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"Manhoos se mahan tak ~ The Tales of Demon King" |
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Chapter ~ 1 : Punarjanm |
Humari iss kahani ke mukhya kirdaar Virat ko hum abhi nahin dekh sakte kyuki, usane khud ko shaahee pustakaalay ke gupt kamare mein band kar liya hai. Aur iss ka karan yah hain ki vah iss samye ek varjit anushthaan karane ja raha hain.
Jaha ek aur vah ye varjit anushthaan kar raha tha wahi dusri aur shaahe paharedaaron kee krodhit cheekhen, jo vo apanee bhaaree kulhaadiyon se daravaaje par thapathapa ne ke saath nikaal rahe the, usase vichalit na hote hue vo iss anushthaan mein laga huva tha, kyuki yah anushthaan Virat ki aakhiree ummeed tha.
Usake paas iss anushthaan ko lekar paryaapt jaankari nahin thi aur vah nishchit nahin tha ki yah kaam karega ya nahin, lekin usake paas jyaada samay nahin bacha tha. Yah abhee nahin to kabhee nahin waali isthiti hai mai tha! Kyuki usaka jeevanakaal pahale hee samaapt ho chuka tha, aur vah vaise bhee kal subah ke sooraj ko dekhane ke lie jeevit nahin rahega. Shaahe paharedaar lohe ke darwaaje ke bahar uske praan lene ko aatur the. Uske jeevan aur maran ko iss samaye vo lohe ka darwaja thaame huve tha. Iss wajah se ussne mushkil se apane kaanpate haathon ka upayog kaalee kitaab ko pakadane ke lie kiya tha aur use apane khoon kee ek boond se uss kitaab ko sakriy kiya par tabhi lohe ke daravaaje khule gaye aur ussi samye uss kaalee kitaab se ek saphed roshani nikali aur tabhi... siradard ne use jaga diya. "main kahaan hoon?" Virat ne socha.
Apane chaaron or dekhate hue, usane dekha ki vah ek uchch, sajee huee chhat aur alankrt diwaaro ke saath ek bhavy kamare ke beech mein ek bade bistar par leta hua tha. Vah saphal ho gaya tha. Jeevan bhar uske bhagya ne usse chhala tha par aakhir kaar uske bhagya ne usse dhoka nahin diya. Wah samye mein wapas loute aaya tha. Yah ek bada jua tha, lekin usane isse juwe ko jeet liya. Agar wo ashfal rahta toh vo humesha humesha ke liye kaal ke paano mein kahi kho jata magar vo safal raha aur vah aadhunik yug mein 200 saal pahale lauta tha, us samay tak jab ussne kishor ayasta ko pura kar 18 varsh ki baalik aayu praapth ki thi .
Vah ab apane puraane kamare mein hai. Jab vah jawaan tha tab vah yahaan rahata tha. Yah uske pita kee havelee hai, jo Von Oberoi vanshi parivaar ke sadhsiya mein se ek hain, jo puraane mahaadveep ko niyantrit karane vaale paanch chhipe hue parivaaron mein se ek hain. Usaka naam Virat Von Oberoi hai, aur vo parivaar ke uttaraadhikaariyon mein se ek hai.
Iss jagah uska bachapan beeta tha magar vo khushahaal nahin beeta tha. Yah sach tha ki vah parivaar ke vaidh uttaraadhikaariyon mein se ek tha, lekin usaka shareer baakiyo ki tulna mein kaafi kamajor tha. Aur garibi mein aata gila karne ke baat yah ki vah parivaar kee gupt kala mein mahaarat haasil karane mein bhi viphal raha, jisaka abhyaas karana aur ussmein saphalata paana har vaidh uttaraadhikaariyon ke liye aavashyakata thee. Uskee iss asaphalata ne uska kadh apane baaki saathiyon kee tulana mein kaafi kam kar diya tha. Usake baad, vah Aasuric Dragon samaaroh mein bhi bamushkil yogy saabit huva tha. Yah ek aisa anushthaan tha jisase har sachche Von Oberoi ko gujarana padata hai aur isske aadhar par hi unhe Von Oberoi parivaar mein vastakvik roop se jagah miltee hain.
