Update 1
Ek ladka aapne hostel ke room mein bed par leta hua chhat ko dekh Kar kuchh soch raha tha. Kyuki aaj Uska 18th birthday tha fir bhi Vo akela tha. Pura hostel khali tha Kyuki 11nth kE exam ho chuke the aur uski 3 months ki chhuti pad chuki thi. Sabhi log ghar ja chuke the par Vo Nahi gaya Kyuki pichle 5 Salo se Vo Ek bhi bar na aapne ghar gaya na aapne ghar Balo se Mila na unse baat ki. Jab Vo fifth mein tha tab kisi galti par uske dad ne use bahut Mara tha aur fir Dehradun kE Ek army boarding school mein Uska admit karva diya. Bas us Din se Vo aapne dad aur family se nafrat karne laga. Suru kE 3 Salo mein to Vo aapne Nana ji ke ghar chala jata tha par last 2 Salo se Vo waha bhi Nahi gaya tha. Ek sal usne 3 month kE liye room leke karate sikha aur last year usne Thai chi sikha tha. Is sal bhi Vo dehradun mein hi Rukne bala tha. Kyuki usko Paiso ki koi Kami nahi thi uske dad India ke top 20 businessman mein aate hai. Aur Dada ji bhi bahut bade rahees hai. Uske account mein har mahine 2 lac rupees aate hai kharche kE liye. Vo Jada kharcha nahi karta Kyuki Vo aapne dad kE paiso ka use nahi Karna chahta par Abhi mazburi hai.
Tabhi waha par peon aata hai aur bolta hai.
Peon : Rudra tumhe warden sir bula rahe hai.
Ji ha Iska naam Thakur Rudra Singh hai. Rudra ki height 6'3" hai. Rang gora body bhi achhi banai hui hai. Iski ankhe dark brown almost back hai. Rudra kam bolna pasand karta hai par iski aankhe bahut kuch bolti hai. Ek alag si kashish hai. School ki bahut si ladkiya is par fida hai par ye Jada bhav nahi deta. Ye kisi bhi relation mein Nahi Padna chahta.
Rudra : haa Abhi aaya.
Rudra warden kE pas chala jata hai.
Rudra : May I come in sir
Warden : yes please come in sit
Rudra chair par bait jata hai.
Warden : mujhe Pata hai Tum is sal bhi aapne ghar Nahi jaoge but tumhe rules Pata hai Tum hostel mein Nahi ruk sakte.
Rudra : I know sir. Mera beg pack hai mein to bas aapse Milke Jaane ka wait Kar raha tha.
Warden : good aur haan 2 months bad Tum aapne school fee and hostel fee time se bhar Dena ok
Rudra : OK sir
Warden : aur tumari mom ka call Aya tha Vo tumse baat Karna chahti hai Abhi thodi der mein unka call Dubara aayega.
Rudra : sir mujhe koi baat Nahi karni hai please aap bol Dena. Kya ab mein Ja Sakta hun.
Warden : yes you may go now.
Rudra : thank you sir
Rudra room se bahar chala jata hai aur aapne beg leke Vo hostel se bahar chala jata hai. Rudra Ek texi leke Ek Badiya se hotel jata hai aur room book karke lunch karta hai so jata hai. Usko sote hue kafi time ho jata hai. Sham kE 5 baj jate hai.
{ System has been actived }
Ek awaz gujati hai Rudra Ek dam se ut jata hai aur ider uder dekhne lagta hai par use koi dikhai nahi deta.
Rudra (man mein) : ye kaisi awaz thi.
{ analizing language......... }
Rudra (shocked) : kon hai kon bol raha hai.
{ processing......
Process completed....
Language has been recognised as Hindi }
Rudra bahut Jada dar jata hai aur bed se uter kar khada ho jata hai.
Rudra : kon bol raha hai samne aao..
{ You aur now owner of the system...
Please name the system }
Rudra kafi dar jata hai Uska chehra lal ho jata hai aur uski heart beat bad jati hai.
Rudra : kon bol raha hai samne Kyu Nahi aate
{shant ho jao master aapka bp bad raha hai. Aap behosh ho jaoge Isliye aap shant ho jao }
Rudra aapne aap ko caam karta hai aur fir puchhta hai.
Rudra : Tum kon ho aur mujhe dikhai Kyu Nahi de rahi ho
{mein Ek system hun meri koi physical body Nahi hun. Ek Ek urja ki tarah jo koi dekh nahi Sakta. Aur mein Tumare sharir kE ander hun aur Tum se jud chuki hun}
Rudra (shocked and confused) : Kya hum mere sharir kE ander ho. Tum mere sharir mein Kab aai aur kyu aai ho bahar nikalo.
