Adultery Maharani Devrani(Aidenhunt)

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Ye kahani ki shuruwat hoti hai aise sadi me jab bharat anek chhote chhote samrajya me bata hua tha.Aise he ek chhote sa rajya tha uttar bharat me jo charo ore pahado se ghira tha or ab tak k har videshi aakraman se bacha tha jis rajya ka nam tha Ghatrashtra.Ghatrashtra me kewal 5000 logo ki aabadi thi or yaha ki hari bhari zameen or watavaran se yaha k jeev jati ko rehne khane ki koi bhi kami nahi thi,praja ki khushhali ki wajah yaha k raja rajpal bhi the jo apne praja ko apne hridya se prem krte the.



Ghatrashtra ka raja

Rajpal singh aayu 40 varsh

lambai 5.7



Rajpal singh ki patni

rani shrushti 5.5



Rajpal singh ki mata ji

Maharani jeevika



Raja raj pal singh k koi santan nahi thi jiska usko andar he andar dukh tha or usko ye chinta rehti thi k uske baad ye raajya ka uttaradhikari kaun hoga jo Ghatrashtra ko smbhalega,isi soch me dooba raj raj pal k kano me kuch aawaz aati hai or wo neend se jagte hue dekhta hai uske samne uska sena pati hota hai jo ek hath me patra lya tha or wo us patra ko raja ko de kr kehta ha "maharaj ye hamare pados k raja ratan singh ne bheja hai me unke rajya ho kr aarha hu jaha me ghatrashtra k lye beej ka prabandh karne gaya tha".

Raja rajpal:acha lao...is patra ko dekhu to kya sandesh hai raja ratan ka.or wo apne sena pati ko jane ka sandesh de kar Patra me doob jata hai.
 
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Raja raj pal patra padhta hai or sochta hai k wo kare to aakhir kya kare tabhi rani shrushti aati hai or raja ko chintit dekh karan janne ki koshish krti hai

Shrushti:maharaj kya hua aap chintit q hai

Maharaj:baat ye hai k raja ratan ne hume unke yuddh me hume unka sath dene ka amantrit kya hai

shrushti:to aapne kya socha hai?

maharaj:rani.tm to is baat ko janti ho k ghatrashtra hamesha se hinsa ka khilaf raha hai uske sath nahi or aisa pita ji ne bhi apne jeevan me kabhi dusro k rajya ko ujad kr apne rajya ko badhane ka nahi socha..

shrushti:mjhe ye sb gyat hai maharaj lekin aaj kal bharat pr videshi taqat hawi hote ja rhi hai or hum to is jungle or prakruti se ghire hai or yehi hamare raksha krte hai jis se wajah se aaj tak yaha kisi ne aakraman nahi kya

Maharaj:tm kehna kya chahti ho ?

shrushti:maharaj yadi bhavishya me kahi kuch anarth ho jaye or hum pr aakraman ho to hum hamari chhoti si sena se unka muqabla nahi kr skte or hamare padosi rajya he hamari madad kr skte hai

maharaj rani ki chaturai se prasann hua or kaha "theek hai rani me raja ratan ka sath zarur dunga or aapke sujhav k lye me dhanywad karta hu."



Raja raj pal is trah apne sambandh acha karne k lye apni chhoti si sena ko le kr persia seema pr raja ratan k sath yudhh krne chala gaya.kuch mahino k yudh k baad raja ratan singh yudhh jeet gaya or yudh me apni kala ka jauhar dikha kr raj pal singh ne apne nam ka loha manwaya.persia k logo me raja raj pal or raja ratan ka khauf baith gaya.

raja ratan:Raja raj pal hum tmhari sainya kala se ati prabhavit hue hai iska puruskar hum tmhe avashya denge

raja raj pal:dhanywad raja ratan ji ye to apka badappan hai nahi to mere gun apke gun k samne kuch nahi.

raja ratan:hume tmhe kuch dena chahte hai wada karo tm hamare prushkar ko swikar karoge

Raj pal:ji hum wada karte hai

tabhi raja ratan tali bajata hai or ek budha vyakti k sath ek balika aati hai or wo budha vyakti raja raj pal k pair pakad leta hai or dhanyawad ki jhari laga deta.tab raja ratan kehta hai

Raja ratan:ye wahi log hai jinke jaan bachane k lye hume yaha aana pada or tmhe ye jan kar khushi hogi ye budha vyakti koi or nahi balki persia k purva raja hai or ye unki putri hai DEVRANi or ye raja apne jaan bachane k khushi me ye apne beti devrani ka hath tmhare hath me dena chahte or ye puruskar k roop me tmhe hum dete hai raja raj pal ji

Raja raj pal:par..(man me:ye kaise ho skta hai ye ghatrashtra k niyamo ka ullanghan hoga me dusra vivah katai nahi kar skta or to or ye DEVRANI mere se aadhe aayu ki lag rhi hai kisi kishoravashta balika jaisi)

Raja ratan:par war kuch nahi...tmne wada kya tha

Raja raj pal sb k samne wada kya tha ab mukarna usko sobha nahi deta or wo devrani se vivah k lye han kr deta hai usi din vivah ka karyakarm rkha jata hai.or vivah ka karyakarm smpann hota hai or suhag raat k lye raja raj pal apne kaksha me jata hai or bistar pr apni jooti nikal kr baith ta hai or jaise he sar uthata hai uski aakhe fati ki fati reh jati hai samne ka drishya dekh k



Rajkumari Devrani ek safed rang k libas me thi jaisa uska vastra tha waisa he uska badan bilkul sang mar mar sa tarasha chamak rha tha uske hath me doodh ka glass lye raja ki traf aa rhi thi jaise he wo uske paas pahuchi raja raj pal turant he khada ho gaya raja raj pal ka kad 5.7 he tha islye uska sar devrani k vaksh tk he aarha tha ,devrani ki lambai dekh kr raja achambhit tha k itni kam umar me itne lambai.raja uske teekhe naak ,gehre aakh phool se laal hoth,gol vaksha ,patli kamar dekh kr jaise hosh kho dya tha tbhi

devrani:Lijiye na

rajpal:dhanyawad or usse doodh le kr pee jata hai.

