Incest Mummy Ka Deewana

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रेवो मिलना बहुत आसान है अगर आपकी कहानी उस स्तर की हो तो ।
कुछ शुरुवाती शब्द ही पाठको को कहानी से जोड लेते है तो कुछ टॉपिक्स
रेवो मे सिर्फ सकारात्म्क टिप्पणिओं की कल्पना करना मूर्खता है , एक लेखक को सारी परिस्थियों के लिए तैयार रहना चाहिए ।
जहा तक मेरे रेवो देने का तरीका किसी नयी कहानि और नये लेखक के लिए बहुत ही हृदय विदारक होता है । शुरुवात के कुछ अपडेट मे कमिया निकालना और सुधार करवाना मेरी फितरत है ।
हालाकि मेरी इस हरकत से काफी कहानिया बंद हो गयी । 😁 मगर आप हिम्मत मत हारियेगा ।



जहा तक मैने कहानियो को पाया है अगर कहानी किन्ही अन्य कहानियो से या पाठको के विचारो से निर्भित होकर शुरु होती है ,,,उनकी असफलता के नतीजे ज्यादा होते है ।
तो चलिये कुछ कमियो और सुझाव के साथ शुरु करते है ।

1. लेखक कयी जगह ये ढिंढोरा किया की ये एरोटिका कहानी है,,, मगर कुछ Gifs और pics अलावा एक सिंगल संवाद नही मिला जिनपर कोई ऊततेजना मह्सूस हो । हो सकता है लेखक अपनी मनोवासना मे घुल कर लिख रहा हो और उसके लिए वो सारे शब्द बहुत उच्च कोटि के वासनापूरक हो ,,,मगर जमीनी हकीकत यही है ।
2. पात्रो का परिचय एक महत्वपूर्ण कदम होता है कहानि मे ,,,जिनसे पाठको का जुडाव होना जरुरी है । आप उनकी उम्र या बॉडी फिगर कुछ भी अन्को मे दर्शा दे ,,,अगर 10 अपडेट बाद पाठक भूल जायेगा उन फिगरस को ,,, जहन मे रहती है तो बस उस किरदार के चरित्र ।
3. कहानी का विन्यास बहुत ही निम्न स्तर का है । लिखने की शैली और शब्दो का चुनाव किसी भी निचले स्तर के स्टोरी प्लॉट को एक सुन्दर रचना दे सकते है । ये कहानी बस किसी जूनियर क्लास के निबंध जैसी है । जिसमे व्याकरण का ज्ञान पर्याप्त होने पर पँक्तियो मे बार बार संज्ञा की पुर्नवृति होने लगती है ।


ये कुछ प्रमुख बाते थी जिन पर मेरी नजरे गयी
और इनसब मे सुधार की जरुरत है ।
काहानी जैसे आगे बढेगी उम्मिद है लेखक उनमे सुधार जरुर करेगा ।
मै कोई अनुभवी लेखक नही हू ,,मगर मेरी प्रतिकिया या सलाह मे मै उस सब शुरुवाती गल्तियो के लिए आगाह कर करुंगा जो कभी मैने भी अपनी कहानी मे की थी ।
Buddy I will try my best
 
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Superb erotic update brother. Sach mein maja aa gaya. Tumne apna naam sahi rakha hai Mom's Bull. Suit karta hai tumpar. Bhoute aacha likhte ho yaar. Sach mein kaafi erotic tha
 
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संगीता का लाडला बड़ा हो गया, संगीता का लाडला बिगाड़ गया 🤭
 
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जिया तडपा के चिगांरी भडका के
मुँह में पान दबाए के हाथ में डंडा लेके
संगीता का लाडला बड़ा हो गया, संगीता का लाडला बिगाड़ गया 🤭
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Superb erotic update brother. Sach mein maja aa gaya. Tumne apna naam sahi rakha hai Mom's Bull. Suit karta hai tumpar. Bhoute aacha likhte ho yaar. Sach mein kaafi erotic tha
Story shandaar hai bhai aur gifs aur image bhi tum dhundhe ke laate ho sach mein maja aaya story read karke.
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मुँह में पान दबाए के हाथ में डंडा लेके
संगीता का लाडला बड़ा हो गया, संगीता का लाडला बिगाड़ गया 🤭
Thank you guy's for encouraging me
 
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Rahul apne bed par leta huwa tha....... tabhi ek khubsurat aurat jo black bra panty me thi.......... Wo Rahul ke bed room ke darwaje pe khadi thi........uska pura badan mast gora tha aur chamak raha tha.......... Seductive andaaj me Rahul ko muskurate huye dekh rahi thi......... tabhi Rahul ke kano me ek awaj gunji....... " Rahul..... Rahul..... utho beta..... jaldi utho" ......... Rahul apni aakhe malate huye kholta hai.........uske samne uski mummy Sangita khadi thi as usual..........


