Incest SAAND (Completed)

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Nice update...

College me pehla din hi action se bharpoor...

Sheetal didi ki pareshani ka karan.... aage pata chale ga...

Rashmi, Shilpa bhi target par.... uhar Sarla bhi intejaar mein... dhansu
Shukriya Rusty blade bhai for this amazing review
 
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Nice thrilling aur suspense se bhara hua update....
Sarla to KLPD kar gayee...
Bohat saare naye character stroy mein aur sath aik mysterious character "Black Star"...

Writing skills are great...
Thanks Rusty Blade bhai iss anmol pratikriya ke liye.
Mysterious character to kafi hain kahani me bhai..
Sarla kaha jayegi bach kar ...
 
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UPDATE—21

Main sonam ko lekar apne khandahar wale adde par aa gaya…..maine sonam ko bistar me letne ko kaha to vo kuch bole bina let gayi.

Raj —arey ye kya…pahle kapde utar ke nangi to ho jao.

Sonam—bhaiya pls…aaj bahut dard hai….aap kal kar lena…apka jitna mann kare kal kar lena mujhe…

Raj—pagal main karne ke liye nahi bol raha hu…balki malish karni hai tumhari tel se…isse tumhe aram milega.

Sonam—aap karoge to nahi na….?

Raj—nahi karunga….chal utar jaldi kapde ab…jyada samay bhi nahi hai.

Maine aage badh kar khud hi sonam ko nangi kar diya….uske dono doodh abhi tak lal huye pade the subah ki ragadayi se… bur poori tarah se sooj kar gol gappa ban gayi thi.

Maine sonam ki ek choochi ko hath me tel lekar dabane laga aur dusri ke nipple ko muh me bhar ke chusna chalu kar diya.. aisa karte hi sonam thoda dard aur thoda maze se chihuk gayi.

Sonam—aaaaa…bhaiya…ye kya kar rahe ho aap…..lagta hai ki aap bina mujhe pele nahi manoge.

Raj—main to tumhara dard door kar raha hu meri bahan….kya achcha nahi lag raha hai.

Sonam—aaaaaa….achcha lag raha hai….lekin jyada jor jor se mat dabana….aise hi dhire dhire dabane me achcha lag raha hai…oooohhhh…aise hi chuso bhaiya….apni kuwari choti bahan ke doodh pi lo jee bhar ke.

Maine aise sonam ki malish karte huye uski choochiyo se khelta raha….aur sonam maze se garam hoti gayi….kuch hi der me uska sara dard gayab ho chuka tha ab usko meri har harkat par maza aa raha tha.

Doodh masalte huye main niche aa gaya aur sonam ne khud hi apne pair phaila kar mujhe apni bur mere hawale kar di… maine hath me tel lekar uski bur aur jangho ki malish karne laga.

Beech beech me main uski bur ko muh me bhar ke chus leta tha jisse vo uchhal padti thi…..uski bur ka chhed ab thoda khul gaya gaya tha aur uske andar ka lal hissa bhi nazar aane laga tha….sonam ki bur poori tarah se geeli hokar chudasi ho chuki thi.

Sonam—aaaaaaahhhhh….ooohhhh…bhaiya..ab pls aur mat tadpaooo…..kuch karo na,

Raj—kar to raha hu teri malish….

Sonam—aaaa…mujhe ab malish nahi karwana…

Raj—to phir kya karwana hai meri bahan ko ab….?

Sonam (uth kar kaan me)—apne bhaiya ke lund se apni bur chudwana hai.

Raj—nahi…nahi…maine nahi karne ka wada kiya hai..main wada nahi tod sakta

Sonam—bhaiya pls…..Jaldi se apna ye mota lund apni choti bahan ki bur me poora ghused kar khoob jor jor se chod dalo… nahi to main mar jaungi…ooohhhh

Raj—tujhe phir dard hoga

Sonam—hone do….aur subah aap ne hi to kaha tha ki jitna main aap se chudwaungi utna jaldi mera dard door ho jayega..to ab mujhe ragad dalo bhaiya…pls

Raj—kyo itni chudasi ho gayi hai….?

Sonam—haa bhaiya…apki bahan iss samay bahut chudasi hai….pls chod lo apni bahan ki bur ko.

Raj—ruk pahle teri gaand ki malish bhi to kar du….dekhu to sahi ki meri choti bahan ki nangi gand aur chutad kaise hain

Sonam (palat kar)—lo bhaiya..dekh lo..apni choti bahan ki nangi gand….aur batao kaisi hai….?

Raj—wow…kya gaand hai sonam teri….sach me dekhte hi teri gaand maarne ka mann kar raha hai.

Sonam—maar lena bhaiya….apni choti bahan ki gaand bhi maar maar ke khub choudi kar dena aap….mera sab kuch ab apka hi hai…jab apka dil kare pel dena gand bhi..par abhi bur to achche se pel lo meri.

Maine sonam ke dono nange gore gore chutad pakad ke unhe masalne laga….tel ki kuch boonde uski gaand ke chhed me gira ke ek ungli thoda jor laga ke andar pel di…sonam siskari lete huye uchhal gayi lekin mana nahi kiya.

Lagbhag dus minute tak maine ungli se hi sonam ki gaand marta raha aur apne lund ke liye jagah banata raha…phir usko sidha lita kar apne kapde utare aur sonam ko lund chusne ko kaha.

Sonam—bhaiya ye bahut bada hai…mere muh ko hi phad dega ye.

Raj—kuch nahi hota…..chus na meri bahan

Sonam—lekin bas paanch minute hi chusungi

Raj—ok

Sonam ne dhire dhire lund chusna shuru kiya….pahle to usko ubkayi jaisi aane lagi..lekin phir vo poori tanmayta ke sath lund ko chusne me kho gayi.

Raj—kaisa laga sonam….?

Sonam—bahut achcha…ab main roj apne pyare bhaiya ka lund chusungi jab bhi mera mann karega aur aap mana nahi karoge mujhe..

Raj—main kyo mana karne laga…raat din chusna bahna.

Maine sonam ko niche lita kar dono pair phailaye aur lund ko bur ke muhane par tika ke dhire dhire andar ghusane laga… tel laga hone aur chudasi hone ki vajah se thode prayas me hi lund andar sarakne laga.

Sonam ko dard ke sath sath anand bhi aa raha tha…..akhir me ek tagda jhatka dekar poora lund uski bur ki gahrayi me utar diya..iss bar sonam dard se tadap uthi.

