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Recap – pichle update mai apne dhekha ki kriti dheere dheere apni adaao ka jadu raj pe chalane ki kosis kar rahi h ..wahi Raj ne apni school first fight ki party dene ki jagah decied ki h..aur sath he Raj ki training combat day one mai training ki jhalak dhekhi.....


Ab agai.....



Main traing krake wapas room ki taraf ja raha tha aur meri chaal aur haal aise the ki jaise koyi ladki ko chedne ke baad bheed se maar khata h wo toh shukra h ki sunil ni tha room mai warna hans hans ke mera khun jalata main chup chap apne kapde uthaye aur nadi kinare nahane chala gaya pani thanda tha toh sujan kuch toh kam huvi . Aur bahut aram mila maine naak band ki aur dubki maar li andar 4 minut tak andar yoga ki position mai baitha raha aur man ko shant kar upar agaya aur phir tablet li jo Xabhi sir ne di thi ..halat he kharab kar di unhone sarir pe har jagah dard tha phir utha main kapde pahne aur chal diya room ki taraf room abhi bi band tha toh main chal diya janha sunil training le raha tha knife se uske hath bahut he sharply aur smooth tarike se ghum rahe the main toh dhekta he rah gaya ki ye toh bahut advance h mujse ....thodi dair baad uski training khatm huvi aur hum wapas agaya meri chaal dhek samaj gaya wo..

Sunil --- kitni mariiii

Main-- bahut jayda

Sunil – suji toh ni

Main—nii dawyi le li thi bus dard h

Sunil – kisne mari guruji ne

Main ni xabhi sir ne

Sunil --- phir dawayi se kya hoga sui dhaga h mere pass silni padegi raat mai

Maine uski taraf dhekha usne meri taraf aur ha ha ha ha ha jor jor se hasne lage hum aur hanste rahe jab tak room na agaya.thodi dair hum u he lete rahe phir chal diye khana khane

In Dining hall

8 se 9 ke bich yanha sabi students aur trainers hote h kuch special trainee student aur trainers ke alawa aj guru ji bi mojud the hum dono ne unke paanv chuve toh unhone ashriwad diya aur kaha

Guruji --- sabi students dhayan se sune ap sabi yanha apne jindgi ke 5 saal kuch banne ke liye ate ho aur kamyab hoke ashram ka naam uncha bi karte ho bahar ki Duniya mai ...Har saal ki trah is saal bi free style turnament hoga jismai 3 saal pure karne wale se leke 5vi saal mai pahucne wale trainee student tak participate karenge ye ek aisa turnament jismai jeetne wale ko legendary trainer Pawan shergill se is baar free weapons ki training milegi ye ek golden opportunity h apke liye iske alawa agar kisi ko personaly training leni h toh 1cr fee deposit karwani hogi.....ok aj se 3 months ke baad ye turnament hoga toh sab taiyar ho jaye .......jeetne ke liye ji jaan laga de ....


Main—haar saal ye turnament hota h tune part ni liya kya.

Sunil – is baar lunga na teri jada mar gayi h sath he dimag bi hil gaya h bola h na unhe 3rd se 5th year wale trainee he le sakte h participate

Main – abe ghonchu tu bachpan se he yanha h toh sale tere years kitne jayda huve isliye kaha khair chod chal sone chalte h kal ki taiyari bi karni h ..

Aur hum dono room mai agaye maine guruji ki goli li jo lagatar 3 saal se le raha hu aur phir so gaye ..

Next day..
Sunday morning


Main 5 baje utha yoga kiya aur runing karne chala gaya actualy yoga aur runing mai daily he karta Hu taki aalas na rahe .main running karke nadi kinare pahucha tha toh sunil taiyaar tha hum nahaye ache se aur ashram agaye aur rest karne lage tab sunil bola


Sunil – tu yanha se 12 th ke baad chala jayega yaar main phir akela ho jaunga


Main—tu ulti baat mat kiya kar main milne aunga na hamesa tujse tu mera dost mera bhai h pagal kanhi ke


Sunil --- dhukhi man se hmmmm kya hum sath ni rah sakte hamesa ....


Main --- abe lugayi banega meri ...dhukhi mat ho hum hamesa sath he h duriya hame alag ni kar sakti h....


Sunil – bhai ek baat bata tu sach mai richa se pyar karta h ya attraction h


Main – atraction h ya love muje ye toh ni pata ha muje bahut khusi milti h uske pass hone se aur main chahta hu wo hamesa mere sath rahe .....sayad isai pyar he kahte h


Sunil ---ha sahi kaha tune par richa jitna main janta hu wo tuje rich family se samjti h isiliye tere sath h usai true love ni h...


Main – usai pyar h par wo choose ni kar pa rahi ki pyar ya paisa kis wajah se wo muje pasand karti h waqt sab jawab de dega sunil....chal rosoyi ghar chalte h halka fulka khate h aj Sunday h toh sab khula huva h


Hum dono wanha pahuche toh sabi turnament ki he baat kar rahe the kuch senior bache hame dhek ke bole jo hamesa se comment marte aarahe the lo bache bi agaye dudh do be dono ko aj tak dudh he pi rahe h dhekna kanhi turnament mai aake dudh wale daant na tudwale maine unki taraf dhekha toh unmai se ek aur bola ale le bache ko gusa aagaya main khada hona chahta tha par sunil ne rok diya

Maine kaha aj ni sunil bahut din ho gaye h is rajesh aur rohit ko comment martr have aj ni aj hamari bari h main khada hoke pahuch gaya unke pass


Main—Dudh ke daant bhale he na tute ho mere par tere daant jarur todunga turnament mai tum dono jo miya biwi ki trah rahte ho na ek bole toh dusra jarur bolta h tum dono ki khujli wanhi ground mai sabke samne mitaunga 3 saal se jo bhonkna tha bahut bhonk liya tum dono ne bahut izzat karli humne beta ab bole na toh sale school se ...khair chod tuje turnament mai he sabak sikhaunga.

Rohit aur rajesh--- toh beta tu bi sunle haar gaya toh sabke samne maafi mangega .aur hamesa jhuk kar salam karega

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Main—manjur h .......aur tum haare toh tum apni galti ke liye maafi mangoge sab juniors se itna kahke main mud gaya aur bola yaad rakhna mukarne wale logo ko main maaf ni karta hu ......aur main chala aya table pe humne nasta kiya aur ashram mai thoda ghume phir 4 badi chadar thode bowls ,masale,pani pine ke liye liya,machli pakdne ke liye kanta etc sab le liya aur kuch jaruri saman bi aur chal diye...


Sunil-- abe pange kyo leta h

Main ---3 saaal se chup hu ab bi muje he bolega kya ...chod usai aur muje meri darling ko fish khilani h apne hatho se..un kutto ko 3 mahine baad dhekhunga.....chal thodi masti karte h hum dono 3 baje phuch gaye the aur ek achi jagah saaf safayi kar jagah bana li ek hour laga hame
aur tabi richa komal sunita suchitra kriti javed ravi shweta pahuch gaye sab ek sath hiiiiii


Main aur sunil hiii

Shweta – wao bhai meri dili khwaish thi jungle mai camp fire ki but aj adhi adhuri puri ho jayegi ...


Main --- shweta ho jayegi dont worry meri bahna ...


Richa – oh bhai ki chamchi muje milne de


Aur richa aake Raj ke gale lag gayiiii dono ke gale milne ke baad kriti agai badh gale lagne wali he thi ki Raj bich mai he bol pada hello kriti hello everyone chalo ajao pahle thoda setup karle ..
Maine sabke liye meetha nikala aur sabne ek ek le liya

Kriti – if u dont mind raj tum tumahare hath se he khila do yaar warna hand wash karne jana padega please.....

Raj – ok ok kahke khila diya usai usne meri anguliya bi choos lii..


