Adultery Raj-- the family's hero

[RAJ SINGH NIRWAN]

Update 56 posted

 

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Update 12 posted

nice update..!!
raj ki gaand to phategi gi.. pehla din tha, ye hal to hona hi tha.. sunil se raj ki achhi jamne lagi hai.. nayi chammal chhallo ki bhi netry ho gai hai story me.. abhi kam age ke han raj aur richa.. raj me ghussa zayada hai.. to richa me akad.. khub jamegi dono me.. sunil ko bhi jald hi raj se hosla mil jayega.. raj kisi se kamm thodi na hai.. wo to cher ke rakh dega... par abhi raj ko apne guru ki maanni padegi.. raj ke liye ye bhi to ek tranning hi hai.. khud par kaabu pana.. yahan agar richa badh chadh kar bolegi, to raj ko khud par kaabu to paana hi padega, warna dand k liye tayyyar rahe... guruji to raj ko mafi dene se rahe.. lagta hai raj ek baar school me bhi galti karega.. tab hi raj ko sahi se sabb samjh ayega.. k khud par kaabu paane wala bhi bahadur hota hai... richa jaisi bhi hai, raj se badhkar to ho nahi sakti.. raj ko is sabb baton se anjaan nahi rehna chahiye.. insaan ki parkh ka ye rang bhi usay sahi se samjh lena chahiye.. warna dunya ko hyper karke kisi ko kuch karne layak rehne hi nahi deti...

 

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Update 13


RECAP------ Pichle update mai ap sabi ne dhekha ki Raj ka school tak paidal jana aur jheel kinare maidam richa ka comment marna aur final lunch ke waqt comment pass karna


AB AGAI.....


Mere gusai ke level bahut badh gaya tha hath mai jo kanch ka gilass tha usai bi tod diya tha daba ke aur jab uski bate sahan na huvi toh maine palat ke piche dhekha richa ki pith thi meri taraf aur wo bole ja rahi thi jisai soon soon ke mera sarir kanp raha tha main apne man pe bahut control kar raha thamain khada ho gaya aur man mai kosis kar raha tha ki shant rahu aur jab gusa futne he wala tha tab sunil ne jaldi se hath pakad liya mera aur bola

Sunil---Raj please shant ho ja bhai gusa mat kar

Main -hath chod mera aj mai isai sabak sikha ke rahunga

Sunil—bhai 2mint baat sunle baith ke phir jo chahe wo kar lena

Main uski baat sunke baith gaya aur bola bol.....

Sunil ---Bhai gusai mai ake jo kadam uthta h wo rakhsas hota h ya pashuuuu hota h kyoki wo dono he iske parinam ni sochte h ki usai kya hoga aur kya ni ek baar socho kya ye tum he ho kya tuje koyi prove kare aur tu ho jayega kya raj he jo itni dur guruji se sikhne aya h. phir agai usne kaha ki us ladki ne ek baat kahi tuje aur teri budhi kharab ho gayi sare wade tod chal diya sabak sikhne usai jabki tuje yanha 5 saal yanha rahna h aur agai kitne he bade kaam karne h....pahle soch phir kadam utha...

Raj—mere dil mai sunil ki kahi baate kis sui ki tarah ghus gayi jisne dard ke sath sochne pe majbur kar diya par dimag abi bi garam tha maine ass pass dhekha toh sirf 18 se niche age wale he bache the phir maine ek devilsmile li aur khada ho gaya aur pahuch gaya maidam ki table ke saamne...

Aur jor se bola goodmorning everyone please yanha dhayan de ....Koyi ye bata sakta h ki ye jo 3 rows alag se h khane ke liye inpe jo student baithe h including me ye seats kinke liye ..h.main phir richa ki taraf dhek ke oh hello madam including u apse bi puch raha hu bhonk baad mai lena pahle sunlo aur jawab de do..ha toh koyiii batayega boys and grills

Richa –tumahari heemat kaise huvi muje aise bolne ki

Main----tikhi mirchi wahi bata raha hu soon toh le....
Ha toh koyi batayega

10th class ka ek ladka ye seat ya toh ek scholer ko ya phir jo jenious pepar pass karke ate h ya phir unhe milti h jo most powerfull background se hote h
Sabi bacho ke same reply tha phir muda main richa ki aur dheke kaha.

Main---Toh miss richa for your kind information ye 3 wajah jismai se ek wajah se main yanha baitha hu
1—main scholer ho sakta hu
2—main jenious test pass karke aya hu
3—i m the person who have a strong background......means most powerfull background..

Phir uske samne uski ankho mai dhek ke pahle 2 background agar mere huve toh ap mera jarur kuch ukhadne ki soch sakti ho becouse u r belonging rich family otherwise mera 3rd background huva toh u know very well ki main apka kya ukhad lunga uska apko andaza bi ni so next time kuch kahne se pahle uske results bi soch lene
Boooommmm
Charo taraf shanti thi aur main bus richa ki ankho mai dhek raha tha ..phir main bola u r beautifull girl without brain...hamesa yaad rakhna miss richa "HAR FATHER KA EK GOD FATHER HOTA H " phir main baith gaya lunch karne

Sunil---bhai tu h kya gusai mai alag tha aur ab alang dhek sabko kaise dhek rahe h tuje bhai tu h kya multi personality h kya

Main tu dimag mat laga chal class mai chalte h aur hum chal diye class mai

Hamare jane ke baad richa ko bahut insulted feel ho raha tha sath he fati huvi bi thi uski kyoki usai school ka agada pichada sab pata tha usai ye pata tha ki maine jo baat kahi wo fully correct h ...richa ki friend maine kaha tha na kal bi tuje kisi ko bi provoke mat kiya kar par aj bi wahi kiya aur kya mila sivaye khud ki bezzati ke uski baat sahi thi dhek wo acha ladka h isliye usne kal ni kaha kuch par aj phir tune usai ulta kaha toh kahega he wo yanha padh raha h matlb wo special h richa

Richa –toh kya main ni hu shweta special

Shweta –maine aisa kab kaha tu yaar jayda soch mat bus ulaj mat kisi se hum yanha padhne aye h

Richa –ulaj toh chuki hu aur usai bhugatna bi padega dhek lena ....

Idhar hum 2 baje tak school attend ki aur bhag khade huve ashram ke liye sunil jaldi jaldi chal raha tha

Main – rukja kamine tuje kutte kaate sale dushman h tu mera dushman
Sunil—jab late pahuchega na toh nikalna uthak baithak aur phir sochna dushman hu ki dost hu ha ha ha ha ha

Main tu hans tere dant todunga mai aj .....aur hum dono bhagne lege kabhi rukte toh kabhi bhagte main phir se 15 minut late ho gaya gate par guru ji taiyar the

Guruji -----ao Raj tum15 minut late ho uthak baithak lagao aur sunil tum bi late ho tum 300 uthak baithak lagao
Aur phir kya suru ho gaye hum uthak baithak lagane meri jab tak 100 hoti sunil 200 laga chuka tha aur phir 300 bi laga li usne aur uske chahre pe thakan bi ni thi phir guruji ne kaha jao khana khao aur sham ko 5 baje akele raj tum ana aur sunil tum apni class lene ashram mai jana ...actualy sunil purana h toh uski class alag he chalti h

Sunil aur main ek sath ji guruji bole

Aur hum chal diye maine piche mudke dhekha toh guruji muskra rahe the meri toh samaj se bahar tha phir maine sunil ki taraf dhekha aur kaha aaa maaa sale tera pichwada bi aj kutte ne kaat liya ho aisa ho rakha

Sunil-- bola bhai 5 minut mai 300 uthak baithak aasan ni hoti h yaar isliye aisa ho gsya par tujse raat ko baat karunga main aur jor se hasne laga

Main—raat ko main samja ni

Sunil—samaj jayega chal khana khake aram karte h
Humne khana khane gaye toh wanha sabi bache khana kha rahe the aur unmai wo bache bi the jinhone subhe comment mara tha matlb 10 class ka bacha gaurav jisne comment mara tha.usne phir comment mara aj toh uthak baithak bi lagayi h bache ne dudh pilao koyi isai ha ha ha

Sunil—bhai rahne de kutto ka kaam he hota h bhonkna .