Sonam—aaaahhhhh…maaaa…..marr gayii…bhaiya dard ho raha hai…pls dhire dhire chodo

Raj—bas meri bahan…ab tujhe dard nahi hoga…ab maza lene ki bari hai

Maine uski chuchiya pakad ke dabane aur chusne laga…sath hi lund ko dhire dhire aage piche karne laga….kuch der me hi sonam phir se garam ho gayi aur mujhe jor jor se chodne ko bolne lagi.

Sonam—aaaaaaaa……aise.hi…..jor se..chodo bhaiyaaaa…..khoob dheeli kar do….apni choti bahan ki bur raat din chod chod kar……aaaaaaaa…bahut maza aa raha hai….bhaiya……aise hi mujhe roj pela karo……mujhe apne bachche ki kuwari maa bana do……..apni kuwari choti bahan ko chod chod ke gaabhin kar do bhaiya….mujhe har saal aap gaabhin karte rahna aur main har saal apne bhaiya se chudwa chudwa kar biyati rahungi…..aur jor se pelo bhaiya apni bahan ki bur ko…aaaaaaaaa aise hi…oooohhhh

Sonam aise hi maze me anap sanap badbadati rahi….aur main uske doodh khoob kas kas ke masalte huye hachack hachack ke kabhi aage se to kabhi piche se, kabhi khadi kar ke to kabhi kutiya bana kar sonam ki bur ko chodta raha

Lagbhag dedh ghante tak maine sonam ki jam kar bur phad chudai karta raha…iss douran vo char paanch baar jhad gayi….akhir me maine bhi apne lund ki lambi lambi pichariya apni choti bahan ki bur ke andar hi chhodni shuru kar di…sath me ek bar phir se sonam jhadte huye mujhse buri tarah se lipt gayi.

Raj—ab meri bahan ka dard kaisa hai…?

Sonam (muh chhupa kar)—aap na bade kharab ho bhaiya….subah mera ilaz karne ke bahane mujhe pel diya aur ab malish karne ke bahane se chod diya.

Raj—iska matlab tujhe maza nahi aaya…?

Sonam—bahut maza aaya….balki subah se bhi jyada aur ab bur me dard bhi utna nahi ho raha hai

Raj—raat me ek bar mere paas aa jana…sara dard mita dunga.

Sonam—kyaaa..? apka abhi bhi mann nahi bhara…? Gaon ki sab ladkiya sahi kahti hain apke baare me.

Raj—kya kahti hain…?

Sonam—yahi ki aap sach me saand ho.

Raj—to phir tu hi bata ki ye saand kis ke upar chadhne jaye…?

Sonam—apko kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai ab……Jab bhi apka chadhne ka mann kare mere upar chadh jaya karo.

Raj—to phir bata na….degi na apni bur raat me bhi…?

Sonam—aap apne room ka darwaja khula rakhna…sab ke sone ke baad apki ye choti bahan apni bur lekar aa jayegi apne pyare bhaiya ke paas…ab khush

Raj—haa….ab chalna chahiye….ye lo ye dard ki goli .

Sonam—aur ye jo bur itni sooj kar phool gayi hai uska kya…?

Raj—usko aise hi phooli rahne do…mujhe achchi lag rahi hai

Sonam (has kar)—theek hai

Maine sonam ko pain killer khila kar kapde pahan liye…dono ready hokar vapis ghar aa gaye.…. raat me sonam shayad thak kar so gayi thi..maine bhi usko jagaya nahi aur so gaya.

Agle din mummy ne mujhe college jane se mana kar diya….to main bhi dophar tak mast soya raha uske baad ghumne phirne ke liye gaon me nikal gaya…

Udhar college me aaj badi chahal pahal thi….har kisi ki juban par kal wali ghatna ka jikra charcha ka mukhya kendra bindu tha..dophar tak sab kuch theek tha .

Kintu dophar ke baad vaha kuch ladko ke sath vikrant thakur ka chota beta nilesh vaha aa gaya aur har jagah meri talash karne laga…sanyog se shilpa unhe canteen me hi dikh gayi.

Nilesh ko vaha aaya dekh kar baki sabhi students dhire dhire vaha se khisakne lage…..vo sab shilpa jaha baithi thi uske samne jakar baith gaye

Ek ladka—yaar bhai…yahi hai vo ladki jiske karan usne hamare ladko par hath uthaya tha.

Nilesh—koun ye langdi…?

2nd ladka –ye ladki tera yaar kaha hai aaj….?

Shilpa—Ji sir..main usko nahi janti…

Nilesh—suna hai ki tu college me dhandha karti hai.

Shilpa (darte huye)—nahi sir...ye sab jhooth hai

3rd ladka—hum kaise maan le teri baat... ? pahle hamare nilesh bhai ko apni virginity check kara ki tu sahi hai ya galat

Shilpa—nahi sir...mere sath aisa mat kijiye....main apahij hu

Nilesh—to phir mujhe uss ladke ka naam bata agar tu sahi salamat ghar jana chahti hai to

Shilpa (rote huye)—main sach me uske bare me kuch nahi janti

Nilesh—ye aise nahi batayegi…isko utha ke gadi me farm house par le chalo…..kal sab ko sabut ke sath malum ho jayega ki ye dhandha karne wali hai.

Shilpa (rote huye)—nahii…mujhe chhod do…main nahi janti…mujhe jane do

Shilpa ko utha kar unhone jabran gadi me daal kar vaha se nikal gaye......main abhi ghum hi raha tha gaon me ki koi choot kahi mil jaye ragadne ko ki tabhi anwar ka massage aa gaya mere phone par.....usko padhte hi mera dimag jhan jhana gaya.
Kya rijhaya he Raj ne Sonam ko.... mast

idhar in ghundo ki phir se shamat aayi he jo Shilpa ko uthaa liya...

lagta he ke Anwar ne yeahi batane ke liye phone kiya he Raj ko... ab dekhen Raj kya karta he.... romanchik
 
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UPDATE-22

Nilesh—ye aise nahi batayegi…isko utha ke gadi me farm house par le chalo…..kal sab ko sabut ke sath malum ho jayega ki ye dhandha karne wali hai.

Shilpa (rote huye)—nahii…mujhe chhod do…main nahi janti…mujhe jane do

Shilpa ko utha kar unhone jabran gadi me daal kar vaha se nikal gaye......main abhi ghum hi raha tha gaon me ki koi choot kahi mil jaye ragadne ko ki tabhi anwar ka massage aa gaya mere phone par.....usko padhte hi mera dimag jhan jhana gaya.

Ab Aage…….

