Incest Meri Piyaasi Maa ( Kahan kahan se guzar gai) ~short story~

If dreams come true, then nightmare are dreams too
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Dear mene aap ki mayaar ke mutabiq nahi likh paya shayad

Thanks for support
Abhi main ek reader ki tarah bolne ja rhaa hun, wo bhi bina bad words ke.

To koi bhi ise mod ka order ya aisa kuch mat samajhna, main bhi reader hun aur apne vichar de sakta hun.

123sk

Bhai aap bahut hi achha likh rahe aur age bhi likhte rahenge.

Darasal baat aise hai ki main maa ko lekar kuch jyada hi obsessed hun.

Main apni maa se sex se jyada pyaar karna chahta hun.

Papa ke duniya se chale jane ke baad, mera aur meri maa ka koi apna nhi hai.

Uske baad se hi main maa ko lekar kuch jyada hi possesiveness rakhne laga.

Maa ko second marriage ke liye bhi force kiya gaya tha, lekin jab uss admi ne bola ki ab se tum mere bete banne wale ho to pata nhi kyun mujhe itna gussa aaya ki maine use wahi pit diya. Air shaadi tut gayi.

Meri duniya puri maa me basi hai, ek din jarur unhe main apni feelings bata dunga.

Unke marne se pehle ya mere marne se pehle.

Shayad maa bhi mujhe lekar bahut possesive hai lekin shayad wo maa bete wala pyaar ho aur kuch nhi.

Isiliye story ki starting huyi to mujhe laga apni story se match kar rahi hai, lekin ye wale update me dil tut gaya.

Aapki story achhi hai, lekin main mom ko kisi ke saath nhi dekh sakta. Isiliye mujhe wo achha nhi laga. Jab maa ne uska wo pakda. :128fs4765852: sach me bahut bura laga.

Story ko maa bete ke bich hi rehne dete to achha hota, aur mera pure incest ka matlab ye hai ki story me villian 100 aaye lekin heroine hero ki hi ho.

Baaki aap achha likh rahe, aur asha hai ki aap apne bahut saare fans yaha banaoge.

Request hai ise order mat samajhna, wo scene ko hata dete to achha hota. Uske jagah koi emotional scene daal dete.

Main janta hun bahut log bolenge ki sab ki baat se story likhne lage to story bakwaas ho jayegi.

Par main ek request kar raha hun, aapse aur kuch nhi.
Best of luck,
My dear--- 123sk:(7):
From-- Lelouchyagami.

May your story achieve the highest popularity.

Thanks
 
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Abhi main ek reader ki tarah bolne ja rhaa hun, wo bhi bina bad words ke.

To koi bhi ise mod ka order ya aisa kuch mat samajhna, main bhi reader hun aur apne vichar de sakta hun.

123sk

Bhai aap bahut hi achha likh rahe aur age bhi likhte rahenge.

Darasal baat aise hai ki main maa ko lekar kuch jyada hi obsessed hun.

Main apni maa se sex se jyada pyaar karna chahta hun.

Papa ke duniya se chale jane ke baad, mera aur meri maa ka koi apna nhi hai.

Uske baad se hi main maa ko lekar kuch jyada hi possesiveness rakhne laga.

Maa ko second marriage ke liye bhi force kiya gaya tha, lekin jab uss admi ne bola ki ab se tum mere bete banne wale ho to pata nhi kyun mujhe itna gussa aaya ki maine use wahi pit diya. Air shaadi tut gayi.

Meri duniya puri maa me basi hai, ek din jarur unhe main apni feelings bata dunga.

Unke marne se pehle ya mere marne se pehle.

Shayad maa bhi mujhe lekar bahut possesive hai lekin shayad wo maa bete wala pyaar ho aur kuch nhi.

Isiliye story ki starting huyi to mujhe laga apni story se match kar rahi hai, lekin ye wale update me dil tut gaya.