Aur iss anushthaan mein Virat ka pradarshan behadh kharab tha isalie usse parivaar mein ek chhotee see bhoomika saumpee gaee jahaan ve kuchh varshon tak jeevan ka aanand le saka tha, lekin usaka jeevan tab badal gaya jab usake shatruon ne usee ek jaal mein phansa liya, aur use ek dost ko bachaane ke lie parivaar ke niyam ko todana pada, lekin is tarah ke parivaar mein, niyam nahin tode ja sakate, aur agar koe niyam todeta hain toh unhen baahar nikaal diya gata hain aur vahi huva bhi virat ko parivaar se baahar kar diya gaya aur usse apne jeevan ke agale 20 saal kasht aur gareebee mein jeene pade.
Ussne apni mehnate se ek mukam banaya aur wapas ek achcha jeevan jeene laga magar uska chain sukh iss duniya ko raas nahin aaya jab koe aur shaksh usske piche nahin tha tab duniya ne yah daaitva apne haath liya aur phire uss dinn iss duniya ke niyam badal gaye, aur ek maha pralaye ne puri duniya ko badal diya tha. Virat ki puri duniya badal gaye the par ye baat usske liye aapda mein avsar bnnkar aaiye kyuki uss iss pralay ka aanuman tha kyuki iske baare mein usse apne parivaar mein jaan ne ko mila tha, iss naye duniya mein ussne apane parivaar ke mahaan rakt rekha ko jagaane mein saphalata praapt ki thi.
Par usske bhagya ki kaali rekha usski amar rakt rekha se kahi jayada prabal thi , Jab vah iss aash mein apne parivaar lauta ki jab wah apne parivaar ko batayega ki ussne parivaar ke mahaan rakt rekha ko jaga liya hain tab vah khud ko saabit kar dega aur jo isthan uska parivaar mein tha vah usse wapas milejaega.
Par ye nahin ho saka kyuki usske aane mein bahut der ho chukee thee. Kyuki ab uska vah Von Oberoi parivaar iss duniya mein nahin raha. Pralaye ki raat ko usske rakth rekha ke saath-saath uske bhagya rekha ne bhi apna parichya diya aur usske pure parivaar ka sarvanash kar diya. Jab ussne malum kiya toh usse pata chala ki usske parivaar ne kisee ubharate hue naayak ko naaraaj kar diya tha aur uss naayak ne ek raat mein uske puree parivaar ka saphaaya kar diya tha.
Jab vah waha pahucha tha tab ussne dekha ki jahaan kabhee usakee bhavaya havelee hoti thi ab vaha ek ujaad khandahar tha. Uske parivaar mein koee nahin bacha tha, aur usake sabhee priyajan mar gae. Iss sabse kahi jayada taklif usse iss baat ki thi ki vah apne priyajano ki hatiya ke baare mein kuchh nahin kar sakata tha, kyuki jese naayak unki hatiya ki thi vah bahut jayada shaktishaalee tha.
Tab Virat ne pratisodh ka vichar tyaag diya aur agle kuchh varshon ke lie ek ghumakade ke roop mein ghumta raha aur, phir wahi kisi ek jagah mein bas gaya.
Waha usse ek ladki se pyaar ho gaya aur ussne uss ladki se shaadi karli, aur uske do bacche huwe. Yah parivaar chota tha magar ab usske paas kam se kam koe toh tha jese vah apna kah sakta tha lekin ateet ne hamesha usaka picha kiya. Us samaj ke Nayak ne krodh mein aakar Von Oberoi parivaar ka saphaaya kar diya tha par usse baad mein Von Oberoi parivaar ke, Amar Raktarekha ke baare mein pata chala jeske baare mein jaankar vah ussko apane lie pana chaahata tha. Lekin usane pahale hee parivaar mein sabhee ko maut ke ghaat utaar diya tha . Tab ussne yah pata karna chaha ki kya koe Von Oberoi abhi bhi jeevit hain ya nahin tab usse Virat ke baare mein pata chala tha. Aur vah tab se virat ka shikaar karne ke liye jute gaya tha, aur usane abhee-abhee apana shikaar ko dhundhe liya tha.
Usane Virat ko uske bachchon ke saath pakad liya aur virat ki patnee ko wahi ussi jagah tadpa kar maar daala, kyuki virat ki patnee ko ussne bekaar samajha tha kyuki vah Von Oberoi parivaar se rakt sambhandit nahin thi. Phir usse samaj ke kathita naayak ne virat aur uske bachcon ka sara rakt badi kroorata se ek kalaakrti ka upayog karake nikaala aur unhen marane ke lie chhod diya.