Richa --- ............ 😡😡😡

Maine—ek aur piece uthaya shweta ko khilaya

Richa--............ 😡😡

Maine --- ek aur uthaya aur jab richa ko khilane wala tha toh

Richa--- main khud khalungi
Aur mere hath se leke kha liya main bus muskraya uski ye ada dhek ke

Phir hum sabne sukhi lakdiya ikhathi ki taki aag jala sake baad mai aur phir chal diye jheel mai nahane sab pahle se decied tha ladkiyo ne dress change ki aur jab bahar ayi toh koyi ptakha koyi bomb aur meri wali toh hydrogen bomb banke ayi thi main bus usai taade ja raha tha aur mera mu uska figure dhek ke khula rah gaya tha wo adaa ke sath chalte huve ayi aur mera mu band karke chali gayii sala mere toh tower he ud gaye the ...uske jane ke baad ayi kriti jo full swiming tadak bhadak wale piece mai thi jisai dhek ke mere upar ke tower jo ud gaye the wo niche pakadne lage uski breast bi kisi 20 saal ki ladki trah badi aur kadak thi uske swim suit mai se nipple dikh rahe the aur aise he sari ki sari pariya jal pari ban gayi yanha toh pent kholne mai dar lag raha tha ki tamboo na dikh jaye...

Sab girls ab aa jao itna bi mat sharmao hum ladkiya hoke pahle aagayi ..
Maine khub sara pani piya tab sab sahi huva..🤪aur phir pahle ravi phir javed aur phir sunil kud gaya ab maine bi sharmate sharmate kapde utare toh 6 pack abs well curved chest solder biceps dikhne lage jisai dhek richa ki ankhe badi ho gayi aur kriti ke dil mai toh ab real feeling aaagayi thi. ..wo lalach bhari nigaho se muje dhek rahi thi....main bi kud gaya pani mai aur karne lage masti sabke sath main richa ke pass gaya aur piche se usai pakad ke bola hydrogen bomb ka naam suna tha aj usai chu ke dhek liya aur uski gardan pe kiss kardi Wo mudi aur muje dhakha de diya...


Richa – raj controle itni jaldi kya h aur wo thodi dur chali gayi


Main – are yaar aj mouka mila h pass ane ka usmai bi tum naraj he rahogi kya love u na ..tabi kisi ne mere niche hath mara ..sanse atak gayi meri aur main thoda dur ho gaya yanha wanha dhekne laga par koyi na dikha aisa jispe sak ho phir dubara se agai masal ke chala gaya meri samaj mai ni araha tha ki koun h kyoki sabi upar niche dubki laga rahe the yanha wanha maine bi lagayi dubki dhekne ke liye aur mere samne phir suchitra aur komal ke sexy lag dikhe main jaldi se upar agaya

Kriti -kya huva Raj


Main kuch ni..kuch bi ni😀


Kriti--- ya bahut kuch aur noughty smile di muje
Aur tair kar mere pass agayi aur chipakne ki kosis ki🤪


Komal aur suchitra – dhek le kaise kriti ke sath mast kar rah h sare ladko ko ek he chij chahiye hoti h fokat ka paisa aur khoobsurat ladki ka jism tere pass dono h toh tere piche ghum raha h aur maje uske sath kar raha h


Tabi kriti muje hath pakad pani ke andar le gayi bus isne kaam kiya aag mai ghee dalne ka ......
Richa --- ane do isai bahar main batati hu isai...... Bada chipak raha h na ab usi ke pass chipke...rahne dungi isai..


Hum kafi dair nahte rahe sur phir bahar agaye. .. aur kapde change kiye richa meri taraf he dhek rahi thi is look ke sath🤨😡🤨🤨muje laga meri jaan ne he sararat ki h main bus muskra diya usai dhek ke jisai wo aur bhadak gayi .


Main sunil se thodi taiyari karle bhai aur hum dono lage taiyari karne girls ne help kardi main gaya jheel ke dusri taraf chala gaya fish pakadne.


Shweta – bhai kanha ja rahe


Sunil – wo machli pakadne ja raha h us taraf badi machli milegi ab sab relex ho ke baith jao
Thodi dair baad main agaya maine 5 badi fish tokri mai mere pass rakhi huvi thi ..

Main sunil teri nife skill dikha Aur laga sunil slashes dene itne sharp cuts marke fish saaf kar di aur main laga unko fry karne aur jaldi he taiyaar karke masala lagake special desi look ke sath bana dali phir napkin pepar se uska oil saaf kiya aur bola lo ji lo ji pesh h fish fry from Raj good for health
Sabne jaise he ek thoda thoda bite liya wao ye toh bahut testy h yaar Richa jo gusai mai thi wo boli

Richa --- hmmm wao so teasty khaskar ye masala jo ispar daala h h raj ab toh puri jindgi muje khilna padega
Richa ki ye baaat sun janha mere chahre pe hansi thi wanhi kuch logo ko apna plan fail hote laga tha


Main – why not my love i m always ready cooking for u....if u want

Kriti --- hamesa richa ko he khilaoge raj .....

Main – ap bi kabi aake khalena
aur sabke khilaya fir sab rest karne lage sham ke 7 baj gaye the hume. jungle tha toh halki thand badh gayi thi .....sab sath mai baith gaye amne samne bich mai thodi lakdiya jala ke baith gaye the sabke pass chips coldrink thi jo javed aur ravi laye the sabne game khelna suru karne ko kaha aur sab confuse the phir sabne truth and dare khelne ki ha bhari ye game kriti and party ne he select kiya tha....aur sab ready ho gaye muje kuch ajeeb si feeling ane lag gayi kuch khatra sa mahsus ho rah tha....dil bechain hone laga tha.....

Javed – kriti ke kaan mai dheere se tuje aj usai kiss karni h ok....richa ke samne ...



Aj ke liye itna he.....
Nice update brother ❣️❣️❣️
 
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Recap ---- apne dheka ki guruji dwara dining hall mai turnament ki ghosna huvi jismai jeetne wale ko pawan shergill se traing milegi aur sath he apne dhekha ki Raj ne rajesh aur rohit ko challenge bi de diya h turnament ka...aur Raj apne group ke sath Sunday party kar raha h janha usai sajish ki boo aarahi h...


Ab agai------



Kriti – ok main try karti hu


Udhar javed sabko ankh maar deta h raj sunil shweta se bachake jiska matlb tha plan shuru karne ka

Komal --- toh ok simple rule h sabse ek question pucha jayega agar answer na dena ho toh dare kare ok ....aur wo dare jo samne wala kahega wo manna hoga


Shweta – ok but quetions aur dairing kisi ko hurt karne wali na ho kaise bi Physicaly aur mentaly ..tab toh khelenge


Sunita --- tu bi na thoda bahut toh chalta h


Shweta—no means no


Sunil—sahi kah rahi h


Javed – ok ok guys
So one by one bottle ke according jiski turn ayegi usko choose karna hoga phir komal ne bottle round karayi aur pahla number aya Ravi ka ..


Ravi –i choose dare


Shweta --- toh ravi tu yanha kisi ko like karta h..


Ravi – ha main yanha kisi ko like karta hu but love wala ni fun wala ....

Sab hhhhhhhhhhh

Second turn ayi bottle ghumne ke baad javed ki toh question pucha suchitra ne
Suchitra--- teri lover ka naam kya h..

Javed – actually one sided love h main karta hu usko wo ni uska naam richa h

Richa – whatttt

Raj------silent

Ok ok ok again bottle turn huvi bottle ayi richa pe

Sunil meri bari h question ki richa agar Raj rich aur strong family se ni huva toh kya tum Raj se shadi karogi

Richa ---i choose dare

Raj-----silent and shock

Ok toh shweta ne kaha kiss karo raj ko Richa khadi huvi aur gaal pe kiss kardi ....

Shweta-- kiss lip pe karni thi
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Richa--- muje kiss karne ko kaha tha jo maine kar di..

Again bottle turn huvi ....Aur turn aya Raj ka

Kriti --- apni family aur family income ka batao aur ek kutill smile agayi uske chehre pe..


Sunil --- ye 2 questions h

Raj – its ok sunil..meri family main chacha chachi aur unki beta betiya h mere father mother ni h is duniya mai muje mere Dada aur dadi ji ne he pala h baki main kisi ko janta ni hu family mai aur mere dadaji ke pass jamin h wanhi kheti badi karte h usi se choti moti income hoti h...Bus itna he h meri family aur income ke bare mai...


Richa --- bina expression ke dhek rahi thi Raj ko

Wspas bottle ghumi aur chance ayi kriti ki

Kriti--- i choose dare

Suchitra aur ravi ek sath tujmai bada dare h toh chal sabmai se kisi ko bi lip kis kar


Kriti--- are yaar badla le rahe ho kya..