Rahul : Gm mummy..........

Sangita : Gm beta....... jaldi utho aur niche aao.........

Sangita Rahul ke room se bahar chali jaati hai.........

Rahul ( man me) yaar akhir meri ye dream girl hai kon.......lekin jo bhi hai hai badi dhasu........lekin aaj salli chudane se bach gayi mummy ki wajah se..........

Rahul as usual daily routine ke sath collage gaya to usse uska dost Nikhil mila......Nikhil aaj kuch jada hi khush lag raha tha...... Rahul ne apne ashlil khayalo pe badi mushkil se kabu paya tha.........Rahul ko ab dar tha ki kai Nikhil uske dimag me anab shanab bate na bhar de...........

Nikhil :chal collage garden me tuze kuch dikhata hu..........

Rahul :kya dikhayega...........

Nikhil :abe tu garden me to chal...........

Fir Rahul Nikhil ke sath garden me chala gaya.......Wo dono ek ped ke niche bethe.........

Rahul :ab bata kya dikhana hai tuze..........

Nikhil :usse pahle tuze malum hai humari nayi teacher ka nam kya hai.........

Rahul :nahi kya hai..........

Nikhil :humari nayi teacher ka nam Archana hai.........

Rahul :tuze yahi batana tha kya........

Nikhil :nahi yaar tuze kuch dikhata hu..........

Nikhil ne apne bag me se laptop nikala........Nikhil ne laptop on kiya or wo ek secret files me gaya.........Uss secret file me kuch nude sex drawings thi..........

Nikhil ne ek drawing pe click kiya..........Rahul uss drawing ko dekh kar hakka bakka rah gaya...........Wo drawing humari teacher archana ki thi.........jisame wo kitchen me puri nangi hoke kitchen slab pe zuki huyi hai........aur uski gand Nikhil apna lund dal ke hai..........Sath me uss drawing me Archana mam ke pic pe mom likha huwa tha Nikhil pe son likha huwa tha..........

Rahul :ye kya hai be..........

Nikhil :meri fantasy hai mai apni mummy ki kitchen me baja raha hu.........

Rahul : abe sale apni maa ke bare koi itna galat nahi soch sakhata or koi maa apne bete ke sath aisa nahi kar sakhati..........

Nikhil :tu sala bohot murkh hai aurat ko sirf lund se matlab hota hai fir chahe wo kisika bhi ho..........

Tabhi Nikhil ne Rahul ko kuch real incest stories dikhayi jisame maa beto ke sex pics bhi the..........Tabhi Nikhil ne Rahul ko ek drawing dikhayi jo ek aurat ki thi jo purinangi thi..........

Nikhil ne uske bade bade boob's pe lajwab brown nipples the jo bohot mast lag rahe the.........Nikhil ne uss aurat ko ek mangalsutra pahnaya tha or sath me ek mast si nose ring or payal pahana rakhi thi..........Nikhil ne uss drawing ke niche meri maa likh kar tha..........

Rahul ek min ke liye apni mummy Sangita ko iss rup me imagine karane laga........jisase uske lund me ubhar aane laga.........tabhi usse ahsas huwa ki wo apni mummy ke bare me soch raha hai..........

Rahul ko laga mai kuch jada hi isme inwal ho gaya hu muze khud ko rokana chahiye.........Maine ye sabh soch ke enjoy to bohot kiya lekin ye galat hai.........Ye sare thoughts bohot matter karate hai ki mai apni mummy ko kaise imagine karta hu...........

Nikhil ke sath collage me Rahul ka pura din issi topic pe bat chalati rahi.......Sham ko jab mai collage se ghar gaya to maine dekha papa sofe pe bethe hai.........

Ramesh : arre beta tum aa gaye collage se.........

Rahul :ha papa lekin aap bohot jaldi aa gaye office se.........

Ramesh :ha beta wo aaj office jada kam nahi tha.........

Rahul :matlab aap kal bhi jaldi aayenge............

Ramesh :nahi beta kal se to humara ek important project kam chalu ho raha hai..........

Rahul :to kal se aap bohot busy rahoge..........

Ramesh : Ha beta kal se mai bohot busy rahunga..........

Tabhi Sangita kitchen se bahar aayi.........Sangita ke hat me stray tha jisme chai ke cup the........Sangita apni kamar lachkate huye Rahul aur Ramesh ke taraf aane lagi........ Rahul Sangita ki chikani kamar ko hi dekh raha tha jo mast gori cheekhani aur lachkili thi..........Sangita ki chikani sexy kamar dekh kar Rahul ka gala sukh raha tha...........

Sangita unke pass gayi aur Ramesh ko zuk kar chai dene lagi.......Sangita ke zukane se Sangita ki gand mast saree me chipak kar bahar nikal gayi.........Sangita ki itni lajawab chaudi masal dar gand Rahul ke aakho ke samane thi.........Sangita ki gand ko dekh kar Rahul ka lund pant me fadfadane laga tha.........Rahul ko apne ashlil khayalo pe bilkul koi control nahi raha tha.. ........