Iss karan uske bachcon ne wahi mauke par dum tode diya tha par Virat apne parivaar ki amar rakt rekha kee badaulat bach gaya.
Vah iss samye uss samaj ke kathite nayak se pratisodh lena chahta tha lekin vah aisa kar nahin sakta tha kyuki vah buree tarah se aahat tha, aur vah jaanata tha ki vah antatah mar jaega kyonki vah mahasoos kar sakata tha ki usake vansh dvaara pradaan kee gaee amarata dhire dhire lupt hotee ja rahee thee.
Vah apane paitrik ghar laut aaya aur jale hue khandaharon mein khudaee karane laga. Virat ne vahaan kaee rahasyon ko ujaagar kiya aur kuchh dashakon tak apane jeevan ka vistaar karane mein vah saphal bhi raha. Lekin aphasos ki unake vansh ki amar rakth rekha ko bahaal karane ka koee upaay usse waha nahin mela tha. Virat ka parivaar apni amar rakth rekha ke adbhut upayogon kee khoj kar hi raha tha kee tabhee unaka sarvanaash ho gaya tha. Virat ne agala dashak anusandhaan aur adhyayan mein bitaaya, aur phir ek dinn usse shuddh sanyog se, kaalee kitaab ke baare mein pata chala. Logon ko pata tha ki yah keematee tha kyonki ye kitaab SSS isthar kee thi, lekin phire bhi yah kaaphee bekaar thi, kyuki iss kaalee kitaab kee shakti samay yaatra thi. Lekin isakee atyadhik sakriyata laagat ke baavajood, yadi aap isaka upayog karate hain to aap keval ek second ke lie samay par vaapas ja sakate hain, aur isse istemaal karne wala vayakti sirf ek vichar vakte mein piche pahucha sakta hain, kyuki iss kitaab ki shakti se tum vakte mein mann mein picche ja sakate ho, shareer mein nahin.
Doosaron ke lie, yah keval ek sangrah aur shodh mad ke roop mein kaam kar sakata tha. Lekin virat ke liye yah ek adbhut khajaana tha. Kyuki vakte mein picche jakar vah unn sabhi anhoniyo ko rok sakta tha, usske liye yah ek aakhir ummeed thee.
Pustak ke paas jaane ke lie, virat ko royal library mein ek librarian kee naukaree karni padee, jahaan isse kaalee kitaab ko rakha gaya tha, aur kaee varshon kee kadee mehanat ke baad, virat isaka adhyayan karane aur phir isse sakriy karane ke lie isake kaaphee kareeb pahunch paya tha.
Ab vah vaapas samaye mein laute aaya hai. Virat jo kuch pal pahle maute ki dhahrije par tha ab usske saamne wapas ek poorn jeevan jeene ke liye baahe phelaiye huve hain. Virat ne yah tay kiya bain ki vah apane gyaan ka upayog ek aisee shakti banaane ke lie karega jisaka koee doosara mukaabala nahin kar sakata, kyuki kewale tabhi vo apne priyajano ko iss nishture duniya mein mahfuse rakh sakta hain, aur jeene logo ne pahale usse chot pahunchahiye hain aur usske jeevan ko narak banaya hain unhen ab ek bhaaree keemat chukaanee padegee.
Virat ne socha sabase pahale, usse apne parivaar mein cheejon ko theek karana hoga aur usee Samay ki Pralay ke liye khude ko waqt se pahle taiyaar karana honga. Yah dono hi kaam kaafi samye lene waale the kyuki pralay ke liye taiyaaree karana kabhee bhee jaldee nahin ho sakta hain.
Apni soch se bahar aapkar Virat ne kaha "pahale cheejen pahale,".
Aur yah kah kar usane takiye ke neeche apana phone khoja. Usska phone platinum se bana tha aur uske peechhe chamakadaar 24K sone ka frame laga huva tha jeske andar hiro ki ek design bnni hue thi. Virat ko yaad hain ki ussne apne high school ke pahale saal mein iss phone ka istemaal kiya tha. Ussne uss phone ka power button dabaya aur samay dekha.