Sab tune he bola tha na dare
ab bhugat

Kriti--- ok kisi ko bi done
Kriti khadi huvi aur chal di javed ki taraf aur uske samne khadi hoke usko dhekha phir agai nikal gayii phir ravi ke samne aa gayi jhukhi aur uske lips pe hath fira kar agai nikal gayi aur Raj ke samne aa gayi ...

Raj – mere bare mai sochna bi mat i love richa ok ...isliye main ye ni kar sakta

Kriti – are yaar dare h aur ek lip kiss he toh h kounsa sex h ismai kya ho jayega Kriti palat ke richa se boli ek kiss mai tuje problem h kya

Richa—ni koyi dikat ni h ye toh normal h yaar ...

Kriti—suna usai koyi problem ni h...

Raj --- sorry miss Richa and kriti ye Sirf ek kiss ki baat ni h ...tum ni samjogi please kriti main ye ni kar sakta sorry....

Kriti – toh fir dare khatm huva muje toh raj ko kiss karna tha jo ni huva ...toh dare bi khatm
Aur is trah game khatm hi ho gaya koyi aj apni jeet pe khus tha toh koyi kisi ke baare mai sach jaanke par Raj ke dil mai sab alag he chal raha tha...mere heesab se richa ke bare mai soch raha hoga ni ni yaar wo planing kar raha h planing for big plan.are ni yaar uska dil tuta h ki uski lover he usai kisi aur ko kiss karne de rahi h....Aise he sab alag alag soch rahe the game finish ho chuka tha .ya sayad game shuru huva tha...

Javed and group car se nikal gaye school hostle ki taraf aur hum dono saman sametke paidal chal diye ashram ki taraf .

Raste mai

Sunil—kya soch raha

Main – kuch bi ni

Sunil- pagal ni hu

Main – pura pagal h dikhne ki jarurat bi h kya tuje

Sunil – jo huva bhul ja

Main – kuch bi ni huva h wo aj bi confuse h usko pyar h par paisa aur power uski society mai jayda important h toh wo confuse h ki usai main chahiye ya paisa power aur wo isi mai fans ke kanhi hamre pyar ka end na karde kyoki main second chance toh vaise bi ni deta hu ....dhekte h ye kya chahti h ...

Sunil – tu abi bi usai chahta h aj ki harkat ke baad...

Main – bilkul but kuch toh aisa h jo dikh ni raha h muje..koyi ni chal kal school bi jana h sona bi h
Aur hum pahuch gaye ashram..

Morning 5 am

Main nadi kinare nahane gaya aur wanhi pani mai dubki marke yoga ki position mai baith gaya after 5 minuts main bahar aya aur morning work out kiya aur aram se baitha raha kafi dair shant aur ankhe band karke last 3 years ko dhekna laga kuch dund raha tha main jo muje mil gaya tha mere chahre pe smile thi aur main khada huva aur taiyar hoke nikal gaya school ke liye 10 km ki runing karke pahucha school shirt change ki sunil se bag le hum classmai the main richa ke pass jake baith gaya

Richa – hi Raj

Main – Hello sweet heart

Richa,-- yaar kal ke liye sorry muje ni pata tha ki tuje bura lagega

Main—its ok richa sabki apni thinking hoti h u love me bus itna bahut h

Richa—ok ok

Hamari bate chalti rahi phir class over huvi 3 classes ke baad pti sir class mai aye aur kusti ke liye khiladiyo ko select kiya muje bi bole raj tum bi ajao maine kaha ni sir muje training aur padhayi se time ni milta h ...

Pti sir-- tuje sirf participate karna h pass ke he dusri school mai hoga national level ka turnament h 2 din school off rahega toh kya dikat h thoda bahar walo se khusti ladoge toh practical bi ache se ho jayega

Main – tikh sir jaisa ap kahe mai guruji se puchke batata hu

Pti sir – permission maine le li h guru ji se tum bus ek baar aj jane se pahle mujse mil lena ..
Itna kahkar wo chale gaye..

Interval time

Kriti—dhekho yaar kuch tikh ni lag raha h agar Raj ko pata lag gaya toh usne principal sir se kah diya toh ...

Komal – kuch ni hoga yaar dhek tuje paise isi kaam ke liye mile h na ek laakh meri taraf se bi aur milenge muje Raj ke sath sex chahiye h ek baar richa se alag ho jaye toh kaam ho jayega...mera bi

Sunita – aur dhekho hum kamyaab bi ho rahe h tere breast ko kaise ghoor raha tha wo bus thoda time aur phir tere pass paisa hoga .... Aur raj aur richa ki jodi finish aur Raj bi jamin pe ajayega....

Kriti – fine fine ....

Javed in sab se alag he soch raha tha ...

Udhar
Raj and Richa


Raj --- richa 2 years h hamare pass phir kya socha h tumne college etc kanha se karogi

Richa --- muje toh dad ke business mai help karni h toh main mba karungi delhi se he aur tum kya karoge

Main – abi pata ni h yaar ho saka toh ajaunga Delhi he mba bi sath karenge

Richa—ok jaisa tumhe tikh lage.

Main – tum ni chahti ki main mba tumahre sath karu

Richa—ni aisi koyi baat ni h chalo school off hone wala h

Main – Richa duniya mai mouka ek baar he milta h sabko aur duniya mai 90 %percent log ganva dete h wo mouka... Tum mat gavana .. ab chalo

main richa ko chodke pti sir ke pass agaya aur pti sir ne muje sare rules samjaye kuch videos bi dikhaye aur main wapas chal diya ashram ki taraf ........

Evening 4 pm

Xabhi sir --- main again attacks karunga rokte rahna h tumhe

Main-- ji sir

Aur phir shuru huvi kutayi meri face chodke sab jagah bandar ke pichwade ki trah lal ho rakhi thi pahle din toh half hour 2 kishto mai maar padi thi par aj ek kisht mai he padi aur jam ke padi 10 mai se ek waar rok pa raha tha main

Xabhi sir- 5 minut ka rest h aur phir hum lathi chalana sikhenge

Main-- chup raha sirf gardan uthayi aur niche kardi....

Xabhi sir--- ye ek lathi agar sahi se use karo toh ache acho ko dhul chata deti h main jaise move karu waise waise tum karoge...

Main – jaise jaise abhi sir kar rahe the main bi waise he kar raha tha abhi sir ke ek ek war mai hawa ka cut karne jaisa sound araha tha aur wo bahut easily lathi ko ghuma rahe the kuch had tak main bi copy karne mai kamyaab ho gaya..

Xabhi sir – rojana mere sikhane ke baad iski practice karoge

Main – ji sir kaha aur lag gaya meri learning achi thi is liye main jaldi sikh raha tha agle ek hour mai muje jo step sikhaye the wo yaad hogaye the aur wo main 10 percent effectively sahi se kar bi raha tha

Xabhi sir—good aise he chale toh ek week mai perfect ho jaoge good
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Aur meri traing aj ki khatm ho gayiii har chij muje perfectly one by one sikhayi ja rahi thi aise ni h ki muje fight ni ati h actually Xabhi sir bahut bahut fast h wo muje khud ke level se bi upar leke jana chahte h isliye itni tuff training karwa rahe h ....

Yanha Raj ki training chal rahi h aur dusri taraf

Javed-- bhai main javed bol raha hu

Samne se –ha javed

Javed---Bhai yanha ek turnament ho raha khusti ka usmai ek tagde pahlwan ko bhejna h jo school ka lage

Samne se –kisi se ladayi huvi h kya

Javed –bezzati kardi bhai school mai sabke samne

Samne se –Ho jayega chote done

Javed—thanks bhai naam etc bata dena ...
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Javed ab dhekunga bachuu tuje ....


Aj ke liye itna he.....
Amazing update bhai...Javed ki Lanka jalani hogi raj ko...
 
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Recap ---Last update mai kriti and gang ki kiss wali planning seduce wali planning nakamyab huvi but family aur family income se unhone Richa ke man mai Raj ke Prati Negetivity jarur bhada di h sath he Raj ko Pti sir ne kusti ke national level event mai participation karne ko kaha h jismai javed planning kar rahah apna hbadla lene ki aur dusri taraf Xabhi sir Raj ki braber training mai halat kharab kar rahe h..



