Incest LAADLAA APNE PARIWAR KA

[Badshah Khan]

Guys pole is created I request everyone to cast their vote.

 

[Badshah Khan]

Update please

Bhai new job hai jiske chalte dimag kaam nahi kar raha ek baar zara mentally free hojaon uske Baad updates dene start kar donga kyunki ab likhunga to mujhe khud ko samajh nahi ayega.
Kuch Waqt dedo has story pori hogi chahe thoda samay kyu na ho.
Bas sath bane rahiye and sorry for the delays.

 

[seopirates]

Great story...

 

[Naina]

update 16

kayi saal pehle maine fuckeravi123 se ek baat puchi thi.... unhone jawab nahi diya us waqt, baar baar puchne par 15 din tak gayab rahe xp se hi...
Well aaj ushi sawal se milta julta sawal uth khada hua hai update no 16 ke baad...
Toh dear Badshah Khan ji....
Sawal ye hai ki...
Vishal apni cousins ko kimti kapde kharid ke diya to kya uske badle mein ye sabhi cousins uske sath kuchhi ku karne wale hai?
For example...abhi naina aur navya ko hi dekh lijiye... kapde mile, uske badle mein un dono ne vishal ko boyfriend hi bana liya .. ( waise ye rishta kya kehlaata hai? Pyar ya vasna? )
jawab chahiye meko....

Dusri taraf vishal ki badi mami matlab sapna bhi shayad ab usi firak mein hai ki kaise bhi karke wo bhi apni garmi ko shaant kar sake vishal ke sath milke

Btw maine ye baat pehle hi jikar kar di thi ki ye vishal ka yun uske nana ke ghar jana , baaki kuch ho na ho... Lekin haan hawas ka mela jarur hone wala hai udhar bichara raman rai...

Well ...Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni shaandaar shabdon ka chayan sath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Priyaroy4]

Acha hai acha hai

 

[Naina]

update 17

Ye update to emotions aur vasna ka alag hi roop raha....
ab kya hi kahu...
udhar meenakhsi aur malti to tharki vishal ki tarah hi Eveready hai
Dusri taraf aulaad paane ke naam par tharki kalpana bhi jalwe dikha rahi hai.... btw lagta hai raat ko kalpana ke sath sath sapna bhi join karne wali hawasi vishal ke sath kuchhi ku karne ke liye

Khair.... btw vishal kam se kam nani ko hi bata deta ki uski chhoti bahu ke sath wo kya kar raha hai indino

Well ...Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni shaandaar shabdon ka chayan sath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

waise ye vishal ki babi mami badi advice deti firti hai...
kahi kalpana ko jo advice de rahi thi wohi advice payal aur priya ko na de de...
aap ki kya ray hai is mamle mein Badshah Khan ji

 

[Naina]

Oh haan ye kalpana apne pati rajan rai ko bata kyun nahi rahi hai ki wo kya gul khila rahi indino vishal ke sath...
Badshah Khan ji.... ye to sochne wali baat hai na..

 

[Naina]

Vishal ka adventure nana ke ghar -

Kayi mod,kayi pehlu jo apne mein kitna kuch samete huye the. in Sabhi ko writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran ki hai. Jaise wo sabhi jivant ho ... kitani badi kamayabi hai ye kahanikaar ki... ki wo readers ko kahani ke paatr ke sath judne ko majbur kar de ,,,,
aapki ye khubsurat manoram lekhni, to kuch feelings aur emotions shabdon mein , to kuch khushi aur dukh bhare pal..to kabhi erotica ka mahol , . ...jo hum readers ko kirdaaro aur kahani ke jariye le jaaye wahan...Jahan ho Kirdaaro ke kuch yaadon ka bashera ho ... Jahan kirdaaro bhumika nibhaye har situation ke sath...

writer sahab ke soch aur kalpna ko manna padega ki jis tarike se apne Kalpanao ke jariye aise shabdo ka roop deke kahani mein darshaya hai... sach mein saraahaneeya aur prashansaniya hai..

Nana ke ghar related jitne bhi update the us mein thodi bahot romanchak ghatanaayen ,thodi bahot family drama & values, farz, apno ke liye pyar, samarpan ke sath sath ek manmahok mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt kahani ki prati dilchaspi badhti jaye... Haan hawas ko bhi barabar priority diya hai in kirdaaro ne.... Khaskar kalpana aur vishal ke bich....
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..

Ek important baat story incest hai, bas sirf incest hi dikhane hai, sirf is baat par viswash nahi rakhte write sahab... balki writer sahab is baat pe viswash rakhte hai...ki family members ek jut hoke rahe, ek duje ke sukh dukh mein sath de, ek dusre ko ahmiyat de to isse badi baat kya ho sakti hai ... jaise Nana ke ghar dekhne mili...

Btw .. The narration and the dialogues were perfect fit for the atmosphere of the story.
Realistic feeling which is a very difficult subject - whether in writing or acting in a film - but you are a master at this.. by taking every aspect into consideration, you are moving the story forward. Along with erotica , there is a unique confluence of lovable family drama and a little suspense in the story. Which is completely original.
Well....Let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

( positive revo )

 

[Naina]

Update 22
so finally vishal apni maa sang ghar laut hi aaya... waise Nana ke ghar to mauj ho ho gaya ladke ka... Nahi
hmm.. to malti aur meenakhsi bhi sath hi aayi hai ... ab vishal ke ghar mein hi rahne wali hai.. Tharki vishal ki lottery lag gayi upar se vishal ki daadi bh badi khush lag rahi hai .. waise ye khushi kis wajah se ye baat sabhi readers jaante hai..
are budhiya kuch sabar kar.. Usko saans to lene de bahot mehnat karke aaya hai Nana ke ghar pe

Well ...Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni shaandaar shabdon ka chayan sath hi dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

Btw Badshah Khan ji... Mere reviews pe relpy kyun nahi diya abhi tak