Shilpa ko lekar vo sab Thakur ke farm house me bane bunglow me aa gaye…..vo bechari raste bhar unlogo se khud ko chhod dene ki anunay vinay karti rahi kintu unn vasna ke bhukhe bhediyo par shilpa ke rone aur uski vinti ka koi prabhav nahi pad raha tha.

Farm house me pahuch kar shilpa ko unhone ek kamre me bistar par le jakar patak diya….bina baisakhi ke sahare ke vo kahi bhagne me bhi asmarth thi…jise inn logo ne raste me hi usse chheen kar phenk diya tha.

Shilpa (rote huye)—main sach kahti hu..main usse nahi janti…kal maine pahli bar hi college me usko dekha tha…mujhe jane do, maine tum logo ka kya bigada hai….? Main apke hath jodti hu thakur sb mujhe jane dijiye….hum bahut garib log hain…meri maa jeete jee mar jayegi.

Nilesh—chup..Sali..chhinar…..poora gaon hamari property hai….tum sab hamare gulam ho….aur gaon ki sabhi ladkiya aur aurate hamari rakhail, samjhi……tera gunah ye hai ki tune hamari rakhail hote huye bhi mere dosto ko apni jawani ka ras peene se roka aur uss kutte ko madad ke liye bula liya….aaj tujhe bataunga ki rakhail kisko kahte hain.

Shilpa (jor jor se rote huye)—nahi thakur sb. Aisa mat kijiye mere sath…..main kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak nahi rahungi meri izzat barbad mat kijiye…..mujhe jane do yaha se.

Nilesh—achcha…tujhe jane duuuu…chal theek hai ….ja…tujhe chhod diya…ja chali ja….koi isko mat pakadna, chal ja yaha se….chal bhag jaldi

Nilesh ki baat sun kar shilpa ke mann me kuch ummid jagi…..vo dono hath jod kar khisakte huye dhire dhire bistar ke kinare tak aa kar kisi tarah khadi huyi aur langdate huye aage badhne lagi.

Lekin shilpa ki ye ummid bhi jaldi hi toot gayi jab nilesh ne apne ek sathi ki taraf dekh kar ankho hi ankho me kuch ishara kiya……nilesh ka ishara samajhte hi usne jaise hi shilpa uske paas se gujarne ko huyi to usne uske pairo me apni taang phansa di.

Bechari dhadam se muh ke bal niche ja giri…..uske hotho se khoon bahne laga…phir bhi usne kisi tarah khud ko sambhala aur badi mushkil se ek pair ke sahare khadi hokar jaise hi aage badhne ko huyi vaise hi agle wale ne usse dhakka maar diya.

Shilpa phir se jamin par gir gayi......usse girte dekh kar sabhi tali bajate huye jor jor se hasne lage aur uske apahij hone ki avashtha ka uphas udane lage.

Shilpa jamin me lete huye hi buri tarah se bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi.....usko ab ye bhali bhanti samajh me aa chuka tha ki vo ab in bhediyo ke changul se bach kar nahi nikal sakti.

Nilesh—hahahahaha…….kya hua, bhag na…maine to tujhe bhagne ko kah diya tha….dekh mera koi admi bhi tujhe nahi pakad raha hai ab to…….ja bhag, phir koshish kar le…..hahahahaha…..Sali chhinar..tu kya samajhti hai ki main hath me aaye shikar ko itni asani se jane dunga……teri aaj se har raat suhagraat hogi…..hahahahaha…..le jao patak do isse bistar par…..aaj langdi ghodi ki sawari ka maza loot liya jaye…hahahaha

Shilpa (rote huye)—chhod do mujhe…….main aap sab ke hath jodti hu.

Ek gunda—chhod denge…chhod denge……bas ek baar hum sabko apni sawari kar lene de….phir jaha chahe chali jana hahahaha

2nd gunda—langdi hai par hai bahut kadak maal yaar....kya chuchiya hai…aur gaand to dekho bhosdi ki, poori bahar ko nikli aa rahi hai phool kar….bahut maza ayega guru, iski gand ragadne me

Nilesh—ragad lena…sab log jitna mann kare ragad lena……ab ye hamari paltu kutiya hai…..par pahle uss almari se kuch pine ke liye lekar aa aur kuch khane ko bhi….aur sun vo injection lete aana sath me.

Shilpa (darte huye)—kkkkkaisa…injectionnn..... ?

3rd gunda—darr mat tujhe koi nuksan nahi hoga.....bas iss injection ke asar se tere sharir me garmi chadhegi aur tu khud hamse khud ko ragadne ki bheekh mangegi...tabhi to hum sab ko dikhayenge ki tu dhandhe wali hai...hahahahaha

Shilpa (rote huye)—nahiiii...aisa mat karo...main hath jodti hu.

4th gunda—hath jodne se kuch nahi hone wala darling......haan agar tu apne dono pair khol de to hum soch sakte hain.

Andar se ek admi sharab ki bottles aur khane ka saman le aaya aur dusra injection lekar aa gaya....nilesh ka ishara milte hi do logo ne shilpa ko pakad liya aur jabardasti uski body me uss injection ko inject kar diya....vo roti bilakhti rah gayi, kintu uski sunne wala yaha koi nahi tha.

Nilesh—ab isko kas ke baandh do…..jab tak iss par nasha chadhega tab tak hum apna pine ka program nipta lete hain.

Unhone shilpa ke hath pair majbooti se baandh diye aur sab ek sath pine baith gaye…..pag par pag banne lage….ab tak sabhi nashe me talli ho chuke the.

Nilesh—ab thoda sharab ke baad shabab ka maza bhi le lete hain…chalo re iske kapde utaro.

Shilpa ke upar halka halka nasha hone laga tha kintu ab bhi vo poori tarah se hosh me thi…..nilesh aur uske sathiyo ko apni taraf badhte dekh uski ruh kaamp gayi lekin vo rone ke alawa kar bhi kya sakti thi.

Nilesh abhi shilpa ke upar jhuka hi tha hotho ko chumne ke liye ki tabhi kamre ki khidki ke tootne ki awaz se sab ka dhyan shilpa par se hat gaya.

Nilesh—ja kar dekh be gandu…ye kiski harkat hai…?

Uska ek admi dekhne ke liye jaise hi khidki ke bahar sar kiya vaise hi kisi ne uske muh par jordar vaar kar diya…vo dard se chillate huye ulta jamin me gir pada.