Rahul (man me) wah kitni mast gand hai mummy ki.......Dil kar raha hai mummy ki gand pe hat feru or mummy ki gand ko apne se dabau........

Tabhi Sangita Rahul ke taraf palati aur Rahul ko chai dene ke liye zuki........Sangita jaise hi zuki Rahul ki nazar Sangita ke bade bade boob's pe gayi........Sangita ke boob's to jaise blouse se bahar aane ke liye machal rahe the.........Rahul Sangita ke bade bade boob's ke bich darar dekh pa raha tha..........Sangita wahi baju me beth gayi.........

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Sangita : Ramesh hamara ghar kafi purana ho gaya hai.........

Rahul : ha iss ghar ne hame kafi sath diya hai..........

Sangita :issi liye mai chahati hu ki iss ghar ko dobara se repair or painting kar le.........

Ramesh : tum sahi kah rahi ho hume iss ghar ko repair or painting karana chahiye........

Sangita : to kisi ache contractor ko contract de do na..........

Ramesh : thik hai aaj mai office jate waqt Ram bhai se bolker kuch labour ghar bhijawa deta hu.. .......

Sangita :arre ye kya bohot sara kam hai ghar par kya aap chhuti nahi le sakhate.........

Ramesh :nahi jaan office me bohot kam hai..........

Sangita bohot fraustate ho rahi thi........Hoti bhi kyu na itne sare mard ghar me honge Sangita ko unke samane sara kam karna hoga.........Ramesh aur Rahul dono ko Sangita ke chahare pe frustration saf dikhayi de rahi thi.........

Rahul ki nazar Sangita pe hi bani huyi thi.........Rahul khud samaj nahi pa raha tha ki usse ye kya ho raha hai..........Uski samaj me nahi aa raha tha ki wo yu apni hi mummy ko itni gandi nazaro se kaise dekh sakhata hai.........

Ramesh: don't worry jan Rahul tumhari madat kar dega..........

Sangita mere taraf dekhate huye boli.........

Sangita : aaj tak isne kabhi meri madat ki hai..........

Rahul : ooh sorry mummy Lekin aaj pakka mai apki madat karunga..........

Sangita khush hote huye boli..........

Sangita : sach tum meri madat karoge..........

Rahul :ji mummy............

Ramesh :lo ab tumhari problem solved ho gayi ab mai office chalta hu...........

Sangita :arre apne nashta to kiya nahi abhi............

Ramesh :rahane do ab mai office me hi nashta kar leta hu.

Ramesh Sangita ko by bol kar office ke liye nikal gaya..........aur Sangita Rahul ke taraf dekhate huye ek janlewa muskan ke sath boli............

Sangita : beta mai kitchen ka kam khatam kar leti hu tab tak tum TV dekho..........

Rahul :ji mummy..........

Sangita wapas kitchen ke taraf jane lagi..........Rahul Sangita ki gand ko hi dekh raha tha jo behad sexy lag rahi thi hilate huye.........Sangita ke butts Sangita ke chalane pe swing kar rahe the..........Sangita ki badi gand ko yu sexy tarike se hilata dekh Rahul ka lund puri tarah tight ho chuka tha..........Ab tak Sangita kitchen me ja chuki thi aur mai bhi uth kar apne bed room me chala gaya.........

Rahul apne room me gaya aur apne bed pe beth gaya..........Rahul khud se ladane laga taki wo in ashlil khayalo ko apne dimag se nikal sakhe...........Lekin wo aisa nahi kar pa raha tha..........Rahul apne ashlil khayalo ke aage ghutane tek raha tha.........uske khayalo me bar bar Sangita aa rahi thi...........

Rahul Sangita ko jabhi imagine karata usse sirf Sangita ke bade bade boob's, gand ,chikana pet aur uspe gahari sexy nabhi hi yad aa rahe the........Rahul apne ashlil khayalo ke aage hara ja raha tha.........uska lund Sangita ki wajah se pura tight hoke tha.........Rahul ne socha thoda sa so leta hu fir jake uske ye ashlil khayal uske dimag se nikal jayenge..........

Rahul apne bed par let gaya or apni aakhe band kar li.........Rahul apna man sthir karane ki koshish karane me laga huwa tha.........Achanak Rahul apni khayalo ki dunya me chala gaya.........usne dekha wo apne ghar ke hall me betha hai......... Sangita ek pink saree me window ke pass khadi hai..........

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Sangita ek mast sexy pose me khadi thi aur behad khubsurat lag rahi thi......... Rahul bhi wahi sofe pe beth kar Sangita ko nihar raha tha..........Sangita bhi bohot sexy or janlewa muskan or nashili nigaho se uske upper tir chala rahi thi..........Rahul bhi puri hawas se Sangita ko dekh raha tha..........