{ Mai earth se Nahi hun jab mere earth mein enter Kiya aur asman se niche aa rahi thi to tumare room window se mai ander aai aur Tumare sharir mein ghus gai. Mai aapne aap mein jivit nahi rah sakti hun Isliye mujhe kisi ka sharir mein enter hona hi tha aur Tum Vo Pahle insan ho jo mujhe mile. Mai Tumare sharir se Nahi nikal sakti. Daro mat Mai tumhe kuch nuksan Nahi pahuchaungi Kyuki agar tumhe kuch hua to Mai bhi Mar jaungi. }
System ki baat sun Kar Rudra thoda relax ho jata hai.
Rudra : matlab Tum Ek parjivi ki Tarah ho.par jab Tum meri life force par jivit rahogi to mujhe to nuksan jarur pahuchega.
{nahi tumhe koi nuksan Nahi pahuchega bas jab Tum mujhe Jada baat karoge to tumhe Thakan hogi jo rest karne se chali jayegi uske badle mein tumari bahut Jada help karungi }
Rudra : OK samjha gaya par Tum meri help kaise karogi.
{sabse pahli baat Mai Tumare ander hun to jo Tum sochoge vo Mai sun lungi Isliye Tum agar man mein kuch sochoge ya bologe to bhi hum baat Kar sakte hai Kyuki agar tumhe kisi ne mujhse baat karte dekha to Vo to yahi sochega ki Tum aapne aap se baat Kar rahe ho aur tumhe pagal samjhega Isliye ab Tum aapne man mein baat Karo }
Note : abse Rudra aur system mein jo bhi baat hogi vo man mein hogi to Mai bar bar man mein man mein Nahi likhunga aap log samjhega Jana
Rudra (man mein) : hello kya Tum mujhe sun sakti ho..
{yes }
Rudra (khush hote hue) : good to ab ye batao Tum meri madad kaise karogi
{Mai tumhe super human bana dungi. }
Rudra : wow Kya sach mein kaise. To banao ab.
{ ha ha ha master Tum bhi na. Koi bhi chees free nahi hoti har chees ki Ek Keemat hoti hai. Mai tumhe super human banane ka Rsata aur Jariya dungi par mehnat tumhe hi karni hogi hai Mai tumari help jarur karungi }
Rudra (Nirash hote hue) : teek hai batao kya rasta hai super human ban ne ka
{Nirash na ho master itna bhi muskil nahi hai ab aapne man mein kaho status }
Rudra : status
Rudra ke status kahte hi uski aakho kE samne hawa mein Ek window khul jati hai computer kE jaisi. Rudra use hath se pakadne kE koshish karta hai.
[ Name - Thakur Rudra Singh
Age - 18
Status - System Owner /Student
Stats :
Strength. - 30/100
Intelligence - 50/100
Agility - 35/100
Endurance - 30/100
Appearance - 45/100
System's internal features : Check I
skills:
Legendary Skills :
Points - 0
System level - 1
100 exp point required to upgrade to Lv 2]
{hahaha master Tum is window ko Pakad nahi sakte ho sirf dekh sakte ho. Koi aur is window ko Nahi dekh Sakta Tumare Siva. Ye window Kya koi bhi jankari system se related koi aur Nahi dekh Sakta }
Rudra : OK but ye sab Kya hai.
{ye sab aapki aur aapke sharir ki jankari hai. Ismein jo strength hai Vo kisi insan ki strength batata hai Ek normal insan ki strength 40 to 50 hoti hai bahut hi kam log hote hai jo 100 tak pahuch pate hai. Na ke baraber. Kisi ko strength ko 100 hona matlab aam insan se Dugani se Jada tagat hona. Ese hi intelligence insan ki intelligence ko batata hai. Intelligence bahut sari logo ki 100 se bhi Jada ho sakti hai. Fir aata hai Agility . Ye insan ki speed batata hai. Uske kaam karne ki speed uske movements ki speed uski running ki speed. Ye bhi normal insan ki 30 -40 hi hoti hai aur athletic person ki 60 -70 bas. Fir aata hai Endurance ye insan ki Sahab silta bata ta hai ki koi insan kitna Sahan kar Sakta hai. Man lo kisi insan ki agility 100 hai aur vo bahut tej bhagta hai to uske bad uski maspesiyo kE dard se hi vo Mar jayega agar uski endurance 100 na hui to. Fir aata hai appearance ye insan kE appearance ko batata hai ki Vo kitna smart dikhta hai. Uska looks body, Uska attraction. Ye insan ka 100 ya 100 se Uper bhi ho sakta hai. Tum inke point bada sakte ho unmein points add karke aur chije to dikhai nahi degi par appearance badane se aapke jism mein badlab honge jo dikhai denge }
Rudra : samjh gaya. Par points badaunga kaise window mein to point 0 dikha raha hai.