devrani jaise he glass le kr palat kr rakhne ja ti hai raja rani k patli kamar k niche gol gubbare se alag alag disha me kood rahe dono chutar ko dekhta hai or dang reh jata hai.devrani glass rakh kr murti h tbhi raja piche se ja kr use daboch leta hai or patle charhare badan or lambe badan doodh sa gora badan aaj se pehle kabhi dekha nahi tha kabhi ghatrashta me.wo piche se devrani ko daboche uske lambe kaale ghane zulf ko hata kr uske piche gardan ko chumne lagta hai.uske zulf ki khusbu usko pagal bana rhi thi wo uske vastra ko dheere se naade ko khol alag kr deta ab devrani keval ek chhote se vastra me thi jise uska stan or uske yoni chhup raha tha.devrani ki jawani abhi abhi shuru hui thi is jhatke se wo apne aakho ko band kye aanand le rhi thi k tbhi raja apne dono hatho ko aage badha kr uske kathor vaksha ko daboch leta hai devrani ki siski nikal jati ab raja devrani ka hath pakde bistar ki ore le jata hai or use lita deta hai or uske badan se bache khuche vastra nikal deta hai or khud bhi apne vastra nikal devrani k vaksha ko daba daba k choosne lagta hai.ab devrani siskne lagti hai or uski yoni pani chhorne lagti hai .raja apna ling devrani ki yoni pr staata hai or dhakka lagata hai jaise he ling andar jata hai rani zor se chillati hai or uska sheel bhang ho jata hai or usme se khoon behne lagta hai raja gin k 5 bar andar bahar karta hai or ruk jata hai. pr ab rani ko dard nahi maza aa rha tha wo sochti hai k raja ka ling or andar jaye or apne hath se raja k kamar k pakar k dhakka deti hai pr raja k chhote land ne jawab de dya tha or rani jo k unnche lambe kad kam se kam 5.10 ki thi uski gehrai tk raja rajpal ka nanha sa ling bhed nahi pata or uska 4 inch ka ling charam seema pr pahuch rani k yoni me pani chhor deta hai or rani devrani ko pyasi chhor deta hai.iske bad karwat le kr ye sochte so jate hai.or devrani apne aaakho me aasu lye apne aap ko poch kr so jati hai.
 
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Raja rajpal devrani ko le kr apne rajya ghatrashtra aa jata hai jaha use smaj or gharwalo k kai tane sehne padte hai q k wo niyam ka ullanghan kr k dusra vivah kr lye uski pehli patni shrushti us se vachan leti hai k wo pehle shrushti ko prathimikta dega uske bad he wo dusri patni devrani ko.shrushti ne saf kr dya tha bina uske aagya k devrani k pas na jaye majburan wo uski baat man leta hai.idhar devrani ko puri khabar uski dasi Kamla deti hai or devrani pe jaise pahad toot padta hai.udhar raja ratan apne rajya ko badhane me lage the or yudha me na chahte hue bhi raja raj pal ko jana padta tha islye raja raj pal kam samay apne rajya me beetate ,deen raat yudha karne k wajah se unhe sharab ki lat lag gai or unhe kabhi kabhi apne mahal me rehne ka sawbhagya milta to shrushti use nahi chhorti or devrani akeli jeevan yapn karne lagi.mushkil se 6 mahine me ek ya do bar devrani se raja raj pal chhupe chhupaye milap kr lete bina apne pehli patni k bhanak lage.Vivah k 9 mahine bad he paras ki rajkumari or ghatrashtra ki rani ,rani devrani ne ek sundar balak ko janam dya jiska nam rakha gaya BALDEV singh.

18 saal baad

Aaj pure mahal me diye jalaye gaye or har traf khushi ka mahaul tha .ho bhi q na aaj rajkumar BALDEV singh ka janamdin jo tha or aaj he k din wo apne pichle paanch varsh ka siksha grahan kr apne guru k aashram se aaya tha.ab raja raj pal ki aayu lagbhag 58 varsh ho gai thi.Raja raj pal ki pehli patni k aayu ab lagbhag 48 varsh ki thi pr lambai kam hone k karan abhi bhi badan dhala nahi tha par jaha sb budhe ho rhe the wahi devrani din ba din jawan hote ja rhi thi ,Devrani ab lagbhag 35 varsh ki he thi or 5.10 wali patli chharhari ladki ab ek unche lambe kad ki stree ka rup dharan kr lya tha,devika k vaksha sambhale nahi smbhalte the jo 44 dd the jo do bade gubbare ki trah chalne pr hilte pr thos the kamar patli or niche do matke ki trah gand upar se doodh jaisa rang sipahi se le kr pandit tk usko dekh kr aahe bharte the.aaj devrani ne kaale rang ka blouse or sadi pehni thi blouse itne tight k do pani se bhare gubbare kisi sharabi ki trah ladkhadate jab bhi devirani chalti thi.



Devrani pooja ki thali tayyar kr rhi thi tbhi uski dasi kamla aati hai or uske kehti hai "maharani yuvraj aagaye"itna sunte bhar se devrani khushi k mare thali le kr darwaze pe chali jati hai jaha pr sidhe nazar yuvraj pr padti hai jo apne pita raja rajpal se gale mil raha tha devrani apne putra ko kai varsho bad dekh k ek dam uske aakh patthar se jam jate hai or man me "kitna bada ho gaya mera yuvraj mene iska nam Baldev sahi rkha tha kitna uncha lamba or chauda ho gaya hai fir bhi kitna hasmukh hai ,isne to muchhe bhi rkh lye hai,(tabhi Baldev apne muchho pr tav deta hai) dekho kaise muchho pr tav de rha hai jaise kahi ka maharaja ho ise dekh kr kaun kahega k ye kewal 18 varsh ka hai,dikhne me 30 varshiya purush raja lag rha hai "aise apne ap ko dekhte dekh Baldev ka bhi sneh chhlak jata hai apne maa k prati or apne paas khade apne pita or badi maa ki tulna apne maa se krta hai "Meri maa to in dono k samne in dono ki beti lag rhi hai,upar uske teekhe nain naksh ,chamakti twacha,uske niche gatheela badan ,lamba kad kathi,meri maa ko dekh kr koi ye nahi keh skta k ye meri maa hai ,koi agyat log dekhe to sb sochenge meri chhoti behan hai or inki aayu bhi 25 se zyada nahi lagti"

tabhi raja raj pal tokte hue kehta hai

raja raj pal:bhagywan dono maa or putra ne ek dusre ko dekh lya ho to aage ki karwayi ki jaye,Baldev apne maa k pair chhuo.

