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UPDATE #6.2















SORRY GUYS.. KUCH DINO SE UPDATE NAHI AA PAA RAHI THI… US SABKA REASON BAAD M EXPLAIN KRUNGA.. ABHI PHLE STORY PE FOCUS KR LETE HAI






LAST UPDATE M HUMNE DEKHA KI JAI NE RAKHI KO PRESHAN KRNE VALE LADKE KO JAAN SE MAAR DIYA THA VAHI DUSRI AUR VIK AUR RAKHI KI MAA KE PASS EK PHONE AATA H JISME MLA K BETE K BAARE M KOI KHABAR MILTI HAI​



AB CHALO AAGE BADHTE H..



SONIYA KO PHONE AANE SE 20 MINUTE PHLE..






MLA KA BETA AUR USKE KUCH DOST SEHAR M HUDDANG MACHA RAHE THE… USI TIME JAI AUR RAKHI US LADKE KO JAAN SE MAAR KE RAKHI KE GHAR KI TARAF JAA RHE THE..​



BICH RASTE M MLA KA BETA RAKHI KO DEKH LETA HAI AUR USKO RAKHI PSND AA JATI H AUR VO USKE DOSTO SE BOLTA H



MLA KA BETA : OYE RAGHAV SUN… MEREKO YE MAAL AAJ RAAT K LIYE APNE BISTAR PE CHAIYE PATA KR IJJAT SE BHEJEGA VO LADKA YA FIR JABARDASTI KRNI PDE TO LADKE KE HAATH PER TODH KE LE AAIYO







RAGHAV : THEEK H VISHAL BHAI JESA TU BOLE… GAADI SIDE M ROK M LEKE AATA HU LONDIYA KO​



NOW TIME TO INTRODUCE FEW NEW CHARATERS IN STORY..



VISHAL : MLA KA BETA H.. EK NUMBER KA AAWARA AUR BIGDA HUA LADKA H.. ISKI TAKAT ISKA BAAP NAHI ISKA DOST RAGHAV HAI



RAGHAV : MLA KI RAKHAIL KA BETA HAI… AUR VISHAL KA KHAAS DOST BHI… HIGHT AROUND 6 FEET KI H



MLA VIJAY : SEHER KA SABSE BADA THARKI INSAAN H … LOGO KO MARNA ISKE LIYE NORMAL HAI.. ACP SONIYA ISKI RAAND HAI AUR BHI NA JANE KITNI RANDIYA H IS BHADWE KI… LOGO KO TO YE DOUBT TAK H KI VISHAL SONIYA AUR VIJAY KA BETA H KYUKI MEDICAL SCIENCE NE PROVE KIYA H KI VIJAY KI BIWI MAA NAHI BAN SKTI







AB STORY CONTINUE KRTE H..​



RAGHAV RAKHI KO BEECH RASTE M ROK K USKO BOLTA H

RAGHAV : SUN OYE LADKI.. CHAL MERE SAATH IJJAT SE CHALEGI TO EK RAAT KE BAAD TEREKO CHODD DENGE.. AGR NAKHRE KRE TO YAHII… TADAAAKKKK



RAGHAV KA ITNA BOLTE HI PASS KHADE JAI NE EK JHANATE DAR THAPPAD RAGHAV KE CHERE PE RASEED DIYA..



THAPPAD ITNA TAGDA THA KI KUCH DER K LIYE RAGHAV KI AAKHO K SAMNE ANDHERA CHA GYA.. BHALE HI JAI KI HEIGHT KAM HO PR GURUKUL KA SABSE BEST FIGHTER HONE K KARAN USKO KAI TYPE KI FIGHTING SKILLS AATI THI..



