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Fleshback --- Deepika ke ghar se breakfast karke nikalne ke baad raj aur sonali baat karte huve ek plan bana ke commissioner office pahuchte h aur apna plan implement karte h ...jo ki bilkul fit baith ta h aur jaggu ko news milte he wo sab gundo ko ashram wali road pe laga deta h raj ke liye aur dusri traf raj sonali dono sonali ke ghar par hote h .....

Ab agai.......


Main--- mam khana toh acha banaya h apne ...

Commissioner—are bhai aj tumhare ane ki khusi mai isne ye paneer aur kheer etc banaya h. ...warna muje toh Daal chawal he khilati h....

Sonali--- sir ap h na
bahut sikayat karte ho main aunty ko bolungi..

Commissioner—kyo meri hasti khelti surat achi ni lagti kya jo aisa kaam karne ki soch rahi h...


Main aur sonali hasne lage ..

Main---- uncle ap apni police ko alert pe rakhna aur sirf kabil aur imandar logo ko he chahe kanhi aur se bulane h toh bula lo par imandar chahiye aj se 4 din baad strike hogi ap ki police force ko sonali mam guide karengi aur i think muje lagta h agar jaggu ka khel khatm huva toh mam ka bi permotion ho jayega

Commissioner—beta main arrange kar lunga aur yanha ke local police walo ko sonali dhek legi ki koun best rahega aur ha permotion toh confirm hoga jaggu koyi mamuli criminal ni h pure heemachal mai uska gang h

Main—jald he uska kaam khatm hoga

Commissioner – ok beta ab main chalta hu kuch change ho toh sonali inform kar degi aur apni gun bina license wali sath rakhana

Sonali-- ji sir aur gate tak chod ke agayi ....

Commissioner ke jane ke baad raj ke bagal mai baith gayi ...

Sonali--- so whats the plan

Raj – filhaal muje sweet khana h

Sonali--- bus

Aur uthkar uski god mai baith gayiii aur Raj ko kiss karne lagi raj ne sonali ki kamar pakad rakhi thi aur full support mai kiss kar rahe the ek dusre ko jab sanso ne dikat di tab alag huve

Raj ---abi muje ashram jana hoga


Sonali--- 3 baje h abi toh baad mai chale jana .. yanhi ruk jao aj mumkin h toh..

Maine sonali ke chehre ko apne hatho mai liya aur kaha jaggu ka matter nipat jaye tab yanhi rukunga hum sath milke celebrate karenge ....par abi jana hoga warna guruji naraj ho gaye toh mera nikalna band......


Insab ke bich 9 se 2 baje tak school mai kya huva jaan lete h

Ravi – shweta raj ni aya city gaya h kya

Sunil🤨🤨🤨

Shweta – ni toh wo toh aj ashram he h sunil ne bataya tha na

Kriti --- sad mood se ok..

Sunil--- kya huva ravi city se kuch mangana h kya muje bata de main deepika di se mangwa deta hu...

Javed – are ni ye toh bus aise he uske bare mai puch raha tha..

Shweta--- achaaa....maine toh kuch aur he socha.....

Sunil—vaise 3 4 din baad pti sir ke pass jane ki bol raha tha wo aur wanhi rukega agle din movie ke programme ke liye bol raha tha

Ye sun kar ravi javed ke chahre pe smile agai thi
Toh
Sunil ke chahre pe bi ek kutil muskaan thiii

Aur jab ye sab alag ho gaye tab

Shweta—dhekha meri acting


Sunil—bandariya over acting karne lagi thi

Shweta --- rahne de tu .. ye log sochte h humare chere pe toh chuuu

Sunil,-- chup meri maa bahut bolne lagi h agli baar aisa bola toh tange tod dunga tuje pata h na hum
dono ko he galiya pasand ni h

Shweta – sorry sorry ab ayega maza....


Aur chutti ho gayi school ki aur sab chale gaye apni apni jagah

In shweta room


Richa--- yaar ye kabi ata h kabi ni muje raj ke aise kaam bilkul pasand ni h...

Shweta--- sabka ek persnal space hota h raj ko bandh mat warna pata ni koyi aur agayi toh baithi rah jayegi..


Richa – oh hello koyi aur agayi toh main kounsa uske liye baithi rahungi.. ladko ki line lagi h line...ek se badhkar ek paisa aur power walo ki...

Shweta--- man mai main toh khud chahti hu tu dur ho jaye kyoki tu ek gamandi ladki h aur muje pata h bhai ki life mai koyi aa bi rahi h wo tujse toh bahut achi h aur phir boli jo dikhta h wo kabi hota ni h....

Actualy raat ko shweta aur deepika ne bi raj ko sonali ki banho mai sota dhek liya tha

Time. 5 pm
Training ground


Raj ki dhunayi oh sorry sorry traing ho rahi thi Xabhi sir aur Raj ke moves ab quickle exchange ho rahe the but abi bi maar padh rahi thi raaj ko jo ki raj sah raha tha

Xabhi sir – good agar aise he heemat aur man laga ke training karoge toh 2 months mai tum close combat ke king ho jaoge

Piche se awaj ayi acha
Maine aur sir ne dhekha toh guruji khade the unka ek hath piche muda huva tha

Guruji--- jara dikhao muje ki kya sikha h choose karo ..attack ya defance ...


Main-defence

Guruji itna sunte he tezi ke sath ek hath mara meri chest pe jo itna tez laga ki kayi feet dur gira aur khada huva bi ni tha ki guruji ne piche se meri t shirt pakad ke fenka phir dur gira main khada huva jump laga ke unki kick ayi fast maine 2no hath se block kiya phir ek punch right dikhage diya left wala mu par maine block kiya aur thoda piche huva mere piche hote he again kick padi chest pe kayi feet dur khisakta huva piche gira


Mere toh hosh he ud gaye ki main 3 saal se hard training kar raha hu aur ek 70 ke near by age ke person ne aise dhoya h ki main jaise koyi bejaan ruii hu

Guruji --- abhi bahut jayda gunjaish h raj.mera 2 waar rok liya h matlb tumahari training achi ja rahi h Raj no one is perfect in world so always ready to learn ......main phir check karunga

Main --- ji guruji ...kuch ruk kar apse baat karni h

Guruji--- Raat 8 baje aur us bachi ko bi bula lo kya naam h sonali...Xabhi tum bi aoge
Xabhi ji guruji...

Time 8 pm guruji room

8 pm se 8.15 pm ho gaye the sab chup the

Main – gurujiii

Guruji --shant raho bus 5 minut
Knock knock ...

Guruji --- agar tumhe aj bi mujse saja lene mai itna he anand ata h toh yahi sahi tumhe saza milegiii jarur milegi...

Wo shaks ---- kayi saal se ni mili h saza apke hatho se isiliye late aya hu muje sab manjur h


Guruji – tikh h baitho aur inse milo.. ek kaam h jo tumhe inke sath pura karna h

Wo shaks –guruji ap kaanhe...ma...i..n na.....ka..r..u..chonkar ye yanha kya kar raha h

Guruji – iske sath he milkar karna h

Wo --- main nahi bilkul ni matlb no never impossible hum dono sath kabhi ni muje marna manjur h par iske sath ni karunga kaam.

Xabhi sir – muje kounse khujli wale kutte ne kata h jo main mar raha hu tere sath kaam karne ke liye muje bi ni karna h

Wo—tu marta bi hota toh bi ni karu tere sath

Xabhi—main bi nahi karna chahta hu samja tere sath puri planning ki maa bahan kardeta h tuu


Wo --- abe toh aise koun plan karta h ek ek ko marne ke liye pura din ni h mere pass

Xabhi --- toh puri jagah ko koun jalata h udata h information naam ki chidiya h wo leke ani hoti h.

Wo—abe murgi ko he maar do toh ande he ni degi kahe ki information ka jhanjhat

Main aur sonali aur sunil 3no garden ko kabhi idhar toh kabhi udhar kar rahe the kafi dair bardast no huva toh main bola

Main—ok ap dono rahne do hum khud karlenge..

Wo dono ek sath--- bache dubara hamare bich bola toh tuje ulta latka denge...aur koyi utarne bi ni ayega samja


Xabhi --abe Aag tera hamesa ka h ye

Aag --kya hamesa ka h pura din ni hota h mere pass petrol bomb laga aur jala de ni toh bum se uda de aur ghar rawana bus itna he hota h


Xabhi ---toh puri duniya ko batana jaruri h ki kuch karne aye h

Aag ----Aag toh jalti h tab duniya ko pata lagta he h apna simple fanda h ya toh jala ke maardo ya bum se udake gaad do...