Aapki story achhi hai, lekin main mom ko kisi ke saath nhi dekh sakta. Isiliye mujhe wo achha nhi laga. Jab maa ne uska wo pakda. :128fs4765852: sach me bahut bura laga.

Story ko maa bete ke bich hi rehne dete to achha hota, aur mera pure incest ka matlab ye hai ki story me villian 100 aaye lekin heroine hero ki hi ho.

Baaki aap achha likh rahe, aur asha hai ki aap apne bahut saare fans yaha banaoge.

Request hai ise order mat samajhna, wo scene ko hata dete to achha hota. Uske jagah koi emotional scene daal dete.

Main janta hun bahut log bolenge ki sab ki baat se story likhne lage to story bakwaas ho jayegi.

Par main ek request kar raha hun, aapse aur kuch nhi.
Best of luck,
My dear--- 123sk:(7):
From-- Lelouchyagami.

May your story achieve the highest popularity.

Thanks
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SUNDAY SPECIAL

MEGA UPDATE~5

Uncle apni chal ki kabyaabi ka jashan mana raha tha waheen mom apne apne man hi man ke kahien gum ho chuki thi

Mom ke jism to idher hi tha lekin us zehn na janay kaha kho chuka tha

Mom ka zehn - mera apna saga bhai ..! Wo bhi mere bare me itne gande khayal rakhta he

Mom ka dil - nahi nahi aesha wo tera bhai he jo tujhe apni jaan se bhi ziyadah piyar karta he

Mom ka zehn - lekin jo tere kano ne sunna wo galat nahi ho sakta

Mom ka dil - Aesha ye wahi bhai he jiss ne har waqt teri madad ki he

Mom ka zehn - tab ki baat or thi lekin ab har koe tere khoon ka piyaasa he

Or aese halaat me ager main kamzor pad gai to har koe mera istemaal karta rahe ga

Ager me hi himmat haar gai to Fir mere bete ko kon sanbhale ga wo to abhi masoom he

Mere ilawa he hi kon us

Nahi nahi aesa nahi ho sakta

Meera beta … Mera bete
Kahan he wo mujhe us ke pass jana chaye

Mom - Kahan he mera beta

Mehtab jo kab se ye aas lagae huwy tha ke aesha use apni raza khushi se piyaar Ye sunty hi gusse se bola

Mehtaab ucnle - sali us dale ke bache ka kayal dil se nikaal or mere bache ko piyar ka kab se daikh raha hoon
Mera beta mera beta
kiye ja rahi he

Sali karta hoo tere bete ka bhi bandobast

Mom - nahi nahi kiya kare ga tu

Uncle - janti he kya kya kar sakta hoo abhi ke abhi tere bete ko gaeb karwa sakta hoon
Tere or tere bete ke liye behtar yahi hoga me jessa chahta hu wesa karti raho
Warna use bhi waha puhcha du ga jahaan tere shahar ko punchaya he

Jaany unjaany ucnle ne wo baat keh di jo use nahi karni chaye thi

Mom - kya kaha mera shoharrrrr…

Uncle - haan mene hi usi ka accident karwaya tha
Ta ke tujhe apni rakhail bana ke rakhu
Tu mere bete ko thukra kar bhagi he
Or aaj me tere bete….
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Uncle ne itna hi kaha mom ki aankhe gusse se laal gai
Or uncle ka land jis par abhi tak mom ne apna hath rakha huwa tha
Leken ye sab sunte mom ke zehn me sirf apne bete ka khayal tha

Mom - (uncle ke land ko zor se baba kar marodty huwy) sala tu mere bete ko maare ga
Or ye tera beta

Mom uncle ke land ki tarf ishara kary huwy

Mom - us se pehle me tere bete

Or mom ne apna hath nikal kar apna ghutna speed se uncle ke taloo par de mara

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Ik badi cheekh ke sath uncle farsh par gir gaya

