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--- One Day You Shall Be Mine ---
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Director : priya tumhe ek new scene karni paregi.

Priya : konsa scene hai.

Director : ek chhota sa kissing scene hai.

Priya : maine pahle bhi kaha tha, ye bakwas scene mai nahi karungi.

Director : meri baat suno pahle agar tumne ye scene kiya to tumhe double amount milegi.

Priya : ye karne ke liye aapko kisne kaha hai.

Director : dekho aaj kal ke jamane mein ye sab to normal baat hai, aur aise scene se hi movie hit hoti hai.

Priya : maine film sign karne se pahle hi keh di thi aise scene mai nahi karungi.

Director (man me) : dekho to baate aisi kar rahi hai jaise kisi ke sath soe hi nahi hai.
Mai in jaisi ladki ko achhe se jaanta hu.

Director : dekiye miss priya ye sab hemant sir ne kaha tha mujhe aur agar aapko nahi karna to unse hi baat karye.

Priya (man me) : ohh! To ye sab hemant ka kiya dhara hai.

Priya : ok main usse baat karti hu.


"Priya waha se hement ki or chali jaati hai"

Priya : hemant kya tumne usko wo scene karne ko kaha tha.

Hemannt : ha maine hi kaha tha kyuki film mein abi waise hi scene chalte hai.

Priya : par mai pahle hi keh chuki hu mai nahi karne wali ye sab.

Hemant : kya yaar pahle kabhi kiss nahi kari ho kya.

Priya : dekho hemant maine pahle bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi keh rahi hu.
Tumhari bhalae isi mein hai tum mujhse door raho samjhe.

Hemant : arre ab maine kya kardiya tum itni bharak kyu rahi ho.
Dekho ham itne achhe dost hai fir bhi tum mujhse itni doori kyu rakhti ho.
Hemant (man me) : ha ha mujhe pata hai tum abhi virgin ho bada maja ayega iss kalee ko phool banane mein.

Priya : dhekho mujhe tumse koi bhi rishta nahi rakhna hai, mujhse door hi raho.

Hemant : kya tum ab bhi uske bade mein soch rahi ho dekho wo tumhare layak nahi tha, faltu mein uske bade mai soch ke kyu preshan hoti ho.

Priya (chillate hue) : chup ho jao mujhe uss bade mein kuch nahi sunna.

Nemant : chalo shooting ke liye bula rahe hai.


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Surya : to chale ab ghar.

Kiran : sir aapne ye bomb kab lagaye the. Jab ye sab aapne pahle hi set kar liye the to ham yaha kyu aaye.

Surya : bhale hi maine ye bomb pahle hi set kar diya tha lekin agar koi bach jaata to ham kya karte.

Kiran : oh ha ab hame chalna chahiye.

Surya : ha chalo.


"Dono nikal padte hai apne ghar ki or"
Aur pichhe chhod gaye jalaa hua factory"



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Aditya : tu to bahar gaya tha.

Surya : ha ho gaya kaam.

Aditya : konsa kaam.

Surya : maine tere liye ek flat kharida hai.

Aditya : ha ha ha kyu majak kar raha hai be.

Surya : ye rahe flat ke paper.

Aditya : ye...ye tune kab kharide aur tere paas paise kaha se aaya be

Surya : tujhe maine kaha tha. Mere bade mein tu sab kuch nahi jaanta hai.

Aditya : ha to ab kya hua tere paas itne paise kaha se aa gaya.

Surya : ye sab chhod tu apna packing kar jaldi jaana hai tumhe.

Aditya : tu nahi jayega.

Surya : mujhe kaam hai kuch din baad aunga.

Aditya : kya kaam hai.

Surya : aake bataunga.

Aditya : thik hai jaunga kaise aur kaha.

Surya : bahar car khadi hai.

Aditya : ok

Surya : chal nikal ab.


"Aditya chalta hua car mein baithta hai aur car nikal jaati hai aditya ke flat ki or.


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"Kiran ki ghar mein"

Kiran : sir aap fresh ho lijiye.

Surya : aaj bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Kiran (man me) : haye aaj inhe hua kya hai.
Itne dino se mai jo sun'na chah rahi thi wahi keh rahe hai.

Surya : kiran kya hua.

