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Readers yesterday morning bike se Kahi Jana pada aur Ghar aane ke just baad bath(Naha liya) Karna pada his Karan yesterday afternoon se MERI tabiyat thori kharab ho gai hai Sardi chhik jis Karan update aane me delay Hoga

Sorry for readers prob

Bhai update likhna ha apko Aram se likh sakte ho bed pe Beth Kar.
Update dene ma itna time nh lgta Bhai
Jitna time aap mangte ho us se ziyada le lete ho
 
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Bhai update likhna ha apko Aram se likh sakte ho bed pe Beth Kar.
Update dene ma itna time nh lgta Bhai
Jitna time aap mangte ho us se ziyada le lete ho
Brother update Nahi likh Raha hu abhi
Balki abhi second part Ka short note ready Kar Raha hu
Taki regular update post karne me story ko lekar koi problem Nahi Aaye

Otherwise
Next update 3 November se
And aaj introduction
 
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INTRODUCTION

Himlistan
Ambika-Last Queen of Himlistan
Bhairav(villain)-Husband of Ambika,


Himjam
Abhinav-First King of Himjam
Prithvi Raj-King of Himjam(Dad)
Ruprati- Queen of Himjam (Mom)
Viraj(Hero)-Prince of Himjam
Divya-Princess of Himjam

Viraj Friend's Group
Viraj
Divya
Abhi-Son of Kulguru
Suraj-Son of Senapati

Sona-Daughter of Senapati


Stantam
Bhairav-king of Stantam
Sanjana- Wife of Bhairav
Nisha-Daughter of Bhairav
Deva-Son of Bhairav
Rati-Deva ki Judva Bahan(2 min

chhoti)


Earth
Raj-1st part Hero
Neha-Wife of Raj(dead)
Aarav-Son of Raj (dead)
Mahi(Heroine)-Daughter of Raj
Anshu-Mahi Ka muh bola pita
Anshu-Mahi Ka muh bola maa

Mahi Friend's Group
Mahi
Ravi
Kabir
Rani

Shikha
 
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UPDATE-2

City Hospital Mumbai

Operation theatre Ke andar se
Ek mahila ki jor-jor se
Aawaje aa rahi hai
Jaise iss samay use
Duniya ki sari taklif ho rahi ho
Vahi operation theatre ke bahar
Ek 23 sal Ka vyakti tahal raha hai
Vahin bench per uske parivar wale
Baithe hue hain tabhi
Usmein se ek 21 sal ki ladki
Uthakar use vyakti ke pass jaati Hai

Ladki-pareshan hone se kuchh nahi hoga bhaiya
Ab To sab waqt Ke hath mein Hai

Vyakti-pareshan Nahin ho raha hu Anshu
Mai to uss shubh ghadi ka pratiksha kar raha hu

Abhi yah donon baat kar hi rahe the
Ki tabhi operation theatre Ke andar se
Uss mahila ke dard Ki awaaz
Band ho gai aur aur ek bacche Ke rone ki awaaz sunai de
Iss awaz ko sunkar bahar baithe
Sabhi log khush ho gaye
Tabhi fir se operation theatre ke andar
Uss mahila Ke dard ki awaz goonj gai
Lekin thode hi samay ke liye
Thode hi der bad uss mahila ke
Dard ki awaz fir se band Ho gai
Aur kisi dusre bacche ki Rone ki awaaz sunai di
Abhi yah log iss ghatna ko
Samajh hi rahe the ki tabhi
Operation theatre Ka darvaja khula
Aur doctor bahar Aaye

Doctor-Mubarak ho Mr. Raj
aap ko judwa bacche hue hai

Raj(vyakti)-kya mai andar jakar
Apne patni Aur bacchon se mil sakta hu

Dr-han aap mil sakte hain
Lekin ek-ek Karke

Jiska baad Raj daurta huaa
Apne patni ke pass Chala jata Hai

Jab Raj andar jata hai
To dekhta hai uski patni Neha

Abhi bhi behosh hi hai

Tabhi Achanak vahan per

Samay ruk jata hai
Aur ek Bujurg Aadmi prakat hota Hai

B.A-mubarak ho Raj
Aaj aapke ghar do
Adbhut bacche janam iye hai

Raj Ko Jab yah mahsus hota hai
Ki samay ruk chuka hai
Tab use pata chal jata hai
Ki yah B.A jarur koi pahunche hue mahatma hai

Raj-pranam Baba
Tah to hamare liye saubhagya Ki baat hai
Ki hamare yahan aise bacchon ka
Janm hua hai
Lekin ab tak aapane apne aane ka prayojan nahi bataya

Jiske baad B.A Raj se Kuchh baten karta hai
Aur use ek anguthi deta hai
Jise Raj apne ungali me pahan leta hai
Jiske bad vah B.A
Vahan se gayab ho jata hai