KUCH 2 MINUTE BAAD RAGHAV KO HOSH AATA H TO USKO YAAD AATA H KI ABHI KYA HUA… USSE TO RAGHAV KA GUSSA PHLE SE KAI GUNA JYADA BADD JATA H…



RAGHAV SIDHA JAI KI CHATI M EK LATT MARTA H AUR FIR TO MUKKO KI ESI BARSAT KRTA H KI KUCH DER K LIYE JAI KA DEFENCE KAM HI NAHI KR PATA H… RAGHAV KA YE ROOP DEKH KE TO VISHAL KI BHI GAAND FATT GAYI.. JAI KO PITTE DEKH RAKHI VIK AUR JAY KO CALL KRKE PURI BAAT BTA DETI HAI TO VIK YE PUCHTA H KI SAMNE KITNE BANDE H… JAB RAKHI BOLTI H KI 2 BANDE H TO VIK BOLTA H EK KAAM KR BHEN TU PASS M BETH K JUICE PI AUR FIGHT KA MAJA LE… ABHI JAI US BANDE KI POWER KO CHECK KR RHA H..



YAHA VIK NE APNI BAAT PURI KARI AUR VAHA SECONDS M JAI NE LADAI KA RUKH HI PALAT DIYA.. YAHA RAKHI NE JUICE PEENA START KIYA AUR VAHA JAI NE RAGHAV KI CHATI PE BETH K USKE CHERE PE AUR ESECIALLY USKI NAK PE MUKKE BARSHANE SHURU KR DIYE… APNE DOST KI ITNI BURI PITAI HOTE DEKH VISHAL SE RUKA NAHI GAYA AUR USNE APNI LIFE KI SABSE BADI GALTI KRDI..



JAI KI MAAR SE RAGHAV BEHOSH HO GAYA THA KI TABHI VISHAL NE AAKE USKE CHATI PE LAAT MAARI AUR USKE UPAR BADHAT LENE KI KOSISH KI PR JAB USKO SAMJH M AAGYA KI VO KUCH NAHI KR SKTA TO VO VAHA SE BAGHNE LGA.. BS YAHI EK GALTI USKI LIFE KI SABSE BADI GHATNA BAN GAYI



BHAGTE HUE VISHAL KO VIJAY KE DUSHMANO NE GHER LIYA… SABHI KE HAATHO NE NANGI TALWARE THI AUR SABHI NE EK CIRCLE BANA LIYA THA.. ISI TIME VISHAL NE SONIYA KE PASS CALL KRKE SAARI BAAT USE BTAI BECAUSE VO JANTA THA KI USKE BAAP SE JYADA USKI CARE SONIYA KRTI THI…



AB STORY PRESENT M RUN KAREGI…



SONIYA PHONE SUNTE HI PASS K STATION M CALL KRKE EK TEAM KO BHEJNE KO BOLTI H PR THANEDAR KO ALREADY WARNING AND PAISE MILE HOTE H TO VO BAHANA BANA DETA H… AB SONIYA KI YE HALAT DEKH JAI AUR VIK USSE PUCHTE H TO VO SAARI BAAT UNHE BTATI H BS YE CHUPA K KI VO VISHAL KE BAAP KI RAAND H AUR VISHAL USKI KOOKH SE HI PAIDA HUA H… AB YE SAB SUNKE JAI USE BHAROSHA DILATA H AUR VIK AUR RAKHI KE SAATH USI JAGAH PE PHOCH JATA H JAHA VISHAL KO GHERE HUE 20 GUNDE USE MARNE K LIYE FILMY STYLE M WALK KR RHE THE… YE SAB DEKH KE JAHA RAKHI KO KHUSHI MIL RAHI THI VAHI JAI KO DARR THA KI KAHI VO APNA KIYA HUA PROMISE PURA NA KR PAYA TO KYA HOGA..



