Lustyweb's Exclusive Story Contest 2022 ➣ Chit Chat & Discussion Thread

[Rahul]

Jarurat noi hai

 

[Rahul]

Pet ko bhi aaraam do

 

[Rahul]

Sometimes khana na khana chahiye

 

[Rahul]

Agar dawat hai to bolo ki na khana hai

 

[Rahul]

Aise ma kewal pani piyo

 

[Rahul]

 

[Aanya]

Mera rebo dekho

 

[Rahul]

Mera rebo dekho

Dekhte hain

 

[Rahul]

usne na kha kha Kar pet gadbad kar liya hai

 

[Rahul]

Poster par jo aapne mehnat ki hai yahi bata rahi hai ki kahani kis level ki hai mahi siso. Poster hi Thriller ka ehsaas kara raha hain .

Police aur Doctor dono ek saath woh bhi ek samajik karykarta ke ghar ke bahar Kuch galath huva lagta hain par kya ye sochne waali baat hain. Kahi ussne uske khude ke saath toh kuch galath nahin huva...

Ye Media waale kabhi nahi sudhrenge. Trp ke liye ye kuch bhi kar sakte hain .

Ritika Khana ki hatiya. Abhi toh first para bhi pura nahin huva tha aur unki hatiya hogai. Kon hai unka hatiyara .

Swach bharat abhiyan ka kya huva. Koe aur agar kare toh ye challan kaat dete hain aur yaha khude police comissioner hi rule thode raha hain. Iss ka chalan kato .

Tumko Comissioner kisne banaya be. Bina logic ki baat karta hain ye iss ko toh kala paani ki saja dedo. Kyuki ye aadmi pagal hain .

Dekhenge hi kyuki issne baat hi ish tarah ki baat boli hain sab soch rahe hai ye pagal hain kya .

Chal jhutaa trp ke liye kuch bhi karoge tum. Agar koe marne wala bhi hona tab bhi tum uska live telecast kardo .

Operation theater se bahar aakar doctor ka dialogue "Humne puri kosis ki par hum usse ko nahin bacha sake. I am sorry".
Aur M*RDER ke baade police ka dialogue
"Abhi hum jaach kar rahe hai jese hi kuch pata chalta hain hum aapko jarure bataege"
Lagta hain ye dialogue yaad karne mein inn ko kaafi time laga hain

Pahle iss ka chalan kaato

Dekha same feeling mujhe aae kahi ye hi toh M*RDER nahin hai .

Bolne waale khude kitne yogya hain

Acha actor hain ye comissioner

Goli kisne maari .

Kahi ye chamak torch waali tih nahin thi ya fir sarita ke sasur waali toh nahin hain

Wo M*RDER spot par chalk waali drawing bana di kya inn dono ne.

goli gayab . Ye case toh kabhi crime paterol mein bhi nahi aaya. Na hi Cid mein. Daya kuch toh gadbad hai .

Toh abhi M*RDER spot par tum dono jogging kar rahe the

Ki ye teeno numne kis tarah case solve karenge

Public place par smoking karna kanunan jurm hain . Chalan kaato dono ka

Ye ritika bhi kuch gadbad hain . Kyuki social worker ke pass itna paisa hona bhoute rare hain.

Officer hone ke baad bhi batana pade raha hain ki mein officer hun. Mtlab nala officer hai ye

Hawala ka paisa . Ritika ka connection. Oh my god .

Kisne officer banaya tum dono ko .

Hawala ka paisa hai ye. Tum dono se jayada toh mujhe pata hain .

Kaam karne ka paission nahi hai dono main. Paka cheating kar ke officer bnne hai.

aur jaao cafe. Ek clue tha aur vo bhi gayab .
Ab jakar cctv check karo.

Police bina phone kiye aagai. Kamal hain. Ye Comissioner bhoute time par pahuch raha hain .

Bata denge toh job gae aur na bataya toh case.

Kitna jutta hai ye ek min . Ab maja aaya

Ek min. ye cafe mein kya kar raha hain .

Ye officer hain inn teeno ko toh kala paani ki saja hini chahiye. Aur kittne jhutte hain ye. .

Ye raha M*RDER karne wala. Police ye criminal mere saamne hai aap jaldi aa jao.

Ish tarah ye kaam hi kyu karte ho

Ye comissioner toh nahin . Uski aakh chamak rahi thi.

Rasan ka saaman ha, ja lekar aa . Hawala ka paisa hai ye gadhe.

Inko apni behan ki shadi karani hai unke saath jo jaante nahin ho .

Ittne best ki tumhara chamcha clue unke haath se chinn laya

Dimaag hona chahiye .

Teri tarah drink nahi kiya tha ussne .

Ye paka vo comissioner hain kyuki ye kuch jayada hi jaan raha hain.

kya baat mujhe toh ghatiya officer lage the par ye toh sach mein acche hain.

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Kaha tak bhagoge .

Kya dekh raha hai laptop mein. Kahi Ullu ki koe series toh nahin hain





konsi yojna





Hawala ka naam suna hain.

Kitna timepass karte ho SiddHart aur Ares ki tarah

Sab yahi karte hai aajkal .

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kya baat hain

Ye vo daru waale haina. Lagta hain nasha na utra

Vo kya apna viva dene aaya hai idhar .

Vaiva chal raha hain



Makeup kiya hai ussne . Dekh nahi raha chot lagi hain

Dogs jaya acche se duty kar rahe hain

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Daal mein kuch kala hain

Hawala queen hai vo mene toh kaha tha

Dosti

Golddigger hain ye ladka

-Ritika

Course karna padeta hain

Baap ke dum par .

Ye vo aashiq toh nahin









Aa gaya actor par agar iss ko pata tha toh ab tak timepass kyu kar raha tha .

Ye raat wala toh nahin





WHat kya huva. Shaktimaan hi gangadhar hain

Businnes kar raha tha na toh officer kis tarah bana

O my godddddddd. Suru se ye wahi tha toh ek min. Vo sharab wala toh ye actor tha...



MUjhe toh tum khude criminal lag rahe ho.

Gangadhar hi shaktimaan hain.








Goldigger

Jhutaa

Ye dard hein tumhara



Tu bada yakin se bol raha hai

Jhutta vo sharab wala tu hi hai mujhe pata hain. Teri gardan akedi thi na

Fas gaya....yes yes...yes

. Judge sir iss ka chalan bhi kaatna.

Ruk ja ruk ja 2 min. ruk ja abhi sab shabit hoga

mein right thi

Nahi aaditya thakral nahi hai

Wow kya baat hain.

Mein starting se kah rahi hun ye hawala ka paisa hai. Par meri koe sunta hi nahin .

bery interesting....

chup bilkul chup.

abbe judge ye bhi ho sakta hai na kisi aur ne likha ho.

Ye aditya nikla. Aakhir tak mujhe comissioner hi lag raha tha

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Mindblowing story thi Mahi Maurya sissy. Sach mein last tak ye pata nahin chal paya ki kon real ka criminal hai. Ek baat kahu aapki ye story bollywood ki stories se jayada acchi hai. Mujhe ye story humesha yaad rahegi.
Mujhe padh kar ye kahani bhote jayada accha laga. Story mein flow bana raha aur saath mein ek ke baad ek part aata gaya aur kahani ko aur shandar banata gaya.
for your effort. Mahi sissy bhote acchi story thi. Heads off too you.

Noise