Mom yahi ruki nahi lagatar ucnle ko latoon se marti rahi

Uncle behosh ho kar gir gae the
Mom gusse se pori foolan devi ban ckuki thi

Uncle ki cheekhen sun kar rubi cebin ki tarf dourdi lekin darwaza ander se lock tha rubi ander nahi jaa sakhi

Us ne jab khidki se andar ka nazara daikha ek dam se police ko call kiya

Kuch hi deer me lady police aa gai
Wo darwaza tod kar ander aa gai or mom ko pakad liya

Mom- gusse se …… Chhodo muje main is kameene ko nahi chhodu gi
Is ne mere shohar ko mara
Or ab nere bete no marna chahta he
Me ise jaan se maar doo gi

Lady officer- ruk jao … Sanbhalo apne aap ko tera faisla qanoon kare ga
Or ager ye mar gaya to jujhe koe nahi bacha pae ga

Mom ko do lady officer ne pakd liya tha
Uncle ki halat daikhty hi use hospital bhijwa diya gaya
Ik lady officer jo kisi badi post par thi ceben ja jaeza leny lagi

Mom hosh me aaty he ronny lagi or kehny lagi thi

Mom - mujhe apne bete ke paas janna he wo akela ho

Lekin unho ne mom ki ek nahi suni or use thaa ne le gae

Jab SHo mom ka case dakhil karny tab ik lady officer jo cebin ka jaeza le kar aai thi aakar boli
Us ke sath rubi bhi thi jis ke hath me hathkadi lagi huwi thi

Rubi ko bhi hawalat me dala gaya hum dono ke beech me ik jali thi

Lady offcr - rukye sir pehly ye daikh lijye

Lady officer ne sho ko ik dick di

Lady officer - sir muje lagta ye (mom ki taef ishara kar ke) aurat beqasoor se
Ise ik badi sazish ke teht pasayaa jaa raha tha

Sho - tum itna yaqeen se kese keh sakti ho

Lady officer - sir aap ye videos daikhy cctv footage me aap saab jaan jaein ge

Fir officer sab daikh kar kuch sochny lagta he

Sho - mujhe bhi yahi lagta he lekin court me ye sab kese sabit karein ge
Is video me sirf dootage hain voice nahi or footge me is aurat ne us aadmi par hamla kiya he us ke liye hame kisi gawah ki zarurat pade gi
Ager wo (rubi) apna bayaan us aadmi ke khilaaf darj karwa de to ye (mom) bach sakti he

Police isi soch me thi ke case kis ke khilaaf darj kiya jae kyun ke cctv me sirf footage thi mom or uncle ke beech jo baat cheet hoyi us ka koe saboot nahi tha police ke pas

Or age rubi apna bayaan record karwati to us me wo khud bhi fas jatti

Police isi kashmash me thi ke achanak police center ke phone ki ghanti bajny lagi

Sho - hello

Samny - officer meri baat gour se sunno abhi jo aap ke pass case aya he jis me aap ik beqoor or lachaar aurat ko pakad kar lae ho jis naam he aesha

Sho - lekin aap kon ho or aap kese janty ho wo (mom) beqasoor he

Samny - kuch hi deer me aap logon ke pass sare saboot puhnch jaein ge
Mene phone is wajh se kiya tha k kahein aap us mazloom aurat k khilaaf F I R na kat dein jis se us masoom ki zindagi tabah o barbad ho jae gi

Fir phone cut ho jaati he

Qareeb ik ghante ke baad ik sipahi ander aata he or sho ko ik packet de kar wapas chala jata he

Jab sho us packet ko kolta he to us me se ik chithi (latter) or ik tape recorder nikalta he

Latter me bas itna likha tha

Sarre saboot is tape recorder me mojood hain

Fir sho ne jo us me record tha wo suna
Or mom ko ba izzat bari kar diya
rubi or mehtaab ke khilaaf dad ka marder karwane or mom ko blackmail karne ka muqadma chalaya gaya