Sangita kuch iss angle se khadi thi ki........Rahul Sangita ke blouse me kaid bade bade boob's ko dekh sakhata tha.........Sangita ne itna tight blouse pahan rakha ki Sangita ke bade bade boob's ki golayi saf dikh rahi thi..........

Tabhi Sangita ek sexy muskurahat ke sath mere taraf palati........Sangita jis tarah nashili nigaho se usse dekh rahi thi.........uska lund itna tight ho gaya aur pant me tent ban gaya.........Sangita Rahul ke pant me bane tent ko dekh rahi thi...........

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Rahul ki nazar Sangita ki chikani kamar pe gayi jo behad sexy thi..........Rahul Sangita ki patali parde wali saree se Sangita ki sexy gahari nabhi tak dekh pa raha tha.........Sangita ye ache se janti thi ki mai unke sharir ke har hisse ko nihar raha hu.........

Sangita ne jan buz kar apne pet ke upper se apni saree hatayi...........Ab Rahul ki aakho ke samane Sangita ka nanga chikana pet tha..........Rahul Sangita ki sexy gahari nabhi ko khul ke dekh sakhata tha...........Rahul ka man Sangita ke pet ko chumane or chatane ka kar raha tha..........Sangita ki sexy nabhi me apni juban dal ke uski ki nabhi chusane ka kar raha tha..........

Sangita ek sexy or matakati chal ke sath mere taraf badi........Sangita jaise jaise apni kamar lachka ke Rahul ke taraf badh rahi thi.........Waise hi uske lund me current sa lag raha tha uska lund fadfada raha tha.........

Sangita mere karib aayi or behad sexy andaj me mere thik samane sofe par bethi.......... Ek min ke liye usse aisa laga jaise Sangita uske lund pe beth rahi ho..........Sangita ek sexy pose me muskurate huye sofe pe bethi thi..........

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Sangita ek kamsin kali lag rahi thi..........Rahul ko Sangita ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise wo usse chudai ke liye invite kar rahi ho...........Rahul ko Sangita ke gulabi hoth dekh kar aisa lag raha tha.........uske ke hotho ka sara ras pi lu.........

Sangita : kya huwa beta tumhe bohot pasina aa raha hai..........

Rahul :kya karu mummy mere samane jo itna hot mall betha hai garmi to badhegi hi..........

Sangita: to apni garmi buza lo na fir beta.........

Sangita uthi or matakate huye window ke taraf jane lagi.........Rahul ki nazar Sangita ki mast hilati huyi sexy gand par thi........Sangita ki gand ki fakke bohot sexy tarike se ek dusre se takra rahe the..........Sangita jake window pe hat rakh kar zuk kar khadi ho gayi...........

Sangita ki back side ko Rahul ne niharana shuru kiya.........Rahul ne Sangita ki gori chikani pith se start kiya..........Rahul ke moo me Sangita ki nangi chikani pith dekh kar pani aa raha tha..........Rahul apne hotho par apni juban fer raha tha........tabhi Sangita ne piche mood kar dekha aur muskurane lagi.........

Rahil Sangita ki gand ko niharane laga.........Sangita ki gand mast gol matol thi..........Sangita ki sexy gand ko dekh kar Rahul apna lund masal raha tha..........Ye sabh dekh kar Sangita muskura rahi thi...........Rahul samaj gaya Sangita jan buz kar muze apni gand dikha rahi hai.........


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Rahul apni jagga se utha aur mummy ke taraf badha.......Sangita Rahul ko hi dekh rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi........Rahul Sangita ke pass gaya aur Sangitako dekhate huye khada huwa..........Sangita ne apni nazre sharam ke mare zuka li.........

Sangita apna moo dusri taraf karte huye khadi ho gayi........Sangita apni pith or gand Rahul ko dikha rahi thi........Rahul samaj gaya ki Sangita chahati hai wo uski gand se khele...........Rahul ne Sangita ki kamar pe apne hat rakhe or Sangita ki kamar pakad li........Jaise hi usne Sangita ki kamar pe hat rakhe Sangita ki ek siskari nikal gayi............

Mummy :isssss......!

Sangita ne apni aakhe band kar li..........Rahul ne Sangita ko diwar se sathaya........aur Sangita ki saree pakad ke piche se Sangita ki kamar tak utha li..........Sangita ka moo khula ka khula rah gaya tha..........Jaise hi Rahul ke hat Sangita ke nange butts dabochane ke liye badhe........Sangita ke moo se ek awaj nikal aayi.........

Sangita :Rahul utho beta workers aa gaye hai.........

Rahul ne jaise hi aakhe kholi usse ye ahsas huwa ki wo apne khayalo ki dunaya me tha...........Sangita to uske samane khadi thi........Sangita ne ek mast red saree pahan rakhi thi.........