{ time to time system aapko mission dega. Unko complete karne se aapko point milenge to aap aapne stats mein add kar sakte ho. Par }
Rudra : samjha. Par is par ka Kya matlab hai.
{ system ke rules kE hisab se system kisi bhi 21 sal se kam umer kE insan mo nahi mil Sakta par agar mil bhi jaye to Vo activate nahi ho sakta. Par master aap to aaj hi 18 kE hue ho Pata Nahi aapki body mein Mai kaise ghus gai aur activate bhi ho gai. An is condition mein Ek buri khaber hai aur Ek achhi khaber hai }
Rudra : oh esi baat hai. Chalo Dono khaber hi bata do.
{ buri khaber ye hai ki jab tak aap 21 kE Nahi ho jaate aapko Jada mission nahi milenge aur ko milenge vo easy honge to unka reward bhi kam hoga. Aur achhi khaber ye hai ki aap Abhi 21 kE Nahi hue ho to aapko jo bhi reward milenge vo normal se double se bhi Jada honge aur aapko points bhi half hi invest karne hone. Aur shop se skills bhi aapko half rate par milegi. }
Rudra : nice. Ab ye shop Kya hai aur skills Kya hai. Window mein bhi skills aur legendary skills aur system 'S internal features aur Usmein check I hai ye sab Kya hai.
{ shop tab aayegi jab system ka level 2 ho jayega to uske bare mein tabhi bataungi. Aur rahi baat skills ki to aap shop se skills Kharid sakte hai. Skills kisi chij ki knonladge hai jo sidhe aapke ander aa jayegi. Skills kE tiers hote hai. Bronze, silver, gold, diamond aur sabse best hota hai legendary. Legendary skills bahut rare aur special hoti hai. Unka Milna lagbhag impossible hota hai. Aur System's internal features bhi naam kE anusar system ke features hai jo aapko kharidne nahi padenge. Ye system ke lvl up hone ke Sath aapko milenge. Ab check feature Kya hai ye aap khud hi dekh lijiye. Window kE pas ja kar kisi bhi insan ko dekh Kar man mein hi check boliye }
Rudra window ke pas ja kar road par chal rahe Ek admi ko dekh Kar bolta hai check
Check kahte hi us admi kE sar kE Uper Ek window khul jati hai jise sirf Rudra hi dekh Sakta hai
*Check
[ Name - Suresh negi
Age -47
Status - sales man
Bio - ye achha aur honest insan hai. Ye aapni patni se bahut pyar karta hai aur aapne bachho se bhi. Ye koi chota mota business Karna chahta hai par iske pas paise Nahi hai business karne kE liye.
Favourability - 0
Relationship - unknown ]
Rudra (khush hote hue) : wow Yaar ye to mast hai.
Uske bad Rudra bahut sare logo ko check karta hai. Aur karta hi rahta hai.
{ master bas kariye. Aap system ka jitna Jada istemal karoge aapko utani Jada Thakaan hogi. }
Rudra ruk jata hai.
Rudra : sorry, ye Favourability kya hai.
{ Favourability Matlab Vo insan aapko kitna pasand karta hai. Favourability 100 par pahuchane ka matlab hai ki Vo insan aapke liye devoted hai aur vo aapke liye kuch bhi Kar Sakta hai. Master pleasure name the system }
Rudra : Oh OK. Tum Ladki ho to koi achha sa ladkiya bala naam sochne do
{ system ka koi gender nahi hai. Mai genderless hun. }
Rudra ( confused) : par tumari awaz to ladkiyo Bali hai.
{ Maine aapka mind read Kiya hai jo aap Jante Vo sab Mai bhi janti hun. Jo aap sochte ho aur jo aap feel karte ho vo mein bhi feel karti hun. Isliye mujhe Pata hai aapko ladkiya pasand hai Isliye Maine girls voice use Kari hai agar aap chahte ho to Mai male voice bhi use kar sakti hun }
Rudra : no no girls voice hi achhi hai. Achha to mujhe Tia naam bahut pasand hai to aaj se Tumara naam Tia hai.
