Nice update and awesome writing skillsUpdate 6
Aditya fresh hone ke bad apne bed par let jata hai aur past me hue incidents ke bare me sochne lagta hai ki kese uske baap ne use aur uski Maa ko dur rakha halaki wo ye sab usi ki bhalayi ke liye kar raha tha par ek bachhe ke liye usko Maa hi sabse important hoti hai jiska pyar use kabhi nasib hi nahi ho paya. Kafir der tak yuhi sochne ke baad use bahar se kisi ki car ki awaz aati hai wo khudke se dekhta hai toh sach me koi Ghar aya tha. Niche jakar dekhne ke bad Aditya ko pata lagta hai ki ye Doctors hai jo regular checkup ke liye aaye hai, Wo fir apni Maa ki taraf dekhta hai jo Ghunghat me kaid ho chuki thi.
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Niche akar uski Maa Doctors se uska parichay karati hai fir ek check-up ke bad Doctors Aditya ko batate hai ki Kashyap Singh ki Halat kharab hi hai unka Lakwa unke hath ko kharab kar chuka hai Sath hi main Heart attack ke karan wo ab jyada bahar bhi nahi reh sakte unke liye thodi bhi mehnat Jaan lewa sabit ho sakti hai . Wo filhal hosh me toh hai lekin kamzori ke karan abhi wo thik se Baat nahi kar Sakte.
ADITYA Dr. Se apne pita se Baat karne ke liye kehta hai jis par Dr. Swikriti de dete hai Aditi aur Aditya, Kashyap se milne Room me chale Jate ha. Kashyap Aditya ko dekhte hi pehchan leta hai aur uski ankho se ansu aane lagte hai wo apne bete ko gale lagane ke liye uthane ki koshish karta hai par uska Sharir sath nahi deta . Aditya jaldi se uske pita ke pas Beth kar unhe na uthne ke liye kehta hai. Aditi bhi wahi Aditya ke pas Beth jati hai aur uski ankho se bhi aansu behne lagte hai . Itne saalo me ye pehli bar tha ki Ye pariwar ek sath tha par wo bhi kis kimat par.
Kashyap Singh ko apne kiye gaye Gunaho ke liye pachtawa hota hai. usne ye sab Aditi aur Aditya ke Bhale ke liye hi Kiya tha par wo ab samjh paa Raha tha ki Rishte Nibhane ke liye Unke sath hona jaruri hai na ki unse Dur. Ye soch kar Kashyap fir se Ansu bahane lagta hai. Aditya ki ankhen bhi Nam ho jati hai. Kuch der Bad Kashyap Singh thodi bohot baate karne ki koshish karte hai.
Kashyap Singh ~ (Bolne ki koshish karte hue) K… kaise ho … Beta?
Aditya ~ Achha hun Papa par please aap khudko taklif mat dijiye.
Kashyap Singh bhi khudki halat samjh Raha tha fir wo Aditi taraf dekhta hai uski Sundar biwi jise wo khud shayad aaj achhe se dekh raha tha jiske liye uske paas kabhi wakt nahi tha . Wo Aditi se kehta hai ~ T… Tum kesi ho … Aditi?
Ye sun kar Aditi aur jyada aasnu bahane lagti hai ye pehli bar tha jab uske Pati ne uska haal usse puchha tha . Wo koi jawab nahi deti sirf rone lagti hai .
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Kashyap Ko bhi ab Realization hone lagta hai ki uske Karan In Dono ne kitna dukh Saha hai . Kuch der tak koi Baat nahi hoti fir Kashyap Singh Apni Takat laga kar fir se bolne ka pryaas karta hai .
Kashyap ~ Aa.. Aaditya
Aditya ~ Haa .. Papa Kahiye. Main yahi hun.
Kashyap ~ E..ek wada ka.karo mujhse….
Aditya ~ Haa papa Kahiye aap jo bolenge main taiyar hun.
Kashyap ~ Jo…gal.tiya mene ki …. Wo kabhi ..Mat karna ........... Aditi ka Dh.. Dhyan rakhna, Use Kabhi … Akela… Chhod kar … Mat jana.
Aditya ~ Hamara dhyan Rakhne ke liye Aap hai na Papa. Apko kuch nahi hoga.. Maa ko meri jarurat nahi.
Kashyap ~ bas….. mujhse ..Wada K…Karo beta. VA..vachan do.
Aditya ~ ( Apne Pita ki Halat ke karan Papa ka hath tham kar unhe Vachan de deta hai) Main Vada karta hun Papa . Maa ko kabhi chhod kar nahi jaunga.
Kashyap ~ Ab se … Aditi Tumhari…. Jimmedari hai .
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Ye bol kar Kashyap fir se behosh ho jata hai Aditya Bhag kar dr. Ko lene Jata hai Aditi jo ye sab dekh Rahi thi apne rone par control nahi kar pati aur aansuo ki Jhadi laga deti hai . Kuch der me Doctos Akar Aditya aur Aditi ko Bahar Jane ka bol kar Kashyap ki fir se jaanch karne lagte hai.
Kafi der Tak Aditya aur Aditi bahar hi intezar karne lagte hai. jese hi doctor bahar ate hai Aditya un par sawalo ki bochhor kar deta hai.
Dr. ~ Ghabraiye nahi Wo Sirf Energy na hone ke karan behosh hue he. Halaki abhi bhi nahi kaha Jaa sakta ki wo kab Tak thik honge ya honge bhi ya nahi. Hum sirf koshish kar sakte hai. Aap Hope mat khoiye Upar Wale par Bharosa rakhiye. hamari team hr kuch dino me akar unki treatment karegi. Filhaal aap log hume ijazat dijiye. If anything serious happens you will inform us anytime.
Dr. Ki Baat bol kar chale jate hai. Aditya apni Maa ko dekhta hai jo Khamoshi me dubi Hui thi wo use dilasa deta hai ki Sab thik ho jaega . Aditi bhi apne bete ke kehne par thoda hosla sambhalti hai.
Aditi Aditya se Khane ka puchhti hai par Aditya mana kar deta hai.
Aditi ~ (Bhavook ansuo ke sath)kya itne saalo ke bad bhi apni Maa ke hatho ka khana nahi khaega Beta
Aditya is baat ka jawab nahi de pata aur Khane ke liye haa kar deta hai. Aditi kitchen me khana banane chali jati hai, Aditya ki nazar Kitchen me jati Hui apni maa ki taraf jati hai.
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Usko Khushi aur Pachtawa dono mehsoos hote hai ki ye Apsara uski Sagi Maa hai Aditya ek Thandi saans leta hai aur kehta hai ~ Ab toh shayad main Apka diya zehar bhi khaa sakta hoon.
Nice updateUpdate 7
Aditi khana banane kitchen me chali gayi aur Aditya apne room me. Bed par letne ke bad Kai tarah ke khayal Aditya ke zehan me ane lage , uski Puri life uske ankho ke samne ek movie ki tarah chalne lagi ki kis tarah uske apne baap ne use ek perfect human banane ke liye khud se aur Maa se dur rakha kis tarah Kashyap Singh ne uska pura bachpan apni khwahisho ki Aag me jhonk diya aur ab wo hi insan jo uska baap hai apni kiye par pachhta raha hai jab wo Puri tarah se laachar ho chuka hai.
Haa ye sach hai ki ye sab unse Aditya ki bhalayi ke liye kiya tha par is sab me Maa ka kya kasoor tha kya Kashyap Singh ko us Devi jesi aurat ke ansu nahi dikhe. Itna toh Aditya ko pata hai ki uske bagair Aditi ghut-ghut kar jeeti thi usne apna har ek pal Aditya ki yaad me bitaya hai lekin ab aur nahi ab wo wapas aa gaya hai. Ab us khubsurat Devi ko aur apne bete ke pyar ke liye tadpa nahi padega. Aditya khud se wada Karta hai ki use wo har Khushi dega Jo wo deserve karti hai.
Aditya ~ (apne Maan me) Kitni Sundar hai meri maa koi use dukh pahuchane ke soch bhi kese sakta hai. Aaj jab unhe dekha toh kese main kuch der ke liye sab bhul gaya tha aur pata nahi jab bhi wo samne hoti hai mujhe kya hone lagta hai ek ajib ahsaas..
Aditya ye sab soch hi Raha tha ki ek maid akar Room ka door knock karti. Aditya darwaaza khol kar maid se puchhta hai toh wo use Batati hai ki khana ready hai jiske Bad Aditya niche chal deta hai. Niche Jakar Aditya ko fir se uski khubsurat Maa dikhti Jo khane ki tabel par Dishes ko prepare kar Rahi thi Maids ki help se.
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Aditya jaha tha wahi khada khada Aditi ko dekhne lagta hai kuch der bad Aditi hi use Sidhiyo pe khada dekh bolti hai.
Aditi ~ Aditya waha kyu khade ho … Aao khana ready hai.
