Incest खेल है या बवाल

[Naina]

Ab to pura yakin ho gaya ke umesh,rajesh , suman, jamuna, ratanes aur dhirendra naam se ek ladke ladkiyo ke group ne ProfessorPo bhai ka ragging liya hoga college time me . bap re itta gussa becharo par
har update dil ko dukha de. jamuna aur suman ka dukh hai ki khatam hone ka naam hi le raha tha . ek khujli upar se kor. lala ko bhi chance mil gaya jamuna ki bebasi ka .
Naina ji yu hi gaadiya nahi bakti. lala jaise log hai hi is layak.

Ab us haramjade suwar lala ko kya hi gaali dun wo chutiya lala pehle se hi 100 najayaz baap ka ek lauta beta hai lala ki chinnar maa ko ye bhi pata nahi hoga ki lala kis mard ki beej hai

 

[ProfessorPo]

सबसे ज़्यादा टफ लाइफ एक गरीब की जिंदगी होती है। जाने कितनी मुसीबतों से झूझना पड़ता है और उस में भी कुछ ऐसे भूखे भेड़िये जैसे लोग होते है जो उस गरीब के मजबूरी का फ़ायदा उठाने की पूरी कोशिश करता है।

Bilkul sahi bola aapne... Yahi samaj ki sachhai hai

 

[ProfessorPo]

लाला अपनी मां बहन की कमर को क्यों नही मसलता

Ye to lala se hi poochna padega...

 

[ProfessorPo]

Bhai kya update likha hai . pehle dil dukhi ho gaya jamuna suman munni dhinu ratan ki halat dekh. par bad me lala aur jamuna ke bate sun loda khada ho gya. bhai next update me klpd mat likh dena. lala jamuna ki mast chudai scene padhne ko maangta hai

Bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aur rahi baat agale scene ki to dekho kisko kya mangta hai aur kya milta hai

 

[ProfessorPo]

Tragic update. ek tees si uth rahi hai dil me. itni garibi, itna dukh, itna dard, karza me dube, itni majburi, pati dur shahar me hai, fir bhi jindagi jine kosish kar rahe the . par lala ke tarah kapti logo ko un logo ke dukh dard ko dekh kar bhi chain nahi. kyu ki us abla aurat ki ijjat par hath jo nahi daal paya ajtak. aj mauka mila to us bechari par tut pada wo. kahani ko vaastavikta se joda ja sakta ho.

Bahut bahut dhanyawad, kahin na kahin ye humare samaj mein aaj bhi ho raha hai tabhi to vastavikta se joda ja sakta hai.

 

[ProfessorPo]

Ab to pura yakin ho gaya ke umesh,rajesh , suman, jamuna, ratanes aur dhirendra naam se ek ladke ladkiyo ke group ne ProfessorPo bhai ka ragging liya hoga college time me . bap re itta gussa becharo par
har update dil ko dukha de. jamuna aur suman ka dukh hai ki khatam hone ka naam hi le raha tha . ek khujli upar se kor. lala ko bhi chance mil gaya jamuna ki bebasi ka .
Naina ji yu hi gaadiya nahi bakti. lala jaise log hai hi is layak.

Bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai...
An agar apko aisa lagta haj ki in sab ne meri raging ki thi to shayad ki hi hogi par socho lala ne aisa kya kia hoga jo usko aisa kirdar mila hai.

 

[ProfessorPo]

Lala ki ma bahan ke tino chedo me ab to dhinu aur ratnu apna lound pelega.

Are aap to bDla lene par utar aaye

 

[ProfessorPo]

update me kadiya aesi jodi gai hai ke jise padh kar ankhe nam ho jaye pratyek bar. par reality yehi hai. Ham lekhak ko dosh nahi de sakte. amir log hamesa se hi shoshan karte hi garibo ki. jaise lala karne ki kosish kar raha tha. asal me garibi ka dard kya hota ye wohi byakti janta hai , jinhone bhoga hai kamiyo aur kathinaio ke bich rahkar jivan bitaya hai. kavitao ya bhashano me garibi sunne me jitni dardbhari lagti hai asal me weisi hai nhi. garibi ko karib se dekhna hai , ya to unke paas jake unke dard ko ahsas kijiye ya fir is kahani ko padhke dekhiye. writer ne suman jamuna jese logo ke jariye unki lalchari aur majburi ko vastav rup me chitran kiya hai.

Bahut bahut dhanyawad ma'am saab, aur mujhe khushi hui ki main apane likhe shabdon se aapke man mein gareebi ka vastvik to nahi par milta julta chitra utpann kar paya... Aasha hai aage sath banaye rakhein.

 

[ProfessorPo]

Ek Khamosh zindagani hai jo jamuna aur suman ki... ek aisi kahani jaha sirf sannata keh raha hai, weh dono chup khadi hai...jaha majburi ki daaman pakde julm sah rahi hai ...... unki tanhayi ki aisi ek dastaan jishe padh rahi hoon ProfessorPo sahab ki zubani......
Ek aisi kahani jaha un dono ke khil rahe kuch zakham mujhe kuch keh raha ho..... jaise chubhte kaante ki tarah dil mein subh rahi ho....
ek aisi kahani jaha jamuna, munni aur suman jaise kirdaar girti deewaaro ke aanchal mein bas zinda jiye jaa rahi hai.... ek gum aur darr ke saaye jiye jaa rahi hai...
Bas ye hai jamuna suman ki kahani.....unki tanhayi ki aisi ek dastaan jishe padh rahi hoon ProfessorPo sahab ki zubani......


Update padh kar yahin lage ki...
Gareebi ko kaagaz pe utaar kar ameer ban jaate hai log....
Ye kaisi kahani hai jaha dard nahi, ... Kisi ki majburi ki tasveerein kharid lete hai log......

Btw .. The narration and the dialogues were perfect fit for the atmosphere of the story...

Well....Let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Aapne jo humari kahani ko apani jubani kavita mein piroya hai uske liye bahut bahut abhaar. Jankar khushi hui ki aapko rachna pasand aai.. isi tarah hausla badhati rahiye to kuch likhne ki koshish hoti rahegi. Bahut bahut dhanyawad.

 

[Naina]

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