Kiran : kuch nahi aap jaeye mai bhi fresh ho leti hu.

"Dono alag alag bathroom me chale jaale hai.

::::::kuch samay baad::::::

Kiran : aiye khana taiyar hai.

Surya : kya baat hai aaj to kafi hot lag rahi ho koi pasand aa gaya kya.

Kiran : baithye aur khana khaiye aap ko pata hai na fir bhi bol rahe hai.

Surya : maine bhi kuch socha hai.

Kiran : aur wo kya hai.

Surya : raat ko pata chal jayega tab tak wait karo.

Kiran (man me) : Wow! Lagta hai sir ne mujhe accept kar liya hai. Oh! God mai iss pal ka kabse intezaar kar rahi hun.

Surya : ok mai kuch derr mai aata hu.

Kiran : kaha jaa rahe hai.

Surya : aake bataunga.

Kiran : thik hai jaldi aeyega.
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AAJ KE LIYE INTA HI DOSTO.

SATH BANE RAHE.

❤️DHANYAWAD❤️
 
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Director : priya tumhe ek new scene karni paregi.

Priya : konsa scene hai.

Director : ek chhota sa kissing scene hai.

Priya : maine pahle bhi kaha tha, ye bakwas scene mai nahi karungi.

Director : meri baat suno pahle agar tumne ye scene kiya to tumhe double amount milegi.

Priya : ye karne ke liye aapko kisne kaha hai.

Director : dekho aaj kal ke jamane mein ye sab to normal baat hai, aur aise scene se hi movie hit hoti hai.

Priya : maine film sign karne se pahle hi keh di thi aise scene mai nahi karungi.

Director (man me) : dekho to baate aisi kar rahi hai jaise kisi ke sath soe hi nahi hai.
Mai in jaisi ladki ko achhe se jaanta hu.

Director : dekiye miss priya ye sab hemant sir ne kaha tha mujhe aur agar aapko nahi karna to unse hi baat karye.

Priya (man me) : ohh! To ye sab hemant ka kiya dhara hai.

Priya : ok main usse baat karti hu.


"Priya waha se hement ki or chali jaati hai"

Priya : hemant kya tumne usko wo scene karne ko kaha tha.

Hemannt : ha maine hi kaha tha kyuki film mein abi waise hi scene chalte hai.

Priya : par mai pahle hi keh chuki hu mai nahi karne wali ye sab.

Hemant : kya yaar pahle kabhi kiss nahi kari ho kya.

Priya : dekho hemant maine pahle bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi keh rahi hu.
Tumhari bhalae isi mein hai tum mujhse door raho samjhe.

Hemant : arre ab maine kya kardiya tum itni bharak kyu rahi ho.
Dekho ham itne achhe dost hai fir bhi tum mujhse itni doori kyu rakhti ho.
Hemant (man me) : ha ha mujhe pata hai tum abhi virgin ho bada maja ayega iss kalee ko phool banane mein.

Priya : dhekho mujhe tumse koi bhi rishta nahi rakhna hai, mujhse door hi raho.

Hemant : kya tum ab bhi uske bade mein soch rahi ho dekho wo tumhare layak nahi tha, faltu mein uske bade mai soch ke kyu preshan hoti ho.

Priya (chillate hue) : chup ho jao mujhe uss bade mein kuch nahi sunna.

Nemant : chalo shooting ke liye bula rahe hai.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Surya : to chale ab ghar.

Kiran : sir aapne ye bomb kab lagaye the. Jab ye sab aapne pahle hi set kar liye the to ham yaha kyu aaye.

Surya : bhale hi maine ye bomb pahle hi set kar diya tha lekin agar koi bach jaata to ham kya karte.

Kiran : oh ha ab hame chalna chahiye.

Surya : ha chalo.


"Dono nikal padte hai apne ghar ki or"
Aur pichhe chhod gaye jalaa hua factory"



: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :


Aditya : tu to bahar gaya tha.

Surya : ha ho gaya kaam.

Aditya : konsa kaam.

Surya : maine tere liye ek flat kharida hai.

Aditya : ha ha ha kyu majak kar raha hai be.

Surya : ye rahe flat ke paper.