AB JAI VIK AUR RAKHI SE BOLTA H KI TUM LOG JUICE PIYO M US SALE KO BACHA K LATA HU.. ITNA BOLTE HI JAI UN GUNDO KI TARAF BHAGNE LAGTA H AUR ALLU ARJUN K STYLE M EK SAATH 2 GUNDO KO HAWA M UDA DETA H… APNE 2 BANDO KO IS HALAT M DEKH KE US GANG KA LEADER DARR JATA HAI VAHI JAI KO VAHA DEKH K VISHAL KI GAAND FATT K 4 HO JATI H..



AB JAI UN GUNDO K LEADER KO CLEAR WAY M WARN KRTE HUE KHTA H KI APNE GUNDO KO LEKE YAHA SE NIKAL JAO VRNA USNE KISI KO PROMISE KIYA H IS LADKE KO TUM LOGO K HAATHO MARNE NAHI DUNGA… TO AGR TUM LOGO KO APNI HADDIYA SAHI SALAMAT CHAIYE TO SHANTI SE YAHA SE JIS RASTE SE AAE HO USI RASTE SE VAPAS CHALE JAO VRNA KAHI JANE K KABIL NAHI BACHOGE..







JAI KI BAAT SUNKE UN GUNDO KA LEADER HASNE LGTA H AUR APNE 2 BANDO KO JAI KO MARNE K LIYE BHEJTA H.. JAI KO MARNE GYE BANDE KUCH HI SECONDS M JAMEEN PE GIRE HUE MILTE H.. AB VO EK SAATH 4 BANDE BHEJTA H PR RESULT AB BHI SAME HI THA.. CHAHE 2 AAE CHAHE 4 AUR CHAHE 16.. JAI KO MARNE GAYE SARE BANDE JAI KO TOUCH KRNE K PHLE HI JAMEEN PE GIRE HUE HOTE H… ISKE PICHE REASON KYA THA YE BAAT SIRF JAI, JAY, VIK AUR RAJU JANTE HAI..​



RAJU JINDA NAHI H AUR BAAKI LOGO NE AB TAK IS BAARE M KISI KO KUCH BHI NAHI BTAYA HAI.. AB KUCH 30 MINUTE KI FIGHT K BAAD VISHAL KO MARNE AAE SABHI GUNDE JAMEEN CHAT RHE THE AUR IS SABKA REASON THA JAI.. AB JAI KI TAKAT DEKH KE JAHA EK TARAF VISHAL KI GAAND FATT K GODAM BAN CHUKI THI VAHI KOI USKE PYAR M PADD CHUKA THA …



AB JAI JAAKE RAKHI AUR VIK SE APNA JUICE MANGTA H.. TO RAKHI JAI KO APNA JHUTA JUICE DE DETI H AUR JAI BHI BADE PYAR SE US JUICE KO PEE LETA HAI…


















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MINI UPDATE 2


JUICE PEEKE JAI RAKHI AUR VIK 3NO GHAR KE LIYE CHAL DETE HAI..

AB AAGE KI KAHANI JAI APNE JUBAAN SE BTAEGA
GHAR PHOCH KR M TO APNE ROOM M SONE CHALA GYA PR THODI DER M GHAR K BHAR GAADIYA AAKE RUKNE LAGI. EK K BAAD EK KRKE 5 YA 6 GAADIYA AAI HONGI. AB THODI DER PHLE HI SONE KI KOSIS KRI THI MENE ISLIYE AAKH KHUL GYI.. JAB M BHAR NIKLA TO DEKHA MLA AUR USKA BETA BHAR KHADE THE SAATH M UNKE KAREEB 30 BANDE BHI THE.


MLA APNE EK GUNDE SE RAKHI KO PKD KE VAHI NANGI KRNE KA ORDER DETA.. JAB YE BAAT JAI SUNTA H TO VO NA RIGHT DEKHTA H NA HI LEFT AUR SIDHA US BANDE KE EK THAPPAD MARTA… THAPPAD ITNA TAGDA THA KI VO BANDA VAHI BEHOSH HO GYA.. APNE BANDE KI YE HALAT DEKH K MLA KO BHI SHOCK LGTA HAI. SONIYA JAB JAI KO YE SAB KRTE DEKHTI H TO VO USE ROKNE KI KOSIS KRTI H PR AB KOI FAYDA NAHI HOGA USE ROKNE SE YE BAAT RAKHI USE BTA DETI H.