Apne sathi ka ye haal dekh kar sabhi choukanne ho gaye…..aur shilpa ko chhod kar apne apne hathiyar khojne lage..tab tak vo shakhs bhi jisne unke admi ko mara tha, vo bhi khidki se jump kar ke andar aa gaya….jise dekhte hi kuch lok chounk gaye to shilpa ke chehre par asha ki ek kiran jagmaga uthi.

Ek gunda (chillate huye)—guru..yahi hai…..yahi hai vo ladka, jisne kal hamare admiyo ko mara tha.

Nilesh—ooohhhhhh….to ye hai…chalo achcha hua ye khud hi hamare paas aa gaya…..jao pakad lo iss kutte ko bhi aur baandh do..pahle iske samne hi iss ladki ka maza lenge phir iske balatkar ke case me isko phansayenge.

Ye ladka koi aur nahi balki Raj hi tha…..sab log tezi se uski taraf badhne lage…raj ne unki taraf apni ungli nachate huye vahi rukne ka ishara kiya.

Raj (chillate huye)—Jaha ho vahi par ruk jaoooo

"Koi Gaandu Gaand Nahi Hilayega"

Nilesh—tu janta hai ki tu kiske samna khada hai…..main Nilesh Thakur hu..samjha..mere ek ishare par tu to kya tera poora khandan kaha chala jayega tujhe pata bhi nahi chalega.

Raj—sun be…lounde nilesh thakur…..main raj hu raj…..Jaha bhi lund khol ke moot deta hu, vahi par tere jaise dus thakur mere moot ki dhaar se paida ho jate hain, samjha bhosdi ke.

Nilesh (gusse me)—teri itni jurrat..ki tune mujhe gali di....hamare samne teri aukat hi kya hai...jao re madarchodo..maro iss bahan ch.......aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Nilesh ne jaise hi gali dene wala tha vaise hi raj ne paas me padi sharab ki bottle utha kar uske sar me phenk di….nilesh ke sar se khoon ki dhara bahne lag gayi aur vo apna sar pakad ke niche baith gaya…..ye dekh ke baki sab tezi se raj ki taraf badhe maarne ke liye lekin raj ne furti dikhate huye paas me rakhi bottle utha utha kar unke upar tezi se phenkne laga.

Nilesh ke alawa sirf paanch log the hi…jinme se teen buri tarah se ghayal ho chuke the….magar tab tak bache huye do log chaku lekar raj ke paas pahuch gaye.

Shilpa (chillate huye)—Raajjjjjj……tumhare picheeeee

Raj ka dhyan abhi samne ki oor tha teen logo par…raj ko jaise hi apne paas kisi ke hone ka abhas hua…shilpa ki baat sunte hi vo jaise hi palatne ko hua tabhi dono ne chaku ka vaar kar diya jo sidha raj ke pith me laga.

Lekin raj iss samay gusse me tha to utna jyada dard ka ehsaas nahi hua..halanki khoon se uski shirt lal hone lagi thi….raj ne palat kar turant ek punch uske kaan me laga diya…aur bina ghume hi dusre ke main point me ek laat kas ke jama di.

Dono ke dono dard se karahte huye niche let gaye aur tadapne lage…..mouka dekh raj shilpa ke paas pahuch gaya aur usse kholne laga…tab tak nilesh kisi tarah khada ho chuka tha aur apni revolver nikal kar raj ke upar fire kar diya.

Lekin nilesh ko fire karte shilpa ne dekh liya aur usne raj ko jor se dhakka de diya….jisse nilesh ka nishana chook gaya aur samne mirror me ja laga jisse uske tukde tukde ho gaye.

Nilesh dubara fire karne hi wala tha ki raj ne table utha kar uske upar phenk diya…revolver uske hath se chhitak kar door ja giri….uske sabhi sathi abhi bhi dard se tadap rahe the kisi me bhi phir se raj ke samne jane ki himmat nahi thi.

Nilesh (dard me)—mujhe chhod de kamineeee….tu bhi jinda nahi bachega……mera baap aur thakur sb. Tujhe chhodenge nahii.

Raj (gusse me)—abhi bhi akad raha hai, ruk madarchod thakur….abhi batata hu main kya bala hu….

Nilesh ke niche girte hi raj gusse me til milata hua uske paas pahuch gaya aur mukko ki barsat kar di uske chehre par… itne me bhi jab uska gussa shant nahi hua to usne nilesh ki pant phad di aur usko niche se nanga kar diya.

Raj ne paas me sharab se bhari bottle utha kar uske gaand ke chhed me laga ke jor se laat maar maar ke uss bottle ko poora uski gaand me ghusa diya….chehre ke sath sath uski poori gaand khoon se lahoo luhan ho gayi aur dard se chhat patate huye vahi behosh ho gaya.

Raj (chillate huye)—Maine kaha tha na bhosdi ke ki…

"Koi Gaandu Gaand Nahi Hilayega"

Shilpa ke upar bhi drugs ka nasha ab havi ho chuka tha….raj ne kisi tarah se usko bandhan mukt kar ke bahar laya lekin khoon jyada bahne se vo adhik door tak nahi ja saka aur vahi gir kar behosh ho gaya.
waah re bhai kya twist mara he.... bohat jabardast dhang se kahani aage badh rahi he...

aage dekhen kya hota he Shilpa jo ke drug ke asar me he aur Raj jo behosh he...
 
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Raj ke behosh ho jane se shilpa tension me aa gayi….usse darr lagne laga ki kahi vo sab phir se na aa jaye….lekin vo kar bhi kya sakti thi…vah to khud hi bina sahare hi chalne me asmarth thi aur vaise bhi usse iss samay khud ka hi hosh nahi tha… vo kuch door tak baith baithe hi raj ko ghasit kar le jane lagi lekin drugs ka nasha badh jane ke karan uski ankhe bhi bojhil ho rahi thi aur badan me garmi atyadhik matra me mahsoos ho rahi thi.

Vo kuch hi der me khud bhi nidhal ho kar raj ke upar hi gir padi…..raj ki jab ankh khuli to khud ko ek alishan kamre me paya….vo chounk kar baith gaya..usne dekha ki uske jakhmo par patti lagi huyi thi..uska khoon se bheega hua shirt uske badan par ab nahi tha.

Raj (mann me)—Ye main kaha aa gaya hu…? Mujhe koun laya yaha….? kiska ghar hai ye….? Main to shayad behosh ho gaya tha…phir yaha kaise….? Aur shilpa kaha hai…? Kahi usse phir se to unn logo ne……

"To tumhe hosh aa gaya." Kisi ne uss kamre me pravesh karte huye kaha..awaz kisi ladki ki thi.

