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The height of sensuality in this story is outstanding.
The way you described the circumstances was very fascinating and wonderful.
What an enchanting twist. It was a really sensual and fantastic story. The way the characters were portrayed, their role elevates the excitement and sensuality of the story to its breaking point. The spicy and poetic narration and sensual dialogue between the characters also add to the joy and excitement of the readers....
There is also some desire to be absorbed in the mind of the main characters, which looks as if it is such a mixed feeling that it is a particle of diamond shimmering on the seashore... Your magic pen is like a cold sand that will be wrapped on the mind and body and I don't even know when this captivating story update has ended. Be it a simple routine or a simple or big incident in the story, Atif@321 enlivens it with the magic of his pen... he makes it so captivating and entertaining that even ordinary things become really extraordinary
Really yaar.... While writing the story, you used to add many such aspects which attracted the mind. You have connected the character and the essence of the story very well till the end.. What's the definition of erotica ,drama, romance and emotions between the characters, you have presented it very well in your story.
You always try something unique to write, and that's your specialty, hats off to that. Really glad to read something interesting after a long time. Everything was superb. Flow, Narration, Plot, Presentation. Everything was superb. You have a good grasp over the storyline right from the word go. marvellous & remarkable..
Keep writing like this and keep entertaining us....
Brilliant storyline with awesome writing skills
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The way you described the circumstances was very fascinating and wonderful.
What an enchanting twist. It was a really sensual and fantastic story. The way the characters were portrayed, their role elevates the excitement and sensuality of the story to its breaking point. The spicy and poetic narration and sensual dialogue between the characters also add to the joy and excitement of the readers....
There is also some desire to be absorbed in the mind of the main characters, which looks as if it is such a mixed feeling that it is a particle of diamond shimmering on the seashore... Your magic pen is like a cold sand that will be wrapped on the mind and body and I don't even know when this captivating story update has ended. Be it a simple routine or a simple or big incident in the story, Atif@321 enlivens it with the magic of his pen... he makes it so captivating and entertaining that even ordinary things become really extraordinary
Really yaar.... While writing the story, you used to add many such aspects which attracted the mind. You have connected the character and the essence of the story very well till the end.. What's the definition of erotica ,drama, romance and emotions between the characters, you have presented it very well in your story.
You always try something unique to write, and that's your specialty, hats off to that. Really glad to read something interesting after a long time. Everything was superb. Flow, Narration, Plot, Presentation. Everything was superb. You have a good grasp over the storyline right from the word go. marvellous & remarkable..
Keep writing like this and keep entertaining us....
Brilliant storyline with awesome writing skills
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