Main—chal tikh h par ek din mouka milne pe jarur isko iska jawab dunga jisai ye jindgi bhar ni bhulega...aur phir hum agaye apne room aur rest karne lage......

Time 4.45 pm


Main—uuuuuyiiii maaa pair dard huva re are yaar ab dard ho raha h pura sarir

Sunil ---15 minut h tere pass guruji ke pass pahuchne ke liye sochle tuje andaza bi ni hoga jo punishment milegi sab dard hoga phir samja bhag jaldi se ...

Main---- taiyar huva aur pahuch gaya guru ji ke pass ......

Idhar haveli mai
Surendra--- dhek kavita main tera bada bhai hu tikh se bola kar
Kavita --- pahle khud bolna sikh lo phir muje bolna raj ke sath kaise bolte ho ap apko pata he h.......toh muje sikhane ki jarurat ni h

Surendra aur babita--- tu jayda bolne lagi ruk abi teri sikayat chachi se karte h

Kavita – jisai bolna h bol do muje dar ni h aur chali jati h raj ke room mai kyonki wo aur mamta wanhi sote h

Aj ke liye itna he
Sath bane rahe ..........

nice update..!!
ab raj ki aur richa ki nok zok chalti rahegi school me..lekin raj usse bhi sudhar dega..!! ab dekhte hai raj kaise aage badhta hai..aur yeh gourav bhi kuchh jyada hi bol raha hai..!! komal achhese surendra aur babita ko unki aukat dikhayi hai..!!

 

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Update 14

RECAP----

Pichle update mai apne padha ki Raj ne kis prakar richa ko karara jawab diya aur kis prakar sunil ne usai samjaya....aur haveli mai kavita aur surendra ki nokh jhonk.....


AB Agai--------


Surendra aur Babita jab choti chachi ke pass pahuche sikayat lekar toh choti chachi ka para chad gaya tha but so sad wo chah kar bi punish ni kar sakti thi dono ko kyoki dono he dada ji ko sikayat kar deti isliye chachi chup he rahi ....

In ashram...


Guruji –Raj beta insaan alag alag 100 yoniyo mai janam lene ke baad manusya yoni mai janam leta h h ...aur insaani roop mai janam lene ke baad uske pass ye awsar hota h ki wo ache karam kar dubara munusya yoni mai janm pa sake isi liye sadev sachayi ke raste pe chalo ache karam karo.......


Main---guruji kuch parshan h puch sakta hu...


Guruji ---pucho putra


Main----Guruji ache aur bure karam kya hote h kaisa pata chalta h ki ye acha h ya bura karam h


Guruji—Raj jis karya se kisi dusre pashu ya prani ka aahit na ho aur us karya se dusro ka bhala ho wo karya ache karam kahe jate h aur jis karya mai swarth sidh ho aur Dusre jeev jantuo ka aahit ho arthath bura ho wo karya bure karam mai ate h..


Main – samaj gaya guruji


Guruji ---putra insan mai achayi bi niwas karti h aur burayi bi ye hum par nirbhar karta h ki hum kise chunte h jo achayii ke raste par chalta h uske samne chunotiyo ka paahaad hota h parantu uski rakhsa sadev parbhu karte h aur jo burayi ke raste par chalte h uske karam bi bure aur umar bi kam he hoti h ...

Main guruji ka updesh 2 hour se lagatar sun raha tha aj ka din sirf aur sirf achayi burayi aur jeevan ke udesya par tha jisai mai kafi had tak samaj gaya tha..


Guruji--- putra ab main tume jo jadi buti se bani huvi golide raha hu ye raat ko sote time l ek goli lena aur kisi ko bi iske bare mai mat batana na aj na kal samje ye tumahari din ki thakawat dur rakhegi aur taakat layegi....

Main ji guru dev kahke unko naman kiya aur agaya room mai sunil aya ni tha toh maine guru ji se mili book geeta khol li aur usai padhne laga padh ke jaise mere vichar saaf hote ja rahe the muje shant mil rahi thi maine kuch he page padhe the itne mai sunil bi agaya

Sunil –bhai main mu hath dhoke aya phir chalte h khana khane

After dinner Hum dono he late gaye sone ke liye maine Guruji ne jo goli di thi wo li aur so gaya


Next morning –in front of guruji


Guruji –Sunil raj ko yoga pura tum karaoge 30 din tak bina koyi dheelayi ke anytha tum jante ho jhut ka parinam kya hota h

Sunil ji guru ji


Aur lag gaya karwane mere sarir ki thakan dur ho gayi thi goli ki wajah se aur yoga karne se jo sarir kal ki mahnat se akad gaya tha wo khul gaya aur phir bhage hum taiyar hone school ke liye

Main jaldi se school dress pahan taiyar huva aur sunil ko bulaya

Main—aja be jaladi

Sunil—aya bhai ... Le agaya chale ab

Main—chal bhai aur suru kari humne kabhi bhagna toh rukna aise karte karte hum school aj 1.13minut mai pahuche


Sunil - --not bad bro 2 minut ka improve ment h aur hans diya jor se


Main –sale bakre ki jaan chali gayi aur kasayi ko maza bi ni aya ..... Chal koyi ni aur kosis karunga

In class......

Maths teacher jo question puchungi bacho uska answer board pe akar likhega wo jeetega ....ok

Sab bache yes mam

Aur question pucha and guess what hand raise kiya richa maidam ne aur jaake likh diya aur ake baith gayi mere agai aur boli dheere se jenious my foot...jo muje sunayi de gayi


Main—hansa aur dheere se bola bacha jeet gaya ye lo toffeee gusa ni hote aur muskaraya .....uski jali par us waqt boli kuch ni ....

Interval huva richa palat kar boli teri toffee ye le khale haar kar mu kadwa huva hoga na ye le aur phir chali gayii main muskra kar chal diya lunch karne

School off gaya tha again race suru ho gayi thi mere liye maine aur sunil ne lagaya jor aur kosis karte kartr bi 1hour aur 12minut lage

Guruji ne same punishment di phir se hamne rest kiya sham ko main 5 baje guruji ke pass pahucha

Guruji --- Raj hamesa yaad rakhna kosis kosis jo parisharm man laga ke kiya jata h saflta usmai he milti jabardast ki gayi ya bina man ke kiye gaye karya kabhi puurn nahi hote h isliye sadev man laga ke karya kar apna 100partishat do ...aur bi bahut kuch gyan diya unhone main wapas room mai agaya aur book padhi maine....jo guruji ne di h muje...