Guruji--- chup ho jao dono Warna mujse bura koyi ni hoga beta raj jara wo goli dena pichli baar bi indono ke sath rahne pe he li thi aur aj bi ...ab agar tum dono lade toh dhek lena
Xabhi main kanha ladta hu ye he ladta h

Aag – tu meri baat ni manta h
Guruji chup ho jao aur uthkar ghumne lage

Xabhi aur aag sir—guruji

Guruji – chup chup bilkul chup tum dono bilkul chup koyi ni bholega dono mai se ...

10 mint sannata chaya raha phir Guruji bole

Guruji --- puri baat sunna Aag bich mai mat bolna isai milo ye h raj..pura naam Raj singh nirwaan
Aag sir nirwaan sir name sun ke dhayan se dhekne
lage kabhi muje toh kabhi guruji ko

Guruji --- Baap ka naam Sahdev singh aur ye vidya ka beta h ....abi shant raho aur sunte raho isai abhi Xabhi training de raha h phir tumhe deni h

Aag sir shanti se Raj ko dhekte huve bus ha mai gardan hila dete h
Aur phir 5ke bich planning hoti h thodi dair baad jab Aag sir notmal hote h tab

Aag – guruji itno ki kya jarurat h ye kasm toh ye xabhi ki aur ishara karke ye akela bi kar sakta h na isliye muje iske sath kaam ni karna hota h kachuve jaisi chal se chalta h..

Xabhi--- dheklo guruji ye phir shuru gaya is sai shanti se kaam ni hota h...har baar shor sharaba karna jaruri hota h

Guruji – aj tum dono ander rahoge hum sab bahar ja rahe h aur tum dono ko sath kaam karna h aur planing ache se karke ana aur is fight mai training bi deni h toh ......jab bahar ao toh perfect plan hona chahiye aur sath milke hona chahiye bina lade...guruji aur hum sab undono ko chod kar gaye toh time 10 baj rahe the ......aur aur aur jab wo bahar aye subhe ke 5 baj rahe the 😂😂😂😂😱😱😲😲😳😳 Kyoki ek Aag ki trah violent h toh dusra planning master water ki trah perfect cool💦💦💦💦💦💦🔥🔥🔥🔥 sahmati bante time lag gaya par abi bi ek shanti se kaam karna chahta tha toh dusra dhamake daar entry....



Aj ke liye itna he.....
💦💦💦💦💦💦🔥🔥🔥🔥 Agai dhekte h ek aag h aur dusra pani ka tufan aur bich mai raj......solid lagne wali h.....
nice update..!!
raj aur sonali ne commissioner ko sath leke achha kiya hai..aur ab raj ka plan toh ready hai..raj aur sonali ki bonding bahot achhi banti ja rahi hai..dono ke bich ek pyaar panap raha hai..!! yeh ravi aur javed raj ke bare me puchh rahe the shweta aur sunil se..tab hi unn dono ko doubt huva aur sunil ne unko bata bhi diya ki raj kab janewala hai sheher..lagta shweta se pata chal gaya hai raj aur sunil ko ki usne inn logo ko bataya tha jaggu ke bhai ko marne ka kissa..tab hi toh sunil unko raj ke sheher jane ki info di..inn do haramiyon ko itni badi saja milni chahiye ki dono state chhodkar hi bhaag jaye..yeh shweta galiya badi deti hai aur yeh baat uske dono bhai raj aur sunil ko nahi psand hai..!! shweta ne sahi kaha richa ghamandi toh hai..agar richa ka aisa hi attitude raha toh raj jaisa pyaar karne wala kho degi..aur ek raj dur chala gaya toh fir nahi loutega..richa ko raj ko khona nahi hai toh ek normal insan ke jaise raj se pyaar karna hoga..!!
guruji toh mere aur xabhi bhai ki wajah se goli bhi khate hai..ab dono ke kaam karne ke tarike alag hai toh zagda toh hona banta hai..lekin dono ne ratbhar jaag ke kuchh toh plan bana liya hai..aur ab dekhte hai dono kaise ek sath kaam karte hai..maja aayega aag aur xabhi jab ek sath ladenge..!!
 
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Update 37

Fleshback --- Deepika ke ghar se breakfast karke nikalne ke baad raj aur sonali baat karte huve ek plan bana ke commissioner office pahuchte h aur apna plan implement karte h ...jo ki bilkul fit baith ta h aur jaggu ko news milte he wo sab gundo ko ashram wali road pe laga deta h raj ke liye aur dusri traf raj sonali dono sonali ke ghar par hote h .....

Ab agai.......


Main--- mam khana toh acha banaya h apne ...

Commissioner—are bhai aj tumhare ane ki khusi mai isne ye paneer aur kheer etc banaya h. ...warna muje toh Daal chawal he khilati h....

Sonali--- sir ap h na
bahut sikayat karte ho main aunty ko bolungi..

Commissioner—kyo meri hasti khelti surat achi ni lagti kya jo aisa kaam karne ki soch rahi h...


Main aur sonali hasne lage ..

Main---- uncle ap apni police ko alert pe rakhna aur sirf kabil aur imandar logo ko he chahe kanhi aur se bulane h toh bula lo par imandar chahiye aj se 4 din baad strike hogi ap ki police force ko sonali mam guide karengi aur i think muje lagta h agar jaggu ka khel khatm huva toh mam ka bi permotion ho jayega

Commissioner—beta main arrange kar lunga aur yanha ke local police walo ko sonali dhek legi ki koun best rahega aur ha permotion toh confirm hoga jaggu koyi mamuli criminal ni h pure heemachal mai uska gang h

Main—jald he uska kaam khatm hoga

Commissioner – ok beta ab main chalta hu kuch change ho toh sonali inform kar degi aur apni gun bina license wali sath rakhana

Sonali-- ji sir aur gate tak chod ke agayi ....

Commissioner ke jane ke baad raj ke bagal mai baith gayi ...

Sonali--- so whats the plan

Raj – filhaal muje sweet khana h

Sonali--- bus

Aur uthkar uski god mai baith gayiii aur Raj ko kiss karne lagi raj ne sonali ki kamar pakad rakhi thi aur full support mai kiss kar rahe the ek dusre ko jab sanso ne dikat di tab alag huve

Raj ---abi muje ashram jana hoga


Sonali--- 3 baje h abi toh baad mai chale jana .. yanhi ruk jao aj mumkin h toh..

Maine sonali ke chehre ko apne hatho mai liya aur kaha jaggu ka matter nipat jaye tab yanhi rukunga hum sath milke celebrate karenge ....par abi jana hoga warna guruji naraj ho gaye toh mera nikalna band......


Insab ke bich 9 se 2 baje tak school mai kya huva jaan lete h

Ravi – shweta raj ni aya city gaya h kya

Sunil🤨🤨🤨

Shweta – ni toh wo toh aj ashram he h sunil ne bataya tha na

Kriti --- sad mood se ok..

Sunil--- kya huva ravi city se kuch mangana h kya muje bata de main deepika di se mangwa deta hu...

Javed – are ni ye toh bus aise he uske bare mai puch raha tha..

Shweta--- achaaa....maine toh kuch aur he socha.....

Sunil—vaise 3 4 din baad pti sir ke pass jane ki bol raha tha wo aur wanhi rukega agle din movie ke programme ke liye bol raha tha

Ye sun kar ravi javed ke chahre pe smile agai thi
Toh
Sunil ke chahre pe bi ek kutil muskaan thiii

Aur jab ye sab alag ho gaye tab

Shweta—dhekha meri acting


Sunil—bandariya over acting karne lagi thi

Shweta --- rahne de tu .. ye log sochte h humare chere pe toh chuuu

Sunil,-- chup meri maa bahut bolne lagi h agli baar aisa bola toh tange tod dunga tuje pata h na hum
dono ko he galiya pasand ni h

Shweta – sorry sorry ab ayega maza....


Aur chutti ho gayi school ki aur sab chale gaye apni apni jagah

In shweta room


Richa--- yaar ye kabi ata h kabi ni muje raj ke aise kaam bilkul pasand ni h...