Baldev turant apne maa k paas ja kr unke sundar pair chhuta hai or devrani use aashirwad deti

Pooja karyakaram der raat tak chalta hai,pooja khatm hone k baad sb uth kr jane lagte hai devrani or kamla meethai aas paas batwane lagti hai or baldev uth kr apne kaksha ki ore chal deta hai tbhi use kuch baatcheet krne ki aawaz sunai deti hai or wo us traf chal deta hai or antim me apne badi maa shrushti k k kaksha k pas ruk jata hai

shrushti:aaj to ye baldev bhi aagya apni siksha puri kr k

radha:Han mahrani mene dekha aj bhut khush lag rhi thi ,kahi wo aap se badla ka shadyantra to nahi bana rhi

Rani shrushti:Radha ho skta hai tm sahi ho q k mene us se uske pati ka sukh chheena hai or wo parasi budhi, lagta hai k zarur mere lye khadda khodegi

radha:to hume kya karna chahiye mahrani

Shrushti:sahi samay ka intezar ,me bataungi k tmhe kya karna hai radha abhi tm jao maharaj aate he honge.



Sb kam khatm krne k bad baldev ko le kr raja rajpal apne maa yani k Mahrani jeevika jo apne zindagi k aakhiri din gin rahi thi unke kaksh me jata hai or baldev apne dadi jo k ek bistar pr leti jinka pair kaam krna band kr dya tha islye wo chal nahi skti thi pr wo hath se theek or bol b pati thi pr mushkil se,baldev dadi ko dekh khush hota hai or unke charan sparsh kr aashirwad leta hai or unke bagal me baith jata hai.

Dadi:Beta baldev

Baldev:ji dadi

Dadi:mjhe muaf kr de me tera swagat krne duwar pr na aaski,ab me chal nahi skti

Baldev:aap is rajya ki maharani hai or hum sb apke santan hai apki aagya pr hum himalaya chadh k aa skte hai apse milne.



Dadi:bas beta ,mjhe tmse yahi umeed thi,tm Ghatrashtra k bhavishya ho,bhagwan tmhe ek acha or mahan raja banaye,or tm itihas banao.

or baldev k sar pr hath rkh kr aashirwad dete hai or baldev or raja raj pal bahar aate hai

Rajpal:putra ab kal subah milte hai apne kaksha me ja kr aaram karo

Baldev fir ek bar rajpal k pair chhuta hai to rajpal apne putra ko gale laga leta hai or kehta hai

rajpal:tu kitna lamba ho gaya dekhte dekhte

baldev:kaha pita jee,bass 6.3 fitt he hu

rajpal:tere dada ki kadd kathi bhi tere jitni nahi thi tu apne maa pr gaya hai,or dono hasne lagte hai or baldev apne ek ungli se apne muchh pr taav deta hai apni prashansha sun kr



Rajpal:beta apni mata ko khila kr sona tmhe to pata hai wo tmhare bina nahi khati

Baldev:ji pita ji

or baldev apne kaksha or Baldev apne maa k kaksha ki ore chal deta hai
 
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Baldev singh man me kai bhav lye hue apne maa k kaksha ki traf badh raha tha ,use uske badi maa ka apne maa k khilaf baat sun kr jaise pareshan ho gaya tha or use samajh nahi aarha tha k kya kare.jaise he wo pahuchta hai dekhta hai devrani 56 bhog saja rhi hai apne bete k lye or apne bete ka aabhash pa kr kehti hai

Devrani:aa gaye bete ..bada der kr dya aane me

Baldev:Mata shree aap thakti nahi ho ?

Devrani:aisa q puch rha hai?

Baldev:Q k mjhe pata hai aap ek subah se kaam kr rhi ho,aap vishram q nahi krti..

Devrani:Baldev..Jiska beta itne varsho baad aya hai ,wo kaise thak skti hai?

Baldev.Dasiya hai na yaha..

Or to or log bhi hai ghar me..badi maa bhi hai...

Devrani:wo Maharani hai(man me:ye kya nikal gaya muh se .

Baldev jo pehle se he sb kuch sun k aa rha tha uska dimag kharab ho gaya or kaha

Baldev:Maa,agar badi maa maharani hai to kya aap dasi ho ?

Devrani;baat ko smbhalte hue)ary nahi nahi..beta ,mera matlab tha k niyam anusar badi patni ko he maharani ki upadhi milti hai or aisa har rajya me hai.

(man me:Mjhe maharani kya kabhi rani bhi nahi smjha gaya)

Baldev bhi chehra padhne me der nahi lagaya or man me (Koi baat nahi maa ab tk kaun kya tha mjhe nahi pata par Ab Maharani sirf tm rahogi,tmahre paas wo har kuch hai jo ek maharani k paas hona chahiye)ye soch he raha tha k devrani ne kaha

Devrani:Beta ab khana kha le ..



Dono baith k 56 bhog pakwan ka aanand lene lage

Baldev:Maa aaj aisa lag rha hai varsho baad bhojan kiya hu,kya swadisht bhojan hai

Devrani:sb mere kunwar kanhaiya k lye hai..pet bhar k khana hai tjhe ab..ab kahi nahi jane dungi tjhe

Baldev:Par maa mere kuch mitra gan to videsh jayenge waha maha vidyalay hai

Devrani:Har vidya to aa he gai hai tmko ab or kya seekhna hai

Baldev:Maa log france jate hai or england jate hai ,suna hai waha naye naye avishkar krne ki siksha di jati hai,or wo hum se kai 100 saal aage hai

Devrani:Wo kaise ..

Baldev:jaise waha pr bina chitrakar k kuch yantra se chitra nikalte hai ,bina ghode k sawari ki jati hai or paani me bade bade nav jo koso door tk hazaro logo k le ja skte hai

Devrani;achambhit ho kr) Me to paras tk he dekhi hu dunya bete ..aise aisi dunya bhi hai

Baldev:han unke vesh bhusha bhi alag hai boli chali bhi alag

Jis din me Maharaja ban jaunga us din aapki yatra krwaunga zarur

Devrani:Bholu...bina Maharani k maharaja ban jaoge

Baldev:Ary ha ye to me socha he nahi

Devrani:haste hue ..budhu kahi k

Isi beech dono khana kha lete hai or baldev bhi thaka tha to shubh ratri keh k apne kaksha me chala jata hai or so jata hai idhar devrani bhi thaki thi or so jati hai.