Aaj taarik 21 June thi aur abhi subah ke 5:16 baje the. Garmee kee chhuttee thee, aur usse september mein college shuroo karana hoga. Lekin virat ke liye vah mahatvapoorn baat nahin thee, kyuki abhi vaastav mein kya maayane rakhata hai vah Asuraic Dragon samaaroh hain, jo aaj raat ko hoga. Parivaar ke sabhee shuddh rakt sadasy vayask hone tak apane maata-pita kee dekharekh mein rahtee hain jahaan unhen paarivaarik saahity aur martial art kee shiksha dee jaetee hain. Lekin samaaroh ke baad, unhen unake pareeksha parinaamon ke aadhaar par sansaadhan pradaan kie jaenge aur unase baaharee duniya mein paarivaarik kaary karane kee apeksha kee jaegee. Saubhaagy se vah sahee samay par laut aaya tha , agar vah sirph ek din kee deree karata, to cheejen thodee aur muskeel hotee.
Virat apne bistar se khada huva , ussne apanee shirt utaaree aur apane beemaar shareer ka nireekshan kiya. Jaisa ki use yaad tha, usaka kad chhota tha, usakee tvacha barph jaisee goree thee, aur sundar chehara tha, vah usee apanee maa se viraasat mein mila tha. Virat ko reshamee baal apne pita se viraasat mein mile jo kee bainganee-bhoore rang ke gahare rang ke hain. Yah bainganee baal unake parivaar kee ek anoothee visheshata hai, is rang kee vajah ko lekar kaee tarah kee atakalen aur aphavaahen theen, lekin vartmaan mein unhen isske baare mein kuch isshpasthe pata nahin tha. Aur jab bhavishya mein unhen isake baare mein pata chala, tab bahut der ho chukee thee, kyuki yah unake parivaar kee anokhee alaukik raktarekha se sambhandhit hain.
Virat ne socha ki usse yathaa sheeghr hee apne parivaar ki rakta rekha ko jagaana hain. Shaayad aaj raat ke Asuraic Dragon samaaroh mein usse mauka mil jae.
Yah sochte huwe ussne pardon ke paar, apane bistar ke paas kee vishaal khidakee se, havelee ke aas-paas ke vishaal jungle ko dekha jaha ussne apane chaachaon kee chhaton aur rishtedaaron kee haveleeyo kee aspasht jhalak bhi dekhai dee.
Vah door se samudr kee laharon kee aavaaj ko sunne sakata tha. Vah iss samye ek dveep par tha. Aur yah poora dveep usske parivaar ke mule-aadhaar ka hissa tha, jisamen keval shuddh rakt vanshaj aur unake sevak hee rah sakate hain.
Theek 6:00 baje, daravaaje par halkee dastak huee aur ek khoobasoorat mahila ne virat ke kamre mein pravesh kiya. Usaka naam Lisa tha aur vah havelee mein naukaraaniyon mein se ek thee. Lisa ko dekh kar virat usske baare mein yaad karata hai. Aur usse yaad aata hain ki Lisa usske pita kee bharosemand naukaron mein se ek hain ya phire shaayad usase thodee adhik
. "Yuvraj, main yahaan aapako jagaane ke lie aaiye hoon. Maharaj ne nirdesh diya hai ki aap pahale bhojan kaksh mein 06:30 baje naashte ke lie taiyaar rahen."
Virat ne sir hilaaya. "main samajh gaya. main samay par vahaan pahunch jaoonga."
Isske baad naukaraanee ne Virat ko pranaam kiya, phir peechhe hat gaee aur baahar jaate samay daravaaja band kar diya.
Phire virat ne jaldee se snaan kiya aur phir apane parivaar ke baare mein saaree jaanakaaree yaad karate hue apane kapade badale.
Anaginat rakhailon aur premiyon ke alaava uske pita kee teen aadhikaarik patniyaan theen.Uski maa bhi uske pita kee ek aadhikaarik patnee the aur unka isthaan doosara tha aur , virat ke alawa uske pitah ko uski maa se 3 santaan aur prapte hue, iss karan virat ke ek bhaee aur do bahane aur hain. Un sabhee ke bainganee-bhoore baal aur shuddh rakt rekha hai.
317 von Oberoi parivaar niyam nirdeshit karata hain ki "Keval ve mahilaen jo vanshaagat uttaraadhikaariyon ko janm detee hain, aadhikarik patniyaan banane ke yogy hain."
Jab usake pita usakee maa se mile, to vah bas ek chhotee see modal thee jo uske pita ke saath sadharan sa jeevan jeena chaahatee thee. Lekin jab usane Virat ki sabase badee bahan ko janm diya, to usse jaldee hee ek aadhikaarik patnee ke roop mein pratishthit kar diya gaya.