Raj ne chounk kar awaz aane ki disha me dekha to uski halat kharab ho gayi…..uske samne koi ladki police ki vardi pahne khadi thi…raj ke mann me kayi sawal ubharne lage.

Raj—main yaha kaise aa gaya….? Aur vo ladki kaha hai jo mere sath thi.... ? dekhiye jo kuch bhi hua usme hamari koi galti nahi thi.

"Main Janti hu ye….aur vo ladki bhi yahi hai…abhi vo behosh hai…btw mera naam Inspector Jyoti Bala hai" uss ladki ne apna parichay dete huye kaha.

Raj—Ji vo to apki uniform ko dekhte hi samajh gaya tha main…lekin main yaha kaise pahucha…?

Jyoti—khud pahuche nahi balki laye gaye ho.

Raj (hairan)—laya gaya hu…par koun laya, hame yaha…?

Jyoti—main

Raj—aap…..?

Jyoti—haaaa..main udhar ek case ke silsile me ja rahi thi tabhi meri nazar tum dono par pad gayi…lekin tum dono behosh ho chuke the….isliye yaha le aayi….vaise tum dono ka naam kya hai aur hua kya tha….?

Raj—ji mera naam raj aur uss ladki ka naam shilpa hai.

Phir raj ne poori story jyoti ko suna di jo kuch vaha farm house par hua tha….sun kar jyoti ke chehre par bhi chinta ki lakire ubhar aayi.

Jyoti—tum ye jante ho ki tumne kya kiya hai….? Thakur sahab yaha ke chief minister hain..tumhara aur tumhare pariwar ka kya hoga ab, socha hai tumne….?

Raj—to kya karta, ek majboor ladki ki izzat lut jane deta…ya phir baki logo ki tarah hatho me chudiya pahan ke ghar me ghus jata….? Jyada se jyada meri jaan hi jayegi na..achcha hai marte time mann me ye santosh to rahega ki koi nek kaam karne me meri jaan gayi hai.

Jyoti—vaise tum karte kya ho….?

Raj—student hu.

Jyoti—confidence achcha hai tumhare andar....lekin garam joshi hamesha achchi nahi hoti.....mera ek kaam karoge.... ?

Raj (mann me)—police wali nahi hoti agar to abhi ke abhi tera kaam kar deta....kya chuchi lag rahi hain iski..ek dam khadi khadi...lagta hai kisi ne abhi tak dabaya nahi hai inko.... ?

Jyoti—tumne meri baat ka jawab nahi diya.... ?

Raj—ji...kaisa kaam... ? mera matlab hai ki main bhala apke kis kaam aa sakta hu.... ?

Jyoti—hai ek kaam.....lekin hai bahut jokhim bhara...jaan bhi ja sakti hai isme....main tumhe muh mange paise dungi.

Raj (mann me)—muh mange paise...wow..apni to nikal padi.

Raj—kya karna hoga mujhe.... ?

Jyoti (apne purse me lagi ek photo dikhate huye)—lo isse gaur se dekho.

Jyoti ne apne purse me lagi photo raj ko dikhayi jise dekhte hi vo chounk gaya...kyon ki ye photo kisi aur ki nahi balki khud raj ki hi photo thi.

Raj (shocked)—Ye...Ye..to meri photo hai.. ‼

Jyoti—nahi…ye tumhari nahi balki ye mere bhai ki photo hai.

Raj (shocked)—apka bhaiiii…..? lekin ye to main hu…matlab ki hu ba hu mere jaisa hai.

Jyoti—hmmmm…..tabhi to main tumhe vaha behosh dekh kar chounk gayi thi…..pahle main bhi chounk gayi thi.. isliye to tumhe hospital bhejne ki jagah khud apne hi ghar me le aayi.

Raj—hmmmmm…..lekin kya hua apke bhai ko….? Aur aap mujhse kya madad chahti hain….? Jabki aap to khud hi police me hain phir bhi….

Jyoti (thoda jor se )—mar chuka hai vo…..Uss jalim thakur ne maar diya usko…anath kar diya hame.

Ye bolte huye jyoti ki ankhe bhar aayi aur vo subak subak kar rone lagi….main hakka bakka sa bas usse dekhta raha…kuch der tak rone ke baad jab vo kuch shant ho gayi to aage bolna shuru kiya.

Jyoti—Avinash naam tha uska….police officer ACP Avinash Rathod…..Ek imaandar aur nek dil insaan lekin mujrimo ke liye Yamraj tha vo…..vo jaha bhi jata tha to apradhiyo ke hath paon phulne lagte the darr se..isliye uska tabadla bhi jaldi jaldi hota rahta tha….Ek baar uska tabadla yaha ki city me ho gaya.

Jaha usne mujrimo ki kamar tod di….vo area thakur ke gair kanuni addo ka tha…..thakur ne usse apni taraf karne ki bahut koshish ki lekin nakam raha….akhir ek din meri yani apni badi bahan ki izzat bachate huye vo thakur ke hatho mara gaya thakur ne meri bahan ki izzat loot kar usse bhi maar diya…..

Raj—hmmmm…to aap ne unhe arrest kyo nahi kiya….?

Jyoti—thakur ke khilaf koi sabut nahi hain..aur na hi koi gawahi dega….sarkar uski khud ki hai…..aur vaise bhi mere aur thakur ke alawa ye baat koi nahi janta ki mera bhai mar chuka hai.

Raj—kyoo….thakur ke sath me uss samay aur bhi to admi rahe honge na…? aur apko ye baat kaise pata chali….?

Jyoti—kyon ki uss samay main bhai ke sath hi thi jab thakur ka phone bhai ke mobile par aaya to….maine ye manzar apni ankho se dekha tha…main uss samay itni adhik daee chuki thi ki chilla tak nahi saki….thakur apne gunah ka koi surag nahi chhodta, usne ek ek karke apne un sabhi admiyo ko khatam karwa diya jo uss samay vaha moujud the.

Raj—to ab aap kya chahti hain…?

Jyoti—mera bhai mar chuka hai ye baat na to meri maa janti hai aur na hi meri bhabhi…dono ko aaj bhi intazar hai ki vo lout ke ayega…maine badla lene ke liye hi ye police force join ki hai lekin main unn tak nahi pahuch saki…lekin aaj tumhe dekhte hi phir se meri ummid jinda ho gayi hai.

Raj—mujhe kya karna hoga….?

Jyoti—main avinash rathod ko phir se jinda karna chahti hu….tumhe uski jagah leni hogi…phir se acp avinash rathod ko loutna hoga…meri maa aur bhabhi ki ummid bhi tootne se bach jayegi….tum jitna paisa kahoge main dungi.