Aditya ko hosh Aata hai aur wo niche chala jata hai uski Maa Puri lagan se Sara kaam kar Rahi thi aur Maids ki thodi bohot madad hi le rahi thi.
Aditya ~ Maa Aap inke hote hue taklif kyu le rahi hain . Unhe apna kaam karne dijiye Aap bethiye ye kar lengi.
Aditi ~ Taklif kesi beta. aaj itne saalo ke bad mera Bachha ghar aya hai Wese bhi itne Saalo bad kuch bana Rahi hu aur apne bete ke liye khud Khana banane se jyada ek Maa ke liye kya khushi ka kaam ho sakta hai.
Aditya ~ Itni saalo bad kyu Nana toh bataya karte the ki Apko cooking bohot pasand hai.
Aditi ~ (ye sun kar thodi udas ho kar kehti hai) Pasand toh bohot hai Aditya lekin koi tha hi nahi Jiske liye kuch banati. Tu dur ho gaya tha mujhse aur Tere Papa ghar par aate hi nahi the Aur jab bhi aate the kuch hi der ke liye. Ek do bar banaya unke liye lekin kabhi unhone Taste bhi nahi kiya.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya bhi thoda udaas ho jata hai lekin Aditi ka mood thik karne ke liye kehta hai) koi baat nahi Ab main aa gaya hoo na Ab roz apke hatho se bana khana khaya karunga.
Aditi ~ ( Khushi ke aansuo ke sath) Haa mere laal ab tu aa gaya hai ab sab thik ho jaega.
Aditya beth jata tha aur Adti use serve karne lagti hai is sab me Aditya sirf Aditi ka Sundar chehra hi dekhe Jaa Raha tha thodi der bad Aditya khana shuru karne wala hota hai ki thoda ruk kar ..
Aditya ~ Maa yaha mere pas bethiye.
Aditi ~ ( Thoda pareshan ho kar ki kahi kuch galat toh nahi bana Diya Aditya ke pas chair par bethati hai) Haa beta kuch Galat ho gaya kya.
Aditya ~ ( Muskura kar apni Sundar Maa ko dekhta hai aur apne hatho ko jinme Niwala tha Aditi ki taraf kar deta hai) Muh kholiye.
Aditi ~ Par beta..
Aditya ~ ( bich me rokte hue) Aaj se Apko kabhi dukhi nahi hone dunga Maa , Aaj se aap akeli nahi hongi apka Aditya apke sath rahega hamesha You can always rely on me.
Hamare circumstances ki wajah se Aaj Tak toh ye kar nahi paya par aaj main bhi apni Maa ko apne hath se Khilaunga.
Aditi ~ (Apne Bete ka pyar dekh kar Aditi ki ankho me fir se ansu aa jate hai aur chehre par ek badi si muskan) Haa beta ab teri Maa tere hi sahare hai ( bol kar apna muh khol deti hai)
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Aditya apni Maa ko Khilata hai jiske baad Aditi bhi Aditya ko apne Hatho se khilane lagti hai bs yu hi dono Maa bete ek dusre ke hatho se khana khaa lete hai aur Saalo se bade ek dusre ke liye pyar ko share karte hai.
Khana khatm hone ke bad Aditya Terence par chala jata hai. Aasman kitna saaf tha Taaro se bhara hua wese toh Aditya ne Kai bar Taaro se bhare Asman dekhe the par Aaj use ye Kuch jyada hi khubsurat lag raha tha Pata nahi aaj uska man jese hawa me hi tha, Har ek chiz jese Rango se bhar gayi ho apni is ajib si Khushi ka Raaz toh wo bhi samajh nahi paa Raha tha.
Wo sochta hai ye shayad ghar wapas aane ki khushi hai par usne toh decide Kiya tha ki wo apne Papa se mil kar wapas chala jaega lekin ab uska wapas jaane ka man kyu nahi kar raha. Aditya khudko behlata hai ki papa ko wada Jo Kiya hai ki Maa ka dhyan rakhunga.. Haa isiliye aur kya wajah hogi
( Aditya ka Dil yaha khud se jhut bol raha tha Baap ko kiya wada toh ek wajah thi hi par uski is nayi Khushi ka Raaz kuch aur hi hai jise wo abhi samajh nahi paa Raha aur isi ki wajah se ab wo ghar chhod kar nahi jana chahta)
Aditya yuhi Raat ke is khubsurat Asmaan ko dekhte hue tehal raha tha ki Aditi bhi upar aa jati hai. Jise dekh kar Aditya aur khush ho jata hai.
Aditi ~ tum bhi Roz Taro ko dekhne chhat par Aate ho Aditya.
Aditya ~ Haa kabhi Kabhi...
Aditi ~ Main toh Roz ese hi Raat ke asmaan ko dekh kar apne bete ko yaad karti thi aur duya karti thi ki Mera Aditya jaha bhi ho sahi salamat ho aur fir se main apne Aditya ko dekh paau.
Aditya ~ ( Ek smile ke sath ) toh Duya kabool ho gayi apki Lo aa gaya Aditya apke paas.
Aditi ~ ( Aditya ka Hath tham kar use chum leti hai) Haa mera beta apni Maa ke pas wapas aa Gaya.
( Aditi ke Hath thamne se Aditya Dil ki dhadkane bad jati hai par bolta kuch nahi hai)
Aditi ~ ( Taaro se bhare Asman ko dekhte hue ) Kitna sundar Lagta hai na Ye sab.
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Aditya ~ ( Asman Ko Naa dekh kar Aditi ko dekhte hue ) Haa bohot Sundar ….
Dono Maa bete thodi der bad Niche aa jate hai aur ek dusre ko Good night bol kar Apne Apne rooms me chale jate hai ( Halaki Aditi ka man toh bohot tha Aditya ka sar apni god me rakh kar use sulane ka par wo sankoch kar jati hai)
Aditya ka man bohot khush tha halaki Use ye baat yaad thi ki uska baap abhi zindagi aur maut ke bich lad raha hai lekin fir bhi uske honto se muskan jaa nahi rahi thi thoda ajib toh use bhi lagta hai par wo bhi ye sab control nahi kar paa Raha tha uske dimag me bar bar uski Maa aa rahi thi. uska Sundar chehra Jis par ab tak kitni udasi thi aaj fir se Khushi dukhi hai. Aditya bed par lete lete fesla karta hai ki Ab se Aditi ko kabhi Udaas hone nahi dega wo use wo har Khushi dega jo uska haq hai chahe use kuch bhi karna pade. Ye sab sochte hue uski Aankh lag jati hai.
Agle din Aditya hamesha ki tarah jldi uth jata hai wo roz Subha uth kar workout karta tha par yaha Gym kaha se hoga ye soch kar wo jogging par nikal jata hai. Kashyap Singh ka Ghar aur uske aas paas ki property bohot badi thi toh Jogging ke liye kisi ko property se bahar Jane ki jarurat hi nahi hai Ghar ke piche aur aas pas ka sara land unhi ka tha jo ek hare bhare Gardan kam Jungle ki tarah tha.
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Wapas ane ke baad wo apni Maa ko dekhta hai jo Aaj aur bhi jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi Aditya jiski Dhadkane jogging ke bad bhi itni tez nahi hui thi Aditi ko dekh kar aur bhi jyada tez ho jati hai wo sochta hai ki ye bar bar use Maa ko dekh kar ye ajib feeling kyu hone lagti hai.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya breakfast ke liye bethate hue) Maa aapke Aaj kya plans hai?
Aditi ~ mere plans... Jyada khas nahi wahi Ghar ke kaam.
Aditya ~ Thik hai toh aaj Ghar ke kaam House helpers kar denge aur Main aaj apko bahar shopping par le jaunga.
Aditi ~ (Thoda chokte hue) shopping... Par par Beta.. Main kya karungi tumhare sath akar tum Khamakha pareshan hoge.
Aditya ~ Pareshani kesi Maa... utla mujhe toh bohot Khushi hogi.
Aditi ~ Par Beta ...
Aditya ~ (Aditi ko bich me rokte hue) Par var kuch nahi aap mere sath chal Rahi ho and that's it. Kab Tak aap in Char diwaro me ese kaid rahogi ab apka beta apko Duniya se rubaru karwayega.
(Aditi ki ankhe nam ho jati hai)
Aditya ~ (apna pyar dikhate hue) in motiyon jese Aansuo ke behne ke din khatm ho gaye hai Ab khul kar hasne ke din hai. Jldi se jao aur ready ho kar aao main apka wait kar raha hu.
Aditi ~ ( Aditya ki baat par haste hue) Thik hai beta ... Main abhi ready ho kar aati hu.
Aditi ke jaate hi Aditya bhi Naha kar ready hone chala jata hai. Shopping ka plan usne kal rat hi bana liya tha par pata nahi kyu use kuch jyada hi Khushi ho rahi thi wo jldi se ready ho kar hall me Aditi ka wait karne lagta hai.
kuch der or intezaar karne ke bad Aditi apne room se bahar aati hai. Aditya to dekhta hi reh jaata hai. samne uski Maa khadi thi jo is samay apne reshami baalo ki lat ko apne kaan ke peeche kar rahi thi.