Jin bachchon ke paas amar rakt rekha nahin hoti, unhen naajaayaj maana jaata hai. Agar ve baache pratibhaashaalee hain, to unhen parivaar kee seva karane ka mauka diya jata hain lekin yadi yah pratibhaashaalee nahin hain , to unhen bas kuchh paise aur shiksha dee jaegee, phir unhen apana jeevan jeene ke lie chhod diya jaega.
Kaee saphal udyamee aur vyavasaay ke maalik Von Oberoi parivaar ke naajaayaj bachche hain.
Jungle ke oopar kshitij par ugate sooraj par khidakee se baahar dekh te huve Virat ne kaha "yah samay hai ek naye Surya udhye ka."
Tabhi daravaaje par dastak dete huee, ek khoobasoorat yuva naukaraanee ne kadam rakha, usane ghabaraahat se virat ki or dekha. "Yuvraj, kya aapako kisee madad kee zaroorat hai? maalakin ne mujhe aapako neeche le jaane ke lie kaha hain".
"Nahin, main taiyaar hoon. chalo." Yah kah kar vah naukaraanee ke peechhe chalte hue, kamare se baahar nikal gaya aur dinning room mein ki taraf chal diya.
Aaj ke liye ittna hi
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Sabhi ko sabse pehle Hello!
Mera naam
Forum hi kyu, mene iss se pahle kabhi koe kahani nahin likhi, toh ummed karta hun , aap sab ka kam se kam mujhe ittna saath milega jes se mujhe kahani likhne ke iss faisle par pachtawa na ho, mere
khayal se aap mera ishara samjhe gae honge.
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Issi liye mein humesha kahta hun
samjhdaar logo se baat karna bhute asaan hota hai.
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Chaliye ab baat karte hain iss kahani ke baare mein
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Kahani ka title padh kar aapko ek bhute famous kahani yaad aa rahi hogi. Sach mein wo kahani kaafi acchi hain bus writer ne aakhir mein hum sabhi ka mann thode diya.
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Toh ussi kahani ka title mene iss story ko diya hain.
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Ab aapke mann mein yah swale agar uttha ho ki kya mein wo kahani wapas likhne ki kosis kar raha hun ?
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Toh iss ka answer hain , NAHI
Kyuki wo ek masterpiece hain
aur mein uss masterpiece ko likhne waale writer ki barabari karne ki soch bhi nahin sakta.
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Par unki kahani ka title mujhe bhute pasand hain , toh khude ko uss se jhode rakhne ke liye mene yah title rakha hain.
Baate toh khub ho gaye hain toh chaliye finally, aapke saamne prastut hu apni kahani lekar,
"Manhoos se mahan tak ~ The Tales of
Demon King"
Yah kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai, aisi kahani aapne mainstreme novels mein nahi padhi hogi.
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Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels ya manag comics padhi hai unhe iss kahani ka idea ho jaaega. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss kahani ko yaha shuru kiya jaae.
Ab kuch mukhya points hain jen par aapko dhyaan dene ki jarurate hain -
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Story ka prefix wese toh fantasy hona chahige tha but kahani mein Incest part bhi hain toh Incest hi rakh diya.
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Kahani ka time era ancient time ka hoga. Mtlab yah ki aadhunik samaj se koso durr around 12vi ya 13vi sataapdi ke irdh girdh hogi.
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Story harem par based hai, yaani toh aap sabh samjhete honge.
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~Disclaimer~
Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.
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Main koi professional writer nahin hun aur saath mein yah meri pehli story hai. Main kaafi saalo se manga comics read kar raha hun aur pichle 2 saal se adult forum ka reader hun aur ab har member ki tarah reader se writer bnn ne ki apni ichiya ko pura karne ki ek choti se kosis kar raha hun.
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Waise to main bhi ek student hi hun. Aur sath me ek chhota sa bussiness bhi hai. Iss karan kafi busy life hai par phir bhi main, Is story par frequently update dene ki koshish karunga.
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Doston comment zaroor karna or batana ki kya - kya kamiya hain story me main us kami ko poora karunga.
Aur ummed karunga ki mujhe kam se kam aap sabka ittna sahyog milega jes se mujhe iss faisle ka pachtava na ho.
Ek baat aur iss story me main baaki writers ki tarhan paregraph ke aage (jhooth) aisa nahin likhunga,aapko khud hi apna common sense use karke pata karna hoga ki, hero kahan jhooth bol raha hai kahan sach. Kyuki humari kahani ko hero aur koe nahin balki Demon king hain.
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