Aur samay apni raftar se chalne lagta hai

Ab tak to aap samajh hi gaye honge

Ki yah Raj aur koi nahin
Hamare first part ka hero hai

Jishe abhi Ek beta aur ek beti(heroine) hua Hai

Chaliye ab villain paksh ki taraf chalte Hain

In Stantam
Ambikaaaaaaa

Ishi tej awaaz ke sath
Ek 25 sal Ka naujawan
Apne nind se Jagata hai
Use dekhne per aisa lag raha hai
Ki sare jag ki sundarta
Usi mein Sama gayi ho
Uthne ke sath ek bar fir se
Vah jor Se chilla rahata hai
Ambikaaaaaaa
Jiske bad vah vaise hi
Raj darbar ke liye nikal padta hai
Jaise hi vah apne kamre se
Bahar aata hai
Uske sharir per Ek rajshahi poshak

Apne aap aa jata hai

(Chaliye ab Ham iss naujawan ke bare mein jaan lete hai

Yah naujawan aur koi nahin
Bhairav ka punar janam hai
Aur abhi-abhi hi ishe
Apne pichle janam Ke bare me
Sab kuchh yaad aaya hai
Jiske Sath ise apne pichle janam ki

Sari shaktiyan bhi prapt ho gai hai)

In Raj darbar
Maharaj bahut hi pareshan

Baithe hue the
Kyunki unhen abhi tak
Ambika ke bare me

Kuchh bhi pata nahin Chala tha
(ji ha aapane bilkul theek suna

Ambika ka bhi punarjanm
Bhairav ke punarjanm ke sath hua tha)

Maharaj-mahamantri abhi tak senapaty ka kuchh pata chala


M.M-Maharaj ham to Senapati ko
25 Salon se dhundh rahe hai
Abhi tak unke aur unke wife ka
Koi khabar nahi mila

Maharaj-mujhe usse akele
Ambika ko lene nahi
Bhejna chahie tha
Kya pata vaha per uske sath
Kya-Kya hua hoga

Abhi yah log baat kar hi rahe the
Ki vahan per bhairava aa gaya

Maharaj-yuvraj aapane yah Kaisa poshak pehna hai

Bhairav-Ambika ke bare mein Kuchh pata Chala

Maharaj-humne aapse Kuchh poochha yuvraj

Bhairav-Kal tak mai vah yuvraj tha
Jo aapke Ha me Ha milata tha
Lekin aaj se mai hu
Bhairavvvvvv Samrat bhairav

Jaise hi bhairav ne yah baat kaha
Vahan per khade sare log
Kapne lage Maharaj bhi
Kyunki vahan per upsthit
Sabhi logon Ko pata chal gaya ki
Yuvraj ab vah nahi raha
Jo pahle tha
Ab vah ban chuka hai

Bhairavvv Samrat bhairav

Abhi yah log Kuchh Soch hi rahe the

Ki vahan per aa gaya Senapati
Aaj pure 25 salo ke baad
Yah wapas lauta tha
Aur yah aate hi kahta Hai

Senapati-Maharaj Ambika Earth planet per hai.



In Himjam
Jis waqt Earth per

Raj Ke bacchon ka janm hua tha
Theek usi waqt Himjam rajya ke
Raj Bhavan me
Ek mahila ke dard bhari chikh
Goonj rahi thi
Jo Thodi hi der me shant ho gai
Aur ek bacche Ke Rone Ki awaaz
Sunai dene lage
Lekin thodi der ke baad
Uss mahila ki chikh fir se gunj uthi
Lekin kuchh hi samay ke liye
Jiske baad fir ek dusre bacche ke
Rone ki awaaz sunai dene lagi

Vahi uss kamre ke bahar
Maharaj Prithvi Raj becheni se
Tahal rahe the
Tabhi vahan per ek dashi aaye

Dashi-Maharaj Maharani Ne

Judva bacchon ko janm diya hai
Theek usi waqt yahan bhi

Samay ruk gaya aur kamre ke andar
Vahi Bujurg Aadami aaya
Jab usne dhyan se dekha to
Maharani ne Jis ladke ko janm diya tha
Vah janam Ke Kuchh chhan baad hi
Mrityu Ko prapt ho chuka tha
Jiske baad uss Bujurg Aadami ne
Uss ladke ko vaha gayab kar diya

Aur uske jagah Kisi navjaat ladke(Hero) ko rakh diya

Chaliye ab fir se villain ki taraf chalte Hain

In Stantam
Bhairav-kaun Ho tum

Aur tumhen kaise pata ki
Ambika Earth Planet per hai.

