Incest SAAND (Completed)

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welcome back saand bhai .. sorry Anand bhai .. :D .. well iss baar apne saand ka mood kucch jyaada he kharaab hai .. itna gussa use shayad he kabhi pehle aaya ho .. waise aapki bhi baat bilkul theek hai .. itne dino ka gap hone ke baad story ke kayi essential parts dimaag se nikal jaate hai .. wapas patri par lautne mein thoda samay lagta hai .. magar der aaye durust aaye .. aapko yaha dekh kar accha laga .. beshak thoda time le kar likho .. magar saath bane raha karo bhai ...

aur kahani mein Sadhana/Sheetal ki gutthi mein to aapne waqai mein uljha diya hai .. abhi tak to inke beech mein he dimaag uljha rehta tha .. magar ab ye Naina ki mystery aur bhi uljhane wali hai .. jis hisaab se kahani jaa rahi hai .. muzhe to nahi lagta ki jaldi se purane raaz khulenge .. yaha to ulta aur bhi nayi paheliya judti jaa rahi hai .. aur ye sala Ragu ne aur nayi musibat batla di hai .. ab dekhte hai ye chodu gang kaise help kar paati hai SP saab ki ...
Thanks for this nice review dost.

Aapka kahna sahi hai ki beech mein gap hone ke baad kayi cheeze dimag se nikal jati hain aur unko phir se capture karne me samay lag jata hai, aisa hi kuch mere sath bhi tha.

Break ke baad jab dubara vapis likhne baitha to dimag me yaad hi nahi aa raha tha ki last update maine jaha par khatam kiya tha, uske aage maine kya soch rakha tha aur kya soch kar maine update uss point par roka tha..?

Aapka sochna bilkul sahi hai, kayi suspenses agle part me jayenge jinme se ek sadhana/ sheetal mystery bhi shamil hai. Iss part mein me black star ke raaz par se parda jarur uth jayega.
 
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bhai bata too doo ki story likhna hai ya nahi par aap ek message tak post nahi karte
Sabse pahle to aapka iss thread par hardik swagat, vandan aur abhinandan hai bhai.
Insaan ke jeevan mein kayi tarah ki uljhane hoti hain bhai, kabhi vo free rahta hai to kabhi adhik vyast. Upar wale ne ye pet dekar usko bharne ki samasya bhi de di hai, ab apna aur pariwar ka pet bharne ke liye bhag daud to karni hi padti hai bhai, kuch family problems bhi kabhi kabhi aa jati hain jinse ubarne me waqt lag jata hai, magar iska ye matlab kadaapi nahi hai ki jindagi thahar gayi hai.
Aaj kahani ka last update likh raha hoon. agla update 26th january ko ayega bhai till night 11.30 pm.
 
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Fir se koi problem aageyi kya bhai.....
Update to pahle bhi de sakta tha bhai kyon ki likh liya tha lekin phir ye soch kar post nahi kiya ki do teen update post karne ke baad mujhe phir brake par jana tha aur sabko ek baar phir se agle update ke liye intazar karna padta.
Anyway kahani ke baki bache huye 9 updates mein se 8 update complete ho chuke hain aur 9th and last update aaj likh raha hoon. 26th January se daily ek update post karta rahunga aur apna bacha samay ab saajan ko aage badhane me lagaunga.
 

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