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Aditi ka chehra chamak raha tha.. uski badi ankho me kajal, patle gulab ki pankhudiyo se hotho pe laal lipstick, dono eyebrows ke bich laal bindi, kaano me jhumke, naak me badi si baali ke sath nathni, hathon me golden kangan is samay Aditi cream colour ke blouse aur red color ki saree pehni hui thi.
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Aditi ke tight blouse me uski ubhari hui Chhati jo ki blouse ke clevage se saaf dikh rahi thi. Aditi ke badan par wo saree kuch is tarah bandhi thi ki pichhe se uski Ass saaf saaf ubhari hi dikh Rahi thi isme Aditi ka koi kasoor nahi tha Uska badan hi esa tha ki wo lakh chah kar bhi apne Badan ko kapdo se chhupa nahi pati thi. Aditya apni Maa ke roop me kho gaya.
"kya hua Beta kahan kho gaye...." Aditi ki aawaj se Aditya jaise nind se jaga
Aditya ~ (hosh me aate hue)ku...ku...kuchh nahi Maa, wo bas..... Kuch soch Raha tha.
Aditi ~ ( bhole pan me) Kya soch rahe the Beta?
Aditya ~ Kuch nahi Maa wo toh bas ese hi..... Chaliye hume Shopping par chalna hai na...
Dono maa bete Ghar se niklne wale hote hai ki Aditi Ghar se bahar Ane se pehle ek Bada sa Ghunghat kar leti hai
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Aditya ye dekhta hai lekin kuch nahi bolta. dono car me Beth kar nikal jate hai.
Aditi ko bohot Ghabrahat ho Rahi thi ye pehli bar tha jab wo khud Bina apne pati aur uski security ke Ghar se bahar Jaa Rahi thi lekin apne bete ki Khushi ke liye wo ye bhi karne ko taiyar thi.
Aditya ~ Maa mall ki taraf chalte hai waha thoda ghum bhi lenge.
Aditi ~ (nervous hote hue )thik hai Beta chalo.
(Aditya mall ki or car ghuma deta hai or thode he der me dono mall pahuch jate hai ,mall pohoch kar Aditya Gadi park karta hai aur Bahar aata hai par Aditi Bahar nahi aa Rahi thi.)
Aditya ~ kya hua Maa...?
Aditi ~ (nervousness me) Beta actually main kabhi is tarah Mall ghumne nahi aayi mujhe bohot ajib lag raha hai.
Aditya ~ isme Ajib kya hai Maa .. mall toh sab log aate hai.
Aditi ~ Wahi toh Beta yaha itne saare log honge unki nazre mujhse sehan nahi hongi.
Aditya ~ (Baat ko samjhte hue apna hath badhta hai) ghabrane ki koi Baat nahi hai Maa. Main hoo na apke saath. Kuch Log dekhenge toh koi baat nahi aap Mera hath pakad Lena. mujh par bharosa hai na aapko.
Aditi ~ (Aditya ki ankho me pyar se dekhte hue uska hath pakad kar) Khud Se jyada bharosa hai mujhe tujh par Aditya ( aur car se bahar aa jati hai)
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Nice update and awesome writing skillsUpdate 7
Aditi khana banane kitchen me chali gayi aur Aditya apne room me. Bed par letne ke bad Kai tarah ke khayal Aditya ke zehan me ane lage , uski Puri life uske ankho ke samne ek movie ki tarah chalne lagi ki kis tarah uske apne baap ne use ek perfect human banane ke liye khud se aur Maa se dur rakha kis tarah Kashyap Singh ne uska pura bachpan apni khwahisho ki Aag me jhonk diya aur ab wo hi insan jo uska baap hai apni kiye par pachhta raha hai jab wo Puri tarah se laachar ho chuka hai.
Haa ye sach hai ki ye sab unse Aditya ki bhalayi ke liye kiya tha par is sab me Maa ka kya kasoor tha kya Kashyap Singh ko us Devi jesi aurat ke ansu nahi dikhe. Itna toh Aditya ko pata hai ki uske bagair Aditi ghut-ghut kar jeeti thi usne apna har ek pal Aditya ki yaad me bitaya hai lekin ab aur nahi ab wo wapas aa gaya hai. Ab us khubsurat Devi ko aur apne bete ke pyar ke liye tadpa nahi padega. Aditya khud se wada Karta hai ki use wo har Khushi dega Jo wo deserve karti hai.
Aditya ~ (apne Maan me) Kitni Sundar hai meri maa koi use dukh pahuchane ke soch bhi kese sakta hai. Aaj jab unhe dekha toh kese main kuch der ke liye sab bhul gaya tha aur pata nahi jab bhi wo samne hoti hai mujhe kya hone lagta hai ek ajib ahsaas..
Aditya ye sab soch hi Raha tha ki ek maid akar Room ka door knock karti. Aditya darwaaza khol kar maid se puchhta hai toh wo use Batati hai ki khana ready hai jiske Bad Aditya niche chal deta hai. Niche Jakar Aditya ko fir se uski khubsurat Maa dikhti Jo khane ki tabel par Dishes ko prepare kar Rahi thi Maids ki help se.
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Aditya jaha tha wahi khada khada Aditi ko dekhne lagta hai kuch der bad Aditi hi use Sidhiyo pe khada dekh bolti hai.
Aditi ~ Aditya waha kyu khade ho … Aao khana ready hai.
Aditya ko hosh Aata hai aur wo niche chala jata hai uski Maa Puri lagan se Sara kaam kar Rahi thi aur Maids ki thodi bohot madad hi le rahi thi.
Aditya ~ Maa Aap inke hote hue taklif kyu le rahi hain . Unhe apna kaam karne dijiye Aap bethiye ye kar lengi.
Aditi ~ Taklif kesi beta. aaj itne saalo ke bad mera Bachha ghar aya hai Wese bhi itne Saalo bad kuch bana Rahi hu aur apne bete ke liye khud Khana banane se jyada ek Maa ke liye kya khushi ka kaam ho sakta hai.
Aditya ~ Itni saalo bad kyu Nana toh bataya karte the ki Apko cooking bohot pasand hai.
Aditi ~ (ye sun kar thodi udas ho kar kehti hai) Pasand toh bohot hai Aditya lekin koi tha hi nahi Jiske liye kuch banati. Tu dur ho gaya tha mujhse aur Tere Papa ghar par aate hi nahi the Aur jab bhi aate the kuch hi der ke liye. Ek do bar banaya unke liye lekin kabhi unhone Taste bhi nahi kiya.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya bhi thoda udaas ho jata hai lekin Aditi ka mood thik karne ke liye kehta hai) koi baat nahi Ab main aa gaya hoo na Ab roz apke hatho se bana khana khaya karunga.
Aditi ~ ( Khushi ke aansuo ke sath) Haa mere laal ab tu aa gaya hai ab sab thik ho jaega.
Aditya beth jata tha aur Adti use serve karne lagti hai is sab me Aditya sirf Aditi ka Sundar chehra hi dekhe Jaa Raha tha thodi der bad Aditya khana shuru karne wala hota hai ki thoda ruk kar ..
Aditya ~ Maa yaha mere pas bethiye.
Aditi ~ ( Thoda pareshan ho kar ki kahi kuch galat toh nahi bana Diya Aditya ke pas chair par bethati hai) Haa beta kuch Galat ho gaya kya.
Aditya ~ ( Muskura kar apni Sundar Maa ko dekhta hai aur apne hatho ko jinme Niwala tha Aditi ki taraf kar deta hai) Muh kholiye.
Aditi ~ Par beta..
Aditya ~ ( bich me rokte hue) Aaj se Apko kabhi dukhi nahi hone dunga Maa , Aaj se aap akeli nahi hongi apka Aditya apke sath rahega hamesha You can always rely on me.
Hamare circumstances ki wajah se Aaj Tak toh ye kar nahi paya par aaj main bhi apni Maa ko apne hath se Khilaunga.
Aditi ~ (Apne Bete ka pyar dekh kar Aditi ki ankho me fir se ansu aa jate hai aur chehre par ek badi si muskan) Haa beta ab teri Maa tere hi sahare hai ( bol kar apna muh khol deti hai)
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Aditya apni Maa ko Khilata hai jiske baad Aditi bhi Aditya ko apne Hatho se khilane lagti hai bs yu hi dono Maa bete ek dusre ke hatho se khana khaa lete hai aur Saalo se bade ek dusre ke liye pyar ko share karte hai.
Khana khatm hone ke bad Aditya Terence par chala jata hai. Aasman kitna saaf tha Taaro se bhara hua wese toh Aditya ne Kai bar Taaro se bhare Asman dekhe the par Aaj use ye Kuch jyada hi khubsurat lag raha tha Pata nahi aaj uska man jese hawa me hi tha, Har ek chiz jese Rango se bhar gayi ho apni is ajib si Khushi ka Raaz toh wo bhi samajh nahi paa Raha tha.