Shweta--- sabka ek persnal space hota h raj ko bandh mat warna pata ni koyi aur agayi toh baithi rah jayegi..


Richa – oh hello koyi aur agayi toh main kounsa uske liye baithi rahungi.. ladko ki line lagi h line...ek se badhkar ek paisa aur power walo ki...

Shweta--- man mai main toh khud chahti hu tu dur ho jaye kyoki tu ek gamandi ladki h aur muje pata h bhai ki life mai koyi aa bi rahi h wo tujse toh bahut achi h aur phir boli jo dikhta h wo kabi hota ni h....

Actualy raat ko shweta aur deepika ne bi raj ko sonali ki banho mai sota dhek liya tha

Time. 5 pm
Training ground


Raj ki dhunayi oh sorry sorry traing ho rahi thi Xabhi sir aur Raj ke moves ab quickle exchange ho rahe the but abi bi maar padh rahi thi raaj ko jo ki raj sah raha tha

Xabhi sir – good agar aise he heemat aur man laga ke training karoge toh 2 months mai tum close combat ke king ho jaoge

Piche se awaj ayi acha
Maine aur sir ne dhekha toh guruji khade the unka ek hath piche muda huva tha

Guruji--- jara dikhao muje ki kya sikha h choose karo ..attack ya defance ...


Main-defence

Guruji itna sunte he tezi ke sath ek hath mara meri chest pe jo itna tez laga ki kayi feet dur gira aur khada huva bi ni tha ki guruji ne piche se meri t shirt pakad ke fenka phir dur gira main khada huva jump laga ke unki kick ayi fast maine 2no hath se block kiya phir ek punch right dikhage diya left wala mu par maine block kiya aur thoda piche huva mere piche hote he again kick padi chest pe kayi feet dur khisakta huva piche gira


Mere toh hosh he ud gaye ki main 3 saal se hard training kar raha hu aur ek 70 ke near by age ke person ne aise dhoya h ki main jaise koyi bejaan ruii hu

Guruji --- abhi bahut jayda gunjaish h raj.mera 2 waar rok liya h matlb tumahari training achi ja rahi h Raj no one is perfect in world so always ready to learn ......main phir check karunga

Main --- ji guruji ...kuch ruk kar apse baat karni h

Guruji--- Raat 8 baje aur us bachi ko bi bula lo kya naam h sonali...Xabhi tum bi aoge
Xabhi ji guruji...

Time 8 pm guruji room

8 pm se 8.15 pm ho gaye the sab chup the

Main – gurujiii

Guruji --shant raho bus 5 minut
Knock knock ...

Guruji --- agar tumhe aj bi mujse saja lene mai itna he anand ata h toh yahi sahi tumhe saza milegiii jarur milegi...

Wo shaks ---- kayi saal se ni mili h saza apke hatho se isiliye late aya hu muje sab manjur h


Guruji – tikh h baitho aur inse milo.. ek kaam h jo tumhe inke sath pura karna h

Wo shaks –guruji ap kaanhe...ma...i..n na.....ka..r..u..chonkar ye yanha kya kar raha h

Guruji – iske sath he milkar karna h

Wo --- main nahi bilkul ni matlb no never impossible hum dono sath kabhi ni muje marna manjur h par iske sath ni karunga kaam.

Xabhi sir – muje kounse khujli wale kutte ne kata h jo main mar raha hu tere sath kaam karne ke liye muje bi ni karna h

Wo—tu marta bi hota toh bi ni karu tere sath

Xabhi—main bi nahi karna chahta hu samja tere sath puri planning ki maa bahan kardeta h tuu


Wo --- abe toh aise koun plan karta h ek ek ko marne ke liye pura din ni h mere pass

Xabhi --- toh puri jagah ko koun jalata h udata h information naam ki chidiya h wo leke ani hoti h.

Wo—abe murgi ko he maar do toh ande he ni degi kahe ki information ka jhanjhat

Main aur sonali aur sunil 3no garden ko kabhi idhar toh kabhi udhar kar rahe the kafi dair bardast no huva toh main bola

Main—ok ap dono rahne do hum khud karlenge..

Wo dono ek sath--- bache dubara hamare bich bola toh tuje ulta latka denge...aur koyi utarne bi ni ayega samja


Xabhi --abe Aag tera hamesa ka h ye

Aag --kya hamesa ka h pura din ni hota h mere pass petrol bomb laga aur jala de ni toh bum se uda de aur ghar rawana bus itna he hota h


Xabhi ---toh puri duniya ko batana jaruri h ki kuch karne aye h

Aag ----Aag toh jalti h tab duniya ko pata lagta he h apna simple fanda h ya toh jala ke maardo ya bum se udake gaad do...

Guruji--- chup ho jao dono Warna mujse bura koyi ni hoga beta raj jara wo goli dena pichli baar bi indono ke sath rahne pe he li thi aur aj bi ...ab agar tum dono lade toh dhek lena
Xabhi main kanha ladta hu ye he ladta h

Aag – tu meri baat ni manta h
Guruji chup ho jao aur uthkar ghumne lage

Xabhi aur aag sir—guruji

Guruji – chup chup bilkul chup tum dono bilkul chup koyi ni bholega dono mai se ...

10 mint sannata chaya raha phir Guruji bole

Guruji --- puri baat sunna Aag bich mai mat bolna isai milo ye h raj..pura naam Raj singh nirwaan
Aag sir nirwaan sir name sun ke dhayan se dhekne
lage kabhi muje toh kabhi guruji ko

Guruji --- Baap ka naam Sahdev singh aur ye vidya ka beta h ....abi shant raho aur sunte raho isai abhi Xabhi training de raha h phir tumhe deni h

Aag sir shanti se Raj ko dhekte huve bus ha mai gardan hila dete h
Aur phir 5ke bich planning hoti h thodi dair baad jab Aag sir notmal hote h tab

Aag – guruji itno ki kya jarurat h ye kasm toh ye xabhi ki aur ishara karke ye akela bi kar sakta h na isliye muje iske sath kaam ni karna hota h kachuve jaisi chal se chalta h..

Xabhi--- dheklo guruji ye phir shuru gaya is sai shanti se kaam ni hota h...har baar shor sharaba karna jaruri hota h

Guruji – aj tum dono ander rahoge hum sab bahar ja rahe h aur tum dono ko sath kaam karna h aur planing ache se karke ana aur is fight mai training bi deni h toh ......jab bahar ao toh perfect plan hona chahiye aur sath milke hona chahiye bina lade...guruji aur hum sab undono ko chod kar gaye toh time 10 baj rahe the ......aur aur aur jab wo bahar aye subhe ke 5 baj rahe the 😂😂😂😂😱😱😲😲😳😳 Kyoki ek Aag ki trah violent h toh dusra planning master water ki trah perfect cool💦💦💦💦💦💦🔥🔥🔥🔥 sahmati bante time lag gaya par abi bi ek shanti se kaam karna chahta tha toh dusra dhamake daar entry....



Aj ke liye itna he.....
💦💦💦💦💦💦🔥🔥🔥🔥 Agai dhekte h ek aag h aur dusra pani ka tufan aur bich mai raj......solid lagne wali h.....
🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 aag lga di Sahab...
Guru ji ke sar me dard hone lga Aag or xbhi ki ldai sunkr ya kahe Bakvash karte dekh kr...

Are Aag bhaya kya Aap ki real me Kabhi aisi Tu tu mai mai Hui hai kya, nhi na to is writer bhau ko kisne bol diya ki Aap ki ryming or timing nhi banati, Lagta hai yah writer Bhau ko koi tip diyela hai Aap ke khilaf...
Guru ji ne Aag or xbhi ko ek kamre me band kr diya hai ab Dekhte hai us kamre me batti thi bhi ya nhi :D to raat ke 10 baje se subah ke 5 bje tk planning chali hai aap dono me dekhenge akhir kya planning ki hai aap dono ne Raj ko training dene or jaggu ko khatm krne ke liye...
Sunil ne sweta ke sath milkr Ravi or javed ke pass info pahucha di hai ki raj kab sahar jayega, Dekhte hai kya hoga jb Sunil Ravi or javed ke bare me btayega...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
 
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Turnament day 1 after fight and Day 2 planning



Recap – last update mai apne Dhekha ki ek galat fahmi ke chalte sonali ne Raj ko giraftar kar liya aur thane mai usko maro aur is action ka reaction bahut bura huva state ke minister aur sab bade adhikari thane mai aa pahuche aur guruji ki entry huvi jiske baad sonali ka marna tay tha aur raj jaise he usai marne laga tabi joginder ka call aya aur dono ke bich kuch bate huvi aur Raj ne sanoli ko chod diya......phir sp aur commissioner ne usai samjaya aur sonali ne bi is mamle ko short out karne ki soch li h....