MLA : OYE LADKE TERI ITNA HIMMAT TU VIJAY KE ADMIYO KO HAATH LGAEGA. YE SONIYA MERI RAKHAIL HAI AUR ISKI YE BETI MERE BETE … CHATAKKKKK

RAKHI K BAARE M VIJAY KUCH BOL PATA USSE PHLE HI JAI NE USKO THAPPAD DIYA
JAI : MADARCHOD KY BOLA… TERA BETA RAKHI K SAATH KY KREGA… CHATAKKK …. CHATAKKKKK….. CHATAKKKKK….. CHATAKKKKK JAI BINA DEKHE LAGATAR THAPPAD MARNE SHURU KRTA H JISKO DEKH K SONIYA KO BHI DARR LGNE LGTA H KYUKI THAPPAD USI TAKAT SE LG RHE THE JIS TAQAT SE THODI DER PHLE JAI NE VIJAY K EK GUNDE KO MARA THA..

APNE BAAP KI HALAT DEKH VISHAL KI HALAT KHARAB HONE LAGI DARR SE VAHI RAGHAV KI BHI HIMMAT NAHI HO RHI THI KI VO JAI SE KUCH BHI BOL SKE.. AB HALAT YE THE KI JAI NE KUCH HI THAPPAD M VIJAY KE MUH SE KHOON NIKAL DIYA AUR USKO CLEAR WAY M SAMJHA DIYA KI RAKHI KE BAARE M KUCH BHI BOLNA MTLB APNI MAUT KO INVITATION DENA…




JAB SONIYA KO KUCH SAMJH NAI AAYA TO USNE RAKHI SE KAHA KI JAI KO SHANT KRE.. AB RAKHI K LIYE USKI MAA KI KAHI KOI BHI BAAT EK ORDER HOTI H, AB RAKHI KO JAB KOI WAY DIKHAI NA DIYA TO RAKHI NE JAI KO HUG KR LIYA.
RAKHI K HUG KRTE HI JAI KA SARA GUSSA KHATAM HO GYA. JAI EK DUM ESA HO GYA JESE USKO GUSSA AATA HI NAHI H. JAB JAI KA GUSSA SHANT HUA TO USNE VIJAY KO CHODD DIYA. JAB SONIYA NE VIJAY KO DEKHA TO USKI BHI HALAT KHARAB HO GYI KYUKI VIJAY K NAAK MUH AUR KAAN SE KHOON AA RHA THA.. THODI DER M VO LOG VIJAY KO HOSPITAL M LEKE CHALE GYE.
AB ISKE AAGE STORY M EK TIME GAP AAEGA.. YE TIME GAP SABSE IMPORTANT H.. KYU YE BAAT JLDI HI PATA CHALEGI.


 
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MINI UPDATE 2






JUICE PEEKE JAI RAKHI AUR VIK 3NO GHAR KE LIYE CHAL DETE HAI..




AB AAGE KI KAHANI JAI APNE JUBAAN SE BTAEGA

GHAR PHOCH KR M TO APNE ROOM M SONE CHALA GYA PR THODI DER M GHAR K BHAR GAADIYA AAKE RUKNE LAGI. EK K BAAD EK KRKE 5 YA 6 GAADIYA AAI HONGI. AB THODI DER PHLE HI SONE KI KOSIS KRI THI MENE ISLIYE AAKH KHUL GYI.. JAB M BHAR NIKLA TO DEKHA MLA AUR USKA BETA BHAR KHADE THE SAATH M UNKE KAREEB 30 BANDE BHI THE.