Ab agai---


Morning 9am



School mai


Shweta – hi bhai muje apse baat karni h

Raj---bol

Shweta--wo bhai papa arahe h main chahti hu ap bi milo unse

Main—kya huva achanak se arahe h

Shweta--- ni bhai wo yanha heemachal police officers ki meeting thi toh wo bi aye huve the isliye school bi ayenge milne

Main ---are wah ye toh bahut acha h maine usai side se gale lagate huve kaha .hum jarur milenge hamari bahna ke papa se

Sunil – are toh main bi mil lu koyi dikat toh ni

Shweta and raj---😡😡 kyo ...kuch dair ruk kar dono😂😂😂😂ha ha ha mil liyo ...

Aur pti sir tabi awaj dete h Raj ..

Main-- ji sir

Pti sir -Ao hame dusri school registration kara ke ana h baki students ko ho gaya tumhara baki h kal sabka karwa diya tha tum ashram se aa ni sakte the toh isliye abi jaruri h

Main – ji sir chaliye

Main aur sir chal diye actually ashram se school janha turnament h wo manali city mai h jo ashram se 20km dur h sir ki bullet bike pe mast maza araha tha 3 saal baad bahar ki duniya dhek ek romanch sa agaya tha

Pti sir –kya dhek rahe ho raj

Raj –apna bachpan dhund raha hu sir

Pti sir –matlb

Main ---bachpan se ghar ke andar raha hu kabhi bahar ghum he nahi paya fir yanha 3saal se training and school bus yahi jindgi rah gayi h sir meri haal filhaal

Pti sir—Raj aj hum jo kar rahe h uska fal hume agai milta h kya pata tumahri jindgi mai isai jayda khusiya likhi ho ..Abi tumhare hath mai sirf karam h wo karte jao aur fal dena upar wale ke hath mai ...toh tum tumhara kaam karo baki uparwala apna kaam karega...

Main---ji sir apne bahut saral sabdo mai kitni gahri baat kah di waise sir tournament mai kitne aur kanha se ayenge player

Pti sir -all india se 32 players ayenge total yanha aur prize money 25 lacs h ..chalo hum pahuch gaye h ajao

Karib one hour laga hame school mai school tikh thak he tha isai acha hota hamre school mai hota toh but government norms etc .. hum bahar aye toh Pti sir ne kaha kuch khaoge maine kaha sir mera ghar city se dur tha par dada ji bachpan mai kabi city jate toh pizza leke ate the maine suna h Domino's ka pizza 🍕🍕 acha hota h wahi khila dijiye ..

Pti sir-- beta Raj tum muje apna teacher mama ya jo chahe maan ke kuch bi manga liya karo tum ek nek dil bache ho chalo ...wahi khate h jo tumhe pasand ho humne pizza khaya

Main---awesome sir ye toh too yummy h iske agai meri city ka pizza toh jeero h

Pti sir ---ha ha ha



Maine ek sunil ke liye bi pack karwaya aur ek shweta ke liye bi aur chal diye wapas ashram ki taraf main toh mast aspass ki location dhek raha tha akhir 3 saal baad bahar jo nikala tha tabi raste mai ek whit desire car ko kuch gunde jaise ladke daru pike overtake karke khade huve the hum pahuche aur thodi duri par rok unki baat suni

Ladka1—Budau ye hamari jagah h daru piyu ya kuch bi tujse matlab jinda rahna h toh nikal

Wo shsks – toh road ke side mai pita road ke bich mai slow karke kabi gadi rok ke daru pike kyo pareshan kar rahe ho

Ladka 2—meri marji mai jaggu ka admi hu jeena ni kya tuje

Wo shaks ---tu kisi ka admi ho ya aurat par ye harkat dubara kari na toh mujse bura koyi ni hoga

Ladka 3—Daru pite huve abe is budau aur driver ko niche fenk de ghati mai sala bahut bolta h aur uske sath ke 6 ladke tut pade wo 2 the aur samne 7 jeet ni payenge toh Pti sir ne muje rukne ko kaha aur bheed gaye wo bi fir bi 7 the bhari padh rahe the mujse bardast ni ho raha tha par pti sir strictly mana karke gaye the unki jawab dari thi ki student ko safe lana aur le jana mera control tab tuta jab unhone hockey iron rode nikal li driver toh bhag chuka tha rod aur stick dhek ke aur jaise he sticks marne ki kosis ki sir us shaks par maine bhag ke dono pair se un dono ki chest pe jor se flying kick di dono piche jake car ke glass se takraye aur niche lait gaye mu se unke khun nikal raha tha ...aur wo duniya se he nikalne ke raste mai the mtalb half dead maine pti sir aur dusre shaks ko bithaya niche aur palat ke kaha

Main ---tumne pahle he galti kar di h in par hamla karke ab bhag jao dusri baar ni kahunga kyo ki jo main karunga wo tum sahan ni kar paoge kyo ki



"MERE NAAM MAI H NIRWAANA AUR MAIN MOKHS DETA NI HU TADPATA HU TADPATA HU USKI ROOH KO"



Chale jao

Ladka3---Bache 2 ko maar liya toh hero ban gaya ab dhek aur unhone chaku bi nikal liya

Main—ab tumhe yamraj bi lene ni ayega aur dr tumhara ilaj ni kar payega..aur jhuk ke mara mukaa ek ki ribs aur fir dusri ribs pe wo jhuka maine diya uske jabde pe wo ukhad gaya aur last piche aake mara uski rid ki haddi pe ghutna tadak ki awaj ke sath wo gaand faad chilaya aur only in 5 seconds ke baad wo niche gira aur tadapne laga sabki fatke char ho gayi

Ladka 3—maro be isai inaam aur party dono meri taraf se

Ek aur aya chaku leke bahubali banke Muje marne wala he tha ki maine uske gale pe mara isai uski grip chaku se chuth gayi aur maine apne hath mai uska chaku liya phir uske hips ke nice ek cut dusre hips ke niche ek cut phir niche pair pe takne se upar dono pair pe ek cut and last chaku uske pichwade mai gusa diya meri darandgi dhek Pti sir aur wo shaks dono he sock mai the ab 3bande sath aye maine Rod uthayi aur unke attack ko Dodge karta huva last wale ke gardan pe mara aur bhaiya ji let gaye ek mai he phir dusre ke attack dodge kiya aur niche jhuk ke diya uske ghutne pe aur rod lagne pe kya hota h apko pata he h aisa he in 2no ke ghutne tod diye bache the ab 2 ek toh bechare pahadi ki dhalan pe kudh gaya bach gaya toh kismat warna jungli janwaro ka bhala ab pahucha last wale ke pass

Main –Ha toh tu jaggu ka admi h aur wo teri aurat ...main pakda uska hath aur mod ke kandhe se tod diya phir us hath ki kohni tod di aisa he dusre hath ke sath kiya main phir palat ke bola pti sir warm up toh apne gajab ka kara diya

Pti sir –bus bahut h chalo chalte h

Main –asani se chod diya toh dubara kisi ka admi banega ye adh mara zahrila saanp h maar ni sakte to fun kuchal dete h hum safe rahenge ye meri training ka part h sir aur most important thing ye mere dialogue ka part h phir maine uske ghutno pe 8 baar rode mari jisai uski tange dubara thik na ho aur last uski rid ki haddi bi tod di... Yahi maine baki sabke sath kiya aur last mai 108 dial kar ambulance ko inform kar diya maine shaks se pucha ap koun h uncle aur ap in jaise badhmasho se akele he ulaj rahe the police ko call kar dete

Wo shaks –barkhuddar maine call toh kar di thi ane wali he hogi tum nek ladke ho thank you ab jao yanha se warna police ke chakro mai padh jaoge

Main ji uncle ap dhayan rakhiyega apna aur please dubara aise bina safety ke mat ulajiyega

Wo shaks---ek lambi muskrahat muje di ok son par ye mera kaam h



Hum agaye school 1.pm ho gaye the chutti hone mai one hour tha main sir ko leke medical room gaya unke hath par chot thi lagi thi jayda unki dressing karke unhe wanha chod ke bahar aya he tha ki shweta bhage bhage ayi bhai ap kanha the papa agaye h aur maine usai kaha 5 minut mai waiting room ki taraf. Ata hu tu chal

Shweta –pakka na ajana bhai.

Jogindar singh—kanha h apke bhai 2 saal se bhai bhai karti rahti ho ap mujse toh ap baat kam aur bhai ke gungaan jayda karti ho

Shweta –papa its not fair ap bi toh 2 saals se aj milne aye h

Jogindar singh—beta u know na police working ..

Shweta –ok ok dad no explanation lo bhai agaye h meet Raj singh...