(MAHAL)

Agli subah sb uth jate hai .Baldev sbse pehle uth ta hai or mahal muayna krta hai.use mahal pehle se or sundar or saja hua dikhta hai.Mahal k aage darbar hai jaha par do badi badi singhasan rkhe hui or dono singhasan k agal bagal ek ek chhota aasan tha.dono traf se 5 ,5 aasan the jo mantrio k lye the.Darbar k ek taraf sainik k abhyas k lye jagah or ashtra or shashtra k kaksha the or ek traf atithi gruh or rasoi tha jaha pr bhandara banta tha rajya ka,singhasan k piche se darwaza tha raj mahal ka jaha pr anek sainik din rat pahredari dete the.Baldev mahal k lye raja raj pal ne upar ek manzil banaya niche wo khud ka kaksha or sath he maharani or raja raj pal apne maa ko bhi niche he rkha tha,upar sirf baldev rehta tha.seedhi chadhte he samne darwaza khulta jo ek aalishan kaksha ki ore jata tha beech me palang jo ki kisi bhi smanay palang se 3 guna zyada bada tha,bistar bhi aisi k bacha bhi baithe to dhas jaye itna naram tha.palang k charo traf keemti motiyo se saja hua tha, paas me rakhe aaram kursi or mej ,mej pr rkhe kuch alag kism k jug wahi kone me snaan ghar or shauch jo raja raj pal ne parsio raja k madad se banwaya tha.or kaleen bhi paras se he mangwaya tha jo pure mahal ko alag he roop dete./Mahal)





Baldev apna mahal dekh andar he andar khush ho rha tha fir use kahi koi na dikhne pr wo mahal k mukhya duwar se bahar aaya or senapati ko pucha sb kaha hai

Senapati:yuvraj wo aaj sabha chal rhi h

Baldev:acha thek hai

Senapati:aap bhi tayar ho kr aa jaye

Baldev:han hum aate hai

Baldev jata hai or apne vastra pehanta hai or fir uspr motio k har pehanta hai or darbar ki ore chal deta hai.



Darbar pahuchte he dekhta hai k bari bari se sb log apne baat keh rhe hai or mantri sb ki fariyad ko likh rha tha.jaise he kisi ki yuvraj pr nazar padti hai sb jay jay kar lagane lagte hai.Baldev dekhta hai k ek bade singhasan pr uske pita or dusre bade sighasan pr uske badi maa baithi hai or chhote singhasan pr uski maa baithi hai.jise dekh kr baldev ko ajeeb lagta hai or wo bhi chhote aasan pr apne maa k bagal me ja kr baith jata hai.ghanto tak sabha chalti hai rajya k har vishay pr tark rkha jata hai or sbki duvidha pareshani suni jati.tabhi Maharani shurushti uth kr darbar se jane lagti hai to sb darbari uth khade hote hai or jay jay kar krne lagte hai."maharani shrushti padhar rhi h"),,Devrani jan bujh kr nahi uth ti jis se ye baat chhupai ja ske baldev se pr achanak Maharaja rajpal kehta hai

Rajpal;devrani .aap mahal me jaye vishram kare

Devrani:(na chahte hue bhi)ji

or devrani uth kr jane lagti hai pr is bar koi devrani ki jay jay kar nahi krta bass ek mahal ka pahredar kehta hai "rani devrani padhar rahi hai"

baldev:(man me)yehi pahredar badi maa ko maharani keh k sambodhit krta hai)aakhir ye bhed bhav q?Na unko pita ji k sath sinhasan na jay kar na he koi maharani kehta h.



Raj pal:putra

Baldev:aagya pita shree

Rajpal:kis soch me doobe ho

Baldev:kuch nahi

Rajpal:sutro se khabar mili hai k angrez uttar se bharat k seema ko or laanghne k prayas me hai

(har mantri aascharya chakit hota hai or sath he baldev bhi)

Mantri:To maharaj iska kya upay hai

Rajpal:abhi tak to nahi hai

Mantri:hum to aaj tak is uche parvat or iske charo or ghane van ne hamari raksha kya hai pr angrez k pas to aadhunik yantra hai or shashtra bhi

Rajpal:hum padosi rajyo se baat kar rhe hai dekhte hai kya nishkarsh nikalta hai

mantri :jo hukm

fir uske baad sabha khatm kr di jati hai or har mantri alag alag bane hu mantri mahal me chale jate haj or raja raj pal or baldev kuch sainiko k sath piche rajmahal me aa jate or saink wahi dwar pr pehra dene lagte hai.
 
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Dupahar k bhojan k baad Baldev apne daadi k kaksha me jata hai or unke charan chhu kr aashirwad leta hai

Dadi: jeeta reh beta

Baldev:dadi aap kaisi hai

Dadi:Meri umar ho gai ab ab to bas jane ka waqt aa gaya hai

Baldev:dadi aisa mat kaho abhi aap 100 sal or jeeyoge

Or ye aapke ek pair me takleef hai na

Dadi:han

Baldev:to aap theek ho skte h

or chal bhi skte hai

Dadi:wo kaise

Baldev:Me aise vaidh ko janta hu jo aisa rog theek kr dya hai or tb tk aap vaishakhi se chal he skti ho ,me kal he aapke lye us vaidh ko lata hu

Dadi:dhanywad beta mere lye itna sochne k lye

Baldev:ye mera farz hai,dadi aapse kuch baat jaan ni thi

Dadi:bol na

Baldev:ye maa k sath ye du vyavahar q or usne sari man ki baat dadi ko bata dya



Dadi:ye jeevan aisa he hai beta,teri pita ko tere maa se chheena gaya ,uska haq cheenaa gaya lekin me chah k bhi tere maa ki madad nahi kr ski or rone lagi



baldev:ro mat dadi ab me aa gaya hu na me ab sb theek kr dunga

Dadi:baldev k sar per hath rkh k "TU HAI MAHARAJA BALDEV SINGH GHATRASHTRA KA RAJA TERI HAR BOLI HOGI PATTHAR KI LAKEER"

ye sun kar Baldev ko ek alag he urza mili or usne dadi ka hath me le kr kaha "ha mai yani k Ghatrashtra ka Maharaja RAJA BALDEV SINGH OR MERI HAR BOLI AB SE HAI PATHHAR KI LAKEER"or ye keh kar use ek alag he urja ki anubhati hui.