Ab agaiii----




Raj guruji aur sunil shweta sab car mai ja rahe the guruji alaga car mai the....

Shweta --- rote huve bhai ap tikh toh ho na hame pahle hospital jana chahiye dr ke pass ..

Main—maine usko side se apne gale se lagaya aur kaha dhek main bilkul tikh hu tere samne hu itni chot mere liye kuch ni h rote ni h

Sunil--- chup tha phir gusai se bola wo pichle ek hour se he ro rahi h jab se tere pakde jane ki baat pata lagi h isne uncle ko bi call kiya tha..

Main--- shweta chup ho ja dhek main tikh hu aur uncle se meri baat ho gayi h unhi ke call ate he muje chod diya tha unke call pe minister sp sab agaye the

Shweta – ha dhekha tha maine ap agai se aisa kuch ni karenge aur aj ke baad in class ki chudailo se dur rahenge gandi ladkiya jinhe bolne ka bi akal ni h gamandi amir ghar ki kutiya kanhi ki galich Sali ....😡😡



Sunil aur main😳😳😳😳dono he hairan the ki aj isne gali di hame itne saal sath ho gaye the pahli baar isne aisa kiya h



Aise he hum shweta ko pahle hostle chod ke aye aur usai kah diya tha ki thane wali baat kisi ko ni batayegi koyi kuch puche toh koyi kahani suna dena....




In ashram

Guruji --- sunil ye oshidi usai laga dena aur ye goliya usai de dena aur kah dena roj raatko isai niyamait roop se yani regular le

Sunil ji guri ji

Guruji – putra aise he uske sath rahna tumhe chupkar uska sath dena h tumhari hakikat kisi ko na pata lage sabko yahi lage ki raj busakela h aur tum uske sath padhte ho Ab jao ...aram karo

Main aram se leta huva tha sunil aya aur oshidi uske hath mai thi meri pith mai lagane laga

Main—sale lugayi mat bana kar har waqt wo bi aise react ni karti jaise tu karta h itni bhundii sakal bana ke.

Usne itna suna aur jor jor se ragad ke lagane laga aur muje dard aur jabardast jalan hone lagi

Main—galti ho gayi sorry sorry dubara ni bolunga na tokunga

Sunil – unsabko aj mar dena chahiye tha samja tu nahi rokta toh sab mare ja chuke hota dubara roka na toh tere he pichwade mai daal dunga chaku..

Main – tikh h bhai kaha na dubara ni rokunga waise us inspector ki aukat usai maine dikha di thi par bhai uske bare mai jaanke yar hamdardi ho gayi us sai aur sabi uski tarif he kar rahe the ki imandar h heematwali h acha laga ki koyi toh imandar h aur sanbse badi baat joginder uncle ne mana kiya usai kuch karne se isliye chod diya bhaiii kuch bi ho yaar sunil inspector bahut hot thi

Sunil --- itni maar khali tune abi bi hot dikh rahi h tharki sale. tikh h ab ye goli le le aur aram kar thodi dair baad khana khayenge ok main ata hu


Inhe chodte h aram karne dete h wanhi dusri taraf---


Jaggu--- ha bol kya khabar h

Gunda-- bhai wo sonali ne us londe ko utha liya tha

Jaggu—kyo usne kyo uthya puri baat ek baar mai bata samja

Gunda – ji bhai uski ladayi huvi thi mall ke bahar aise he puri baat bata ta gaya aur last mai bhai jab main thane ke pass pahucha toh pata laga SP khud usai chudane aya tha kafi bhari panga huva tha muje lagta h amir ghar ka ladka h isiliye sab aye the hame aur hoshiyaar rahna padega...

Jaggu--- amir ghar ka h toh kya marna he padega usai aur kal wo marega jab wo apne school ki taraf wapas jayega ham us sunsaan ilake mai hamla karenge aur usai utha ke yanha layenge aur phir in bhukhe kutto ke bich mai daal denge aur sale ko tadpta huva dhekhunga tu bus ye pata kar ke rakhna uske sath koyi security toh ni h na

Gunda ji bhai aj bi vaise security ni thi aur kal ka bi main dhayan rakhunga aur khabar kar dunga..

Jaggu --- ha tikh h aur sahar ke loundo ko ikkahta kar le drugs adde pe lana h kuch gadbad huvi toh wo police se bheedne ko taiyar rahenge aur hamara maal surakhsit rahega...


In hospital ---


Sonali --- aj ke liye jo huva uske liye maafii mangti hu

Havaldar – mam hum jante h ki ap kya ho aur kaisi ho isliye ap itna nahi soche apki toh khud jaan badi muskil se bachi h aur isi bahane hame rest mil jayega hadiya tuti h wapas jud jayengi puri trah se ...ap rest kijiye jaggu ko pakadna h abi ..

Sonali – ok

Aur wo police jeep main ghar nikal gayi raste mai man mai sochti ja rahi thi ki mr Raj ab tumsee dubara milna he padega akhir tum chij kya ho jo kam umar mai bi police walo se bheed gaye aur ek hour mai he itna hadkamnp macha diya .who r u Raj ...aur sonali chahre pe ek muskaan thi jo sayad kisi ka bi katal karne ke liye kaafi thi kyoki sonali khud bla ki khoobshurti ki malkin jo thi uski 34 ki breast 28 ki kamar fair rang aur police ki vardi mai kayamat he lagti thi....



In hostel


Dhek shweta tu bata rahi h ya nahi...ye thi kriti jo lagatar shweta se raj ke bare mai puche ja rahi thi kyoki sabko raj jab ho mall mai halafulka khane gaye the uske baad se ni mila tha isilye sab sheta se puchne uske piche room mai aagaye the .Richa komal suchitra aur kuch senior girls thi jo uske room mai ayi thi

Deepika—shweta bata de please

Shweta--- ok pahle kriti tu baith ja toh sun bhai ka thode pareshan the isliye hum wanha se ghumne kanhi aur chale gaye the...

Deepika aur sabi bus itni si baat

Shweta—aur kya humne khoob enjoy kiya ek taxi se hum sunset point gaye wanha kya nazara tha humghume phire phir kuch halka fulka khake aagaye car toh tumne dhekhi he thi jo chodne ayi thi tumhare samne sunil khud niche bi utra tha........

Sab shant ho gaye the uski baat sunke ...


Dusri taraf boys hostel mai

Ravi – Teri aj ki planing toh fail ho gayi raghu mai dum h ya ni ya wo bi raj ke hath maar khake pada rahega kalu ko foukat mainpaise aur dene pade

Javed – ab muje thodi na pata tha ki wo chutiya kalu gaandu niklega ..koyi ni kal raghu he uska ilaj karega ...

Ravi – koyi ni agar wo na kar paya toh jaggu toh h he .hamara kaam har haal mai ho he jayega ... Humai toh bus intezar karna h Aur dono aise he bate karte rahe



Par in dono se dur ek shakhs tha jo gahri soch mai tha aur wo behad he chintit sakal banaye room mai ghoom raha tha aur thodi dair u he ghumte huve ...unhone kuch socha aur chal diye thodi dair baad.... Wo ek room ke samne darwaja khatkhataya aur ek shaks bahar aya ek kaam h usai karna h kal jab tak Raj apne ashram tak ni pahuch jata h bina kisi ki nazar mai aye uski rakhsa karni h koyi bi chahe koyi bi aye koyi bi usai khatm kardena h bina saboot diye raj ashram mai ya school mai h tab tak dikat ni h bahar aj bi log uske bare mai pata kar rahe h


Samne se ho jayega main kisi ki bi nazar mai aye uska dhyan rakhunga...



Kal ka din bahut kuch lane wala h shatranj ki bazi mai pyade bhidne wale h sabki day two ki planing ho chuki h. agai ke updates love and thunder se bharpur honge .......

