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Bhai naye sire se hi suru karo.
Mai second page par hun aur kaafi mistakes hai. Kahaani ke bich bich me kahi aur ka part ghusa hua hai.

Fir ek banda us se india aa raha hai apne maa baap ke ghar, lekin pahuch jaata hai apne dost ke ghar.
Ghar pahuchta hai to uske liye aarti ki thaali liye maa ki khada hona chahiye tha lekin ek chhota sa manager ghar me ghusne nahi deta.

Aap isi theme par naya kahaani suru karo aur isko band kar do. Ye kisi kaam ja nahi hai
Sorry doston galti se Maine post kar diya
 
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update....
Naina-aaj bhi priya hi ajay ki khusi hai aur us ki khusi ke liye
hum kuch bhi ker shakte hai.per ajay aab yaha nahi hai wo
India chala gaya.
P.D-Ye to bahut accha hai hum bhi aab India mai hi settled
ho Gaye hai priya bhi wahi hai.
Naina-Lagta hai Bhagwan se bhi un dono ki judayi dekhi
nahi gayi.aap chalne ki taiyari kare mai aapna saman pack
ker ke lat hu.
P.D-Per beta itne jaldi thumare visa aur baki ki formalt
kaise ho payegi.
Naina-Aap bhool rahe hai mai bhi ek Indian hu aur hamesa
rahugi aap us ki tension na le waise bhi yaha koi hame kisi
kam ke liye mana nahi ker shakta.
P.D-Ha WO to muje pata hai mera sawal hi galat tha .
 
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galt nahi thi.aap log to bas wohi ker rahe the Jo us samay
aap ki bet ke liye thik tha.bahut hi bebkoof hai WO aapne
se Jada hamesa hi dusro ke bare mai sochta hai isliye Jo
kuch bhi huwa usmai WO aapne hi galt manta hai aur aaj
bhi aapne ko saza de raha hai us galt ki Jo usne ki hi nahi
aaj bhi WO rato mai us hadse ko yaad ker ke rota hai aur
priya ki tasvir se maffi mangta hai.
Priya D-sach mai Mujse bahut badi galt ho gaye.kisi ne
sach hi kha hai ki do pyar kerne walo ko koi alag nahi ker
shakta hum ne priya ki yaadast Jane ka fayda utha ke us ke
dimag se Ajay ko to nikal diya per us ka dil to aaj bhi Ajay ke
liye hi dhadkta hai aaj bhi us ki chot se chot cheeze us ne
aise sambhal ke rekhi hai jaise un mai us ki jindgi bast ho.
Naina-Kas aap logo ne us waqt jaldbazi na ki hot to aaj
Mera Bhai bhi mere pass hota.
Priya D-Pass hota ka kya matlab.aab kha hai WO.
Naina-Yaha se bahut dur jha use kuch shakun mil sake aur
mai dobara aap ko us ke jindgi mai zahar nahi gholne
dungi.
Priya D-Aisa na kaho nahi to hum priya ko kho denge mere
liye na sahi plz priya ke liye hi plz bata do ki WO kha hai.
Naina-Priya ko kya huwa.
Priya D-Priya ki halat bahut kharab hai.Jab priya ka
accident huwa tha us waqt hum ne socha ki yahi sahi samay
hai priya ki purani yado ko mita ke nayi yade dene ka hum
ne kiya bhi waisa hi kisi tarah hum ne us ki purani sari yade
mita de taki aage use kabhi koi dukh na ho per hum ko
jhatka us waqt laga jab priya ke bhevier mai ek dam se
change aa gaya WO sirf hum dono ko hi pachant hai baki
 