Raj (mann me)—vaise souda ghate ka nahi hai….vaise gaon me raha to vo thakur mujhe jinda nahi chhodega…yaha to free fokat me naukari mil rahi hai….aur to aur sale avinash ki biwi bhi hai…apna pati samajh ke vo mujhse apni bur bhi chudwa legi…..aur ho sakta hai ki der saber iss police wali ki bur me bhi lund pelne ka mouka bhi mil hi jaye…haa kar deta hu…upar se bur ke sath sath paise bhi de rahi hai

Raj—theek hai mujhe manzoor hai…lekin mere ghar walo ka kya hoga…? Unse kya kahunga main…?

Jyoti—beech beech me tum unse raj ban ke mil aana…aur kah do ki tumhe koi naukari mil gayi hai.

Raj—ok…lekin abhi mujhe jana hoga…mere mama ki shadi hai uske baad hi main aap se milunga.

Jyoti—theek hai…ye lo mera contact no jab bhi free ho jana to mujhe phone kar lena…aur ye lo dusre kapde pahan lo

Jyoti ne mujhe 5 lakh diye advance ke taur par jinhe maine khushi khushi jaldi se jeb me dafan kar diya….shilpa ko hosh aate hi main usse lekar uske ghar chala gaya..jyoti ne apne driver ko bol kar hum dono ko drop karwa diya.

Shilpa (raste me nam ankho se)—raj..agar aaj tum nahi aate to mera na jane kya hota…?

Raj—ab uss baat ko bhul jao…aur aaj huyi ghatna ka jikra kisi se mat karna…samjhi

Shilpa—hhmmm…lekin hum uss ghar me kaise pahuche….?

Maine poori baat shilpa ko sach sach bata di….sunne ke baad vo gussa karne lagi ki maine haan kyo ki …? Lekin kafi samjha bujha kar usko shant kiya…tab tak uska ghar bhi aa gaya tha….maine usse sahara dekar niche utara aur ghar ka darwaja knock kiya…..darwaja uski mummy ne khola….main to uski mummy ko dekhta hi rah gaya.

Raj (mann me)—kya mast maal hai ye shilpa ki mummy bhi….kya bade bade chutad hain…agar iski gaand marne ko mil jaye to maza aa jayega….bur bhi kasi kasi hogi, ek hi to ladki paida ki hai ab tak apni bur se….lagta hai ab mujhe hi shilpa ki mummy ki bur ka darwaja apne lund se chouda karna padega.
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Maine poori baat shilpa ko sach sach bata di….sunne ke baad vo gussa karne lagi ki maine haan kyo ki …? Lekin kafi samjha bujha kar usko shant kiya…tab tak uska ghar bhi aa gaya tha….maine usse sahara dekar niche utara aur ghar ka darwaja knock kiya…..darwaja uski mummy ne khola….main to uski mummy ko dekhta hi rah gaya.

Raj (mann me)—kya mast maal hai ye shilpa ki mummy bhi….kya bade bade chutad hain…agar iski gaand marne ko mil jaye to maza aa jayega….bur bhi kasi kasi hogi, ek hi to ladki paida ki hai ab tak apni bur se….lagta hai ab mujhe hi shilpa ki mummy ki bur ka darwaja apne lund se chouda karna padega.

Ab Aage……

Main shilpa ki mummy ki badi badi gaand dekhne me kho gaya….Vahi shilpa ki mummy ( Jalebi Bai) mujhe dekh kar chounk gayi.

Jalebi (mann me)—Ye Chodakkad yaha kaise aur meri beti shilpa itna langada kar kyo chal rahi hai…? Kahi iss chodakkad ne shilpa ke apahij hone ka fayda utha kar usko kisi khet me lita kar chod to nahi diya….? Hey ram..meri beti ki izzat loot li iss maha chodakkad ne.

Shilpa ki mummy mujhe shilpa ke sath dekh kar ye sab mann me sochne lagi….maine shilpa ko shara dekar paas me rakhe chair par bitha diya.

Raj—namaste aunty……..

"Chatttaakkkk……..Chatttaaakkkk" nere namaste karte hi shilpa ki mummy ne mere dono gaal lal kar diye.

Jalebi (gusse me)—kamine……tera lund itna hi jyada chudasa rahta hai to apni maa bahan ko chod le….tujhe meri hi beti mili thi chodne ke liye…..nikal ja mere ghar se isse pahle ki main tera khoon kar du..aur dubara idhar kabhi mat aana..nikal ja yaha se ..saand kahi ka…tujhe meri hi phool jaisi beti mili thi chadhne ke liye….usse apahij dekh kar phatt se lund nikal ke chadh gaya uske upar…ja chala ja.

Shilpa (chillate huye)—mummmyyyyyyyy

Mera to jaise fuse hi ud gaya shilpa ki mummy ke iss achanak kiye gaye hamle se…..mera to dimag hi kharab ho gaya tha.. main chup chaap shilpa ki taraf uski medicines phenk kar vaha se mud kar vapis lout pada, piche se shilpa mujhe jor jor se awaz deti rahi lekin main nahi ruka.

Shilpa (jor se rote huye)—ye kya kiya mummy aap ne.... ? Jiski vajah se apki beti ki izzat sahi salamat bachi hai aaj , aap ne uska hi apman kar ke nikal diya.

Jalebi (shocked)—kya matlab.... ?

Shilpa ne rote huye kal college aur aaj farm house me huyi ghatna bata di…….Jisko sun kar uski mummy ke to hosh hi ud gaye..vo doud kar bahar aayi mujhe rokne ke liye kintu main tab tak nikal gaya tha.

Jalebi (pareshan)—itna sab kuch tere sath kal se ho raha hai aur tune mujhe bataya tak nahi... ? ye maine kya kar diya... ? jiski mujhe pooja karni chahiye thi maine ulta uska apman kar diya.

Shilpa (rote huye)—ab main uska samna kaise karungi...? meri khatir usne Thakur khandan se dushmani mol le li aur main kitni matlabi nikli.

Jalebi—tu chinta mat kar...main uske paon pakad ke mafi mangugi....main aaj hi uske paas jaungi.

Udhar main gusse me badbadate huye chala ja raha tha...upar se pith me dard bhi ho raha tha....main ghar na jakar nadi ke kinare ek ped par chadh ke baith gaya.