Wo sochta hai ye shayad ghar wapas aane ki khushi hai par usne toh decide Kiya tha ki wo apne Papa se mil kar wapas chala jaega lekin ab uska wapas jaane ka man kyu nahi kar raha. Aditya khudko behlata hai ki papa ko wada Jo Kiya hai ki Maa ka dhyan rakhunga.. Haa isiliye aur kya wajah hogi
( Aditya ka Dil yaha khud se jhut bol raha tha Baap ko kiya wada toh ek wajah thi hi par uski is nayi Khushi ka Raaz kuch aur hi hai jise wo abhi samajh nahi paa Raha aur isi ki wajah se ab wo ghar chhod kar nahi jana chahta)
Aditya yuhi Raat ke is khubsurat Asmaan ko dekhte hue tehal raha tha ki Aditi bhi upar aa jati hai. Jise dekh kar Aditya aur khush ho jata hai.
Aditi ~ tum bhi Roz Taro ko dekhne chhat par Aate ho Aditya.
Aditya ~ Haa kabhi Kabhi...
Aditi ~ Main toh Roz ese hi Raat ke asmaan ko dekh kar apne bete ko yaad karti thi aur duya karti thi ki Mera Aditya jaha bhi ho sahi salamat ho aur fir se main apne Aditya ko dekh paau.
Aditya ~ ( Ek smile ke sath ) toh Duya kabool ho gayi apki Lo aa gaya Aditya apke paas.
Aditi ~ ( Aditya ka Hath tham kar use chum leti hai) Haa mera beta apni Maa ke pas wapas aa Gaya.
( Aditi ke Hath thamne se Aditya Dil ki dhadkane bad jati hai par bolta kuch nahi hai)
Aditi ~ ( Taaro se bhare Asman ko dekhte hue ) Kitna sundar Lagta hai na Ye sab.
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Aditya ~ ( Asman Ko Naa dekh kar Aditi ko dekhte hue ) Haa bohot Sundar ….
Dono Maa bete thodi der bad Niche aa jate hai aur ek dusre ko Good night bol kar Apne Apne rooms me chale jate hai ( Halaki Aditi ka man toh bohot tha Aditya ka sar apni god me rakh kar use sulane ka par wo sankoch kar jati hai)
Aditya ka man bohot khush tha halaki Use ye baat yaad thi ki uska baap abhi zindagi aur maut ke bich lad raha hai lekin fir bhi uske honto se muskan jaa nahi rahi thi thoda ajib toh use bhi lagta hai par wo bhi ye sab control nahi kar paa Raha tha uske dimag me bar bar uski Maa aa rahi thi. uska Sundar chehra Jis par ab tak kitni udasi thi aaj fir se Khushi dukhi hai. Aditya bed par lete lete fesla karta hai ki Ab se Aditi ko kabhi Udaas hone nahi dega wo use wo har Khushi dega jo uska haq hai chahe use kuch bhi karna pade. Ye sab sochte hue uski Aankh lag jati hai.
Agle din Aditya hamesha ki tarah jldi uth jata hai wo roz Subha uth kar workout karta tha par yaha Gym kaha se hoga ye soch kar wo jogging par nikal jata hai. Kashyap Singh ka Ghar aur uske aas paas ki property bohot badi thi toh Jogging ke liye kisi ko property se bahar Jane ki jarurat hi nahi hai Ghar ke piche aur aas pas ka sara land unhi ka tha jo ek hare bhare Gardan kam Jungle ki tarah tha.
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Wapas ane ke baad wo apni Maa ko dekhta hai jo Aaj aur bhi jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi Aditya jiski Dhadkane jogging ke bad bhi itni tez nahi hui thi Aditi ko dekh kar aur bhi jyada tez ho jati hai wo sochta hai ki ye bar bar use Maa ko dekh kar ye ajib feeling kyu hone lagti hai.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya breakfast ke liye bethate hue) Maa aapke Aaj kya plans hai?
Aditi ~ mere plans... Jyada khas nahi wahi Ghar ke kaam.
Aditya ~ Thik hai toh aaj Ghar ke kaam House helpers kar denge aur Main aaj apko bahar shopping par le jaunga.
Aditi ~ (Thoda chokte hue) shopping... Par par Beta.. Main kya karungi tumhare sath akar tum Khamakha pareshan hoge.
Aditya ~ Pareshani kesi Maa... utla mujhe toh bohot Khushi hogi.
Aditi ~ Par Beta ...
Aditya ~ (Aditi ko bich me rokte hue) Par var kuch nahi aap mere sath chal Rahi ho and that's it. Kab Tak aap in Char diwaro me ese kaid rahogi ab apka beta apko Duniya se rubaru karwayega.
(Aditi ki ankhe nam ho jati hai)
Aditya ~ (apna pyar dikhate hue) in motiyon jese Aansuo ke behne ke din khatm ho gaye hai Ab khul kar hasne ke din hai. Jldi se jao aur ready ho kar aao main apka wait kar raha hu.
Aditi ~ ( Aditya ki baat par haste hue) Thik hai beta ... Main abhi ready ho kar aati hu.
Aditi ke jaate hi Aditya bhi Naha kar ready hone chala jata hai. Shopping ka plan usne kal rat hi bana liya tha par pata nahi kyu use kuch jyada hi Khushi ho rahi thi wo jldi se ready ho kar hall me Aditi ka wait karne lagta hai.
kuch der or intezaar karne ke bad Aditi apne room se bahar aati hai. Aditya to dekhta hi reh jaata hai. samne uski Maa khadi thi jo is samay apne reshami baalo ki lat ko apne kaan ke peeche kar rahi thi.
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Aditi ka chehra chamak raha tha.. uski badi ankho me kajal, patle gulab ki pankhudiyo se hotho pe laal lipstick, dono eyebrows ke bich laal bindi, kaano me jhumke, naak me badi si baali ke sath nathni, hathon me golden kangan is samay Aditi cream colour ke blouse aur red color ki saree pehni hui thi.
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Aditi ke tight blouse me uski ubhari hui Chhati jo ki blouse ke clevage se saaf dikh rahi thi. Aditi ke badan par wo saree kuch is tarah bandhi thi ki pichhe se uski Ass saaf saaf ubhari hi dikh Rahi thi isme Aditi ka koi kasoor nahi tha Uska badan hi esa tha ki wo lakh chah kar bhi apne Badan ko kapdo se chhupa nahi pati thi. Aditya apni Maa ke roop me kho gaya.
"kya hua Beta kahan kho gaye...." Aditi ki aawaj se Aditya jaise nind se jaga
Aditya ~ (hosh me aate hue)ku...ku...kuchh nahi Maa, wo bas..... Kuch soch Raha tha.
Aditi ~ ( bhole pan me) Kya soch rahe the Beta?
Aditya ~ Kuch nahi Maa wo toh bas ese hi..... Chaliye hume Shopping par chalna hai na...
Dono maa bete Ghar se niklne wale hote hai ki Aditi Ghar se bahar Ane se pehle ek Bada sa Ghunghat kar leti hai
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Aditya ye dekhta hai lekin kuch nahi bolta. dono car me Beth kar nikal jate hai.
Aditi ko bohot Ghabrahat ho Rahi thi ye pehli bar tha jab wo khud Bina apne pati aur uski security ke Ghar se bahar Jaa Rahi thi lekin apne bete ki Khushi ke liye wo ye bhi karne ko taiyar thi.
Aditya ~ Maa mall ki taraf chalte hai waha thoda ghum bhi lenge.
Aditi ~ (nervous hote hue )thik hai Beta chalo.
(Aditya mall ki or car ghuma deta hai or thode he der me dono mall pahuch jate hai ,mall pohoch kar Aditya Gadi park karta hai aur Bahar aata hai par Aditi Bahar nahi aa Rahi thi.)
Aditya ~ kya hua Maa...?
Aditi ~ (nervousness me) Beta actually main kabhi is tarah Mall ghumne nahi aayi mujhe bohot ajib lag raha hai.
Aditya ~ isme Ajib kya hai Maa .. mall toh sab log aate hai.
Aditi ~ Wahi toh Beta yaha itne saare log honge unki nazre mujhse sehan nahi hongi.
Aditya ~ (Baat ko samjhte hue apna hath badhta hai) ghabrane ki koi Baat nahi hai Maa. Main hoo na apke saath. Kuch Log dekhenge toh koi baat nahi aap Mera hath pakad Lena. mujh par bharosa hai na aapko.