Dadi:Beta mjh se ek wada kar

Baldev:han boliye dadi ji aagya

Dadi:Tere maa kabhi muh se nahi kahegi k use kya zarurat hai kya takleef hai usne bhut takleef sahi hai,me aurat hu uska dard smjh skti hu,me chahti hu tu uska har kadam pe sath de uske bina bole uske zarurat ko smjh kr pura kr de jitna usne dukh saha hai uska 10 guna sukh use mile wada kro

Baldev:me wada karta hu me puri koshish krunga unko har prakar se khush rakhne ki

Dadi:Koshish nahi...Beta mjhe tm pr pura yaqeen hai tmhare aakho me ye jalti jyoti isbat ki gawahi de rhi hai k tm sb zimmedari utha loge...Bass apne dill ki sunna or kisi ki nahi ...tbhi mere marne k bad meri aatma shant hogi...

Baldev:sochte hue)par dadi kya karu kaise kru?

Dadi:apne aakho me dekh,k tu kya kar skta hai

Or uske bhi aakho me dekh use kya chahiye

Baldev:theek hai dadi ,aashirwad banaye rkhe

Dadi:jeete raho

or baldev apne man me kai sara toofan le kr apne kamre me aakr sone ki koshish krne lagta hai



Idhar devrani ek jhini sa libas pehan kar ulta leti thi uske gori bahe aazad uske ghagre me uske mote gol tarboob jaise gand ek dam laraz rahe the jise dekh uski dasi kamla k muh me bhi pani aa gaya tha,kamla pichle 10 mint se devrani ka malish kr rhi thi ,jaitoon k tel se ,Devrani k dono traf apne pair rkh k malish kr rhi thi

Kamla he thi jo devrani ko maharani kehti thi

Kamla:maharani aap ka badan tap rha hai

Devrani:humm huu(siski lete hue)

Kamla:kahi aapko bukhar to nahi

or ghagra k niche uske pair or jangh tk tel laga k malish kr rhi thi

Devrani :nahi..hm kamla

thoda upar or kamla ka hath pakar kr apne chutar pr rkh deti hai

kamla:hay ram itna gol or itna bada dono hatho me to maharani ka kuch aata he nahi hai

Devrani:kya boli

kamla:kuch nahi,maharani agar me purush hoti to aapke haaal bura kr deti

Devrani:tu abhi mahila hai to tere se malish nahi hoti purush hoti to or kuch nahi kr pati or muskura deti ha

Kamla:ab palat jao

or devrani apne peeth pr chhota sa kapde ka tukda jis se doodh dhak rhe the kas leti hai or seedhi ho jati hai

Kamla:jitni chaudi peeth hai,utni moti doodh bhi hai iske or gand to mano bade do tarbooze ho(man me badbadti hai)

kamla pet se le kr kandhe tk malish krti hai or tel ki shish le kr sapat pet ki nabhi me tel udhel deti hai or

kamla:haye ram kitna tel nabhi me ruk gaya itni gehri nabhi hai to (man me chut ki khai kitni gehri hogi.or gand to mano surang se hogi)

Devrani jab se vyah k aai thi tb se apne aag bujhane k lye kamla ka sahara lete aai rahi hai or kamla se dosti si ho gai thi devrani ko.



Devrani ab kamla ka hath le kr apne bade bade gendo pe le jati hai or dant se apne hoth kat ti hai

kamla dono hath se ek doodh ko pakar kr marorti hai or us se reha na jata or uske doodh. ko choom leti hai

kamla:haye dayya itna bada doodh hai maharani apa do hath me nahi aarhe iske lye to alag se hath banwana hoga(or uske doodh ko dabate rehti hai)

Devrani:aisa nahi hai kamla dunya me mai akeli nahi hu jiska badan aisa hai

Kamla:par or aurato ko to uske hisab k naap ka mil jata hai pr aap jaisi Ghodi ko raja rajpal jaise derh futiya mil gaya

Devrani:Koi nahi,hota hai

kamla:kaash aapke hisab ka apko hath or wo mil jata to

devrani:sapna mt dekho

kamla:sapna nahi mene to Ghatrashtra me he kisi na kisi ka itna lamba chauda hath dekhi jisme apka aakar baith jayega or hath itna bada hai to wo bhi utna bada he hoga to aapke aage ka darya or piche ka samundar paar kr dega..pr mjhe yad nahi aarha kaun tha wo hath wala

(or devika k doodh ko masalti rehti hai)

Devrani ab apne charam pr thi or uttezna se aakh band kye sisak rhi thi)

kamla jo k bhullakar thi

Kamla:ary han yad aya wo hath to yuvraj baldev ka he tha

devrani ye soch kr utna bada hath uske bete ka he hai uske chut se pichkari chhuti or wo hafne lagi

Thode der bad use hosh aaya

Devrani:Anpadh hai tu kamla gawar gussa hote hue

kamla:ary wo us din yuvraj ghod sawari krne ja rhe the to achanak ghoda mimiyaya to yuvraj ne uske pure sar ko apne ek he hath se daboch lya itna bada hath or wo ghoda shant ho gaya

Devrani:Kamla tu gawar he rahegi tjhe nahi pata hai kab kya baat krte hai or waise wo ghoda nahi tha jise baldev ne chup kraya tha wo Ghodi thi(or uske chehre pe ek muskurahat aa jati hai)or devrani jhat se snan ghar me ghus jati hai.apne antar vastra nikal k ek dam nangi ho jati hai or aaine k samne chali jati jaise he use apne tarbooze jaise doodh pr jati hai patli kamar mote gol matke jaise chootar gora badan apne lambai or chaurai dekh kr ekak uske muh se nikalta hai "Ghodi kahi ki"or fir wo snan le kr ek laal rang ka sadi or kale rang ka blouse pehanti hai jo mewar se mangwaya tha or tayyar ho kr apne bete se milne nikal padti hai.
 