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sabhi use ya to aapne dushman lagte hai ya anjan
shaksh.hum ne socha ki dhree dhree sab thik ho jayega per
aisa huwa nahi din pratdin us ka gussa badne laga aur aab
halat ye hai ki WO gusse mai kuch bhi ker shakt hai WO do
baar khud ki jaan bhi lene ki koshish ker chuki hai .
Naina-Aap log insane nahi ho shakte aap ne us masoom ko
kya se kya bana diya mai aap logo ko kabhi bhi maff nahi
karugi.
Priya D-Muje pata hai mai maffi ki umeed bhi nahi kerta bas
mai to yaha aapni bet ki jindgi ki bheek mangne aaya hu
plz meri bet ki jaan baccha lo.
update....
Naina-aaj bhi priya hi ajay ki khusi hai aur us ki khusi ke liye
hum kuch bhi ker shakte hai.per ajay aab yaha nahi hai wo
India chala gaya.
P.D-Ye to bahut accha hai hum bhi aab India mai hi settled
ho Gaye hai priya bhi wahi hai.
Naina-Lagta hai Bhagwan se bhi un dono ki judayi dekhi
nahi gayi.aap chalne ki taiyari kare mai aapna saman pack
ker ke lat hu.
P.D-Per beta itne jaldi thumare visa aur baki ki formalt
kaise ho payegi.
Naina-Aap bhool rahe hai mai bhi ek Indian hu aur hamesa
rahugi aap us ki tension na le waise bhi yaha koi hame kisi
kam ke liye mana nahi ker shakta.
P.D-Ha WO to muje pata hai mera sawal hi galat tha .
 
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Naina-Galt kera to aab aap ki fitrat ban gayi hai isliye muje
koi Jada umeed aaj bhi nahi hai aap se.
P.D-Sach kha bet tumne sach mai WO insane hu jisne kabhi
aapni galtwo se nahi shika per mai tum se wada kerta hu ki
aage se kuch bhi aisa nahi hoga Jo nahi hona chahiye.
Naina bina un ki Baat ka jabab diye upper aapne kamre mai
chali gayi kamre mai jate hi sabse pehle us ne khud ko relex
kiya phid kisi ko phone kerne lagi koi saath se aath ring ke
baad phone pick huwa.
Naina-Hi mom aap kaise hai.
Mom-bilkul fit and fine per ek bad news hai hame yaha do
se teen din aur lag jayege mai thume call kerne hi wali thi.
Naina-Koi nahi aap aaram se aapna kam karo.Maine aap ko
ye batane ke liye phone kiya tha ki mai India ja rahi hu.
Mom-Beta dekho mai dobara es pe bahas ke mud mai bilkul
nahi hu hum ne tay kiya tha na ki hum sab saath hi chalege
bas ek bar hamara sara business settele ho jaye aur aab to
bas lagbhag sara kam ho hi gaya hai Jada se Jada one week
aur lagne hai .
Naina-Mom WO baat nahi hai darshal priya ke dad aaye hai
aur priya ki halat bahut kharab hai.
Mom-aab wo kya lene aaye hai un ko mana ker do ki hum
kuch bahi ker shakte.
Naina-Mon unhe aapni kiye pe bahut dukh hai aur phir galt
inhone ki hai to saza priya ko kyu aur aap to jant hi hai ki
ajay ki bhi jindgi Judi hai us se .
Mom-Ha per agar dobara mere bete ko dukh dene ki
koshish ki to mai unhe chodugi nahi.
Naina-Isliye to mai bhi Jana chaht hu un ke saath WO bhi
 