{system has a name Tia.... }
*ding
{ you got 500 points }
*ding
{ you got photographic memory skill }
Rudra (confused) : Tia ye Kya tha.
{ notifications. Aapne system ko naam diya hai to ab aapne officially system ka use Kiya hai Isliye first time use kE liye reward Mila hai 500 points and a skill photographic memory }
{skill : photographic memory
Description : jo kuch bhi Ek bar dekhoge padoge ya sunoge Kabhi Nahi bhuloge }
Rudra ( khush hote hue) : nice. Kya ab mein points stats mein add kar Sakta hun.
{yes masted. Aap konse stats mein kitne points add Karna Chahoge.}
Rudra :wow sabhi stats ko 100 kar do.
{but master agar aap appearance mein Ek Sath itane sare points add karoge to aapne jism mein bahut Jada changes aayenge. Aap logo ko Iska reason explain nahi kar paoge }
Rudra : don't worry ab 3 month tak Mai kisi bhi Jaan pahchan bale ko Nahi milunga to mere changes koi note nahi kar payega. Aur 3 months bad kuch bhi bol dunga.
{ OK done }
Tia kE done bolte hi Rudra ke aankho kE samne firse status ki window khul jati hai.
[ Name - Thakur Rudra Singh
Age - 18
Status - System Owner /Student
Stats :
Strength. - 100/100
Intelligence - 100/100
Agility - 100/100
Endurance - 100/100
Appearance - 100/100
System's internal features : Check
skills: photographic memory
Legendary Skills :
Points - 190
System level - 1
100 exp point required to upgrade to Lv 2]
Aapne new stats dekhne kE bad Rudra mirror mein aapne aap ko dekhta par Usmein koi change Nahi aaye the fir Rudra aapne strength try karta par fir same koi changes nahi aaye the.
Rudra (confused) : Tia mujh mein to kuchh bhi changes nahi aaye.
{ system mein aur aapki body mein kisi bhi type kE changes implement hone ke liye aapko raat 12 baje se Pahle system mein changes karne honge like stats mein aur fir aapko raat 12 baje se Sabah kE 4 baje thak sona (sleep) hota. Taki system aapki body mein changes apply kar sake. Aaj jo stats mein change kiye hai Vo aapko kal dekhenge . Night mein rest karne kE bad Yadi aap neend (sleep) Nahi lete hai to aapki body mein koi changes nahi honge }
Rudra : OK samjh gaya.
For Rudra aapne beg se mobile nikalta hai. Rudra mobile ka use bahut kam karta hai. Uska number kisi kE pass nahi hai Ek do logo ko chhod kar Kyuki agar hostel mein Uska mobile number kisi ko Pata chal gaya to warden kE bhi Pata chal jayega aur agar warden ko Pata chal gaya to uske ghar par bhi mobile number Pata chal jayega aur fir use ghar se call aane lagenge.
Rudra Ek number dail karta hai.
Rudra : hello sharma uncle kaise hai aap
Sharma ( property agent) : are are Thakur Rudra Singh. Bahut achha beta bahut achha Tum batao bet Tum kaise ho aur mujhe kaise yaad Kiya.
Sharma kanta hai ki Rudra ke dad Ek bahut bade businessman hai.
Rudra : uncle mujhe Ek room rent par Lena hai 3 months ke liye koi PG hona chahiye Jismein Khana bhi ho. Rent ka koi tension nahi hai.
Sharma : oho Abhi to beta koi PG khali nahi hai. Empty flats to bahut sare hai PG nahi hai. Ek minute Ek PG hai par Vo sirf girls ko hi rent par dete hai.
Rudra : oho fir Kya hoga uncle. Chalo koi baat Nahi mein kisi aur agent se baat Kar Leta hun.
Sharma (hadbadi mein) : are are ruko beta Tum kal 12 baje xxxxx bank mein Jake manager Mr rawat se mil Lena. Mai Abhi unse baat Kar lunga ho tumhe rent par room de denge. Mai tumhe Abhi bank ka address send karta hun.
Rudra : haha ha tik hai uncle bye.
Rudra call cut kar deta hai aur turant hi sharma ka massage bhi aa jata hai. Uske bad Rudra fresh hota hai aur Kapde change karke room se bahar Jaane lagta hai ghoomne kE liye ki thabhi
*ding
[mission : lose your virginity
Time limit : 7 days
Reward : 1 - points???
2- one random skill ]
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