Jogindar mood ke dhekta aur Raj unki taraf dhekta h

Jogindar –hello my dear boy toh apka naam Raj h bhai socha ni tha itni jaldi mulakat hogi ...

Shweta – Ap Raj ko jante ho papa

Jogindar- yes he his brave boy and he also save my life today

Shweta –life papa ye ap kya kah rahe h

Raj—kuch ni uncle u he majak kar rahe h

Shweta – Bhia ap chup raho Dad tell me truth..

Joginder shweta ko sari baat bata dete h aur shweta rokar papa ke gale lag jati h aur fir raj ke

Shweta –thank you bhai love u

Raj---Kya mere kuch ni h..

Jogindar—beta kabi ao delhi

Raj –jarur aunga uncle

Jogindar –kanha se ho

Raj --- kuch sochkar main mandawa se hu

Jogindar—dhyan se Raj ko dhekte huve kuch soch rahe the

Aise he khub sari bate hoti rahi aur phir Raj bi ashram ki taraf agaya sham ko training ki jamke aur so gaya


Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kal kya lata h Raj ke liye...

 
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Story ek aise ladke ki jiske maa baap ko dhokhe se maar diya aur bachpan mai he usai pyar ke liye taras ne ko chod diya gaya ..tab uske dadaji ne uski ungli thami.Apne dard ko chupa kar usai layak banane ke liye 5 saal dur kar diya janha mila usai uska pyar aur usne bi usai dhokha de diya..ab uska maksad sirf badla lena tha jab wo louta toh NIRWANA banke tuta dushmano par jo tadpata tha tadpata tha dushman ki rooh ko....aur is safar mai usai jaan se jayda pyar karne wali mili par pyar ke naam se he usai nafrat ho gayi thi...pyar emotion aur action ka safar....Raj -- the family's hero

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Mandawa—


Ek choti city hari bhari city janha pe rahta h hero ka priwar
Pariwar—Nirwaan pariwar

Chcha -shaitan singh

Chachi-indra devi

Chote chacha- parwat singh jo ab is duniya mai ni h

Choti chachi—supriya
Bade chacha ke ek ladka aur ek ladki h

Name----- surendra singh

gamandi h hero ko bilkul pasand ni karte h wajah h dada dadi unko intro baad mai ayega

Chacha ki ladki-Babita singh

Khadus hero ki care karti thi par ma ke bhadkane par wo bi ab nafrat karti h aur karan ha dada dadi kuch had tak.

Chote chacha ----ke 3 beta betiya h

Badi beti--
mamta singh -----hero se 1 saal choti h aur hero pyar karti h bhai bahan wala chupke chupke usko khayal bi rakhti h jab usai khana ni milta h...khub pat ti h dono mai

Kavita singh------ ye hero se 2 saal choti h aur hero ki sabse pyari h inke bich bhai bahan ke pyar se jayda he h ek dusre ke sath hamesa rahte h har pal sath nibhate h aur hero apna sabkuch isai he manta h bahut he sundar h aur uske liye uska bhai Raj he sabkuch h

Hero name ---- Raj singh Nirwaan
akela h bachpan se he maa baap ka pyar na mila aur na usai pata h ki wo kanha h usai sirf itna bataya jata h ki wo mar gaye h accident mai
Hero jab 3 saal ki umar ka tha tab usai gaanv laya gaya tha aur uske dada usai leke aye the aur Raj ke dada ki wajah se he uski dadi bi usai thoda lagaav rakhti h
Ab Intro ---pariwar ke kaam ka
Raj ka pariwar Rajwado ka pariwar h


Raj ke Dada--- Thakur Jagmaal singh Nirwaan
jinke naam se Daaku tak tak kanmpte the 2 nali banduk aur chetak ghode pe sawar gaanv ki sair pe niklte h akele. Kisi ki aank na uth pati unki aur dhekne ki ijjat se jite h aur sabi ki ijjat karte h Raj ko sabse jayda pyar karte h aur Raj ko pyar se Nirwaana kahke bulate h inke pass jamin h 500 bigha dur dur tak bus inhi ke khet h aur baki secret h
Ab ate h inki haveli ka intro
Shandar 2 manjila haveli h Thakuro ki shaan dur dur tak bus haveli ki sundarta aur iske itihaas ke charche h haveli ke bahar har subhe sadhu santo ko bhojan karwaya jata h.. Haveli ke charo taraf gulab ke phool lage h jinki khusboo haveli mai hamesa rahti h..
Aur sham ko hakhade mai pahlwani ke daanv pech sikhaye jate h... Jo ki haveli ke piche bana huva h


Dadi ---sumitra devi
Puri thakurine h rob inke vyaktitwa mai busa huva h apne pati se darti h aur izzat karti h.. Aj bi tijori ki chabi inhi ke pass mai rahti h..

Toh ye tha pariwar ka small intro
Baki charecter story ke sath judte rahenge matlab mama mami nana nani bua etc
Ab shuru karte h story ko

Bade chacha -indra main kheto mai ja raha hu aur jane lagte h dining table ke pass ake are ye kya babuji ka nasta ni laga 7baj gaye h babuji ate he honge

Indra chachi – ap aur apke babuji har chij bus kahdo aur turan taiyar chahiye chachi mu bigad ke noukrani rakhlo itni he jaldih toh inke kheto mai toh kitne log kaam kare par ghar mai sara kaam bus bahuye he kare .

Bade chacha – are bus bi karo bhagyawan kitna sunaogi aur jate jate tana marte h pata ni babuji ne kya dhek liya tha ismai aur itna kah kar ghar se bhag jate 😃😃

Badi chachi -bade chacha ki baat sunke 😡😡gusa ho jati h aur kahne wali he hoti h ki dhekti h. chacha chale gaye toh man mai kahti ana to sham ko ghar pe he h aur kahti h wo kalank ka tikka harmkhore Raj kanha h aya ni abi tak ane do phir batati hu

Raj – chachi main agaya

Badi C -ek thapad Raj ko marti h kanha mar gaya tha ja jaldi surendra aur babita ko jagade aur phir man mai kahti pata ni ye kyo ni mar gaya accident mai manhoos kanhi ka..

Raj- ye sunkar main rone lagta hu aur rote rote dono ko jagane jata hu uparwale room mai bhaiya utho chachi bula rahi
Surendra -letai letai he ek kick karta harmkhor subhe subhe nind kharab kar di maa bi is harmkhor ko bhej deti h roj subhe subhe uthane. aur uthkar bathroom chal jata h

Raj- main piche girta hu aur kohni mai chot lag jati h aur main dard se karah uth ta hu ahhh.... Maaa... Par koyi ho toh sune mera dard.. Dard jo is 6 saal ki umar mai dhek raha hu main sahan kar rah hu main par koyi ni h phir main uthkar babita ke kamre mai jata hu wanha bi yahi hota h

Babita – harmkhore ajata h subhe nind kharab karne meri pata ni kab ye manusiyat yanha se jayegi

Raj rota huva niche ata h aur khud ko chup karata h taki aur koyi usai kuch na kahe aur dada dadi usai rota na dhek le aur wo niche ata h aur choti chachi ke kamre mai chachi ke ladke ajay ko palne mai jhula jhulane lagta h jo abi 1 saal ka h aur ajay hath pair heelane lagta h.. Raj man mai kya maine bi paalne mai kabhi jhula jhula h meri maa ne muje .godh mai uthaya .....papa ne ....muje kabhi ghumaya tha kya apne kandhe pe ...aur mere ansu neer ki tarah jharne lagta h mujse dhuk ho raha tha apni kismat pe ki Dada ji ke alawa muje koyi kyu ni chahta kya mere maa baap se sab nafrat karte h kya wo bure the jo unki photo tak ni h muje toh sakal bi yaad ni h mumy papa ki na mere pass koyi photo h main upar chala jata hu haveli ke . Aur koune mai baith ke kafi dair tak rota rahta hu ye mera roj ka tha kyo pichle ek saal se yahi ho raha tha Dadi khane ka puch leti thi aur thoda pyar deti thi par main unka chaheta na tha sayad dada ji ke dar pyar karna padta tha unhe mujse...
Ha majburi sabd sahi rahega
Bade chacha aur chachi ko matlb na tha choti chachi na nafrat na pyar karti thi bus yahi duniya thi meri roj ki.


Par Raj ko ni pata tha ki itne dhuk mai uske kuch pal khusi ke bi ane the jaldi he.......