Court ne bhi unhe lambi saza suna di

Aaj taak hame us aadmi ka pata nahi chala
jis ne mom ki madad ki thi
Jis ne sarre saboot police ko bhijwae
Jis ki wajh se dad ke qatil ko saza mili

Ye baat mujhe aaj tak pareshaan karti he ke aakhir kon tha jis ne ham par itna bada ehsaan kiya tha

jese jese me bada hota raha wese weseus shks ko milny ki khahish barhti rahi

Us din ke baab mom ne muje dosre shehr padhne bhijwa diya

Or khud ghar me hi bachon ko tuition padhane lagi

Waqt ki raftar chalti rahi or main bhi ab hostile me padta raha

Main saal me ik baar ghar aata tha lekin mom haftwar mujhe milne aajati

jab main 10th me punhcha mom mere pas kam aati thi

Jab me collage gaya to mom ne to jese aana hi chorh diya

Shayad is liye ke me ab bada ho gaya tha or apna khayal khud rakh sakta tha yun mujhe laga tha

Khair collage janay ke baad mom bhi nahi aai milne bass phone par baat hoti thi or me bhi ghar nahi gaya

Mere 12th ke exam khatam huwe me ne bhi mom ko bina batae ghar ko nikal pada is liye k main mom ko suprise dena chahta tha
Kyun ke hamare exam time se pehly khatam ho gai the

Main bas se utra or rikshaw par baith kar sedha ghar aaya gaya

Aj main mom ko do saal baad mill raha tha sach kahon to mom se milne ke liye main ziyadah hi exidet ho raha tha

Main gate ke pass punch kar khada ho gaya mere dil ki dhadkan teez dourh rahi thi

Main ne door bell bajai lekin ander se response nahi mila

Dopehr ka waqt tha maine samjha shayad mom so rahi ho gi

Kuch deer thehr ke mene fir door bell bajai mujhe ander ka darwaza khulne ki awaz aai

Me sajh gaya mom aa rahi hogi

Jese hi gate khula

Mere nazron ke samny ik aurat aai
Red shalwar qameez wite dupata kandhe me ball ik side khule huwe lambi heels wali sandle
Jese koe premika apne premi ka istaqbal karti he

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Mom - Well Come

Mom ka ye andaz daikh kar meri aankhein phati ki phati reh gai
Me bas us daikhta hi reh gaya

Kahan main mom ko surprise dene chala tha yaha to ulta main khud mom ko daikh kar surprised ho gaya

Lekin mom ye andaaz mujhe buha pasand aaya to main bhi anjaan banty huwy

Main - behan g .... Is ghar me meri ik bholi bhaali mom rehti thi wo kahan he

Mom - (also joking) bhai sahib us ki to koe khabar nahi mager aaj mere piyare or cut bete ne aanA tha

Fir ek sath hum dono ki hasi nikal gai

Hahahahahahahahah

Or dono hi khushi se chila uthe

Mom - vickyiiiiiiiii

Main - maaaaaa

Or mom ne apni bahein phehla di or me mom ke gale lag gaya

Main - mom ye sab ???

Mom - kiya sirf tu hi surprise de sakta he

Main - mom..! you are All ways the best mom

Mom - mera beta aae or mujhe khabar na ho

Main - lekin ye sab

Mom - kya tujhe acha nahi laga

Main - wo baat nahi mom lekin aese filmi heroini ki tarf sajh dhaj???