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India mai hi settled ho gaye hai.
Mom-Mai abhi nikal rahi hu yaha se hum dono saath
chalege .
Naina-plz mom Maine aaj tak us ke liye kuch nahi kiya plz
ye muje kerne de plz mai aap se aapni puri jindgi mai es ke
alawa kabhi kuch nahi mangugi.
Mom-Per tu aakele kaise .
Naina-muje pe vishwash kare sirf ek baar .
Mom-Ok per tere dad ko kaun samjayega.
Naina-World ki sabse smart lady yani ki aap aur kaun.
Mom-Wo nahi manne wale .
Naina-Muje pata hai ki aap dad ko sambhal legi thanks for
permission mom good bay.
Mom-Maine kab permission de hello hello .es ladki ka kuch
nahi ho shakta aapni Baat bol ke phone bhi kat diya dono
Bhai Behan pagal hai bilkul.
Idher jaise hi Ajay ander jata hai waha lagbhag sabhi log ek
circle bana ke khade the hall mai aur beech mai Gudiya
baith ke roo rahi thi usi ke pass nisha amrita jiya ravi aur
sabhi use chup karane ki koshish ker rahe the.huwa kuch yu
tha ki Gudiya ka pair fisal gaya tha aur pair mai moch aur
sujan dono hi aa gayi thi.(Aur lagbhag sabhi ko pata hai ki
much mai kitna bhankar wala dard hota hai.)
Ajay-Kya huwa Gudiya ko.
Nisha-WO es ka pair fisal gaya aur phir.
Ajay-Jab thumari bas ki nahi thi to mana ker dena chahiye
tha kitna dard ho raha hai us ko dekho.Maine thume kha
tha na ki es ka bahut dhayan rekhna .
Nisha-Sorry mai to bas 5mint ke liye hi**
 
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Ajay-Aab bahane banane ki jarurat nahi hai dobara muje
tum nazer mat aana nahi to muje nahi pata ki mai kya
karuga chali jawo abhi ke abhi mere nazero ke samne se.
Amrita-Ajay us ki galt nahi hai.
Ajay-Muje nahi pata kis ki galt hai kis ki nahi bas muje ye
pata hai ki ye es ki jimmedari thi aur ye thik se nahi nibha
payi .
Jiya di-Wo sab chod ESE dekh hame to ye hath bhi nahi
lagane de rahi shayad tuje lagane de .
Gudiya ko aise rote dekh mere bhi aakho se aashu nikal
gaye.
Mai-Chup kuch nahi huwa bas chot se chot hai abhi thik ho
jayegi.
Gudiya-Ro to aap rahe hai mera to dard aap ko dekhte hi
band ho gaya.
Mai-kisi ne doctor ko bulaya ki nahi.
Jiya di-yaha doctor nahi hai hame Sahar Jana hoga.
Mai-To intzar kis ka hai .ravi jawo ja ke gaddiya le ke aawo
hum abhi nikal rahe hai yaha se.
Mami-Kuch nahi huwa hai ESE bas jara se moch hai subah
tak bilkul thik ho jayegi.
Jiya di-ajay muje bhi lagta hai ki subah tak Gudiya ko kaffi
aram mil jayega .
Mai-Per dekho na kitna dard ho raha hai ese.
Amrita-Aab chot lagi hai to dard to hoga hi na.ESE room
mai le ke chal jiya di dekh lengi aage kya kerna hai.
Maine Gudiya ko god mai utha ke room mai le gaya aur bed
pe leta diya jiya di ne us ke pairo ki malish ker de jis se
Gudiya ko bahut aaram mila.
 
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Gudiya-Aap ne nisha ko faltu mai hi dant diya us ki sach mai
koi galt nahi thi WO to mai hi aap ko dhund rahi thi tabhi
pair fisal gaya aur ye sab ho gaya.
Mai-thik hai per use tera dhayan rekhna chahiye tha.
Gudiya-Sach mai wo to mera bilkul aap ke tarah hi dhayan
rekh rahi thi per aap ko to pata hi na ki mai jab ke kabu mai
nahi aat to WO to phir bhi.
Mai-Ok mai us se maffi mang lunga aab tu ye bata ki dard
to nahi ho raha .
Gudiya-Bilkul bhi nahi plz aap nisha ko abhi mana le mere
liye plz.
Mai-thik hai tu aaram ker mai dekhta hu use.
Maine pura gahr chan diya per muje nisha lahi nahi mile
aab muje bhi aapne kiye pe pachtawa ho raha tha main eek
aakhir koshish kerne ki sochi aur ghar ke chat pe nisha ko
dhundne ke liye chal diya es baar meri kismet ne mera
saath diya aur nisha wahi ek kone mai baithi ro rahi thi.mai
bhi nisha ke pass ja ke baith gaya .
Mai-yaha ke hawa mai gajab ki tajgi hai na.kitna fresh
fresh lag rahi hai .
Nisha-mai kal subah hi yaha se chali jayugi muje dobara
yaad dilane ki jarurat nahi hai.
Mai-tum to bol rahi thi ki hamesa hi mera saath dogi aur
bas itne mai hi sath chod diya.
Nisha-maine kha sath choda tumne hi to chuda liya jab tum
chahte hi nahi ki mai thumare sath rahu to mai kya ker
 