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Sonali raj ko pyar bethi he sayad....Richa pagal pyar ko samjhte hai nehni.... amazing update
 
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Turnament day 2 love and thunder part 1




RECAP—Pichle update mai apne padha ki hostel mai sabi raj ke u achanak gayab hone ki wajah puch rahe the toh dusri taraf sonali ne paka irada kar liya tha ki ab wo Raj se is mamle ko shortout karke he rahegi ....aur wanhi jaggu puri planning kar chuka h ki raat ko jab Raj wapas lotega tab uspe hamla karega aur badla lega ..javed aur ravi bi raghu ke bharose h ab ki wo unka match mai harakar badla lega ...


Ab agaiiii


Sab morning mai ready the kyoki turnament ki wajah se senior classes ka 2 din off rakha gaya tha taki sab enjoy kare

Pti sir – congratulations to Raj ye final mai pahuch chuka h iska opposite wrestler last match jeet gaya but enjury ke karan out ho gaya h so hamara match ab 7 pm hoga toh aj hum morning free h toh aj hum shimla ghumenge

Sab khus ho gaye the aj ek ajib baat thi subhe se he richa bus raj ko nihare ja rahi thi aur Raj aj bilkul shant aur chup tha khair sabi bus mai chade aur nikal pade shimla ridge ki taraf main toh bus apne pti sir ki bike pe he tha aur mast asspass ke nazare dhek raha tha hum jaise jaise apne destination pe pahuch rahe the view bahut he pyara hota ja raha tha sab bus se utar kar sare ghumne lage main ek jagah pe baith gaya aur hills view ka lootf uthane laga richa mere pass aake baith gayi

Maine uske gale mai hath dalke usko apne se chipka liya aur wo bi aj bina bole mujse chipki rahi sayad uske man mai bi pyar ka ahsas jag gaya tha ya kal ki koyi baat uspe asar kar gayi thi ye toh ye khud he jantithi ya upar wala ... aur main man mai dar raha tha ki kanhi shweta ne sach na bata diya ho dono he ek ajeeb si kasmakas mai the aur ek dure ki taraf pyar se dhek rahe the sayad ye hamare pyar ka pahla ahsaas tha na wo kuch bol rahi thi na main ..bus ek dusre ko dhekhe ja rahe the aur ye khoobsurat wadiya aur suhana mousam bi hamra sath de raha tha hum dono ko he kisi ki parwah ni thi hum toh duniya se dur hamari pyar ki duniya mai bhade ja rahe the mere hoth dheere dheere richa ke hotho ki taraf ja rahe the aur uski bi halat aisi he thi usai ahsaasho gaya tha ki kya hone wala h mere dil ki dhadkan tez hoti ja rahi thi meri jindgi ka pahla kiss tha aur uska bi richa ki ankhe band thi mere jism mai uski khusboo sama rahi thi mere hoth jaise he uske hotho se mile muje ek current ka ahsaas huva mere hoth puri trah uske hotho se judh gaye the meri ankhe bi band ho gayi thi main swarg mai pahuch chuka tha mere hoth richa ke hotho ke ras ko pi rahe the aur muje sahad ki mithas ka ahsas ho raha tha humai pata he ni laga ki kitni dair ho gayi h main jab dheere se piche huva tab bi richa ki ankhe band thi usne ankhe kholke meri taraf dhekha usko meri ankho mai besumaar pyar dikh raha tha khud ke liye hum aise he ek dusre mai khoye the is baat se anjaan ki shweta suchitra komal sunil kriti and deepika aur uska group hame charo taraf se gher ke khada h aur hamre is pure seen ko bade gor se nazdeek se dhek raha h

Sunil—abe kamine thodi jagah toh dhek liya kar ...

Main—bina dhekhe he bola hamesa meri lugayi mat bana kar aj toh bakhs de dhek ni raha teri bhabhi kiss de rahi h kabab mai log toh haddii bante tu haddaaa ban raha h dafa ho ja kuch dair...

Sunil—ek baar charo taraf dhek le phir boliyo ...

Maine upar dhekha toh fatak se khada ho gaya

Main—shwetaaa ... Deepika mam..i mean didi sorry mam sorry didi.....

Deepika—shant Raj shant

Mera sala popat ho gaya tha
Main bus nichi gardan karke khada ho gaya richa bechari sharm ke mare komal ko pakadke nikal gayii uska chehra pura sharam ke mare laal ho gaya tha wo toh nikal gayi aur sab meri khichayi karne lage

Shweta—bhai finaly kiss 😘 kya baat h akhir ye maan he gayi apke pyar ke agai jhuk gayi ek saal lag gaya apko kiss lene mai ha ha ha...

Deepika-- little brother raj seriously r u in love i m so happy for u ...and if i m right it was your first kiss....😀

Main ab kya he bolta aur bhag gaya un sabse dur aur wo sabi bus jor jor se hans rahi thi ...hum phir jhakoo temple bi ghumne gaye wanha richa aur muje akele rahne ka time kafi mila hum ek kone mai akele baithe the

Richa – Raj

Main—hmm

Richa – main tumhare sath rahna chati hu whole life pata ni kaise but muje lagta h main tumahre sath khus rahti hu i

realy want you...

Main—bi tumhare sath puri jindgi bitana chahta hu richa i love u so much

Richa-- hmm i love u to raj hum kabi alag ni honge na

Main—jaan main ek simple ladka hu aur meri jindgi mai sirf tum ho aur dadaji h itni he jindgi h meri mere pass paisa bi ni h kya rah paogi mere sath kar paogi adjust tum ek bahut bade gharki ladki ho apne mata pita ki khwaisho ko pura karo agar wo maan gaye toh jarur karenge hum par kisi ka dil dhukha ke hum alag ni ho sakte h.....

Richa – mere papa ke pass bahut paisa h main rah lungi main khus hu u love me bus

Maine—uske hotho ko phir se chumna shuru kar diya aur thodi dair baad kaha abi time h tum aram se soch ke confirm karna main 12th class mai ayenge tab batana taki hum agai ki life ka decied kar sake aur apni family se bi puch ache se puch lena kyoki unki khusi sabse upar h..... Unhone tumhe is layak banaya h toh tumhe bi unhe khus rakhna chahiye....

Richa --- hmmm

Aur hum ek dusre ki banho mai simte rahe aur aj ka pura din enjoy kiya ye mera sabse lucky day tha phir hum sab ne halka fulka khaya isbaat se bekhabar tha main ki ek black Scorpio hamara picha start se kar rahi h jo ek ane wale tufaan ka sanket h...khair muje kya pata main toh apni jaan ke hotho ke ras pine aur uske nashe mai itna busy tha ki sab he bhul gaya sach kaha h duniya ne ladki ke ate he dimag lode pe aur loda dimag mai ghus jata h...

Gunda--- bhai us lounde ke sath koyi security ni h aur ek khuskhabri h

Jaggu –jaldi bol

Gunda—bhai wo bus mai ni aya h ek teacher ke sath he ghum rahah bike pe hum asani se utha sakte h

Jaggu – ha ha ha ab marega sala kutte ki maut ..tikh h tu piche laga rah aur koyi chook ni sab plan ke heesab se hoga

Aur jaggu ne mood kar apne sathiyo ko aj ka plan bataya aur kaha koyi galti ni honi chahiye h us lounde ko jinda uthana h jayda uchal kood kare toh thukayi kar dena aur kal baki ke log drugs yanha safe leke aoge.

Sab ek sath ji boss aur lag gaye aj ki taiyari mai



In commissioner office –

Sonali – sir jaggu ka abi tak pata ni laga h aur ap us turnament mai as chief guest ja rahe h sir muje apke support ki kabi bi jarurat pad sakti h

Commissioner – sonali police ki duniya ke ilaawa bi duniya h dhekho usai aur muje kuch ni sunna tum chalogi jaggu aj ni toh kal pakda jayega par beta tum apni personal life ko bi thoda jiyo

Sonali --- ji sir apki baat ko kaise mana kar sakti hu main apse jab bi argue karti hu ap mere papa ki trah baat karne lag jate h...aur muje haar manni padti h

Commissioner –ok toh sharp 6.30pm pahuch jana aur civil dress mai ana ok har jagah police nahi.. ..

Sonali – khadi huvi aur salute kiya aur nikal gayi jate huve wo thane pahuchi aur puri police force ko alert par laga diya tha ki wo jaggu ko dhundti rahe ..