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Rahul :arre mummy aap or yaha kya workers itane jaladi aa gaye hai..........

Sangita :Ha wo log aa gaye hai Kya tum niche hall me aaoge.........

Rahul :bas mummy mai 2min me aata hu.........

Sangita :ok........

Sangita bahar chali gayi aur phir Rahul bhi kuch der bad niche gaya........Rahul aur Sangita ne sara kam mil kar nipata liya.......Kam ke doran jabhi Rahul Sangita se touch hota to uske andar current sa lag jata.........usse khud samaj nahi aa raha tha ki ye kaisa attraction hai uska apni hi uski mummy ke taraf.........Dophar ke 2 bajane ko aaye the...........

Sangita : tumhe bhuk lagi hogi beta kya mai tumhe kuch khane ke liye bana du..........

Rahul : aree nahi mummy aap ne bohot kam kiya hai aaj mai apko or kam nahi dena chahata..........

Sangita :aree nahi beta muze koi kam jada nahi ho raha.........

Sangita ne magie banayi aur hum dono sath mil kar magie khayi......phir sara kam sham 5 pm tak chalata raha fir workers chale gaye..........Rahul aur Sangita fresh ho kar chai pite huye sofe par bethe the.........

Sangita :thank you beta ,tumhare madat ke bagair na jane mai kaise karti itna sara kam..........

Rahul :Isme kya bat hai mummy akhir ye hamare hi ghar ka kam hai or maine to apni hi mummy ki madat ki hai..........

Sangita :mera pyara beta..........

Rahul :mummy mai thoda apne friend ke yaha ho aata hu..........

Sangita : thik hai beta.........

Rahul ne apni bike nikali aur uss thikane ki taraf nikal pada jaha Nikhil or wo hamesha cigrate or daru pite the..........Tabhi usse watsup pe Nikhil ka msg aaya ki mere ghar par koi nahi hai aaja or niche address diya huwa tha..........Rahul kabhi Nikhil ke ghar gaya nahi tha iss liye muze uska ghar malum nahi tha..........Nikhil ke bataye address ke taraf mai nikal padha........
 
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Rahul apne bed par leta huwa tha....... tabhi ek khubsurat aurat jo black bra panty me thi.......... Wo Rahul ke bed room ke darwaje pe khadi thi........uska pura badan mast gora tha aur chamak raha tha.......... Seductive andaaj me Rahul ko muskurate huye dekh rahi thi......... tabhi Rahul ke kano me ek awaj gunji....... " Rahul..... Rahul..... utho beta..... jaldi utho" ......... Rahul apni aakhe malate huye kholta hai.........uske samne uski mummy Sangita khadi thi as usual..........


Rahul : Gm mummy..........

Sangita : Gm beta....... jaldi utho aur niche aao.........

Sangita Rahul ke room se bahar chali jaati hai.........

Rahul ( man me) yaar akhir meri ye dream girl hai kon.......lekin jo bhi hai hai badi dhasu........lekin aaj salli chudane se bach gayi mummy ki wajah se..........

Rahul as usual daily routine ke sath collage gaya to usse uska dost Nikhil mila......Nikhil aaj kuch jada hi khush lag raha tha...... Rahul ne apne ashlil khayalo pe badi mushkil se kabu paya tha.........Rahul ko ab dar tha ki kai Nikhil uske dimag me anab shanab bate na bhar de...........

Nikhil :chal collage garden me tuze kuch dikhata hu..........

Rahul :kya dikhayega...........

Nikhil :abe tu garden me to chal...........

Fir Rahul Nikhil ke sath garden me chala gaya.......Wo dono ek ped ke niche bethe.........

Rahul :ab bata kya dikhana hai tuze..........

Nikhil :usse pahle tuze malum hai humari nayi teacher ka nam kya hai.........

Rahul :nahi kya hai..........

Nikhil :humari nayi teacher ka nam Archana hai.........

Rahul :tuze yahi batana tha kya........

Nikhil :nahi yaar tuze kuch dikhata hu..........

Nikhil ne apne bag me se laptop nikala........Nikhil ne laptop on kiya or wo ek secret files me gaya.........Uss secret file me kuch nude sex drawings thi..........

Nikhil ne ek drawing pe click kiya..........Rahul uss drawing ko dekh kar hakka bakka rah gaya...........Wo drawing humari teacher archana ki thi.........jisame wo kitchen me puri nangi hoke kitchen slab pe zuki huyi hai........aur uski gand Nikhil apna lund dal ke hai..........Sath me uss drawing me Archana mam ke pic pe mom likha huwa tha Nikhil pe son likha huwa tha..........

Rahul :ye kya hai be..........

Nikhil :meri fantasy hai mai apni mummy ki kitchen me baja raha hu.........