Aditya : ye...ye tune kab kharide aur tere paas paise kaha se aaya be

Surya : tujhe maine kaha tha. Mere bade mein tu sab kuch nahi jaanta hai.

Aditya : ha to ab kya hua tere paas itne paise kaha se aa gaya.

Surya : ye sab chhod tu apna packing kar jaldi jaana hai tumhe.

Aditya : tu nahi jayega.

Surya : mujhe kaam hai kuch din baad aunga.

Aditya : kya kaam hai.

Surya : aake bataunga.

Aditya : thik hai jaunga kaise aur kaha.

Surya : bahar car khadi hai.

Aditya : ok

Surya : chal nikal ab.


"Aditya chalta hua car mein baithta hai aur car nikal jaati hai aditya ke flat ki or.


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"Kiran ki ghar mein"

Kiran : sir aap fresh ho lijiye.

Surya : aaj bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Kiran (man me) : haye aaj inhe hua kya hai.
Itne dino se mai jo sun'na chah rahi thi wahi keh rahe hai.

Surya : kiran kya hua.

Kiran : kuch nahi aap jaeye mai bhi fresh ho leti hu.

"Dono alag alag bathroom me chale jaale hai.

::::::kuch samay baad::::::

Kiran : aiye khana taiyar hai.

Surya : kya baat hai aaj to kafi hot lag rahi ho koi pasand aa gaya kya.

Kiran : baithye aur khana khaiye aap ko pata hai na fir bhi bol rahe hai.

Surya : maine bhi kuch socha hai.

Kiran : aur wo kya hai.

Surya : raat ko pata chal jayega tab tak wait karo.

Kiran (man me) : Wow! Lagta hai sir ne mujhe accept kar liya hai. Oh! God mai iss pal ka kabse intezaar kar rahi hun.

Surya : ok mai kuch derr mai aata hu.

Kiran : kaha jaa rahe hai.

Surya : aake bataunga.

Kiran : thik hai jaldi aeyega.
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AAJ KE LIYE INTA HI DOSTO.

SATH BANE RAHE.

❤️DHANYAWAD❤️
Mast update ab lagta hai kiss wiss hoga heroine ke sath agle updete me idhar Surya aur kiran ke mamle me kya hota dekhte hain
 
PURE HEART ❤️
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Hey surya sun'na yaar.



Surya : kya hai Aditya? maine kaha na nahi jaunga.


Aditya : lekin waha hame achhe paise milenge ek baar aur soch le yaar.

Surya : tu kabhi nahi sudhrega.

Aditya : sale yaha ghar ka rent bharne ke paise nahi hai aur tu kya bol raha hai.

Surya : tu apna muh band rakh jyada bakwas mat kar.

Aditya : haa main to apna muh band hi rakhu
Sale tu karna kya chahta hai.

Surya : chal tujhe office nahi jaana.

Aditya : haa jaa raha hu.


"Aditya ek chhote se ghar se nikalta hai jo bahar se to thik thak hi lag rahi hai"

"Ghar ke andar"


"Surya phone pe kisi se baat karke nahaane chala jaata hai"

"Chota sa intro"

Hero - surya, surya ek bahut hi handsome ladka hai six pack abs jo uski body ko aur bhi attractive banaata hai, simple kapde hi pahanta hai. Aur dikhawa to bilkul bhi nahi karta.
Age - 22 year

Aditya - ye bhi kafi handsome hai, aur slim bhi aditya paisa kamane pe jyada dhayan deta hai.
Abhi ek chhota sa job karta hai jisme 15 hajar per month kama leta hai.
Age - 23


"Baaki ke character time pe introduce honge"

"Kuch samay mein surya bathroom se nikalta hai, aur kapde pahan'ne lagta hai, kuch time mein surya ready ho jaata hai.
Aur ghar se nikal jaata hai.


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"Yaha se thodi door"

2 ladki ek bade se mein baith ke baat kar rahi thi.

Ladki : priya ma'am ab hame chalna chahiye.

Priya : hema tujhe itni jaldi kyu hai.

Hema : par ma'am waha director presan ho rahe hai.

Priya : to mai kya karu uss director ko samaj nahi aata meri bhi personal life hai.

Hema : to mai director ko kya kahu.

Priya : keh do thodi derr mein aaungi.