Aj ke liye itna he dhekte h kya hota h agle update mai. ...Bane rahiye sath mai
Words mistake ho toh maaf kijiyega
WOW AMAZING START NICE BRO
 
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pichle update mai apne padha Raj ki family ka intro aur kuch pal Raj ke ki uska pura din kis prakar kat ta h


Ab agai.....


Khane ki table pe
Dada Jagmaal singh-- Nasta karte waqt sabko dhayan se dhekte huve

Note--

Naste ke waqt pariwar ka har shaks mojud hota h jo us waqt haveli mai mojud ho sirf ghar ki bahu he ni baith sakti h


Dada ji---- sumitra sab mojud h mera pota Nirwaana kanha h
Dada ji ke mu se ye sabd sunte he dadi ki halat kharab ho gayi aur wo tirchi nigao se supriya aur indra ko dhekne lagi

Dada ji---maine kuch pucha h

Dadi--- wo yanhi h wo yanhi h bulwati hu mai... Indra jake bulao Raj ko abi ke abi aur apni aankh dikhati h Indra aur supriya ko... Jisai dhek ke dono ki haalat patli ho gayi aur wo foran Raj ko dhundne jati h


Badi c—pata ni kanha mar jata h manhoos aur ye budha aur budiya kha jate h muje aur badbadati huvi chathpar pahuch jati h aur Raj ko kone mai baitha dhekti h toh kahti h dhekho toh maharaj ko sabka jeena haram kar rakha h aur khud yanha baitha aram farma raha h aur cheekte huve kahti chal niche


Raj—muje pata tha ki muje neeche kya kahna h kyoki ye mera roj ka tha agar maine galat kah diya toh muje aur tourture sahna padega isliye main chup chap apna huliya tikh karke dada ji ke pass baith jata hu naste ke liye

Dada ji ------ beta kanha the apko pata h na hum apke sath he nast karte h


Raj—maafi Dada ji main upar chath pe tha aur samay ka pata he ni laga

Ab ye bata du ki Raj intelligent h aur akele sab sahne se aur is mahol mai tourture sahan karke samjdar ho gaya h is umar mai kyoki uski ek galti bahut bhari padti h... Usai khud pe.....

Ab agai

Dadi---beta Raj nasta karo

Raj – ji dadi aur nasta karne lag jata h aur man mai sochta bus pure din ka yahi ek pal shanti se gujrata h ya kavita ke sath khelte huve kyoki Dada ji ghar hote h tabi main kavita ke sath khel pata hu par ye baat choti chachi ko pasand ni h par wo Dada ji ke karan muje kuch kah ni pati h


Dada ji ---- beta Raj aj hum apko aj chetak pe gaanv ki sair kareyenge ap chaloge na hamare sath

Raj---- ji dada ji jarur chalunga apke sath hame bi gaanv dhekna h aur nasta khatm karke main taiyar hone chala jata hu main naha dhoke taiyar hoke main kavita ke pass jata hu .vo abi 4 saal ki h usko khilata hu laad karta aur uske gaal pe kiss karta hu aur wo bi meri dhekha dhek ek kiss gaal pe karti h bahut pyari h aur sweet h usai pyar se main kabuu bulata hu

Ye sab 2 ankhe dhek rahi thi ji ha ye choti chachi he thi jo gusai se dhek rahi thi muje nafrat toh ni thi par mujse pyar bi ni h unhe lagta h meri manusiyat unki beta bitiyo ko bi lag jayegi
Ab kyo unhe aisa lagta h ye toh muje bi ni pata h par agai pata lag jayega par ismai bi badi chachi ka hath h itna muje feel hota tha kyoki choti chachi badi chachi ki bahan jo h

Main neeche ake chale dadaji

Dadaji---- ha nirwana chalo aur hum unki ghodi chetak pe swar ho jate h aur nikal jate h sair par main pahli baar dadaji ke sath ja raha tha unke sir par kesariya rang ki pagdi thi aur pith pe 2nali tangi thi jo unke look ko he alag bana rahi thi...

Aisa ni h ki car ni h 3car aur bike sab h par dada ji toh thahre rajput jinka manna tha ki bhai ye sab bacho ki savari h Rajput ya toh godi pe ya sher pe savari karte h. Sher to muje baithane se raha toh ghodi he tikh h... 😄😄😄


Raj- dadaji hum kanha ja rahe h


Dada ji ---beta panchayat h hum vanha ja rahe h. Hum apko isliye sath laye h taki ap bi sikhe ki asli shatriya ka Dharam kya hota h aur wo anyay ke virudh kaise khada hota h.. Raj beta hamesa ek baat dhayan rakhna anyay hote mat dhekna... Bado ko sammaan dena aur nari jati ki sadev raksha karna.... Kabi kisi beksur par julm mat karna.. Aise he kayi bate Raj ko batate h ..

Raj –dadaji anyay kya hota h aur usai kyo krona chahiye. Aur ye shatriya kya hote h...

Dada ji --- beta nirvaana shatriya wo hote h jo kisi ka bura na hone de apni ankho ke samne.. Kisi bhukhe ko bhukha na rahne de hamesa dharam ki raksha kare.. Bure karmo ka naash kare... Apko abi bahut sikhna h ap he toh is vansh ke purkho ki izzat bhadaoge unka maan bhadaoge... Ye kah kar Dada ji soch mai padh jate h
Note Raj hamesa haveli mai jo baithak hoti h wanha mojud rahta h toh usai kuch kuch pata h baithak ke bare mai..

Main – man mai bolta ja raha tha anyay ka virodh karna aur nari ka saman... Dharam ki rakhsa karna ye baate mere dimag mai bhuchal la rahi thi meri chamak rahi thi jaise jaise mai soch raha tha..

Raj par uske Dada ji ki bato ka bahut gahra asar ho raha tha

Aise he dono bate karte karte pahuch gaye vahidpura ki panchayat mai jo unki city se 10 km ki duri par thi ghodi ki awaj ate he sabke sab khade ho gaye sarpanch bi kyo ki sabko pata tha ki koun aya h khoff jo thaThakur jagmaal singh Nirwaan ka


Raj----- Tabi maine dhekha ek aurat bhagti huvi ayi aur Dada ji ke pair mai ghir gayi aur dadaji ne pair piche kiye aur kaha utho....stri jati pairo mai girne ke liye ni hoti h tri jati maa sherawali aur maa bhawani ka roop hoti h ....
Aurat roti huvi bolti h thakur saab meri beti loot gayii ye thakur Durjan singh ke yanha mere bimar hone ki wajah se aam karne gayi thi aur iski izat iske bete Durg singh ne loot li ab main kya karuu..garib ke pass izzat he hoti h wo bi ab na rahi h.


Raj--- maine dhekha dadaji ki ankhe gusai se lal ho rahi thi aur unke hath ki muthiya kas rahi thi tabi dadaji garje durjan singh........unki garjan sher jaisi thi maine dhekha sarpanch aur sab kamnp rahe the unhe pata tha ki Thakur saab nari jati pe anyay bardasht nahi kar sakte h.

Dadaji- durjan singh aur Durg singh tumne ghor paap kiya h tum dono ko dand milega tume is panchayat ke 56 gaanv se bahar nikala jata h aur durg singh tum inki putri se vivah karoge aur agar muje pata laga ki isai kuch bi huva ya dhokha ya dhuk diya toh durjan singh tumhare khandan ka naam mit jayega dharti se ye mera vachan h ma bhawani ki saugandh h muje.... ....

Dada ji ke sabd aur in sabdo ka arth sab jante the kyoki unki kathni aur karni mai koyi fark ni tha unhone pahle maa bhawani ki sougandh khake in 56 gaanv ke dakuo ko gajar muli ki trah kaat diya us samay khun ki nadiya bah gayi thi police 👮 bi unke gaanvo mai darti h kuch galat hone se kyo ki agar wo nikle toh khun ki nadiya bahni h


Main ----Dada ji bahut gusa
ho rahe h .kya aise he dharam ki raksha hotii.. Main man mai yahi sab sochta huva wapas dadaji ke sath haveli nikal gaya tha kyoki aj pahli baar dada ji ko maine aisa dhekha tha samay bit gaya aur hum ghar pahuch gaye . aj ke din ne mere dil mai ek jagah ek laava dafan kar diya tha ab kab bahar niklega pata ni par meri shuruwat vicharo ki ho gayi thi........ Sham ke 5 baj gaye the jab ghar pahuche


Dada ji – sabi ko hall mai bulate aur kahte h jald he Raj ka admission bi Sks school mai kara diya jayega wo bi ab surendra aur babita ke sang jayega school ..pahli class ganv se pass ki ab agai sks mai padhega . ..