Rahul : abe sale apni maa ke bare koi itna galat nahi soch sakhata or koi maa apne bete ke sath aisa nahi kar sakhati..........

Nikhil :tu sala bohot murkh hai aurat ko sirf lund se matlab hota hai fir chahe wo kisika bhi ho..........

Tabhi Nikhil ne Rahul ko kuch real incest stories dikhayi jisame maa beto ke sex pics bhi the..........Tabhi Nikhil ne Rahul ko ek drawing dikhayi jo ek aurat ki thi jo purinangi thi..........

Nikhil ne uske bade bade boob's pe lajwab brown nipples the jo bohot mast lag rahe the.........Nikhil ne uss aurat ko ek mangalsutra pahnaya tha or sath me ek mast si nose ring or payal pahana rakhi thi..........Nikhil ne uss drawing ke niche meri maa likh kar tha..........

Rahul ek min ke liye apni mummy Sangita ko iss rup me imagine karane laga........jisase uske lund me ubhar aane laga.........tabhi usse ahsas huwa ki wo apni mummy ke bare me soch raha hai..........

Rahul ko laga mai kuch jada hi isme inwal ho gaya hu muze khud ko rokana chahiye.........Maine ye sabh soch ke enjoy to bohot kiya lekin ye galat hai.........Ye sare thoughts bohot matter karate hai ki mai apni mummy ko kaise imagine karta hu...........

Nikhil ke sath collage me Rahul ka pura din issi topic pe bat chalati rahi.......Sham ko jab mai collage se ghar gaya to maine dekha papa sofe pe bethe hai.........

Ramesh : arre beta tum aa gaye collage se.........

Rahul :ha papa lekin aap bohot jaldi aa gaye office se.........

Ramesh :ha beta wo aaj office jada kam nahi tha.........

Rahul :matlab aap kal bhi jaldi aayenge............

Ramesh :nahi beta kal se to humara ek important project kam chalu ho raha hai..........

Rahul :to kal se aap bohot busy rahoge..........

Ramesh : Ha beta kal se mai bohot busy rahunga..........

Tabhi Sangita kitchen se bahar aayi.........Sangita ke hat me stray tha jisme chai ke cup the........Sangita apni kamar lachkate huye Rahul aur Ramesh ke taraf aane lagi........ Rahul Sangita ki chikani kamar ko hi dekh raha tha jo mast gori cheekhani aur lachkili thi..........Sangita ki chikani sexy kamar dekh kar Rahul ka gala sukh raha tha...........

Sangita unke pass gayi aur Ramesh ko zuk kar chai dene lagi.......Sangita ke zukane se Sangita ki gand mast saree me chipak kar bahar nikal gayi.........Sangita ki itni lajawab chaudi masal dar gand Rahul ke aakho ke samane thi.........Sangita ki gand ko dekh kar Rahul ka lund pant me fadfadane laga tha.........Rahul ko apne ashlil khayalo pe bilkul koi control nahi raha tha.. ........

Rahul (man me) wah kitni mast gand hai mummy ki.......Dil kar raha hai mummy ki gand pe hat feru or mummy ki gand ko apne se dabau........

Tabhi Sangita Rahul ke taraf palati aur Rahul ko chai dene ke liye zuki........Sangita jaise hi zuki Rahul ki nazar Sangita ke bade bade boob's pe gayi........Sangita ke boob's to jaise blouse se bahar aane ke liye machal rahe the.........Rahul Sangita ke bade bade boob's ke bich darar dekh pa raha tha..........Sangita wahi baju me beth gayi.........

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Sangita : Ramesh hamara ghar kafi purana ho gaya hai.........

Rahul : ha iss ghar ne hame kafi sath diya hai..........

Sangita :issi liye mai chahati hu ki iss ghar ko dobara se repair or painting kar le.........

Ramesh : tum sahi kah rahi ho hume iss ghar ko repair or painting karana chahiye........

Sangita : to kisi ache contractor ko contract de do na..........

Ramesh : thik hai aaj mai office jate waqt Ram bhai se bolker kuch labour ghar bhijawa deta hu.. .......

Sangita :arre ye kya bohot sara kam hai ghar par kya aap chhuti nahi le sakhate.........

Ramesh :nahi jaan office me bohot kam hai..........

Sangita bohot fraustate ho rahi thi........Hoti bhi kyu na itne sare mard ghar me honge Sangita ko unke samane sara kam karna hoga.........Ramesh aur Rahul dono ko Sangita ke chahare pe frustration saf dikhayi de rahi thi.........

Rahul ki nazar Sangita pe hi bani huyi thi.........Rahul khud samaj nahi pa raha tha ki usse ye kya ho raha hai..........Uski samaj me nahi aa raha tha ki wo yu apni hi mummy ko itni gandi nazaro se kaise dekh sakhata hai.........

Ramesh: don't worry jan Rahul tumhari madat kar dega..........