Aditi ~ (Aditya ki ankho me pyar se dekhte hue uska hath pakad kar) Khud Se jyada bharosa hai mujhe tujh par Aditya ( aur car se bahar aa jati hai)
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Awesome dost... narration of emotions is excellent...Update 7
Aditi khana banane kitchen me chali gayi aur Aditya apne room me. Bed par letne ke bad Kai tarah ke khayal Aditya ke zehan me ane lage , uski Puri life uske ankho ke samne ek movie ki tarah chalne lagi ki kis tarah uske apne baap ne use ek perfect human banane ke liye khud se aur Maa se dur rakha kis tarah Kashyap Singh ne uska pura bachpan apni khwahisho ki Aag me jhonk diya aur ab wo hi insan jo uska baap hai apni kiye par pachhta raha hai jab wo Puri tarah se laachar ho chuka hai.
Haa ye sach hai ki ye sab unse Aditya ki bhalayi ke liye kiya tha par is sab me Maa ka kya kasoor tha kya Kashyap Singh ko us Devi jesi aurat ke ansu nahi dikhe. Itna toh Aditya ko pata hai ki uske bagair Aditi ghut-ghut kar jeeti thi usne apna har ek pal Aditya ki yaad me bitaya hai lekin ab aur nahi ab wo wapas aa gaya hai. Ab us khubsurat Devi ko aur apne bete ke pyar ke liye tadpa nahi padega. Aditya khud se wada Karta hai ki use wo har Khushi dega Jo wo deserve karti hai.
Aditya ~ (apne Maan me) Kitni Sundar hai meri maa koi use dukh pahuchane ke soch bhi kese sakta hai. Aaj jab unhe dekha toh kese main kuch der ke liye sab bhul gaya tha aur pata nahi jab bhi wo samne hoti hai mujhe kya hone lagta hai ek ajib ahsaas..
Aditya ye sab soch hi Raha tha ki ek maid akar Room ka door knock karti. Aditya darwaaza khol kar maid se puchhta hai toh wo use Batati hai ki khana ready hai jiske Bad Aditya niche chal deta hai. Niche Jakar Aditya ko fir se uski khubsurat Maa dikhti Jo khane ki tabel par Dishes ko prepare kar Rahi thi Maids ki help se.
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Aditya jaha tha wahi khada khada Aditi ko dekhne lagta hai kuch der bad Aditi hi use Sidhiyo pe khada dekh bolti hai.
Aditi ~ Aditya waha kyu khade ho … Aao khana ready hai.
Aditya ko hosh Aata hai aur wo niche chala jata hai uski Maa Puri lagan se Sara kaam kar Rahi thi aur Maids ki thodi bohot madad hi le rahi thi.
Aditya ~ Maa Aap inke hote hue taklif kyu le rahi hain . Unhe apna kaam karne dijiye Aap bethiye ye kar lengi.
Aditi ~ Taklif kesi beta. aaj itne saalo ke bad mera Bachha ghar aya hai Wese bhi itne Saalo bad kuch bana Rahi hu aur apne bete ke liye khud Khana banane se jyada ek Maa ke liye kya khushi ka kaam ho sakta hai.
Aditya ~ Itni saalo bad kyu Nana toh bataya karte the ki Apko cooking bohot pasand hai.
Aditi ~ (ye sun kar thodi udas ho kar kehti hai) Pasand toh bohot hai Aditya lekin koi tha hi nahi Jiske liye kuch banati. Tu dur ho gaya tha mujhse aur Tere Papa ghar par aate hi nahi the Aur jab bhi aate the kuch hi der ke liye. Ek do bar banaya unke liye lekin kabhi unhone Taste bhi nahi kiya.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya bhi thoda udaas ho jata hai lekin Aditi ka mood thik karne ke liye kehta hai) koi baat nahi Ab main aa gaya hoo na Ab roz apke hatho se bana khana khaya karunga.
Aditi ~ ( Khushi ke aansuo ke sath) Haa mere laal ab tu aa gaya hai ab sab thik ho jaega.
Aditya beth jata tha aur Adti use serve karne lagti hai is sab me Aditya sirf Aditi ka Sundar chehra hi dekhe Jaa Raha tha thodi der bad Aditya khana shuru karne wala hota hai ki thoda ruk kar ..
Aditya ~ Maa yaha mere pas bethiye.
Aditi ~ ( Thoda pareshan ho kar ki kahi kuch galat toh nahi bana Diya Aditya ke pas chair par bethati hai) Haa beta kuch Galat ho gaya kya.
Aditya ~ ( Muskura kar apni Sundar Maa ko dekhta hai aur apne hatho ko jinme Niwala tha Aditi ki taraf kar deta hai) Muh kholiye.
Aditi ~ Par beta..
Aditya ~ ( bich me rokte hue) Aaj se Apko kabhi dukhi nahi hone dunga Maa , Aaj se aap akeli nahi hongi apka Aditya apke sath rahega hamesha You can always rely on me.
Hamare circumstances ki wajah se Aaj Tak toh ye kar nahi paya par aaj main bhi apni Maa ko apne hath se Khilaunga.
Aditi ~ (Apne Bete ka pyar dekh kar Aditi ki ankho me fir se ansu aa jate hai aur chehre par ek badi si muskan) Haa beta ab teri Maa tere hi sahare hai ( bol kar apna muh khol deti hai)
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Aditya apni Maa ko Khilata hai jiske baad Aditi bhi Aditya ko apne Hatho se khilane lagti hai bs yu hi dono Maa bete ek dusre ke hatho se khana khaa lete hai aur Saalo se bade ek dusre ke liye pyar ko share karte hai.
Khana khatm hone ke bad Aditya Terence par chala jata hai. Aasman kitna saaf tha Taaro se bhara hua wese toh Aditya ne Kai bar Taaro se bhare Asman dekhe the par Aaj use ye Kuch jyada hi khubsurat lag raha tha Pata nahi aaj uska man jese hawa me hi tha, Har ek chiz jese Rango se bhar gayi ho apni is ajib si Khushi ka Raaz toh wo bhi samajh nahi paa Raha tha.
Wo sochta hai ye shayad ghar wapas aane ki khushi hai par usne toh decide Kiya tha ki wo apne Papa se mil kar wapas chala jaega lekin ab uska wapas jaane ka man kyu nahi kar raha. Aditya khudko behlata hai ki papa ko wada Jo Kiya hai ki Maa ka dhyan rakhunga.. Haa isiliye aur kya wajah hogi
( Aditya ka Dil yaha khud se jhut bol raha tha Baap ko kiya wada toh ek wajah thi hi par uski is nayi Khushi ka Raaz kuch aur hi hai jise wo abhi samajh nahi paa Raha aur isi ki wajah se ab wo ghar chhod kar nahi jana chahta)
Aditya yuhi Raat ke is khubsurat Asmaan ko dekhte hue tehal raha tha ki Aditi bhi upar aa jati hai. Jise dekh kar Aditya aur khush ho jata hai.
Aditi ~ tum bhi Roz Taro ko dekhne chhat par Aate ho Aditya.
Aditya ~ Haa kabhi Kabhi...
Aditi ~ Main toh Roz ese hi Raat ke asmaan ko dekh kar apne bete ko yaad karti thi aur duya karti thi ki Mera Aditya jaha bhi ho sahi salamat ho aur fir se main apne Aditya ko dekh paau.
Aditya ~ ( Ek smile ke sath ) toh Duya kabool ho gayi apki Lo aa gaya Aditya apke paas.
Aditi ~ ( Aditya ka Hath tham kar use chum leti hai) Haa mera beta apni Maa ke pas wapas aa Gaya.
( Aditi ke Hath thamne se Aditya Dil ki dhadkane bad jati hai par bolta kuch nahi hai)
Aditi ~ ( Taaro se bhare Asman ko dekhte hue ) Kitna sundar Lagta hai na Ye sab.
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Aditya ~ ( Asman Ko Naa dekh kar Aditi ko dekhte hue ) Haa bohot Sundar ….
Dono Maa bete thodi der bad Niche aa jate hai aur ek dusre ko Good night bol kar Apne Apne rooms me chale jate hai ( Halaki Aditi ka man toh bohot tha Aditya ka sar apni god me rakh kar use sulane ka par wo sankoch kar jati hai)
Aditya ka man bohot khush tha halaki Use ye baat yaad thi ki uska baap abhi zindagi aur maut ke bich lad raha hai lekin fir bhi uske honto se muskan jaa nahi rahi thi thoda ajib toh use bhi lagta hai par wo bhi ye sab control nahi kar paa Raha tha uske dimag me bar bar uski Maa aa rahi thi. uska Sundar chehra Jis par ab tak kitni udasi thi aaj fir se Khushi dukhi hai. Aditya bed par lete lete fesla karta hai ki Ab se Aditi ko kabhi Udaas hone nahi dega wo use wo har Khushi dega jo uska haq hai chahe use kuch bhi karna pade. Ye sab sochte hue uski Aankh lag jati hai.