Raj (mann me)—Sali madarchod….kaha to main usko chodne ki soch raha tha, Sali ne thappad maar diya…ek to uski ladki ki izzat bachayi khud apni jaan jokhim me daal kar….mera ehsaan maan kar apni bur dene ki jagah Sali hath uthati hai… achcha hota uski beti ko chud jane diya hota thakur aur uske admiyo se….bhalayi karne ka jamana hi nahi hai…ab to Sali inn maa beti dono ko khoob chodunga….haay re meri pith….madarchodo ne pith me chaku mar diya…inki maa ko chodu

Main gusse me yhi sab mann hi mann soch raha tha ki meri nazar kahi se aa rahi lala ki choti bahu sarla par chali gayi.. jo shayad apne kheto se janwaro ke liye chara lekar ja rahi thi ghar…usko dekhte hi mujhe kal ki baat yaad aa gayi aur main jaldi jaldi ped par se niche utarne laga.

Raj (mann me)—Sali madarchod….kal mujhe bagiche me milne ko boli thi ki apni bur dungi…randi ne mujhe chutiya banaya..ab to aaj ye lund teri hi bur phadega.

Main vahi ped ke piche chhup kar uske paas me aane ka intazar karne laga…jaise hi sarla uss ped ke bilkul karib aa gayi to main achanak hi uske samne aa gaya…mujhe aise achanak apne samne dekh kar vo chounk gayi aur idhar udhar dekhne lagi.

Raj—kyo kaha ja rahi ho….? Lagta hai bahut jaldi me ho... ? aur yaha vaha kya dekh rahi ho... ?

Sarla (sakpaka kar)—ohhh...main to darr hi gayi thi…mujhe jaldi ghar jana hai…raste se hato.

Raj—mujhe chutiya samjha hai kya tune... ? agar nahi chudwana tha to kal mujhe jhuth bol kar bulaya kyo tha tune... ?

Aur ye kah kar maine blouse ke upar se hi uski dono chuchiyo ko pakad kar sakht hatho se masalne laga....vo chihunk gayi aur phir se idhar udhar dekhne lagi.

Sarla—aaaaahhhhhhh.....raj..aaahhhhhh..jane de na....koi dekh lega.....uuuii..maaaa.....itni jor se mat daba raj...dard hota hai... dekh chhod de...koi dekh liya to bahut badnami hogi meri

Raj (chuchi masalte huye)—chhod dunga...lekin abhi mera chodne ka bahut mann hai......jaldi se ek bar de de apni bur aur chali ja.

Sarla—aaaaaaa.....yaha koi aa jayega raj...samjha kar

Raj—chal aa ja idhar nadi me....idhar koi nahi ayega

Main sarla ka hath pakad kar nadi me utar gaya....pani me nahi...niche taraf jo dhalan bana hota hai vaha par....maine uska chara khol kar vahi bichha diya aur sarla ko khich kar uss par lita diya.

Sarla—raj..samjha kar...phir kabhi le lena meri...main pakka tujhe apni dungi ek din...tera jitni bar mann kare meri le lena..lekin abhi jane de.

Raj—mujhe ab tera koi bharosa nahi.....ab se sharafat chhod di maine....sharafat dikhane par log bina tel lagaye hi ulta gaand maar lete hain....vaise chal koi baat nahi tera mann nahi hai to aaj teri gaand hi le leta hu.

Sarla (darte huye)—nahii....nahi....gaand nahii....tu meri bur hi le le... gaand phir kabhi, abhi tu bur se hi kaam chala le

Raj—chal koi na...gaand na sahi bur hi sahi

Maine sarla ka blouse khol kar bra ko upar kar ke uski chuchiyo ko bahar nikal liya aur unhe aate ki tarah dono hatho se goonthane laga.....masal masal kar dono doodh lala karne ke baad main uska dugdh paan karne laga.

Sarla—aaaaaaaa.....rajjj...jaldi se kar le na...kitna dabayega aur piyega mere doodh....phir kabhi daba lena.

Raj—phir kab tu mouka degi, kya bharosa tera.... ?

Sarla—main shaam ko daily janwaro ka chara lene khet me jati hu...vahi aa jaya kar aur daba liya kar roj mere doodh aur tera mann kare to vahi lita ke meri le liya kar..main mana nahi karungi tujhe dene se..aaaaa..ab jaldi se chod le na...dekh sach me mujhe jaldi jana hai aaj...jaldi se chod le

Maine bhi uski baat mante huye uski sari ko kamar ke upar kar diya...jisse uski gori gori mansal janghe nangi ho gayi maine der na karte huye uski panty bhi utar di.

Panty utarte hi sarla ki gori gori jangho ke sath sath uski dono jangho ke beech chhupi huyi bur bhi mere samne nangi ho gayi....sarla ki bur me chhoti chhoti jhaante thi, shayad jhaant banaye jyada din nahi huye honge usko...bur ke dono hoth aapas me chipke huye the.

Sarla—aaaaa...ab dekhta hi rahega meri bur ko ya usse pelega bhi.

Raj—mast bur hai teri sarla rani...lekin teri to kab ki shadi huye ho gaye phir bhi itni tight kyo hai teri bur... ?

Sarla—to kya ungli dalne se bur dheeli hoti hai... ?

Raj—kyo tera admi chodta nahi hai kya bur ko... ?

Sarla—hinjhade ka jab khada hoga tab na chodega....chodne layak hota to main ab tak maa na ban gayi hoti.

Raj—mera bachcha paida karegi…..?

Sarla (kuch der sochne ke baad)—main apne pati ko kya jawab dungi…?

Raj—sala..usko kya jawab dena hai…vo kya kahega kisi se , kya vo apne bare me ye batayega mi mera khada nahi hota hai..?

Sarla—nahi, batayega to kisi se bhi nahi.

Raj—agar phir bhi puche ki ye kiska bachcha hai to bata dena ki mujhe raj chodta hai daily...vo meri jhaant bhi nahi ukhad sakta.

Sarla—tu sach me maa bana dega mujhe... ?

Raj—101 percent, sach

Sarla—to phir bana de mujhe apne bachche ki maa....main tera ye ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulungi...jindagi bhar teri rakhail ban ke rahungi.....teri har baat manungi.

Raj—ek bar ke chodne se thode hi bachcha ho jayega.

Sarla—to roj chod lena mujhe….subah maidan jati hu tab chod lena…uske baad nadi nahane jati hu, tab chod dena…dophar me dukan me akeli rahti hu..tab chod dena mujhe..shaam ko khet jati hu, tab chod lena aur phir din dhalne par maidan jati hu to tab bhi chod lena….roj mujhe char paanch baar chod lena..tab to main maa ban jaungi na…?