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Gudiya-Aap ne nisha ko faltu mai hi dant diya us ki sach mai
koi galt nahi thi WO to mai hi aap ko dhund rahi thi tabhi
pair fisal gaya aur ye sab ho gaya.
Mai-thik hai per use tera dhayan rekhna chahiye tha.
Gudiya-Sach mai wo to mera bilkul aap ke tarah hi dhayan
rekh rahi thi per aap ko to pata hi na ki mai jab ke kabu mai
nahi aat to WO to phir bhi.
Mai-Ok mai us se maffi mang lunga aab tu ye bata ki dard
to nahi ho raha .
Gudiya-Bilkul bhi nahi plz aap nisha ko abhi mana le mere
liye plz.
Mai-thik hai tu aaram ker mai dekhta hu use.
Maine pura gahr chan diya per muje nisha lahi nahi mile
aab muje bhi aapne kiye pe pachtawa ho raha tha main eek
aakhir koshish kerne ki sochi aur ghar ke chat pe nisha ko
dhundne ke liye chal diya es baar meri kismet ne mera
saath diya aur nisha wahi ek kone mai baithi ro rahi thi.mai
bhi nisha ke pass ja ke baith gaya .
Mai-yaha ke hawa mai gajab ki tajgi hai na.kitna fresh
fresh lag rahi hai .
Nisha-mai kal subah hi yaha se chali jayugi muje dobara
yaad dilane ki jarurat nahi hai.
Mai-tum to bol rahi thi ki hamesa hi mera saath dogi aur
bas itne mai hi sath chod diya.
Nisha-maine kha sath choda tumne hi to chuda liya jab tum
chahte hi nahi ki mai thumare sath rahu to mai kya ker
 
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Shakt hu.
Mai-dost hamesa wo kerte hai jo un ke dosto ke liye accha
hota hai .jaruri nahi ki hamesa samne wale ki baat manana
hi sahi hai.mai sach mai dil se maffi chahta hu plz muje maff
ker do pata nahi kya ho gaya tha muje us samay muje nahi
pata ki kyu mai gudiya ke aakho mai ashu nahi dekh paya.
Nisha-ok maine thume maff ker diya .
Mai-aise nahi muje pehle wale nisha hi wapas chahiye
dekho nisha meri jindgi mai ye pehla moka hai jab mai kisi
se maffi mang raha hu muje sach mai nahi pata ki kisi ko
kaise manana chahiye .
Nisha-ok muje sach mai thumari bato ka bilkul bhi bura
nahi laga balki muje to bura es baat ka laga ki tum ne ek
chota sa kam muje diya aur mai use bhi pura nahi ker payi.
Mai-ye sach nahi hai tum ne bahut acche se us ka dhayan
rekha bas galt meri hi hai mje us ke pass hona chahiye tha
agar mai waha pe hota to ye sab nahi hota.
Nisha-nahi galt meri hi hai.
Mai-maine kha na ki thumari galt nahi hai.
Nisha-sach mai gudiya kitne lucky hai jo use tum mile ho.
Mai-ok aab ye batawo ki thumare es rote huwe chahre pe
hasi lane ke liye aisa kya karu jo tum phir se purani wali
nisha ban jawo.
Nisha-sach mai tum wo karoge.
Mai-bilkul tum bol ke to dekho.bas ganna gane ko mat
bolna nahi to khamaka gaddho ki bheed jama ho jayegi.
Nisha-ha ye to hai muje bataya tha gudiya ne ki tum kitna
bura gaate ho .muje ek hug milega .
Mai-bilkul per sirf dosto wala .
 

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