SAME ROUTIN 30DAYS TAK CHALA AFTER 30DAYS

TIME MORNING 5AM
IN FRONT OF GURUJI


Guruji--- Raj ab se ye naye tarike apnane h apko jo pichle 30 dino main sikha tha subhe subhe usai apko roj 15 minut mai bina sahayta ke dohrana h bina samay lagaye ......aur aj se apko roj school 50 minut mai pahuchna h ..samaj gaye ye apke sath 6 mahine chalega .....baki hum sham ko batayenge apko ab ap jaiye
Main ji guruji aur hum dono he chale gaye

Main—abe badi muskil se toh 1 hour 8 minut mai pahuchta hu aur guruji ne 1hour mai se 10 minut aur kam kardiye bache ki jaan lenge kya hey bhagwan bache pe daya kar ........phir dono taiyar huve aur chal diye school
Same route tha same bache the bus aj huva ye ki main school 1 hour 5 minut mai pahuch gaya main toh soch kar hiran tha ki ye pahle kyo na kar paya..

Sunil –Beta gale mai hoti h na toh sab ho jata h chal ab

Main class mai baitha he tha ayi richa maidam ponitail karke maine uski taraf smile ki aur wi gusai se dhek rahi thi
Ek mahine mai itna irretate jo kar diya tha ...

Richa –shweta man karta h mu tod du iska sadi sakal ka.

Shweta—usne smile he toh pass ki h yaar sweet lagta h muje ..aur ek tu h jo ladti rahti h....pata ni tuje kyo nafrat h usai i like him yaar kitna swweet h

Richa--- sweet aur ye isai acha toh mera kutta h kamina kanhi ka..

Dono u he batyati rahi jab tak teacher na agaya

Again next 3 months bi nikal gaye phir

1 saal bi nikal gaya

2 saal bi nikal gaye

3 saal nikal gaye....


Morning time
In front of guruji.......


Guruji --- tumahra sarirak vikass bi kisi 21 varsh ke ayu ke bache se kam ni h ab time h tumahri yudh kalao ka sikhne ka kathore parisharm karne ka ab shuruwat karni h tume wo jiske liye tum yanha laye gaye the pichle 3 salo mai humne tumahara saririk aur mansik vikas aur sath mai tumhe chustila aur furtila har yudh niti mai nipurn kar diya h ..putra kabhi mat sochna ki ye yudh niti gyan naye jamane mai lagu ni hota h putra gyan ka upyog karne wala chahiye planning har jagah chahiye hoti h .....abi jao aur 10th class ki books le lo ..kal se wahi samay yoga karna..aur sham 4 baje mere pass

Morning mai main sunhe khada huva aur yoga kiya uske baad samne ped tha uske upar se rassi latak rahi thi usko pakad kar 3 baar upar niche chada phir 100 pushups mare aur 4 feet gadha khoda ye roj ka tha morning mai ye sirf mera warm up h
Phir main room mai gaya aur taiyar huva time huva tha 7.30 am mere pasd bag ni tha wo sunil leke ata h maine lagayi runing aur bade bacho ke sath correct 8 a.m pahuch gaya jismai last 1km speed full thi 3 saal mai adat ho gayi thi ...

Guys yanha bata du ki raj ne yanha admission 7th mai liya tha jo galti se pichle updates mai 6 th class likh diya tha

Aj ke liye itna he story abi jaldi agai bhadayi h kyo ki bache ke roop mai 14 updates bahut h. Next updates mai raj ka action dhekne ko milenge .....aur richa ke sath masti
Sath bane rahe....

Richa ki bato se Raj ka sabra tut hi gya tha pr apne dost ki baat sunkr sochne pr majboor ho gya or Jo jvab diya hai usse koi rule bhi nhi tuta or sabak bhi de diya pr richa thahri attitude vali use yah apni bejjati lagi hai ab vo mauke ki talash me hai dekhte hai kab milta hai use mauka...
Asram pahuchne me 15 minute late ho gya tha Jisse Raj ko 100 dand pelne pade or uske dost ko 300 guru ji unki Chal dekh kr mushkura rhe the sahi hai guru, guru hi hota hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

 

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Update -15

Recap --- raj 18years ka ho gaya h aur uski training bi 3 years ki puri ho chuki h aur guruji ab usai combat ki sabi details sikhayenge jismai sabi types honge ....

Ab agai.....

Main school pahucha aur wanha sunil pahle se he pahuch gaya tha wo jaldi nikalta h kyo ki uski aur meri speed mai diffrence h main aur sunil thoda fresh huve are bhai running karke aye h toh thodi khud ki haalat tikh ki aur chal diye hum class mai wanha pahle he richa aur shweta group baitha tha main jake richa ke pass baith gaya

Main – hi sweet heart

Booom hhhhhh ye kya bhai log apna lounda hi sweet heart bola .....wo bi richa ko

Richa --- hi Raj late ni ho kya...


Main--- tum bolti toh raat se he yahi intezaar karta tumahra sweetu sona meri


Richa--- Bus bus bade aye tum jayda udo mat samje ....aur hasne lagi


Main- uski smile muje bahut pyari lag rahi thi main bola aisi hansti raha karo na bahut achi lagti ho

Richa bus meri ankho mai aur main uski ankho mai dhek muskarate rahe the


Shweta and sunil ---oh laila majnu class mai ho


Hum dono he jhep gaye aur baki ladke ladkiya hasne lage


Intro --- Richa goswami D/O Anirudh goswami ek successfull business men ki beti h jiske Baap ka bahut bada naam h delhi mai richa ek egostic girl but saaf dil ki ladki h aur bahut sundar gori aur haar body parts perfect curve mai h abi ki age ke according


Shweta singh---- Ye ek decent ladki h ye bi Dhelhi se h iske papa police commissioner h simple rahna pasand karti h
aur raj ko apna bhai jaisa manti h shweta ke Father ka naam Jogindar Singh h


Sunil—bhai bus kar


Main—Tum dono bus hamesa tang adaya karo aj tak ek kiss ache se ni karni di tum dono ne jab dhekho bich mai patar patar karte rahte ho agar tum dono u he karte ne toh main budhape tak kiss se agai ni soch paunga


Shweta aur sunil—hhhhhhhhhhh


Shweta—Bhai raj ap kabse itna bigad gaye..h


Main-chup kar bhai ka ghar mat basne dena tu aj pata raha hu shadi baad mai hogi par tum dono hame ishaq mushaq toh karne do 18 ka ho haya hu...yar Wo dono chup ho gaye aur meri awaj nikli maaaaa...auuuchhh...
Actually richa ne khinch ke ek kohni mere pait mai mari thi


Richa- chup ho jao raj tum bigad gaye ho


Raj—tumhi ne toh bigada h na ...apne husan ke jaal mai fansa ke 2 saal toh khub ladti rahi aur ab dhekho mere sath he baith ti ho shweta na samjati toh aj bi ladti rahti tum muje masum ladke se..