Surendra aur Babita ---man mai bus yahi kasar rah gayi thi gaanv mai padh leta harami kabhi ka

Indra aur shaitan singh—bus yahi dhekhna rah gaya tha harmkhor hamare paiso pe phadega dadaji isai anathalya fenk kyo ni dete.... Ya mar kyo ni jata gir ke


Supriya---chalo acha h meri betiyo se dur rahega warna iski manoosiyat na lag jati meri betiyo ko


Dadi –ab tikh h roj ki khich khich kuch toh mitigi dophar tak toh ghar se dur rahega . ..


Raj—muje pata h Dada ji ko chod ke sab khus h ki unse adha din toh dur rahunga main taki unhe sakal na dhikne ko meri... Aur main raat ka khana khake sone chala gaya apne room mai mera room khub bada h dubble bed sari facility moujud h aur main so gaya..
ab dhekna agla din kya lata Raj ke liye......
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Pichle update mai apne dhekha ki Raj ke man par dadaji ki bato ka gahra asar huva h aur jald he wo pass ki city ke bade school sks Admission karane jayega..

Ab agai...


Raj – main so raha tha aur alaram baj gaya muje roj 5.30 baje uthna hota h aur bhai aur didi ko uthana hota h jo muje apna mante he ni h main chala gaya dono ko uthane aur meri shurwat toh wahi pahle laat khane se aur phir thapad khane se he hoti h aj bi wahi huva aur muje mile dard , nafrat aur ansu jo meri takdeer ban gaye h pichle ek saal se. Sirf Sunday chod ke roj Yahi hota h mere sath. mere pass sivaye ansu ke aur kuch ni h bahar nikalne ke liye. yahi dhuk h ek 8 saal ke bache ka jo kisi ko wo na dikha sakta h aur na jata sakta h.

ye sab kuch Dada ji ko ni pata h kyoki wo subhe 5 baje he ghar se chale jate h sair par aur maine unhe kabi bataya ni darke ki kabhi aur bura na ho mere sath.


Surendra aur babita niche arahe the

Badi chachi--- agaya mere laal aao baitho aj tum dono ke pasand ke aloo ke parathe bane h bus babu ji ajaye

Surendra—maa is manhus ko kyo bhejti ho uthane ko pura din bekar chala jata h isai acha toh naukar rakhlo aur isai ghar se bhar nikalo pata ni isai kyo rakh rakha h na baap ka pata h na maa ka na iske maabaap ki koyi photo h ghar mai ..

Badi chachi—pata ni beta tere Dada aur dadi jane. kahte h ek din hamra vansh ki neev banega.. ma'am Roshan karega

Bade chcha ---- bade chacha surendra se Dada ji kahte h mere chote bhai Sahdev Aur Vidya ka beta h par maine toh bhai ke alawa kisi ko dhekha bi ni h kab usne shadi ki aur koun ladki thi pata ni h wo toh ghar se 18 saal ki umar mai chala gaya tha tab toh kunwara tha..

Raj -man mai ye chacha kya kah rahe Dada ji toh kahte h ki tere papa mummy tuje hospital leke gaye the tab accident huva tha... Par ye chacha aur chachi kya bol rahe h..

Kyoki ye sab Raj ne dadaji ke my se apne dost se baat karte waqt thoda suna tha apne mumy papa ke bare mai..

Choti chachi – kanha ghoom ho gaya h Re Tu ja baith ja chair pe naste ke liye ni toh pitaji hame sunayenge .

Bus aise he tane ate rahe koyi harami kahta toh koyi haramkhore toh koyi manhoos toh koyi kalank ka tikka etc etc.main bus sunta rahta tha aur upar wale se narajgi dhikhata tha par upar wale ne bi aankh band rakhi thi meri kismat pe

Dadi ji—bahar se are huge good morning Nirwaana beta

Main – good morning dadaji aur apni soch se bahar aya thoda sukoon milta h jab Dada ji ko dhekta hu wo pass hote h mere you San tension bhul hats hi. ek bache ka sahra maa aur baap hote h toh wo toh h ni isiliye dadaji h mere sab kuch h meri maa bi aur baap bi .

Dadaji – beta aj apka admission hoga school mai ap surendra aur babita ke sath abse car mai jayenge aur shaitan bheema ko boldo ek gadi hamesa inki car ke sath rahegi school se wapas ane tak

Bade chacha, choti chachi, aur badi chachi aur munimji jo mojud the aj sabki ankhe badii hogayi thi bheema ke naam se

bheema
Intro-Bheem singh ek anath h jisai dada ji 15 saal ki umar se Apne sath mai laye the dada ji ka khass h wafadari ki misal h dada ji ki taraf uthne wali unguli ya goli pahle isai hoke jati h ye bolta ni h sirf kholta h aur jisko kholta h wo dubara ni bolta h


Sab hairani se Dada ji ko dhek rahe the kyoki aj tak surendra aur babita ke sath security ke heesab se koyi ni gaya tha toh is manhoos nikamai anath ke sath kyu kyu kyu......

Main – Mere bolne se sab soch se bahar aye maine kaha Dada ji main kuch mang sakta hu apse


Dada ji – beta apko kabse mangne ki jarurat padh gayi sab apka he toh h aur dhyan se Raj ko dhekne lage.... Aur serious hoke kaha mango..

Main – dadaji main normal student banke jaunga jaise ek aam student school jata h koyi khass sahuliyat nahi chahiye na gaadi na kuch bus ek school bus mai... Ek sadharan student banke.

Dadi sumitra—ye kaisi baat kar rahe ho Raj apko pata h ap Thakur shamsher singh ke pote h log kya kahenge ki 56 gaanv pe raaj karne wale insaan ka pota aise araha h school. izzat gir jayegi hamari..

Bade chacha aur badi chachi . Choti chachi sabi ne sunaya matlb gayan diya izzat status bla bla bla

Dada ji – Dada ji kabse sabki sun rahe thr wo bolo khamosh....😡.... Ho jao sabi . kunwar Raj singh Nirwaan sirf Raj banke kyo jana chahte h ap batayenge muje... Agar apka jawab sahi diya huva toh jarur jaisa ap kahenge waisa hoga warna ni.. Aur gaur se nirwaana ko dhekne lage


Main – kuch soch raha tha aur Dada ji ke puchne pe maine itna he kaha

"RESPECT"


Dada ji--- muskaraye aur unhone ha kah diya

Kisi ko bi ye baat samaj na ayi par Dada ji samaj gaye the ki RESPECT
Khandan se mile wo apki ni h. "RESPECT" wo h jo apne kamayi usi se apki pahchan banti h wahi apko samman dilati h duniya ke bich apka naam banti h aur wo banti h ya milti h apke karmo se...
Aur yanhi se surawat huvi

"RAJ—THE FAMILY'S HERO"


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Recap ....


Pichle update mai apne dhekha ki kaise Raj ne apne vicharo ki neev ki pahal karli h

Ab agai....


Dur kanhi Bharat ke ek state M.P mai ek khoobsurat jagah JUNGARH jo pahodo aur nadi se giri huvi h dharti ka swarg h wanha mousam har 12 mahine suhana rahta h wanha....

Ek bahut badi haveli h jiski sundarta bahut he bhawaya huva karti thi jisai pure state mai jana jata h. ab wo stri ki sooni mang ki trah dikhti .ghar mai kafi log h par sab dare huve rahte h .pal pal apni maut ki ghadiya gin rahe h... dusri taraf puri city aur ye state shant h dar ke saye mai aur wanha Raj karte h insaan ke roop mai wo shaitan aur uska. Pariwar jinhone pure state ko gulam bana rakha h aur band kar rakha h us pariwar ko ghar ke andar he..jinke marne ke kuch saal baki h
Kahte h yanha 7 saal pahle sab tikh tha phir kya huva pata ni par aj sab bahut dhuk mai atyachar mai jee rahe h ya kaho ki pal pal mar rahe h

ab chalte h Raj ki taaf

Subhe ko 5.30 pe uthna jaleel hona ye niyam h mera subhe ka waqt nasta karte waqt aram se nikalna phir haveli mai kaam karna pani dena garden mai pani aur saaf safayi karna jo ki mere liye bahut he dhukhdayi tha par who ...cares....