Din nikalte time ni lagta h sab masti karte rahe aur time ho gaya tha school jane ka

50 gunde sahar mai ek ek kar alag alag roop banakar enter ho chuke the aur ashram ki aur jane wali road par ek jagah ikkate ho rahe the unke pass lohe ki rodes hockey chain dande the kyoki jaggu raj ko jinda pakadna chahta tha is liye jaggu ne apne sathiyo ke sath ye hathiyar bhejna he sahi samja aur jaggu ke baki admi sahar mai se drugs lane ke liye ikhatha ho rahe the pura sahar aj gundo se bhara huva tha par kisi ko aahat bi na thi....

Time 5pm xxschool turnament place.....

Hum andar pahuch chuke the main bi dress change kar chuka tha 7 baje muqabla shuru hona tha main dressing room mai name announce hone ka wait kar raha tha

Aur 2 log apne bhade ke tatoo ko samjha rahe the dhek raghuu tu naak mat katwana kalu ki trah warna mujse bura koyi ni hoga

Raghuuh- bhai apne dhekha na maine isai pahle wale pahlwan ki kya halat ki ap bus baitho aur enjoy karo

Javed aur ravi – tikh h raghu agar dil khus kar diya toh 10 lakh dunga samja apni baat sirf 5 ki he huvi thi pahle muje badla chahiye h

Raghu toh jhoom utha 25+10 35 laakh milenge bhai ho jayega kaam

Guests ane shuru ho gaye the commissioner aur khel mantri bi aye huve the aur unke sath thi sonali jo charo taraf security ko bi dhek rahi thi tabi uski nazar sunil par padi aur usai wo chahra jana pahchana laga kyoki thane mai khoob hadkamnp macha tha isliye usai ache se yaad ni h. Araha tha uska chehra..

Sunil -; ye yanha kyo ayi h

Shweta – koun

Sunil ye police wali isi ne giraftar kiya tha raj ko

Shweta--- kutti Sali keede lagenge

Deepika – are kise gali de rahi h

Shweta kisi😀😀 ko ni di

Deepika – ok match start hone wala h

Itne mai name announce huva toh dosto aj ka turnament hariyana ke sher under 17 age ke state champion raghunath aur ek naya sitara jisne ate he apna jalwa dikhaya h jo dhekne mai bhale he takatwar kam dikhta ho par isne is turnament mai apne kuch he daanv mai wreslers ko chit kar diya h pesh h mr Raj singh heemachal se

Aur meri entry huvi local schools ke kafi students aye the aur hamari school ki toh 2 buses ayi huvi thi puri jagah full thi

Sonali – ye yanha kal itni maar khane ke baad bi aur ye student h is school ka toh main sach mai he galti kar baithi thi aur ye wrestler h tabi isne sabko utha utha ke fenk diya .....abi amatuer h jawani foot rahi h

Commissioner – tum bi wahi soch rahi ho jo main soch raha hu

Sonali – yes sir aur acha raha apne muje bula liya ..aur ek smile uske chehre pe agayiii

Main pahuch gaya aur samne raghu khada tha usne ek baar ravi aur javed ki taraf dhekha jo maine bi dhek liya

Raghu – bache tune galat admi se panga le liya h

Main –chal be bhade ke tattoo teri aukat ni h bhokne ki samja

Raghu—wo abi pata lag jayega

Refree ne sitii bajayii

Raghu meri taraf aya hum dono ke panje ek dusre ke hatho mai the kabi wo muje dhakel raha tha kabi main usai achanak usne muje gale se pakad ke niche gira diya aur mere chahre ko jamin mai dabane laga aur bola bacha h tu hawa mai kam uda kar maine usai kaha tere baap ne shuruwat he ni kari h abi tak udne ki phir maine uske hath ki pakad chudayi aur dubara khada ho gaya..

Sonali muje he dhek rahi thi aur man mai boli garmi bahut h tab manu jab isai haraye par lagta ni h isai hara payega ye toh bahut takatwar lag raha h udhar se sunil chilla raha tha ki maar sale ko sabi ladkiya jo jor se raj raj chilla rahi thi

Hum dono phir aamne samne the wo muje aur main usai dhek raha tha

Raghu – aj inhi loundiyo ke samne tuje haraunga phir dhekhunga teri ye akad

Main – beta khandani akad h tujse na niklegi ye mere khun mai aur mera khun ab khol raha h ab tuje dikhata hu akad

Main bhaga samne usne pakadne ki kosis ki main jump marke uske piche aya aur dheere se uske sar pe tapli mari wo phir palta main phir uske piche tha phir se uske pichwade pe chapat mari ye seen dhek sab jor se hasne lage the jisai raghu gusai mai pagal saand ki trah ho gaya tha jo main chahta tha is baar jaise he usne muje pakadna chaha maine uska hath pakadkar jor se patka wo khada huva he tha ki maine uske piche se jake pakad ke puri takat se fenka uthake raghu gira 6 foot dur jake main khadahuva aur uski aur dhek ke bola beta is khun ki akad dhek li na tune aja ek baar aur ho jaye raghu ki toh gaand he jali padi thi wo pagal he ho chuka tha ab ki baar jaise he muje pakadne aya main side mai hata aur uske kandhe ko apne hath mai fansa ke patka sale ko sidha niche wo farsh par gira aur jor se chillaya kyoki solder dislocated ho gaya tha uska main bina deri kiye usai phir uthaya aur dono hathse kandhe pe dala aur circle se bahar niche janha javed aur ravi baithe the wanha fenk diya aur unhe dhek ke bola har father ka ek god father hota h aur guess who wo main hu dont mess with nirwana jo shuru tune kiya usai khatm main karunga ....Aur main puri tarike se khatm karta hu wait and watch aur match over ho gaya tha sab congrates kar rahe the muje sonali bi ayi

Sonali—congratulations

Shweta—pahle bhai ko arrest kar liya sb congratulations main papa ko phone ni karti toh ap toh chodti bi ni bhai ko

Main – shant jhansi ki rani shant and thank you inspector mam

Shweta – ab ap jayiye

Sonali bechari bolna chahti thi par chali gayi aur jate huve bi usne ek look se muje dhekha

Prize distribution ho raha tha aur sonali duety. Ki wajah se chali gayi thi muje first prize 25 lakh ka check mila jiske milne pe sabne party mangni suru kardi thi aur maine sabko bola party mere tarike se hogi veg ya non veg ya jaise bi meenu ap decied karlo Sunday ko hogi jheel ke pass ok

Sab khus the ki maine ha toh bhari aur sab bus mai chad gaye aur nikal gaye maine pti sir se bola sir mithayi leke chalni h ashram ke liye toh unhone ne bi ha bhari school bus pahle ravana ho chuki thi...



Sonali ghar pahuch ke kapde change karke rest kar rahi 2 hour ho chuke the turnament finish huve

Tring tring tring tring lagatar sonali ka phone vibrate ho raha tha Sonali naha ke ayi thi aur usne phone ko ring hota dhekha toh uthaya

Samne se—mam hamla hone wala h

Sonali –chonk kar kya... kanha pe aur kispe

Samne se – shimla school mai competition tha aj uske andar participate kiya tha ek ladke ne

Sonali – jor se...maine pucha koun

Samne se---- aj winner tha wo naam ni pata

Sonali—kya.... kaha winner kis jagah pe hoga hamla

Samne se school ke raste mai hoga abi ...

Aur sonali bhagi lower tshirt mai he ......

Sonali ---main kuch ni hone dungi tumhe raj...........wo itni jayda soch mai agayi thi ki apni service revolver bi ni le gayi sath mai



Love ke baad ab ek thunder uth gaya tha bahar aasman mai sayad koyi tufaan utha tha bijliya kadak rahi thi half hour lagte h agar speed se jaye toh par aj ye half hour bahut lambe hone wale the....



Aj ke liye itna he next update action aur dialouge ki bharmaar hogi dhekna hoga ki sonali sahi time pe pahuch payegi kya hoga jab raj ka samna 50 logo se hoga....

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RECAP------ Pichle update mai ap sabi ne dhekha ki Raj ka school tak paidal jana aur jheel kinare maidam richa ka comment marna aur final lunch ke waqt comment pass karna


AB AGAI.....