Sunil—Bhai agar maine samjaya na hota tum dono ko toh aj dosti bi na hotiiiii...ishaq toh bhul he jao

Main---ok ok fine ap sab sahi aur main ladaku thik h...

Aur sab hasne lage
Aise he jab bi time milta hum dono laila majnu ko hum chonch ladane lagte ........

Group ke kuch aur ladke ladkiya
Suchitra
Kriti
Komal
Sunita
Ravi
Javed. Ye sab baki member h aur sab Raj se jalte h kyoki richa aur shweta hamesa uske sath rahti h baki se Raj kuch khass lagav ni rakhta h ab jalegi he bhai handsome hunk agar kisi aur ladkio ko bhav na de toh jalegi he wahi haal baki sari ladkiyo ka h.....komal suchitra kriti ravi javed sabi sath baithke planning kar rahe the ki kaise inhe alag kare..


Ravi—yaar richa usai kuch karne ni deti h hum iska fayda utha sakte h kriti bura mat manna tera figure aur teri beauty he usai seduce kar alag kar sakti h


Komal—ha yaar javed Sahi h ye ho sakta h agar tu kosis kare toh
Sabi ne ha milayiii


Kriti-- main free mai kyo karu tume pata h na papa kitna controle karte h i need money main yanha test pass karke ayi hu toh tum samaj he jao..


Javed --- ok kitne rs legi is kaam ke muje richa pasand h muje wo chahiye har haal mai


Kriti 5 lakh rs

Sab what????


Kriti---yaar meri image bi toh down hogi na toh samjo kuch toh harzana milna chahiye na...

Sabi log ok done kya show hoga maza ajayega tu planning kar dheere dheere trust jeet time kitna bi lage but success full chahiye h hame teri planning....


Kriti--- muje kuch chije chahiyengi uska arrangement kar dena jab kahu


Javed --- done pakka mil jayegi jo tu chahe....

Sabi hasne lage idhar hum log azad panchi love birds bane off period mai park mai sath baithe the .........


Richa -tum thoda had mai raha karo sabke saamne flirt karte rahte ho


Raj---richuu flirting ni i realy love u yaar par tu jaanke bi kabhi kabhi anjaan banti h ......
Aise he dono pyar mohobbat ki baate karte rahe
phir school off hone pe main aur sunil wapass ashram aagaye...


Evening 4pm
Guruji ke pass


Guruji – putra Aj ka ye gyan sadev yaad rakhna atyadhik viswas kisi par mat karna jisai pahle parkha na ho. duniya ki sabse badi murkhta hoti h bina parkhe viswas karna.isliye viswas karo par pahle check karlo ki wo viswas layak h ya nahi aksar log pyar dosti aur rishto mai ankh band kar viswas karte h aur dhokha khate h tumhe aisa ni banna h kuch dair soch kar guruji ne kahaTumahare pita ko bi dhokha mila tha isi ke chalte .. unhono bi bina parkhe viswas kiya tha.....aur phir gurji chup ho gaye


Raj----- hhhhhh main ankhe badi karke kya gurudev abi apne kya kaha


Gurji--- wahi jo tumne suna sachayi tume khud janni hogi ki kisne unka viswas todkar unhe mara ye tumhara pahla sach h aur dusra sach h unhe dundh ke maarna hoga putra tumahare pita koyi sadharan insaan ni the. sahdev ek sachayi ka rakhshak aur apno pe jaan lutane wala tha ..wo ek sher tha jisai samne se mara ni ja sakta tha wo ek aisa hathiyaar tha jiski dhar ke agai sab feeke the uska naam sunte he log jo galat karte the dar ke maare moot dete the par usko dhoke se mara tumhari maa ka aj tak ni pata chala h ki wo kanha isliye tumhe wo hathiyaar wo kahar ban ke un rakhsaso pe tutna h jinhone tumhare pita ki hatya kar tumhari maa ko pata ni jinda bi rakha h ya usai bi maar diya h...


Main--- meri ankho se jharne ki trah ansuu bah rahe the mera dil ro utha tha main aj tak yahi sochta raha wo accident se mare the par hakikat ye thi unhe mara gaya tha payar se ya dhokhe se ya kisi dost ne par itna muje pata lag gaya tha wo jarur mere pita ka koyi apna tha....jisai wo apni jaan se jayda viswas karte the .....
Meri ankho mai ansu aur gusa lava ki trah bhadak raha tha ....


Guruji--- ne mere kandho pe hath rakha aur kaha ki putra tumahre pita ek sache insaan the tum unki santaan ho tumahari maa pyar ki murat thi jisne sahdev ko pyar se jeeta usai ek raah dikhayii
Ab tumhe wo banna h jo tumhare Dada ji chahte unki bi chahat h ki unke bahu aur bete ki atma ko shanti mile tum badla lo unka ...


Main--- bus jamin pe ghutne ke bal baitha ansu baha raha tha aur bus unko yaad kar gusai mai jal raha tha ye gusa is kadar badh gaya tha ki mereman mai pratisodh ki wo jawal jal chuki thi jo sirf aur sirf rakht lahuu mang rahi thi unka jinhone mere mata pita ko china tha mujse jinhone muje anath banya h.....

Maine asman ki aur dhek kar kaha main Aj kasam khata hu ki jinhone bi chahe wo koyi bi ho chahe mera apna ya paraya wo na jinda rahega na wo marega usai na nark milega na swarga usai saja na ishwar dega na yamraj denge unhe saja main dunga ajeevan saja jo maut se buri hogi kyo ki main

NIRWAANA HU
MERE NAAM MAI H NIRWAANA H AUR MAIN MOKHS DETA NI HU TADPATA HU TADPATA HU USKI ROOH KO

Guruji--- putra krodh insaan ki budhi ko brasht karta h


Main – gurudev kaise shant karu apna krodh ko jab muje pata chal gaya ki mere pita ke sath kya huva tha.....

Guruji --- putra pahle taiyar ho jao phir ek yojana ke tahat pata karna sab aur badla lena ab khade ho jao aur kal se subhe milna muje kal se hum training suru karenge jo atyant kathin hogi aj aram karo aur man ko shant karo aur sunil ko mere pass bhej dena abi...


Main ji guruji kahke agaya aur chal diya sunil ki class yani training ki taraf wanha wo close combat sikh raha tha maine usai kaha sunil guru ji ne bulaya h tumhe......


Sunil ne ek dafa meri taraf dhekha aur chal gaya guru ji ke pass

Guruji ---Ao putra ao

Sunil— guruji Raj ko kya huva h wo bahut. Udas dikh raha tha

Guruji -kyoki aj usai sachayi ka ek ansh matra pata chala h isliye wo dhukhi h

Sunil ---kaisi sachayi guruji

Aur phir guruji ne usai sab bataya ...jisai sun sunil ke bi ansuu agaye aur usne kaha guruji mera is duniya mai koyi ni h apke alawa ek bhai jaisa dost mila h kya main uske liye kuch ni kar sakta

Guruji – kar sakte ho putra uske liye he toh bulaya h tumhe bachpan se aj tak jo taiyari chupke chupke karayi h suska upyog ab karoge.. tum Raj ka wo saya banogo jo kisi ki bi nazar mai aye bina uski madad karega ....aur ye jo ashram h na sunil beta ye school ye sab Raj ke Dada aur uske pita sahdev ki wajah se he wo koyi sadharan pariwar se ni h wo ek raaj pariwar se h Raj tumhe apna bhai manta h isliye sachayi ni batayiaur usai bi puri sachayi ni pata h aur tum bi usai ni bataoge ki maine tumhe sach bataya h tum uske sath normal rahna ..ab jao usai tumahari jarurat h....