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Devrani saj sawar kr yuvraj baldev ko dhundne nikal jati pr yuvraj apne kaksha me nahi milta to wo mahal k bahar aati hai jaha mukhya duwar pr sainik pahredari kr rhe the unhe mahal k andar jane ki anumati nahi thi

Devrani:suno kya tmne Baldev ko dekha hai

Sainik:Ji rani wo abhyas kr rhe hai

or sainik use abhyas kr rhe jagah ko ishare se bata deta hai,jaise he devrani ki nazar baldev pr padti hai or wo kho jati hai





Uske chaure chhati or mansal pet majbut baanhe or kande ek hath me janzeer or ek hath me talwar lye apne abhyas me laga hua tha.Devrani jaise he uske hath pr bandhe janzeer ko dekhti hai or uske hath ka taqat ka andaza lagati hai or man me kehti hai:itna bada or itna mazbut (tbhi uske man me kamla ki baat yaad aati "yuvraj ka hath he apke ye bade doodh ko ek hath se daboch sakta hai or ap k matke jaise gand ki nase dheeli kr skta hai,Jab uska hath itna bada hai to wo itna bada hoga he jis se apke aage ka darya or piche ka samundar paar kr dega")



Devrani:(andar he andar sharm se gari jati hai or kahi na kahi man me sochti h K kamla sahi kehti hai k is aakar ko kuch isi prakar k sharir bhog kr k tript kr skta hai)

tabhi uske kaan me aawaz padti hai

Baldev:Maa..kya hua kya soch rahi ho





Devrani bass baldev ko muskura kar dekhti hai

Baldev:(man me) Kya muskurahat hai maa tumhari or ye sadi kitni fab rhi h tmpr or maa k ye ubhar aage k piche k sb oro se kitne alag hai ya kitne bade hai (ary ye me kya soch raha hu)

Baldev:maa itni door q ho paas aao

Devrani:Han kuch nahi hua beta bass soch rhi thi tu kitna bada ho gaya hai

Baldev:or tm bhi to kitne bade ho gaye ho

devrani:kya matlab tmhara,me budhi ho gai hu kya ?

Baldev:ary nahi mera matlab pehle patli thi ab moti ho gayi ho

Devrani:Kya kaha tune me moti ho(or udaas si ho jati h bache ki trah)

Baldev:nahi nahi tm to mere se bhi kam umar ki lagti ho or wo bhi kam az kam 5 saal chhoti

Devrani:mjhe na ullu na smjho

Baldev:Maa k kareeb aa kr uske hath pakar kr "Maa tm moti nahi pr pehle se sehatmand ho gai,islye shareer bhara bhara lagta hai"

Devrani uske man ki baat tatol rhi thi or smjh rhi thi ki baldev kis motape ki bat kr rha hai

Devrani:han nahi to budhi me sirf 35 varshiya hu

Baldev:or me 18

Devrani:par fir b tm kahi k raja lagte ho 30 varsh k ,kisi agyat vyakti se puch kr dekhna(tunak kr bolti hai)

Baldev turant paas rkhe apne vastra utha kr pehna leta hai

Baldev:ab batao me kaisa lag rha hu

Devrani:ab to pure 35 varshiya vivahit purush lag rhe ho "or khil khila kar hasne lagti hai.

baat krte krte dono maa beta udyan ki ore chal dete hai jaha har jagah khoobsurat phool khile hue the

Baldev:Maa kahi baith te hai

Devrani:yaha nahi wo door jheel hai waha pr patthar pr baithenge

dono chalte chalte udyan par kr us chhote se jheel k kinare niche pathar pr baith jate hai

Baldev:ek gulab ka phool jo usne chalte hue tod lya tha aage badh kr maa k baalo pe laga deta hai

Devrani:dhanyawad beta

Baldev:ye to mera farz hai

Devrani:ab tu mjh se kahi door mt jana

Baldev baithe baithe dahine hath se uske baye hath ko pakad leta hai

Baldev:kabhi nahi..maa,

Devrani:han me bhut akela mehsus ki beete 5 varsh,kaise guzari hu tjhe gyat nahi



Baldev:mjhe purna gyat hai maa,ab se tmhare chehre pr kabhi dukh nahi aane dunga,mjhe pata hai aapka balidan or ab aapki bari hai apne haq lene ki

Devrani:kya baat kr rhe ho beta

Baldev:Yahi k "Maharani ki upadhi aapko bhi milni chahiye thi"aapki bhi jay jay kar darbar me honi chahiye ,rajya k har hit ka nirnay me aapki sehmati leni chahiye.aap din rat kam krti ho pakwan se le kr vastra tk ka dhyan sbka deti ho,aap dasi nahi ho maa.

ye sachai sun kr devrani k aakho se aasu chalak jate hai or wo apna sar baldev k kandhe pr rkh rone lagti hai

Baldev:ro mt maa

Devrani:ye khushi k aasu hai beta pata hai hamari aayu me itna kam antar q hai q k mera vyah kam umar me kr di gai thi wo bhi bina mere nirnay k,wo to vivah k agle he saal tmhara janm ho gaya ,nahi to mene than lya Ghatrashtra chhor kr kahi door chale jane ka,fir tm ne ek nai aasha di mere jeevan me or me apna man maar kr rehne lagi is mahal me

Baldev:ye sun kr krodhit hote hue kehta hai or me us badi maa ko bhi nahi chhorunga jisne tmhe pita ji se door kya

Devrani:aisa kuch nahi karna,sb kuch prem se hasil kya ja skta or waise bhi me vivah k baad tere pita ji ko smjh gai k wo sirf shrushti ki baat manenge or mjhe unhone majburan vyah kr k rkh rahe hai jo k sirf ek uphar me mili vastu jaisi ho

ye keh kar wo rone lagi

Baldev apne haatho se aakho k aasu poch rha tha

Devrani:or raja ratan k sath tmhare pita bhi 6 mahine saal bhar yudh chhetra me rehte or jab mene gupt jan se pata kya to pata chala wo waha raja ratan k sath videshi mahilao k sath rangraliya mana rhe hote or sharab ki lat b pakar li unhone raja ratan k wajah se.