Sangita mere taraf dekhate huye boli.........

Sangita : aaj tak isne kabhi meri madat ki hai..........

Rahul : ooh sorry mummy Lekin aaj pakka mai apki madat karunga..........

Sangita khush hote huye boli..........

Sangita : sach tum meri madat karoge..........

Rahul :ji mummy............

Ramesh :lo ab tumhari problem solved ho gayi ab mai office chalta hu...........

Sangita :arre apne nashta to kiya nahi abhi............

Ramesh :rahane do ab mai office me hi nashta kar leta hu.

Ramesh Sangita ko by bol kar office ke liye nikal gaya..........aur Sangita Rahul ke taraf dekhate huye ek janlewa muskan ke sath boli............

Sangita : beta mai kitchen ka kam khatam kar leti hu tab tak tum TV dekho..........

Rahul :ji mummy..........

Sangita wapas kitchen ke taraf jane lagi..........Rahul Sangita ki gand ko hi dekh raha tha jo behad sexy lag rahi thi hilate huye.........Sangita ke butts Sangita ke chalane pe swing kar rahe the..........Sangita ki badi gand ko yu sexy tarike se hilata dekh Rahul ka lund puri tarah tight ho chuka tha..........Ab tak Sangita kitchen me ja chuki thi aur mai bhi uth kar apne bed room me chala gaya.........

Rahul apne room me gaya aur apne bed pe beth gaya..........Rahul khud se ladane laga taki wo in ashlil khayalo ko apne dimag se nikal sakhe...........Lekin wo aisa nahi kar pa raha tha..........Rahul apne ashlil khayalo ke aage ghutane tek raha tha.........uske khayalo me bar bar Sangita aa rahi thi...........

Rahul Sangita ko jabhi imagine karata usse sirf Sangita ke bade bade boob's, gand ,chikana pet aur uspe gahari sexy nabhi hi yad aa rahe the........Rahul apne ashlil khayalo ke aage hara ja raha tha.........uska lund Sangita ki wajah se pura tight hoke tha.........Rahul ne socha thoda sa so leta hu fir jake uske ye ashlil khayal uske dimag se nikal jayenge..........

Rahul apne bed par let gaya or apni aakhe band kar li.........Rahul apna man sthir karane ki koshish karane me laga huwa tha.........Achanak Rahul apni khayalo ki dunya me chala gaya.........usne dekha wo apne ghar ke hall me betha hai......... Sangita ek pink saree me window ke pass khadi hai..........

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Sangita ek mast sexy pose me khadi thi aur behad khubsurat lag rahi thi......... Rahul bhi wahi sofe pe beth kar Sangita ko nihar raha tha..........Sangita bhi bohot sexy or janlewa muskan or nashili nigaho se uske upper tir chala rahi thi..........Rahul bhi puri hawas se Sangita ko dekh raha tha..........

Sangita kuch iss angle se khadi thi ki........Rahul Sangita ke blouse me kaid bade bade boob's ko dekh sakhata tha.........Sangita ne itna tight blouse pahan rakha ki Sangita ke bade bade boob's ki golayi saf dikh rahi thi..........

Tabhi Sangita ek sexy muskurahat ke sath mere taraf palati........Sangita jis tarah nashili nigaho se usse dekh rahi thi.........uska lund itna tight ho gaya aur pant me tent ban gaya.........Sangita Rahul ke pant me bane tent ko dekh rahi thi...........

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Rahul ki nazar Sangita ki chikani kamar pe gayi jo behad sexy thi..........Rahul Sangita ki patali parde wali saree se Sangita ki sexy gahari nabhi tak dekh pa raha tha.........Sangita ye ache se janti thi ki mai unke sharir ke har hisse ko nihar raha hu.........

Sangita ne jan buz kar apne pet ke upper se apni saree hatayi...........Ab Rahul ki aakho ke samane Sangita ka nanga chikana pet tha..........Rahul Sangita ki sexy gahari nabhi ko khul ke dekh sakhata tha...........Rahul ka man Sangita ke pet ko chumane or chatane ka kar raha tha..........Sangita ki sexy nabhi me apni juban dal ke uski ki nabhi chusane ka kar raha tha..........

Sangita ek sexy or matakati chal ke sath mere taraf badi........Sangita jaise jaise apni kamar lachka ke Rahul ke taraf badh rahi thi.........Waise hi uske lund me current sa lag raha tha uska lund fadfada raha tha.........

Sangita mere karib aayi or behad sexy andaj me mere thik samane sofe par bethi.......... Ek min ke liye usse aisa laga jaise Sangita uske lund pe beth rahi ho..........Sangita ek sexy pose me muskurate huye sofe pe bethi thi..........

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Sangita ek kamsin kali lag rahi thi..........Rahul ko Sangita ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise wo usse chudai ke liye invite kar rahi ho...........Rahul ko Sangita ke gulabi hoth dekh kar aisa lag raha tha.........uske ke hotho ka sara ras pi lu.........