Hema : okay ma'am.

"Aur kuch time tak dono wahi baithe rahti hai.

Priya (man me) : kya wo aaj nahi aayega.

" wahi road mein ek kafi mahangi car mein ek person baitha hua tha, jise priya dekh leti hai, abhi priya bahut khush thi.
Aur aise hi car priya ke ankho se ojhal ho jaati hai.

Hema : ma'am ab kafi time ho gayi hai, hame chalna chahiye.

Priya : ha chalo ab.


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Aditya ka office uske ghar se 5-km door tha aur aditya hamesha taxi
Se hi aata tha.

Admi : aditya maine jo tumhe kaam diya tha kya wo pura hua hai.

Aditya : yes boss ho gaya hai.

Admi : good mujhe tumse yahi ummid thi.

Aditya : thaks sir.

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Surya : kya kaam ho gaya?

Admi : nahi sir.

Surya : kiran kaha hai.

Admi : ji wo to abhi bahar gayi hai.

"main aa gayi sir ' dusri taraf se awaj aati hai jo ki kiran ki thi.

Kiran : ji kya baat hai.

Surya : maine tumhe kuch kaha tha kya tumhe yaad hai.

Kiran : yes sir main taiyar hu.

Surya : ok


(kiran's intro)

Surya ki secretary hai.

Name-kiran
Age-20
Figure-34-26-34
Hight-5ft 6in.
Colour-fair bilkul heroine lagti hai"

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"Ha ha ha bahut jald main tumhe khatam kar dunga"
Ek kamre mein 2 log baithe hue the jisme se ek ye keh raha tha.

2ra admi : yaar amit tum kyu uske piche pade ho,
Wo bahut khatarnak hai.

Amit : tu nahi samjhega sumit usne mere bete ko mara hai, jo dard mujhe hai wo tu nahi samjhega.

Sumit : wo bhi mere bete jaisa hi tha, mai samajh sakta hu.

Amit : bahut jald mai uss kutte ko khatam kar dunga dekhna tum.


" sumit aur amit bachpan ke dost hai inke bade mein aage pata chalega

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(Film shooting area)

Hema : ready ho ma'am.

Priya : yes

Hema : ok to chaliye fir.

"priya aur hema dono shooting wali jagah par aa jaate hai"

"waha se thode doori par.

Director : sorry sir mai aisa nahi kar sakta hu.

Hemant : yaar tumse ek scene nahi badle jaate tu director kaise ban gaya.

Director : wo baat nahi hai sir priya ne film contract sign karne se pahle hi keh di thi ye sab scene nahi karegi.

Hemant : mai aapko double payment dilwaunga soch lijiye.

Director : thik hai mai koshish karta hu usse baat karne ki.


"Director priya ki or chala jaata hai, aur idhar hemant bahut khush ho raha tha, hemant ko pata tha director kafi lalchi admi hai.


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Surya aur kiran ek band pade factory ke paas khade the dono ke paas letest gun thi.

Surya : ready ho kiran

Kiran : yes sir i'm ready.

Surya : good to chale fir.

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Aditya : yaar ye boss kuch jyada hi kaam dene lag gaye hai matha paka ke rakh deta hai.
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Director : priya tumhe ek new scene karni paregi.

Priya : konsa scene hai.

Director : ek chhota sa kissing scene hai.

Priya : maine pahle bhi kaha tha, ye bakwas scene mai nahi karungi.

Director : meri baat suno pahle agar tumne ye scene kiya to tumhe double amount milegi.

Priya : ye karne ke liye aapko kisne kaha hai.

Director : dekho aaj kal ke jamane mein ye sab to normal baat hai, aur aise scene se hi movie hit hoti hai.

Priya : maine film sign karne se pahle hi keh di thi aise scene mai nahi karungi.

Director (man me) : dekho to baate aisi kar rahi hai jaise kisi ke sath soe hi nahi hai.
Mai in jaisi ladki ko achhe se jaanta hu.

Director : dekiye miss priya ye sab hemant sir ne kaha tha mujhe aur agar aapko nahi karna to unse hi baat karye.

Priya (man me) : ohh! To ye sab hemant ka kiya dhara hai.

Priya : ok main usse baat karti hu.