ye sun kr baldev kehta hai

Baldev:insb k kiye ki saza milegi maa

Devrani:dhairya rkho beta,josh me aakr hosh kabhi nahi khona

Baldev:ji maa jab tk aap mere sath hai bhala me kaise dhairya kho skta hu

tm he meri dhairya ho neend ho ,hriday ki sukoon ho

Devrani:bass bass ...baate mt bana

or baldev muskura deta use dekh devrani bhi muskura deti hai

Baldev:acha maa me apne pita jaisa nahi hu to kiske jaisa hu

Devrani:tmhe pita jaisa hona bhi nahi tha putra tm apne Nana or mama pr gaye ho

Baldev:kya sach me

Devrani:han wahi nain naksh kad kathi

baldev:to kya me unse mil skta hu

Devrani:tmhare nana ki to mrityu ho gai pr tere mama ka kuch ata pata nahi kai varsho se .unhe mene aakhiri bar vivah k pehle he dekha tha or gupt jan se pata chala k wo kahi gayab hai paras me to hai he nahi

Baldev:to me unki khoj krunga or unse milunga or tmhe bhi apne bhai se milwaunga

Devrani:han mere bhai devraj ki lambai bhi tmhari trah hai 6.2 or ek veer yodha hai,devraj bachpan me mjhe meri lambai ka mazak udata tha k "tu kitni chhoti hai bandar jaisi"

Baldev:par maa meri lambai 6.3 hai

Devrani:han tmse thodi kam

Baldev:pr tmhari lambai bhi to kam nahi 5.10 ka kad to mahilao k lye sbse ucha hai

Devrani:han beta pr paras me to ye lambai aam baat hai

Baldev:par maa tb ki baat kuch or thi ab yadi mama tmhe dekh le to "bandariya" to katai nahi keh skte tmhe dekh k

Devrani:han ye to hai us waqt me patli thi bhut..or ab..

baldev baat kat te hue haste hue kehta hai

Baldev: Par maa ab agar maa dekhe to tmhe GHodi zarur kahenge safed ghodi."ye keh kar baldev uth khada hota hai or devrani se door jane lagta hai or devrani usko maarne k lye daudati hai

devrani:ruk ja abhi batati hu" tu dekha hai apne ap ko tu hai ghoda

baldev piche ek jhadi se takra jata hai paas me he ek maidan me bhagte hue gir jata hai.jise dekh kar Devrani hasne lagti hai or turant pet k bal lete baldev k upar chadh jati hai or uske gardan pakar kr

Devrani:ab bol kya hu me ,tjhe pata nahi me paras ki rajkumari hu or tu chuha hai

or puri taqat se dabochne se devrani halka sans zor se lene lagti hai.

ye smjh kr k baldev k devrani ka daudne or bal prayog se saans tez hui wo apna hath apne maa k baanh ko pakar kr palata hai or ab devrani seedha leti thi or uske upar dono pair k ghutno ko devrani k dono traf tikaye apne hatho se baldev ne devrani k dono hatho ko pakra rha.is prakirya me palate samay devrani k blouse me fase dono bade vaksha kuch samay k lye piss jate or devrani kuch seconds k lye aakhe band hoti hai

devrani:hummm aah

Baldev:nahi chhorunga or fir apna mazbut seena jo k bade doodh ko daba dya tha uthata hai or devrani k aakho me dekh kr

baldev:kaun chuha hai ?

devrani k dono chuche sans k sath upar niche ho rhe the jise baldev bhi dekh rha tha

devrani:muskura kr tm chuha nahi sher ho

baldev:fir tmne bhi sahi takkat di tm bhi sherni ho ghodi nahi



fir baldev hath pakar kr devrani ko uthata hai or uske kaan me kehta hai

Baldev:Maa aap ghodi bhi ho or sherni bhi

Ye sun kr devrani bhi uttar dye nahi manti or kehti hai"beta zara jiraaf ka kaan niche lana"or baldev niche jhukta hai or apna kaan devrani k hotho k pas le jata hai

Devrani :tm bhi sirf sher nahi ho ghode bhi ho

Uttar sun k baldev has deta hai or dono haste haste mahal ki ore chal dete hai.
 
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Devrani or baldev dono ghum k mahal aa jate hai or devrani apne kaksha me chali jati hai or baldev snan krne chale jata hai.devrani aa kr sidhe apne palang pr ulta let jati hai or aaj use pehli bar mehsus hua tha k koi jism ne uske jism ko kisi mard k jism ne pehli bar chhua or sahi dhang se daba hai ,apne bete k kathor or balishth chati uske doodh pr aabhi bhi devrani ko dabti hui mehsoos ho rhi ,is aabhas bhar se he wo aakhe band kr li or sochne lagi

Devrani:man me) Ye kya hua hai mjhe ,me q apne putra k ore aakrshik ho rhi hu,uska chhuna or dabana alag ahasas q dila raha hai.wo hai bhi to aisa k kisi budhi ka bhi dill baldev jaise pe aa jaye,

haye ram me ye kya soch rhi hu mjhe apne ap per qabu karna hoga.



udhar snan ghar me Baldev pura nanga ho kr aaj ki ghatna yaad kr rha tha or uska hath uske 9 inch k hathya pr thi jise wo aage piche kr rha tha

Baldev:man me) Haaye maa kitna gada dar or mulayam or halke thos chuche hai tmhare ,meri chhati me to manav doodh chipak he gaya tha pura ,itne bade bade to gaay ka bhi nahi hota or tezi se apne 3 inch mote or 9 inch lambe lauda ko hilane laga

Baldev:humm aaaah or uske muh se ek aawaz nikli "devraaaani"or uske land ne jwala chhor dya ye pehli bar baldev ne muthv mara thaapni zindagi ki or usne lagbhag itna pani chhora k khud baldev dekh k aascharya chakit ho gaya kam se kam do muthi bhar k.

snan kr k apne vastra pehan kr apne kaksha k sofa pr baith kr sochne lagta. hai

baldev:man me) kya ye sahi hai

mere muh se Maa ka nam kaise nikal skta hai,mene devrani kaha ,me kitna besharam hu ,sita jaisi pavitra maa ko mene apavitra kr dya



Par mere uttezna ki bi wajah bhi wahi thi ,unse agar jheel k paas chher chhar nahi hoti to ye sb na hota ,or wo bhi to kitni aanandit lag rhi thi,mere chhune se ,kai varsho baad unke chehre pr itni khushi dekhi hai

To mjhe kya karna chahiye

ye paap hai pr is se maa ki khushi wapas aa skti hai unko prem ki aawasykta hai premi ki zarurat hai ,pr kya samaj or dharm is baat ko smjhega,or ghatrashtra k niyamo k virudh jane per bhut bura hoga

tbhi baldev k kan me dadi ki baat gunjti hai "dill ki sunna dimag ki nahi"han dill to ye kehta hai k maa ko sansar bhar ka prem de du or dimag kehta hai iska adhikar sirf pita ji ko hai or ye dunya is bat ko kabhi nahi manegi.pr pita ji ne he to itna dukh dya hai unko,me bachpan se dekh rha hu maa kaise raat bhar ro ro kr karwat badali hai apni har ichha ko apne man me dabaya hai usne,na kabhi vastra ka na kabhi sona ka na chandi ka,na mahrani ban ne ka mene to unko kai bar bina khaye sote hue dekha hai.

agar me dill ki sunta hu to mjhe ghatrashtra se ladai ladni hogi or dimag se sunta hu to maa ka na to dusra vivah kara skta hu or wo jeevan bhar dukhi he rhegi.

kiski khushi dekhu Ghatrashtra ki?