Sangita : kya huwa beta tumhe bohot pasina aa raha hai..........

Rahul :kya karu mummy mere samane jo itna hot mall betha hai garmi to badhegi hi..........

Sangita: to apni garmi buza lo na fir beta.........

Sangita uthi or matakate huye window ke taraf jane lagi.........Rahul ki nazar Sangita ki mast hilati huyi sexy gand par thi........Sangita ki gand ki fakke bohot sexy tarike se ek dusre se takra rahe the..........Sangita jake window pe hat rakh kar zuk kar khadi ho gayi...........

Sangita ki back side ko Rahul ne niharana shuru kiya.........Rahul ne Sangita ki gori chikani pith se start kiya..........Rahul ke moo me Sangita ki nangi chikani pith dekh kar pani aa raha tha..........Rahul apne hotho par apni juban fer raha tha........tabhi Sangita ne piche mood kar dekha aur muskurane lagi.........

Rahil Sangita ki gand ko niharane laga.........Sangita ki gand mast gol matol thi..........Sangita ki sexy gand ko dekh kar Rahul apna lund masal raha tha..........Ye sabh dekh kar Sangita muskura rahi thi...........Rahul samaj gaya Sangita jan buz kar muze apni gand dikha rahi hai.........


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Rahul apni jagga se utha aur mummy ke taraf badha.......Sangita Rahul ko hi dekh rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi........Rahul Sangita ke pass gaya aur Sangitako dekhate huye khada huwa..........Sangita ne apni nazre sharam ke mare zuka li.........

Sangita apna moo dusri taraf karte huye khadi ho gayi........Sangita apni pith or gand Rahul ko dikha rahi thi........Rahul samaj gaya ki Sangita chahati hai wo uski gand se khele...........Rahul ne Sangita ki kamar pe apne hat rakhe or Sangita ki kamar pakad li........Jaise hi usne Sangita ki kamar pe hat rakhe Sangita ki ek siskari nikal gayi............

Mummy :isssss......!

Sangita ne apni aakhe band kar li..........Rahul ne Sangita ko diwar se sathaya........aur Sangita ki saree pakad ke piche se Sangita ki kamar tak utha li..........Sangita ka moo khula ka khula rah gaya tha..........Jaise hi Rahul ke hat Sangita ke nange butts dabochane ke liye badhe........Sangita ke moo se ek awaj nikal aayi.........

Sangita :Rahul utho beta workers aa gaye hai.........

Rahul ne jaise hi aakhe kholi usse ye ahsas huwa ki wo apne khayalo ki dunaya me tha...........Sangita to uske samane khadi thi........Sangita ne ek mast red saree pahan rakhi thi.........

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Rahul :arre mummy aap or yaha kya workers itane jaladi aa gaye hai..........

Sangita :Ha wo log aa gaye hai Kya tum niche hall me aaoge.........

Rahul :bas mummy mai 2min me aata hu.........

Sangita :ok........

Sangita bahar chali gayi aur phir Rahul bhi kuch der bad niche gaya........Rahul aur Sangita ne sara kam mil kar nipata liya.......Kam ke doran jabhi Rahul Sangita se touch hota to uske andar current sa lag jata.........usse khud samaj nahi aa raha tha ki ye kaisa attraction hai uska apni hi uski mummy ke taraf.........Dophar ke 2 bajane ko aaye the...........

Sangita : tumhe bhuk lagi hogi beta kya mai tumhe kuch khane ke liye bana du..........

Rahul : aree nahi mummy aap ne bohot kam kiya hai aaj mai apko or kam nahi dena chahata..........

Sangita :aree nahi beta muze koi kam jada nahi ho raha.........

Sangita ne magie banayi aur hum dono sath mil kar magie khayi......phir sara kam sham 5 pm tak chalata raha fir workers chale gaye..........Rahul aur Sangita fresh ho kar chai pite huye sofe par bethe the.........

Sangita :thank you beta ,tumhare madat ke bagair na jane mai kaise karti itna sara kam..........

Rahul :Isme kya bat hai mummy akhir ye hamare hi ghar ka kam hai or maine to apni hi mummy ki madat ki hai..........

Sangita :mera pyara beta..........

Rahul :mummy mai thoda apne friend ke yaha ho aata hu..........

Sangita : thik hai beta.........

Rahul ne apni bike nikali aur uss thikane ki taraf nikal pada jaha Nikhil or wo hamesha cigrate or daru pite the..........Tabhi usse watsup pe Nikhil ka msg aaya ki mere ghar par koi nahi hai aaja or niche address diya huwa tha..........Rahul kabhi Nikhil ke ghar gaya nahi tha iss liye muze uska ghar malum nahi tha..........Nikhil ke bataye address ke taraf mai nikal padha........
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