Mom ne meri baat aadhe me hi kaat di

Mom- (sharmaty or masnoi gussa dikhaty huwy) badmaash....! Ab maa ki class le chal teri khabar leti hu

Fir hum nono hasty huwy ander chale gae

vicky or Aesha ander chale gae lekin koe tha jo ye sab chup chap daikh raha tha dono ke ander jate hi apne aanso punchta huwa chala gaya

Note: dosto abhi taak jo bhi tha aesha or vicky ke bech
maa or bete wala hi piyar tha pure mom son love
 
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If dreams come true, then nightmare are dreams too
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SUNDAY SPECIAL

MEGA UPDATE~5

Uncle apni chal ki kabyaabi ka jashan mana raha tha waheen mom apne apne man hi man ke kahien gum ho chuki thi

Mom ke jism to idher hi tha lekin us zehn na janay kaha kho chuka tha

Mom ka zehn - mera apna saga bhai ..! Wo bhi mere bare me itne gande khayal rakhta he

Mom ka dil - nahi nahi aesha wo tera bhai he jo tujhe apni jaan se bhi ziyadah piyar karta he

Mom ka zehn - lekin jo tere kano ne sunna wo galat nahi ho sakta

Mom ka dil - Aesha ye wahi bhai he jiss ne har waqt teri madad ki he

Mom ka zehn - tab ki baat or thi lekin ab har koe tere khoon ka piyaasa he

Or aese halaat me ager main kamzor pad gai to har koe mera istemaal karta rahe ga

Ager me hi himmat haar gai to Fir mere bete ko kon sanbhale ga wo to abhi masoom he

Mere ilawa he hi kon us

Nahi nahi aesa nahi ho sakta

Meera beta … Mera bete
Kahan he wo mujhe us ke pass jana chaye

Mom - Kahan he mera beta

Mehtab jo kab se ye aas lagae huwy tha ke aesha use apni raza khushi se piyaar Ye sunty hi gusse se bola

Mehtaab ucnle - sali us dale ke bache ka kayal dil se nikaal or mere bache ko piyar ka kab se daikh raha hoon
Mera beta mera beta
kiye ja rahi he

Sali karta hoo tere bete ka bhi bandobast

Mom - nahi nahi kiya kare ga tu

Uncle - janti he kya kya kar sakta hoo abhi ke abhi tere bete ko gaeb karwa sakta hoon
Tere or tere bete ke liye behtar yahi hoga me jessa chahta hu wesa karti raho
Warna use bhi waha puhcha du ga jahaan tere shahar ko punchaya he

Jaany unjaany ucnle ne wo baat keh di jo use nahi karni chaye thi

Mom - kya kaha mera shoharrrrr…

Uncle - haan mene hi usi ka accident karwaya tha
Ta ke tujhe apni rakhail bana ke rakhu
Tu mere bete ko thukra kar bhagi he
Or aaj me tere bete….
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Uncle ne itna hi kaha mom ki aankhe gusse se laal gai
Or uncle ka land jis par abhi tak mom ne apna hath rakha huwa tha
Leken ye sab sunte mom ke zehn me sirf apne bete ka khayal tha

Mom - (uncle ke land ko zor se baba kar marodty huwy) sala tu mere bete ko maare ga
Or ye tera beta

Mom uncle ke land ki tarf ishara kary huwy

Mom - us se pehle me tere bete

Or mom ne apna hath nikal kar apna ghutna speed se uncle ke taloo par de mara

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Ik badi cheekh ke sath uncle farsh par gir gaya

Mom yahi ruki nahi lagatar ucnle ko latoon se marti rahi

Uncle behosh ho kar gir gae the
Mom gusse se pori foolan devi ban ckuki thi

Uncle ki cheekhen sun kar rubi cebin ki tarf dourdi lekin darwaza ander se lock tha rubi ander nahi jaa sakhi

Us ne jab khidki se andar ka nazara daikha ek dam se police ko call kiya

Kuch hi deer me lady police aa gai
Wo darwaza tod kar ander aa gai or mom ko pakad liya

Mom- gusse se …… Chhodo muje main is kameene ko nahi chhodu gi
Is ne mere shohar ko mara
Or ab nere bete no marna chahta he
Me ise jaan se maar doo gi