Senapati ne ek baar
Maharaj ki taraf dekha
Tab Maharaj ne sahamati me
Apna sar hila diya
Jiske bad Senapati ne

Sari baten batana shuru Kiya

Senapati-Ji mai yaha ka Senapati Pradeep

Aur yah meri patni Riya hai
Ham donon Ko Maharaj ne
Aaj se 25 sal pahle
Ambika ko laane ke liye bheja tha
Lekin jab tak ham vahan pahunchte
Tab tak unhe koi Bujurg Aadami
Lekar nikal chuka tha
Ham donon ne jab uska picha kiya
Tab hamen pata chala ki
Vah Ambika ko lekar
Earth per gaya hai
Lekin tab tak use pata chal chuka tha
Ki ham uska picha kar rahe hai
Aur usne ham dono par
Ek aise mantra ka prayog Kiya
Jisse ham donon apni yaddasht
Aur power bhul gaye
Aur vahan per aam insanon
Ki tarah rahane lage
Abhi 2 saal pahle hi
Ham donon ki yaddasht
Wapas aayi hai
Jiska turant baad hi ham donon
Yahan Ke liye nikal pade
Lekin hamare power
Bahut kamjor ho chuki thi
Jis karan hamen yahan pahunchne me

2 saal lag gaye.

Jaise hi Bhairav ne yah baat suni

Usne Maharaj Se Kaha

Bhairav-Yahan ke sabse kabil jasuso
Ki ek group ko Earth per bheja jaaye

Aur Ambika ke bare me pata lagaya jaaye.

Chaliye Jab Tak Ambika Ka

Pata chalta hai tab tak ham
Yah jan lete hai ki Jab yuvraj ko
Bhairav ki yaddasht aur
Shaktiyan nahi mili thi

Tab kya hua tha

Jab yuvraj ke 22 sal hone ke baad bhi

Ambika nahi mili
Tab Maharaj ne
Yuvraj(Bhairav) ki shaadi
Stantam rajya ke sabse kabil
Ladki se ki
Jiske Kuch Saal baad hi
Yuvraj(Bhairav) ko ek ladki hui

Jiska naam rakha gaya Nisha

Chaliye ab fir Story ki taraf aate Hai

Jasuso ko Earth par bhejne ke baad

Bhairav Apne kamre me
Apni patni ke pass ja pahuncha
Aur fir shuru hua unke pyar Ka khel
Lekin jahan bhairav ho
Vahan per pyar Ho hi nahi sakta Hai .
Pyar Ka khel kab hawas me badal gaya

Un dono ko pata hi nahin chala

Aaj ke liye itna hi
Next update me padenge

Uss Bujurg Aadami ke bare me
Sath hi kuch important baate
 
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Bhai Sach bolo to kuch be pale nh pra fst1 part achi tarha samaj aaya lakin apny story ka naksha pora chng krdiya ha Jo ke ab alg he disha ma ja rhe ha joky apun ko abhe is part ke bat samaj nh ai to ab jab Tak apun is part ke 5 6 update aur read nh Kar let's tab Tak apun kuch nh bol SAKTA
Ku ke phle part ma Raj ur Neha Jo ke Bhai bhn the shadi b hue and Bache b ho gye so wo story to reh gye adhore yaha apny duniya ko alg he krdiya so mere hisab se apka mind m Jo b h wo ab readrs ko preshan krega story line ko samjne ma


Baki keep posting
 
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Bhai Sach bolo to kuch be pale nh pra fst1 part achi tarha samaj aaya lakin apny story ka naksha pora chng krdiya ha Jo ke ab alg he disha ma ja rhe ha joky apun ko abhe is part ke bat samaj nh ai to ab jab Tak apun is part ke 5 6 update aur read nh Kar let's tab Tak apun kuch nh bol SAKTA
Ku ke phle part ma Raj ur Neha Jo ke Bhai bhn the shadi b hue and Bache b ho gye so wo story to reh gye adhore yaha apny duniya ko alg he krdiya so mere hisab se apka mind m Jo b h wo ab readrs ko preshan krega story line ko samjne ma


Baki keep posting
Neha aur Maharani ne JUDWAA bachho ko janm diya

jaha Neha ki beti heroine hogi vahi Maharani Ka beta hero


aur baat rahi pardeep Ka to vah 25 Saal pahle apni yaddasht bhul gaya tha aur kishi inshan ke body me aa Gaya tha Jiske baad kya huaa wo aap first part me Dekh chuke hai


Or

Jaha Tak baat hai Bhairav aur Ambika Ka to 2nd part Ka first update padh le aur baat hai in dono ke punar janam Ka to wo ek RAAZ hai Jo samay aane par flashback me khulega


abhi dekhna yah hai ki aage kya Hoga jab jasoosh earth se wapash Stantam as Jayega


Otherwise

Story me past part ko chhoda gaya hai Ambika and Bhairav sath hi vah Bujurg Aadami ke bare me Jo flashback me dikhaya Jayega lekin 10-12 update baad


abhi ke liye to Jo hai so present hi hai


Next update tomorrow night Nahi to 4 November afternoon
 

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