-Aise he dopahar huvi pura din badi aur choti chachi mujse ghar ki safayi aur ghar ke kaam karwati rahi..
Choti chachi – ja farsh par pocha marde wanha ganda ho gaya h
Main saaf karne gaya aur niche baith kar saaf kar raha tha ki piche table se pith takra gayi aur wanha pada pot tut gaya aur bus fir kya .. ap kudh he dheklo kya hota h mere sath

Choti chachi – haramkhore manhoos kanhike pot tod diya tu kha ja sabko apne maa baap ko kha gaya yanha aake mere pati ko kha gaya rook tuje main batati hu tadak tadak 5 thapad pade muje..badi chachi aur chacha khus ho rahe the dadi ne dhekha par boli kuch ni ..

choti chachi ---aj bhukha rahega toh pata lagega aur muje gasit kar mere room mai le gayi aur bahar se band kar diya

Main – andar ja ke gira farsh par gira aur rone laga kyoki muje pata h ki ek galti muje mujpar bahut bhari padti h par hu toh main bi ek insaan ek bacha he hu jis sai galti ho he jati h.. Main gale mai pahne locket ko dhek ke mer mu se sabd ansuo ke sath nikle maa oh maa apne aur papa ne pahnaya tha na ye locket..ap muje kyo ni le gayi sath mai kyo chod gayi is duniya mai dhekho apke bete ke sath kya ho raha h aur isi trah main leta huva farse par maapapa ko yaad kar ro raha tha. Maa main apse kabi baat ni karunga ap gandi ho apne muje apne sath ni leke gayi kya ap muje pyar ni karti thi aur phir... Main late gaya

Thodi dhair baad room ka darwaja khula aur mamta ayi

Mamta—bhai.. Bhaiya... Jago na dhekho main laddu layi hu apke liye apne dopahar ko khaya ni na maine mummy ko ullu bana ke layi hu ap khao na wo choti h par usai bi pata h lagne pe dard hota h uske chote hath jo piche chupe huve the unmai se laddu nikalke muje diye aur gale lag gayi mere

Main—maine uski traf pyar bhari nazro se dhekha aur gaal pe hath sahlaya aur ek laddu leke kha liya aur kaha kisi ko pata lag gaya toh mamtuu tuje mujse dur karenge tuje bi marenge wo jaldi se abi chali jao wo phir chupke se chali gayi.....
Sham ko badi chachi ne darwaja khola unke sath surendra aur babita sabi the jo hans rahe the...


Badi chachi--- yaad rakhna agar mu khola niche Dada ji ke pass toh zahar dekar maar dungi samja

Main ---Dar gaya tha kyoki muje jeena h . Jeena h apne wajud ke liye main chup raha aur unki ha mai ha milata raha jo unhone kaha wo maine waisa he kiya


Sham ka khana khaya aur so gaya apne kamre mai aj main kisi ke pass ni gaya sawal toh bahut h mere pass jinke jawab bada hoke dhundne h muje isiliye in sawalo ko dafna ke main nind ki gahrayiyo mai chala gaya...

Subhe ka waqt tha 5.30 pe uthana aur ek kick ke sath suruwat honi meri wahi jalil hone thapad khana etc..

Aj dada ji jaldi agaye aur room mai chale gaye maine unhe dhekha aur unke pass chala gaya aur godi mai sar rakh kar so gaya


Dada ji ---Beta nirwaana kya huva
Main kuch ni dada ji bus ap jaldi agaye toh apki godi mai sone ka man tha toh agaya

Dada ji –man mai putra muje pata h ki tu kya sochta h aur kya hota h tere sath Bus kuch time aur h abi tuje bahut heematwala banna h..

Dadaji—apka aj admission karwana h na ap taiyaar ho jayiye ..

Main--- ji Dada ji kahke upar room mai chala gaya aur taiyaar hone laga maine dimple T shirt aur pant pahni thi aur agaya niche jake mandir mai maa bhawani ka ashriwaad liya aur pahuch gaya Dada ji ke pass.. Dadad ji hum taiyaar h chale

Dada ji – Ne dhyan se meri taraf dhekha aur man mai bilkul sahdev pe gaya h aur samjdari mai apni ma pe gaya h kaas wo dono jinda hote toh dhek pate ki aj unka bacha Rajasthan ke sabse bade school mai padhne ja raha h jo bahu vidya ka sapna tha
Aur bolte h beta Raj ap nasta kare phir hum chalenge
Babita aur surendra toh jalbhun gaye the aur chacha chachi aur choti chachi bi jaal bhun gayi thi man he man sab baduaye de rahe the.


Main-- man mai muje pata h ye log kya soch rahe hmaine nasta kiya aur bahar agaye bahar ek rolls royce type ki modified car khadi thi jispe agai likha tha chetak jo Dada ji kabi kabi bade functions mai leke jate the aur driving seat pe baithe the bheem chacha.. Hum baith ke nikal gaye school

School bahut he shandar front mai playground 2 manjila building gajab ka tha school.. Muje toh pasand agaya

In principal office

Principal-- paseene se bhiga huva tha Thaa.. Kur saaab appp



DaDa ji –ap aram se baith jayiye inse mile ye h Kunwar Raj singh Nirwaan son of Sahdev and vidya singh Nirwan

Itna intro sunte he principal rumal nikaal ke paseene puchne laga usko apni maut dikhne lagi wo thar thar kaanp raha tha Jaise usne Kisi aise ke naam sun liye hi jo usai ni sunne the...

Main – inhe kya huva Dada ji ye kanp kyo rahe h


Dadaji –kuch ni huva inhe principal ki daraf dhek ke principal se kaha ye ab apki school mai padhenge

Principal--- hairani se ji ji ji


Dada ji – bheema Kunwar Raj ko bahar school dikhao


Aur Raj ke jane ke baad

Dada ji – Hum apse jo kah rahe h ek baar kahenge ap dhayan se suniyega Hamare pote ke baare mai koyi bi jan kari is school ke bahar gayi toh tumhe pahchanne wala is dharti pe ni milega tumahre sarir ko cheel aur kutto ke liye chod dunga main ye baat dhayan rakhna ye aam bacho ki trah padhega koyi special treatment ni
Aur ha always remember my words...... ... Thakur jagmaal singh words...

Principal jo kanmp raha tha wo aur dar gaya aur itna he bola ji ji ji... Thakur... Saab.. Yaad rakhu.. nga.. Kisi ko niii pata lagega

Ab Dada ji kyo ni chahte ki kisi ko pata lage main koun hu mere maa baap koun h ye Raj ka Raj h

Next morning 🌞🌞
Dada ji...
5.30 am Nirwaana....

Main – main niche ate huve ji ji Dada ji

Dada ji hamre sath ao
Main -ji Dada ji aur main unke sath chal diya bahar sadhu sant bhukhe garib sab baithe the main pahli baar he aya tha aj kyo ki Dada ji ne bacho ko mana kar rakha tha wanha ane se jab main wanha pahucha toh sa bhojan kar rahe the subhe hamara roj ka tha sadhu sanyasi jaldi bhojan karte h idilye subhe jaldi he bhojan shuru ho jata tha jo 9 baje tak chalta tha main Dada ji ke sath se agai chala gaya muje khud he kuch khinchav khinche ja raha tha maine faalo ki choti tokri uthayi aur sadhu santo ke pass jake unke thaile mai rakhne laga jo sabke liye aschariye ki baat thi
Ek sadhu ko group dhayan se muje dhek raha tha unhone muje bulaya aur mere sit par hath rakh kuch pal chup raha aur phir uski ankhe chamakne lagi...wo bade dhyan se mastisk ki rekha padhne lage unhe jaise kuch mil gaya ho aur unke chahre pe muskrahat aagayiii...

Sadhu—putra kya naam h apka
main – Raj naam h baba
Sadhu—jor...se Raj ke h kayi Raj.....putra kabhi darna ni uarwala khud teri taqdeer badlega .......aur jab wo badlega ....tab tu badlega... Aur badlegi teri kismat .. Jo tere h wo taras rahe h tere intezar mai... Unke dhukho.. Tu unka muktidharak banega......
Aur Sare sadhu khade ho gaye aur muje ashriwaad dene lage

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