Mere gusai ke level bahut badh gaya tha hath mai jo kanch ka gilass tha usai bi tod diya tha daba ke aur jab uski bate sahan na huvi toh maine palat ke piche dhekha richa ki pith thi meri taraf aur wo bole ja rahi thi jisai soon soon ke mera sarir kanp raha tha main apne man pe bahut control kar raha thamain khada ho gaya aur man mai kosis kar raha tha ki shant rahu aur jab gusa futne he wala tha tab sunil ne jaldi se hath pakad liya mera aur bola

Sunil---Raj please shant ho ja bhai gusa mat kar

Main -hath chod mera aj mai isai sabak sikha ke rahunga

Sunil—bhai 2mint baat sunle baith ke phir jo chahe wo kar lena

Main uski baat sunke baith gaya aur bola bol.....

Sunil ---Bhai gusai mai ake jo kadam uthta h wo rakhsas hota h ya pashuuuu hota h kyoki wo dono he iske parinam ni sochte h ki usai kya hoga aur kya ni ek baar socho kya ye tum he ho kya tuje koyi prove kare aur tu ho jayega kya raj he jo itni dur guruji se sikhne aya h. phir agai usne kaha ki us ladki ne ek baat kahi tuje aur teri budhi kharab ho gayi sare wade tod chal diya sabak sikhne usai jabki tuje yanha 5 saal yanha rahna h aur agai kitne he bade kaam karne h....pahle soch phir kadam utha...

Raj—mere dil mai sunil ki kahi baate kis sui ki tarah ghus gayi jisne dard ke sath sochne pe majbur kar diya par dimag abi bi garam tha maine ass pass dhekha toh sirf 18 se niche age wale he bache the phir maine ek devil😈smile li aur khada ho gaya aur pahuch gaya maidam ki table ke saamne...

Aur jor se bola goodmorning everyone please yanha dhayan de ....Koyi ye bata sakta h ki ye jo 3 rows alag se h khane ke liye inpe jo student baithe h including me ye seats kinke liye ..h.main phir richa ki taraf dhek ke oh hello madam including u apse bi puch raha hu bhonk baad mai lena pahle sunlo aur jawab de do..ha toh koyiii batayega boys and grills

Richa –tumahari heemat kaise huvi muje aise bolne ki

Main----tikhi mirchi wahi bata raha hu soon toh le....
Ha toh koyi batayega

10th class ka ek ladka ye seat ya toh ek scholer ko ya phir jo jenious pepar pass karke ate h ya phir unhe milti h jo most powerfull background se hote h
Sabi bacho ke same reply tha phir muda main richa ki aur dheke kaha.

Main---Toh miss richa for your kind information ye 3 wajah jismai se ek wajah se main yanha baitha hu
1—main scholer ho sakta hu
2—main jenious test pass karke aya hu
3—i m the person who have a strong background......means most powerfull background..

Phir uske samne uski ankho mai dhek ke pahle 2 background agar mere huve toh ap mera jarur kuch ukhadne ki soch sakti ho becouse u r belonging rich family otherwise mera 3rd background huva toh u know very well ki main apka kya ukhad lunga uska apko andaza bi ni so next time kuch kahne se pahle uske results bi soch lene
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Charo taraf shanti thi aur main bus richa ki ankho mai dhek raha tha ..phir main bola u r beautifull girl without brain...hamesa yaad rakhna miss richa "HAR FATHER KA EK GOD FATHER HOTA H " phir main baith gaya lunch karne

Sunil---bhai tu h kya gusai mai alag tha aur ab alang dhek sabko kaise dhek rahe h tuje bhai tu h kya multi personality h kya

Main tu dimag mat laga chal class mai chalte h aur hum chal diye class mai

Hamare jane ke baad richa ko bahut insulted feel ho raha tha sath he fati huvi bi thi uski kyoki usai school ka agada pichada sab pata tha usai ye pata tha ki maine jo baat kahi wo fully correct h ...richa ki friend maine kaha tha na kal bi tuje kisi ko bi provoke mat kiya kar par aj bi wahi kiya aur kya mila sivaye khud ki bezzati ke uski baat sahi thi dhek wo acha ladka h isliye usne kal ni kaha kuch par aj phir tune usai ulta kaha toh kahega he wo yanha padh raha h matlb wo special h richa

Richa –toh kya main ni hu shweta special

Shweta –maine aisa kab kaha tu yaar jayda soch mat bus ulaj mat kisi se hum yanha padhne aye h

Richa –ulaj toh chuki hu aur usai bhugatna bi padega dhek lena ....

Idhar hum 2 baje tak school attend ki aur bhag khade huve ashram ke liye sunil jaldi jaldi chal raha tha

Main – rukja kamine tuje kutte kaate sale dushman h tu mera dushman
Sunil—jab late pahuchega na toh nikalna uthak baithak aur phir sochna dushman hu ki dost hu ha ha ha ha ha

Main tu hans tere dant todunga mai aj .....aur hum dono bhagne lege kabhi rukte toh kabhi bhagte main phir se 15 minut late ho gaya gate par guru ji taiyar the

Guruji -----ao Raj tum15 minut late ho uthak baithak lagao aur sunil tum bi late ho tum 300 uthak baithak lagao
Aur phir kya suru ho gaye hum uthak baithak lagane meri jab tak 100 hoti sunil 200 laga chuka tha aur phir 300 bi laga li usne aur uske chahre pe thakan bi ni thi phir guruji ne kaha jao khana khao aur sham ko 5 baje akele raj tum ana aur sunil tum apni class lene ashram mai jana ...actualy sunil purana h toh uski class alag he chalti h

Sunil aur main ek sath ji guruji bole

Aur hum chal diye maine piche mudke dhekha toh guruji muskra rahe the meri toh samaj se bahar tha phir maine sunil ki taraf dhekha aur kaha aaa maaa sale tera pichwada bi aj kutte ne kaat liya ho aisa ho rakha

Sunil-- bola bhai 5 minut mai 300 uthak baithak aasan ni hoti h yaar isliye aisa ho gsya par tujse raat ko baat karunga main aur jor se hasne laga

Main—raat ko main samja ni

Sunil—samaj jayega chal khana khake aram karte h
Humne khana khane gaye toh wanha sabi bache khana kha rahe the aur unmai wo bache bi the jinhone subhe comment mara tha matlb 10 class ka bacha gaurav jisne comment mara tha.usne phir comment mara aj toh uthak baithak bi lagayi h bache ne dudh pilao koyi isai ha ha ha

Sunil—bhai rahne de kutto ka kaam he hota h bhonkna .

Main—chal tikh h par ek din mouka milne pe jarur isko iska jawab dunga jisai ye jindgi bhar ni bhulega...aur phir hum agaye apne room aur rest karne lage......

Time 4.45 pm


Main—uuuuuyiiii maaa pair dard huva re are yaar ab dard ho raha h pura sarir

Sunil ---15 minut h tere pass guruji ke pass pahuchne ke liye sochle tuje andaza bi ni hoga jo punishment milegi sab dard hoga phir samja bhag jaldi se ...

Main---- taiyar huva aur pahuch gaya guru ji ke pass ......

Idhar haveli mai
Surendra--- dhek kavita main tera bada bhai hu tikh se bola kar
Kavita --- pahle khud bolna sikh lo phir muje bolna raj ke sath kaise bolte ho ap apko pata he h.......toh muje sikhane ki jarurat ni h

Surendra aur babita--- tu jayda bolne lagi ruk abi teri sikayat chachi se karte h

Kavita – jisai bolna h bol do muje dar ni h aur chali jati h raj ke room mai kyonki wo aur mamta wanhi sote h

Aj ke liye itna he
Sath bane rahe ..........
Superb update
 
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Xabhi ----- Raj ab time h 50 kg uthane ka aur per day 50 meter bhadane h running mai ok

Main – ji sir

Xabhi --- close combat ki skill tumhe sikha di h bus daily practiy karte raho ye jo ground banwaya h tumse aur ye jo lakdi ke tukde h ye tumhari power increase karenge inhe ek punch mai todna h aur jab tak na tod pao lage raho jis din ek punch mai tod doge us din din ek step agai aur chalenge

Maine ek punch mara muje bahut dard huva par maine bina ruke 5 aur panch mare mera hath kamnpne laga tha unguliyo ke piche se chill gaya tha but i donot want give up...main laga raha aur jab dard bardast na huva toh ruk gaya

Xabhi sir-- kick karo ab is khadi lakdi par . maine kick kari sala hath ki toh lagi he thi pair ki bi lag gayii maine 5 he kick mari aur pair dard ke mare pakad ke baith gaya .....