Agle din Aditya hamesha ki tarah jldi uth jata hai wo roz Subha uth kar workout karta tha par yaha Gym kaha se hoga ye soch kar wo jogging par nikal jata hai. Kashyap Singh ka Ghar aur uske aas paas ki property bohot badi thi toh Jogging ke liye kisi ko property se bahar Jane ki jarurat hi nahi hai Ghar ke piche aur aas pas ka sara land unhi ka tha jo ek hare bhare Gardan kam Jungle ki tarah tha.
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Wapas ane ke baad wo apni Maa ko dekhta hai jo Aaj aur bhi jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi Aditya jiski Dhadkane jogging ke bad bhi itni tez nahi hui thi Aditi ko dekh kar aur bhi jyada tez ho jati hai wo sochta hai ki ye bar bar use Maa ko dekh kar ye ajib feeling kyu hone lagti hai.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya breakfast ke liye bethate hue) Maa aapke Aaj kya plans hai?
Aditi ~ mere plans... Jyada khas nahi wahi Ghar ke kaam.
Aditya ~ Thik hai toh aaj Ghar ke kaam House helpers kar denge aur Main aaj apko bahar shopping par le jaunga.
Aditi ~ (Thoda chokte hue) shopping... Par par Beta.. Main kya karungi tumhare sath akar tum Khamakha pareshan hoge.
Aditya ~ Pareshani kesi Maa... utla mujhe toh bohot Khushi hogi.
Aditi ~ Par Beta ...
Aditya ~ (Aditi ko bich me rokte hue) Par var kuch nahi aap mere sath chal Rahi ho and that's it. Kab Tak aap in Char diwaro me ese kaid rahogi ab apka beta apko Duniya se rubaru karwayega.
(Aditi ki ankhe nam ho jati hai)
Aditya ~ (apna pyar dikhate hue) in motiyon jese Aansuo ke behne ke din khatm ho gaye hai Ab khul kar hasne ke din hai. Jldi se jao aur ready ho kar aao main apka wait kar raha hu.
Aditi ~ ( Aditya ki baat par haste hue) Thik hai beta ... Main abhi ready ho kar aati hu.
Aditi ke jaate hi Aditya bhi Naha kar ready hone chala jata hai. Shopping ka plan usne kal rat hi bana liya tha par pata nahi kyu use kuch jyada hi Khushi ho rahi thi wo jldi se ready ho kar hall me Aditi ka wait karne lagta hai.
kuch der or intezaar karne ke bad Aditi apne room se bahar aati hai. Aditya to dekhta hi reh jaata hai. samne uski Maa khadi thi jo is samay apne reshami baalo ki lat ko apne kaan ke peeche kar rahi thi.
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Aditi ka chehra chamak raha tha.. uski badi ankho me kajal, patle gulab ki pankhudiyo se hotho pe laal lipstick, dono eyebrows ke bich laal bindi, kaano me jhumke, naak me badi si baali ke sath nathni, hathon me golden kangan is samay Aditi cream colour ke blouse aur red color ki saree pehni hui thi.
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Aditi ke tight blouse me uski ubhari hui Chhati jo ki blouse ke clevage se saaf dikh rahi thi. Aditi ke badan par wo saree kuch is tarah bandhi thi ki pichhe se uski Ass saaf saaf ubhari hi dikh Rahi thi isme Aditi ka koi kasoor nahi tha Uska badan hi esa tha ki wo lakh chah kar bhi apne Badan ko kapdo se chhupa nahi pati thi. Aditya apni Maa ke roop me kho gaya.
"kya hua Beta kahan kho gaye...." Aditi ki aawaj se Aditya jaise nind se jaga
Aditya ~ (hosh me aate hue)ku...ku...kuchh nahi Maa, wo bas..... Kuch soch Raha tha.
Aditi ~ ( bhole pan me) Kya soch rahe the Beta?
Aditya ~ Kuch nahi Maa wo toh bas ese hi..... Chaliye hume Shopping par chalna hai na...
Dono maa bete Ghar se niklne wale hote hai ki Aditi Ghar se bahar Ane se pehle ek Bada sa Ghunghat kar leti hai
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Aditya ye dekhta hai lekin kuch nahi bolta. dono car me Beth kar nikal jate hai.
Aditi ko bohot Ghabrahat ho Rahi thi ye pehli bar tha jab wo khud Bina apne pati aur uski security ke Ghar se bahar Jaa Rahi thi lekin apne bete ki Khushi ke liye wo ye bhi karne ko taiyar thi.
Aditya ~ Maa mall ki taraf chalte hai waha thoda ghum bhi lenge.
Aditi ~ (nervous hote hue )thik hai Beta chalo.
(Aditya mall ki or car ghuma deta hai or thode he der me dono mall pahuch jate hai ,mall pohoch kar Aditya Gadi park karta hai aur Bahar aata hai par Aditi Bahar nahi aa Rahi thi.)
Aditya ~ kya hua Maa...?
Aditi ~ (nervousness me) Beta actually main kabhi is tarah Mall ghumne nahi aayi mujhe bohot ajib lag raha hai.
Aditya ~ isme Ajib kya hai Maa .. mall toh sab log aate hai.
Aditi ~ Wahi toh Beta yaha itne saare log honge unki nazre mujhse sehan nahi hongi.
Aditya ~ (Baat ko samjhte hue apna hath badhta hai) ghabrane ki koi Baat nahi hai Maa. Main hoo na apke saath. Kuch Log dekhenge toh koi baat nahi aap Mera hath pakad Lena. mujh par bharosa hai na aapko.
Aditi ~ (Aditya ki ankho me pyar se dekhte hue uska hath pakad kar) Khud Se jyada bharosa hai mujhe tujh par Aditya ( aur car se bahar aa jati hai)
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अद्भुत कहानी दूरदर्शी कहानीकार की एक उत्तम रचना।Update 6
Aditya fresh hone ke bad apne bed par let jata hai aur past me hue incidents ke bare me sochne lagta hai ki kese uske baap ne use aur uski Maa ko dur rakha halaki wo ye sab usi ki bhalayi ke liye kar raha tha par ek bachhe ke liye usko Maa hi sabse important hoti hai jiska pyar use kabhi nasib hi nahi ho paya. Kafir der tak yuhi sochne ke baad use bahar se kisi ki car ki awaz aati hai wo khudke se dekhta hai toh sach me koi Ghar aya tha. Niche jakar dekhne ke bad Aditya ko pata lagta hai ki ye Doctors hai jo regular checkup ke liye aaye hai, Wo fir apni Maa ki taraf dekhta hai jo Ghunghat me kaid ho chuki thi.
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Niche akar uski Maa Doctors se uska parichay karati hai fir ek check-up ke bad Doctors Aditya ko batate hai ki Kashyap Singh ki Halat kharab hi hai unka Lakwa unke hath ko kharab kar chuka hai Sath hi main Heart attack ke karan wo ab jyada bahar bhi nahi reh sakte unke liye thodi bhi mehnat Jaan lewa sabit ho sakti hai . Wo filhal hosh me toh hai lekin kamzori ke karan abhi wo thik se Baat nahi kar Sakte.
ADITYA Dr. Se apne pita se Baat karne ke liye kehta hai jis par Dr. Swikriti de dete hai Aditi aur Aditya, Kashyap se milne Room me chale Jate ha. Kashyap Aditya ko dekhte hi pehchan leta hai aur uski ankho se ansu aane lagte hai wo apne bete ko gale lagane ke liye uthane ki koshish karta hai par uska Sharir sath nahi deta . Aditya jaldi se uske pita ke pas Beth kar unhe na uthne ke liye kehta hai. Aditi bhi wahi Aditya ke pas Beth jati hai aur uski ankho se bhi aansu behne lagte hai . Itne saalo me ye pehli bar tha ki Ye pariwar ek sath tha par wo bhi kis kimat par.
Kashyap Singh ko apne kiye gaye Gunaho ke liye pachtawa hota hai. usne ye sab Aditi aur Aditya ke Bhale ke liye hi Kiya tha par wo ab samjh paa Raha tha ki Rishte Nibhane ke liye Unke sath hona jaruri hai na ki unse Dur. Ye soch kar Kashyap fir se Ansu bahane lagta hai. Aditya ki ankhen bhi Nam ho jati hai. Kuch der Bad Kashyap Singh thodi bohot baate karne ki koshish karte hai.
Kashyap Singh ~ (Bolne ki koshish karte hue) K… kaise ho … Beta?
Aditya ~ Achha hun Papa par please aap khudko taklif mat dijiye.
Kashyap Singh bhi khudki halat samjh Raha tha fir wo Aditi taraf dekhta hai uski Sundar biwi jise wo khud shayad aaj achhe se dekh raha tha jiske liye uske paas kabhi wakt nahi tha . Wo Aditi se kehta hai ~ T… Tum kesi ho … Aditi?
Ye sun kar Aditi aur jyada aasnu bahane lagti hai ye pehli bar tha jab uske Pati ne uska haal usse puchha tha . Wo koi jawab nahi deti sirf rone lagti hai .