Lady officer- ruk jao … Sanbhalo apne aap ko tera faisla qanoon kare ga
Or ager ye mar gaya to jujhe koe nahi bacha pae ga

Mom ko do lady officer ne pakd liya tha
Uncle ki halat daikhty hi use hospital bhijwa diya gaya
Ik lady officer jo kisi badi post par thi ceben ja jaeza leny lagi

Mom hosh me aaty he ronny lagi or kehny lagi thi

Mom - mujhe apne bete ke paas janna he wo akela ho

Lekin unho ne mom ki ek nahi suni or use thaa ne le gae

Jab SHo mom ka case dakhil karny tab ik lady officer jo cebin ka jaeza le kar aai thi aakar boli
Us ke sath rubi bhi thi jis ke hath me hathkadi lagi huwi thi

Rubi ko bhi hawalat me dala gaya hum dono ke beech me ik jali thi

Lady offcr - rukye sir pehly ye daikh lijye

Lady officer ne sho ko ik dick di

Lady officer - sir muje lagta ye (mom ki taef ishara kar ke) aurat beqasoor se
Ise ik badi sazish ke teht pasayaa jaa raha tha

Sho - tum itna yaqeen se kese keh sakti ho

Lady officer - sir aap ye videos daikhy cctv footage me aap saab jaan jaein ge

Fir officer sab daikh kar kuch sochny lagta he

Sho - mujhe bhi yahi lagta he lekin court me ye sab kese sabit karein ge
Is video me sirf dootage hain voice nahi or footge me is aurat ne us aadmi par hamla kiya he us ke liye hame kisi gawah ki zarurat pade gi
Ager wo (rubi) apna bayaan us aadmi ke khilaaf darj karwa de to ye (mom) bach sakti he

Police isi soch me thi ke case kis ke khilaaf darj kiya jae kyun ke cctv me sirf footage thi mom or uncle ke beech jo baat cheet hoyi us ka koe saboot nahi tha police ke pas

Or age rubi apna bayaan record karwati to us me wo khud bhi fas jatti

Police isi kashmash me thi ke achanak police center ke phone ki ghanti bajny lagi

Sho - hello

Samny - officer meri baat gour se sunno abhi jo aap ke pass case aya he jis me aap ik beqoor or lachaar aurat ko pakad kar lae ho jis naam he aesha

Sho - lekin aap kon ho or aap kese janty ho wo (mom) beqasoor he

Samny - kuch hi deer me aap logon ke pass sare saboot puhnch jaein ge
Mene phone is wajh se kiya tha k kahein aap us mazloom aurat k khilaaf F I R na kat dein jis se us masoom ki zindagi tabah o barbad ho jae gi

Fir phone cut ho jaati he

Qareeb ik ghante ke baad ik sipahi ander aata he or sho ko ik packet de kar wapas chala jata he

Jab sho us packet ko kolta he to us me se ik chithi (latter) or ik tape recorder nikalta he

Latter me bas itna likha tha

Sarre saboot is tape recorder me mojood hain

Fir sho ne jo us me record tha wo suna
Or mom ko ba izzat bari kar diya
rubi or mehtaab ke khilaaf dad ka marder karwane or mom ko blackmail karne ka muqadma chalaya gaya

Court ne bhi unhe lambi saza suna di

Aaj taak hame us aadmi ka pata nahi chala
jis ne mom ki madad ki thi
Jis ne sarre saboot police ko bhijwae
Jis ki wajh se dad ke qatil ko saza mili

Ye baat mujhe aaj tak pareshaan karti he ke aakhir kon tha jis ne ham par itna bada ehsaan kiya tha

jese jese me bada hota raha wese weseus shks ko milny ki khahish barhti rahi

Us din ke baab mom ne muje dosre shehr padhne bhijwa diya

Or khud ghar me hi bachon ko tuition padhane lagi

Waqt ki raftar chalti rahi or main bhi ab hostile me padta raha

Main saal me ik baar ghar aata tha lekin mom haftwar mujhe milne aajati

jab main 10th me punhcha mom mere pas kam aati thi

Jab me collage gaya to mom ne to jese aana hi chorh diya

Shayad is liye ke me ab bada ho gaya tha or apna khayal khud rakh sakta tha yun mujhe laga tha