"Priya waha se hement ki or chali jaati hai"

Priya : hemant kya tumne usko wo scene karne ko kaha tha.

Hemannt : ha maine hi kaha tha kyuki film mein abi waise hi scene chalte hai.

Priya : par mai pahle hi keh chuki hu mai nahi karne wali ye sab.

Hemant : kya yaar pahle kabhi kiss nahi kari ho kya.

Priya : dekho hemant maine pahle bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi keh rahi hu.
Tumhari bhalae isi mein hai tum mujhse door raho samjhe.

Hemant : arre ab maine kya kardiya tum itni bharak kyu rahi ho.
Dekho ham itne achhe dost hai fir bhi tum mujhse itni doori kyu rakhti ho.
Hemant (man me) : ha ha mujhe pata hai tum abhi virgin ho bada maja ayega iss kalee ko phool banane mein.

Priya : dhekho mujhe tumse koi bhi rishta nahi rakhna hai, mujhse door hi raho.

Hemant : kya tum ab bhi uske bade mein soch rahi ho dekho wo tumhare layak nahi tha, faltu mein uske bade mai soch ke kyu preshan hoti ho.

Priya (chillate hue) : chup ho jao mujhe uss bade mein kuch nahi sunna.

Nemant : chalo shooting ke liye bula rahe hai.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Surya : to chale ab ghar.

Kiran : sir aapne ye bomb kab lagaye the. Jab ye sab aapne pahle hi set kar liye the to ham yaha kyu aaye.

Surya : bhale hi maine ye bomb pahle hi set kar diya tha lekin agar koi bach jaata to ham kya karte.

Kiran : oh ha ab hame chalna chahiye.

Surya : ha chalo.


"Dono nikal padte hai apne ghar ki or"
Aur pichhe chhod gaye jalaa hua factory"



: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :


Aditya : tu to bahar gaya tha.

Surya : ha ho gaya kaam.

Aditya : konsa kaam.

Surya : maine tere liye ek flat kharida hai.

Aditya : ha ha ha kyu majak kar raha hai be.

Surya : ye rahe flat ke paper.

Aditya : ye...ye tune kab kharide aur tere paas paise kaha se aaya be

Surya : tujhe maine kaha tha. Mere bade mein tu sab kuch nahi jaanta hai.

Aditya : ha to ab kya hua tere paas itne paise kaha se aa gaya.

Surya : ye sab chhod tu apna packing kar jaldi jaana hai tumhe.

Aditya : tu nahi jayega.

Surya : mujhe kaam hai kuch din baad aunga.

Aditya : kya kaam hai.

Surya : aake bataunga.

Aditya : thik hai jaunga kaise aur kaha.

Surya : bahar car khadi hai.

Aditya : ok

Surya : chal nikal ab.


"Aditya chalta hua car mein baithta hai aur car nikal jaati hai aditya ke flat ki or.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :


"Kiran ki ghar mein"

Kiran : sir aap fresh ho lijiye.

Surya : aaj bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Kiran (man me) : haye aaj inhe hua kya hai.
Itne dino se mai jo sun'na chah rahi thi wahi keh rahe hai.

Surya : kiran kya hua.

Kiran : kuch nahi aap jaeye mai bhi fresh ho leti hu.

"Dono alag alag bathroom me chale jaale hai.

::::::kuch samay baad::::::

Kiran : aiye khana taiyar hai.

Surya : kya baat hai aaj to kafi hot lag rahi ho koi pasand aa gaya kya.

Kiran : baithye aur khana khaiye aap ko pata hai na fir bhi bol rahe hai.

Surya : maine bhi kuch socha hai.

Kiran : aur wo kya hai.

Surya : raat ko pata chal jayega tab tak wait karo.

Kiran (man me) : Wow! Lagta hai sir ne mujhe accept kar liya hai. Oh! God mai iss pal ka kabse intezaar kar rahi hun.

Surya : ok mai kuch derr mai aata hu.

Kiran : kaha jaa rahe hai.

Surya : aake bataunga.

Kiran : thik hai jaldi aeyega.
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AAJ KE LIYE INTA HI DOSTO.

SATH BANE RAHE.

❤️DHANYAWAD❤️

Nice update mitr
 

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