Piche se awaj ayi isiliye kahta hu jala ke mar do ya bomb se uda ke gaad do simple par na tuje toh backchodi karwani h

Xabhi --- Jab tera time aye tu jo karna h kar liyo par abhi bich mai mat bol muje training karane de

Aag --- karle iske din kharab .lounda jawan ho raha h aise toh ni ki koyi gf ki rai de but isai langda lula banane pe tula h

Xabhi --- Tune badi bana li thi na jaise ab jata h ya guruji ko bulau

Aag – bhadakta kai ko h h muje bomb aur kuch chije chahiye thi...

Xabhi – apni baat huvi thi is baar shanti se niptayenge

Aag –Toh apna signature style toh chodunga he na ....sochle warna...

Xabhi --- sirf signature warna maine kuch kiya to tera signature rah jayega adhura

Aag – tu baat baat mai bhadakta kaiko h deal bus signature

Aur kutil muskaan se muskarate h...

Meri halat kharab hone ke baad hath mai patti aur pair mai patti bandhi thi aur ab ye patti roj bandhni thi sala sone pe suhaga tab huva jab ek pain killer bi ni di bus itni hamdardi dikhayi thi ki aj bhag ke ni jana tha par ye bi bura he tha mere sath main chaldiya school ki taraf main kuch bolta ja raha kuch tikh h tikh ap bi sunlijiye

Main—problem toh pata h muje aur ek bimari ka solution bi ho jayega ,phir movie jana h is bich uska ilaj karu ya ni ya alag se karu ha alag se tikh rahega exam ke baad trip pe karta hu ..is chutiye ki trip ko iski honeymoon trip bana dunga sonali se kahke ha ha ha admi hu aur admi se pyar karta hu ha ha ha ha maza ayega ...main meri jaan ke sath aur ye chutiya apni gaand ke sath ha ha ha na bata payega na jata payega......bus yahi sab badbadate huve pahuch gaya school.......

Aur maje ki baat dhekho samne wo dono he the mere bi mu se nikal gaya kya jodi h aur gana gate huve nikla dono ke pass se Bus yahi gunahh har bar karta hu....admi hu....admi....se..pyar karta hu... Wo dono muje he dhek rahe the aur main muskra raha tha aur agai meri jaan khadi thi pata ni kaise par school ate he sara dard bhul gaya main..

Richa--- merr hath ko pakad ke ye hath ko kya kar liya ab..

Main—muskaan ke sath kal school mai garam chij ko touch kar liya tha..

Richa – kab kanha kal toh tikh the

Main --- usai muskarata huva dhek raha tha aur suddenly usai samaj aya ki main usai ched raha hu toh

Richa--- tu aj pitega blushes....aj ni chodungi tuje bhag ke kanha jayega

main--- bhag ke shweta ke pass baith gaya class mai

Wo aake phir piche baithi sunil ke pass

Shweta – kya huva bhai aj ye itni bhadki kyo h

Main –pata ni

Aur tabi meri tapli par pada richa ka hath...

Aise he nokh jhonk bhara din nikla hamara



Sonali side........



Wanhi sonali bahut busy thi ek meeting chal rahi thi jo ek sunsaan jagah par....

Sonali--- every one know the name jaggu

Sab – isai koun ni janta mam ye sabse bada kamina h jisne dum kar rakha h...

Sonali---agar main ye kanhu ki ap sabko isai sabak sikhane ka mouka milega toh

Unmai se bola – toh mam mere bhai ko isne bomb blast mai mara tha usai mar ke meri kasam puri ho jayegi uski ankho mai pratishode ke ansu the...jo ye saaf bata rahe the ki wo kitna pyar karta tha apne bhai se...

Sonali--- main ye vachan deti hu ki isai marne se pahle ap sabko ek mouka jarur dungi heesab pura karne ka par ye 3 din ap puri trah se imandari aur ji jaan laga kar mahnat karenge

Sab—Yes mam

Sonali ne srivastav se leke jaggu ke admiyo tak ka piche karne aur mukhya addo ka pata karne ka bata diya tha aur kuch ko police ke andar gaddar the unhe dhundne ke liye laga diya tha...



Evening 7 pm

Deepika home...




Sonali--- hi sunil

Sunil—hello mam

Deepika – hi mam aur gale lag gayi what a suprise wao ao na andar aur chillakar mom dad sonali mam ayi h...

Kaaptan singhaniya—are beti aj ...kya baat h itni jaldi mulakat bhai hum toh khusnaseeb ho gaye..

Sonali---uncle ap aisa mat boliye main ati rahungi ab toh jaan pahchan ho gayi h na

Dmom –ha aur jaan pahchan bi bahut khas h aur muskarane lagi

Sonali – sharma gayiii ..ni ni aunty aisi koyi baat h actu...allly muje uncle se jarur kaam tha

Dmom---akele mai ok....

Sab kejane ke baad Sunil sonali aur Ddad he bache the

Sonali—uncle ek help chahiye thi

Ddad---- be jhijhak bolo beti mere hath mai hoga toh jarur karunga

Sonali--- muje ek safe place aur 10 bikes aur 10 car rent pe chahiye h aur farzi number hone chahiye h un pe police ki dikat ni hogi Commissioner sir bi sath h...

Ddad—confuse ho ke kya karne wali ho beti ....

Sunil—main batata hu papa aur puri baat deta h

Ddad – beta safe rahna ye sare kaam ho jayenge but kal sham ko hoga itna time muje de do...

Sonali –chalega uncle wo sabi bike aur car farmhouse he pahuchwa dijiyega

Dad –Done aur kuch waise usai khatm karke toh hamari bi help ho jayegi....hum business men se badi protection money mangta h par di ni toh kayi businessmen ko maar bi diya h meri securitytight thi toh kuch kar ni paya

Sunil – papa ab usai har haal mai marna hoga...

Aise he kuch aur bate huvi aur sonali wapas office chali gayi...

Aur sonali ne bi apni planning complete karli thi aur jo 50 police wale aye the unhe. Kaptaan singhaniya ke farmhouse mai rukwa diya tha kyoki 3 din baad unhe bi apna badla lena tha Commissioner bi bada hosiyaar tha usne unhi police walo ko bulaya jinki dushmani thi jaggu se taki sab 100 percent de....

Par ek baat ye sab understimate kar rahe the wo tha inka dushman jisne u he toh shimla ko main place ni banaya tha yanha kuch toh taiyari usne bi kar he rakhi hogi back up ke liye..

Ab dhekna 3 din baad kya hota h aj Thursday suprise h ek update aur ayega uske baad ek din ka gap taki mega update strike ka taiyaar kar saku...

Hahaha update ki timing se sab confuse honge aj........
 
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Raj ko is ghar me itna pyar aur apnapan dikha ki DDad ke puchhne pr apne dada ji ka name bta diya Jise sun Dmom or DDad dono ko hi shock or khushi ka thikana hi nhi rha Dmom ne apne hatho se khana khilaya unke aisa karne pr Raj ko ek MA ka pyar kaisa hota hai Iska ahsas hua kafi bhavnatmak drisya tha jisko mahsoos karke raj or Sunil ki ankho se ansu nikal gye, Sunil ne DDad ko isare se mna kr diya raj ko kuchh btane se, DDad ne Sunil ko apna dattak putra bna liya hai uske sanskar or Raj ke prati ek bhai se badh kr sanrakshak ke roop me dekh kr, Sunil ne DDad ko guru ji ki baat bta di hai jitna use pta tha, DDad or Dmom ne Raj ko sirf yha ke asram or college ke bare me btaya or uske MA baap ke bare me thoda sa, MA to MA hoti hai or yha to use logo ke liye ek devi ki sangya di hai vo bhi pyar ki... Raj apne Ma baap ke bare me sun kr thoda bhavuk hua or Bahut khush bhi huya ki Chalo kuchh na hone se Accha kuchh to mila janne ko... DDad ne Sonali sweta or dipika ko hmesha Raj ke sath rahne ko kaha hai hmesha uska bharosha karne ka Bola hai or Jo bhi Aaj yha Suna use bhul Jane ko kaha Taki ye bate bahar ka koi jaan na sake... Dekhte hai isme se kon kon Raj ke sath hmesha deti hai...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Thanks iMUNISH sath bane rahiye
 
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