Ya apne maa devrani ki?

wo ye sochta hu apne kaksha se bahar nikal kr niche seedhio se utarta hai

to dekhta hai







uski maa devrani ek laal rang ki sadi pehni thi or hare rang k blouse me uske bade chuche kase hue saf dikh rhe the ,uske pet per ek chain tha ,piche gol moti gand dekh baldev ka jee lalcha gaya or uska dill bol utha

Baldev:Kya maal hai

devrani apne bete duwara aise nihare jane se sharma aa jati hai or andar he andar khush hoti hai

Devrani: man me) Aaj koi pehli baar mjhe kisi ne aisa itne pyar se dekha hai or uska dill zoro se dhadkne lagta hai use ek ajeeb se khushi hoti hai

baldev or devrani ek dusre k aakho me khoye hue the k tbhi waha Kamla aa jati hai or dono ko is trah ghurte dekh leti hai

or kamla ko smjhte der nahi lagta k ye ma beta wala prem nahi koi or prem hai

kamla:Halka sa khasi krte hue Maharani?

Dono ka dhyan bhang hota hai or



devrani:ha.. ha bolo Kamla

baldev apna sar niche kr bahar chala jata hai

Kamla:Maharani aap theek to hai na

Devrani:ha q

Kamla:baat chupate hue kehti hai " me to malish krne aai hu apki" "pr aaj to aap bina malish k khil rhi ho"



devrani:kuch bhi

Kamla:sachi,mjhe to lagta hai kisi ne aaj apko masal dya ho

(devrani ko aaj subah ki bat yad aati hai jab Baldev ne usko apne niche le kr masal dya tha or uske chut m chiti rengne lagti hai)

Devrani:tumhara matlab

Kamla:yahi k kisi or dasi se malish to nahi kra lya

Devrani:tmhe to pata hai me tmhare siwa kisi or malish nahi krwati

18 varsh se

Kamla:to islye kehti hu na koi dhund lo jo apka dhang se malish kr de



ye baat cheet krte dono kamla or devrani apne kaksha me aa jate hai



Devrani :mazak nahi

Kamla:18 varsho me mene apki malish ki pr itna khush kabhi nahi dekho jitni aaj ho ap

devrani ko ye baat teer ki trah chubhta hai dil me

devrani:man me)ye to sb papi dill ka nasha hai jisne aakho se baldev ne pila dya hai )



devrani:andar se muskurate hue ". kuch bhi kehti ho kamla"

Kamla:acha to ap let jaiye malish kr du

Devrani:nahi abhi malish nahi tm bass sirf sar me tel rkh do

or kamla ek kursi lati hai or jispe devrani baithti hai or kamla aayurvedik ausadhi or tel la kr uske sar k bal ko jo bandha tha khol deti hai or uske baal lambe kaale jo kamar tk the me tel lagan lagti hai



kamla:aap ki sundarta ab bhi aisi h k koi bhi apko apni rani banana chahega

Devrani:Me itni bhi jawan nahi

Kamla:ame to kehti ap koshish kro koi na koi to mil jayega jo aapko jo pyar kabhi nahi mila wo de or laila majnu jaisa

Devrani:hmm

Kamla:or apke ye tarase hue badan ki aithan ko b dard de kar iska dard kam kre or apko ek nayi urza de ,vishwas kijiye maharani aisa ho gya to ap jaise badan wali ka kabhi sar bhi na dukhe or na he mailish ki avasykta hoo

devrani ye sun kr sharm se aakhe jhuka leti hai

devrani:na baba mjhe dar lagta hai or waise bhi aisa raja milega kaha jo meri khumari nikal de or me kaha dhundu ,mujhe marna nahi kamla ki bachi

Kamla:kahi jane ki aavshykta nahi Yahi ghatrashtra me khojo

Devrani:yaha koi mere hisab ka nahi

Kamla:mene bhut se mard dekhe hai

Devrani:me paras ki rani hu kamla ye mat. bhul me kisi aire gaire ko dekhti bhi nahi

Kamla:ek baat kahu bura nahi manoge vachan do

Devrani:hum vachan dete hai

Kamla:aap k hisab ka or aap ki khumari nikalne wala damm to bass yuvraj Baldev singh rkhta hai,use he ye mauqa do

ye sunte he devrani k chut me cheeti rengi or use ahsas abhi thode der pehle kaise baldev dekh rha tha or kaise use masla tha maidan me

Devrani:Zor se chillate hue "kamlaaaa tmhari itni himmat agar hum vachan na dye hote to tmhara ye paap bhare shabd ki saza tmhari jaan hoti "

devrani sochti hai agar wo aisa na kahi to kamla uske bare me kya sochegi k or kahi or bat pahucha di is kamla ne to

Kamla:muaaf kr do maharani

devrani:theek hai tm meri saheli ho kamla pr kam se kam socho to kya kehte ho or ek muskan deti hai kamla ko.

kamla smajh rhi thi devrani k chut me kuch or muh me kuch hai or uske dill me pyar ki ghanti baldev ne abhi baja kr gaya tha

Kamla:acha to koi acha rajkumar dhundo apke hisab ka or zor se dono has deti hai

(kamla apne man me"me apka bukhar nahi nikalwaya to mera nam kamla nahi)



Devrani: thoda naram mijazi dikhate hue " acha dekho"

tbhi kamla ka kam khtm hota hai or wo vida le kr chali jati hai
 

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