Sunil ji guruji

Aj ke liye itna he
Dhekte h agle update mai Raj kya karta h
Sath bane rahiye....

nice update..!!
bhai 3 saalo me toh raj aur richa lovers ban gaye..aur bhai pichhle update me humne dekha tha ki shweta richa se bol rahi thi ki raj kitna achha hai aur handsome hai..aur yeh achanak raj ko shweta ka bhai bana diya..yaar yeh shweta ke sath galat kiya bhai aapne..!! guruji ne sahi samay par raj ko bataya hai ki uske papa ki mout dhoke se huyi hai kyunki ab javed, kriti aur team milkar raj aur richa ko todna chahte hai aur kriti paiso ke liye raj ke close jakar raj ko richa ke samne hawasi sabit karna chahti hai..lekin guruji ne jo raj ko shiksha di hai ki kisi pe bhi aankh band karke vishwas mat karna yeh raj ke bahot kaam aanewali hai aur ab guruji ne sunil ko hamesha raj ke sath saaye ki tarah rehne ko kaha hai toh sunil bhi raj ke sath kuchh galat nahi hone dega..!! ab raj jarur apna badla lega aur abhi guruji ko bhi ek doubt hai ki raj ki maa zinda hai ya mar gayi..!!

 

[Omicron_21]

waiting for next update...!!

 

[Rahul]

Update -15

Recap --- raj 18years ka ho gaya h aur uski training bi 3 years ki puri ho chuki h aur guruji ab usai combat ki sabi details sikhayenge jismai sabi types honge ....

Ab agai.....

Main school pahucha aur wanha sunil pahle se he pahuch gaya tha wo jaldi nikalta h kyo ki uski aur meri speed mai diffrence h main aur sunil thoda fresh huve are bhai running karke aye h toh thodi khud ki haalat tikh ki aur chal diye hum class mai wanha pahle he richa aur shweta group baitha tha main jake richa ke pass baith gaya

Main – hi sweet heart

Booom hhhhhh ye kya bhai log apna lounda hi sweet heart bola .....wo bi richa ko

Richa --- hi Raj late ni ho kya...


Main--- tum bolti toh raat se he yahi intezaar karta tumahra sweetu sona meri


Richa--- Bus bus bade aye tum jayda udo mat samje ....aur hasne lagi


Main- uski smile muje bahut pyari lag rahi thi main bola aisi hansti raha karo na bahut achi lagti ho

Richa bus meri ankho mai aur main uski ankho mai dhek muskarate rahe the


Shweta and sunil ---oh laila majnu class mai ho


Hum dono he jhep gaye aur baki ladke ladkiya hasne lage


Intro --- Richa goswami D/O Anirudh goswami ek successfull business men ki beti h jiske Baap ka bahut bada naam h delhi mai richa ek egostic girl but saaf dil ki ladki h aur bahut sundar gori aur haar body parts perfect curve mai h abi ki age ke according


Shweta singh---- Ye ek decent ladki h ye bi Dhelhi se h iske papa police commissioner h simple rahna pasand karti h
aur raj ko apna bhai jaisa manti h shweta ke Father ka naam Jogindar Singh h


Sunil—bhai bus kar


Main—Tum dono bus hamesa tang adaya karo aj tak ek kiss ache se ni karni di tum dono ne jab dhekho bich mai patar patar karte rahte ho agar tum dono u he karte ne toh main budhape tak kiss se agai ni soch paunga


Shweta aur sunil—hhhhhhhhhhh


Shweta—Bhai raj ap kabse itna bigad gaye..h


Main-chup kar bhai ka ghar mat basne dena tu aj pata raha hu shadi baad mai hogi par tum dono hame ishaq mushaq toh karne do 18 ka ho haya hu...yar Wo dono chup ho gaye aur meri awaj nikli maaaaa...auuuchhh...
Actually richa ne khinch ke ek kohni mere pait mai mari thi


Richa- chup ho jao raj tum bigad gaye ho


Raj—tumhi ne toh bigada h na ...apne husan ke jaal mai fansa ke 2 saal toh khub ladti rahi aur ab dhekho mere sath he baith ti ho shweta na samjati toh aj bi ladti rahti tum muje masum ladke se..


Sunil—Bhai agar maine samjaya na hota tum dono ko toh aj dosti bi na hotiiiii...ishaq toh bhul he jao

Main---ok ok fine ap sab sahi aur main ladaku thik h...

Aur sab hasne lage
Aise he jab bi time milta hum dono laila majnu ko hum chonch ladane lagte ........

Group ke kuch aur ladke ladkiya
Suchitra
Kriti
Komal
Sunita
Ravi
Javed. Ye sab baki member h aur sab Raj se jalte h kyoki richa aur shweta hamesa uske sath rahti h baki se Raj kuch khass lagav ni rakhta h ab jalegi he bhai handsome hunk agar kisi aur ladkio ko bhav na de toh jalegi he wahi haal baki sari ladkiyo ka h.....komal suchitra kriti ravi javed sabi sath baithke planning kar rahe the ki kaise inhe alag kare..


Ravi—yaar richa usai kuch karne ni deti h hum iska fayda utha sakte h kriti bura mat manna tera figure aur teri beauty he usai seduce kar alag kar sakti h


Komal—ha yaar javed Sahi h ye ho sakta h agar tu kosis kare toh
Sabi ne ha milayiii


Kriti-- main free mai kyo karu tume pata h na papa kitna controle karte h i need money main yanha test pass karke ayi hu toh tum samaj he jao..


Javed --- ok kitne rs legi is kaam ke muje richa pasand h muje wo chahiye har haal mai


Kriti 5 lakh rs

Sab what????


Kriti---yaar meri image bi toh down hogi na toh samjo kuch toh harzana milna chahiye na...

Sabi log ok done kya show hoga maza ajayega tu planning kar dheere dheere trust jeet time kitna bi lage but success full chahiye h hame teri planning....


Kriti--- muje kuch chije chahiyengi uska arrangement kar dena jab kahu


Javed --- done pakka mil jayegi jo tu chahe....

Sabi hasne lage idhar hum log azad panchi love birds bane off period mai park mai sath baithe the .........


Richa -tum thoda had mai raha karo sabke saamne flirt karte rahte ho


Raj---richuu flirting ni i realy love u yaar par tu jaanke bi kabhi kabhi anjaan banti h ......
Aise he dono pyar mohobbat ki baate karte rahe
phir school off hone pe main aur sunil wapass ashram aagaye...