MLA APNE EK GUNDE SE RAKHI KO PKD KE VAHI NANGI KRNE KA ORDER DETA.. JAB YE BAAT JAI SUNTA H TO VO NA RIGHT DEKHTA H NA HI LEFT AUR SIDHA US BANDE KE EK THAPPAD MARTA… THAPPAD ITNA TAGDA THA KI VO BANDA VAHI BEHOSH HO GYA.. APNE BANDE KI YE HALAT DEKH K MLA KO BHI SHOCK LGTA HAI. SONIYA JAB JAI KO YE SAB KRTE DEKHTI H TO VO USE ROKNE KI KOSIS KRTI H PR AB KOI FAYDA NAHI HOGA USE ROKNE SE YE BAAT RAKHI USE BTA DETI H.



MLA : OYE LADKE TERI ITNA HIMMAT TU VIJAY KE ADMIYO KO HAATH LGAEGA. YE SONIYA MERI RAKHAIL HAI AUR ISKI YE BETI MERE BETE … CHATAKKKKK



RAKHI K BAARE M VIJAY KUCH BOL PATA USSE PHLE HI JAI NE USKO THAPPAD DIYA

JAI : MADARCHOD KY BOLA… TERA BETA RAKHI K SAATH KY KREGA… CHATAKKK …. CHATAKKKKK….. CHATAKKKKK….. CHATAKKKKK JAI BINA DEKHE LAGATAR THAPPAD MARNE SHURU KRTA H JISKO DEKH K SONIYA KO BHI DARR LGNE LGTA H KYUKI THAPPAD USI TAKAT SE LG RHE THE JIS TAQAT SE THODI DER PHLE JAI NE VIJAY K EK GUNDE KO MARA THA..



APNE BAAP KI HALAT DEKH VISHAL KI HALAT KHARAB HONE LAGI DARR SE VAHI RAGHAV KI BHI HIMMAT NAHI HO RHI THI KI VO JAI SE KUCH BHI BOL SKE.. AB HALAT YE THE KI JAI NE KUCH HI THAPPAD M VIJAY KE MUH SE KHOON NIKAL DIYA AUR USKO CLEAR WAY M SAMJHA DIYA KI RAKHI KE BAARE M KUCH BHI BOLNA MTLB APNI MAUT KO INVITATION DENA…










JAB SONIYA KO KUCH SAMJH NAI AAYA TO USNE RAKHI SE KAHA KI JAI KO SHANT KRE.. AB RAKHI K LIYE USKI MAA KI KAHI KOI BHI BAAT EK ORDER HOTI H, AB RAKHI KO JAB KOI WAY DIKHAI NA DIYA TO RAKHI NE JAI KO HUG KR LIYA.

RAKHI K HUG KRTE HI JAI KA SARA GUSSA KHATAM HO GYA. JAI EK DUM ESA HO GYA JESE USKO GUSSA AATA HI NAHI H. JAB JAI KA GUSSA SHANT HUA TO USNE VIJAY KO CHODD DIYA. JAB SONIYA NE VIJAY KO DEKHA TO USKI BHI HALAT KHARAB HO GYI KYUKI VIJAY K NAAK MUH AUR KAAN SE KHOON AA RHA THA.. THODI DER M VO LOG VIJAY KO HOSPITAL M LEKE CHALE GYE.

AB ISKE AAGE STORY M EK TIME GAP AAEGA.. YE TIME GAP SABSE IMPORTANT H.. KYU YE BAAT JLDI HI PATA CHALEGI.






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MINI UPDATE 2






JUICE PEEKE JAI RAKHI AUR VIK 3NO GHAR KE LIYE CHAL DETE HAI..




