataliyan ko wo pariwar jaisa samajhte the ... hnnn par anushashan ke bahut shakht the wo .....
wo mere retire hone ke6 saal pahle hi retire ho gye the lekin unka banaya huaa anushashan aaj bhi uss bataliyan ka mahatwpurn shakti hai....



waise hi bat karte karte ham gao ke andar bijendra dada ji dalan ke pas pahunch gaye .....iske just pichhe bali haveli bijendra dada ki haveli thi
haveli ke gate pe pahunchane ke bad baba bijendra dada ko aabaz lagane lge ....

baba - are ho bijendra.......bijendra ho...... tanik bahir aawo ho ...
are dekho to kon aaya aye hai ....

haveli ke andar se kisi ladki ki aawaj aati hai......... kaun hai veeru kaka....


baba- are bitiya ...... apne shambhu pratap ji ke pote ... kishan bitwa aur unke dost aaye hai...
(ham dono se) chalo bitwa .... haveli ke andar chalo ....

fir ham dono haveli ke bade se gate ke andar chale jate hai....

rajnish dhire se mere kaan me bolta hai

rj- oooo bhenchoo....... ye haveli to bahut badi hai yar.... lagta hai tumhare dadi ke bhai log bahu bade gharane se hai....


me - mai jyada to nahi janta .... hann par itna jarur janta hu ki purane jamane me dadi ke pita ji yaha ke raja ke pradhan mantri the......aur raja ke khash aadmi bhi....
so unhi kr banayi huyi hogi ye sari property.....

rj - haa bhai lg bhi rha hai ye sab rajbada type ka



mai yaha kisi ko pehchanta to nahi tha shivay bijendra dada ji ke to meri problem ye thi ki kahi ye log bhi mujhe mere pariwar walo jaise mujhe pehchanne se mana na kar de.....
darasal jis haalato ne aapka parvarish huaa hai unn haalato ka prabhaw aapke vashtavik jivan aur soch pe bhi pad jati hai....
iss kaaran mere andar bhi ab kisi se milne ke pahle bahu ghabrahat hoti thi .. khash kar agar saamne wala kahi nakahi se mere pariwar ka hissa ho...
mujhe ghabrahat iss bat ki hoti thi ki kahi ye bhi hame beijjti ka aayina na dikhane lag jaye mere pariwar walo ki hi tarah.......



mai abhi inhi khayalo me khoya huaa tha ki haveli ke andar wale kamrey se do khubsurat milaye baahar nikli...
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1st mahila - kon hai ye kaka

2md mahila - ha kaka kon hai ye dono ...

baba- are bitiya tumhare fufa ji hai na shambhu pratap ji ( meri trf ishara karte huye) ye bitwa unhi ka pota kishan hain.....
shahar se aaye hai...

baba ki bat sunne ke bad 1st mahila khush ho gayi par 2nd mahila kuchh sochne lagi...

baba- aur hann kishan bitva ye hai ( 1st mahila ke trf ishara karte huye ) kalpana bitiya issi ke byah me tum aaye ho ... aur ye hai (2nd mahila ke taraf ishara karte huye) radhika bitiya iss haveli ki bahuriya

...radhika bitiya tumhari chachi lagi rishte me aur kalpana bitiya tumhari buaa lagi...
maine dono ko hath jod kar namaskar kiya....
mai ek bat nate kar raha tha radhika chachi ji mujhe bahut gor se ghure ja rahi thi .... wohi dusari taraf kalpana bua mujhe dekh kar mushkurate huye boli...

kalpana- aao kishan.....aao kishan aandar aajao ......

me - ji chaliye ....

fir mai aur rajnish bhi kalpana bua aur radhika chachi ke sath andar chale gaye... andar jate samay kalpana buaa ne kaha.......

kalpana buaa- tumhe to mai yad bhi nhi hungi na kishan....?

mai iss sawal se jhep sa gya...

me - sach kahu to mai aaplogo se aaj pahli bar mila hu.....to aap se kabhi mila hi nahi to aap yada kaha se rahogi buaa.....

kalpana- dekho pahle ye bua bua bolna band karo yar .... jara dekho khud ko ....mujhse 1 fit lamba ho chada ho aur itna smart bhi........kaha se tum mere bhatije lagte ho ....
aur hann mai kya tumko adhed umr ki aurat dikhti hu kya...

me- par rishte me to aap mere bua huye na to mai aise hi kaise kuchh bol sakta hu....

kalpana- pehli bat ki mai tum se matra 6 sal hi badi hu ..... wo bhi dekhne se to nhi lgta hai .... kaha tum pehalwan se aur kaha mai......
aur dusri bat ye ki mai tumhare sath bachpan me bahot kheli huu.... tab tum mujhe shirf kalpi keh kar bulate the......so abhi bhi waise hi bula sakte ho ......
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Good update

 

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Good update