Evening 4pm
Guruji ke pass


Guruji – putra Aj ka ye gyan sadev yaad rakhna atyadhik viswas kisi par mat karna jisai pahle parkha na ho. duniya ki sabse badi murkhta hoti h bina parkhe viswas karna.isliye viswas karo par pahle check karlo ki wo viswas layak h ya nahi aksar log pyar dosti aur rishto mai ankh band kar viswas karte h aur dhokha khate h tumhe aisa ni banna h kuch dair soch kar guruji ne kahaTumahare pita ko bi dhokha mila tha isi ke chalte .. unhono bi bina parkhe viswas kiya tha.....aur phir gurji chup ho gaye


Raj----- hhhhhh main ankhe badi karke kya gurudev abi apne kya kaha


Gurji--- wahi jo tumne suna sachayi tume khud janni hogi ki kisne unka viswas todkar unhe mara ye tumhara pahla sach h aur dusra sach h unhe dundh ke maarna hoga putra tumahare pita koyi sadharan insaan ni the. sahdev ek sachayi ka rakhshak aur apno pe jaan lutane wala tha ..wo ek sher tha jisai samne se mara ni ja sakta tha wo ek aisa hathiyaar tha jiski dhar ke agai sab feeke the uska naam sunte he log jo galat karte the dar ke maare moot dete the par usko dhoke se mara tumhari maa ka aj tak ni pata chala h ki wo kanha isliye tumhe wo hathiyaar wo kahar ban ke un rakhsaso pe tutna h jinhone tumhare pita ki hatya kar tumhari maa ko pata ni jinda bi rakha h ya usai bi maar diya h...


Main--- meri ankho se jharne ki trah ansuu bah rahe the mera dil ro utha tha main aj tak yahi sochta raha wo accident se mare the par hakikat ye thi unhe mara gaya tha payar se ya dhokhe se ya kisi dost ne par itna muje pata lag gaya tha wo jarur mere pita ka koyi apna tha....jisai wo apni jaan se jayda viswas karte the .....
Meri ankho mai ansu aur gusa lava ki trah bhadak raha tha ....


Guruji--- ne mere kandho pe hath rakha aur kaha ki putra tumahre pita ek sache insaan the tum unki santaan ho tumahari maa pyar ki murat thi jisne sahdev ko pyar se jeeta usai ek raah dikhayii
Ab tumhe wo banna h jo tumhare Dada ji chahte unki bi chahat h ki unke bahu aur bete ki atma ko shanti mile tum badla lo unka ...


Main--- bus jamin pe ghutne ke bal baitha ansu baha raha tha aur bus unko yaad kar gusai mai jal raha tha ye gusa is kadar badh gaya tha ki mereman mai pratisodh ki wo jawal jal chuki thi jo sirf aur sirf rakht lahuu mang rahi thi unka jinhone mere mata pita ko china tha mujse jinhone muje anath banya h.....

Maine asman ki aur dhek kar kaha main Aj kasam khata hu ki jinhone bi chahe wo koyi bi ho chahe mera apna ya paraya wo na jinda rahega na wo marega usai na nark milega na swarga usai saja na ishwar dega na yamraj denge unhe saja main dunga ajeevan saja jo maut se buri hogi kyo ki main

NIRWAANA HU
MERE NAAM MAI H NIRWAANA H AUR MAIN MOKHS DETA NI HU TADPATA HU TADPATA HU USKI ROOH KO

Guruji--- putra krodh insaan ki budhi ko brasht karta h


Main – gurudev kaise shant karu apna krodh ko jab muje pata chal gaya ki mere pita ke sath kya huva tha.....

Guruji --- putra pahle taiyar ho jao phir ek yojana ke tahat pata karna sab aur badla lena ab khade ho jao aur kal se subhe milna muje kal se hum training suru karenge jo atyant kathin hogi aj aram karo aur man ko shant karo aur sunil ko mere pass bhej dena abi...


Main ji guruji kahke agaya aur chal diya sunil ki class yani training ki taraf wanha wo close combat sikh raha tha maine usai kaha sunil guru ji ne bulaya h tumhe......


Sunil ne ek dafa meri taraf dhekha aur chal gaya guru ji ke pass

Guruji ---Ao putra ao

Sunil— guruji Raj ko kya huva h wo bahut. Udas dikh raha tha

Guruji -kyoki aj usai sachayi ka ek ansh matra pata chala h isliye wo dhukhi h

Sunil ---kaisi sachayi guruji

Aur phir guruji ne usai sab bataya ...jisai sun sunil ke bi ansuu agaye aur usne kaha guruji mera is duniya mai koyi ni h apke alawa ek bhai jaisa dost mila h kya main uske liye kuch ni kar sakta

Guruji – kar sakte ho putra uske liye he toh bulaya h tumhe bachpan se aj tak jo taiyari chupke chupke karayi h suska upyog ab karoge.. tum Raj ka wo saya banogo jo kisi ki bi nazar mai aye bina uski madad karega ....aur ye jo ashram h na sunil beta ye school ye sab Raj ke Dada aur uske pita sahdev ki wajah se he wo koyi sadharan pariwar se ni h wo ek raaj pariwar se h Raj tumhe apna bhai manta h isliye sachayi ni batayiaur usai bi puri sachayi ni pata h aur tum bi usai ni bataoge ki maine tumhe sach bataya h tum uske sath normal rahna ..ab jao usai tumahari jarurat h....

Sunil ji guruji

Aj ke liye itna he
Dhekte h agle update mai Raj kya karta h
Sath bane rahiye....

Mast update dost

 

[iMUNISH]

Story ek aise ladke ki jiske maa baap ko dhokhe se maar diya aur bachpan mai he usai pyar ke liye taras ne ko chod diya gaya ..tab uske dadaji ne uski ungli thami.Apne dard ko chupa kar usai layak banane ke liye 5 saal dur kar diya janha mila usai uska pyar aur usne bi usai dhokha de diya..ab uska maksad sirf badla lena tha jab wo louta toh NIRWANA banke tuta dushmano par jo tadpata tha tadpata tha dushman ki rooh ko....aur is safar mai usai jaan se jayda pyar karne wali mili par pyar ke naam se he usai nafrat ho gayi thi...pyar emotion aur action ka safar....Raj -- the family's hero

Congratulations bro on your new story

 

[iMUNISH]

Update 1

Mandawa—


Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar

Chcha -shaitan singh

Chachi-indra devi

Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h

Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h

Name----- surendra singh

gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega

Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh

Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.

Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h

Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai
Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h

Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h


Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan
jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h


Dadi ---sumitra devi
Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..
Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko

Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge

Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .

Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate

Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu

Raj – chachi main agaya

Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..

Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h

Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h

Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi

Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.


Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......

Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai
Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega

Dhasu update bro keep posting

 

[iMUNISH]

Update 2
Recap---
pichle update mai apne padha Raj ki family ka intro aur kuch pal Raj ke ki uska pura din kis prakar kat ta h


Ab agai.....


