Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

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Abb yaha se aage sochane par ye lag raha hai ki sanjay ke planning ke anusar kuchh log amit ko galat maan baithenge aur jo usase sachha pyar karata hoga vah kya karega ye to Raja Bhai ko pata hai lekin itana pata chal hi gaya hai ki aage aab kahani me ek naya mod aane wala hai jo amit ke liye bahut bada nuksan deh sabit hoga...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Update bahut hi mast hai........................................................

Aur Raja Bhai aap se kahana chaunga ki aise kisi ke dvara puchhe gaye sawalo ko ignore karana achhi baat nahi hai ham jante hai ki kahani me kuchh reply aapake dil ko thes pahuchati hai par mai yahi kahan chahunga ki sare to nahi lekin jo sawal aapaki kahani se judi ho aur jaha readers ko kahani samjh me nahi aayi ho kam se kam usaka to niwaran to kar hi sakte hai..ki ye kaise hua .............aap to sidha hi ignor maar rahe hai mai ye nahi kahata ki mere dvara puchhe gaye sawal sahi hai agar aapko hamare davara sawal puchana sahi nahi lagata hai to aap bata dijiye .ki koi bhi sawal na puchhe aaye aur padhe like aur reply me nice behatreen etc likh ke chale jaye........................................


Agar aapko bura laga ho to sorry..................................................


Aapki kahani bahut hi behatreen hai...........
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Kuch hadd tak to idea ho hi gaya tha but isme apki bhi aik ghalti hai wo ye k apne jb wo forum leave kiya to us se pehly apni story pr comment kiya k ap ye close kr rahy ho b bahot se readers jo is sary scene k bary nai janty unhn ne to yehi samjha k ap kahin busy ho kr close kr rahy ho bad main open kr do gy
Are bhai wo jhantu log jo hain moderators , wo mere comment delete kiye bahut sare . Upar se jo last comment hai wo bhi edit kiya hai unhone meri id band karne k bad. Khud ko malik samajhte hain na wo sabke . Isi liye udhar se sab writer ja rahe ek ek kar k
 
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Sanjay ek main mukhya kiradar me hai jo amit apane dil me pyar daba ke rakha hai aur sanskar ki chadar odh rakha hai nidhi aur radha ke liye use sanjay aur nidhi ka ye kadam us chadar ko hatane ka kaam krenge jisase amit in dono ka pyar kubul karega ....................................

Yaha sanjay aur nidhi davara uthaye gaye ye kadam brokar ka kaam kar rahe hai jisase amit abhi anjan hai lekin jab vapas aayega to usake dil par bahut bada jhataka lagane wala hai ek to sanjay dene wala hai aur ek nidhi ki sadi ka sunakar ...........................

Kahani bahut hi romanchak mod par ja rahi hai........................................... Yaha se.......
Bilkul ,
Par shantanu nam ka prani . Nidhi ko grehen laga sakta hai
 
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Bhai aisa hai k rajani rita k sath sambandh unki khushibknkiye tha wo bhi gupt . Karuna naina k sath bhi unki khushi k liye par shadi ka koi panga nahi. Deepika kamini aur Gauri k sath bhi unki suni zindagi ko hara karne k liye . Bat jab nidhi aur Radha ki aati hai to yahan prem hai aur Umar bhar ka sath nibhane ki jimmedari. Nidhi rishte me behan hai aur use hamesha behan k roop me hi dekha hai . Is liye use dusre kisi rishte me accept karna mushkil lag raha hai aur wo bhi shadi k . Ye asan kahan hai. Kitne rishte isse khafa honge kya ye kam hai amit ko darane k liye. Aur Radha k sath bhi kuch aisa hi hai. Samajh kar bhi anjan ban raha hai sirf is liye k di ya jo shuru se nafrat karti aayi hai kahin fir se nafrat na karne lag jaye . Divya k man ki to amit abhi samajh nahi raha
Dhanyawad bro mera doubt clear ho gaya hai...............................................

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Ignore ni karta bhai bas kai bar time nahi milta hai . Comment sabke dekhta hun main. U kai bar jawab khani me hi dena acha lagta hai
Kabhi kabhi hame kahani samjh me nahi aata hai ki ye sab kaise hua aur kyo huaa ....to vahi batoo ko puchh lete hai bro baki kahani padhane se hi clear ho hi jata hai lekin kuchh point jo hote hai unhe clear karane ke liye ham badhu ho jate hai.................................................................


Achha laga jo aapane reply karake mere abhi tak ke doubt ko clear kiya isake liye dil se dhanyawad...................................
 
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Bilkul ,
Par shantanu nam ka prani . Nidhi ko grehen laga sakta hai
Ha vah to hoga hi kyoki apane pair par kulhadi marana ise hi to kahate hai aur yaha kulhadi to Santanu hai jo nidhi anjane me hi uspar viswas kar baithi hai aur apane ma baap se milwa diya hai aur amit ke bare me to keval dipika mami hi janti hai isliye to maine kaha ki yaha se kahani me ek naya mod aane wala hai jisame sdyantr, dukh, aur tadap tatha sath me action bhi hone wala hai jo is kahani ko aur bhi adhik shirsh par le jane ke kary karega.........................

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