AB AAGE KI KAHANI JAI APNE JUBAAN SE BTAEGA

GHAR PHOCH KR M TO APNE ROOM M SONE CHALA GYA PR THODI DER M GHAR K BHAR GAADIYA AAKE RUKNE LAGI. EK K BAAD EK KRKE 5 YA 6 GAADIYA AAI HONGI. AB THODI DER PHLE HI SONE KI KOSIS KRI THI MENE ISLIYE AAKH KHUL GYI.. JAB M BHAR NIKLA TO DEKHA MLA AUR USKA BETA BHAR KHADE THE SAATH M UNKE KAREEB 30 BANDE BHI THE.





MLA APNE EK GUNDE SE RAKHI KO PKD KE VAHI NANGI KRNE KA ORDER DETA.. JAB YE BAAT JAI SUNTA H TO VO NA RIGHT DEKHTA H NA HI LEFT AUR SIDHA US BANDE KE EK THAPPAD MARTA… THAPPAD ITNA TAGDA THA KI VO BANDA VAHI BEHOSH HO GYA.. APNE BANDE KI YE HALAT DEKH K MLA KO BHI SHOCK LGTA HAI. SONIYA JAB JAI KO YE SAB KRTE DEKHTI H TO VO USE ROKNE KI KOSIS KRTI H PR AB KOI FAYDA NAHI HOGA USE ROKNE SE YE BAAT RAKHI USE BTA DETI H.



MLA : OYE LADKE TERI ITNA HIMMAT TU VIJAY KE ADMIYO KO HAATH LGAEGA. YE SONIYA MERI RAKHAIL HAI AUR ISKI YE BETI MERE BETE … CHATAKKKKK



RAKHI K BAARE M VIJAY KUCH BOL PATA USSE PHLE HI JAI NE USKO THAPPAD DIYA

JAI : MADARCHOD KY BOLA… TERA BETA RAKHI K SAATH KY KREGA… CHATAKKK …. CHATAKKKKK….. CHATAKKKKK….. CHATAKKKKK JAI BINA DEKHE LAGATAR THAPPAD MARNE SHURU KRTA H JISKO DEKH K SONIYA KO BHI DARR LGNE LGTA H KYUKI THAPPAD USI TAKAT SE LG RHE THE JIS TAQAT SE THODI DER PHLE JAI NE VIJAY K EK GUNDE KO MARA THA..



APNE BAAP KI HALAT DEKH VISHAL KI HALAT KHARAB HONE LAGI DARR SE VAHI RAGHAV KI BHI HIMMAT NAHI HO RHI THI KI VO JAI SE KUCH BHI BOL SKE.. AB HALAT YE THE KI JAI NE KUCH HI THAPPAD M VIJAY KE MUH SE KHOON NIKAL DIYA AUR USKO CLEAR WAY M SAMJHA DIYA KI RAKHI KE BAARE M KUCH BHI BOLNA MTLB APNI MAUT KO INVITATION DENA…










JAB SONIYA KO KUCH SAMJH NAI AAYA TO USNE RAKHI SE KAHA KI JAI KO SHANT KRE.. AB RAKHI K LIYE USKI MAA KI KAHI KOI BHI BAAT EK ORDER HOTI H, AB RAKHI KO JAB KOI WAY DIKHAI NA DIYA TO RAKHI NE JAI KO HUG KR LIYA.

RAKHI K HUG KRTE HI JAI KA SARA GUSSA KHATAM HO GYA. JAI EK DUM ESA HO GYA JESE USKO GUSSA AATA HI NAHI H. JAB JAI KA GUSSA SHANT HUA TO USNE VIJAY KO CHODD DIYA. JAB SONIYA NE VIJAY KO DEKHA TO USKI BHI HALAT KHARAB HO GYI KYUKI VIJAY K NAAK MUH AUR KAAN SE KHOON AA RHA THA.. THODI DER M VO LOG VIJAY KO HOSPITAL M LEKE CHALE GYE.

AB ISKE AAGE STORY M EK TIME GAP AAEGA.. YE TIME GAP SABSE IMPORTANT H.. KYU YE BAAT JLDI HI PATA CHALEGI.






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