Khane ki table pe
Dada Jagmaal singh-- Nasta karte waqt sabko dhayan se dhekte huve

Note--

Naste ke waqt pariwar ka har shaks mojud hota h jo us waqt haveli mai mojud ho sirf ghar ki bahu he ni baith sakti h


Dada ji---- sumitra sab mojud h mera pota Nirwaana kanha h
Dada ji ke mu se ye sabd sunte he dadi ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo tirchi nigao se supriya aur indra ko dhekne lagi

Dada ji---maine kuch pucha h

Dadi--- wo yanhi h wo yanhi h bulwati hu mai... Indra jake bulao Raj ko abi ke abi aur apni aankh dikhati h Indra aur supriya ko... Jisai dhek ke dono ki haalat patli ho gayi aur wo foran Raj ko dhundne jati h


Badi c—pata ni kanha mar jata h manhoos aur ye budha aur budiya kha jate h muje aur badbadati huvi chathpar pahuch jati h aur Raj ko kone mai baitha dhekti h toh kahti h dhekho toh maharaj ko sabka jeena haram kar rakha h aur khud yanha baitha aram farma raha h aur cheekte huve kahti chal niche


Raj—muje pata tha ki muje neeche kya kahna h kyoki ye mera roj ka tha agar maine galat kah diya toh muje aur tourture sahna padega isliye main chup chap apna huliya tikh karke dada ji ke pass baith jata hu naste ke liye

Dada ji ------ beta kanha the apko pata h na hum apke sath he nast karte h


Raj—maafi Dada ji main upar chath pe tha aur samay ka pata he ni laga

Ab ye bata du ki Raj intelligent h aur akele sab sahne se aur is mahol mai tourture sahan karke samjdar ho gaya h is umar mai kyoki uski ek galti bahut bhari padti h... Usai khud pe.....

Ab agai

Dadi---beta Raj nasta karo

Raj – ji dadi aur nasta karne lag jata h aur man mai sochta bus pure din ka yahi ek pal shanti se gujrata h ya kavita ke sath khelte huve kyoki Dada ji ghar hote h tabi main kavita ke sath khel pata hu par ye baat choti chachi ko pasand ni h par wo Dada ji ke karan muje kuch kah ni pati h


Dada ji ---- beta Raj aj hum apko aj chetak pe gaanv ki sair kareyenge ap chaloge na hamare sath

Raj---- ji dada ji jarur chalunga apke sath hame bi gaanv dhekna h aur nasta khatm karke main taiyar hone chala jata hu main naha dhoke taiyar hoke main kavita ke pass jata hu .vo abi 4 saal ki h usko khilata hu laad karta aur uske gaal pe kiss karta hu aur wo bi meri dhekha dhek ek kiss gaal pe karti h bahut pyari h aur sweet h usai pyar se main kabuu bulata hu

Ye sab 2 ankhe dhek rahi thi ji ha ye choti chachi he thi jo gusai se dhek rahi thi muje nafrat toh ni thi par mujse pyar bi ni h unhe lagta h meri manusiyat unki beta bitiyo ko bi lag jayegi
Ab kyo unhe aisa lagta h ye toh muje bi ni pata h par agai pata lag jayega par ismai bi badi chachi ka hath h itna muje feel hota tha kyoki choti chachi badi chachi ki bahan jo h

Main neeche ake chale dadaji

Dadaji---- ha nirwana chalo aur hum unki ghodi chetak pe swar ho jate h aur nikal jate h sair par main pahli baar dadaji ke sath ja raha tha unke sir par kesariya rang ki pagdi thi aur pith pe 2nali tangi thi jo unke look ko he alag bana rahi thi...

Aisa ni h ki car ni h 3car aur bike sab h par dada ji toh thahre rajput jinka manna tha ki bhai ye sab bacho ki savari h Rajput ya toh godi pe ya sher pe savari karte h. Sher to muje baithane se raha toh ghodi he tikh h...


Raj- dadaji hum kanha ja rahe h


Dada ji ---beta panchayat h hum vanha ja rahe h. Hum apko isliye sath laye h taki ap bi sikhe ki asli shatriya ka Dharam kya hota h aur wo anyay ke virudh kaise khada hota h.. Raj beta hamesa ek baat dhayan rakhna anyay hote mat dhekna... Bado ko sammaan dena aur nari jati ki sadev raksha karna.... Kabi kisi beksur par julm mat karna.. Aise he kayi bate Raj ko batate h ..

Raj –dadaji anyay kya hota h aur usai kyo krona chahiye. Aur ye shatriya kya hote h...

Dada ji --- beta nirvaana shatriya wo hote h jo kisi ka bura na hone de apni ankho ke samne.. Kisi bhukhe ko bhukha na rahne de hamesa dharam ki raksha kare.. Bure karmo ka naash kare... Apko abi bahut sikhna h ap he toh is vansh ke purkho ki izzat bhadaoge unka maan bhadaoge... Ye kah kar Dada ji soch mai padh jate h
Note Raj hamesa haveli mai jo baithak hoti h wanha mojud rahta h toh usai kuch kuch pata h baithak ke bare mai..

Main – man mai bolta ja raha tha anyay ka virodh karna aur nari ka saman... Dharam ki rakhsa karna ye baate mere dimag mai bhuchal la rahi thi meri chamak rahi thi jaise jaise mai soch raha tha..

Raj par uske Dada ji ki bato ka bahut gahra asar ho raha tha

Aise he dono bate karte karte pahuch gaye vahidpura ki panchayat mai jo unki city se 10 km ki duri par thi ghodi ki awaj ate he sabke sab khade ho gaye sarpanch bi kyo ki sabko pata tha ki koun aya h khoff jo thaThakur jagmaal singh Nirwaan ka


Raj----- Tabi maine dhekha ek aurat bhagti huvi ayi aur Dada ji ke pair mai ghir gayi aur dadaji ne pair piche kiye aur kaha utho....stri jati pairo mai girne ke liye ni hoti h tri jati maa sherawali aur maa bhawani ka roop hoti h ....
Aurat roti huvi bolti h thakur saab meri beti loot gayii ye thakur Durjan singh ke yanha mere bimar hone ki wajah se aam karne gayi thi aur iski izat iske bete Durg singh ne loot li ab main kya karuu..garib ke pass izzat he hoti h wo bi ab na rahi h.


Raj--- maine dhekha dadaji ki ankhe gusai se lal ho rahi thi aur unke hath ki muthiya kas rahi thi tabi dadaji garje durjan singh........unki garjan sher jaisi thi maine dhekha sarpanch aur sab kamnp rahe the unhe pata tha ki Thakur saab nari jati pe anyay bardasht nahi kar sakte h.

Dadaji- durjan singh aur Durg singh tumne ghor paap kiya h tum dono ko dand milega tume is panchayat ke 56 gaanv se bahar nikala jata h aur durg singh tum inki putri se vivah karoge aur agar muje pata laga ki isai kuch bi huva ya dhokha ya dhuk diya toh durjan singh tumhare khandan ka naam mit jayega dharti se ye mera vachan h ma bhawani ki saugandh h muje.... ....

Dada ji ke sabd aur in sabdo ka arth sab jante the kyoki unki kathni aur karni mai koyi fark ni tha unhone pahle maa bhawani ki sougandh khake in 56 gaanv ke dakuo ko gajar muli ki trah kaat diya us samay khun ki nadiya bah gayi thi police bi unke gaanvo mai darti h kuch galat hone se kyo ki agar wo nikle toh khun ki nadiya bahni h


Main ----Dada ji bahut gusa
ho rahe h .kya aise he dharam ki raksha hotii.. Main man mai yahi sab sochta huva wapas dadaji ke sath haveli nikal gaya tha kyoki aj pahli baar dada ji ko maine aisa dhekha tha samay bit gaya aur hum ghar pahuch gaye . aj ke din ne mere dil mai ek jagah ek laava dafan kar diya tha ab kab bahar niklega pata ni par meri shuruwat vicharo ki ho gayi thi........ Sham ke 5 baj gaye the jab ghar pahuche


Dada ji – sabi ko hall mai bulate aur kahte h jald he Raj ka admission bi Sks school mai kara diya jayega wo bi ab surendra aur babita ke sang jayega school ..pahli class ganv se pass ki ab agai sks mai padhega . ..