Raj—jarur ban jaogi…..lekin mujhe teri gaand bhi marni hai.

Sarla—kal hi dophar me dukan me maar lena gaand bhi meri, vaha tel ki bhi kami nahi hai

Ab tak sarla full garam ho chuki thi...uski bur se bahta pani iss baat ki gawahi de raha tha ki uski bur ab lund pelwane ko poori tarah se taiyyar ho chuki hai.

Sarla—ab der mat karo...rajjj..jaldi se meri le lo..mujhse ab nahi raha ja raha hai

Raj—kya tum kuwari ho... ?

Sarla—nahi...gajar...muli daal daal ke seal toot chuki hai lekin meri bur me lund nahi gaya hai aaj tak ek bar bhi.

Mera to dil khush ho gaya, ye sun kar....main shilpa ke ghar wali ghatna bhi bhul gaya tha....maine turant jhuk kar sarla ki bur ko chusne laga, uske liye ye naya anubhav tha. Vo sisakte huye satve aasman me udne lagi.

Sarla—aaaaa...rajjj...itna maza hai...tum jadugar ho raj sach me...

Kuch der tak bur chusne ke baad main uski dono jangho ke beech baith gaya aur apna pant niche khiska kar lund ko uski bur ke darwaje par hamla karne ke liye tika diya.

Raj—sarla..apne dono hatho se apni bur ko jitna ho sake phaila lo

Sarla ne apne hath niche le jakar apni bur ko jitna cheer sakti thi usne phaila li…maine uske dono doodh pakad ke dabate huye hoth chumne laga aur ek jor ka dhakka uski bur me laga diya.

Ek hi dhakke me sarla ki ankhe phail gayi….lekin main ruka nahi aur danadan jaldi jaldi teen char jordar dhakke laga kar poora lund andar pel diya.

Sarla ki ankho se pani aur bur se khoon bahne laga…..maine dhire dhire uski chuchiya meeste huye hotho ko chumta gaya jab vo kuch normal huyi to maine dhire dhire chodna shuru kar diya.

Pahle to usko har dhakke par dard ho raha tha lekin aise hi kuch chodne ke pashchat jab uski bur me phir se chiknahat aa gayi to vo bhi niche se apni gaand utha utha kar mujhe jor jor se chodne ke liye uksane lagi.

Idhar meri pith ka dard bhi badh gaya tha…ghaav abhi taza hone ke karan usme se phir se khoon risne laga tha…lekin maine dard ki parwah na karte huye sarla ki bur me lund pelta raha.

Sarla—aaaaaa…bada maza aa raha hai…..aur jor se raj…aaaaa….aise hi mujhe roj chodna ab….har saal mujhe apne bachcho ki maa banate rahna…aur vo napunsak bina chode hi baap banta rahega..aaaaaaaaaaa..main gayiii

Maine apne dhakko ki raftar badha di….mere dhakke itne tez ho gaye the ki sarla ki bur ki pankhudiya poori tarah se phail chuki thi aur uske ashthi panjar dheele ho chuke the.

Lagbhag ek ghante ki dhuandhar chudayi ke baad sarla phir se jhad gayi aur main bhi uske sath hi uski bur me lambi lambi pichkari chhodne laga.

Jhadne ke baad hum dono hanfte huye ek dusre se chipke kafi der tak pade rahe…..phir uth kar sarla ne apne kapde sahi kiye ..maine uska chara samet kar baandh diya aur vaha se nikal gaya.

Vahi hospital me nilesh aur uske sathiyo ki halat bahut buri thi…..poora thakur pariwar vaha ekattha ho chuka tha….. police ke bade adhikari bhi vaha pahuch chuke the.

Vikrant (gusse me apne admiyo se)—mujhe vo admi chahiye jisne ye kiya hai…main uske poore khandan ko mita dunga.

Rahul—chachu..apko pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi hai…..ye kaam aap mujh par chhod dijiye…main uska vo hashra karunga ki khud mout bhi sharminda ho jayegi.

Shamsher—commissioner mujhe 24 ghante ke andar vo admi chahiye sath me vo ladki bhi…..ek bar uska pata chal jaye phir to main uske khandan ki sabhi aurato ko beech sadak me nangi karke doudaunga.

Commissioner—aap chinta mat kijiye sir,….maine har jagah uski talash shuru karwa di hai..bas ek bar nilesh ji ko hosh aa jata to hame uske bare me kuch jankari mil jati.

Thakurain—mujhe kuch nahi sunna…mujhe vo admi chahiye..chahe jaha se bhi lao lekin lao…usko mout main dungi

Nilesh aur uske sathi abhi tak behosh pade the…sabse jyada nazuk halat nilesh ki hi thi…..sab badi besabri se uske hosh me aane ka intazar kar rahe the.

Lagbhag dus ghante baad nilesh ko thoda thoda hosh aaya..to sab usse uska naam puchne lage..lekin nilesh kuch bolne ki koshish kar raha tha par samajh me nahi aa raha tha.

Shamsher—nilesh..kisne kiya ye sab tumhare sath…? Naam batao uska…?

Nilesh (ruk ruk kar)—Koiii…..Gaanduuu…Gaaaannddd….Nahiiii…Hilayegaaaaaaaaaa

Nilesh phir se behosh ho gaya…..sab uski baat sun kar chounk gaye..shamsher ne jaldi se jaldi commissioner ko uss admi ko jail ke andar kaha ….tabhi commissioner ka phone bajne laga….kisi unknown number se call tha.

Commissioner—hello….

"Iss case ko yahi rafa dafa kar do" samne wale shakhs ne kaha

Commissioner—koun hai be tu…jo tere kahne se main ye case band kar du…..?

Samne wale shakhs ne jaise hi apna naam bataya to commissioner ke hath se phone chhut kar niche ja gira……darr se hath pair kaampne lage aur chehra pasine se tar batar ho gaya…abhi bhi uske kaano me vahi shabd goonj rahe the.

"S….T….A….R……………….B..L..A..C..K………S..T..A..R"
jabardast bro....

Sarla ka to kaam ban gaya......
Bohat saare naye character stroy mein aur sath aik mysterious character "Black Star"...
Writing skills are great...
 
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Kya rijhaya he Raj ne Sonam ko.... mast

idhar in ghundo ki phir se shamat aayi he jo Shilpa ko uthaa liya...

lagta he ke Anwar ne yeahi batane ke liye phone kiya he Raj ko... ab dekhen Raj kya karta he.... romanchik
Thanks Rusty blade bhai iss Ati-uttam shandar pratikriya ke liye.
 

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