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Kashyap Ko bhi ab Realization hone lagta hai ki uske Karan In Dono ne kitna dukh Saha hai . Kuch der tak koi Baat nahi hoti fir Kashyap Singh Apni Takat laga kar fir se bolne ka pryaas karta hai .
Kashyap ~ Aa.. Aaditya
Aditya ~ Haa .. Papa Kahiye. Main yahi hun.
Kashyap ~ E..ek wada ka.karo mujhse….
Aditya ~ Haa papa Kahiye aap jo bolenge main taiyar hun.
Kashyap ~ Jo…gal.tiya mene ki …. Wo kabhi ..Mat karna ........... Aditi ka Dh.. Dhyan rakhna, Use Kabhi … Akela… Chhod kar … Mat jana.
Aditya ~ Hamara dhyan Rakhne ke liye Aap hai na Papa. Apko kuch nahi hoga.. Maa ko meri jarurat nahi.
Kashyap ~ bas….. mujhse ..Wada K…Karo beta. VA..vachan do.
Aditya ~ ( Apne Pita ki Halat ke karan Papa ka hath tham kar unhe Vachan de deta hai) Main Vada karta hun Papa . Maa ko kabhi chhod kar nahi jaunga.
Kashyap ~ Ab se … Aditi Tumhari…. Jimmedari hai .
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Ye bol kar Kashyap fir se behosh ho jata hai Aditya Bhag kar dr. Ko lene Jata hai Aditi jo ye sab dekh Rahi thi apne rone par control nahi kar pati aur aansuo ki Jhadi laga deti hai . Kuch der me Doctos Akar Aditya aur Aditi ko Bahar Jane ka bol kar Kashyap ki fir se jaanch karne lagte hai.
Kafi der Tak Aditya aur Aditi bahar hi intezar karne lagte hai. jese hi doctor bahar ate hai Aditya un par sawalo ki bochhor kar deta hai.
Dr. ~ Ghabraiye nahi Wo Sirf Energy na hone ke karan behosh hue he. Halaki abhi bhi nahi kaha Jaa sakta ki wo kab Tak thik honge ya honge bhi ya nahi. Hum sirf koshish kar sakte hai. Aap Hope mat khoiye Upar Wale par Bharosa rakhiye. hamari team hr kuch dino me akar unki treatment karegi. Filhaal aap log hume ijazat dijiye. If anything serious happens you will inform us anytime.
Dr. Ki Baat bol kar chale jate hai. Aditya apni Maa ko dekhta hai jo Khamoshi me dubi Hui thi wo use dilasa deta hai ki Sab thik ho jaega . Aditi bhi apne bete ke kehne par thoda hosla sambhalti hai.
Aditi Aditya se Khane ka puchhti hai par Aditya mana kar deta hai.
Aditi ~ (Bhavook ansuo ke sath)kya itne saalo ke bad bhi apni Maa ke hatho ka khana nahi khaega Beta
Aditya is baat ka jawab nahi de pata aur Khane ke liye haa kar deta hai. Aditi kitchen me khana banane chali jati hai, Aditya ki nazar Kitchen me jati Hui apni maa ki taraf jati hai.
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Usko Khushi aur Pachtawa dono mehsoos hote hai ki ye Apsara uski Sagi Maa hai Aditya ek Thandi saans leta hai aur kehta hai ~ Ab toh shayad main Apka diya zehar bhi khaa sakta hoon.
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Aditi khana banane kitchen me chali gayi aur Aditya apne room me. Bed par letne ke bad Kai tarah ke khayal Aditya ke zehan me ane lage , uski Puri life uske ankho ke samne ek movie ki tarah chalne lagi ki kis tarah uske apne baap ne use ek perfect human banane ke liye khud se aur Maa se dur rakha kis tarah Kashyap Singh ne uska pura bachpan apni khwahisho ki Aag me jhonk diya aur ab wo hi insan jo uska baap hai apni kiye par pachhta raha hai jab wo Puri tarah se laachar ho chuka hai.
Haa ye sach hai ki ye sab unse Aditya ki bhalayi ke liye kiya tha par is sab me Maa ka kya kasoor tha kya Kashyap Singh ko us Devi jesi aurat ke ansu nahi dikhe. Itna toh Aditya ko pata hai ki uske bagair Aditi ghut-ghut kar jeeti thi usne apna har ek pal Aditya ki yaad me bitaya hai lekin ab aur nahi ab wo wapas aa gaya hai. Ab us khubsurat Devi ko aur apne bete ke pyar ke liye tadpa nahi padega. Aditya khud se wada Karta hai ki use wo har Khushi dega Jo wo deserve karti hai.
Aditya ~ (apne Maan me) Kitni Sundar hai meri maa koi use dukh pahuchane ke soch bhi kese sakta hai. Aaj jab unhe dekha toh kese main kuch der ke liye sab bhul gaya tha aur pata nahi jab bhi wo samne hoti hai mujhe kya hone lagta hai ek ajib ahsaas..
Aditya ye sab soch hi Raha tha ki ek maid akar Room ka door knock karti. Aditya darwaaza khol kar maid se puchhta hai toh wo use Batati hai ki khana ready hai jiske Bad Aditya niche chal deta hai. Niche Jakar Aditya ko fir se uski khubsurat Maa dikhti Jo khane ki tabel par Dishes ko prepare kar Rahi thi Maids ki help se.
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Aditya jaha tha wahi khada khada Aditi ko dekhne lagta hai kuch der bad Aditi hi use Sidhiyo pe khada dekh bolti hai.
Aditi ~ Aditya waha kyu khade ho … Aao khana ready hai.
Aditya ko hosh Aata hai aur wo niche chala jata hai uski Maa Puri lagan se Sara kaam kar Rahi thi aur Maids ki thodi bohot madad hi le rahi thi.
Aditya ~ Maa Aap inke hote hue taklif kyu le rahi hain . Unhe apna kaam karne dijiye Aap bethiye ye kar lengi.
Aditi ~ Taklif kesi beta. aaj itne saalo ke bad mera Bachha ghar aya hai Wese bhi itne Saalo bad kuch bana Rahi hu aur apne bete ke liye khud Khana banane se jyada ek Maa ke liye kya khushi ka kaam ho sakta hai.
Aditya ~ Itni saalo bad kyu Nana toh bataya karte the ki Apko cooking bohot pasand hai.
Aditi ~ (ye sun kar thodi udas ho kar kehti hai) Pasand toh bohot hai Aditya lekin koi tha hi nahi Jiske liye kuch banati. Tu dur ho gaya tha mujhse aur Tere Papa ghar par aate hi nahi the Aur jab bhi aate the kuch hi der ke liye. Ek do bar banaya unke liye lekin kabhi unhone Taste bhi nahi kiya.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya bhi thoda udaas ho jata hai lekin Aditi ka mood thik karne ke liye kehta hai) koi baat nahi Ab main aa gaya hoo na Ab roz apke hatho se bana khana khaya karunga.
Aditi ~ ( Khushi ke aansuo ke sath) Haa mere laal ab tu aa gaya hai ab sab thik ho jaega.
Aditya beth jata tha aur Adti use serve karne lagti hai is sab me Aditya sirf Aditi ka Sundar chehra hi dekhe Jaa Raha tha thodi der bad Aditya khana shuru karne wala hota hai ki thoda ruk kar ..
Aditya ~ Maa yaha mere pas bethiye.
Aditi ~ ( Thoda pareshan ho kar ki kahi kuch galat toh nahi bana Diya Aditya ke pas chair par bethati hai) Haa beta kuch Galat ho gaya kya.
Aditya ~ ( Muskura kar apni Sundar Maa ko dekhta hai aur apne hatho ko jinme Niwala tha Aditi ki taraf kar deta hai) Muh kholiye.
Aditi ~ Par beta..
Aditya ~ ( bich me rokte hue) Aaj se Apko kabhi dukhi nahi hone dunga Maa , Aaj se aap akeli nahi hongi apka Aditya apke sath rahega hamesha You can always rely on me.
Hamare circumstances ki wajah se Aaj Tak toh ye kar nahi paya par aaj main bhi apni Maa ko apne hath se Khilaunga.
Aditi ~ (Apne Bete ka pyar dekh kar Aditi ki ankho me fir se ansu aa jate hai aur chehre par ek badi si muskan) Haa beta ab teri Maa tere hi sahare hai ( bol kar apna muh khol deti hai)
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Aditya apni Maa ko Khilata hai jiske baad Aditi bhi Aditya ko apne Hatho se khilane lagti hai bs yu hi dono Maa bete ek dusre ke hatho se khana khaa lete hai aur Saalo se bade ek dusre ke liye pyar ko share karte hai.
Khana khatm hone ke bad Aditya Terence par chala jata hai. Aasman kitna saaf tha Taaro se bhara hua wese toh Aditya ne Kai bar Taaro se bhare Asman dekhe the par Aaj use ye Kuch jyada hi khubsurat lag raha tha Pata nahi aaj uska man jese hawa me hi tha, Har ek chiz jese Rango se bhar gayi ho apni is ajib si Khushi ka Raaz toh wo bhi samajh nahi paa Raha tha.