Khair collage janay ke baad mom bhi nahi aai milne bass phone par baat hoti thi or me bhi ghar nahi gaya

Mere 12th ke exam khatam huwe me ne bhi mom ko bina batae ghar ko nikal pada is liye k main mom ko suprise dena chahta tha
Kyun ke hamare exam time se pehly khatam ho gai the

Main bas se utra or rikshaw par baith kar sedha ghar aaya gaya

Aj main mom ko do saal baad mill raha tha sach kahon to mom se milne ke liye main ziyadah hi exidet ho raha tha

Main gate ke pass punch kar khada ho gaya mere dil ki dhadkan teez dourh rahi thi

Main ne door bell bajai lekin ander se response nahi mila

Dopehr ka waqt tha maine samjha shayad mom so rahi ho gi

Kuch deer thehr ke mene fir door bell bajai mujhe ander ka darwaza khulne ki awaz aai

Me sajh gaya mom aa rahi hogi

Jese hi gate khula

Mere nazron ke samny ik aurat aai
Red shalwar qameez wite dupata kandhe me ball ik side khule huwe lambi heels wali sandle
Jese koe premika apne premi ka istaqbal karti he

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Mom - Well Come

Mom ka ye andaz daikh kar meri aankhein phati ki phati reh gai
Me bas us daikhta hi reh gaya

Kahan main mom ko surprise dene chala tha yaha to ulta main khud mom ko daikh kar surprised ho gaya

Lekin mom ye andaaz mujhe buha pasand aaya to main bhi anjaan banty huwy

Main - behan g .... Is ghar me meri ik bholi bhaali mom rehti thi wo kahan he

Mom - (also joking) bhai sahib us ki to koe khabar nahi mager aaj mere piyare or cut bete ne aanA tha

Fir ek sath hum dono ki hasi nikal gai

Hahahahahahahahah

Or dono hi khushi se chila uthe

Mom - vickyiiiiiiiii

Main - maaaaaa

Or mom ne apni bahein phehla di or me mom ke gale lag gaya

Main - mom ye sab ???

Mom - kiya sirf tu hi surprise de sakta he

Main - mom..! you are All ways the best mom

Mom - mera beta aae or mujhe khabar na ho

Main - lekin ye sab

Mom - kya tujhe acha nahi laga

Main - wo baat nahi mom lekin aese filmi heroini ki tarf sajh dhaj???

Mom ne meri baat aadhe me hi kaat di

Mom- (sharmaty or masnoi gussa dikhaty huwy) badmaash....! Ab maa ki class le chal teri khabar leti hu

Fir hum nono hasty huwy ander chale gae

vicky or Aesha ander chale gae lekin koe tha jo ye sab chup chap daikh raha tha dono ke ander jate hi apne aanso punchta huwa chala gaya

Note: dosto abhi taak jo bhi tha aesha or vicky ke bech
maa or bete wala hi piyar tha pure mom son love
Bro har update ke baad tum situation change kar dete ho. Nice thought skill.

Iss update se dil to halka hua hai, lekin abhi iss naye aadmi kon hai aur jisne madad ki wo kon hai ye saare sawal sone nhi denge.

Achha twist add kar rahe ho. Ummid karta hun, everything goes well.

Nice update.

Abhi aage aapki writing skill bhi dekhna hai. (Hope mom x son) :victory2:.

Aur emotion add kar sakte ho thoda elaborate kar ke har situation par. (Jaha jarurat ho waha)

Best of luck.
Waiting next.

Lelouchyagami 😋
 

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