Surendra aur Babita ---man mai bus yahi kasar rah gayi thi gaanv mai padh leta harami kabhi ka

Indra aur shaitan singh—bus yahi dhekhna rah gaya tha harmkhor hamare paiso pe phadega dadaji isai anathalya fenk kyo ni dete.... Ya mar kyo ni jata gir ke


Supriya---chalo acha h meri betiyo se dur rahega warna iski manoosiyat na lag jati meri betiyo ko


Dadi –ab tikh h roj ki khich khich kuch toh mitigi dophar tak toh ghar se dur rahega . ..


Raj—muje pata h Dada ji ko chod ke sab khus h ki unse adha din toh dur rahunga main taki unhe sakal na dhikne ko meri... Aur main raat ka khana khake sone chala gaya apne room mai mera room khub bada h dubble bed sari facility moujud h aur main so gaya..
ab dhekna agla din kya lata Raj ke liye......

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UPDATE-03
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Pichle update mai apne dhekha ki Raj ke man par dadaji ki bato ka gahra asar huva h aur jald he wo pass ki city ke bade school sks Admission karane jayega..

Ab agai...


Raj – main so raha tha aur alaram baj gaya muje roj 5.30 baje uthna hota h aur bhai aur didi ko uthana hota h jo muje apna mante he ni h main chala gaya dono ko uthane aur meri shurwat toh wahi pahle laat khane se aur phir thapad khane se he hoti h aj bi wahi huva aur muje mile dard , nafrat aur ansu jo meri takdeer ban gaye h pichle ek saal se. Sirf Sunday chod ke roj Yahi hota h mere sath. mere pass sivaye ansu ke aur kuch ni h bahar nikalne ke liye. yahi dhuk h ek 8 saal ke bache ka jo kisi ko wo na dikha sakta h aur na jata sakta h.

ye sab kuch Dada ji ko ni pata h kyoki wo subhe 5 baje he ghar se chale jate h sair par aur maine unhe kabi bataya ni darke ki kabhi aur bura na ho mere sath.

Surendra aur babita niche arahe the

Badi chachi--- agaya mere laal aao baitho aj tum dono ke pasand ke aloo ke parathe bane h bus babu ji ajaye

Surendra—maa is manhus ko kyo bhejti ho uthane ko pura din bekar chala jata h isai acha toh naukar rakhlo aur isai ghar se bhar nikalo pata ni isai kyo rakh rakha h na baap ka pata h na maa ka na iske maabaap ki koyi photo h ghar mai ..

Badi chachi—pata ni beta tere Dada aur dadi jane. kahte h ek din hamra vansh ki neev banega.. ma'am Roshan karega

Bade chcha ---- bade chacha surendra se Dada ji kahte h mere chote bhai Sahdev Aur Vidya ka beta h par maine toh bhai ke alawa kisi ko dhekha bi ni h kab usne shadi ki aur koun ladki thi pata ni h wo toh ghar se 18 saal ki umar mai chala gaya tha tab toh kunwara tha..

Raj -man mai ye chacha kya kah rahe Dada ji toh kahte h ki tere papa mummy tuje hospital leke gaye the tab accident huva tha... Par ye chacha aur chachi kya bol rahe h..

Kyoki ye sab Raj ne dadaji ke my se apne dost se baat karte waqt thoda suna tha apne mumy papa ke bare mai..

Choti chachi – kanha ghoom ho gaya h Re Tu ja baith ja chair pe naste ke liye ni toh pitaji hame sunayenge .

Bus aise he tane ate rahe koyi harami kahta toh koyi haramkhore toh koyi manhoos toh koyi kalank ka tikka etc etc.main bus sunta rahta tha aur upar wale se narajgi dhikhata tha par upar wale ne bi aankh band rakhi thi meri kismat pe

Dadi ji—bahar se are huge good morning Nirwaana beta

Main – good morning dadaji aur apni soch se bahar aya thoda sukoon milta h jab Dada ji ko dhekta hu wo pass hote h mere you San tension bhul hats hi. ek bache ka sahra maa aur baap hote h toh wo toh h ni isiliye dadaji h mere sab kuch h meri maa bi aur baap bi .

Dadaji – beta aj apka admission hoga school mai ap surendra aur babita ke sath abse car mai jayenge aur shaitan bheema ko boldo ek gadi hamesa inki car ke sath rahegi school se wapas ane tak

Bade chacha, choti chachi, aur badi chachi aur munimji jo mojud the aj sabki ankhe badii hogayi thi bheema ke naam se

bheema
Intro-Bheem singh ek anath h jisai dada ji 15 saal ki umar se Apne sath mai laye the dada ji ka khass h wafadari ki misal h dada ji ki taraf uthne wali unguli ya goli pahle isai hoke jati h ye bolta ni h sirf kholta h aur jisko kholta h wo dubara ni bolta h


Sab hairani se Dada ji ko dhek rahe the kyoki aj tak surendra aur babita ke sath security ke heesab se koyi ni gaya tha toh is manhoos nikamai anath ke sath kyu kyu kyu......

Main – Mere bolne se sab soch se bahar aye maine kaha Dada ji main kuch mang sakta hu apse


Dada ji – beta apko kabse mangne ki jarurat padh gayi sab apka he toh h aur dhyan se Raj ko dhekne lage.... Aur serious hoke kaha mango..

Main – dadaji main normal student banke jaunga jaise ek aam student school jata h koyi khass sahuliyat nahi chahiye na gaadi na kuch bus ek school bus mai... Ek sadharan student banke.

Dadi sumitra—ye kaisi baat kar rahe ho Raj apko pata h ap Thakur shamsher singh ke pote h log kya kahenge ki 56 gaanv pe raaj karne wale insaan ka pota aise araha h school. izzat gir jayegi hamari..

Bade chacha aur badi chachi . Choti chachi sabi ne sunaya matlb gayan diya izzat status bla bla bla

Dada ji – Dada ji kabse sabki sun rahe thr wo bolo khamosh........ Ho jao sabi . kunwar Raj singh Nirwaan sirf Raj banke kyo jana chahte h ap batayenge muje... Agar apka jawab sahi diya huva toh jarur jaisa ap kahenge waisa hoga warna ni.. Aur gaur se nirwaana ko dhekne lage


Main – kuch soch raha tha aur Dada ji ke puchne pe maine itna he kaha

"RESPECT"

Dada ji--- muskaraye aur unhone ha kah diya

Kisi ko bi ye baat samaj na ayi par Dada ji samaj gaye the ki RESPECT
Khandan se mile wo apki ni h. "RESPECT" wo h jo apne kamayi usi se apki pahchan banti h wahi apko samman dilati h duniya ke bich apka naam banti h aur wo banti h ya milti h apke karmo se...
Aur yanhi se surawat huvi

"RAJ—THE FAMILY'S HERO"


Aj ke liye itna he

Awesome update