Wo sochta hai ye shayad ghar wapas aane ki khushi hai par usne toh decide Kiya tha ki wo apne Papa se mil kar wapas chala jaega lekin ab uska wapas jaane ka man kyu nahi kar raha. Aditya khudko behlata hai ki papa ko wada Jo Kiya hai ki Maa ka dhyan rakhunga.. Haa isiliye aur kya wajah hogi
( Aditya ka Dil yaha khud se jhut bol raha tha Baap ko kiya wada toh ek wajah thi hi par uski is nayi Khushi ka Raaz kuch aur hi hai jise wo abhi samajh nahi paa Raha aur isi ki wajah se ab wo ghar chhod kar nahi jana chahta)
Aditya yuhi Raat ke is khubsurat Asmaan ko dekhte hue tehal raha tha ki Aditi bhi upar aa jati hai. Jise dekh kar Aditya aur khush ho jata hai.
Aditi ~ tum bhi Roz Taro ko dekhne chhat par Aate ho Aditya.
Aditya ~ Haa kabhi Kabhi...
Aditi ~ Main toh Roz ese hi Raat ke asmaan ko dekh kar apne bete ko yaad karti thi aur duya karti thi ki Mera Aditya jaha bhi ho sahi salamat ho aur fir se main apne Aditya ko dekh paau.
Aditya ~ ( Ek smile ke sath ) toh Duya kabool ho gayi apki Lo aa gaya Aditya apke paas.
Aditi ~ ( Aditya ka Hath tham kar use chum leti hai) Haa mera beta apni Maa ke pas wapas aa Gaya.
( Aditi ke Hath thamne se Aditya Dil ki dhadkane bad jati hai par bolta kuch nahi hai)
Aditi ~ ( Taaro se bhare Asman ko dekhte hue ) Kitna sundar Lagta hai na Ye sab.
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Aditya ~ ( Asman Ko Naa dekh kar Aditi ko dekhte hue ) Haa bohot Sundar ….
Dono Maa bete thodi der bad Niche aa jate hai aur ek dusre ko Good night bol kar Apne Apne rooms me chale jate hai ( Halaki Aditi ka man toh bohot tha Aditya ka sar apni god me rakh kar use sulane ka par wo sankoch kar jati hai)
Aditya ka man bohot khush tha halaki Use ye baat yaad thi ki uska baap abhi zindagi aur maut ke bich lad raha hai lekin fir bhi uske honto se muskan jaa nahi rahi thi thoda ajib toh use bhi lagta hai par wo bhi ye sab control nahi kar paa Raha tha uske dimag me bar bar uski Maa aa rahi thi. uska Sundar chehra Jis par ab tak kitni udasi thi aaj fir se Khushi dukhi hai. Aditya bed par lete lete fesla karta hai ki Ab se Aditi ko kabhi Udaas hone nahi dega wo use wo har Khushi dega jo uska haq hai chahe use kuch bhi karna pade. Ye sab sochte hue uski Aankh lag jati hai.
Agle din Aditya hamesha ki tarah jldi uth jata hai wo roz Subha uth kar workout karta tha par yaha Gym kaha se hoga ye soch kar wo jogging par nikal jata hai. Kashyap Singh ka Ghar aur uske aas paas ki property bohot badi thi toh Jogging ke liye kisi ko property se bahar Jane ki jarurat hi nahi hai Ghar ke piche aur aas pas ka sara land unhi ka tha jo ek hare bhare Gardan kam Jungle ki tarah tha.
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Wapas ane ke baad wo apni Maa ko dekhta hai jo Aaj aur bhi jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi Aditya jiski Dhadkane jogging ke bad bhi itni tez nahi hui thi Aditi ko dekh kar aur bhi jyada tez ho jati hai wo sochta hai ki ye bar bar use Maa ko dekh kar ye ajib feeling kyu hone lagti hai.
Aditya ~ ( Aditya breakfast ke liye bethate hue) Maa aapke Aaj kya plans hai?
Aditi ~ mere plans... Jyada khas nahi wahi Ghar ke kaam.
Aditya ~ Thik hai toh aaj Ghar ke kaam House helpers kar denge aur Main aaj apko bahar shopping par le jaunga.
Aditi ~ (Thoda chokte hue) shopping... Par par Beta.. Main kya karungi tumhare sath akar tum Khamakha pareshan hoge.
Aditya ~ Pareshani kesi Maa... utla mujhe toh bohot Khushi hogi.
Aditi ~ Par Beta ...
Aditya ~ (Aditi ko bich me rokte hue) Par var kuch nahi aap mere sath chal Rahi ho and that's it. Kab Tak aap in Char diwaro me ese kaid rahogi ab apka beta apko Duniya se rubaru karwayega.
(Aditi ki ankhe nam ho jati hai)
Aditya ~ (apna pyar dikhate hue) in motiyon jese Aansuo ke behne ke din khatm ho gaye hai Ab khul kar hasne ke din hai. Jldi se jao aur ready ho kar aao main apka wait kar raha hu.
Aditi ~ ( Aditya ki baat par haste hue) Thik hai beta ... Main abhi ready ho kar aati hu.
Aditi ke jaate hi Aditya bhi Naha kar ready hone chala jata hai. Shopping ka plan usne kal rat hi bana liya tha par pata nahi kyu use kuch jyada hi Khushi ho rahi thi wo jldi se ready ho kar hall me Aditi ka wait karne lagta hai.
kuch der or intezaar karne ke bad Aditi apne room se bahar aati hai. Aditya to dekhta hi reh jaata hai. samne uski Maa khadi thi jo is samay apne reshami baalo ki lat ko apne kaan ke peeche kar rahi thi.
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Aditi ka chehra chamak raha tha.. uski badi ankho me kajal, patle gulab ki pankhudiyo se hotho pe laal lipstick, dono eyebrows ke bich laal bindi, kaano me jhumke, naak me badi si baali ke sath nathni, hathon me golden kangan is samay Aditi cream colour ke blouse aur red color ki saree pehni hui thi.
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Aditi ke tight blouse me uski ubhari hui Chhati jo ki blouse ke clevage se saaf dikh rahi thi. Aditi ke badan par wo saree kuch is tarah bandhi thi ki pichhe se uski Ass saaf saaf ubhari hi dikh Rahi thi isme Aditi ka koi kasoor nahi tha Uska badan hi esa tha ki wo lakh chah kar bhi apne Badan ko kapdo se chhupa nahi pati thi. Aditya apni Maa ke roop me kho gaya.
"kya hua Beta kahan kho gaye...." Aditi ki aawaj se Aditya jaise nind se jaga
Aditya ~ (hosh me aate hue)ku...ku...kuchh nahi Maa, wo bas..... Kuch soch Raha tha.
Aditi ~ ( bhole pan me) Kya soch rahe the Beta?
Aditya ~ Kuch nahi Maa wo toh bas ese hi..... Chaliye hume Shopping par chalna hai na...
Dono maa bete Ghar se niklne wale hote hai ki Aditi Ghar se bahar Ane se pehle ek Bada sa Ghunghat kar leti hai
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Aditya ye dekhta hai lekin kuch nahi bolta. dono car me Beth kar nikal jate hai.
Aditi ko bohot Ghabrahat ho Rahi thi ye pehli bar tha jab wo khud Bina apne pati aur uski security ke Ghar se bahar Jaa Rahi thi lekin apne bete ki Khushi ke liye wo ye bhi karne ko taiyar thi.
Aditya ~ Maa mall ki taraf chalte hai waha thoda ghum bhi lenge.
Aditi ~ (nervous hote hue )thik hai Beta chalo.
(Aditya mall ki or car ghuma deta hai or thode he der me dono mall pahuch jate hai ,mall pohoch kar Aditya Gadi park karta hai aur Bahar aata hai par Aditi Bahar nahi aa Rahi thi.)
Aditya ~ kya hua Maa...?
Aditi ~ (nervousness me) Beta actually main kabhi is tarah Mall ghumne nahi aayi mujhe bohot ajib lag raha hai.
Aditya ~ isme Ajib kya hai Maa .. mall toh sab log aate hai.
Aditi ~ Wahi toh Beta yaha itne saare log honge unki nazre mujhse sehan nahi hongi.
Aditya ~ (Baat ko samjhte hue apna hath badhta hai) ghabrane ki koi Baat nahi hai Maa. Main hoo na apke saath. Kuch Log dekhenge toh koi baat nahi aap Mera hath pakad Lena. mujh par bharosa hai na aapko.
Aditi ~ (Aditya ki ankho me pyar se dekhte hue uska hath pakad kar) Khud Se jyada bharosa hai mujhe tujh par Aditya ( aur car se bahar aa jati hai)
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